Uploaded by Tamari Nhamu

2020.06.11 Descriptive writing

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Sunset over the city
The metropolis is an ugly creature. She is always babbling away and never bothers to clean up a er
herself. In some ways, she is like a child’s playroom, all giant, mismatching blocks that are thrown about
as though someone has just thrown a tantrum. Through di erent eyes, she looks like the corpse of a
giant robot, all the parts of it painted an unappealing, dull grey. The only colours one can see in the
day me are the unnatural glares from the neon signs and adver sing boards, trying to sow the thought
that your life will become even emp er without the latest products. the products that featured on those
boards just a few days past now li er the sidewalk like candy wrappers at the bo om of the trash can,
whispering to each other their pi ful stories and weeping over the abuse they have been subjected to.
The only redeeming quality the metropolis possesses is the way she bathes in the last rays of sunlight,
readying herself for a night of exhaus ng revelry. The mere minutes that she has to change her costume
for the second act is the only me she can exhale, take o the dull grey costume and reveal her inner
beauty. Minutes that are too short. However, she makes every one of them count. The second the sun’s
nger ps graze the horizon, sighing with content as he falls into the cold, soothing ocean. The
metropolis seems to angle all the glass and concrete, which make her so monotone, perfectly to re ect
even the niest rays of warmth and light, spreading symphonies of colour all over herself like a cloak
made of silk. Grey turns to hues of red royals have only dreamed of wearing, oranges which painters
cannot fathom or replicate no ma er their e orts and rose colours which make owers envious. For a
moment, all eyes turn to the sky, unable to resist the hypno c calm that seems to u er around the city
like billions of bu er ies. For a moment, the metropolis becomes a beauty queen, plucking the roses
from the sky for the colour of her lips, the ery red for the luscious locks of her hair and the violet of the
embrace between day and night for her eyes. She throws her arms wide and laughs with the sound of a
thousand choirs and church bells, as carefree as the last warm breeze which plays in her hair. She forgets
what she will return to as soon as night calls her back onto the stage for the noisy, dark and danger- lled
second act. She wishes she could speak the sun’s language. She would fall to her knees and beg him to
stay, just a li le longer.
I see the sunset re ected in every pair of eyes as I walk down the streets. They may be eyes lled with
sorrow, fear or longing, but the sunset ignites a hopeful spark in each one, no ma er how discouraged.
The piles of trash become diamonds, sparkling for just a moment like the world’s greatest treasures. The
colour shoots through the air and suddenly every breath is like champagne on my tongue. A brief smile
crosses my face. It is just a shadow, ee ng and ski sh, and moves on quickly, but I feel a ckling
between my shoulder blades, as though I could sprout wings and y above the claws of any skyscraper
and chase the sunset all around the world.
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Night falls too soon, and the uorescent lights begin their heavy labour, breaking their backs tring to
compete with the colours the sun has just displayed. Ar sts will be kept up all night, analysing which
colours their pale e lacks and how they could pluck the colour from their memories and plant it so that
all might be able to use it. The engineers pour over charts and formulas, desperate to create a device
that can capture the light as the eyes do, but to no avail. The sun has kept the recipe to its colours a wellguarded secret that the greatest minds on earth cannot even hope to replicate. Maybe it is his
partnership with the city. Maybe something so beau ful needs a place so human to open our eyes to its
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pain ngs. As the city reclines herself back into her role, she smiles as I do, because she knows that
tomorrow will bring another sunset and, however ee ng it may be, she will be lled with that joy again.
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