Objective
1) Variety of words
2) Cite evidence - Concept + data/scientific research
3) Structure
Topic about Tourism
1） Survey Money (Tourism-benefits and their opinion about tourism-Show the data directly)
2） Reading material about Definition of Remote area tourism - Look for synonyms for
tourism/remote area and bonus question for complex sentences they like.
3）Evidence(数据/事实/研究）Two news report about Tourism （2 group） - Cite Evidence and
list out points in the Mentimeter
4） Sample Essay - Gap filling/ Ordering and then identify Cohesive devices
5） Summarize the structure and Homework + (下节课内容/Handout）
Steps：
1） Pictures about tourism (arouse their interest in discussing the problems and benefits about
the benefits and harm brought by tourism development）
2） Tell Task and Objective (Review what are good essay?)
3） Handout Reading material
4） Use this sentence structure to describe the problems + ideas
Ideas pool
Language features: Language style - Pay attention to the red part.
Pick out useful expression from the sample letter
Think more: 1）express opinion 2) evidence 3) how to end
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Tourism in remote area
1) Video about how a small county turned into a rich tourist area (洛阳)/抖音.
Question: If you are the government leader and now you got a large sum of money, it’s your
decision on how to rejuvenate the the economic development of the poor county
2) Go through the Academic Discuss topic, the keyword of question:
Tourism
Remote area
What’s feeling about this task? - Requirement (why it is difficult)
Recap of what makes a Good Essay: 1) words requirement 100 above
3） Ideas: Problem spotter - What are the problem poor remote areas facing?
Problem solver - Tourism
Evidence: Research
Data/Specific example
Personal experience
3) Language: Sample Answer
1. Express opinion 2. Cite evidence 3. conclusion
4） Structure
5） Practice Writing
The Advantages and Disadvantages of Tourism - Soapboxie
25 Important Disadvantages Of Tourism - Tourism Teacher
It can provide employment opportunities for people who can work in
tourism-related industries.
The money generated
by tourism accounts for
5% of global GDP.° For
every job created in the
core tourism industry,
around 1.5 extra,
indirect jobs are
created in the wider
tourism-related
economies.
°
Tourism
provides
jobs for
1 out of
every
12
workers
in
advance
d and
emergin
g
economi
es.
Pollution
When
huge
numbers
of
people visit, they invariably
burden the transportation
system and contribute to
pollution—locally
and
globally. Flying one mile in a
plane produces about 53
pounds of carbon dioxide,
and
tourists
account
for
almost 60% of air travel.
Some estimate that cruise
ships
to
the
Caribbean
create over 70,000 tons of
annual waste.
Environmental Damage.
Many tourist activities have
negative ecological impacts.
Snorkeling,
hiking,
and
fishing all affect and deplete
the local scenery. There's a
trail in the Himalayas that's
nicknamed the "toilet paper
trail.” A tropical golf course
requires
water
the
that
amount
would
of
feed
60,000 locals... plus over
3,000 pounds of chemical
pesticides,
fertilizers,
and
herbicides per annum.
The commercialization of a culture can undermine its
meaning and detract from tradition.
However in many touristed
places, you'll find traditional
dance, music, and other
rites performed merely for
entertainment and profit.
For example when staged
for tourists, the Hawaiian
luau, Spanish flamenco
dances, and Balinese
ceremonies may lose their
original meaning, energy,
and purpose and become
merely spectacle.
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