Writing a DBQ essay Taking SEEI and using that same strategy to write a coherent paragraph. SEEI Method • S – State or Define (word, topic, claim or concept) • E – Elaborate or Clarify (expound on the concept, provide clearer background info) • E – Exemplify (give a concrete example from the text or real life) • I – Illustrate (provide an analogy or metaphor to clarify your position and connect to the claim) SEEI in paragraph form S – Make your specific claim (one per paragraph) E – Elaborate (provide background on this one claim) Who? What? When? Where? E – Exemplify (provide a concrete example to support this one claim) I – Illustrate (breakdown the example and connect it back to the claim of the paragraph) T – Transition (lead from one claim to the next) Organizing Your ideas • An important step when answering a DBQ question or writing an essay is to organize your evidence into analytical categories or “buckets.” • The “buckets” can help you link up common pieces of evidence and help you identify when they may be used appropriately. P-E-R-S-I-A • A commonly used bucketing tool is the acronym PERSIA. • P – Politics (references to government, political leaders, war, law/rules) • E – Economics (money/wealth, resources, trade) • R – Religion (Beliefs, Religious institutions, Religious practices, god(s), etc.) • S – Social Issues (Crime, interaction between races, issues of sexuality, gender relations, age relations, topics relating to culture) • I – Ideas/Ideology (Philosophy, Technological advances, Theories, Issues related to math and science) • A – Arts/Architecture (Buildings, sculpture, paintings, visual representations) * Assign a category to each of the documents/topics and then attempt to link them. Outlining … setting up your paper • Once you have successfully bucketed your documents … the next step is organizing an outline. • Remember the focus question: “How did colonization affect Kenya?” Setting up your outline • First: Determine your position on the central question. Your thesis is your main argument. • Second: Determine how you will make your argument. (Roadmap) “I intend to prove {Argument} by demonstrating _____(Claim 1)______, ___(Claim 2)___ and __(Claim 3)__.” Use your Roadmap to set up your paper • Introduction (Thesis & Roadmap) • Body Paragraph #1 (Focus on Claim 1) {Include relevant evidence from documents} • Body Paragraph #2 (Focus on Claim 2) {Include relevant evidence from documents} • Body Paragraph #3 (Focus on Claim 3) {Include relevant evidence from documents} • Conclusion (Restatement of thesis and roadmap) Citing the source • Citations: Phrases taken directly from the source (document). • Must use quotation marks “ “ Example: “many Africans saw colonization in Africa as a progressive and civilizing force …” (Doc F). * Remember to then explain the meaning of the quote and how it relates to your claim. Making the transition • Transitions sentences: Come at the beginning and end of each paragraph. These are extremely important for bridging one idea to the next. • Remember: Your argument needs to make logical sense … it is YOUR job … NOT THE READER’s job… to make these connections. • Example: The Romans not only had a high tolerance for violence, like Americans, they also spent a large amount of their resources on warfare. Introduction • Grabber Statement (attempts to grab the reader’s attention) • Background Information (Time, place, participants) • Background Information (Time, place, participants) • Thesis statement (your main argument) • Roadmap (guide for your essay) Conclusion • Restatement of thesis (should not be word for word) • Address how you have proven your case (draw on the roadmap) • Address any unique points you discussed • Explanation of why the question is important today (what will happen if the issue is not addressed?) • Final statement (why this particular issue is important)