[3RD GRADE WRITING INSTRUCTIONAL FOCUS DOCUMENT] 2012-2013 Week(s) # 1 Prompt: Day 1: Write about something that happened to you in the summer. Escribe sobre algo que te pasó en el verano. Day 2: Tell about ways you might help your school community. Habla acerca de las maneras que tú podrías ayudar a tu comunidad escolar. Day 3: Write about someone who is by your side no matter what happens. Escribe acerca de alguien que está a tu lado pase lo que pase. Day 4: Write about why it is important for people to help each other. Escribe acerca de por qué es importante que las personas se ayuden mutuamente. Day 5: Elaborate and revise one of your journal entries. Focus on complete sentences, capitalization, punctuation, and grammar. Elaborar y revisar una de las entradas de tu cuaderno. Concéntrate en oraciones completas, mayúsculas, puntuación y gramática. Primary Writing TEKS: 3.19: Students write about their own experiences. Students are expected to write about important personal experiences. Writing Activity/Strategy Description: Baseline writing through journaling. Suggested Pacing for Composition Writing: Introduce: Prewriting: Drafting (Day 1-4) : Respond to daily journal prompt Revising (Day 5): Revise one journal entry for grammar and punctuation. Editing: Publishing: Features of Genre: Narrative: Tells a story or part of a story Expository: Seeks to inform, explain, clarify, define or instruct Edgewood ISD CIA Dept. Form of Writing: Journaling Grammar Focus: Grammar Pre-Test Journey’s Texas Assessment Prep (Blue Book) pp. 112-116 Primary Grammar TEKS: 3.22A (i-iv) use and understand the function of the following parts of speech in the context of reading, writing, and speaking: (i) verbs (past, present, and future); (ii) nouns; (iii) adjectives; (iv) adverbs. Revising/Editing Focus based on State Rubric: Use of Language/Conventions: The writer demonstrates a consistent command of sentence boundaries and spelling, capitalization, punctuation, grammar, and usage conventions. Writing Resource Correlation: Journeys/Senderos: Write Source: Writing Sentences p.442 Other Resources: Academic Vocabulary: noun verb, adjective, adverb, narrative, expository Page 1 [3RD GRADE WRITING INSTRUCTIONAL FOCUS DOCUMENT] 2012-2013 Week(s) #2 Prompt: Describe your favorite game and explain why it is fun. Describe tu juego favorito y explica porque es divertido. Primary Writing TEKS: 3.20A: Students write expository and procedural or work-related texts to communicate ideas and information to specific audiences for specific purposes. Students are expected to: (A) create brief compositions that: (i) establish a central idea in a topic sentence; (ii) include supporting sentences with simple facts, details, and explanations; and (iii) contain a concluding statement Writing Activity/Strategy Description: Expository Informative Brainstorming (pg. 36 – Randi Whitney) Linear Paragraph (pg. 23 – Randi Whitney) Suggested Pacing for Composition Writing: Introduce: Prewriting: Drafting: Revising: Editing: Publishing: Features of Genre: Informative expository writing seeks to have the author inform, report, explain, or tell why. Edgewood ISD CIA Dept. Form of Writing: Expository/Informative Grammar Focus: Subjects and Predicates Primary Grammar TEKS: 3.22B: use the complete subject and the complete predicate in a sentence Revising/Editing Focus based on State Rubric: Use of Language/Conventions: The writer’s word choice is purposeful and precise. It reflects a keen awareness of the expository purpose and maintains a tone appropriate to the task. The word choice strongly contributes to the quality and clarity of the essay. Writing Resource Correlation: Journeys/Senderos: Refer to TE 20, TE 40-41, TE 48-49, TE 62 Daily Grammar-Lesson 1 Student Book p. 38-39 Write Source: Skills Book p. 77-83 Other Resources: Academic Vocabulary: complete subject, expository, complete predicate, informative Page 2 [3RD GRADE WRITING INSTRUCTIONAL FOCUS DOCUMENT] 2012-2013 Week(s) # 3 (5 days) Prompt: Describe your favorite game and explain why it is fun. Primary Writing TEKS: 3.17(A) plan a first draft by selecting a genre appropriate for conveying the intended meaning to an audience and generating ideas through a range of strategies (e.g., brainstorming, graphic organizers, logs, journals); (B) develop drafts by categorizing ideas and organizing them into paragraphs; 3.20 Students write expository and procedural or work-related texts to communicate ideas and information to specific audiences for specific purposes. Students are expected to: (A) create brief compositions that: (i) establish a central idea in a topic sentence; (ii) include supporting sentences with simple facts, details, and explanations; and (iii) contain a concluding statement; Writing Activity/Strategy Description: Model this type of writing using activity p. 19 Randi Whitney Expository Packet (Favorite Color) Linear Paragraph p. 23 Randi Whitney Expository Packet Suggested Pacing for Composition Writing: Introduce: Prewriting: (Day 1) Model lesson Drafting: (Day 2, 3, 4, 5) Drafting and Conferencing-teacher needs to