Different Kinds of Language Varieties 1. Pidgin Pidgin is a new language which develops in situations where speakers of different languages need to communicate but don't share a common language. The vocabulary of a pidgin comes mainly from one particular language (called the 'lexifier'). This chapter focuses on Varieties and Language registers of spoken and written language. The aim of this chapter is to give the students the idea on how language is being changed according to the situation, purpose and need of the speaker and listener. LESSON OUTCOMES: 2. Creole When children start learning a pidgin as their first language and it becomes the mother tongue of a community, it is called a creole. Like a pidgin, a creole is a distinct language which has taken most of its vocabulary from another language, the lexifier, but has its own unique grammatical rules. Unlike a pidgin, however, a creole is not restricted in use, and is like any other language in its full range of functions. Examples are Gullah, Jamaican Creole and Hawai`i Creole English. At the end of this lesson, the students should be able to: 1. Define language; 2. Identify the importance of language; and 3. Determine the varieties in language. *Note that the words 'pidgin' and 'creole' are technical terms used by linguists, and not necessarily by speakers of the language. For example, speakers of Jamaican Creole call their language 'Patwa' (from patois) and speakers of Hawai`i Creole English call theirs 'Pidgin.' LESSON 1: Language Varieties All languages exhibit a great deal of internal variation. That is to say each language exists in a number of varieties. Nevertheless, what is meant by a variety of a language? Wardhaugh (1986, p.22) defined it as “a specific set of linguistic items” or “human speech patterns (sounds, words, grammatical features) which can be associated with some external factor (geographical area or a social group). A language itself can be viewed as a variety of the human languages. Speech variety, a concept of domain, is important as it signifies the class of situation within which a certain speech variety is used. A domain is also referred to as ‘a social situation’ as the implementation of the rights and duties of a particular role relationship in the place most appropriate or most typical for that relationship, and at the time societally defined as appropriate for that relationship (John T. Plat and H.K. Plat, 1975 : 36). The domains may refer to those of home, school, employment, mosque, etc). 3. Regional Dialect A regional dialect is not a distinct language but a variety of a language spoken in a particular area of a country. Some regional dialects have been given traditional names which mark them out as being significantly different from standard varieties spoken in the same place. 4. Minority Dialect Sometimes members of a particular minority ethnic group have their own variety which they use as a marker of identity, usually alongside a standard variety. This is called a minority dialect. Examples are African American Vernacular English in the USA, London Jamaican in Britain, and Aboriginal English in Australia. 5. Indigenized Variety Indigenized varieties are spoken mainly as second languages in ex-colonies with multilingual populations. The differences from the standard variety may be linked to English proficiency, or may be part of a range of varieties used to express identity. For example, 'Singlish' (spoken in Singapore) is a variety very different from standard English, and there are many other varieties of English used in India. Purposive Communication Page 49 Purposive Communication Page 50 LESSON 2: Language Registers 3. Consultative Register The users engage in a mutually accepted structure of communications. It is formal and societal expectations accompany the users of this speech. It is a professional discourse. LESSON OUTCOMES: E.g communications between a superior and a subordinate, doctor and patient, lawyer and client., teacher and a student, parent and child. At the end of this lesson, the students should be able to: 1. Identify register in language clearly; 2. Distinguish different language registers; and 3. Utilize language registers for more effective communication. 4. Casual Register This is informal language used by peers and friends. Slang, vulgarities and colloquialisms are normal. This is “group” language. One must be member to engage in this register. In every situation you encounter, you use speech appropriate to the person to whom you are speaking and his or her context. The language you use when talking to your friends is not the same language you would use when meeting someone as important as the president, boss or professor. This difference in language formality is called register. Register is one complicating factor in any study of language varieties. Registers are sets of vocabulary items associated with discrete occupational or social groups. Surgeons, airline pilots, bank managers, sales clerk, jazz fans, and pimps use different vocabularies. One person may control a number of registers. E.g chats, blogs, letters to friends. 5. Intimate Register This communication is private. It is reserved for close family members or intimate people and taking into the accounts of endearment in a certain relationship or bond. E.g husband and wife, siblings, and parent. There are five language registers or styles. Each level has an appropriate use that is determined by different situations. It would certainly be inappropriate to use language and vocabulary reserve for a boyfriend or girlfriend when speaking in the classroom. These five registers can be classified into two types: Formal and Informal. The formal registers include frozen/static and consultative while informal registers include casual and intimate. Thus, the appropriate language register depends upon the audience (who?), the topic (what?), purpose (why?) and location (where?). Categories of Language Register The Five Language Registers There are formal and informal registers in spoken and written language. Formal registers can include everything from an academic essay to wedding vows. The academic essay is formal because it includes polished speech, complex sentences, and precise vocabulary. The wedding vows are an example of extremely formal language that must be said the same way each time as part of a ritual. 1. Static Register / Frozen Register This style of communications rarely or never changes and does not require feedbacks. It is “frozen” in time and content. E.g the Pledge of Allegiance, The Lord’s Prayer, the Wedding Vows, and the Philippine Constitution. 2. Formal Register This language is used in formal settings. This use of language usually follows a commonly accepted format. It is used in impersonal and formal settings. There are also varieties of informal registers. Informal language occurs between people who know each other well and who speak without trying to be 'proper'. Sometimes this includes speaking in slang and other times it's simply a more casual delivery. For example, you might say, 'Could you bring us more coffee, please?' to a waiter at a fancy restaurant, but at your favorite hangout you might say, 'Can I get a little more coffee here?' when you've reached the bottom of your cup. E.g sermons, speeches, oration, and pronouncements made by judges. Purposive Communication Page 51 Purposive Communication Page 52 ❖ Written or Linguistic meaning: for spoken and written language through the use of vocabulary, generic structure and grammar. ❖ Audio meaning: for music, sound effects, noises, ambient noise, and silence, through use of volume, pitch and rhythm. ❖ Visual meaning: for still and moving images through the use of color, saliency, page layouts, This chapter focuses on evaluating messages and/or images of different types of texts reflecting different cultures. The lessons include multimodal text and cultural sensitivity in multimodal text. Learning Outcomes: The students are expected to: 1. Evaluate multimodal texts critically to enhance receptive (listening, reading, viewing) skills. 2. Convey ideas through oral, audio-visual, ad/or web-based presentations for different target audiences in local and global settings using appropriate registers. 3. Adopt awareness of audience and context in presenting ideas. LESSON 1: Multimodal Txt Multimodal is a dynamic convergence of two or more communication modes within the same text. All modes are attended to as part of meaning-making (The New London Group, 1996). vectors, viewpoint, screen formats, visual symbols; shot framing, subject distance and angle; camera movement, subject movement. ❖ Gestural meaning: for movement of body, hands and eyes; facial expression, demeanors, and body language, and use of rhythm, speed, stillness and angles. ❖ Spatial meaning: for environmental and architectural spaces and use of proximity, direction, layout, position of and organization of objects in space. Multimodality is substantial in constructing activities that go beyond print-based literacies (Harste, 2010). It recognizes that the digital media affordances make modes other than text increasingly valuable (Cope & Kalantzis, 2009). It also provides opportunities for students to bring existing literacies into the classroom (Mills, 2010; Curwood & Cowell, 2011). The following screenshots are examples of multimodal text about food, fitness and photos. These are presented as a web site using Wipasnapa. The task had a dual learning focus on food and fitness, along with photography and strategic use of images to convey meaning. The completed project included user generated (original) video and audio content, photographs and print. Examples: image, gesture, music, spoken language, and written language What is a multimodal text? A multimodal text combines two or more semiotic systems like picture book, in which the textual and visual elements are arranged on individual pages that contribute to an overall set of bound pages; webpage, in which elements such as sound effects, oral language, written language, music and still or moving images are combined; and live performance, in which gesture, music, and space are the main elements. It can be delivered via different media or technologies like paper (books, comics, posters), digital (slide presentations, e-books, blogs, e-posters, web pages, and social media, through to animation, film and video games), live (a performance or an event) and transmedia (story that is told using multiple delivery channels through a combination of media platforms, for example: book, comic, magazine, film, web series, and video game). According to The New London Group (1996), there are five semiotic systems to make meanings in a multimodal text: Purposive Communication Page 53 Purposive Communication Page 54 200,000 copies of the offending Windows 95 operating system software to try and heal the diplomatic wounds. It cost them millions. -The fast food giant McDonald's spent thousands on a new TV ad to target the Chinese consumer. The ad showed a Chinese man kneeling before a McDonald's vendor and begging him to accept his expired discount coupon. The ad was pulled due to a lack of cultural sensitivity on McDonald's behalf. The ad caused uproar over the fact that begging is considered a shameful act in Chinese culture. -A nice example of how pictures don't translate well across cultures is the time staff at the African port of Stevadores saw the 'internationally recognised' symbol for "fragile" (i.e. broken wine glass) and presumed it was a box of broken glass. Rather than waste space they threw all the boxes into the sea. -When the US firm Gerber started selling baby food in Africa, they used the same packaging as in the US, i.e. with a picture of a baby on the label. Sales flopped and they soon realised that in Africa, companies typically place pictures of contents on their labels. -Pepsodent tried to sell its toothpaste in South East Asia by emphasizing that it "whitens your teeth." They found out that the local natives chew betel nuts to blacken their teeth which they find attractive. -The film "Hollywood Buddha" showed a complete lack of cultural sensitivity by causing outrage and protest on the streets of Sri Lanka, Malaysia and Burma when the designer of the film's poster decided to show the lead actor sitting on the Buddha's head, an act of clear degradation against something holy. LESSON 2: Cultural Sensitivity in a Multimodal Text -The concept of Big Brother was somehow taken to the Middle East. The show was pulled of the air after its first few episodes due to public protests and pressure from religious bodies stating the show's mixed sex format was against Islamic principles. Culture Culture comes in many shapes and sizes. It includes areas such as politics, history, faith, mentality, behaviour and lifestyle. The following examples demonstrate how a lack of cultural sensitivity led to failure: -Sony Corporation promoted a Black-against-white ad in their multi-vignette PlayStation Portable campaign in 2006. The ad featured a strong-looking white woman, dressed in all white, clawing and dominating a subordinate Black woman. The ad was constructed to promote their new ceramic white PSP. It depicted racism for the black. -A golf ball manufacturing company packaged golf balls in packs of four for convenient purchase in Japan. Unfortunately, the number 4 is equivalent to the number 13 due it sounding like the word "death". The company had to repackage the product. Language The business world is littered with poor translations that have caused great embarrassment to their perpetrators due to their lack of cultural sensitivity. The following are some of the choicest examples: -IKEA once tried to sell a workbench called FARTFULL - not a hugely popular product for obvious reasons. - When colouring in 800,000 pixels on a map of India, Microsoft coloured eight of them in different shades of green to represent the disputed Kashmiri territory. The difference in greens meant Kashmir was shown as non-Indian, and the product was promptly banned in India. Microsoft was left to recall all Purposive Communication Page 55 Purposive Communication Page 56 -Both Clairol and the Irish alcoholic drink Irish Mist did not properly consider the German language when they launched their products there. Clairol's hair-curling iron "Mist Stick" and the drink "Irish Mist" both flopped - why? 