Breaking Down the Writing Rubrics for Common Core-Based Standardized Testing Using Florida Standards Assessments Writing Rubrics (Drafts) Grades 6-11: Informative/ Explanatory Grades 6-11: Argumentation The state of Florida has provided drafts for the Writing Rubrics for the Florida State Assessments. This slide show will break down the “pieces” of the rubrics and the information provided by the state in order to allow the teacher to see what will be expected and to begin developing a plan for teaching students to write. This information can be found at the following links: http://www.fsassessments.org/wp-content/uploads/2014/07/ELA-WritingRubrics-6-11_Informative.pdf http://www.fsassessments.org/wp-content/uploads/2014/07/ELA-WritingRubrics-6-11_Argumentation.pdf There is a rubric for the Informative/ Explanatory Prompt and a separate one for the Argumentative. Both, however, are very similar. Students will be scored on: -Purpose, Focus, and Organization (4 pt) -Evidence and Elaboration (4 pt) -Conventions of Standard English (2 pt) The previous slide and the following slides will provide a copy of each page of the rubrics for Informative/ Explanatory Writing and Argumentative Writing. The state also provided additional information to consider about the requirements of the writing rubrics and the writing tasks that students will be required to accomplish. The following slides will break down each of the paragraphs and the concepts covered in that information. The information provided in the peach box is the verbiage provided by the state. The information in the grey box is a summary of that information provided by Teengagement®. Writing Prompt Specifications Overall Task Description Students will read a stimulus about a single topic. A stimulus consists of several texts written on a single topic. The stimulus should consist of informational or literary fiction or nonfiction texts and can cover a wide array of topics. After reading the stimulus, the students will respond to a writing prompt in which they will provide information on a topic or take a stance to support an opinion or argument. -The student will read several texts that follow one topic -The texts could be informational, literary fiction or nonfiction -Student will be provided a writing prompt in which they have to: a) provide information about a topic or b) take a stance to support an opinion or argument. Stimulus Attributes The complexity of the texts used as stimuli should be accessible for the applicable grade. While this is primarily a writing test, a grade-appropriate level of literacy is required. In choosing the text(s), qualitative and quantitative dimensions of text complexity must be balanced by the task considerations required of the reader. Graphics such as infographics, photographs, tables, and diagrams can be included with the stimuli. The graphics used, however, must be purposeful to the task and should supplement the student’s understanding of the topic. During the text review process, Florida educators use professional judgment and experience to determine whether the reading level of each selection is suitable for the grade level. -The complexity of the texts will be grade-appropriate (qualitatively and quantitatively) -Graphics can be used, also (such as infographics, photographs, tables, and diagrams) to add to the student’s understanding of the topic The stimuli for the informative/explanatory prompts should maintain a clear topical connection but may address diverse concepts and ideas. Stimuli for the opinion/argumentative prompts should present opposing points of view. Each point of view should be equally represented so that a student can take either side of a position. Thorough and convincing support for the controlling ideas must be evident in all stimuli. Requirements of the Texts: Informative/Explanatory Prompts: -must be clearly connected -can include diversity in concepts and ideas Opinion/Argumentative Prompts: -must have opposing points of views -each point of view must be equally represented -The text has to give lots of support for a student to write a controlling idea or argument Texts used as stimuli should be interesting and appealing to students at the grades for which the selections are intended. They should be conceptually appropriate and relevant and should reflect real world settings and events that are interesting to students and are not limited to classroom or school related situations. Texts with controversial or offensive content should not be included. Confusing or emotionally charged subjects should also be avoided. References to trademarks, commercial products, and brand names should be checked by the contractor’s legal department for permission to use. If there is any question about the accuracy of content, the Florida Department of Education may require at least two additional sources to verify the information in the text. Additional Information About the Texts: Must be: -interesting and appealing -conceptually appropriate -must be relevant -reflect real world settings -must reflect events that are interesting to students -not limited to classroom or school-related situations -checked for accuracy Should not: -be controversial or offensive -be confusing or emotionally charged -reference trademarks, commercial products or brand names without permission to use The stimulus will consist of two to four texts. The approximate combined word count of the text sets is listed in the table below. Grade Level 6 7 8 9 10 11 Minimum Word Count 1000 1000 1000 1100 1100 1100 Maximum Word Count 1600 1700 1800 1900 2000 2000 The stimulus will be presented along with a writing prompt that asks students to write an essay