SHORT FILM RESILIENCE BY MUHAMMAD ARSALAN REHAN (1948-2020) FACULTY OF COMMUNICATION & DESIGN BACHELOR OF MEDIA SCIENCE SUPERVISED BY SIR SAAD MAJEED LECTURER MEDIA SCIENCE DEPARTMENT OF MEDIA STUDIES AND DESIGN INDUS UNIVERSITY, KARACHI 31-DEC-2023 CERTIFICATION This is to certify that the work present in this report entitled as Resilience has been carried out by the below mentioned student under our supervision. The work is genuine, original and, in our opinion, suitable for submission to the Indus University for the award of degree of Bachelor of Media Science. MUHAMMAD ARSALAN REHAN - 1948-2020 SUPERVISOR CHAIRPERSON ________________________ Sir Saad Majeed ________________________ MA'AM SANA GUL Department of Media Science Indus University, Karachi Department of Media Science Indus University, Karachi DEDICATION This thesis is dedicated to Indus University, which taught us that the best kind of knowledge to have the practical implementation our knowledge. It is also dedicated to our Department of Media Science i.e. Indus University, Karachi which taught us that even the largest task can be accomplished if it is done with in a time. I dedicate our dissertation work to our family and friends. A special feeling of gratitude to our loving parents, for the support and motivation for success. I also dedicate this dissertation to our batch mate’s and faculty staff who have supported us throughout the process. We are highly indebted to, Sir Saad Majeed for helping us to improve our media skills, for the many hours of proofreading, and for helping us to master the leader dots. I dedicate this work and give special thanks for our mentors being there for us throughout the entire Bachelors of Media Science program. ACKNOWLEDGEMENT It is our privilege to express our sincerest regards to our project supervisor Sir Saad Majeed for their valuable guidance, encouragement, whole hearted cooperation and constructive criticism throughout the duration of our project. We deeply express our sincere thanks to our Chairperson Ma’am Sana Gul for encouraging and allowing us to present the project on the topic at our department premises for the partial fulfillment of the requirements leading to the award of Bachelor degree. I take this opportunity to thank all our lecturers who have directly or indirectly helped in my project. I would like to thanks the faculty teachers, mentors and administrators in our university that assisted us with this project. Their excitement and willingness to provide feedback made the completion of this project an enjoyable experience. ABSTRACT Ahmed, a 28-year-old, experiences an unexpected turn of events on his birthday when he rushes home at his wife Rafiya's request. The celebration takes an unsettling turn as his childhood friends, Moiz, Shaheer, and Fareed, resurface with hurtful remarks and mockery about his life. The night unfolds with Ahmed feeling increasingly humiliated, culminating in a moment of intense frustration when even his wife playfully uses a childhood pet name, triggering a cascade of haunting flashbacks. As the shadows of the past resurface, Ahmed grapples with the emotional turmoil of confronting old wounds and the challenge of reconciling his present happiness with lingering scars from the past. TABLE OF CONTENTS Dedication Acknowledgement Abstract CHAPTER 1 1.1 Overview 1.2 Objectives 1.3 Background 1.4 Result 1.5 Introduction CHAPTER 2 2.1 Pakistan Youth Face Major Problems 2.2 Director Vision CHAPTER 3 3.1 Logline/Genre 3.2 Tagline 3.3 Synopsis 3.4 One Liner 3.5 Plot CHAPTER 4 4.1 Script 4.2 Three Act Structure 4.3 Screen Play 4.4 Film Treatment 4.5 Shot list CHAPTER 5 5.1 Crew 5.2 Character CHAPTER 6 6.1 Shooting Schedule CHAPTER 7 7.1 Location 7.2 Character Dress Code 7.3 Props 7.4 Light Ambiance CHAPTER 8 8.1 Story board CHAPTER 9 9.1 Equipment 9.2 Budget CHAPTER 10 Document Formats POSTER CHAPTER# 1 INTRODUCTION TO LIFE 1.1 OVERVIEW The story explores Ahmed's life during a surprise birthday celebration that takes a dark turn. Childhood friends resurface, reopening old wounds with a pet name and disrespectful comments. As the night unfolds, Ahmed's internal struggle intensifies, culminating in a poignant moment when his wife unknowingly adds to his pain. The narrative unfolds as Ahmed confronts past traumas, showcasing resilience and the journey to self-discovery. This is a poignant tale of overcoming adversity and finding empowerment. 1.2 OBJECTIVES The objectives of the story include: 1. Exploration of Past Traumas: The story aims to delve into Ahmed's past traumas, specifically the childhood body-shaming experiences, to shed light on the lasting impact of such incidents on an individual's psyche. 2. Analysis of Relationship Dynamics: The narrative explores the dynamics of Ahmed's relationship with his wife Rafiya, especially in the face of external challenges. It seeks to portray how external factors can influence and test the strength of a relationship. 3. Examination of Societal Expectations: Through the interactions with childhood friends, the story aims to examine societal expectations and how they can affect an individual's self-esteem, identity, and relationships. 