'Mist' translates in German as "manure". -The Japanese seem to have a particular flair for naming products. The country has given us gems such as "homo soap", "coolpis", "Germ bread" and "Shito Mix". -A new facial cream with the name "Joni" was proposed for marketing in India. They changed the name since the word translated in Hindi meant "female genitals." - Coors had its slogan, "Turn it loose," translated into Spanish, where it became "Suffer from diarrhoea." All the examples cited above could easily have been avoided by conducting some basic research in respect to checking the concept, design, shape, colour, packaging, message or name in the target culture. In the majority of cases it is simply assumed that 'if it is OK for us it is OK for them'. If businesses want to succeed internationally, cultural sensitivity must be at the heart of everything they do; from their personal interaction and relationships with clients to the products/services they develop. This chapter focuses on the understanding of communication aids and strategies using tools of technology. LESSON OUTCOMES: At the end of this lesson, the students should be able to: 1.Convey ideas through oral, audio-visual, and/or web-based presentations for different target audiences in local and global settings using appropriate registers; 2. Adopt awareness of audience and context in presenting ideas; and 3. Create an audio-visual, and/or web-based presentation to promote cultural values http://www.kwintessential.co.uk/blog/category/culture/cultural-sensitibity.html LESSON 1: TECHNOLOGY –BASED COMMUNICATION TOOLS Communication combined with technology is called as backbone of social interaction. Here are some of the technology-based communication tools: Email Email has become a standard form of business communication, particularly for short messages that require action. This allows you to take care of a lot of customers, as well as partners and other stakeholders without lengthy conversations. Modern software allows you to send the same email to all interested parties so that you can keep your message, name and products in the forefront of their minds. Texting Texting has become the most personal form of business communication. The personal text number is reserved for a few close associates. Your communications by text tend to be more urgent than email. If a business is moving too slowly, you should examine whether you are taking full advantage of texting. Purposive Communication Page 57 Purposive Communication Page 58 Instant Messaging Instant messaging tends to be for longer discussions than texting. You can engage someone in another city, state or country in a conversation that can lead to a lucrative business deal. The advantage of this electronic conversation is that you can take time to think before you respond. Moreover, it is an application that can contribute to the success of a negotiation. In face-to-face conversations, it can be difficult to pause long enough to gather your thoughts. Social Networking Social network sites such as Facebook and MySpace can be essential to getting your message out. You will have to adjust your communication style to a more informal approach. Friends can be gathered on these sites. These can also be a place to do relationship marketing. Instead of sales pitches, place messages on these sites that sound like you have a good deal for Source : https://axerosolutions.com/blogs/timeisenhauer/pulse/283/5-foolproof-businesscommunication-tools-every-company-should-be-using your friends. Tweeting Private, Group Messaging, & Chat Tools The website Twitter allows you to broadcast very short messages called “tweets” to people who have elected to follow your posts. This is not the place for a long treatise. Instead, briefly refer to a new product, message or development a company is excited about. This may not result in immediate sales, but it will result in awareness of a company in the marketplace. Blogs The word “blog” is short for “web log.” These sites are often written by amateurs, but getting a blogger to review a product or service can be a good way to spread the word about small business. Contact bloggers by email, usually listed on their blogs, and ask them to take a look at your product or service. You can spread the word informally and quickly through this technology-based communication. Many companies, from sole proprietorships to large corporations, have established their own blogs as a primary communication channel to the public. Discussion Forums Purposive Communication Page 59 Purposive Communication Page 60 LESON 2: MULTIMEDIA PRESENTATION Video Conferencing When you want to convey your message with physical gestures and facial expressions, this form of technology can be an effective communication tool. Using video-conferencing can help save travel money. If you and another person both have cameras and the right software, Multimedia uses a combination of different content forms such as text, audio, images, animations, video and interactive content. Multimedia is distinguished from mixed media in fine art; by including audio, forexample, it has a broader scope. you can see each other and talk to each other on your computers. This gives you the face-toface meeting you need without having to be in the same location. Source: http://smallbusiness.chron.com/examples-different-forms-technologymediatedcommunication-34313.html A presentation program is a software package used to display information in the form of a slide show. It has three major functions: an editor that allows text to be inserted and formatted, a method for inserting and manipulating graphic images, and a slide-show system to display the content. A multimedia presentation differs from a normal presentation in that it contains some form of animation or media. Typically a multimedia presentation contains at least one of the following elements: Video or movie clip. Animation Sound (this could be a voice-over, background music or sound clips) Twelve Tips for Creating Effective Presentations PowerPoint has become the de facto presentation tool for most of us. However, when used improperly, PowerPoint slides can actually interfere with communication, rather than pro mote it. Communications researchers have identified concepts that have subtancial implication for how we can create the most effective presentations (Harrington and Car, 2010). Harrington and Car (2010) suggested some tips with good and bad visual examples to help presenters identify and avoid bad PowerPoint habits, and to promote awareness of how nest to use Powerpoint to create effective and meaningful presentations. 1. Design a template that is free from distracting items. ∙ Strive for simplicity and readability. ∙ When creating your template, keep in mind the advice of French writer Antoine de Saint-Exupéry: “A designer knows he has achieved perfection not when there is nothing left to add, but when there is nothing left to take away.” 2. Ensure your template promotes readability. ∙ Choose color combinations that make it easy for the audience to read your slides. Purposive Communication Page 61 Purposive Communication Page 62 3. Select a sans serif font. ∙ Limit your fonts to two, at most. ∙ Sans serif fonts (translated as “without serifs”), such as Calibri, Arial and Trebuchet, produce a cleaner, less cluttered, easier to read look. 4. Always use fonts that are 24 point or larger. ∙ Displaying text that is too small to read compromises your message and frustrates your audience. ∙ If you have more text than can reasonably fit on a screen using at least 24 point fonts, then either: (a) create another slide or (b) shorten your text. As noted in tip #11, let your handout contain the detailed information and use your presentation to highlight your most significant points. 5. Incorporate high quality photos, images or diagrams that reinforce your verbal message. ∙ Avoid clip art, since it can make your presentation look dated and unprofessional. ∙ Incorporating your text into the photo presents a more unified and visually pleasing message than having them completely separate. 9. Use animation, slide transitions, audio, and video sparingly ∙ The audience’s attention is immediately drawn to the movement on the screen, thus breaking their concentration on the presentation content. 10. Highlight the most important information in tables and graphs. ∙ If needed, use builds to present data in a series of bite-sizes pieces. ∙ Consider the pace when presenting tables/graphs on screen. 11. Create a handout to accompany your presentation. ∙ Slides should be designed to visually enhance (not summarize) your presentation. ∙ Handouts should be well-written comprehensive reports, containing detailed information such as complex charts, data, analyses, and refrences. 12. Be passionate about your topic. ∙ The slides should serve to enhance your oral presentation ∙ Bullet points are not passionate, not even wen they arre highly decorated. 6. Use phrases or abbreviated sentences, rather than full sentences. ∙ With the possible exception of short direct quotes, keep full sentences in your oral presentation and off the screen. ∙ “Humans are incapable of reading and comprehending text on a screen and listening to a speaker at the same time. Therefore, lots of text (almost any text!), and long, complete sentences are bad, Bad, BAD” (Reynolds, 2010, p. 57). 7. Use bullet points sparingly. If using bullet points, be sure they are less than six words long. ∙ The most effective sliders are often with the least text. ∙ If you want to use and outline organizer your talk, keep it on paper rather that putting it on as bullets. 8. Eliminate the use of headings or titles unless they communicate the main message. ∙ Headings should not be used to introduce or identify the topic of the slide, though they may be useful to call attention to the main finding in a chart or graph. ∙ Otherwise, headings tend to be redundant and should be eliminated. Purposive Communication Page 63 Purposive Communication Page 64 2. Goals and Objectives Consider these: 1. Changes you wish to cause 2. Steps to reach goals 3. Who, what ,when, how to communicate 3. Target Audience This chapter focuses on the communication purposes. Discussion on informative, persuasive and argumentative communication and types of speeches and public speaking are covered in this chapter. Consider these: 1. Defining audience 2. What they know 3. What influences them 4. Communication Impediments LESSON OUTCOMES: 4. Key messages At the end of this lesson, the students should be able to: 1. Convey ideas through oral, audio-visual, and/or web-based presentations for different target audiences in local and global settings using appropriate registers; 2. Create clear, coherent, and effective communication materials; 3. Present idea persuasively using appropriate language registers,tone, facial expressions Consider these: 1. Essential ideas 2. The Message 3. Specific needs are understood and acted upon 5. Communication Strategies and gestures; and 4. Adopt awareness of audience and context in presenting ideas. Consider these: 1. LESSON 1: UNDERSTANDING CONVENTIONS OF TRADITIONAL GENRES Resources 2. Effective communication 3. Outcomes delivery Steps in Communication Planning 6. Evaluation 5. Research and analyze or take stock of current situation. Consider these: Consider these: 1. Research 2. Resources 3. Communication Opportunities 4. Communication Impediments 1. Communication plan 2. Message 3. Audience 4. Surveys 5. Audits 6. Focus group sessions Purposive Communication Page 65 Purposive Communication Page 66 LESSON 2: TYPES OF COMMUNICATION Example of an Unprofessional E-mail A. WRITTEN COMMUNICATION There are several types of written communication discussed in this section: electronic mail, memoranda, letters, reports and papers. Professionalism and effectiveness in written communication depends on choosing the best type by which to express a subject, and then following basic guidelines for conveying your message to the recipient. From: esfstudent@mailbox.edu To: facultymember@esf.edu i need a drop slip to dorp my class but you were’nt in your office before. when will you be around? Example of a Professional Polite E-mail 1. Electronic Correspondence Electronic mail, or e-mail, is appropriate for short, rapid communications. It is not effective for conveying large amounts of information or complex information. Because e-mail is quick and easy, it is sometimes mistakenly considered informal. And certainly, when you correspond with friends, informality is acceptable. But in other circumstances, e-mail should be formal and professional. Below are some general considerations for professional e-mail correspondence and etiquette (Hassett, 2003): • • From: esfstudent@mailbox.edu To: facultymember@esf.edu Subject: advisee dropping a class Hello Dr. Forest, I would like to drop one of my classes. Do you have a convenient time today when I may stop by your office for your signature? • Consider the audience and occasion, and avoid informality and jargon Thanks, Use a