about the topic. The students will be required to synthesize information from the text sets and must cite specific evidence from the texts to support their ideas. Students must read between two to four texts for the prompt. Combined word counts of the texts are listed in the table for each grade. Student will be provided a prompt. Student must synthesize information from the text. Student must come up with his/her own ideas about the text and cite any support they use from the text. For the informative/explanatory writing prompts, students will be required to synthesize and analyze ideas from the stimuli to develop and support a controlling idea. For the opinion/argumentative writing prompts, students will be required to synthesize and analyze ideas and evidence from stimuli. They will use these ideas to present and support an opinion (grades 4‒5) or to argue and support a claim (grades 6‒11). Informative/ Explanatory Writing Prompts: -Students must develop a controlling idea and support it by synthesizing and analyzing ideas from the texts provided. Opinion/ Argumentative Writing Prompts: -Students must develop an opinion (gr. 4-5), an argument or a claim (gr. 6-11) and support it by synthesizing and analyzing ideas and evidence from the texts provided. Assessed Standards The Florida Standards Writing Assessment will assess the following standards from the appropriate grades: LAFS.W.1.1 Write arguments to support claims in an analysis of substantive topics or texts, using valid reasoning and relevant and sufficient evidence. or LAFS.W.1.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine and convey complex ideas and information clearly and accurately through the effective selection, organization, and analysis of content. LAFS.W.2.4 Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience. LAFS.W.2.5 Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach. LAFS.W.2.6 Use technology, including the Internet, to produce and publish writing and to interact and collaborate with others. LAFS.W.3.8 Gather relevant information from multiple print and digital sources, assess the credibility and accuracy of each source, and integrate the information while avoiding plagiarism. LAFS.W.3.9 Draw evidence from literary or informational texts to support analysis, reflection, and research. (Continued on the next slide.) (Continued from previous slide.) LAFS.L.1.1 Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when writing or speaking. LAFS.L.1.2 Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English capitalization, punctuation, and spelling when writing. LAFS.L.2.3 Apply knowledge of language to understand how language functions in different contexts, to make effective choices for meaning or style, and to comprehend more fully when reading or listening. LAFS.L.3.4 Determine or clarify the meaning of unknown and multiplemeaning words and phrases by using context clues, analyzing meaningful word parts, and consulting general and specialized reference materials, as appropriate. LAFS.L.3.5 Demonstrate understanding of word relationships and nuances in word meanings. LAFS.L.3.6 Acquire and use accurately a range of general academic and domain-specific words and phrases sufficient for reading, writing, speaking, and listening at the college and career readiness level; demonstrate independence in gathering vocabulary knowledge when encountering an unknown term important to comprehension or expression. Directions Template Grades 6–11 Write an explanatory essay about. . . . Your essay must be based on ideas and information that can be found in the “. . . ” passage set. -OR Write an argumentative essay in which you . . . . Use the information from the texts in your essay. Manage your time carefully so that you can • read the passages; • plan your response; • write your response; and • revise and edit your response. (If argumentation) Be sure to • include a claim; • address counterclaims; • use evidence from multiple sources; and • avoid overly relying on one source. Type your response in the space provided. You have ____ minutes to read, plan, write, revise, and edit your response. -Follow these templates when writing practice prompts for the classroom Acceptable Text Types Informational Text Literary Text Primary Sources/Nonfiction Historical documents (e.g., Bill of Rights) Essays (e.g., informational, persuasive, analytical, historical, scientific) Letters, journals, diaries Secondary Sources/Nonfiction Magazine articles Newspaper articles Editorials Encyclopedia articles Functional Materials Consumer documents (e.g., warranties, manuals, contracts, applications) Embedded in text (e.g., tables, charts, maps, graphs, illustrations, photographs, captions, text boxes) How-to articles Brochures, fliers Schedules Website pages Informational Text Literary Text Literary Nonfiction Biographical and autobiographical sketches Diaries, memoirs, journals, letters Essays (e.g., personal and classical narratives) Critiques Literary Fiction Short stories Poetry Historical fiction Fables Folk tales, tall tales Legends Myths Drama Fantasy Excerpts from longer works -Choose from this bank of acceptable text types when creating writing prompts for classroom practice. Possible Topics Essential Skills Social Studies Literacy U.S. History Communication Civics and Government Teamwork Geography Leadership Economics Science, Technology, Engineering, and World Languages Cultural Perspectives Mathematics Earth/Space Science Cultural Comparisons Life Science Cultural Communities Physical Science Arts Concepts of Technology Dance Computer Technology Music Information Technology Theater Technology Processes Visual Arts Concepts of Engineering Interests