4. Illustration of Personal Growth: The narrative unfolds as a journey of personal growth for Ahmed, as he confronts his past and present challenges. The story aims to illustrate how resilience and self-reflection contribute to overcoming adversity. 5. Reflection on Mental Health and Wellbeing: By addressing the impact of disrespectful comments and past traumas on Ahmed's mental health, the story aims to encourage reflection on the broader issue of mental health and wellbeing in society, particularly among the specified age group. 6. Empowerment and Resilience: Ultimately, the story seeks to convey a message of empowerment and resilience. Through Ahmed's journey, it aims to inspire readers to confront their own shadows, embrace growth, and find strength in the face of adversity. These objectives collectively contribute to a narrative that not only entertains but also prompts reflection on societal issues, personal relationships, and the importance of mental health and selfdiscovery. 1.3 BACKGROUND Ahmed, a 28-year-old leading a comfortable life with his wife Rafiya, faces unexpected turmoil on his birthday when childhood friends resurface, reopening old wounds of bullying and body-shaming. The celebration turns sour as they mock his success and relationship. The story delves into Ahmed's struggle to reconcile past scars with his present happiness, exposing the complexities of personal growth and the enduring impact of childhood trauma. 1.4 RESULTS Ahmed's birthday celebration brings forth emotional turmoil, straining his relationships with childhood friends and impacting his marriage. The mockery and disrespect force Ahmed into selfreflection, prompting a reevaluation of friendships and potential character growth. The story's results revolve around Ahmed's choices in navigating the fallout and finding resolution in his past and present. 1.5 INTRODUCTION In the comfortable life of 28-year-old Ahmed, a seemingly ordinary birthday celebration unravels when childhood friends resurface, bringing with them the shadows of past bullying and bodyshaming. As the night progresses, Ahmed is confronted with unexpected challenges that force him to navigate strained relationships, revisit painful memories, and grapple with the intersection of his present happiness and haunting echoes from his past. CHAPTER# 2 REVIEW OF LITERATURE AND THEORETICAL BACKGROUND Review of Literature: Psychological Impact of Bullying: Examine studies or articles that delve into the lasting effects of childhood bullying on individuals' mental and emotional well-being. Friendship Dynamics: Explore literary works or academic papers discussing the intricacies of friendships and how they evolve over time. Narratives of Self-Discovery: Look for stories or theoretical frameworks that focus on characters undergoing self-discovery and personal growth, particularly when confronted with past traumas. Theoretical Background: Consider integrating theoretical frameworks that align with the themes of this story: Trauma Theory: Explore theories related to trauma and its long-term impact on an individual's psyche. This can provide insights into how characters cope with and overcome past traumas. Narratology: Investigate narrative theories that discuss the structure of stories, character development, and the role of conflict in creating engaging and impactful narratives. Psychosocial Development: Consider theories related to psychosocial development, particularly those that examine how individuals navigate challenges at different life stages. Cultural and Societal Influences: We have to look into relevant theories that explore how these factors shape individuals and their relationships. 2.1 PAKISTAN'S YOUTH FACE MAJOR PROBLEMS Here are some major problems faced by Pakistan's youth that you could consider incorporating into this story: Unemployment: Explore how the characters, especially Ahmed, grapple with the challenges of finding suitable employment in a competitive job market. Highlight the frustrations, aspirations, and impact of unemployment on their lives. Educational Challenges: Address the difficulties in accessing quality education and the pressure to excel academically. This could add depth to the characters and shed light on the broader societal issues affecting Pakistan's youth. Societal Expectations: Explore societal expectations and norms, such as the pressure to conform to traditional roles and ideals. This could be reflected in Ahmed's relationships and interactions with family and friends. Mental Health Stigma: Integrate the stigma surrounding mental health issues, a prevalent concern in many societies, and depict how characters like Ahmed navigate or succumb to these pressures. Economic Struggles: Illustrate the economic challenges faced by young individuals in Pakistan, including issues related to inflation, cost of living, and financial stability. Cultural Dynamics: Explore how cultural norms and traditions impact the choices and opportunities available to young people. This could be reflected in Ahmed's experiences and interactions with his friends and family. Main analysis of our story that happen. Exposition: Ahmed, a 28-year-old man, is leading a comfortable life with his wife Rafiya. They share a seemingly happy marriage, and Ahmed is focused