courteous tone in your message; avoid provoking misunderstanding or anger by being too abrupt • Indicate the subject of the message • Greet the addressee appropriately • Organize your thoughts and communicate them clearly and concisely • Keep e-mail messages brief and to the point • Use proper English, grammar, and spelling; proofread before sending • Sign your name to the message • Read messages you receive carefully before responding Nice Student If you need time to compose a reply, send a brief message acknowledging receipt and communicating when you intend to respond in full Purposive Communication Page 67 2. Memoranda A memorandum, or memo, is used to communicate specific information, usually within a department, or organization. It is more formal than an e-mail, and can be used to transmit more information– up to a page or two. Still, the information you convey should be relatively straightforward and uncomplicated. Below are some general guidelines for memos. • Format a memo with To, From, Date, and Subject (or Re:) lines • Use proper English, grammar, and spelling • Use a courteous, professional tone • Be clear and concise • Clearly state if a reply or other action is required or requested • Print the memo on letterhead or a word-processing memo template Purposive Communication Page 68 Example Memorandum 3. Letters Letters are the means of formal, professional communication with others outside an organization. Sometimes, letters are used within an organization to formally present a secondary document, such as a committee report. Letters can convey more detail than a memo, and should always be used to introduce a resume. Below are general guidelines for drafting a letter as well as an example business letter. • Format a letter with the complete address of the recipient • Print the letter on letterhead, or compose a header with the sender’s complete address and contact information • Use a formal greeting, such as “Dear” or “To whom it may concern” • Organize the information, and be clear and concise • Include a formal closing, such as “Sincerely” and sign and print your name Example Business Letter Purposive Communication Page 69 Purposive Communication Page 70 4. Reports and Papers Sample Police Report One of the most frequent forms of written communication that you will use to complete assignments in your courses is the report or paper. The format for particular assignments will often be given by a professor, but below are the basic elements of a report and guidelines to follow for writing a paper. Also see the section on Citation. Basic Components of a Report • Introduction • Literature Review • Methods and Materials • Results • Discussion • Conclusions • Bibliography General Guidelines for Writing Papers • Use one inch margins, 12 point font, double-line spacing, and page numbers • Avoid second person and passive voice • Spell-check, grammar-check, and proofread (Spell check alone is insufficient! For example, “Magellan circumcised the glob” does not contain spelling errors, but is certainly not the intended communication) (Henriksson, 2001). • Organize your thoughts by preparing an outline before writing • Start a paper with an introduction and end with a conclusion •Cite your sources internally, and include a works cited and/or bibliography in proper format (see the citation section of this handbook) Source: https://www.google.com.ph/search?q=sample+police+report+of+accident+in+the+philippines&sa=X&biw=1366&bih=613&t bm=isch&source=iu&ictx=1&fir=npjGkhY8wDWPAM%253A%252CVAEMpvwrlhkzlM%252C_&usg= IwNG4efCWvY4pmzJfDB fYa10rUk%3D&ved=0ahUKEwiFhaO3x5_aAhULl5QKHaOxDdwQ9QEIMjAC#imgrc=OPckH5tkslg01M: Purposive Communication Page 71 Purposive Communication Page 72 B. ORAL COMMUNICATION Oral communications include simple telephone calls, interviews for class projects or research studies, and informal and formal presentations. Having a clear idea of what you want to say or ask is essential to effective oral communications. 1. Telephone Conversations Telephone contact between forest and natural resource managers and the general public or client groups is very common. Throughout your career, you will need to answer incoming telephone calls politely, even when conversing with a disgruntled individual. When contacting other individuals by telephone, consider these steps. often provide more detailed information because of the more-personalized contact between you and the interviewee. Choose the form that is best based on project requirements and travel limitations. • Use an interview guide (i.e., a list of questions to be used during the interview). An interview guide will help you keep the conversation focused and will prevent you from forgetting any important questions. Make sure the questions apply to the interviewee’s personal experience. • Always introduce yourself and the purpose of the interview. • Let the interviewee know the purpose for which you will be using his/her comments. •Obtain permission to conduct the interview. If you plan on tape recording an interview, always ask permission before turning on the tape recorder, then ask permission again once the tape is recording. Let the interviewee know that he/she can stop the interview at any time. • Always thank the interviewee at the end of the conversation. • Always send the interviewee a copy of any reports resulting from the project. • Prepare a list of questions to ask the person you are contacting prior to making the phone call •Always clearly identify yourself and your affiliation. o Example: My name is . I am a student at the SUNY College of Environmental Science and Forestry in Syracuse. 3. Presentations especially useful when distance prevents you from interviewing in person. In person interviews Presentations can either be informal (for example, a class presentation or a short presentation at a meeting) or more formal, such as a presentation at a workshop or conference, and speeches. Similar guidelines apply to both types of presentations. Both general guidelines and guidelines specifically, for Power Point and overhead projector presentations are included below. • Know your audience. Understanding the interests of your audience is essential to understanding how to focus your presentation. Speak to the interests and educational level of your audience. • Dress appropriately. Dressing appropriately for your audience can help to connect you to your audience. For example, dressing in a formal suit for an audience of foresters may create a psychological barrier between you and your audience. In this instance, casual but neat attire may make you more approachable to your audience. For formal conference presentations, a suit may be more appropriate. If you are unsure about the dress code for an event, ask someone who has attended a similar conference or meeting before. • Carefully structure your presentation. Your presentation should be well organized and include the following: o a title slide that shows your name and the title of your presentation, o the body of information you are presenting, and o a clear conclusion that summarizes your presentation (never end with “that’s it.”) • The information on the slides should be presented in a logical order, beginning with basic concepts and leading into more detailed information towards the end of your presentation. Purposive Communication Purposive Communication •State your purpose for calling. o Example: I am working on a project for my forest management class, and was wondering if you could provide some input for this project based on your experience as a forest manager. •Ask your questions clearly without interrupting the person you are talking to, and take notes on the conversation. • Thank the person for his or her assistance. • Be prepared to leave a message in case the person is not available. When leaving a message on an answering machine, clearly state your name and, speaking slowly, include your phone number and the purpose of your call. Also indicate if you will be calling the individual back or if you’d like him/her to return your call. 2. Interviews Often interviews are required for class projects or qualitative research studies. If you plan on conducting a qualitative research project, coursework in qualitative research methods will be necessary. Because of the complexity involved in conducting qualitative research interviews, this section of this manual will discuss conducting an interview for a class project only. Some guidelines for conducting basic interviews for class projects follow. •Understand the benefits of telephone versus in-person interviews. Telephone interviews are Page 73 Page 74 • Practice your presentation. Practicing your presentation beforehand is always a good idea. Have a friend or family member watch your presentation. Ask him or her to let you know if you have any mannerisms (e.g., saying “ummm” frequently, turning your back to the audience, etc...) that you need to eliminate, or if any of the concepts presented do not make sense. Practicing will also allow you to identify any portions of your presentation that do not flow properly and that need further work. • Know the time limit for your presentation. Most class and conference presentations have a time limit that is strictly enforced by an instructor or moderator. Make sure that your presentation does not go beyond this time limit. Timing your presentation beforehand will clarify if you need to cut back on the amount of material presented. • Stimulate audience interest. There are several ways that a presenter can increase the audience’s interest in the presentation. • Use visual media when appropriate. For panel presentations, visual media are often not used. For most other presentations, however, providing a visual aspect to your presentation can be extremely effective in maintaining audience interest in your topic. • Always speak enthusiastically (never in a monotone). • Get the audience involved in your presentation. Asking the audience questions and bringing in examples of items that can be passed around (e.g., field equipment or publications) are two ways to get the audience involved. • Call for questions after your presentation. Once you have concluded, ask the audience members if they have any questions for you. Never put down or downplay the importance of any question, as this will discourage others in the audience from asking questions. Never argue a point of view during a question and answer period; just state your response and end it there. Finally, if you do not know the answer to a question, admit it. You can always say that you don’t know the answer at that time but can find out the answer and respond to the audience member later with the information. .. Sample Political Speech Speech of His Excellency Ferdinand E. Marcos President of the Philippines On a New Philippines, a New Republic [Delivered on June 18, 1981] A NEW PHILIPPINES, A NEW REPUBLIC Sixteen years ago, on this same sacred ground, we shared together a vision of Filipino greatness. It was this vision which guided us in the gravest crises; we owe to it our triumphs; it has kept us whole. You will recall that on my second mandate, I gave it a definition– the New Filipinism. I said then that “the New Filipinism represents the discipline and the ethic of independence, that it seeks the substance rather than the shadow of freedom, that it develops independence beyond formality to reality.” Let me recall to you the exact words, for they provide a perspective for today: “Under the influence of this spirit, we have started to re-examine our own narrow outlook on ourselves and the world; we have ceased to think ourselves as a small and insignificant nation, a non-entity in world affairs; we have started to re-examine the time-honored postulates by which we have lived in the past five hundred years, and have lifted our sights to wider horizons and more ambitious and peremptory goals. “In the foreseeable future, this new spirit will prompt us to re-examine our own basic institutions and perhaps recast them to make them more responsive to the needs of our people. We must not hesitate, from a sense of racial timidity, to change what should be changed. From hereon we should be guided only by our own sense of what will advance, protect and fulfill our national interest. “We must aim at the reality rather than the formality of democracy. Political and social institutions that merely perpetuate entrenched privileges based on the accident of birth must be remolded or replaced with new ones that promote genuine democracy. . . “We must not be afraid of innovation in our social, economic, political and cultural life. The New Filipinism is a call for innovation– a revolution directed against the sterile and self-defeating habits of the race but without bloodshed and without fratricide. “The New Filipinism is. ultimately a call to greatness. But any form of greatness must begin with an act of will. . . Transformed by the New Filipinism, the Filipino people will no longer return to the sterility, mediocrity and timidity of the past. The new spirit of achievement will be indestructible, and will fashion, in time, a great nation of Asia.” In connection, I asked you, the Filipino people, whether we should venture into a new world of possibility or retreat to the safety of a familiar but sterile past, and your answer was– we should cross the frontier. Twelve years have passed since we enunciated the New Filipinism. We have not only re-examined our outlook on ourselves and the world; we have, in fact, changed it– as well as the world’s regard for us. That foreseeable future of re-examination of our basic political and social institutions has come to pass: we have radically changed our institutions; we created