Engineering Tools Adventure Engineering Design and Testing Animals Mathematics Careers Entertainment Health and Physical Education Movement Competency Family Cognitive Abilities Friendship Lifetime Fitness Hobbies/Crafts Personal Health Humor Health Care Mystery School Business Management and Sports/Games Administration Finance Trips/Journey Financial Literacy Business Plans -Choose from this bank of acceptable topics Marketing Entrepreneurship writing prompts for classroom practice. Transportation of Goods Manufacturing Agriculture Hospitality Industry Tourism Industry when creating Grades 6–11 Argumentation Text-based Writing Rubric (Score points within each domain include most of the characteristics below.) Score Purpose, Focus, and Checklist Organization (4-point Rubric) 4 The response is fully sustained and consistently focused within the purpose, audience, and task; and it has a clear and effective organizational structure creating coherence and completeness. The response includes most of the following: Clearly stated and strongly maintained claim with little or no loosely related material Clearly addressed alternate or opposing claims* Skillful use of a variety of transitional strategies to clarify the relationships between and among ideas Logical progression of ideas from beginning to end with a satisfying introduction and conclusion Established and maintained appropriate style and objective tone The response is: ___ about the topic ___ strong ___ complete The response focuses on: ___ its purpose ___ the audience ___ its specific task The response is: ___ organized (with a structure) ___ coherent (is it clear and easy to understand) ___ complete (does it address everything) The response includes: ___ a clear and strong claim ___ material that is ONLY related to the claim ___ alternate or opposing claims ___ transitional strategies that make relationships between points and ideas ___ a progression of ideas (clearly move from one idea or point to the next) ___ a good introduction ___ a good conclusion ___ appropriate style (the way you write will appeal to the audience- you must consider your audience) ___ objective tone (don’t go crazy with anger, excitement, etc. when making your claim) Grades 6–11 Argumentation Text-based Writing Rubric (Score points within each domain include most of the characteristics below.) 4 Evidence and Elaboration (4-point Rubric) The response provides thorough, convincing, and credible support/evidence for the writer’s claim that includes the effective use of sources, facts, and details. The response includes most of the following: Smoothly integrated, thorough, and relevant evidence, including precise references to sources Effective use of a variety of elaborative techniques to support the claim, demonstrating an understanding of the topic and text Clear and effective expression of ideas, using precise language Academic and domain-specific vocabulary clearly appropriate for the audience and purpose Various sentence structures creating language facility Checklist The response: ___ provides convincing support and evidence ___ provides credible (believable) support and evidence ___ includes effective use of sources, facts and details The response includes: ___ smoothly integrated evidence ___ thorough evidence ___ relevant evidence ___ precise reference of the sources ___ elaborative techniques to support the claim ___ an demonstration of an understanding of the topic and text ___ clear and effective expression of ideas ___ precise language ___ academic/ domain-specific vocabulary (appropriate to the audience and purpose) ___ various sentence structures Grades 6–11 Argumentation Text-based Writing Rubric (Score points within each domain include most of the characteristics below.) Conventions of Standard Checklist English (2-point Rubric) 2 The response demonstrates an The response: adequate command of basic ___ demonstrates an adequate conventions. The response may command of conventions include the following: The response may include: Some minor errors in usage but ___ minor errors in usage but no no patterns of errors patterns of errors Adequate use of punctuation, The response may include capitalization, sentence formation, adequate use of: and spelling ___ punctuation ___ capitalization ___ sentence formation ___ spelling Rubric for Argumentation Text-based Writing in CHECKLIST FORM Grades 6–11 Argumentation Text-based Writing Rubric (Score points within each domain include most of the characteristics below.) Score Purpose, Focus, and Organization (4-point Rubric) Evidence and Elaboration (4-point Rubric) Conventions of Standard English (2-point Rubric) The response is: ___ about the topic ___ strong ___ complete The response focuses on: ___ its purpose ___ the audience ___ its specific task The response is: ___ organized (with a structure) ___ coherent (is it clear and easy to understand) ___ complete (does it address everything) The response includes: ___ a clear and strong claim ___ material that is ONLY related to the claim ___ alternate or opposing claims ___ transitional strategies that make relationships between points and ideas ___ a progression of ideas (clearly move from one idea or point to the next) ___ a good introduction ___ a good conclusion ___ appropriate style (the way you write will appeal to the audience- you must consider your audience) ___ objective tone (don’t go crazy with anger, excitement, etc. when making your claim) The response: ___ provides convincing support and evidence ___ provides credible (believable) support and evidence ___ includes effective use of sources, facts and details The response includes: ___ smoothly integrated evidence ___ thorough