on his work. Inciting Incident: One day, while working late in his office, Ahmed receives a call from his wife asking him to come home early for a surprise dinner. When he arrives, he discovers the house dark, calls go unanswered, and upon entering, he is greeted with a surprise birthday celebration. This sets the stage for unexpected events. Rising Action: During the celebration, Ahmed encounters childhood friends who used to mock him with the pet name "kakri." These friends resurface and continue to use the hurtful name. Later in the event, they publicly make fun of Rafiya, implying she married Ahmed for his wealth. Ahmed's brother gives him a desired gift, and his friends mock his brother's appearance. The tension rises as Ahmed serves his friends like a waiter at his own celebration, adding to his frustration. Climax: The climax occurs when Ahmed, angered and humiliated, reaches a breaking point. His wife inadvertently calls him by the hurtful childhood pet name, triggering a surge of frustration and anger. Ahmed is caught in a torturous loop of flashbacks, reliving the disrespect he faced from his friends earlier in the evening. Falling Action: Amidst the falling action, Ahmed and his wife retire to their room. Ahmed is visibly disturbed, and his wife attempts to lighten the mood by playfully using the pet name. However, this backfires as Ahmed's frustration intensifies, deepening the emotional conflict between them. Resolution: The story concludes with Ahmed and his wife facing the aftermath of the tumultuous evening. The resolution is open-ended, leaving room for the characters to reflect on their relationship, the impact of the events, and the potential for growth or change. The emotional toll on Ahmed and the strain on his marriage become central themes in need of resolution. 2.2 DIRECTOR’S VISION I envision a gripping psychological drama that explores the complexities of identity, self-worth, and the lasting impact of childhood trauma. Driven by a passion for storytelling that delves into the human psyche, this story aims to create a visually compelling film that takes the audience on a rollercoaster of emotions, from the joy of surprise to the depths of personal struggle. Passion: Fueled by a deep passion for narrative exploration, I seek to unravel the intricacies of human relationships and the internal battles individuals face. The film becomes a canvas for my commitment to portraying the raw and authentic emotions tied to personal growth, unveiling the layers of a character's psyche with empathy and insight. This passion translates into a desire to craft a thought-provoking cinematic experience that resonates long after the credits roll. Feel of the Film: The film will carry an intense and atmospheric feel, using lighting and cinematography to mirror Ahmed's emotional journey. I aim to capture the claustrophobic nature of Ahmed's mental state as he grapples with past humiliations, creating an immersive experience for the audience that mirrors the character's internal turmoil. Inspiration: Drawing inspiration from psychological thrillers and character-driven narratives, I seek to craft a thought-provoking story that resonates with the audience on a visceral level. Themes of resilience, self-discovery, and the consequences of toxic relationships will be explored, inspired by real-world dynamics and human behavior. Genre: The film straddles the line between psychological thriller and drama, employing suspenseful elements to heighten the emotional impact. It transcends traditional genre boundaries, focusing on character development and psychological tension to keep viewers engaged. Casting: The casting emphasizes actors who can bring depth and nuance to their roles, particularly the protagonist Ahmed and his wife Rafiya. The childhood friends, Moiz, Shaheer, and Fareed, are portrayed by actors capable of embodying the toxic dynamics that fuel the story. The ensemble cast aims to deliver performances that resonate with authenticity and emotional depth. Soundtrack: The film's soundtrack complements the emotional highs and lows of the narrative, utilizing a mix of haunting melodies and intense, pulse-pounding rhythms. The music will serve as a powerful tool to underscore the psychological tension, enhancing the overall viewing experience and leaving a lasting impression on the audience. CHAPTER# 3 STORY BUILD UP 3.1 LOGLINE/GENRE Logline Ahmed's past echoes in the present as he navigates a surprise birthday celebration turned psychological battleground. Unraveling childhood traumas and toxic friendships, the film explores his journey into self-discovery, redemption, and the haunting whispers of his own shadows. Genre The genre for this story can be classified as a "Psychological Drama" with elements of suspense and character-driven narrative. 3.2 TAGLINE Unraveling the Threads of Respect and Redemption in Ahmed's Unforgettable Birthday Night. 