Enterprise Journalism Review Lead Nutgraph Quote Background Information (1,2,3,etc) Kicker Secondary Information Three-part edit (Does it make sense, can it be shortened, AP Style and Grammar) Grammar issues In-text citation Quotes For news stories, simply state where you got the information inside the body of the story. Only place marks around what was actually said. Do not use parentheses. Ever. Direct quotes are only used for information directly taken from a person or physical source Comma inside quote. Examples: According to a report in the New York Times According to a story posted on MSNBC.com Jones was killed instantly, according to a Sanford Police press release. Examples: “This is an ongoing investigation,” said Davis. “I think so,” said Robinson, a freshman majoring in accounting. “It depends on how thing are at the time.” Enterprise Journalism Defined Stories based entirely or almost entirely upon the research of an individual journalist. The journalists develops an idea for a story – based upon an observation, tip or fact – then begins process of reporting and writing story. Process Same as any other story. Difference is, no one is telling you what to do. Longer, more in-depth enterprise pieces may be called investigative journalism. Examples of Enterprise Journalism Update on a project or proposal (building, new major, etc.). Story on new hire. Story looking into a new show or fashion line. Piece on instances of racism within a police department. Story on a person’s triumph over drug abuse. Sidebar Defined A sidebar is a shorter companion piece to a larger story. In newspapers or magazines, they generally run next to or near the main piece. Examples Sidebar on an injury suffered by a player during a game. Sidebar on a minor vote passed during a meeting. In broadcast, they run after the main piece. Sidebar on the opening act of a concert. Sidebars are useful when a reporter has information that, while relevant, may not fit within a main piece. Sidebar on new menu changes for a story about a restaurant chain. No Excuses Stories are out there. You just have to make the effort to find them. Think about something you have observed. Think about something you have heard happening elsewhere. Is that applicable locally? Think about a disturbing statistic you learned. Does that have any relevance to the local community? Follow-up on gossip.