A LETTER FORMAT A good letter should consist of: I. Opening: 1. SENDER’S NAME: with position if the sender sends the letter to a company, department or organization. Eg: Nguyen Van A – Manager of XYZ Ltd Tran Thi B 2. SENDER’S ADDRESS: street, ward, district, city or province (country if the letter is sent to another country) Eg: 192 Ham Tu Street Ward 5 District 5, Ho Chi Minh City (national areas only) 192 Ham Tu Street Ward 5 District 5, Ho Chi Minh City, Viet Nam (international areas) 3. ATTENTION LINE: the name of the receiver (with position if he or she has) or the name of a company or department. Eg1: Mr. William Shakespeare, Ms. Jenny Cao, Ms. Nguyen Thi Y Eg2: Mr. Donald Trump – President of the United States of America Ms. Tina Tran – Personal Assistant Eg 3: Marketing Department, XYZ International Company, Green Peace Organization Eg 4: Mr. Tran Hung Dao – Head of Human Resources MN Joint Stock Company 4. RECEIVER’S ADDRESS: street, ward, district, city or province (country, state, postcode if the letter is sent to another country) 5. DATE: day – month – year (Write the month as a word) Eg: 13 February 2017, February 13, 2017 6. SUBJECT LINE (optional): the main content of the letter Eg: Contents to review for Writing, meeting invitation 7. SALUTATION or GREETING: Eg: Dear Sir/Madam, Dear Kim, Dear Mr. Brown II. Body: 1. PARAGRAPH 1: an introduction clearly stating the reason you are writing Eg: With reference to our telephone conversation yesterday (about)… Thank you for your email regarding… I am writing on behalf of…. I am writing to draw your attention to…. 2. PARAGRAPH 2: the main content in which the subject is developed such as place an order, apologize, and deal with problems. (Maximum 3 paragraphs for the main content) Begin a new paragraph for each main point 3. THE FINAL PARAGRAPH: in which summing up the topic or express sender’s wish for something to be done Eg: Please feel free to contact me if you have further questions Hope to hear from you soon III. Closing 1. AN APPROPRIATE ENDING or COMPLEMENTARY CLOSE Eg: Best wishes, Regards, Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully 2. SENDER’S SIGNATURE: sender signs his or her name 3. SENDER’S FULLNAME (with title if sender mentioned his or her position above) Eg1: Angelia Jolie Eg2: Bill Clinton The former Present of The United States of America 4. ENCLOSURE NOTATION: (optional) sender can enclose photos or files Eg: Please find attached the file you requested 5. COPY NOTATION: (optional) mention one person some people who have the right to read the letter by receiving the photocopies (the sender can mention the title of these people) Eg1: Mr. Le Van Luyen, Ms. Elsa Hoang Eg2: Ms. Jenifer Lopez – The representative of Paramount 6. POST SCRIPT (PS): (optional) sender’s feeling or expectation Eg: Ps: I am very excited about purchasing this limited version. USEFUL LANGUAGE FORMAL LETTER INFORMAL LETTER 1. Dear + Dear Sir or Madam, receiver’s full name or first name = To whom it may concern: Dear Mr/Ms + Receiver’s Full name, 2. Hi + first name or nothing Dear Mr/Ms + Receiver’s Surname, 3. Hello + first name or nothing REMEMBER! Beginning with Ending with Dear Sir/Madam Yours faithfully + To whom it may full name concern Dear Mr/Mrs + surname Yours sincerely + full name PARAGRAPH 1: an introduction clearly stating the reason you are writing With reference to our telephone conversation It was nice to hear from you yesterday about… It’s been ages since I’ve heard from you Thank you for your email regarding… How are you? Hope you and your family are I am writing on behalf of + N I am writing to draw your attention to… I am writing regarding/as regards/with regards doing well to/in regards to...+N I’m writing to let you know I would like to tell/send/let … I enjoy/ really like … PARAGRAPH 2: the main content in which the subject is developed Making a request I would appreciate if you could… You don’t mind … for me, do you? I would be most grateful if you would Do me a favor, will you? Would you be so kind and Would it be possible for you to? I was wondering if you could Can/Could I ask you to? I wonder if you could … Could you please …? Could you tell me something about …? I would particularly like to know … I would be interested in having more details Could you please help me …, please? about … I would like to ask your help … Apologizing We apologize for any inconvenience caused Sorry for any trouble caused Please accept our sincere apologies We are very sorry about/for … I would like to apologize for … I regret to tell/inform Please let us know what we can do to I am afraid I will not be able to … compensate you for the damages caused I promise it won’t happen again Complaining I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with… I find it most unsatisfactory that :I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with someone to complain about something I am interested to hear how your company can compensate us for the distress we suffered I'm fed up with + someone/something I am not happy with I’m rather annoyed with We regret to inform you that .. You said …, but in fact what happened We were supposed to …., whereas we I hope you won’t mind me saying that .. Knowing what a good reputation the restaurant I am writing to complain about … has, I was disappointed with….. I’d like to complain about THE FINAL PARAGRAPH: in which summing up the topic or express sender’s wish for something to be done I look forward to hearing from you If you require any further information, please Give my love to + somebody don’t hesitate to contact me. Hope to hear from you soon Please feel free to contact me if you have Just give me a call if you have any questions further questions Please contact me if you have any further Thank you for your patience and cooperation Thank you for your consideration If you have any questions or concerns, don’t questions. I am very happy to get your feedback. hesitate to let me know It is very kind of you if you drop me a line back. AN APPROPRIATE ENDING or COMPLEMENTARY CLOSE Lots of love, = Sincerely yours, (friendlier) = Sincerely, All the best, = Best, = Best wishes, Yours faithfully, = Yours truly, Thanks, = Thank you, With gratitude, Continues success, Regards, = Best regards, = Fond regards, Take care, Yours sincerely, (more polite) Abbreviations used in letter writing: asap: as soon as possible btw: by the way bfn: bye for now brb: be right back iow: in other words cc = carbon copy: when you send a copy of a letter to more than one person, you use this abbreviation to let them know enc. = enclosure: when you include other papers with your letter pp = per procuration: A Latin phrase meaning that you are signing the letter on somebody else's behalf; if they are not there to sign it themselves, etc ps = postscript: when you want to add something after you've finished and signed it pto (informal) = please turn over: to make sure that the other person knows the letter continues on the other side of the page RSVP (the short form of a French word: répondez s'il vous plait) = please reply A SAMPLE LETTER Rita Wang 5 Hill Street Madison, Wisconsin 53700 March 15, 2015 Ms. Helen Jones - President Jones, Jones & Jones 123 International Lane Boston, Massachusetts 01234 Dear Ms. Jones It was very enjoyable to speak with you about the assistant account executive position at the Smith Agency. The job, as you presented it, seems to be a very good match for my skills and interests. The creative approach to account management that you described confirmed my desire to work with you. In addition to my enthusiasm, I shall bring to the position strong writing skills, assertiveness and the ability to encourage others to work cooperatively with the department. I understand your need for administrative support. My detail orientation and organizational skills will help to free you to deal with larger issues. I neglected to mention during my interview that I had worked for two summers as a temporary office worker. This experience helped me to develop my secretarial and clerical skills. I appreciate the time you took to interview me. I am very interested in working for you and look forward to hearing from you about this position. Yours sincerely, (Signature) Rita Wang