model the drafting process for this prompt daily. Revising: Editing: Publishing: Features of Genre: Describe through informing, explaining, and defining. Edgewood ISD CIA Dept. Form of Writing: Expository - Informative Grammar Focus: Kinds of sentences Primary Grammar TEKS: No match Revising/Editing Focus based on State Rubric: The organizing structure of the essay is clearly appropriate to the purpose and responsive to the specific demands of the prompt. The essay is skillfully crafted because the writer uses organizational strategies that are particularly well suited to the expository task. Writing Resource Correlation: Journeys/Senderos: Daily Grammar Lesson 2 T.E. pp. T108, T128, T136, T150 and S.E. 7071. Write Source: p. 448 Other Resources: Journey’s Projectables 2.2 & 2.6 Write Source Skills Book pp. 3-4 & 7-8 Academic Vocabulary: Sentence, expository, informative, command, exclamation, statement, question Page 3 [3RD GRADE WRITING INSTRUCTIONAL FOCUS DOCUMENT] 2012-2013 Week(s) # 4 (5 days) Prompt: Describe your favorite game and explain why it is fun. Primary Writing TEKS: 3.17(A) plan a first draft by selecting a genre appropriate for conveying the intended meaning to an audience and generating ideas through a range of strategies (e.g., brainstorming, graphic organizers, logs, journals); (B) develop drafts by categorizing ideas and organizing them into paragraphs; (C) revise drafts for coherence, organization, use of simple and compound sentences, and audience; (D) edit drafts for grammar, mechanics, and spelling using a teacherdeveloped rubric; and 3.20 Students write expository and procedural or work-related texts to communicate ideas and information to specific audiences for specific purposes. Students are expected to: (A) create brief compositions that: (i) establish a central idea in a topic sentence; (ii) include supporting sentences with simple facts, details, and explanations; and (iii) contain a concluding statement; Writing Activity/Strategy Description: Model student revising-revise for complete sentences and focus/organization. Write Source pp. 140-144 Model adding details to writing. Use Randi Whitney p. 11 exercise to create sensory details. Brainstorm it together using a thinking map. Edit for end punctuation. Purpose: To show students how to revise their writing. Suggested Pacing for Composition Writing: Introduce: Prewriting: Drafting: Revising: (Day 1, 2, 3) Self and Peer revising/Conferencing Editing: (Day 4) Edit for end punctuation-skill from week 3 Publishing: (Day 5) Finish editing and publish final draft Features of Genre: Describe through informing, explaining, and defining. Edgewood ISD CIA Dept. Form of Writing: Expository - Informative Grammar Focus: Sentence fragments and Run-ons Primary Grammar TEKS: 3.22 (B) use the complete subject and the complete predicate in a sentence; Revising/Editing Focus based on State Rubric: The writer establishes a clear central idea. All ideas are strongly related to the central idea and are focused on the topic specified in the prompt. By sustaining this focus, the writer is able to create an essay that is unified and coherent. Writing Resource Correlation: Journeys/Senderos: Daily Grammar Lesson T.E. T pp. T196, T218, T226, T240 and S.E. 106-107 Write Source: pp.567-568 Other Resources: pp.117-120 Academic Vocabulary: Sentence, fragment, run-on, revise, edit Page 4 [3RD GRADE WRITING INSTRUCTIONAL FOCUS DOCUMENT] 2012-2013 Week(s) # 5 Prompt: Write about an event that changed your life. Primary Writing TEKS: 3.17(A) plan a first draft by selecting a genre appropriate for conveying the intended meaning to an audience and generating ideas through a range of strategies (e.g., brainstorming, graphic organizers, logs, journals) Writing Activity/Strategy Description: Brainstorming, Magnifying,( Randi Whitney) Lesson 4 Suggested Pacing for Composition Writing: Introduce: Prewriting: Day 1: Model lesson Drafting (Day 2-5): Brainstorm, draft, and conference with students. Teacher needs to model brainstorming process for this prompt daily. Revising: Editing: Publishing: Features of Genre: Narrative: Tells a story or part of a story Edgewood ISD CIA Dept. Form of Writing: Personal Narrative • Common Nouns • Proper Nouns • Ideas Primary Grammar TEKS: 3.22Aii nouns (singular/plural, common/proper) Revising/Editing Focus based on State Rubric: Use of Language/Conventions: The writer demonstrates a consistent command of sentence boundaries and age-appropriate spelling, capitalization, punctuation, grammar, and usage conventions. Although minor errors may be evident, they do not detract from the fluency or clarity of the writing. The overall strength of the conventions contributes to the effectiveness of the narrative. Writing Resource Correlation: Journeys/Senderos: T.E. p. T330-331; S.E. p. 142 Write Source: Write Source TE p. 420-421; S.E. p. 421 Skills Book “Common and Proper Nouns” p. 119 Other Resources: Academic Vocabulary: common noun, proper noun, brainstorming Page 5 [3RD GRADE WRITING INSTRUCTIONAL FOCUS DOCUMENT] 2012-2013 Week(s) # 6 Prompt: Write about an event