ETTM_01_001_036.QXD:GED Test series 7/1/08 1:50 PM Page 3 C H A P T E R 1 Punctuation Power-Up T O DAY ’ S DATA - D R I V E N I N F O R M AT I O N A G E demands stronger reading and writing skills. Being able to think clearly and to create interesting content is important. Having a good grasp of the rules of punctuation is equally essential. You don’t have to love punctuation; you just have to respect it a little. The best way to master punctuation and sentence mechanics is to learn the basic rules and use those rules during daily writing practice. You might also consider taking passages from books and copying them into your notebooks to reinforce the patterns of proper punctuation and sentence structure. Mastering the intricacies of the English language is a gradual process that will become easier and more rewarding as your proficiency increases, and as you grow more confident in your abilities. Because becoming an active reader and writer is crucial to achieving success in language arts, it is suggested that you make reading and writing important parts of your daily activities by reading a wide variety of media and by taking advantage of some of the supplementary material listed in the Chapter 3 resource list. The following is a quick reference guide. We suggest you read the entire guide before moving on to other sections. 3 ETTM_01_001_036.QXD:GED Test series 7/1/08 1:50 PM Page 4 – ENGLISH TO THE MAX– Period (.) ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ Periods signal that a sentence has come to a complete stop. → Sentences that do not require a question mark or exclamation point should end with a period. A period is used to indicate a decimal. → a GPA of 3.9 A period separates dollars and cents. → The price of the loaf of bread is $2.89. A period follows an initial in a name. → Is Robert W. Smith here today? A period indicates that a word is being used in abbreviated form. → Diva Apparel & Accessory Co., Inc. Use a period to end a command. → Take this book to Mrs. Grundy’s office. Use a period to separate letters in abbreviations. → C.E. [common era] ■ Quotation Marks (“ ”) ■ ■ ■ Question Mark (?) ■ ■ ■ Always place a question mark at the end of a direct question. → What kind of maintenance schedule should I follow? When a question includes a direct quote, the question mark of the overall sentence is placed outside (after) the end quotation mark. → Did Mr. Keats say, “The reading assignment is due on the last Friday of November”? If a direct quotation is itself a question, the question mark is placed inside (before) the end quotation mark. → Mark asked, “Does anyone want more soda?” ■ ■ Exclamation Point (!) ■ Place an exclamation point after an interjection. → Wow! Exclamation marks are placed inside quotation marks only when they are part of the direct quote. → Melissa screamed “Help!” when her bicycle’s rain-soaked brakes unexpectedly failed. Place an exclamation point after a word, phrase, or sentence that requires extra emphasis or one that conveys an especially strong emotion. → That car is speeding out of control! 4 When using a direct quote from an outside source, place double quotation marks around the speaker’s words, and use a comma or colon directly before the quote. → The local news anchor reported: “Retailers are responding to lackluster consumer spending by slashing prices on apparel, electronics, and household goods.” The titles of chapters, articles, poems, songs, and short stories require quotation marks. → “The Road Not Taken” The rules of American standard English dictate that periods and commas are always placed inside (before) end quotation marks, whereas sentence structure determines placement of other punctuation, such as question marks and colons. → “I like to listen to hip-hop classics by Tupac Shakur, Ice Cube, and Eminem,” said Lisa. When punctuating dialogue—conversations between two or more speakers—enclose each speaker’s words in quotation marks. Use single quotation marks when enclosing quoted material inside a direct quotation. → When John and I discussed the writings of Henry David Thoreau, he remarked, “I especially appreciate Thoreau’s sentiment: ‘The bluebird carries the sky on his back.’ ” ETTM_01_001_036.QXD:GED Test series 7/1/08 1:50 PM Page 5 – PUNCTUATION POWER-UP– Semicolon (;) ■ ■ Apostrophe (’) Use a semicolon to separate individual items or word groups in a series containing commas. → Field trips are planned for Monday, May 5; Tuesday, May 6; and Wednesday, May 7. Use a semicolon before adverbial connectives such as however, nevertheless, and therefore joining together two independent clauses. → Cheryl tried out for cheerleading with her arm in a cast; nevertheless, her routine dazzled the judges. ■ ■ ■ Colon (:) ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ Use an apostrophe when letters have been deleted. → It’s [It is] time for a change. An apostrophe is used with an s at the end of a word in order to indicate ownership. → On the day she was absent, Ms. Carlson’s homeroom class was very unruly. Only an apostrophe is added to a plural word ending with an s to indicate ownership. → The books’ pages were scattered across the floor. Comma (,) Use a colon directly in front of a listing of a series of items. → While I was at the supermarket, I picked up the following: cheese, rolls, pie, and bottled water. A colon separates hours and minutes. → Let’s meet for lunch at 1:30 P.M. A colon can be substituted for a comma before a direct quote. → Ms. Jones said: “Students who are missing more than five homework assignments will have points taken off their final grades.” To separate biblical chapter and verse, a colon is used after the chapter, with the verse appearing directly after the colon. → Isaiah 61:3 A colon is placed at the end of the salutation line in a formal letter. → Dear Mr. Smythe: A colon separates the city and publisher in a bibliographical citation or note. → New York: Alfred A. Knopf Use a colon between titles and subtitles. The best way to learn to use commas properly is to study and imitate proper comma usage in model sentences. Reinforce your comma punctuation skills by reading the specific rule for each situation and then practicing what you’ve learned by copying each model sentence five times in the spaces provided. Rule: Place a comma before a coordinating conjunction (and, or, but, nor, so, for, yet) joining two or more independent clauses. Model sentence: I was going to go to the party, but I fell asleep while watching television. Practice: 1. ____________________________________ 2. ____________________________________ 3. ____________________________________ 4. ____________________________________ 5. ____________________________________ 5 ETTM_01_001_036.QXD:GED Test series 7/1/08 1:50 PM Page 6 – ENGLISH TO THE MAX– Rule: Place a comma between dates, addresses, and titles: Rule: Place a comma between all of the items in a list. Model sentence: She shopped for paper plates, napkins, cups, and plastic spoons. Model sentence: Robert Smith, PhD, received his doctoral degree on May 14, 2007. Practice: Practice: 1. ____________________________________ 1. ____________________________________ 2. ____________________________________ 2. ____________________________________ 3. ____________________________________ 3. ____________________________________ 4. ____________________________________ 4. ____________________________________ 5. ____________________________________ 5. ____________________________________ Rule: Place a comma directly after tags or phrases preceding direct quotations. Rule: Set off nonrestrictive appositives and nonessential phrases and clauses by placing a comma on both sides. (Do not use commas with restrictive appositives such as the poet Robert Frost.) Model sentence: The author of the best-selling novel declared, “I can’t wait to start working on my next book.” Practice: Model sentence: Will’s girlfriend, Halle [nonrestrictive appositive], whom he has dated for two years [nonessential clause], doesn’t know how to drive. 1. ____________________________________ 2. ____________________________________ 3. ____________________________________ 4. ____________________________________ Practice: 5. ____________________________________ 1. ____________________________________ 2. ____________________________________ 3. ____________________________________ 4. ____________________________________ 5. ____________________________________ 6 ETTM_01_001_036.QXD:GED Test series 7/1/08 1:50 PM Page 7 – PUNCTUATION POWER-UP– Rule: Place a comma directly after conjunctive adverbs and transitional phrases, such as however, also, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, and for example. Rule: Place a comma within (before) the end quotation mark of a direct quote preceding a tag (unless the quote ends with a question mark or an exclamation point). Model sentence: In fact, the black shoes are handcrafted in Italy. Model sentence: “I’m going on vacation next week,” said Tanya. Practice: Practice: 1. ____________________________________ 1. ____________________________________ 2. ____________________________________ 2. ____________________________________ 3. ____________________________________ 3. ____________________________________ 4. ____________________________________ 4. ____________________________________ 5. ____________________________________ 5. ____________________________________ Rule: Use a comma after an introductory adverbial clause or a prepositional phrase. Hyphen (-) ■ Model sentence: Under the decaying front porch, we discovered a box filled with books and old letters. ■ Practice: 