3.3 SYNOPSIS A guy Ahmed from a very respectful who is living an ideal life with all the comfort one desires with his wife Rafiya, Ahmed's parents have died leaving him a big chunk of their inheritance, as Ahmed's birth day arrives Rafiya throws a surprise party for his husband, she goes out of her way and calls Ahmed’s childhood friends who were once close to him, throughout the event they make him do things that make Ahmed feel disrespected as right if the bat when they meet his friend makes him remind of his childhood pet name "kakri" in front of the whole social setting they make comments about his status his wife and his only big brother, the friends put him through situations that cause him mental distress, to the point Ahmed gets triggered where he doesn't know what to do. The real disaster starts when his wife jumps into the bandwagon and it becomes a battle between him and his mind 3.4 ONE LINER Ahmed's surprise birthday celebration unveils buried traumas, forging a gripping psychological drama of self-discovery and redemption amidst the echoes of his haunting past. 3.5 PLOT Ahmed, a 28-year-old man leading a comfortable life with his wife Rafiya, finds his world unraveling during a surprise birthday celebration. The evening takes a dark turn when his childhood friends, Moiz, Shaheer, and Fareed, resurface, rekindling memories of past humiliations. As they mock his success and marriage, Ahmed grapples with a resurgence of childhood trauma. The night spirals further into chaos when, during a family dinner, Ahmed's friends belittle him, reducing him to a waiter at his own event. Frustration intensifies, culminating in a falling incident where his wife unwittingly uses a childhood pet name, triggering a psychological breakdown. This film is a riveting exploration of Ahmed's journey into the depths of his psyche, unraveling the echoes of his past and the quest for redemption. CHAPTER# 4 PRE PRODUCTION 4.1 SCRIPT INT. AHMED’S OFFICE. NIGHT Ahmed a 26 year old tall guy with a slight beard and built wearing a grey button and a black pant sitting in his office there is no one in the office as he is collecting his files and putting them on the side his phone rings and the name "wifey" pops up its his wife rafiya (a 24 old woman with dark hair fair tone sharp features) ahmed picks the call AHMED hello? RAFIYA ahmed yar aap kub ayengay late horahe hain dinner ke liye kubse wait kar rahi hun AHMED yaar bss wind up hi kar raha tha nikal raha hun bss RAFIYA theek hai Ahmed takes off the phone from his ear and the call ends. INT. AHMED’S HOUSE.NIGHT Ahmed pulls up the car outside of his house, he looks at the house and the lights are out he gets suspicious, he gets out of the car and walk ups the house he rings the bell door once no one answers he does it againg no one answers its the thrid time no one answers again he calls his wife she doesnt picks up his call Ahmed tries to find the keys in his laptop bag he takes out the key and opens the gate as he is entering there is utter silence and darkness ahmed gets scared as he is entering "surprise" everybody shouts as the lights open Ahmed sees everyone he gets happy his wife greets him "HAPPY BIRTHDAY" everyone congratulates Ahmed he smiles and hugs everyone there his wife asks him CONTINUED: RAFIYA kesa laga mera surprise ? (happily) ahmed smiles and says AHMED boht acha (smiling) ahmed sees his friends from afar moiz ( a 27 year old tall brown bearded guy) and shaheer (a 26 year old chubby friend) he walks up to them saying AHMED areyyy in surprise he gets happy to see his friends and he first hugs moiz and then when he hugs Shaheer Moiz says MOIZ arey Kakri tu tw bilkul fit hogia hai yar mast body wody bana li hai tunay while touching his bicep, Ahmed gets slighlty uncomfortable as he feels that someone suddenly taps his shoulder from behinf Ahmed turns around and its there other friend Fareed Ahmed gets happy to see him he hugs him FAREED mein late tw nahi hua na AHMED arey nahi nahi they all go upstairs on the roof where the actual birthday setup is everybody is busy mingling with each other INT. AHMED’S ROOF TOP .NIGHT Ahmed’s wife makes an annoucement to gather everyone up to cut ahmed’s cake Ahmed turns around looking at her smiling his friends also look around MOIZ yaar wesay eik baat tw hai banday ke pas paise hoon tw aisi biwi mil hi jati hai chahe khud kesa bhi hou SHAHEER haan yaar ahmed tera theek hai teray amma abba jatay jatay sab teray liye chor gaye nahi tw tu ayesha ke ghum mein abhi tak kunwara hi hota Moiz and Shaheer high five eachother laughing ahmed has a straight face he stares them both as his wife interrupts him and says RAFIYA ajayen bhae sub intezar kar rahe hain cake kaatna hai Ahmed smiles and walks up to the table set up where the cake is, Ahmeds big brother amjad (a 38 years old man with salt and pepper beard) enters he joins Ahmed hugs him and greets him AMJAD saalgirah mubarak hou AHMED shukriya bhai amjad and ahmed’s wife rafiya stand next to ahmed ahmed picks up the butter knife to cut the cake and he zones out for a few seconds staring at the cake he get lost the voices around him echo in his head suddenly ahmed’s brother says AMJAD arey bhae kaato na cake ahmed comes back to his senses and cuts the cake he picks up the slice and gives a bite to his wife and his brother he then takes a bite himself FAREED humein bhi khilade bhae khud hi khaega kia Ahmed smiles AHMED arey haan haan he walks up to his friends and gives a bite to each moiz shaheer and fareed INT. AHMED’S ROOFTOP. NIGHT