The Write Tool Step 1 – Analyze the Prompt Almost everyone has to do chores sometimes. Often children have to do chores as part of learning to be responsible. However, most children do not enjoy doing these jobs. Write a paragraph about three chores you personally dislike. Be sure to describe these tasks and tell what bugs you about them. The Write Tool The Write Tool Step 2 – Stop and Think 30-90 seconds The Write Tool The Write Tool Step 3 - Brainstorm Chores Try for 10 items in your brainstorm web The Write Tool Step 4 – Pick and Choose Chores The Write Tool Step 5 – Make a Plan Topic=Chores BIG IDEAS TELL ME MORE __ __ __ __ __ __ Conclusion=Chores The Write Tool The Write Tool Rule of 5 ◼ Limit entry to 5 words or less ◼ Paraphrase – no complete sentences The Write Tool The E’s ◼ Explain, explain, explain. ◼ The E’s are the meat – the substance of expository writing. ▪ “Nothing is more important than the quantity and quality of the explanations you include in your writing. You can have a wonderful topic sentence and choose the best transitions, but if you don’t support the topic, the paper will fail.” Maureen Auman Author of Step Up to Writing The Write Tool Use the E’s to back up your reasons, details, or facts. Examples Evidence Experiences Everyday Life Effective Illustrations Explanations Events Expert Opinion Elaboration Excitement E’s make your writing interesting and believable!!! The Write Tool Color-Coding Green – Get Going – Topic Sentence Yellow – Slow Down – Present Big Ideas Red – Stop – Tell Me More – Give Me E’s Green – Go Back - Conclusion The Write Tool Add Transitions ◼ Making my bed is one of them. ◼ Another chore that bugs me is taking out the trash. ◼ The final chore that bugs me is loading the dishwasher. ◼ Transitions connect one big idea to the next. VARY AND BURY TRANSITIONS! The Write Tool The Write Tool Core 4 Simple Declarative Statement Ex. Dogs make the best pets. My mom is my favorite person. I hate doing chores. ________________ Question Number Statement Ex. Dogs make the best pets for several reasons. My mom is my favorite person because of three special traits. Three chores really bug me. _______________ Situation/Stance - 2 part Ex. Why do dogs make good pets? Why is my mom my favorite person? Why do parents make their kids do chores? The Write Tool CHORE Ex. Even though people have lots of different pets, I feel that dogs are the best. S Although I love my other family members, my mom is my favorite. Because most people carry cell phones, it is important that they learn basic cell-phone etiquette. Thesis/Intro Paragraph A Little More… A Lot More… During the 1960’s, a movement began in the South that came to be known as the civil rights movement. While it began below the Mason-Dixon line, the effects of this movement rippled throughout the United States. Although many individuals are famous for their efforts during these years, “hero” is a title only a few deserve. Thurgood Marshall, Rosa Parks, Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr., and Ernest Green are courageous Americans who qualify for that very high honor. My grandmother always had a lot of stories to share, but one I vividly remember involved an incident that occurred in 1955 when she was about seven years old. Visiting an aunt in Atlanta for summer vacation opened her eyes to what life in the South was like if your were African American. She saw that the color on one’s skin could make a difference in where you could or could not eat, get a drink of water, or swim. She always concluded this story by saying that things are different now because of the acts of bravery –some small, some large – done by everyday people like us. Although many individuals are famous for their efforts during these years, “hero” is a title only a few deserve. Thurgood Marshall, Rosa Parks, Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr., and The Write Tool Step 8 – Rough Draft ◼ Use the plan (T-chart) to begin creating rough draft. ◼ Color-code in order. ◼ Paragraph STRETCH into multiple paragraphs. The Write Tool The Write Tool Revise and Edit ◼ Flower Power – used for language development The Write Tool CUPS ◼ Capitalization ◼ Usage ◼ Punctuation ◼ Spelling The Write Tool Step 10 – Final Copy Word – Processed? Handwritten? The Write Tool