1. ____________________________________ ■ 2. ____________________________________ 3. ____________________________________ Use a hyphen whenever two or more words are joined together to serve as an adjective directly before a noun (unless the first word ends in -ly). → The well-regarded teacher was honored for his exceptionally hard work and dedication. Use a hyphen when writing out fractions and compound numbers. → I spent one-third of my allowance on books and DVDs. Use a hyphen with compound nouns. → My sister-in-law works at the local mall. 4. ____________________________________ 5. ____________________________________ Grammar-Gram If a word is not listed in the dictionary as a compound word (for example, notebook or self-esteem), write it as two separate words (for example, test taker). 7 ETTM_01_001_036.QXD:GED Test series 7/1/08 1:50 PM Page 8 – ENGLISH TO THE MAX– Parentheses ■ ■ Comma Use and Abuse Place parentheses around letters or numbers that mark divisions in a series. → The main rules of the class are the following: (1) don’t speak when someone else is speaking, (2) act respectfully toward your teacher and your classmates, and (3) work hard and complete all of your assignments. Use parentheses to enclose supplementary material. → Dorothy (Mrs. Thomas) Walker, an animal welfare activist, recently adopted an elderly mixed-breed dog from the local animal shelter. Some writers sprinkle commas into their writing like Parmesan cheese over a plate of spaghetti or sprinkles onto a cake. Yikes! The best way to avoid this type of comma abuse is to ask yourself the following question before using a comma: What specific punctuation rule applies to this particular situation? If a rule doesn’t fit the situation, you might be creating a dreaded comma splice by placing a comma between two independent clauses that are direly in need of a coordinating conjunction (there are seven of them: and, but, for, or, nor, so, and yet). Ellipsis Points (. . .) ■ Ellipsis points signify that material has been omitted from the middle of a quotation, but they are normally not placed at the beginning or end of a quotation. → In his play Uncle Vanya, Anton Chekhov wrote: “Man has been endowed with reason, with the power to create . . . but up to now he hasn’t been a creator, only a destroyer.” Practice Questions Choose the punctuation mark that is needed in each of the following sentences. If no additional punctuation is needed, choose e. 1. “It isn’t fair!” shouted Martin. Coach Lewis never lets me start the game!” a. . b. , c. ! d. “ e. correct as is Get a Grip on Punctuation Help!! Writer Wigs Out on Exclamation Points! Exclamation points are like cayenne pepper— use them to add a dash of excitement, but don’t be heavy-handed or they will irritate the reader. If you have used more than one exclamation point on a page, focus instead on revising to make more precise word choices that will interject your writing with the same degree of enthusiasm that you are hoping to achieve by using exclamation points. 2. Maureen’s three sisters, Molly, Shannon, and Patricia are all spending the summer at their grandmother’s beach house. a. ; b. – c. ! d. , e. correct as is 8 ETTM_01_001_036.QXD:GED Test series 7/1/08 1:50 PM Page 9 – PUNCTUATION POWER-UP– 7. Before sending out invitations, Margo checked the party date with her mother-in-law. a. , b. ; c. — d. . e. correct as is 3. For the centerpieces, the florist recommended the following flowers daisies, tulips, daffodils, and hyacinths. a. : b. , c. . d. ; e. correct as is 8. “I remember” Luis recollected, “the first time I was allowed to walk home from school by myself.” a. ? b. , c. : d. ; e. correct as is 4. Lily is an accomplished gymnast she won three medals in her last competition. a. ; b. , c. ? d. : e. correct as is 9. Madeline Larkin our office manager, is the most organized person I’ve ever known. a. : b. ; c. — d. , e. correct as is 5. Everyone was shocked when Max Smithfield— a studious, extremely bright high school senior decided that college was not for him. a. ; b. , c. — d. : e. correct as is 10. I spend most of my time at the gym on the treadmill walking is my favorite form of exercise. a. , b. ? c. ; d. ! e. correct as is 6. Kims assistant, usually so reliable, has been late for work three times this week, without any excuse. a. ’ b. , c. ; d. . e. correct as is 9 ETTM_01_001_036.QXD:GED Test series 7/1/08 1:50 PM Page 10 – ENGLISH TO THE MAX– 15. Before the student could be hired by the company, the students adviser had to provide a letter of recommendation. a. company the students b. company, the student’s c. company, the students’ d. company the students’ e. correct as is Choose the alternative that shows the best punctuation for the underlined part of the sentence. If the sentence is correct as is, choose e. 11. Simone bought