Reviewer's report Title: The role of the combination of bone and fall related risk factors on short-term subsequent fracture risk and mortality Version: 1 Date: 13 September 2012 Reviewer: Dana Bliuc Reviewer's report: Major: 1) In my opinion, the classification into 4 groups is quite arbitrary, as there is no evidence that each of the factors that grant inclusion in one group has similar risk value (i.e. does having a prior fracture after the age of 50 have the same predictive value as a family history of fracture?) The rationale for this classification should be better explained in the methodology and acknowledged in the discussion. We hypothesized that patients with the combination of risk factors had a higher subsequent fracture risk compared to all others (BRF, FRF, no additional RF). The rationale behind the pre-specified groups and comparisons was that in fracture prevention only bone targeted therapy has shown to reduce fracture risk and not fall targeted therapies. Unfortunately there were too few events to analyse all risk factors independently. Therefore, pre-specified groups were made on bone-, fall and the combination of risk factors. We explained this rationale better in Methods, page 5: “The rationale behind these groups is that there is a known treatable risk factor in group 1 and 2, but not in group 3 because in fracture prevention only bone targeted therapy has shown to reduce fracture risk and not fall targeted therapies. Discussion, page 9: “However, we made 4 pre-specified groups because in fracture prevention only bone targeted therapy has shown to reduce fracture risk and not fall targeted therapies. 2) The cohort is assessed by the Fracture Liaison Service, implemented to evaluate bone and fall risk factors and to prescribe anti-osteoporosis treatment and fall prevention programs, yet there is no information on the osteoporosis medication and its up-take. The efficacy of osteoporosis medication in fracture and re-fracture risk is well documented, and there is emerging evidence that it may also decrease mortality risk. Thus, information on the osteoporosis medication, and fall prevention for each of the groups should be made available in this paper. All patients were advised and treated accordingly to the guideline on osteoporosis in The Netherlands at time of the study. A letter to the general practitioners was send give information about the treatment and asked to take over the treatment. No information was known about adherence, so therefore we cannot adjust our analyses for possible treatment effect. This is also mentioned in the discussion. Discussion page 9 lines 11-13: “A limitation of this study is that there are no data on adherence to the proposed osteoporosis treatment and fall prevention. Persistence is indeed low, as has been shown in a recent publication for oral anti-osteoporosis medications in the Netherlands [28].” 3) Authors state that subsequent fracture risk was highest at time 0. However, in the methodology section it is written that time of subsequent fracture is calculated from the current fracture to subsequent fracture; therefore time 0 must be the time of current fracture. This is confusing, and should be clarified in the methodology. By time 0 the authors meant time of current fracture. We did not show the data of the time dependent analyses because of the number of events were to low to draw reliable conclusions and also as suggested by the reviewer and changed the methods section. 4) The rate of subsequent fractures and mortality is lower in this study compared to other studies. This may be the result of a short follow-up period, but also the result of osteoporosis treatment. There should be a detailed discussion and head to head comparison with other published papers. The rate of subsequent fractures and mortality is lower compared to other studies. However, the patients in the present study are only the patients seen and treated at the Fracture Liaison Service and not those who were not willing or able to visit the outpatient clinic. We did not do an intention to treat analysis due to the fact that the authors wanted to observe the risk factors in these patients and therefore could only include those patients with known risk factors inquired after at the Fracture Liasion Service. A possible explanation for the difference in subsequent fracture rate could be difference in patient selection. Another reason could be the treatment effect as the reviewer suggests. The authors added this to the discussion. Discussion, page 8: “ However, the event rate was lower in our research compared to other published articles. In a study among patients aged 60 years and over a relative risk of subsequent fracture incidence of 1.95 in women and 3.45 in men was found[3]. A subsequent fracture risk of 10.8% was found within 2-years after a fracture, and of 17.6% in patients of 50+ years who sustained a NVF after a NVF[4, 5]. The two retrospective studies were performed according to intention-to-treat, and therefore, a difference in subsequent fracture rate and mortality could be found. Mortality is known to be increased after a fracture, especially after a hip fracture[24]. A recent study showed an increased risk of mortality especially within 5-years after the fracture[11]. In the described studies, [3] [4, 5] [24] [11] not all patients were treated at a Fracture Liaison Service. This might explain the lower subsequent fracture (6.8%) and mortality rate (3.5%) in our study compared with the studies mentioned above (due to a possible treatment effect). In addition, the minimum age of inclusion was different, and only patients who did attend the Fracture Liaison Service were included.” 5) Authors state that their major finding is the higher risk of re-fracture in the patients with combination of risk factors compared to patients with only bone factors. However, I think that this analysis should be adjusted for treatment, as the groups with bone factors may have a higher percentage of treated people and this may be the cause of a lower re-fracture rate. Unfortunately we cannot adjust for treatment, because we do not have these data. The authors mentioned this as a significant limitation in the discussion section. Discussion page 9 lines… “ A limitation of this study is that there are no data on prescription and adherence of the proposed osteoporosis treatment and fall prevention. Persistence might be low, as has been shown in a recent publication for oral anti-osteoporosis medications in the Netherlands [28].” 6) It would be interesting to find out whether fall factors are associated with refracture risk independent of bone factors when the entire cohort is analyzed together and adjusted for all risk factors independently. The authors can then check whether there is any interaction between bone and fall factors. Unfortunately there were too few events to analyse all risk factors independently. Therefore, pre-specified groups were made on bone-, fall and the combination of risk factors. However, the authors checked whether there was an interaction between the groups (BRF and FRF). There was no significant interaction (p=0.064) present. 7) As per point 5, mortality analysis should also be adjusted for treatment rates. Unfortunately we cannot adjust for treatment, because we do not have these data. The authors mentioned this as a significant limitation in the discussion section. Discussion page 9: “ A limitation of this study is that there are no data on prescription and adherence of the proposed osteoporosis treatment and fall prevention. Persistence might be low, as has been shown in a recent publication for oral anti-osteoporosis medications in the Netherlands [28].” 8) In order to conclude that there is no increase mortality in this cohort, a comparison with an age-and sex adjusted general population mortality is needed. The authors checked the mortality incidence in this period in the Netherlands, according to sex and age. We compared these data to our studied patients. The relative risk between the studied population and the general population in the Netherlands was 0.03477/0.02700 = 1.29. This means that our studied population had a higher mortality incidence compared to the general population of 29%, but our mortality rate was still very low. Minor 1. Figure 2 should include the fracture-free probability for all groups The authors made the stratified Cox regression plot with all 4 groups and included this in the manuscript as figure 4. Multivariable Cox regression stratified by groups. Subsequent fracture incidence by groups 10 Groups Combination No RFs BRF FRF Subsequent fracture 8 6 4 2 0 0 3 6 9 12 15 18 21 24 Follow-up (months) 2. I just feel that the wording “More than 1 in 2 had at least one clinical risk factor…” (used in first paragraph of results section) is not quite adequate in the context. The authors changed this and deleted these 2 sentences, because of a similar sentence with exact similar results. Page 6 “ 51.2% of patients had least one bone RF and 60.4% had at least one fall RF.” Level of interest: An article of importance in its field Quality of written English: Acceptable Statistical review: Yes, and I have assessed the statistics in my report.