a new social and political order. In sum, we changed what needed to be changed. Purposive Communication Page 75 Purposive Communication Page 76 That all this had to be done under a crisis government attests to the strength, the compelling power, of the vision rather than its weakness. There was a profound sense of historical necessity when eight years ago, we have had to proclaim martial law. The measures then undertaken were swift and sweeping, as it became evident that slow deliberation and political opportunism in all its forms, subversion, and secession, were endangering the life and liberty of the nation. This is neither the time nor place to review once again the undeniable achievements of the period– the reorientation of economic policy, the recasting of attitudes and the revolution in society. Rather is this the time for another re-examination, for having achieved so much, the question now is whether we have achieved enough. It was not meant for this generation– a generation which has seen the horrors of war and confronted the challenges of peace– merely to win the struggle for national survival. We were not meant, perhaps, simply to surmount crisis, heroic as that may be, but to achieve national harmony, economic prosperity and social equality. Some may call it fate, others destiny, but whatever its name, history has a will and logic which a people can only ignore at its own peril. Your overwhelming mandate appear toconfirm this fate. So, then, we must start anew. Sixteen years ago, we woke up to a world in change. Now we are in a world of crisis and contradictions. The Third World nations need to be self-reliant in a world that is irrevocably interdependent. All nations recognize the imperative necessity for a new world economic order but few nations, especially the rich, would accept a change in their own economies. There is a clamor for peace and a preparation for war. We need to cooperate but persist to take advantage. Meanwhile, the poor, which make up two-thirds of the world’s peoples, are bewildered and resentful of the high professions and low intentions of the privileged. It is against this setting that we have dedicated ourselves to the pursuit of a vision– Jose Rizal’s century-old prophecy of a New Philippines. We are also infected with the world’s malaise, a particular reflection of its crises and contradictions. We are not, therefore, exempt from the difficulties of the times. Still, we have seen to the transformation of society. Institutions like barangay democracy have been established in order to give our people true control of their lives in community. At a time when the common people of many nations no longer feel sovereign in their lives, our own people, through the barangays, have a sense of purpose and control. The institutions, let us frankly admit, are imperfect; they are young. But they are anchored on a philosophy that Filipinos recognize as their own– the philosophy, or the ideology, if you will, of national liberation. But where institutions are the protection of men, it is men who run them, and in this there are more imperfections still. The reason for the failure of some is obvious: they have not “internalized,” as Mabini once pointed out in the original revolution, the principles and tenets of the New Society. Thus we have experienced and heard of abuses and injustice, of privilege and indifference, illnesses of old which plague our national life, which can no longer be endured either by this leadership or by our people. These illnesses– the social cancer, as it were– have their roots in the colonial past. They should no longer be a part of us. We must, therefore, resist all the blandishments of the merchants of mendicancy, the propagators of the past, the advocates of colonial restoration. Social injustice, graft and corruption, the abuse of power and the misuse of privilege, were partly collaboration with and partly resistance of an abject people to a government which was not theirs. But we now live basically on our own terms. We have no right to betray ourselves. This was the noble purpose of the sacrifices and lives of our heroic forefathers. It was for this purpose that they established the first authentic Filipino republic– the first Asian Republic– nearly a century ago and it is the purpose of our New Republic, which we inaugurate today, keeping faith faith with the vision of unity, equality, and liberty. What is then new in our republic is its fidelity to our historical legacy and its repudiation of the colonial past, in so far that its opportunism and mendacity have left their mark upon us. Possessed of our identity, restored to our destiny, we can meet any external challenge and bear any difficulty. But the way of national liberation is not imperilled by forces outside of ourselves; it is ourselves that we must ultimately conquer. Tempting, indeed, is the comfort of collaboration against the perils of resistance; a royal road seduces those who would progress without sacrifice, who would be free without effort. Yet history has marked this as a false road whose destination is enslavement and oblivion. In this regard, there can be no one to look to; there can be no outside savior. There is only us– the Filipinos. We cannot survive, we cannot advance without being one race, one nation. We have known where division has led us– let us dare where unity must lead us. The national unity that is so vital to our existence is a covenant between each and every Filipino; it is also a covenant between the leader and his people. The rare honor that you have bestowed on me as your thrice-elected leader imposes on my person– and those closest to me– a debt, an obligation, that I cannot shirk and a pledge that I dare not betray. Let history judge me harshly on this, my renewed pledge: that until every Filipino can say with conviction that he has been liberated from the bondage of ignorance, poverty, and disease– that until he can call his mind, body, and spirit truly his own, I shall have failed you and betrayed your trust. From you, my countrymen, I ask the utmost commitment, the limits of your capacities as citizens, the endurance of all hardships and sacrifices for the common good– not as a personal demand but as a way of your keeping faith with the vision of our race. Give all that you can give to your country, and, God-willing, I will give you, with your support, a society that will respond to all your needs for a decent and honorable life. We have not been brought into this world simply to enjoy and indulge a brief existence. The poorest among us have a sense of life as meaningful existence. In our most miserable state, we are a part of mankind and its noble dream. We may call it, as we call it now, Filipino humanism, a nationalist humanism, but behind the concept and the precept is that certain knowledge within us that Man is the wonder of creation, that all of us must, in the end, realize ourselves in the service of our common humanity. Let us call on the intransigent to realize their just purposes with us; let us awaken the unconscious and enlighten the misled; let us listen to our detractors in honest counsel. Let us, in sum, get together, bind the wounds of the past, and, in one united effort, realize the aspirations of our people. ! We must also be firm in our resolution and not compromise our aims. History is a merciless and at times even a cruel judge. As your president, I will risk the judgment, but as your fellow-countryman, I urgently appeal to you to spare the next generations from the retribution which could be brought about by our own complacency. We must liberate ourselves for the sake of a new republic, the inevitable child of the new society. As I asked you twelves years ago, I ask you now: let us cross one more frontier! Source: Presidential Museum and Library Marcos, F. E. (1981). Speeches by President Ferdinand E. Marcos. [Manila] : Presidential Library. We look back on the First Republic because it was self-proclaimed by the Filipino people on June 12, 1898; for three hundred and fifty years, the inarticulated aspirations of the people had inexorably led to this event. There were, to be sure, two other independence days– on October 14, 1943 under the sponsorship of the Japanese Imperial Army and on July 4, 1946, as a grant of the American government. It is not in denigration of these events that we choose to call ours the New Republic, with its historical roots in Kawit, but out of a rediscovered sense of identity and recovered national pride. Our national liberation must be an act of our own political will. Purposive Communication Page 77 Purposive Communication Page 78 C. GRAPHIC COMMUNICATION 2. Graphs Here are some guidelines to consider in preparing graphics for your written and oral communications. In every case, a good general rule is that the table, graph, or map should have enough information to be understood if removed from the larger report. A graph is simply a device to present data. Various types of graphs are utilized to convey various date. The table below provides guidelines for choosing the best graph to illustrate your data. Data requirements for common graph types 1. Tables A table is a convenient way to present data. Separate tables (numbered in the order of their first appearance) should be used for all but the simplest tabular material. Every table should have an informative title, which should make the tables intelligible without reference to the text. Rows and columns should be clearly identified. Most word processing packages have utilities to construct tables, and with a little practice a table can be customized by merging cells, using a combination of no, regular, or bold lines, changing column widths, etc. See Table 1 for an example. EXCEL Graph Type Dependent Variable (Y axis) Independent Variable (X axis) column bar continuous discrete/category discrete/category Continuous line pie area scatter continuous continuous (size of slices) continuous continuous discrete/category discrete/category (# of slices) discrete/category continuous For each type of graph, there are rules to ensure accurate data portrayal. Consider the data set presented in Table 1, and the following example graphs that use the data. Example Table Examples of Ineffective Graphs Figure 1 was generated in Microsoft Excel using default choices from the Chart Wizard feature. The graph may seem attractive, but is deficient for several reasons. First, the horizontal and vertical axes do not have labels, and the Series 1 box is not necessary. These are corrected in the next figure. Purposive Communication Page 79 Purposive Communication Page 80 Tufte (1997) has written three books devoted to display of quantitative information. The following “principles of graphical excellence” are adapted from his first volume. Figure 2 has the axes labeled and the Series 1 box removed. However, the horizontal axis does not include all the intervals, box lines and tick marks are too narrow, the weight and size of fonts for the axis titles are too small, and both the horizontal lines across the figure and default shaded background are unnecessary. These are corrected in the next figure. • • • Graphical excellence is the well-designed presentation of interesting data – a matter of substance, of statistics, and of design. Graphical excellence consists of complex ideas communicated with clarity, precision, and efficiency. Graphical excellence is that which gives the viewer the greatest number of ideas in the shortest time with the least ink in the smallest space. • Graphical excellence is nearly always multivariate 3. Maps Map is a spatial method of communicating information about a project, process, travel route or idea. The key word is spatial: how something is distributed in space or how you get from location A to location B. Getting from A to B can be described either through a map or through a set of steps, as anyone who has used MapQuest or Google maps knows. For some people, the map showing the route is a more effective way to communicate than the stepbystep instructions. Some spatial information is just best communicated with a map, and, depending on your audience, a map can provide effective context. There are several elements required for effective, professional maps. These are illustrated in the example maps following the descriptions of map elements. Figure 3 is in final form except for a lack of a descriptive title. Also, it is generally useful to add a trend line via regression analysis to convey the precision of the data and allow for prediction (when will the world champion pumpkin exceed 2000 pounds?). Example of an Effective Paragraph Map Elements Note that this graph represents the data appropriately, is numbered, has a caption, and labels for both axes. • Border. You should enclose it with a border to tie all the elements of the map together. •Title. The map title should be in large type and perhaps a different font. This gives your audience an initial idea about the subject of the map. •Neatlines. Various elements of the map, in particular the graphic map itself, may have a neatline surrounding them. In both example maps there is a neatline around the textural material, and in Map B the legend is surrounded by a neat line. •North Arrow. If the North Arrow is not present, N is assumed to be straight up the page. Although placement of the North Arrow is a graphics choice, providing this feature may eliminate questions. Purposive Communication Page 81 Purposive Communication Page 82 •Legend. A legend is usually required with any map. However, Map A is so simple that a legend is not required. If you use a legend, you should only list the features actually in the map. File names of features used in the mapping