three new pairs of shoes even though she had put herself on a tight budget just last week. a. shoes, even though, she b. shoes, even though she c. shoes. Even though she d. shoes; even though she e. correct as is 12. Most residents of the building have air conditioners however I’ve always found that a ceiling fan is sufficient. a. air conditioners however: I’ve b. air conditioners, however, I’ve c. air conditioners however, I’ve d. air conditioners; however, I’ve e. correct as is 16. The volunteers who would like to work the morning shift should sign their names on this sheet. a. volunteers, who would like to work the morning shift b. volunteers who would like to work the morning shift, c. volunteers, who would like to work the morning shift, d. volunteers who, would like to work the morning shift, e. correct as is 13. “Are you okay,” asked Timothy, “Are you sure you don’t want to sit down and rest for a while?” a. okay?” asked Timothy. “Are b. okay?” asked Timothy, “Are c. okay,” asked Timothy? “Are d. okay?” asked Timothy? “Are e. correct as is 17. The employees asked whether the company would be offering tuition reimbursement within the next three years? a. reimbursement within the next three years! b. reimbursement, within the next three years. c. reimbursement within the next three years. d. reimbursement, within the next three years? e. correct as is 14. The owners of the restaurant maintain that only organic ingredients are used in their kitchen. a. maintain, that only b. maintain that, only c. maintain: that only d. maintain—that only e. correct as is 18. This is the new restaurant you’ve been talking about, isn’t it? a. about isn’t it? b. about, is’nt it? c. about, isn’t it. d. about isn’t it. e. correct as is 10 ETTM_01_001_036.QXD:GED Test series 7/1/08 1:50 PM Page 11 – PUNCTUATION POWER-UP– 19. Turnips a root vegetable can be mashed, roasted, or used in casseroles. a. Turnips, a root vegetable, b. Turnips, a root vegetable c. Turnips, a root vegetable— d. Turnips a root vegetable, e. correct as is Do Capitalize ■ ■ ■ 20. They met for the first time on August 27, 1972 in Seattle, WA. a. August 27 1972 in Seattle, WA. b. August 27 1972, in Seattle WA. c. August 27, 1972 in Seattle, WA. d. August 27, 1972, in Seattle, WA. e. correct as is ■ ■ ■ ■ Capitalization Don’t Capitalize ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ the seasons of the year → spring, summer, fall, winter written-out references to specific dates of the month → the tenth day of February geographical directions → I told him to drive north. the first word in a quotation that is written as a phrase instead of a complete sentence → He said that he would prefer to “spend some time at the shore” during the summer months. the names of academic subjects, unless they are languages such as English or titles of academic courses → second-year calculus; Advanced Calculus II the first letter(s) of words of an academic degree → bachelor of arts prepositions, conjunctions, and articles in a book or article title, unless they appear as the first or last word ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ 11 the first letter(s) of proper nouns referring to specific beings, places, and things such as the names of continents, countries, states, cities, races, nationalities, religions, and languages the first letter(s) of the names of months, weekdays, and holidays → New Year’s Day the first word of a sentence → School is in session today. the first letter(s) of the name of a geographical location → She left for a business trip out West. the first letter of an individual’s first, middle, and last names → President John Quincy Adams the first letter(s) in the name of an animal → My cat is named Miss Kitty. the first letter of the first word of a direct quotation that is written as a complete sentence → Principal Roberts said, “Research indicates that an extended school day increases academic achievement.” all of the letters in an acronym → ASPCA the first letter in each word of an organization’s name → American Red Cross the pronoun I → I am going to school early today. the first letter in the first, last, and major words in the title of a book, magazine, computer software program, poem, story, play, song title, film, or work of art (However, the titles of certain poems, magazines, and such are sometimes typed completely in lowercase letters for artistic effect.) the first letter(s) of a brand name → Crest toothpaste the first letter(s) of the name of a river, ocean, or other large body of water → Mississippi River the first letter in Mother, Father, Dad, Mom, Grandfather, Grandma, and so on if they are not preceded by a possessive noun or pronoun → I met Dad in front of the diner. the first letter(s) in a company name → General Electric ETTM_01_001_036.QXD:GED Test series 7/1/08 