SUMMARY OF PEER TECHNICAL REVIEW COMMENTS ON PENTABROMODIPHENYL ETHER AND PERFLUOROOCTANE SULFONATE DOSSIERS SUBMITTED UNDER THE UNECELRTAP POPS PROTOCOL PENTACHLOROBENZENE Introduction: In 2002, The Netherlands proposed commercial Pentachlorobenzene for listing as persistent organic pollutant (POP) under the UNECE-LRTAP POPs Protocol. Subsequently updates were issued in December 2005 and January 2006. The LRTAP nomination process includes the submission of a risk profile by the proponent Party, which, if considered acceptable by the LRTAP Executive Body, then undergoes one or more technical reviews. The technical review process has been separated into Track A (POPs characteristics) and Track B (management options). This report is an abbreviated summary of four independent technical reviewers of the risk profile undertaken under Track A of this process. The original technical reviews are appended and should be referred to should clarification be needed. Methods: The technical reviews were conducted in a similar manner to those routinely undertaken for peer reviewed journal articles or government document preparation. Reviewers were instructed to be transparent, and to include critical evaluation of such aspects as, inter alia, availability, reliability, completeness and relevance of the information and references. Only information contained in the dossiers was to be addressed, and reviewers were to refrain from any elaboration of their content or comments that could be considered to reflect policy. Thus, the statements and conclusions made in the technical reviews address the sufficiency and veracity of the risk profile in making the case that a substance is a POP under the LRTAP POPs Protocol. Reviewers were at liberty to suggest additional citations and information, as routinely performed in peer reviews, based on the reviewer’s knowledge of the subject and contemporary literature, but where asked to base their conclusions on the information provided in the dossier. Following an introductory teleconference to discuss the peer review charge, the reviewers acted independently and were instructed not to seek to obtain consensus on issues, although conversations between reviewers were permitted. Individual, independent, peer review reports were submitted by each reviewer. These reports are summarized here with the understanding that the purpose of this summary is to compile the independent findings, not to seek consensus on decisions or to provide any further interpretation. For brevity, the terms “concluded” or “agreed” are used in this following summary to refer to independent evaluations of whether the risk profile provides sufficient information to draw its stated conclusions, rather than a concurrence among reviewers or a de novo assessment of POPs characteristics. POP characteristics in terms of the guidance and indicative numerical values provided in the Executive Body Decision 98/2 for: Persistence: All four technical reviewers concluded that the risk profile presented in the dossier provides sufficient information to show that pentachlorobenzene is persistent in the environment with half-lives exceeding the LRTAP indicative guidance values. Reviewers generally accepted the estimated values for persistence in water although one reviewer felt they could have been supported more thoroughly. One reviewer noted the aquatic photolysis data but agreed that this was unlikely to be rapid under environmental conditions given the likely adsorption to suspended matter and sediment. All reviewers noted the data provided on persistence in soil and sediment agreed that these data supported a half-life estimate >6 months. One reviewer noted that soil half-lives may be <6 months in certain soils. One reviewer noted that the data provided was quite limited and another that it could have been presented more clearly, possibly in the form of a table. Bioaccumulation: All four technical reviewers concluded that the risk profile presented in the dossier provides sufficient information to show that pentachlorobenzene is bioaccumulative with Bioconcentration Factors (BCFs) exceeding the LRTAP indicative guidance values of 5000. Reviewers all felt that the available steady state BCF data on fish clearly indicated high level of bioconcentration. One reviewer felt that this conclusion was also supported by the available field study. Two reviewers noted that at least some of the lower BCFs could be due to shorter non-steady-state testing. Two reviewers felt that more details regarding the testing, such as lipid content of the test species, would have enable a better comparison of data. One reviewer felt that the data could have been presented with greater clarity by brigading the BCFs together under taxa and including references. Two reviewers also noted that the log Kow is >5. One reviewer provided additional referenced data supporting the above general conclusion. Toxicity: All four technical reviewers concluded that the risk profile presented in the dossier provides sufficient information to show that pentachlorobenzene is highly (eco)toxic sufficient to meet the LRTAP indicative guidance criteria. All reviewers noted the NOEC value of 0.01 mg/l for crustaceans as indicative of moderate or high toxicity to aquatic organisms. One reviewer felt, however, that the endpoints in the aquatic toxicity studies were not well described and more detail should have been included. Two reviewers noted the NOEC value of 12.5 mg/kg bw from a subchronic study also indicated moderate mammalian toxicity. One of these reviewers, however, had concerns regarding the manner of recording of the data and provided some clarifications, but did not feel these changed the conclusions. The same reviewer had concerns about of documentation regarding the source of the data presented. This reviewer also felt that the statement ‘Insufficient evidence was available to conclude that the substance was teratogenic’ could be misleading and quoted evidence of possible developmental toxicity from two rat studies presented in the dossier. One reviewer quoted evidence of the formation of pentachlorophenol as a metabolite of pentachlorobenzene, and suggested that this might be noted when considering the potential for carcinogenicity. Potential for Long-range Transboundary Atmospheric Transport: All four technical reviewers concluded that the risk profile presented in the dossier provides sufficient information to show that pentachlorobenzene has the potential to undergo long-range