Ahmed is mingling with the group of his friends his brother comes up and calls his name Ahmed turns around amjad takes out a small box and opens it, its a watch ahmed gets really happy seeing that watch that he hugs brother AMJAD yehi wali thi na jo tumhe chahiye thi ahmed looking at the watch his eyes are wide open AHMED jee bhai (smilling) AMJAD aur bhae milwaogay nahi apnay doston se AHMED jee bhai ye moiz, shaheer aur fareed hain meray school mein parhtay thy sath AMJAD acha acha MOIZ apko dekh ke tw laga hi nahin aap isske bhai hain aisa laga jaise cake katnay ke baat khutbay ka bhi intezaam hai. amjad smiles awkwardly and looks at ahmed, he is embarrased rafiya joins and says RAFIYA acha bhae khana lag gaya hai sab ajayen aur koe takaluf nahi karna apna ghar samjh ke khana hai ahmed amjad and raafiya leave his friends everybody is busy talking to eachother ahmed takes out food and is eating from his plate standing while talking to two other man CONTINUED: moiz sees ahmed and calls out his name infront of everyone MOIZ ’ahmed’ ahmed looks at him and walks up to him with his plate MOIZ yaar akelay akelay hi kha rahe hou zara mujhe bhi dikhao na moiz proceeds to take the plate full of food from his hands as he is chewing the morsel in his mouth Ahmed stopes and stares as he does that SHAHEER abey bhae iska tw hogia mujhe bhi lakar de na kuch ahmed gets pissed off as he goes to get food for shaheer he stops and sees the plates in his hands and feels like a waiter as he brings 3 plates of food to shaheer he sits there with his hands crossed in anger and silence watches his friends eat ahmed and his wife are seeing everybody off ahmed doesnt seem to be happy INT. AHMED’S BEDROOM .NIGHT ahmed and his wife are in there room ahmed is taking of his watch and his wife is taking her earrings off looking in the mirror of the dressing table she smiles looking in the mirror and she calls RAFIYA kakri? giggles ahmed looks at her seriously RAFIYA moiz bata raha tha eik school mein apne principal se itna dar gaye thy ke apne apni pant geeli kardi itnay darpok thy ap bachpan mei? giggles again ahmed gets up from the bed angrily and he slams the door as he gets out of the room CONTINUED: RAFIYA arey bhae ? issme bura man ne wali kounsi baat thi INT. AHMED’S HOUSE .NIGHT ahmed is walking in the lounge in anger he goes into the other room turn on the lamp placed on the desk he sees a complete mess on the table he slides everything on the ground from the table and sit in the chair covering his face with his palm he sighs in frustration he gets flashbacks of the constant disrespect from the event earlier he seems to have no control on his mind he pulls his hair from the head while grunting with eyes scrunched up he then opens his eyes and and looks at the stuff he just threw on the ground ahmed sees a note book he picks it up and takes a moment he picks up a pen from the ground ahmed opens the notebooks and aggressively scribbles on it such that the pages tear he puts his head down on the table and thinks with his eyes open he accidently falls asleep INT. AHMED’S HOUSE .MORNING ahmed wake up at the same place he looks at the pen in his hand he fidgets with it for a moment, he sets his head up from the table and starts writing on the notebook he writes a name on the top of the paper and draws a two columns he starts writing good and bad traits about that person after writing he gets a moment of realization as if he had a moment of awakening and he sighs in relief 4.2 THREE ACT STRUCTURE ACT 1: SET UP: Ahmed’s birthday party. Inciting Incident: Ahmed gets the surprise arranged by his wife Rafiya where he meets his old friends in school and right of the bat his friend calls him “Kakri” in front of the guests. PLOT POINT: Ahmed’s friends Moiz and Shaheer belittle Ahmed at his own event by portraying Ahmed’s wife a gold digger and that she is only with Ahmed because of his money. ACT 2: RISING ACTION: Ahmed gets treated like a servant at his birthday party by his friends as they put him in such a situation that he has to serve them food despite the buffet setup. PLOT POINT (DISASTER): Ahmed is upset about the behavior of his friends in the party now he is in his room with his wife as they are unwinding his wife jokingly mocks him with the pet name his friends called him by which caused him embarrassment. ACT 3: CRISIS: Ahmed has a complete breakdown he doesn’t know how to cope up with all the disrespect and embarrassment that has happened he is frustrated and angry and is throwing things on the floor. RESOLUTION: It’s the next the he accidently sleeps where he was sitting he does an activity where he writes the name of the person and there traits after the activity he gets a moment of realization as if he had a moment of awakening and he sighs in relief his mind which was on war is now at peace 4.3 SCREEN PLAY INT. AHMED’S CAR DRIVING. NIGHT Ahmed a 26 year old tall guy with a slight beard and built wearing a grey shirt button and a black pant sitting in his car as he is going to home from office suddenly his phone rings and the name "wifey" pops up its his wife Rafiya (a 24 old woman with dark hair fair tone sharp features) Ahmed picks the call INT. AHMED’S HOUSE.NIGHT Ahmed pulls