that changed your life. Primary Writing TEKS: 3.17(B) develop drafts by categorizing ideas and organizing them into paragraphs Writing Activity/Strategy Description: Drafting using Storyline (Randi Whitney) pg. 43-47 1 Page Foldable Suggested Pacing for Composition Writing: Introduce: Prewriting: Drafting (Day 1-5): Draft, and conference with teacher. Teacher needs to model drafting process for this prompt daily. Revising: Editing: Publishing: Features of Genre: Narrative: Tells a story or part of a story Edgewood ISD CIA Dept. Form of Writing: Personal Narrative • Plural Nouns with s & e • Ideas Primary Grammar TEKS: 3.22Aii nouns (singular/plural, common/proper) Revising/Editing Focus based on State Rubric: Use of Language/Conventions: The writer demonstrates a consistent command of sentence boundaries and age-appropriate spelling, capitalization, punctuation, grammar, and usage conventions. Although minor errors may be evident, they do not detract from the fluency or clarity of the writing. The overall strength of the conventions contributes to the effectiveness of the narrative. Writing Resource Correlation: Journeys/Senderos: T.E. p. T420-421; S.E. p. 178 Write Source: Write Source TE p. 422; S.E. p. 422 Skills Book “Singular and Plural Nouns” p. 121 Other Resources: Academic Vocabulary: plural noun, singular noun Page 6 [3RD GRADE WRITING INSTRUCTIONAL FOCUS DOCUMENT] 2012-2013 Week(s) # 7 Prompt: Write about an event that changed your life. Primary Writing TEKS: 3.17C: revise drafts for coherence, organization, use of simple and compound sentences, and audience; 3.17(D) edit drafts for grammar, mechanics, and spelling using a teacherdeveloped rubric; Writing Activity/Strategy Description: Revise and edit-(Randi Academy) Lesson 6, Publish. Suggested Pacing for Composition Writing: Introduce: Prewriting: Drafting: Revising: (Day 1-2) Model with students how to revise for word choice (verbs, common nouns, proper nouns, plural nouns). Editing: (3-4) Conference with students on word choice Publishing(Day 5): Have students publish finished composition Features of Genre: Narrative: Tells a story or part of a story Edgewood ISD CIA Dept. Form of Writing: Personal Narrative • Verbs • Revising for Word Choice Primary Grammar TEKS: 3.22A(i) verbs (past, present, and future) Revising/Editing Focus based on State Rubric: Use of Language/Conventions: The writer’s word choice is vivid and expressive. It reflects a keen awareness of the narrative purpose. Effective word choice enables the writer to recreate the experience in a way that conveys its importance. Writing Resource Correlation: Journeys/Senderos: T.E. Unit 2 Lesson 6 p. T64; S.E. p. 218-219 Write Source: Write Source TE p. 429-433; S.E. p. 429-433 Skills Book “Verbs” p. 133-149 Other Resources: Academic Vocabulary: verbs, helping verbs, action verbs, linking verbs, singular/plural verbs Page 7 [3RD GRADE WRITING INSTRUCTIONAL FOCUS DOCUMENT] 2012-2013 Week(s) # 8 (4 ½ days) Prompt: Explain how to ride a bike. Primary Writing TEKS: 3.17(A) plan a first draft by selecting a genre appropriate for conveying the intended meaning to an audience and generating ideas through a range of strategies (e.g., brainstorming, graphic organizers, logs, journals); (B) develop drafts by categorizing ideas and organizing them into paragraphs; 3.20 Students write expository and procedural or work-related texts to communicate ideas and information to specific audiences for specific purposes. Students are expected to: (A) create brief compositions that: (i) establish a central idea in a topic sentence; (ii) include supporting sentences with simple facts, details, and explanations; and (iii) contain a concluding statement; Form of Writing: Expository – How-to(procedural) Grammar Focus: Verb Tenses Primary Grammar TEKS: 3.22 (A) (i) verbs (past, present, and future); Writing Activity/Strategy Description: Use Randi Whitney Lesson from Expository Packet on Introductions/Conclusions pp. 28/38. Create foldable. Let’s Get Organized p. 42 w/ “I” Activity from Randi Whitney Expository Packet. Purpose: To introduce students to this type of writing. Suggested Pacing for Composition Writing: Revising/Editing Focus based on State Rubric: The writer’s word choice is purposeful and precise. It reflects a keen awareness of the expository purpose and maintains a tone appropriate to the task. The word choice strongly contributes to the quality and clarity of the essay. Introduce: (Day 1) Discuss what this kind of writing looks like. Show examples and brainstorm different ways this is used. Prewriting: (Day 2, 3, 4) Brainstorm steps together. Use above activities together. Drafting: (Day 5) Students use their foldable to begin drafting. Revising: Editing: Publishing: Features of Genre: Procedural expository writing defines or instructs the audience regarding the steps to accomplish a task. Journeys/Senderos: Daily Grammar Lesson 7 T.E. pp. T110, T130, T138, T152 and S.E. 250251 Write Source: Edgewood ISD CIA Dept. Writing Resource Correlation: Other Resources: Academic Vocabulary: Verbs, tenses, task, procedural Page 8