Developing a Thesis Statement
for a Paper
FYS 100
Creative Discovery in Digital Art Forms
Fall 2008
Burg
Choosing a Topic
 Choosing a topic for a paper is one of the
most important parts of writing.
 You have to choose something that you can
talk about specifically, concretely, vividly,
and interestingly.
Thesis Statement
 A thesis for a paper is the main point of the
paper.
 You should be sure that your paper has a
thesis.
 A thesis statement is one sentence that
explicitly expresses the main point.
(Sometimes the thesis can be expressed
more clearly in more than one sentence.)
Where do you put
the thesis statement?
 A traditional way to organize a paper is to
make the thesis statement the last sentence
of the introduction.
 Everything in the introduction before the
thesis statement leads the readers to the
main point.
Developing a Thesis Statement
for your Research Paper
 The general topic area of your research is
“creativity in digital media.”
 The general question is this:
 Is computer-generated art less creative than traditional
art?
 Does the computer take over the creative process too
much?
 Does the computer make things “too easy,” so that you
don’t really have to exercise your creativity to make
something that can be called “art”?
A Possible Thesis Statement
 Thesis statement:
 There are lots of possibilities for creativity in digital
media.
 Critique of this thesis statement:
 Expressed very informally.
 Not very exciting in the way it’s expressed.
 It would be easy to illustrate this with concrete, specific
examples.
 It might be too general. Should it be focused on one
medium – e.g., digital photography, digital drawing and
painting, or digital music production?
A Possible Thesis Statement
 Thesis statement:
 Being creative in digital media involves bringing art and
science together in innovative and fascinating ways.
 Critique of this thesis statement:
 It’s expressed in a more interesting way than the last
one.
 You’d have to be careful in your examples. If you talk
about the science, you don’t want to do it in a superficial
way, and you need to be correct.
 There are lots of interesting examples in this area, but
you’d have to dig them out.
A Possible Thesis Statement
 Thesis statement:
 “Art” can be created by either digital or traditional
means. What makes art “art” isn’t the tool that is used,
but the creativity of the artist.
 Critique of this thesis statement:
 This is a good point.
 “What makes art ‘art’” is difficult to pin down. You’d
have to be careful not to end up with a bunch of
glittering generalities.
 You’d need concrete examples and specific
language,even though the ideas are abstract.
A Possible Thesis Statement
 Thesis statement: The work of … exemplifies the
creative possibilities of digital art (or digital music
production).
 Critique of this thesis statement:
 It’s more focused than the others, which is good.
 You’d need to find specific supporting details from the
artist’s work.
 You’d need to talk specifically about the digital
techniques that this artist uses and the ways in which
his or her creativity is employed.
 Can you write at least ten pages about this?
A Possible Thesis Statement
 Thesis statement:
 Some people think that using prefabricated loops in music
production is “cheating.” Actually, there are many ways in
which a musician can use loops creatively.
 Critique of this thesis statement:
 It’s focused and specific, which is good.
 It’s an interesting point that not all readers will already know
about.
 You’d have to know a good bit about loops and how they are
used creatively in order to get at least ten pages out of this
topic.
 It would be good to illustrate this with specific musicians, but
it might be difficult to know if they actually used pre-fabricated
loops or created their own.
What to do?
 Any of the ideas just presented could work for your research
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paper.
You need to refine the ideas.
Be sure you have lots of supporting details that are
 Specific
 Concrete
 Vivid
 Convincing
 Relevant
Don’t just write a bunch of glittering generalities!
Make abstract ideas as clear and concrete as possible. Use
 Explicit language
 Examples
 Metaphors and analogies