IA2_MACRO_Dilnaz Tazhibay
by Dilnaz Tazhibay
Submission date: 07-Oct-2023 10:28PM (UTC+0600)
Submission ID: 2168831918
File name: IA2_Macroeconomics_3.pdf (219.5K)
Word count: 1874
Character count: 10070
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IA2_MACRO_Dilnaz Tazhibay
GRADEMARK REPORT
FINAL GRADE
/0
GENERAL COMMENTS
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Comment 1
waste of word count, definition is not required
Comment 2
unclear explanation of key concept
Comment 3
??? what is the point of this sentence?? for me seems like a disadvantage, why are you
writing it in the into???
Comment 4
relevant diagram
Comment 5
??? what kind of cyclones??? we do not study geography
recovery cyclones refer to the Business cycle stage, where econ recovery and gorwth was
very fast
Comment 6
how??? not relevant
Comment 7
poor explanation
Comment 8
poor explanation of the diagram
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Comment 9
looks like a repetition
Comment 10
??? irrelevant
Comment 11
unclear sentence at all
Comment 12
unclear at all
Comment 13
poor explanation of money supply diagram
Comment 14
poor explanation
Comment 15
???
Comment 16
relevant diagram
PAGE 7
Comment 17
??? unclear
Comment 18
unclear
Comment 19
repetitive and poorly explained
Comment 20
repetition of the article
Comment 21
A relevant diagrams but the explanation is very vague
1/2
B some terminology is used unclear like cyclones and etc
0/1
C 1/2 analysis is very poorly done (explanation of the theory is very weak)
D 1/2 key concept just identified but is not explained at all
E 1/3 evaluation unclear- you have to provide several adv and disadvantages of monetary
policy, and after that explain and evaluate other solutions
4/10