atmospheric transport according to the LRTAP indicative guidance criteria. All reviewers confirmed that pentachlorobenzene can be considered to have around 2 Pa at 25oC and therefore below the 1000 Pa of the indicative guidance. Three reviewers commented that the source of these data where not presented.. All reviewers agreed that the atmospheric half-life was greatly in excess of two days, although there was some concern that wide ranges were quoted, eg 45-467 days, and no explanation was provided. Three reviewers also pointed out that both the modeling and monitoring data from remote regions supported the conclusion that long-range atmospheric transport was occurring. Monitoring or equivalent scientific information suggesting long-range transboundary atmospheric transport: All four reviewers concluded that the monitoring evidence provided in the risk profile was sufficient to conclude that longrange atmospheric transport was occurring. All reviewers noted the presence of pentachlorobenzene in arctic air, freshwater and biota suggest that long-range transboundary atmospheric transport is occurring. Two reviewers stressed the relevance of the detection of pentachlorobenzene in air samples from all 40 locations sampled in North America, including 5 arctic stations. Two reviewers also noted the additional data provided by industry showing a declining level over time but noted that pentachlorobenzene was still being detected in remote regions Sufficiency of the information to suggest that the substance is likely to have significant adverse human and/or environmental effects resulting from its longrange transboundary atmospheric transport: All four reviewers conclude that the data provided indicate that the possibility of adverse effects as a result of long-range transboundary atmospheric transport cannot be excluded. One reviewer felt that, while such adverse effects could not be excluded, this was insufficient to conclude that adverse effects were probable. Three reviewers recognize that, while concentrations of pentachlorobenzene are low, they represent a significant contribution to the exposure arising from similar persistent, bioaccumulative and toxic substances in both man and biota, the consequences of which are unknown, but potentially severe. Individual reviewers’ specific comments are included below. Reviewer A: Human and wildlife are exposed to a cocktail of different contaminants in the environment including remote regions. Therefore it will be difficult to relate or predict effects to one single compound, especially if they have high hazard potentials. In this respect the PEC/PNEC approach is not a suitable tool to protect ecosystems in sensitive areas. PeCB exhibit persistent, bio -accumulative and toxic properties. Due to the widespread distribution of PeCB in the environment including remote regions, the occurrence in arctic top predators and the hazard potential, adverse effects on human health and the environment cannot be excluded. Reviewer B: The dossier concludes there is sufficient information that POP characteristics of pentachlorobenzene meet the UN-ECE criteria. Pentachlorobenzene has the potential for long-range atmospheric transport, persistence in water, sediment and soil, bioaccumulation and ecotoxicity. I agree with the dossier’s conclusions there is sufficient information that POP characteristics of pentachlorobenzene meet the UN-ECE criteria for the potential for long-range atmospheric transport, persistence in water, sediment and soil, bioaccumulation and ecotoxicity. But the dossier does not state directly, nor does it provide sufficient quantitative data on amounts transported long range, most sensitive receptors, or the toxic levels in these sensitive receptors to warrant an extrapolation to the conclusion “likely to have significant adverse human and/or environmental effects resulting from its long-range transboundary atmospheric transport.” Reviewer C: Scarce toxicological data and incomplete toxicological profile, while contributing to make problematic the characterization of possible adverse human and/or environmental effects resulting from long-range transboundary atmospheric transport, on the other hand induce to consider the eventuality that adverse effects resulting from toxicological properties different from those which have been explored might occur. On this basis, and considering that the substance is persistent, bioaccumulative, and has been found in remote regions (in both environmental matrices and biota), the possibility of adverse effects on the delicate balance of complex ecosystems is not to be excluded. Reviewer D: Detection of pentachlorobenzene in remote regions and biota does not, of itself, indicate an adverse effect. The levels detected are very low, well below any known toxic effect level. There is evidence in the additional submissions of a time trend although more recent monitoring would indicate that emissions and consequent exposures are continuing. There is no evidence of non-threshold effects such as might lead to adverse effects even at the very low concentrations measured. Nevertheless, pentachlorobenzene is one of a series of chlorinated aromatics that constitute an significant load to the environment. It is itself likely to be a degradation product of hexachlorobenzene and lindane. Its own degradation has been shown to result in lower chlorinated aromatics such as terta and trichlorobenzenes that are themselves subject to widespread distribution in the environment. Assuming that the data provided in the dossier reflects the true properties of PeCB, then it is clearly a POP like substance for which emissions are continuing. The possibility of significant harm, particularly through a contribution to an overall load of persistent and bioaccumulative substances, cannot be excluded Conclusions on the technical content of the dossier: All reviewers felt that the dossier, including the updates submitted in December 2005 and January 2006, provided sufficient information to conclude that pentachlorobenzene meets the indicative criteria of Executive Decision 98/2 for consideration as an LRTAP POP, although one reviewer felt that this provided insufficient information to justify the conclusion that it is “likely to have significant adverse human and/or environmental effects resulting from its long-range transboundary atmospheric transport.” Two reviewers felt that some of the data could have been better supported by information on sources and additional verifiable detail.