THE ART OF FEATURE WRITING MA. APRIL M. MIER Professor, Print and Broadcast Media Department, Bicol U Correspondent, Philippine Daily Inquirer Feature Story ✔ a write up that is based on that mysterious ingredient in journalism called 'human interest' -it appeals to us because we can relate to it. ■The jewel or gem (precious stone) of the newspaper - something treasured for “time and eternity” ✔news values is substituted with human interest, mood, atmosphere, emotion, irony or humor. ✔ Ask “why” and “how” ✔ In-depth look on what’s going on behind the news ✔ straight news appeals to the physical, the feature story “appeals in the soul.” ✔ Go behind the news ✔Picture out a human face FEATURE spells: F – factual not fictitious E – Entertaining A – appealing to the emotions T – timely or not timely U – unusual R – reader-oriented E – explanation, extrapolation – extending or projecting known info Feature is not: ■Literary article ■Opinion article ■Storytelling ■Fiction Story QUALITIES OF A FEATURE WRITER ✔ inquisitive ✔ eager to learn ✔ sympathetic towards other people's feelings ✔ capable of seeing beneath the surface of ordinary events TYPES OF FEATURE STORIES 1. NEWS FEATURE - This is some kind of a news event but the story goes deeper than a news item as more background information and related details are presented and expounded on. 2. INFORMATIVE - This is an article that is highly informative but entertaining. Based on interview or taken from research 3. SERVICE FEATURE or A “HOW-TO” FEATURE- This deals with instructive articles that help readers cope with everyday living. 4. PERSONALITY SKETCHThis article features a person, popular or not, rich or poor, but has done something worth publishing or is currently engaged in an interesting or profitable endeavor. 5. PERSONAL EXPERIENCE - This emanates not only from earthshaking experiences like riding an airplane that was hijacked; being caught inside a movie house on fire, or being one of the survivors of a volcano eruption or earthquake but also even from ordinary experiences that happen everyday. Experienced feature writers say even the most common experience can be made into an interesting feature if it is handled well. Unusual experience, written in the first person Travel stories. This maybe a combination or personal experience and descriptive features. 6. HUMOROUS FEATUREstory with wit and humor 7. DEVELOPMENTAL FEATURE. This features some current or newly launched projects or programs of the government that need to be disseminated and that would draw public support. 8. HUMAN INTEREST STORY appeals to emotion, has a little news value or none at all but has a human interest appeal with interesting style ORGANIZATION OF IDEAS Following the laws of Progressive Reader Involvement: 1. 2. 3. 4. Tease me. Tell me what you are up to. Prove it. Help me remember it. It begins with an eye-catching “showcase” lead. INTRODUCTION Get the reader's attention quickly • Start with a well thought-out first paragraph touching on some aspect of the person's life that you are writing about or the event if it is not a person. • Have a beginning that draws in readers, a transition that might repeat it in the middle and an ending that refers to the beginning. Responsibilities of Lead • Must set the tone for what follows • Must get the article underway • Must bridge the rest of the article Distinctive Incident Short sentence Analogy Lead Quotation Lead Question Lead Picture Lead INTRODUCTION RISING ACTION Organize your story carefully. • The billboard or so-what graph • It tells what the story is all about INTRODUCTIO N RISING ACTION CLIMA X ■Try to draw a picture of your subject or event INTRODUCTIO N RISING ACTION CLIMA X FALLING ACTION ■Even better, it makes for a perfect way to wrap up the article. INTRODUCTIO N RISING ACTION CLIMA X FALLING ACTION CONCLUSION ■Must end with a “coda” reminding the reader how the article began. ■End stories in memorable ways. Often it’s a good to use a quote. This is called a clincher. The end can be... A comment Arguing a case/ drawing a conclusion A concluding quote A pointed question A summary of the article How to Get People Interested in Your Writing ■ Know your reader - Decide whom you’re targeting. Picture the reader in your mind, not just as a broad category but as a real, living, breathing person ■ Know your end goal - When the person has read your article, what do you want him to feel? ■ Explain why the reader should care - This is the classic “benefits over features” marketing rule. Why should the reader bother with your article? ■ Anticipate questions - Imagine you’re having a face-to-face conversation with your reader, where you’re sharing your information. What additional questions might come up? ■ Write tightly - include only what is necessary to tell the story. ■ Enliven your feature with relevant anecdotes or episodes. ■ Quotations or dialogues lend credibility and set mood or atmosphere in the story. ■ Make your ideas concrete by using imagery or figures of speech that the readers will understand. ■ Avoid highbrow language otherwise you will not be communicating effectively. ■ Keep your paragraph short and snappy. Substance of Feature: ⮚ Facts ⮚ Quotes ⮚ Description ⮚ Anecdotes ⮚ Analysis ⮚ Pay off/ Conclusion - reward for reader persevering until the end TOUCH THE SOUL OF THE READER ■ Our Dying Culture