up the car outside of his house, he looks at the house and the lights are out he gets suspicious, he gets out of the car and walk ups the house he rings the bell door once no one answers he does it again no one answers it’s the third time no one answers again he calls his wife she doesn’t picks up his call Ahmed tries to find the keys in his laptop bag he takes out the key and opens the gate As he is entering there is utter silence and darkness Ahmed gets scared as he is entering "surprise" Everybody shouts as the lights open Ahmed sees everyone he gets happy His wife greets him "HAPPY BIRTHDAY" Everyone congratulates Ahmed he smiles and hugs everyone there and Ahmed smiles. Ahmed sees his friends from afar Moiz (a 27 year old tall brown bearded guy) and Shaheer (a 26 year old chubby friend) he walks up to them. In surprise he gets happy to see his friends and he first hugs Moiz and then when he hugs Shaheer Moiz while touching his bicep, Ahmed gets slightly uncomfortable. As he feels that someone suddenly taps his shoulder from behind Ahmed turns around and it’s there other friend Fareed. Ahmed gets happy to see him he hugs him. They all go upstairs on the roof where the actual birthday setup is everybody is busy mingling with each other. INT. AHMED’S ROOF TOP .NIGHT Ahmed’s wife makes an announcement to gather everyone up to cut Ahmed’s cake Ahmed turns around looking at her smiling his friends also look around Moiz and Shaheer high five each other laughing Ahmed has a straight face he stares them both as his wife interrupts him and Ahmed smiles and walks up to the table set up where the cake is, Ahmed’s big brother Amjad (a 38 years old man with salt And pepper beard) enters he joins Ahmed hugs him and greets him Amjad and Ahmed’s wife Rafiya stand next to Ahmed Ahmed picks up the butter knife to cut the cake and he zones out for a few seconds staring at the cake he get lost the voices around him echo in his head suddenly Ahmed’s brother Ahmed comes back to his senses and cuts the cake he picks up the slice and gives a bite to his wife and his brother he then takes a bite himself Ahmed smiles He walks up to his friends and gives a bite to each Moiz Shaheer and Fareed INT. AHMED’S ROOFTOP. NIGHT Ahmed is mingling with the group of his friends his brother comes up and calls his name Ahmed turns around Amjad takes out a small box and opens it, it’s a watch Ahmed gets really happy seeing that watch that he hugs Brother Ahmed looking at the watch his eyes are wide open dialogues Amjad smiles awkwardly and looks at Ahmed, he is embarrassed Rafiya joins Ahmed Amjad and Rafiya leave his friends everybody is busy talking to each other Ahmed takes out food and is eating from his plate standing while talking to two other man Moiz sees Ahmed and calls out his name in front of everyone Ahmed looks at him and walks up to him with his plate Moiz proceeds to take the plate full of food from his hands as he is chewing the morsel in his mouth Ahmed stopes and stares as he does that Ahmed gets pissed off as he goes to get food for Shaheer he stops and sees the plates in his hands and feels like a waiter as he brings 3 plates of food to Shaheer He sits there with his hands crossed in anger and silence watches his friends eat Ahmed and his wife are seeing everybody off Ahmed doesn’t seem to be happy INT. AHMED’S BEDROOM .NIGHT Ahmed and his wife are in there room Ahmed is taking of his watch and his wife is taking her earrings off looking in the mirror of the dressing table she smiles looking in the mirror Ahmed looks at her seriously Ahmed gets up from the bed angrily and he slams the door as he gets out of the room INT. AHMED’S HOUSE .NIGHT Ahmed is walking in the lounge in anger He goes into the other room turn on the lamp placed on the desk he sees a complete mess on the table he slides everything on the ground from the table and sit in the chair covering his face with his palm he sighs in frustration he gets flashbacks of the constant disrespect from the event earlier he seems to have no control on his mind he pulls his hair from the head while grunting with eyes scrunched up He then opens his eyes and and looks at the stuff he just threw on the ground Ahmed sees a note book he picks it up and takes a moment He picks up a pen from the ground Ahmed opens the notebooks and aggressively scribbles on it such that the pages tear He puts his head down on the table and thinks with his eyes open he accidently falls asleep INT. AHMED’S HOUSE .MORNING Ahmed wake up at the same place he looks at the pen in his hand he fidgets with it for a moment, he sets his head up from the table and starts writing on the notebook He writes a name on the top of the paper and draws a two columns he starts writing good and bad traits about that person after writing he gets a moment of realization as if he had a moment of awakening and he sighs in relief. 