software should not be used. You should edit the legend so it makes sense. Since the viewer’s eye travels across your map from upper left to lower right, good practice requires that the legend then be in the lower right hand side of the map (see Map B). This is not always possible, however. •Scale. You must include a graphic scale bar and/or the mathematical scale. The verbal or textural scale (1 inch = 1 mile) should not be used because if the map is copied the verbal scale will no longer be correct. •Text boxes. These describe the purpose of the map and any other information important for the viewer to understand the map. MAP A •Metadata. Metadata is data about data. You should include the Projection or Coordinate system used. Coordinate system notations must include the Datum (like NAD27, NAD83, etc.) and the zone number. For example for Universal Transverse Mercator in central NY the notation is UTM Zone 18 NAD27 (or NAD83) and for a State Plane coordinate system the notation is SP Zone 1842 NAD83 (or NAD27). •Balance and white space. The map should be balanced so that it does not visually “fall over”. Map B is a more complex map showing the relationship between existing power substations andpower transmission lines to possible new sawmill locations. Since the ability to move raw material to the mill and finished products to market the road network is also important to understanding the problem of mill location. Also important is the location of forested land cover. The interrelationships between these variables are clearly evident in the map and would take many words to describe. Thus, the cliche– “a picture is worth a 1,000 words”– does sometimes hold true. This is really a judgment call on your part. White space is another artistic property of a map. A map with too little white space appears crowded, while a map with too much white space is not well tied together. Example Maps Map A shows the four counties that were used in a study. The map clearly shows the geographic position of the counties and the fact that they are spaced more or less uniformly in a North-South direction over the eastern half of the state of New York. To further define the spacing and orientation of the 4 counties would take many more words that those used above but the map instantly and clearly makes the distribution of the counties clear. MAP B Purposive Communication Page 83 Purposive Communication Page 84 For more information on creating effective, professional maps, see Dr. Herrington's PowerPoint presentation on map composition.7 Brewer’s (2005) text on Designing better Maps and her color assistant web site (Brewer 2006) provide more information on map design.8 CITATION Citation is an integral component of formal, professional communication. Although perhaps most strongly associated with written work, citation is important in oral and graphic communication also. If you use a quotation when giving a presentation, or copy a graph onto a PowerPoint slide, you must credit the original author. Likewise, if utilizing a chart or table from a book within your paper, even if you have added some information, you must reference the original creator of that chart or table. The purpose of citation is twofold. First, it references sources and ideas or words attributable to others and documents the research process. Second, it enables a reader to find the original work and words being referenced. If the author of a paper has paraphrased someone else’s idea, the reader may want to see the original sentences. The reader might also want to consult the original source to understand the context of a particular quotation. Thus, citation must provide all of the details necessary to find a referenced piece of literature. Different disciplines employ various citation formats. For example, the humanities typically use footnotes, whereas the natural sciences typically use parenthetical references. Citations are utilized within the body of a paper and they are also listed at the end of a document in either a Bibliography or a Works (or Literature) Cited.9 There are a number of accepted styles, such as Chicago, Turabian, Modern Language Association (MLA), and Council of Biology Editors (CBE). Different professors may provide various guidelines for referencing, just as different scholarly journals require different formats for their publications. Your primary objective is to be consistent and complete, and to learn the habit of referencing others’ works. Generally, the Literature Cited is a list of alphabetized sources, single-spaced with hanging indentation, with one line between entries. Below are online guides to consult and follow in the absence of specific guidelines. Plagiarism When you do not cite your sources, or keep close track of your research process, you run the risk of plagiarizing. Plagiarism is presenting someone else’s ideas, work, or words as if they were your own. Plagiarism includes copying from a source without citing it, using the same words without using quotation marks (even with a citation), or improperly paraphrasing (rewording) another's work. Always cite sources you consult. You must attribute words, ideas, interpretations, information, and knowledge that is not your own to the appropriate author or source. The College does not tolerate academic dishonesty. The penalty for plagiarism may be a grade of zero for a particular assignment, or failure of a course. The ESF policies on academic dishonesty are covered in the Student and Judicial Handbooks and in Academic Integrity @ ESF.10 Students are expected to read and understand these policies. Below are links to other webresources about plagiarism, even unintentional plagiarism (i.e., improper paraphrasing). Online Resources Avoiding Plagiarism. Purdue University Online Writing Lab. http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/research/r_plagiar.html Avoiding Plagiarism: Mastering the Art of Scholarship. University of California – Davis, Student Judicial Affairs. http://sja.ucdavis.edu/avoid.htm Plagiarism : What It is and How to Recognize and Avoid It. Indiana University Bloomington, Writing Tutorial Services. http://www.indiana.edu/%7Ewts/pamphlets/plagiarism.shtml#wwwplagiaris m Online Citation Guides A Research Guide for Students, by I. Lee ~ Various Styles http://www.aresearchguide.com/styleguides.html Purdue Online Writing Lab ~ MLA Style http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/research/r_mla.html#Handlin g University of Wisconsin Madison Writing Center ~ Chicago Style http://www.wisc.edu/writing/Handbook/DocChiWorksCited.htm l Purposive Communication Page 85 Purposive Communication Page 86 LESSON 3: PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT How to Create a Public Service Announcement A public service announcement, commonly known by the PSA acronym, is a message spread in the interest of the public. The objectives of PSAs are to raise awareness and change public attitudes, opinions, or even behavior towards an issue. These messages can be instructional, inspirational, or even shocking to elicit emotion and action. Jell (2010) suggested the following steps in creating a perfect public announcent: What do you want the world to know? That's the central question asked when you are creating a public service announcement (PSA), which is any message promoting programs, activities or services of federal, state or local governments or the programs, activities or services of non-profit organizations. Often in the form of commercials and print ads, PSAs are created to persuade an audience to take a favorable action. PSAs can create awareness, show the importance of a problem or issue, convey information, or promote a behavioral change. Whether you have a cause of your own or you are an educator, PSAs create a forum for learners to actively participate in a project that allows them to become stewards of — and advocates for — social change. PSAs came into being with the entry of the United States into World War II. Radio broadcasters and advertising agencies created a council that offered their skills and facilities to the war effort, creating messages such as, "Loose lips sink ships," "Keep 'em Rolling" and a variety of exhortations to buy War Bonds. Today that same council, the Advertising Council, now serves as a facilitating agency and clearing house for nationwide campaigns that have become a familiar part of daily life. " Smokey the Bear" was invented by the Ad Council to personify its "Only You Can Prevent Forest Fires" campaign; "A Mind Is a Terrible Thing to Waste" raised millions for the United Negro College Fund; the American Cancer Society's "Fight Cancer with a Checkup and a Check" raised public awareness as well as funds for research and patient services. Yet the most recognized PSA consisted of only an egg, a frying pan and these 15 words: "This is your brain. This is drugs. This is your brain on drugs. Any question?" This only goes to show the massive impact PSAs have on our culture and our society. You can make an impact too! 1. Choose your topic. Pick a subject that is important to you, as well as one you can visualize. Keep your focus narrow and to the point. More than one idea confuses your audience, so have one main idea per PSA. 2. Time for some research - you need to know your stuff! Try to get the most current and up to date facts on your topic. Statistics and references can add to a PSA. You want to be convincing and accurate. 3. Consider your audience. Are you targeting parents, teens, teachers or some other social group? Consider your target audience's needs, preferences, as well as the things that might turn them off. They are the ones you want to rally to action. The action suggested by the PSA can be almost anything. It can be spelled out or implied in your PSA, just make sure that message is clear. 4. Grab your audience's attention. You might use visual effects, an emotional response, humor, or surprise to catch your target audience. Be careful, however, of using scare tactics. Attention getters are needed, but they must be carefully selected. For example, when filming a PSA about controlling anger, a glass-framed picture of a family can be shattered on camera. This was dramatic, but not melodramatic. Staging a scene between two angry people to convey the same idea is more difficult to do effectively. 5. Create a script and keep your script to a few simple statements. A 30-second PSA will typically require about 5 to 7 concise assertions. Highlight the major and minor points that you want to make. Be sure the information presented in the PSA is based on up-todate, accurate research, findings and/or data. 6. Storyboard your script. 7. Film your footage and edit your PSA. 8. Find your audience and get their reaction. How do they respond and is it in the way you expected? Your goal is to call your audience to action. Are they inspired? Purposive Communication Page 87 Purposive Communication Page 88 Through a Public Service Announcement you can bring your community together around a subject that is important to you. Will your PSA be on education, poverty, drunk driving, or maybe even Haiti disaster relief? For ideas and examples, check out the Ad Council and the Ad Council Gallery. Keep your message clear and simple, and target your intended audience. Take advantage of your interests, and practice important critical thinking and literacy skills because you will be spreading important social, economic, and political topics. About the Author: Jaclyn Bell is a digital media instructor and the director of community content for OneSeventeen Media Inc. as well as the competition director of the Young Minds Digital Times Student Film Competition. This chapter presents communication for academic purposes. LEARNING OUTCOMES: At the end of this lesson, the students should be able to: 1. Write and present academic papers using appropriate tone,style,conventions and reference styles; 2. Adopt awareness of audience and context in presenting ideas; 3. Convey ideas through oral,audio-visual,and/or web-based presentations for different target audiences in local and global settings using appropriate registers; LESSON 1: Research Paper There are many different features available for looking at the purposeful uses of communication. One of the most common tasks that students will encounter throughout your academic career is writing a research paper. You will spend a semester writing a research paper either in your field of study or in area in which you are interested .You will learn how to use research materials available in libraries and online, and investigate a topic of your choice, gather materials, and organize them into a research paper. Without a doubt, writing a research paper will require patience and rigorous discipline, but hopefully the process will also enable you to pick up a few helpful skills along the way. The immediate purpose of a research paper is to learn about something and to present it in written form. Knowing how to write the research paper is a pre-requisite skill across the disciplines – history, science, natural science, economics, business, management, language-in both secondary and tertiary levels, and yet, most teachers will no longer bother to teach you the rudiments of research because they assume you would have probably learned these before hand. It is important to your academic survival that you master the skills involved in research paper writing. If you wish to pursue career in academe, law, journalism, or any field that Purposive Communication Page 89 Purposive Communication Page 90 requires the presentation and analysis of information or argumentation, you will realize that research paper writing is an invaluable skill to possess. What is a