evidence ___ relevant evidence ___ precise reference of the sources ___ elaborative techniques to support the claim ___ an demonstration of an understanding of the topic and text ___ clear and effective expression of ideas ___ precise language ___ academic/ domain-specific vocabulary (appropriate to the audience and purpose) ___ various sentence structures The response: ___ demonstrates an adequate command of conventions The response may include: ___ minor errors in usage but no patterns of errors The response may include adequate use of: ___ punctuation ___ capitalization ___ sentence formation ___ spelling 4 Grades 6-11 Informative/Explanatory Text-based Writing Rubric (Score points within each domain include most of the characteristics below.) Score Purpose, Focus, and Checklist Organization (4-point Rubric) The response is fully sustained and The response is: consistently focused within the ___ about the topic purpose, audience, and task; and ___ strong it has a clear and effective ___ complete organizational structure The response focuses on: creating coherence and ___ its purpose completeness. The response ___ the audience includes most of the following: ___ its specific task Clearly stated and strongly The response is: maintained controlling idea with ___ organized (with a structure) little or no loosely related ___ coherent (is it clear and easy to understand) material ___ complete (does it address everything) Skillful use of a variety of The response includes: transitional strategies to clarify the ___ a clear and strong controlling idea relationships between and among ___ material that is ONLY related to the claim ideas ___ transitional strategies that make relationships between points Logical progression of ideas from and ideas beginning to end with a satisfying ___ a progression of ideas (clearly move from one idea or point to introduction and conclusion the next) Established and maintained ___ a good introduction appropriate style and objective tone ___ a good conclusion ___ appropriate style (the way you write will appeal to the audience- you must consider your audience) ___ objective tone (don’t go crazy with anger, excitement, etc. when making your claim) 4 Grades 6-11 Informative/Explanatory Text-based Writing Rubric (Score points within each domain include most of the characteristics below.) Evidence and Elaboration Checklist (4-point Rubric) The response provides thorough and The response: convincing ___ provides convincing support and support/evidence for the controlling idea evidence or main idea that includes the effective use ___ provides credible (believable) support and of sources, facts, and details. The response evidence includes most of the following: ___ includes effective use of sources, facts Smoothly integrated, thorough, and and details relevant evidence, including precise The response includes: references to sources ___ smoothly integrated evidence Effective use of a variety of elaborative ___ thorough evidence techniques, (including but not limited to ___ relevant evidence definitions, quotations, and examples) ___ precise reference of the sources Clear and effective expression of ideas, ___ elaborative techniques to support the using precise language claim (like definitions, quotations, examples, Academic and domain-specific vocabulary etc.) clearly appropriate for the audience and ___ an demonstration of an understanding of purpose the topic and text Various sentence structures creating ___ clear and effective expression of ideas language facility ___ precise language ___ academic/ domain-specific vocabulary (appropriate to the audience and purpose) ___ various sentence structures Grades 6-11 Informative/Explanatory Text-based Writing Rubric (Score points within each domain include most of the characteristics below.) Conventions of Standard Checklist English (2-point Rubric) The response demonstrates an 2 The response: adequate command of basic ___ demonstrates an adequate conventions. The response may command of conventions include the following: The response may include: Some minor errors in usage but no ___ minor errors in usage but no patterns of errors patterns of errors Adequate use of punctuation, The response may include adequate capitalization, sentence formation, use of: and spelling ___ punctuation ___ capitalization ___ sentence formation ___ spelling Rubric for Informative/Explanatory Text-based Writing in CHECKLIST FORM Grades 6-11 Informative/Explanatory Text-based Writing Rubric (Score points within each domain include most of the characteristics below.) Score Purpose, Focus, and Evidence and Elaboration Conventions of Standard English Organization (4-point Rubric) (4-point Rubric) (2-point Rubric) The response is: The response: The response: ___ about the topic ___ provides convincing support and ___ demonstrates an adequate command ___ strong evidence of conventions ___ complete ___ provides credible (believable) The response may include: The response focuses on: support and evidence ___ minor errors in usage but no ___ its purpose ___ includes effective use of sources, patterns of errors ___ the audience facts and details The response may include adequate ___ its specific task The response includes: use of: The response is: ___ smoothly integrated evidence ___ punctuation ___ organized (with a structure) ___ thorough evidence ___ capitalization ___ coherent (is it clear and easy to ___ relevant evidence ___ sentence formation understand) ___ precise reference of the sources ___ spelling ___ complete (does it address ___ elaborative techniques to support the everything) claim (like definitions, quotations, The response includes: examples, etc.) ___ a clear and