ESSAY INFORMATION:
Written by: Xuân Phi, 14/03/2023
Supported by: Ex-BC Examiner, 15/03/2023
Question: The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to
outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
(IELTS Academic – 11/03/2023)
ANSWER (8.0+):
It is argued that the benefits of English becoming the lingua franca are more significant than its
drawbacks. Although this tendency can pose a threat to some minority languages, I mostly agree
with this notion since it facilitates smoother communication and employment opportunities.
Admittedly, the widespread use of English leads to the loss of linguistic diversity and cultural
heritage. As more people learn and speak English, fewer people may be interested in preserving
their native languages and cultures. A case in point is the language Ainu, spoken by the
indigenous Ainu people of Japan, which is now critically endangered, with only a few hundred
speakers remaining because of the popularity of English. In other words, these people have the
focus on English learning and sacrifice the opportunity to continue education in Ainu language
and even Japanese. Consequently, the traditional values delivered in the Ainu language such as
singing in a chorus can disappear.
Nevertheless, the first reason why I believe the propensity to utilize English as an international
language is beneficial is because it can enhance communication among individuals. This is
because this language can be easily spoken and understood around the world, making it easier
for citizens from different countries and cultures to communicate with each other. This facilitates
international trade, diplomacy and travel across the globe. For instance, being proficient in
English enables those who travel to a foreign nation to converse with locals effectively and avoid
potential conflicts triggered by mutual misunderstandings.
Another justification for my agreement is that job opportunities can be widened. As English
fluency is often a requirement for jobs in international business and the tech industry, having a
good command of it enables people to acquire better employment opportunities with a high
earning potential. To illustrate, a job candidate who is proficient in English has an advantage over
others in the job market since businesses that have a global presence require their employees to
converse with others in English.
In conclusion, although I admit that the global expansion of the English language can trigger the
extinction of some native languages, its merits including the enhancement of interpersonal
communication and career opportunities are more substantial. It is advisable that people should
improve their English skills and knowledge to be better prepared for their future.
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WORD LIST:
ENGLISH
TIẾNG VIỆT
The lingua franca
Ngôn ngữ chung
Facilitate smoother communication
Tạo điều kiện giao tiếp tốt hơn
The loss of linguistic diversity and cultural
heritage
Sự mất đi sự đa dạng ngôn ngữ và di sản văn hóa
Preserve their native languages and cultures
Bảo tồn ngôn ngữ và văn hóa bản địa của họ
International trade
Thương mại quốc tế
Diplomacy
Ngoại giao
Be proficient in
Thành thạo
Mutual misunderstandings
Hiểu lầm lẫn nhau
Have a good command of
Thông thạo, hiểu biết
A high earning potential
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