Day 1
In his poem The Raven, Edgar Allan Poe describes how a raven frightens the speaker.
Would you want a eerie bird like this to harrass you
Correction of commonly misspelled word
Use of quotation marks with the title of a poem
Use of end punctuation: question mark
Correct indefinite article

Day 1
In the poem
“
The Raven,
”
Edgar Allan Poe describes how a raven frightens the speaker.
Use of quotation marks with title of a poem
Would you want an eerie bird like this to harass you ?
Correct indefinite article
Correction of commonly misspelled word
Use of end punctuation: question mark

Day 2
I hope the raven will not drive the speaker crazy with: it’s spooky gaze.
My Sister Jillian claims that the speaker will lose his mind in the end.
Elimination of unnecessary capitalization
Correction of commonly confused words
Elimination of colon between preposition and object

Day 2
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:
I hope the raven will not drive the speaker crazy with its spooky gaze.
Elimination of colon between preposition and object
Correction of commonly confused words
My sister Jillian claims that the speaker will lose his mind in the end.
Elimination of unnecessary capitalization

Day 3
Because the raven is able to make the speaker really nervous, the night is dark and gloomy.
In “The Raven,” they provide a vivid description of terror.
Correction of faulty subordination
Use of precise adverb to improve style
Elimination of they without a clear antecedent

Day 3
Because the night is dark and gloomy, the raven is able to make the speaker extremely nervous.
Correction of faulty subordination
Use of precise adverb to improve style
_____ they
“The Raven” provides a vivid description of terror.
Elimination of they without a clear antecedent

Day 4
When the bird refuses to talk the man in the poem lost his temper.
“The Raven” describe the mans growing hysteria.
Use of comma after introductory adverb clause
Use of apostrophe to show possession
Subject and verb agreement
Verb tense compatibility

Day 4
When the bird refuses to talk, the man in the story loses his temper.
Use of comma after introductory adverb clause
Verb tense compatibility
“The Raven” describes the man’s growing hysteria.
Subject and verb agreement
Use of apostrophe to show possession

Day 5
This here poem was so powerful. The bird’s appearance and silence were unnerving.
To recover from our fear we nearly spent half an hour talking about the poem.
Elimination of here after a demonstrative adjective
Correction of misplaced modifier
Use of subordinating conjunction to combine sentences
Use of comma after introductory phrase

Day 5
This poem was so powerful because the bird’s appearance and silence were unnerving.
Elimination of here after a demonstrative adjective
Use of subordinating conjunction to combine sentences
To recover from our fear , we spent nearly half an hour talking about the poem.
Use of comma after introductory phrase
Correction of misplaced modifier