Sentence Structure Concise, Precise, and Clear “People usually resist new regulations.” Active Voice “Gender inequality exists in schools.” Effective Punctuation “Gender inequality, such as unequal funding for male and female sports, exists in schools.” Wordy and Confusing “People usually have a tendency to resist new and unfamiliar regulations most of the time.” Passive Voice “It is my belief that gender inequality exists in the school system.” Lack of Effective Punctuation “Gender inequality such as unequal funding for male and female sports exists in schools.” One of the most important results of the data is the alteration of previous views on the subject of politics. Start Fast Create a List “New regulations discourage entrepreneurs.” “New regulations discourage entrepreneurs by 1) increasing costs and red-tape, 2) slowing progress on projects, 3) and overwhelming would-be business-owners.” Independent Clause Dependent Clause Terms Sentence Fragment Run-On Sentence • Independent Clause: • Dependent clause: • Fragment: • Run-On: Do NOT use articles Use “a” Use “an” Use “the” Singular Singular Specific Plural UNLESS the noun is a proper name NonCountable Countable Countable General General Begins with vowel Location Time Direction Other Relationships between words