strong controlling idea ___ an demonstration of an ___ material that is ONLY related to the understanding of the topic and text claim ___ clear and effective expression of ___ transitional strategies that make ideas relationships between points and ideas ___ precise language ___ a progression of ideas (clearly move ___ academic/ domain-specific from one idea or point to the next) vocabulary (appropriate to the audience ___ a good introduction and purpose) ___ a good conclusion ___ various sentence structures ___ appropriate style (the way you write will appeal to the audience- you must consider your audience) ___ objective tone (don’t go crazy with anger, excitement, etc. when making your claim) The following slides are for teachers to use as rubrics (for themselves) while creating/ finding text for the practice writing prompts and while creating practice writing prompts. Checklist for Creating/ Finding Sample Texts for Practice Prompts (for the teacher) Informational/ Explanatory Opinion/Argumentative: Texts should be: Texts should be: ___interesting and appealing ___interesting and appealing ___conceptually appropriate ___conceptually appropriate ___must be relevant ___must be relevant ___reflect real world settings ___reflect real world settings ___must reflect events that are interesting to students ___must reflect events that are interesting to students ___not limited to classroom or school-related situations ___not limited to classroom or school-related situations ___checked for accuracy ___checked for accuracy ___ clearly connected ___ clearly connected ___diverse in concepts and ideas ___diverse in concepts and ideas ___ be grade-appropriate (qualitatively and quantitatively) ___ be grade-appropriate (qualitatively and quantitatively) ___ (can be inclusive of) graphics (such as infographics, ___ (can be inclusive of) graphics (such as infographics, photographs, tables, and diagrams) to add to the student’s photographs, tables, and diagrams) to add to the student’s understanding of the topic understanding of the topic ___ (the texts could be) informational, literary fiction or ___ (the texts could be) informational, literary fiction or nonfiction nonfiction ___ between 1000-2000 total combine words (depending ___ between 1000-2000 total combine words (depending upon grade level- see chart) upon grade level- see chart) ___ (include) between 2 to 4 total texts ___ (include) between 2 to 4 total texts ___ come from the list of acceptable text types and topics ___ come from the list of acceptable text types and topics Texts should not: Texts should not: ___be controversial or offensive ___be controversial or offensive ___be confusing or emotionally charged ___be confusing or emotionally charged ___reference trademarks, commercial products or brand ___reference trademarks, commercial products or brand names without permission to use names without permission to use Checklist for Writing a Practice Prompt (for the teacher) Informational/ Explanatory Opinion/Argumentative: General idea of the prompt: ___ Students must develop a controlling idea and ___ Students must develop an opinion (gr. 4-5), support it by synthesizing and analyzing ideas an argument or a claim (gr. 6-11) and support it from the texts provided. by synthesizing and analyzing ideas and evidence from the texts provided. Question Stems: Write an explanatory essay about. . . . Your essay Write an argumentative essay in which you . . . . must be based on ideas and information that can Use the information from the texts in your essay. be found in the “. . . ” passage set. Remind students to: ___ manage your time carefully so that you can ___ manage your time carefully so that you can ___ read the passages; read the passages; ___ plan your response; ___ plan your response; ___ write your response; and ___ write your response; and ___ revise and edit your response. ___ revise and edit your response. Be sure to: ___ include a claim; ___ address counterclaims; ___ use evidence from multiple sources; and ___ avoid overly relying on one source. Type your response in the space provided. Type your response in the space provided. You have ____ minutes to read, plan, write, You have ____ minutes to read, plan, write, revise, and edit your response. revise, and edit your response. Possible Timeline For Teaching the Whole Process (Informative/ Explanatory) Time Frame* Skill Skill Conventions practice Reading one text during warm-up/ Writing one paragraph (create a controlling bell-ringer time idea and add/ cite support) Reading two texts Writing one paragraph (synthesize) Reading two texts Writing two paragraphs (synthesize) Reading three-four texts Writing two paragraphs (synthesize) Reading three-four texts Writing an introduction and two supporting paragraphs Reading three-four texts Writing an introduction, a conclusion and two supporting paragraphs *The teacher must determine the time frame based on the amount of time spent with the students weekly and the level of the students. Possible Timeline For Teaching the Whole Process (Argumentative) Time Frame* Skill Skill Conventions practice Reading one text during warm-up/ Writing one paragraph (create an argument bell-ringer time and add/ cite support) Reading two texts Writing one paragraph (synthesize) Reading two texts Writing two paragraphs (synthesize) Reading three-four texts Writing two paragraphs (synthesize) Reading three-four texts Writing an introduction and two supporting paragraphs Reading three-four texts Writing an introduction, a conclusion and two supporting paragraphs *The teacher must determine the time frame based on the amount of time spent with the students weekly and the level of the students.