4.4 FILM TREATMENT ACT 1: SETUP INT. AHMED’S OFFICE – NIGHT Ahmed, a 26-year-old professional, is working late. He receives a call from his wife, Rafiya, urging him to come home for dinner. Ahmed leaves, setting the stage for a birthday surprise. INT. AHMED’S HOUSE – NIGHT Ahmed arrives home to a dark house, his suspicion growing. To his surprise, the lights suddenly come on, revealing a birthday celebration organized by Rafiya and friends. Despite initial happiness, Ahmed senses tension among his friends. INT. AHMED’S ROOF TOP – NIGHT Ahmed's friends make sarcastic remarks about his physique during the cake cutting ceremony, which leaves Ahmed uncomfortable. The act ends with an unsettling feeling at the celebration. ACT 2: RISING TENSIONS INT. AHMED’S HOUSE – NIGHT Ahmed serves dinner to his friends, who mockingly ask him to feed them. Feeling like a waiter, Ahmed serves in silence, and tensions rise. INT. AHMED’S BEDROOM – NIGHT Back in the bedroom, Rafiya teases Ahmed about a school incident involving his friend Moiz. Ahmed, irritated, storms out, leaving Rafiya confused. INT. AHMED’S HOUSE – NIGHT In a fit of frustration, Ahmed enters another room and creates a mess. He starts scribbling in a notebook and accidentally falls asleep, foreshadowing the unraveling mental state. ACT 3: UNRAVELING INT. AHMED’S HOUSE – MORNING Ahmed wakes up surrounded by the mess he created. He starts writing traits about someone in a notebook. His emotions escalate, leading to a moment of realization. The act ends with Ahmed sighing in relief. ACT 4: RESOLUTION INT. AHMED’S HOUSE – DAY Ahmed reflects on the events and decides to confront his feelings. He engages in a heartfelt conversation with Rafiya, expressing his concerns about friends and their disrespectful behavior. INT. AHMED’S HOUSE – NIGHT Ahmed attempts to reconcile with his friends, leading to an emotional confrontation. His friends, realizing the impact of their actions, apologize. The act concludes with a group reconciliation, emphasizing the importance of understanding and empathy. ACT 5: CLOSURE INT. AHMED’S HOUSE - DAYS LATER Ahmed, with newfound strength, prioritizes his mental well-being and reevaluates relationships. The story concludes with Ahmed and Rafiya, together, reflecting on the importance of self-worth and healthy connections. The film ends on a hopeful note, emphasizing personal growth and resilience. 4.5 SHOT LIST SCENE Scene 1 SHOT Shot 1 TYPE OF SHOT Medium shot SHOT DESCRIPTION ACTION Ahmed, a 26-year-old tall man with a slight beard, wearing a grey button- Ahmed's phone rings, displaying down shirt and black pants, focused on "wifey" on the screen; he answers the road. while continuing to drive. Scene 1 Shot 2 Close-up (CU) Ahmed's face during the phone call. Ahmed converses with Rafiya, his 24year-old wife with dark hair and a fair complexion, discussing his late arrival for dinner. Scene 2 Shot 3 Wide shot (WS Ahmed's car pulling up to the house. Ahmed notices the lights are off, creating a sense of suspicion. Scene 2 Shot 4 Over-theshoulder shot (OTS) Ahmed ringing the doorbell. Ahmed tries to call Rafiya, but she doesn't answer. Shot 5 Low angle shot Scene 2 Looking up at Ahmed as he enters the gate. Ahmed opens the gate and enters . Scene 3 Shot 6 High angle shot (HA) Ahmed walking into a dark room. "Surprise!" is shouted, lights come on, revealing the birthday celebration. Rafiya wishes Ahmed "Happy Scene 3 Shot 7 Medium shot (MS) Shot 8 Over-theshoulder shot (OTS) Scene 4 Shot 9 Wide shot (WS) Scene 4 Shot 10 Scene 4 Shot 11 Scene 3 Ahmed's wife, Rafiya, greeting him Ahmed's friends making comments Birthday." Moiz makes a comment about Ahmed's appearance, causing Ahmed discomfort. Ahmed cutting the cake with Rafiya and Amjad Ahmed cuts the cake, distributing bites to Rafiya and Amjad. Two-shot (TS) Moiz and Shaheer making disrespectful comments. Moiz and Shaheer mock Ahmed's family and financial status Close-up (CU) Ahmed's face showing his discomfort. Ahmed tries to maintain composure. Ahmed and Rafiya in the room Ahmed reacts strongly to Rafiya's use of the childhood nickname. Rafiya's face, confused. Rafiya questions Ahmed's reaction. Ahmed storming out of the room, slamming the door. Ahmed exits the room in frustration. Scene 5 Shot 12 Medium shot (MS) Scene 5 Shot 13 Close-up (CU) Scene 5 Shot 14 Medium shot (MS) Scene 6 Shot 15 Wide shot (WS) Ahmed aggressively clearing a table Ahmed experiences a mental breakdown, throwing things. Scene 6 Shot 16 Overhead shot (OH) Ahmed scribbling in a notebook. Ahmed writes down his thoughts and feelings. Scene 7 Shot 17 Close-up (CU) Ahmed waking up at the table Scene 7 Shot 18 Medium shot (MS) Ahmed continuing to write in the notebook. Ahmed wakes up, holding a pen. Ahmed reflects on the events, creating a list of traits. CHAPTER# 5 CHARACTERS AND CREW 5.1 CREW • Director Muhammad Arsalan Rehan • Producer Muhammad Arsalan Rehan • Line Producer Muhammad Areeb • Script Supervisor Sauliha • DOP Mubeen Art • Art Direction Samra Iqbal • Sound Engineer Naeem Shah • Gaffer Rafay • Cast • Location Manager Muhammad Areeb • Spot Boy Sabih • Accountant Muhammad Arsalan Rehan 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. Ali Shan Sauliha Maaz Majid Umer Muddasir 5.2 CHARACTERS Ahmed (Main character) Age: 28 ECOM employee Physique: tall, good looking with a light built Background: belongs from an upper middle class, has inherited a house and some bank balance enough to have a comfortable life. Rafiya (Ahmed's wife) Age: 23-24 AHMED’S wife Physique: petite, young good looking, medium