1:50 PM Page 12 – ENGLISH TO THE MAX– ■ ■ ■ 21. Last week, | dr. Tanya Miller received | a b a special award from the | city of Atlanta. | c d Correct as is e the first letter(s) in the name of a school, college, or university → Columbia University the first letter(s) of the names of streets, buildings, and institutions when they are part of a proper noun → Wall Street; White House the first word of each item in an outline → Introduction 1. Chapter 1 2. Chapter 2 22. The new bakery | in the center of town | a b sells a wide assortment | of italian pastries. | c d Correct as is e Examples of Capitalization in Titles Amelia Rules! (comic book) American Idol (television show) “Casey at the Bat” (poem by Ernest Lawrence Thayer) Girl with a Pearl Earring (work of art by Johannes Vermeer) The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy (book by Douglas Adams) March of the Penguins (film) Paradise Lost (lengthy poem by John Milton) Popular Science (periodical) A Raisin in the Sun (play by Lorraine Hansberry) “The Tell-Tale Heart” (short story by Edgar Allan Poe) “What a Wonderful World” (song) Zone Alarm Internet Security Suite 7 (software) 23. Michael Blake, jr., | a is such an accomplished golfer | b that he won three tournaments | in a row. | c d Correct as is e 24. Catherine complained loudly, | a “why can’t you ever | pick me up on time | b c in the morning?” | Correct as is d e 25. The Declaration of Independence | a is one of the most important | b documents in the history | of the United States. c d Correct as is e Practice Questions For the following questions, choose the lettered part of the sentence that contains a word that needs a capital letter. If no additional words should be capitalized, choose e. Refer to the preceding checklists if you want to be certain about your choice. 12 ETTM_01_001_036.QXD:GED Test series 7/1/08 1:50 PM Page 13 – PUNCTUATION POWER-UP– 26. Sally’s Sweet shop, | a one of the oldest businesses in town, | b is located on one of the main streets | c of Millersville. | Correct as is d e 31. a. Leo told her, to call the customer service department in the morning. b. She put up signs all over town, but she didn’t get any response. c. Occasionally, her neighbors ask her to feed their cat. d. no mistakes 27. My first childhood pet, | a gray cat named otis, a b | was given to me as a gift | on my fifth birthday. | c d Correct as is e 32. a. Did you see all three movies about Shrek? b. She was given an award by mayor Chambers. c. Math and science are my two best subjects. d. no mistakes 28. The local elementary school | a is organizing a screening | b of the movie toy story | as a fund-raiser. | c d Correct as is e 33. a. A major highway is being built on the outskirts of town. b. When you reach the traffic light on Berkshire Road, turn right onto Springfield Boulevard. c. We were staying at my sister’s cape Cod vacation home. d. no mistakes For each question, find the sentence that has a mistake in capitalization or punctuation. If you find no mistakes, mark choice d. 34. a. The instructor asked us if we needed more time? b. Carla’s mother is a pediatric dentist. c. Every item in the store costs less than a dollar. d. no mistakes 29. a. My least favorite season is Winter. b. Next Friday, Uncle Jake is coming to visit. c. Maureen served as treasurer for the women’s organization. d. no mistakes 35. a. Jane’s family owned three Persian cats. b. My Uncle always takes the subway to Yankee Stadium. c. Everyone knows that Marisa’s favorite book is Pride and Prejudice. d. no mistakes 30. a. “Can you attend next week’s meeting?” she asked. b. His new car was damaged in the accident. c. The girls’ giggled through the whole movie. d. no mistakes 13 ETTM_01_001_036.QXD:GED Test series 7/1/08 1:50 PM Page 14 – ENGLISH TO THE MAX– 36. a. “I’ll do the grocery shopping for you, grandma,” Lucy said. b. “Where can I find the best pizza in town?” he asked. c. “Be sure to arrive two hours early,” she warned. d. no mistakes 42. a. Can you find the Indian ocean on this map? b. Which river, the Nile or the Amazon, is longer? c. Lerner Avenue runs into the Thompson Parkway. d. no mistakes 37. a. I always have a hard time getting up in the morning. b. We took: a tent, a cooler, and a sleeping bag. c. The fog was as thick as potato soup. d. no mistakes 43. a. He’s the best dancer in the school. b. We were planning to go, but the meeting was canceled. c. “Okay,” she said, I’ll go with you.” d. no mistakes 38. a. This is someone elses coat. b. Which of these songs was recorded by Bruce Springsteen? c. That book must be yours. d. no mistakes 44. a. Does Judge Parker live on your street? b. Twenty government officials met to deal with Wednesday’s crisis. c. The Mayor spoke at a news conference this morning. d. no mistakes 39. a. Don’t stand in my