Research Paper? Research paper goes by a surprising number of names, from the ordinary critical essay to the ubiquitous term paper to the more daunting thesis or dissertation. However, there is a set of core principles that define and differentiate the research paper from other forms of composition writing. For starters, a research paper is primarily characterized by its use of data gathered from a wide range of sources to clarify, analyze, expound on, discover, discuss, and debate an idea.It entails undertaking a scholarly endeavor and acquainting yourself with the variety of materials at your disposal (e.g., the library, various institutions, field interviews, questionnaires, the internet, email and the like) to support their claims. A research paper goes beyond mere report writing, as it is an exercise in both critical reading and writing. LESSON 2: Types of Research Paper What are the types of research papers? Research papers can be written across disciplines, regardless of the subject area. However, the nature of the research paper can only be one of the two things: Analytical or Argumentative. Analytical Papers An analytical research paper is one that uses evidence to study the facets involved in an issue or topic.By definition, analysis entails breaking up a concept into component parts, and restructuring them from your own perspective into a composite whole. A student who wishes to do an analytical paper on the forces that led to the second Edsa Revolution will have to survey information about the event, and then subject the data to close critical reading and thinking in order to draw personal conclusions. Analytical paper requires a writer to go beyond parts and subjecting the components to close scrutiny and interpretation. If you choose to do an analytical paper, it is with the understanding that you are not making judgments on the topic per se, but that you are going to explore a topic for the purpose of being able to draw reasonable conclusions at the end. These conclusions are personal opinion shaped by a critical understanding of the issues at stake.Example of these can be Literay Analysis and Potical Science Paper. Argumentative Papers In contrast to analytical papers, argumentative papers require you to take a stand on an issue and defend it. In an analytical paper, it would be reasonable to assume that you do not yet have a fixed or firm conclusion in your head when you begin the paper. But in argumentative paper, it is clear from the start that you are advocating for something, and more importantly, you want your reader to share your opinion, and will present evidence to make your stand convincing. In the end, it is not so much what you say that really matters but how you can prove it. It is possible that your stand may be something your teacher disagrees with personally, but even he/she cannot discredit you if you present an airtight argument. Purposive Communication Page 91 Purposive Communication Page 92 Sample Political Science Paper Cleofas, Jeseca Nina C. May 21, 2017 Mocha Uson’s dubious Appointment as PCOO Asec Mocha Uson was appointed as Assistant Secretary in the Presidential Communications Operations Office (PCOO) last May 8, 2017. It was said to be that her role is to help the government in spreading its accomplishments as well as its messages to Filipinos and to the media. Nevertheless, it was being associated with issues and questioned Mocha Uson’s appointment in the government. President Rodrigo Duterte shows Spoils System rather than Merit System who appoints someone in the civil service based on political favoritism. Prior to this, it was witnessed that Mocha Uson buoyed Pres. Rodrigo Duterte in the last election first and foremost through her blog which obtained almost 5 million followers. Duterte in an interview said that “I am just paying back because she supported me in the last election; it is the right thing to do.” dances inside and outside the country. In addition to that, her position as Asec of PCOO has nothing to do with her degree in College. Even though it must not be the cause to disqualify her, she must have atleast an experience doing the same job. As we recall before the appointment in PCOO, Mocha Uson was actually given a position as a board member in MTRCB last January which firsthand disapproved by the netizens. According to Presidential Decree 1986, atleast 15 of the board members may come from the movie and television industry. However; it will not guarantee her in a higher position since her term as a board member was not finish. There is no proof that she can really address the responsibility in connection to media which she recently called as “presstitutes” or prostitution in press. Given the fact that she even commented about the sex scenes in television after revealing her first mission - to get rid of soft-core pornography or soft porn in television shows airing during primetime, in contrast she said that “sex scenes on television are getting out of control”. Some of the media personnel and celebrities showed their censures to Mocha Uson’s appointment. One of them is Ogie Diaz who used to support Uson’s advocacies. However, he gave her an unsolicited advice: “You should study the position you are in. Not to rant in public as if you are being condemned by the 29 board members.” Moreover, John Lapus made it clear in his tweet that he was not happy by the announcement. It was followed by Mo Twister who shared the same opinion. And even Miss Universe, Mariel De Leon posted in her twitter account that she was surprised that the President gave the position to the unqualified. “I love my country so it breaks my heart to know someone like her got the position in the government” Mariel said. Margaux Justiniano Uson, a 34-year-old known by her screen name Mocha Uson secured fame as the leader of the Mocha Girls, an all-female sexy dance group. Uson earned a degree in Medical Technology from the University of Santo Tomas, and then attended Medical School in the same University after dropping out to pursue a career in the Music Industry. In an interview, one of the reasons why she stopped and later on decided to support the President was because of the murder of her father, an RTC Judge in Pangasinan. “I was a second year medical student when my father was murdered. He was an RTC Judge in Pangasinan, my hometown. He was killed in the line of duty in an ambush shooting. Several years later, still no justice for my father. This is what I ask myself – if my own father who is a Government Official, a JUDGE, has not been given justice, how much for for ordinary citizens? Can you just imagine what’s happening in our society? If a JUDGE who DISPENSES JUSTICE could not be given protection and justice by our government, how much more for ordinary folks? The main suspect in the murder of my father was a powerful POLITICIAN. We need a tough and strong president. We need an iron hand in dealing with criminals in this country. We need a president who is brave and who has genuine concern for our country and that is none other than Duterte!”, Mocha Uson responded. In the meantime, the appointment acquired several bashers and supporters for both Duterte’s decision and Uson’s acceptance of the said position. The thought of bringing Mocha into a higher position in the government shows Spoils System. In effect, netizens reacted on this announcement and came up with hilarious hashtag #DutertePleaseAppointMe. The basis was unexpectedly brought up not because of her credibility and competence rather her popularity alone as a blogger who earns 5 million followers. Thus; if because of the 5 million followers made her the Asec of PCOO, what would the government might offer, then? If we still remember, Mocha Uson used to give sex-tips on her blog and performed malicious On a post in Facebook account, netizens were being asked of “What is your opinion about the appointment of Mocha Uson as Asec of PCOO?” Most of the answers bared disapproval for some says, “I did not appreciate the fact that an important position will be given to an inexperienced individual. Yes, technically she is qualified but is she efficient and effective? Yes, she has a background in journalism but based on her past posts and the way she communicates herself are clear to say that she’s not fully groomed to take the position.” One says, “I’m pro-Duterte but appointing her as Asec of PCOO was a joke! What will she do there? Teaching sex education to the higher ups? So that they can last long in bed? What a drag.” Purposive Communication Purposive Communication Page 93 Page 93 says, “Everyone can be qualified as long as they will take the task seriously. Everyone can prove and improve themselves. We don’t know what will happen now so for the support, let us trust each other.” Comparatively, one says, “Please don’t think that by demeaning her livelihood, making fun of her profession, belittling her personality makes you a better candidate to be PCOO Asec or simply a better human being altogether.” Under the circumstances, President Rodrigo Duterte defended Mocha Uson on her appointment. In a press conference before departing for his visits to Cambodia, China and Hong Kong, the president said that Uson has a "structured mind." "There's nothing wrong with the woman, the girl. She's bright. She's articulate," Duterte told members of the press. Duterte noted that Uson helped him during his campaign and that it was time for him to give back. The president stressed that Uson's background as a former sex guru does not disqualify her from serving the public. As a matter of fact, many times that Mocha Uson was being asked by the press if she will accept if the President offers her a position in the government. And she said, “I just want to clarify that I don’t have any intention to enter politics. I don’t have plans even I will be offered to. I will not accept any position in the government since it is not my field. I believe you don’t need to have a position or a title to help the government or to help the country.” Surprisingly, the appointment was suddenly announced by Mr. Martin Andanar, the PCOO secretary. Explicitly, many critiqued the credibility of Mocha Uson as the new Assistant Secretary of Presidential Communications Operations Office (PCOO). But despite of this, Mocha Uson managed to give positive reaction. In an interview in Unang Hirit, Igan Clavio asked about her bashers and she said, “I’m used to it. I will just focus on the problems we’re facing and not to my bashers in particular.” On the other hand, heaps of her supporters believed that she can supervise the task given to her. As communications secretary, Martin Andanar explained that Mocha is very influential that is why it is a big help in PCOO. Also, Tito Sotto called Mocha as a “good choice” for MTRCB so as to PCOO. Netizens who believed Mocha’s qualification Purposive Communication Page 95 Although this may be true, her appointment caught an attention not only with the netizens but also in the media and artist industry which resulted to a questionable promotion to the entertainer, performer and a blogger who happened to be the new PCOO Asec. The question arises be that as it may, qualification vs. credibility? Spoils system vs merit system? In the hope that “Change is coming!”, trusting someone to make in the government position needs to prevail. In conclusion, “Everyone must submit to governing authorities. For all authority comes from God, and those in positions of authority have been placed there by God” - (Romans 13:1). Whatever it may be like, only God can put an end to erroneous leadership or appointment. Altogether, we can make difference! Purposive Communication Page 96 LESSON 3: The Structure of Research Paper Almost all materials on research paper writing summarize research writing as a matter of completing a series of steps.Research is systematic. This implies that research follows procedure/steps that cannot be undertaken haphazardly but in a certain logical and orderly sequence. There are basically five steps that the institution follows. The research outputs must adhere to a standard format that provides guidelines or characteristics to achieve an optimum degree of order. These guidelines and formats were adapted by the ResearchDevelopment and Innovation Center from the American Psychological Association 6 th Edition. Abstract The abstract is the little bit of everything. It has concise statements that contain the summary of the contents of the paper. It should be written in complete sentences and paragraphs. It should not exceed to 250 words and should not include formula, diagrams or other illustrative materials. This part should include a brief introductory sentence, main objective, summarized method, results with numerical values enclosed in parentheses, main conclusion and main contribution. The researchers must include keywords. Keywords are terminologies that are used to retrieve the paper. Keywords must be carefully decided for it is essential to easily acquire the research manuscript among the pool of research work. 4.0 Results This presents the findings which are clearly and simply stated. This should be brief and direct. Moreso, when describing the results from a table or a figure, make sure to introduce the table or figure number and title on the first statement for easier locationof table or figure involved. 5.0 Discussion This is where results should be communicated: What principles have been established or reinforced? What generalizations can be drawn? Are the findings comparable to other findings or to expectations based on previous work and in what ways? Are there any theoretical implications of the results? When these questions are addressed, the presented evidence in results section should be the focused of the discussion. This should be interpretative not just a restatement of the results. Conclusion This section enumerates the principal findings of the research. This answers the objectives of the study. 