Day 1
The bible, which is divided into the Old Testament and the New Testament is
a sacred book.
The Jewish religion excepts only the Old Testament, while the Christian
religion excepts the Old and the New Testament.
Correction of commonly confused words
Use of commas with nonrestrictive clause
Capitalization of names of religious terms
Day 1
The Bible, which is divided into the Old Testament and the New Testament, is
a sacred book.
Capitalization of names of religious terms
Use of a comma with nonrestrictive clause
The Jewish religion accepts only the Old Testament, while the Christian
religion accepts the Old and the New Testament.
Correction of commonly confused words
Day 2
The Old Testament from about 1300 B.C. to 100 B.C. deals largely with the
history and the religious life of ancient Israel.
The New Testament began with the birth of Jesus Christ and covers about 100
years, ending about 125 AD.
Verb tense compatibility
Use of periods with abbreviations
Correction of misplaced modifier
Correct placement of B.C/ A.D
Day 2
The Old Testament deals largely with the history and the religious life of
ancient Israel from about 1300 B.C. to 100 B.C.
Correction of misplaced modifier
The New Testament begins with the birth of Jesus Christ and covers about 100
years, ending about A.D. 125.
Verb tense compatibility
Correct placement of B.C./A.D.
Use periods for abbreviations
Day 3
No less than a dozen English translations of the Bible preceded the King James
Version, a version that was first published in 1611.
How great, indeed, was the impact on English prose and poetry of this widely-read
masterpiece.
Correct use of fewer and less
Use of exclamation point to show strong emotion
Elimination of unnecessary hyphen in a compound modifier
Revision of wordy sentence
Day 3
No fewer than a dozen English translations of the Bible preceded the King
James Version, first published in 1611.
Correct use of fewer and less
Revision of a wordy sentence
How great, indeed, was the impact on English prose and poetry of this
widely read masterpiece!
Elimination of unnecessary hyphen in a compound modifier
Exclamation point to stress strong emotion
Day 4
The Talmud, the acumulated and authoritative body of Jewish oral traditions,
includes sections dealing with law folklore and domestic life.
It’s main divisions are the Mishna, a text of the oral law, and the Gemara, which
interprets the Mishna.
Use of commas in a series
Correction of commonly confused words
Correction of commonly misspelled words
Elimination of faulty parallel structure
Day 4
The Talmud, the accumulated and authoritative body of Jewish oral traditions,
includes sections dealing with law, folklore, and domestic life.
Correction of commonly misspelled word
Use of commas in a series.
Its main divisions are the Mishna, a text of the oral law, and the Gemara,
an interpretation of the Mishna.
Correction of commonly confused words
Elimination of faulty parallel structure
Day 5
Muslims believe that there sacred book, the Koran, was revealed to Muhammad by
an angel begining about A.D. 610.
This text was written in rhymed Arabic and divided into a hundred and
fourteen chapters, called suras.
Use of numerals above one hundred
Use of underlining or italics with foreign word
Correction of commonly confused words
Correct spelling: doubling final consonant
Day 5
Muslims believe that their sacred book, the Koran, was revealed to Muhammad
by an angel beginning about A.D. 610.
Correction of commonly confused words
Correct spelling: doubling of final consonant
This text was written in rhymed Arabic and divided into 114 chapters, called
suras.
Use of numerals above one hundred
Underline or italics with foreign word