“November” A Poem by Simon Armitage English 10 Wessam Kanes Overview • Poem • Summary • Annotations • Key Literary Features • Personal Response • Literal Representation • Symbolic Representation • Tableau NOVEMBER We walk to the ward from the badly parked car with your grandma taking four short steps to our two. We have brought her here to die and we know it. You check her towel, soap and family trinkets, pare her nails, parcel her in the rough blankets and she sinks down into her incontinence. You're shattered. You give me the keys and I drive through the twilight zone, past the famous station to your house, to numb ourselves with alcohol. It is time John. In their pasty bloodless smiles, in their slack breasts, their stunned brains and their baldness and in us John: we are almost these monsters. Inside, we feel the terror of the dusk begin. Outside we watch the evening, failing again, and we let it happen. We can say nothing. Sometimes the sun spangles and we feel alive. One thing we have to get, John, out of this life. SUMMARY • Armitage describes his and John’s experience when taking his grandmother to the ward one last time to die. • Themes: • • • • Eventually, all of the leaves will fall off the tree. Everyone’s end will come Time makes us monsters Death is inevitable. We have to enjoy life while we can Annotations LITERARY TERMS • Alliteration • Rhyme • Tone • Visual Imagery • Ambiguity • Enjambment • Symbolism Alliteration pasty bloodless smiles, in their slack breasts, their stunned brains and their baldness Sun Spangles Armitage’s description of old age sounds even harsher Adds lightness and hope in the final verse and aids the tone to change Rhyme Tone - Diction Sometimes the sun spangles and we feel alive. Elevates tone One thing we have to get, John, out of this life. We walk to the ward from the badly parked car Depresses tone Outside we watch the evening, failing again, Tone - Structure Structure 6 Stanzas (5X3) + Couplet Depressed Tone Elevated Tone Change in Tone = Change in Structure “Sometimes the sun spangles and we feel alive. One thing we have to get, John, out of this life.” Visual Imagery Visual Imagery Effects: -Much more interesting to imagine -Aids the readers in conjuring the image the author wanted to convey Ambiguity Sometimes the sun spangles and we feel alive. One thing we have to get, John, out of this life. Punctuation - Death is a natural occurrence. We all have to get out of life and die someday. We need to enjoy everyday and gain as many good memories ‘sun spangles’ as we can. Purpose: Used to leave the reader brooding about which perspective they should look at things from. Ambiguity You're shattered. You give me the keys and I drive through the twilight zone, past the famous station to your house, to numb ourselves with alcohol. Shattered: - Emotionally shattered rather than physically Twilight Zone: - An old TV thriller show from the 60’s. Twilight: - The light you get when dusk is falling or dawn is rising. John is confused. He is between the dusk or dawn zone. Not knowing if what he did was right? Maybe thinking he could have prevented it in a way. Enjambment We walk to the ward from the badly parked car with your grandma taking four short steps to our two. We have brought her here to die and we know it. You check her towel, soap and family trinkets, pare her nails, parcel her in the rough blankets and she sinks down into her incontinence. Symbolism Title: NOVEMBER • Denotation: The month of November is dominated by the season of fall. Within the fall season, the trees loose their leaves in preparation for winter. In winter the trees stop blooming and growing – ‘die’. • Connation: This is significant to how the author wrote about the grandmother who was being preparing to die. Symbolism Inside, we feel the terror of the dusk begin. Outside we watch the evening, failing again, and we let it happen. We can say nothing. Dusk: Dark hours of night Symbolizes Death As time passes by, we feel the terror of death begin. Symbolism It is time John. In their pasty bloodless smiles, in their slack breasts, their stunned brains and their baldness and in us John: we are almost these monsters. Time makes us older. Thus, transforming us into the monsters of old age. Symbolizes Life span (Good and Bad). Causes transformation to old age Personal Response This poem is one of a kind. It advocates the brutal reality of life and makes one think about their own life. Have they lived it wisely? How productive has their life been? It also emphasizes on the fact that one day we will all go. Although, this is something that people try to avoid thinking about, the author believes that accepting it makes life easier to go about. Literal Representation John and his grandmother. Symbolic Representation Tableau Bibliography (Images) • November. Digital image. Http://pixelcurse.com/wpcontent/uploads/2011/05/november_field_3.jpg. Web. 13 May 2012. • Cartoon Gravestone. Digital image. Http://www.halloweenclipart.com/halloween_clipart_im ages/rip_on_a_gravestone_0521-1010-23211007_SMU.jpg. Web. 13 May 2012. • Grandma. Digital image. Http://familyautopacks.com/wordpress/wpcontent/uploads/products_img/image-47.jpg. Web. 13 May 2012.