1.0 Introduction This part enables the reader to understand the context or territory of the study. This is where we can read the trends and issues, objectives and main contributions of the study. These are written in paragraphs and proper citations must be observed. 2.0 Literature Review. Recommendation In paragraph form, this section presents where the results of the study are directed. Acknowledgement This serves as the foundation of the research for it states how and why researchers come up with the topic objectives. Like the Introduction, this is written in paragraphs with technically correct sentences. Properly literature-reviewed research papers could answer the trickiest questions of critics. 3.0 Research Methods This will help to systematize your research by forcing you to identify what kind of data you will need for your paper and what is the best way to go about getting it. This part of the paper will provide sufficient information for the reader to duplicate the study and replicate Purposive Communication the results. The researchers should consider the Research Design, Research Locale, Population and Sampling/Key Informant Selection, Research Ethics, Research Instruments, Data Collection and Data Analysis. Page 97 This page mentions the assistance received from the advisers, professors and others to whom the researchers wish to express appreciation. This provides the opportunity to thank and recognize those who have assisted or contributed to the study but are not named as coauthors. This section must be written in no more than 3 sentences. References The reference section should begin on a new page with the title bold and left indented. The references should strictly follow the American Psychological Appreciation (APA) 6 th Edition, and written in 1.5 inch hanging indent. All reference types (journal, book, internet, etc.) are integrated and arranged alphabetically. Purposive Communication Page 98 The interview can be an indication to employers of how the candidate or employee will interact with supervisors, co-workers, and customers or resolve conflicts when they arise. On the other hand, non-verbal communication is also critical in an interview. Employers expect good eye contact, good posture, and “active” listening to their interviewee. The method of sending or receiving gestured or wordless messages is called Nonverbal communication. Consider the following seven types of non-verbal signals and cues we often use to communicate our interest in and to others. 1. Facial expressions: Facial expressions are the most common form of non-vebal communication. Countless emotions can be expressed through them without saying a word. Across cultures, the facial expressions for anger, surprise, fear, disgust happiness and sadness are the same. 2. Body movements and posture: We consciously or unconsciously communicate to the world through the way we move and carry ourselves. Non-verbal communication under this includes posture, bearing, stance, and subtle movements. The way others sit, walk, stand up, or hold their head may convey meaning that affected our perceptions of them. 3. Gestures: Misinterpretation might occur when we are insensitive with our gestures. As gestures can have different meaning across cultures and regions. Waving, pointing, pleading, and often using our hands when we are speaking in an animated way are some of these common gestures.. 4. Eye contact: Eye contact is an essential type of non-verbal communication. We can communicate many things; including interest, affection, hostility, or attraction by the way we simply look or stare at someone. To maintain the flow of conversation in communication, eye contact is very helpful. It can also assess another person’s response. 5. Touch (Haptics): Haptic communication is a means where people or animal communicate through the sense of touch. Touching is the most effective way to communicate our feelings and emotions. These include a firm handshake, timid tap on the shoulder, warm bear hug, reassuring pat on the back, patronizing pat on the head, and controlling grip on arm. 6. Space (Chronemics): This non-verbal communication refers to physical space. The need differs depending on the culture, situation, and closeness of the relationship. We can use physical space to communicate many different non-verbal messages, including signals of intimacy, aggression, dominance, or affection. 7. Voice (Paralanguage): Even when we do not talk or say a word, we can communicate through our voice. Important communication elements are the verbal speech sounds such as tone, pitch, volume, inflection, rhythm, and rate. When we talk to other people, we have to be careful with our words and be conscious with our voices. We may sound sarcatistic, angry, affectionate or confident This chapter focuses on communication for work purposes. Learning Outcomes: The students are expected to: 1. Create clear, coherent and effective communication materials. 2. Present ideas persuasively using appropriate language registers, tone, facial expressions and gestures. 3. Adopt awareness of audience and context in presenting ideas in communicating ideas. LESSON 1: Effective Communication in Work Environment Communication skills are necessary for the development of self-advocacy and selfdetermination for a lifelong success. They are how we give and receive information and convey our ideas and opinions with those around us. Communication comes in many forms: • verbal (sounds, language, and tone of voice) • aural (listening and hearing) • non-verbal (facial expressions, body language, and posture) • written (journals, emails, blogs, and text messages) • visual (signs, symbols, and pictures) It is important to develop a variety of skills for both communicating to others and learning how to interpret the information received from others. Knowing our audience and understanding how they need to receive information is equally important as knowing ourselves. To an employer, good communication skills are essential. In fact, employers consistently rank good communication skills at the top of the list for potential employees. During an interview, for example, employers are impressed by a job candidate who answers questions with more than one-word answers (such as yeah…nah…dunno), demonstrates that he or she is listening, and shares information and ideas (by asking questions for clarification and/or follow-up). Purposive Communication Page 100 Purposive Communication Page 101 depending on our voice tone delivery. These non-verbal speech sounds provide indirect but powerful clues into our true feelings and what we really mean. How to achieve effective communication? When the message is sent, fully received and understood by the audience, effective communication takes place.There’s a good communication when the right message received by the right person in right medium and at the right time. The audience may participate and involve in a productive conversation of the message depending on the nature of the message and audience. Elements to Achieve Effective Communication • The message must be clear, concise and complete (KISS - keep it short and simple). • The content of the message must be factually accurate. • • • The sender develops the content of the message. In the process, the sender decides on the medium (written or spoken) and the format (such as email, letter, leaflet, meeting, talk, press release, presentation, podcast.). The sender then transmits the communication by the relevant communication channel (such as presenting at a meeting of the heads of department, producing printed material, announcing on a website or in the press). The message then reaches the audience. The audience will then decide whether to respond and if so how. The audience response will have a particular content and format through their chosen communication channel. This may not be the same as the one the sender used to transmit the message (such as an email after a meeting where the sender gave their presentation) What makes a good communicator? The message can be a mix of factual and psychological aspects to give the message its full impact; rather than just dry facts or overly emotional in style. • The message should be relevant to the concerns of the audience. The language should be appropriate to the audience and communication medium. Avoid technical jargon unless talking to another professional. • The message should be positive and focused on solutions rather than listing problems. • The language should invite appropriate participation and engagement. The message should use the right medium for the intended audience, the context and the A powerful message needs to be delivered convincingly. There are three stages of communication to think about. Firstly, prepare well and understand what you want to communicate. Next, be confident to the point and focused on solutions. Finally, let the person or group you are communicating with have the opportunity to respond and listen to what they are telling you. How a good communicator puts their message across? Before Communicating ∙ ∙ ∙ Well prepared message and arguments Has full knowledge of the message Has full understanding of the message Delivering the message ∙ Confident including encouraging body language and communicating with enthusiasm Uses facts and well-founded opinion, not rumor; is honest Concise Articulate and/or uses persuasive writing skills Focused on solutions not problems Understands the recipient’s point of view Actively listens to the response Confidently defends the message Is prepared to ask clarification Is flexible in developing a solution (collaborative not competitive) desired response. • The message should pick the right person/stakeholder to send it out. • The message is sent at the right time to enable the audience to have time to understand and act on the message. The stages of communication There are several components in communication as the diagram below shows. Responding the recipient SENDER Content Format to Medium ∙ ∙ ∙ ∙ ∙ ∙ ∙ ∙ ∙ COMMUNICATION CHANNEL Good communication ensures that you are being heard. You can then influence your environment according to your own goals and requirements. If you do not get your message across effectively, others will not know or understand your needs. In general, effective communication achieves the following: AUDIENCE Purposive Communication Page 102 Purposive Communication Page 103 • applies positive influence on decision-making by presenting a strong point of view and developing mutual understanding ∙ delivers efficient decisions and solutions by providing accurate, timely and relevant information ∙ enables mutually beneficial solutions • builds healthy relationships by encouraging trust and understanding ∙ ensures that all service staff are sending out the same messages. Listening Skills Lesson 2: Workplace Documents Listening skills are just as important as communication skills in delivering message. This allows full understanding of the other party and what their response is to your point of view. Good listening is vital for building strong relationships. To be a good listener means to fully understand and constructively respond to what the other party is communicating. A workplace document is any document that provides steps or gives instructions to carry out tasks that contains technical details. All workplaces use documents to record their business activities. Some documents need to be completed as part of government acts or regulations, while others are developed to ensure the efficient delivery of services and products to customers. It is important to know which workplace documents, records and forms you will be expected to complete as part of your job. There are many different types of workplace documents. Some examples are: ⮚ ⮚ ⮚ ⮚ Sometimes people seem to be giving one answer when they actual mean another; or wanting to say something else but feel unable to do so. This can occur in any communication scenario, like face-toface or remote, instant or over a longer time period, with one person or a group. Messages Memorandum Business Letters Minutes from meetings ⮚ ⮚ ⮚ ⮚ Agenda Annual reports Presentations Diagrams It is significant for someone to know how to listen carefully and to ask help for help if necessary. There’s a great chance of job retention and an opportunity for promotion if an employee and supervisor learn to communicate well. Messages, memorandum, minutes and agenda are usually workplace documents that are prepared for internal use. That is, these documents are only used and read by people inside your organization. Core Listening Skills Messages • Messages come in all sorts of formats. It can be a simple phone message to an email or a short message left for a work colleague. Whatever the format, it is important to be sure that people’s names are spelled correctly, that phone numbers or other figures are written down correctly. It is also important to mark on the “message” the time and date as well as who is leaving the message. Above all, it is vital that you use clear and neat handwriting. • • • Giving the other party your full attention. If you are in their presence look at them directly, don’t do other activities such as doodling. Try to understand their body language. • Encouraging them to speak. Ask open-ended questions. Showing that you are genuinely listening by nodding, repeating back what they have said but in your own words. • Acknowledging their feelings – ‘It must have been really difficult for you when…’ • Asking for clarification when you do not understand. Trying to understand other’s point of view, rather than immediately applying own preconceptions about the respondent. Letting the other party put over their response fully before you react and giving them time to express their point of view. • Being cautious in expressing your opinion. If it is clearly not appropriate don’t express it. • Being timely in your reaction to the other party’s responses to your messages. Memorandum Memorandum or memo is a workplace document that sends information to people in your organization about a work related topic. Most messages of this type are sent by email, but in some instances a hard copy of a memorandum is distributed to staff members. Guidelines in Writing a Memorandum 1. 