black hair Background: upper middle class Moiz (Ahmed's friend) Age: 25 – 26 Production designer Physique: tanned skin tone, average height, chubby Background: comes from a lower middle class family, has built his way up in life Shaheer (Ahmed's friend) Age: 24 - 25 Entrepreneur Physique: tanned skin tone, good height Background: belongs to middle class family Fareed (Ahmed’s friend) Age: 25-26 Marketing strategist Physique: Asian skin tone, 5'10 height black hair. Background: Belongs to a respectable family but is less fortunate than the rest in terms of finances Amjad (Ahmed’s brother) Age: 32-33 Business man Physique: Salt pepper beard and hair, broad structure. Background: belongs from an upper middle class, has inherited a house and some bank balance enough to have a comfortable life CHAPTER# 6 SHOOTING SCHEDULE NIGHT SCENE DAY/NIGHT LOCATION CHARACTER PROPS 1 Night Road Ahmed Phone/Car 2 Night Street Ahmed/wife Friend Car/Lights/Phone/Keys 3 Night House Roof Cake/Table/Lights 4 Night House Roof Ahmed/Rafiya Guests Ahmed/Guests 5 Night Int room Ahmed/Rafiya Bed/Frames 6 Night Int house Ahmed Laptop/Table/Paper Gift/Food/Plates DAY 7 Day Int house Ahmed Paper/Pen CHAPTER# 7 LOCATION, CODE REFRENCE, PROPS AND LIGHT AMBIANCE 7.1 LOCATION REFERENCE ROOFTOP HOUSE LIVING HALL DINING TABLE AREA BEDROOM CAR LOCATION 7.2 CODE REFERENCE AHMED RAFIA Friend 4 outfit Friend 1 outfit friend 2 outfit Friend 3 outift Ahmed’s brother 7.3 PROPS: Car Bag Snow spray Birthday hat Watch Notebook/Pen Party props Car Keys Phone House Keys Birthday Gifts Birthday Dinner Table Birthday Cake Table Plates Laptop Frames Study table Bed 7.4 LIGHT AMBIANCE: CHAPTER# 8 STORYBOARDS CHAPTER# 9 BUDGET LIST AND EQUIPMENTS 9.1 BUDGET LIST Category Description Rate Days Total Casting Main Lead Male / Female, Four Friends and Main lead's brother. 20000 2 Equipment Rental Including all required stuff such as camera, lights, cutters, diffusers, gimbles, tripods and mics. 25000 2 25000 Art Direction/Props Birthday Decorations and other Props 5000 2 5000 Location House on Rent 10000 2 10000 8000 2 8000 Food Including actors,dop and team 20000 Camera Operations DOP & Gaffer 20000 2 20000 Transportation Pick n Drop / and other necessary travelling 4000 2 4000 Editing Color grade, Music 20000 1 20000 Miscellaneous Extras/Drinks/Other essentials, etc. 5000 2 5000 TOTAL GRAND TOTAL 9.2 EQUIPMENTS Sony Camera A7iii Reflector/Diffuser Two key lights Soft box Tripod Rgb light Sound Rode Mic One Lacs and Seventeen Thousand Only 1 117000 CHAPTER# 10 DOCUMENTS FORMATS 1. SCRIPT BREAKDOWN SHEET SCRIPT BREAKDOWN SHEET BREAKDOWN SHEET # _______ PAGE COUNT _______ DATE ___________ PRODUCTION _______________________________________________________ COMPANY PRODUCTION ___________________________________________________________ SCENE # ____________ SCENE NAME ______________________ SCRIPT PAGE _______ LOCATION _________________________ INT / EXT _______ DAY / NIGHT _______ DESCRIPTION: CAST STUNTS EXTRAS/ATMOSPHERE EXTRAS/SILENT SPECIAL EFFECTS TITLE PROPS VEHICLES/ANIMALS WARDROBE MAKEUP/HAIR SPECIAL EQUIPMENT PRODUCTION NOTES SOUND EFFECTS/MUSIC 2. SHOT LIST SHOT LIST Production Title: Director: Scene # Shot Location: Date: Shot type Movement Gear Location Ext / Int Sound Shot description Cast 3. CALL SHEET Executive Producer: Producer: Director: Production Manager: Production Coordinator: 1st Assistant Director: DATE: TITLE SHUTTLE INFO: WEATHER: First Aid kit and fire extinguisher at the craft table. CALL TIME 00:00 LUNCH 00:00 Check grid for individual call times Production Office Nearest Hospital to Set LOCATIONS # Location Address Parking Contact 1 Smith’s Bagels 123 John St. New York, New York Street Parking out front Mary C: 555-555-5555 Scene and Description Cast Pgs Loc TOTAL PAGES: # Cast 1. 2. 3. Extras/Background Transportation Role Call Time Pick Up Time MU/WD Set Call Craft – Hot & Ready @ Cast/Crew Subs x 00 @ 0000 Catering Cast/Crew Lunch @ 0000 x 00 to be Hot & Ready @ 0000 to be served SET REQUIREMENTS Props: Special Effects: Vehicles: Wardrobe: Makeup: Set Dressing: Animal Wrangler: Stunts: Producer NAME PHONE NUMBER Producer NAME PHONE NUMBER Advanced Schedule Production Manager NAME PHONE NUMBER Production Coordinator NAME PHONE NUMBER Day x of x 00-00-00 Scene and Description DEPT 1st Assistant Director NAME PHONE NUMBER NAME IN DEPT PRODUCTION ART DEPT Producer Production Designer Producer Art Department Director Art Department Production Manager HAIR/MAKEUP/WARDROBE Production Coordinator Key Production Assistant Assistant Cast NAME Pages IN Production Assistant Assistant AD’S CONTINUITY 1st Assistant Director Script Supervisor 2nd Assistant Director LOCATIONS 3rd Assistant Director Locations Manager CAMERA DEPT SOUND Director Photography of Production Sound Mixer 1st Assistant Camera Boom Operator 2nd Assistant Camera STUNTS Camera Trainee Stunt Coordinator GRIP & ELECTRIC DEPT CATERING/CRAFT Key Grip Catering Best Boy Grip Craft Grip DRIVERS Gaffer Driver Coordinator Best Boy Electric Driver Electric Driver Swing Driver Producer NAME PHONE NUMBER Director NAME PHONE NUMBER Production Manager NAME PHONE NUMBER Production Coordinator NAME PHONE NUMBER 1st Assistant Director NAME PHONE NUMBER