way. b. Cecilia and I fought our way through the crowd. c. The vegetables were old rubbery and tasteless. d. no mistakes 40. a. b. c. d. 45. a. My brother Isaac is the best player on the team. b. Because of the high cost; we decided not to go. c. Where’s your new puppy? d. no mistakes Remember to walk the dog. “Don’t run”! Mr. Ellington shouted. It’s supposed to snow today and tomorrow. no mistakes 46. a. I have learned to appreciate Mozart’s music. b. My cousin Veronica is studying to be a Veterinarian. c. Mr. Shanahan is taller than Professor Martin. d. no mistakes 41. a. Charleen’s parents worried whenever she drove the car. b. Who designed the Brooklyn Bridge? c. Diseases like Smallpox and Polio have been virtually eradicated. d. no mistakes 14 ETTM_01_001_036.QXD:GED Test series 7/1/08 1:50 PM Page 15 – PUNCTUATION POWER-UP– 53. a. b. c. d. 47. a. “You look just like your mother,” Ms. Jones told me. b. “Please be careful,” he said. c. Tyler asked, “why do I have to go to bed so early?” d. no mistakes Questions 54–57 are based on the following passage. First, read the passage; then, choose the alternative that shows the best capitalization or punctuation for each underlined part. 48. a. Do you prefer root beer or orange soda? b. In which year did world war II end? c. I like to study the geography of the Everglades. d. no mistakes Madam Helena P. Blavatsky born in Russia on May 8, 1831, claimed to have psychic powers and to be capable of performing feats of clairvoyance and telepathy. During her 60 years, she traveled to many countries—including the United States, England, India, and Egypt—in order to study the occult. Although many considered her a fake throughout her lifetime she was surrounded by faithful believers, including such influential persons as British statesman Allen O. Hume and Swedish countess Constance Wachtmeister. To this day, followers commemorate the date of her death calling May 8 “White Lotus Day.” 49. a. Colds like many other viruses are highly contagious. b. Call me when you feel better. c. Did you wash your hands, Michael? d. no mistakes 50. a. b. c. d. Those shoes are too expensive. Michael’s best friend is Patrick. Did you hear that Inez got a new puppy. no mistakes The industrial revolution began in Europe. Is Labor Day a national holiday? General Patton was a four-star general. no mistakes 51. a. Carmen brought bread, and butter, and strawberry jam. b. Let’s look at the map. c. Be sure to thank Aunt Helen for the gift. d. no mistakes 52. a. My Aunt Georgia loves to read EighteenthCentury novels. b. Eli’s sister’s cousin lives in Alaska. c. Is that a German shepherd? d. no mistakes 15 54. a. b. c. d. e. Blavatsky: born Blavatsky—born Blavatsky, born Blavatsky. Born correct as is 55. a. b. c. d. e. countries, including countries: including countries. Including countries including correct as is ETTM_01_001_036.QXD:GED Test series 7/1/08 1:50 PM Page 16 – ENGLISH TO THE MAX– 56. a. b. c. d. e. fake, throughout fake. Throughout fake: throughout fake; throughout correct as is treatment I expect from your fine establishment. I hope you will make restitution and have a discussion with your staff about customer service. My receipt is enclosed. 57. a. b. c. d. e. death. Calling death, calling death: calling death; calling correct as is Melanie Jeffords Sincerely yours, Questions 58–61 are based on the following passage. First, read the passage; then, choose the alternative that shows the best capitalization or punctuation for each underlined part. 312 Maple Avenue Chicago, IL 60632 June 2, 2006 Mark Franklin, general manager Wholesome Food Store 1245 Main Street Chicago, IL 60627 58. a. b. c. d. e. Franklin, general Manager franklin, General Manager Franklin, General Manager Franklin, General manager correct as is 59. a. b. c. d. e. Dear Mr. Franklin. Dear, Mr. franklin, dear Mr. Franklin: Dear Mr. Franklin: correct as is 60. a. b. c. d. e. Monday, May 22nd I Monday May 22nd; I Monday. May 22nd I Monday, May 22nd, I correct as is 61. a. b. c. d. e. extremely rude, and she extremely rude: and she extremely rude? And she extremely rude and, she correct as is dear Mr. Franklin; I am writing to complain about the behavior of one of your sales clerks. On Monday May 22nd I visited your store to return a package of ground turkey that I had purchased the day before. When I explained to your sales clerk that the expiration date on the package was May 1st, she was extremely rude and she refused to refund my money. This is not the kind of 16 ETTM_01_001_036.QXD:GED Test series 7/1/08 1:50 PM Page 17 – PUNCTUATION POWER-UP– Answers 14. e. The sentence is punctuated correctly. 15. b. The word student’s is possessive and needs an apostrophe. 16. e. The sentence does not require any additional punctuation. 