2. 3. 4. Purposive Communication Page 104 Choose a representative phrase that immediately tells the reader what the memo will be about. Use plain paper (not stationery) with one-inch margins around the page. Use a professional font and black color. Begin all the lines of the memo at the left margin, except the MEMO line which can be centered. Purposive Communication Page 105 5. Use single-spaced, with two spaces between paragraphs in the body of the memo. 6. If your memo is more than 1 page long, use a subsequent page header that includes who the Memo is addressed to, the page number, and the date. 7. Sign the Memo next to the FROM line, using initials, first name, or complete name. 8. Don’t add a greeting between the memo heading and body. 9. Use declarative verbs, and simple sentence structure. 10. Be specific and detailed without including unnecessary (i.e. time-wasting or confusing) information and without insulting reader’s intelligence. 11. Use a more informal tone. Remember, however, that what counts as “formal” or “informal” is defined in terms of each organization’s culture. 12. Pay attention to the intended audience and context. Be guided with the template below. Memorandum needs to be short and direct, and easy to read and understand. This means that the first step in writing a memo is thinking carefully about what you want to say and how to say it clearly and briefly. Agenda and Meeting Minutes Agenda is a list of topics that are planned to be discussed at a meeting. It is used a guide to the Chairperson of a meeting, to keep the meeting “on track”. The minutes of the meeting are the record of the matters that are discussed during a meeting. They are a “formal” record of what took place in a meeting. Consider the following questions in writing meeting minutes: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. Template MEMORANDUM TO: FROM: DATE: SUBJECT: XYZ Company Employees Engr. Juan Dela Cruz (Place you signature above your name) (Month-Day-Year) How to Write a Business Memo Guidelines in Writing a Meeting Minutes Begin with an introductory paragraph—very short, often only 1-2 sentences long—that clearly states the purpose of the memo to the reader. If the memo is responding to or following up on a specific situation or meeting, state that in the first paragraph. For easier reading, format the content of your memo into short paragraphs. Paragraphs made of a few lines of text with white space between them are easier to read. Writing short paragraphs also encourages you to break your information into bite-sized chunks for easy comprehension. Consider Using Formatting: Use formatting—such as headings and bulleted or numbered lists—to format information organized in steps (for example, instructions) in the body of the memo. Using this kind of formatting: ∙ ∙ Breaks information down into manageable chunks, Which makes it easier and faster for the reader to process. End the body of the memo with a concluding paragraph that clearly informs the reader what action they need to take. Finally, end the memo with your (the sender’s) email address and/or phone number for people to contact with questions. Purposive Communication When was the meeting? Who attended? Who did not attend? (Include this information if it matters) What topics were discussed? What was decided? What actions were agreed upon? Who is to complete the actions, by when? Were materials distributed at the meeting? If so, are copies or a link available? Is there anything special the reader of the minutes should know or do? Is a follow-up meeting scheduled? If so, when? where? why? Page 137 11. Write minutes soon after the meeting, preferably within 48 hours. That way, those who attended can be reminded of action items, and those who did not attend will promptly know what happened. 12. Don't skip writing minutes just because everyone attended the meeting and knows what happened. Meeting notes serve as a record of the meeting long after people forget what happened. 13.Don't describe all the "he said, she said" details unless those details are very important. Record topics discussed, decisions made, and action items. 4. Don't include any information that will embarrass anyone (for example, "Then John/Jane left the room in tears"). 5. Use positive language rather than describing the discussion as heated or angry, use passionate, 7. lively, or energetic--all of which are just as true as the negative words. 6. Edit and proof the meeting minutes. Attach any hand-outs or documents electronically, so that all participants and non-participants have easy access to them. 8. Include the following information: Purposive Communication Page 138 Topics Decisions Template MINUTES OF THE MEETING Actions Agreed Upon Person responsible Deadline Next Meeting Date and Time Location Agenda items PRESENT: A list of first and last names of all those present at the meeting REGRETS: A list of first and last names of Committee members who have contacted the Chairman to let them know that they will be unable to attend the meeting ABSENT: A list of first and last names of Committee members who DID NOT contact the Chairman to let them know that they won’t be in attendance 1. CALL TO ORDER/OPENING REMARKS ∙ Time that the Chairperson called the meeting to order. ∙ Summary of any opening remarks from the Chairperson 2.APPROVAL OF THE MINUTES FROM (DATE) (You need a motion to approve the minutes of the previous meeting as circulated or a motion to approve the minutes as amended if any corrections are needed to the minutes) Motion: To approve the minutes of (DATE) as circulated (or AMENDED) Motion By: Name of person (FIRST & LAST) who made the motion Seconded By: Name of the person (FIRST & LAST)) who seconded the motion Carried or Defeated 3.ADDITIONS TO THE AGENDA (If anyone has an item that they like to add to the agenda, they would bring it up in this part and ask the Chairperson if the item maybe added to the agenda or can be added to the next meeting’s agenda. See #8 below for added items to current meeting agenda.) 4. APPROVAL OF THE AGENDA Motion: to approve the agenda as circulated (or AMENDED) Motion By: name of person (FIRST & LAST) who made the motion Seconded By: name of person (FIRST & LAST) who made the motion Carried or Defeated 5. BUSINESS ARISING OUT OF THE PREVIOUS MEETING a. Outstanding Items from the previous meeting that need to be updated or discussed further b. Outstanding Items from the previous meeting that need to be updated or discussed further c. Outstanding Items from the previous meeting that need to be updated or discussed further 6. ITEM # 1 TO BE DISCUSSED Put a summary of the discussion around the topic If a motion was made put the information in here If further information is needed agree on who is to do the follow up and put their name and a timeline that this information will be completed Task: put who is to do it and when it is to be completed by (DATE) Purposive Communication Page 139 LESSON 3: Writing Proposals Key Features: 7. ITEM #2 TO BE DISCUSSED Put a summary of the discussion around the topic If a motion was made put the information in here If further information is needed agree on who is to do the follow up and put their name and a timeline that this information will be completed Task: put who is to do it and when it is to be completed by (DATE) 1. A well-defined problem. Example: “Motorcycle riders who do not wear helmets risk serious injury and raise healthcare costs for everyone.” 2. A recommended solution. 8. ADDITIONS TO THE AGENDA a) Added agenda Item # 1 Put a summary of the discussion around the topic If a motion was made put the information in here If further information is needed agree on who is to do the follow up and put their name and a timeline that this information will be completed Task: put who is to do it and when it is to be completed by (DATE) - Once the problem is defined, propose solutions to the problem. - Explain it by providing details to said solution. 3. A convinvcing argument for your proposed solutuions. - Convince readers that your solution is feasible and that it is the best way to solve the problem. b) Added agenda Item # 2 Put a summary of the discussion around the topic If a motion was made put the information in here If further information is needed agree on who is to do the follow up and put their name and a timeline that this information will be completed Task: put who is to do it and when it is to be completed by (DATE) - Consider any questions readers may have about your proposal; and - Show how its advantages out-weigh any disadvantages. 5. A call to action. 9. ADJOURNMENT (Record the time the Chair adjourned the meeting.) 10.NEXT MEETING (DATE) (The next meeting date should be decided before everyone leaves the meeting. It is a handy reminder to put it at the bottom of the minutes.) Explain in detail how your proposed solution would work. 4. Anticipate questions. - The goal of a proposal is to persuade readers to accept your proposed solution. - This solution may include asking readers to take action. 6. An appropriate tone. - Since you are trying to persuade readers to act, your tone is important is important – readers will always react better to a reasonable, respectful presentation than to NOTE: ✔ The minutes should be completed by the Recording Secretary and forwarded to the Chairperson to review prior to being sent out to the rest of the Committee. The minutes should be distributed no more than 2 weeks after the meeting was held. The minutes are a reminder of the tasks that need to be completed and items to be followed up on. ✔ A copy of the minutes should also be saved for future references. anger or self-righteous. Guide to Writing Proposals 1. Decide on a TOPIC Choose a problem that can be solved. Complex, large problems, such as poverty, http://web.csulb.edu/divisions/students/sld/student_organizations/officer_dev/documents/SampleMinutes.pdf hunger and terrorism, usually require large solutions. Purposive Communication Page 140 Focus on a smaller problem or a limited aspect of a large problem because it will Simple Steps in Wrtiting Proposal yield a more nmanageable proposal. 2. Consider the Rhetorical Situation. A. Purpose Do you have a vested interst in the solution your readers adopt, or do you simply want to eliminate the problem, whatever solution might be adopted? B. Audience How can you reach your readers? Do you know how receptive or resistant to change they are likely to be? Do they have the authority to enact your proposal? C. Stance How can you show your audience that your proposal is reasonable and should be taken seriously? How can you demonstrate your own authority and credibility? Sample Proposal CLEOFAS, JESSECA NINA C. May 17, 2017 D. Media/Design How will you deliver your proposal? In print? Online? As a speech? Would visuals The Problem According to Sophia Loren, “Nothing makes a woman more beautiful than the belief that she is beautiful.” But what if women do not believe that way? What if being beautiful depends on what other people will say about you? Nowadays; media portrays the side of being beautiful as those models and actresses seen in the TV Programs. So then, many gets frustrated by how they look on themselves, many gets jealous of how other people gain appreciation because of being beautiful on the outside. Hence; they suffer from having low self-esteem and insecurities. help support your proposal? 3. Generate Ideas and Texts Explore potential solutions to the problem. The Proposed Solution How? RESEARCH to see how others have solved, or tried to solve similar problems. Don’t settle on a single solution too quickly because you will need to COMPARE the advantages and disadvantages of several solutions in order to argue convincingly for one. There would be a TV Advertisement which provides two doorways with a signage above – one is labeled as “beautiful” and the other is labeled as “average”. The girls involved would have a confronting decision to make whether to be beautiful or to be an average. Some of them will be asked randomly of: What do you mean by being beautiful? Why did you choose to be beautiful? Why did you choose to be an average? Reason why it is the BEST Solution Source: Tagay, L., PowerPoint Presentation, PC GenEd 2 nd Training, 2017 Sometimes, being asked “How do you think of yourself”? in person makes us uncomfortable. We are pressured by the question or on how we will justify our answer. Thus, action makes it clearer to analyze the question. They will simply enter on a door. These women do not have any idea about the experiment, they will simply enter on a door and choose one – beautiful or average. Call for action Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. We are the only one who can put value or label on ourselves, no one will be. Beautiful is a great word so be that word! Choose to be beautiful! Purposive Communication Page 147 Purposive Communication Page 148