17. c. This is a declarative sentence; it asks an indirect question, so a question mark should not be used. Also, to add the comma is incorrect. 18. e. The sentence is punctuated correctly. 19. a. The phrase a root vegetable is a nonessential element in the sentence and needs to be set off with commas. 20. d. Commas separate dates and addresses. 21. b. A title, such as Dr., requires a capital. 22. d. Nationalities and languages require capitals. 23. a. Jr. is a kind of title and therefore takes a capital. 24. b. The first letter of a direct quotation takes a capital. 25. e. Capitalization is correct. 26. a. All words in the proper name of a place or company require capitals. 27. b. Proper names require capitals. 28. c. Movie titles are capitalized. 29. a. Winter should not be capitalized. 30. c. There should not be an apostrophe after the word girls. 31. a. The comma is incorrect and should be deleted. 32. b. Mayor should be capitalized because it refers to a particular mayor. 33. c. Cape Cod is a proper noun, and both words should be capitalized. 34. a. This is a declarative sentence that asks an indirect question, so the question mark should be replaced with a period. 1. d. There should be a quotation mark before the word Coach to set off the dialogue. 2. d. Commas set off nonrestrictive appositives, phrases that say the same thing as the previous phrase in different words. (A comma should be placed after Patricia.) 3. a. A colon can go before a list. (Place a colon after the word flowers.) 4. a. A semicolon can be used to separate two main clauses that could each stand alone as complete sentences. 5. c. Dashes can be used to set off a parenthetical element, for emphasis. (Place another em dash after the word senior.) 6. a. The possessive Kim’s requires an apostrophe. 7. e. This sentence is punctuated correctly. 8. b. Commas set off parenthetical elements and always go inside the quotation marks in a line of dialogue. (Place a comma after the word remember.) 9. d. Commas set off a word or phrase that describes the subject but does not alter the meaning of the entire sentence. (Place a comma after the word Larkin.) 10. c. A semicolon can be used to separate two main clauses that could each stand alone as complete sentences. (Place the semicolon after the word treadmill.) 11. b. The comma separates the main clause from the long, descriptive subordinate clause. 12. d. The semicolon can be used to separate two main clauses that could each stand alone as complete sentences, and the comma follows the conjunctive adverb however. 13. a. The quotation is a question, and the tag asked Timothy ends the sentence. 17 ETTM_01_001_036.QXD:GED Test series 7/1/08 1:50 PM Page 18 – ENGLISH TO THE MAX– 48. b. World War is a proper noun and should be capitalized. 49. a. The phrase like many other viruses should be set off by commas because it is a nonessential element in the sentence. 50. a. Industrial Revolution should be capitalized. 51. a. The commas in this sentence should be deleted. Commas are not used in a series when the series is already linked by conjunctions. 52. a. The names of centuries are not capitalized. 53. c. This sentence asks a question and should end with a question mark. 54. c. Commas are used to set off a word or phrase that describes the subject but does not alter the meaning of the entire sentence. 55. e. Dashes are used to set off parenthetical elements, for emphasis. 56. a. The comma is used after an introductory element. 57. b. The comma separates the main clause from the descriptive subordinate clause. 58. c. Titles require capitals. 59. d. First words of salutations, titles, and proper names all take capitals; a colon follows the salutation in a business letter. 60. d. Commas set off parenthetical elements. 61. a. A comma goes before and when and links two main clauses. 35. b. Uncle is not used as a proper noun and should not be capitalized. 36. a. Grandma is used as a proper name and should be capitalized. 37. b. A colon should not be used between a verb and its objects. 38. a. There should be an apostrophe in the word else’s, which is possessive. 39. c. The commas are missing from this series of adjectives. 40. b. The quotation mark should appear on the outside of the exclamation point: “Don’t run!” 41. c. The word polio and smallpox should not be capitalized. Diseases are not capitalized unless a proper noun is part of the name. 42. a. Ocean should be capitalized. 43. c. To set off the dialogue, there should be a quotation mark before the word I’ll. 44. c. Mayor should not be capitalized, because it does not precede the name of a particular mayor. 45. b. A semicolon is not used between a dependent and an independent clause. Use a comma. 46. b. Veterinarian is not a proper noun and should not be capitalized. 47. c. The word Why, which begins the quotation, should be capitalized. 18