STORIES AND IN STORYTELLING A L I C E MUNRO'S F I C T I O N By J. CHRISTINE B.A., Queen's U n i v e r s i t y SOMERVILLE a t K i n g s t o n , O n t . , 1959 A THESIS SUBMITTED IN PARTIAL FULFILLMENT OF THE REQUIREMENTS FOR THE DEGREE OF MASTER OF ARTS in THE FACULTY OF GRADUATE (Department o f We a c c e p t to this thesis the reguired STUDIES English) as c o n f o r m i n g standard THE UNIVERSITY OF BRITISH COLUMBIA April © Christine 1985 Somerville, 1985 22 In presenting requirements of B r i t i s h i t freely agree for this thesis f o r an advanced Columbia, available that i n p a r t i a l I agree that f o rreference permission scholarly degree may be a t the shall and study. I copying granted by o r by h i so r her representatives. understood that for financial gain or publication shall n o t be allowed permission. Department o f English The U n i v e r s i t y o f B r i t i s h 1956 M a i n M a l l Vancouver, Canada V6T 1 Y 3 Date A p r i l 25. 1985. Columbia make further of this t h e head department copying University the Library f o rextensive purposes fulfilment o f the thesis o f my I ti s of this without thesis my written ii- Abstract R e f e r e n c e s t o s t o r i e s and s t o r y t e l l i n g throughout A l i c e Munro s f i v e short 1 THE TO T E L L YOU, WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE? a n d THE. MOONS OF JUPITER. This stories—mentioned briefly counterpoint written imitate, t h e s i s contends them t h r o u g h o u t figures. reflect Occasionally, on t h e d i f f i c u l t y SOMETHING r a i s e s t h i s stories within texts rather perspective thenarrators of expressing i na l l five discovering than glimpses o f r e a l i t y . order that By embedding the workings to her narratives A feminine emerges, i n w h i c h t h e n o t as imposing already works truth i n fiction, h e r n a r r a t i v e s , Munro i m i t a t e s sees h e r task storytelling a r e a w r i t e r and repeatedly. on n a r r a t i v e g r a d u a l l y woman n a r r a t o r l i f e , but protagonists issue O r a l and i d e n t i f y w i t h , and o f memory; m o r e o v e r , s h e draws a t t e n t i o n as length—provide I n L I V E S and WHO, becomes c e n t r a l b e c a u s e t h e i r actress. at f o r Munro's c h a r a c t e r s . i n y o u t h , when t h e y e a g e r l y fictional that or recounted to experience stories influence especially but s t o r y c y c l e s : DANCE OF HAPPY SHADES, L I V E S OF GIRLS AND WOMEN, SOMETHING I'VE BEEN MEANING an appear exists. order, b u t as Table of Contents Abstract ii Short iv Titles Acknowledgements V Introduction 1 Chapter One 7 Chapter Two 43 Chapter Three 73 Chapter Four 102 Chapter Five 126 Conclusion 164 Bibliography 168 iv • Short The in following short titles Titles f o r A l i c e Munro's works a r e u s e d the text: DANCE f o r DANCE OF THE HAPPY SHADES L I V E S f o r L I V E S OF GIRLS AND WOMEN SOMETHING f o r SOMETHING I'VE BEEN MEANING TO T E L L YOU WHO f o r WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE? MOONS f o r THE MOONS OF JUPITER V Acknowledgements For generously g i v i n g wish and t o t h a n k my so much t i m e a d v i s o r , Dr. judgement s u s t a i n e d me throughout For r e a d i n g the p e n u l t i m a t e argument and Blom and Mrs. style, Marya a c k n o w l e d g e Mrs. I am Finally, E . Hardman. has the e n t i r e advising I also ORPHEO and I t h a n k my h e l p e d me whose w i t project. Howard gratefully One I explore the Munro's DANCE develops mother, B e a t r i c e B r y c e , Munro f o r y e a r s , and e v e r y b i t and I on i t s Margaret Alice i d e a which Chapter whom I have d i s c u s s e d A l i c e h u s b a n d , who and thesis, Stephens, Hardman's s u g g e s t i o n t h a t HAPPY SHADES, an length. draft G. i n d e b t e d t o Dr. c o n n e c t i o n between G l u c k ' s THE Donald to t h i s at with Richard, byte of the OF way. my •1 Introduction Forrest set L . Ingram d e f i n e s the short o f s t o r i e s so l i n k e d t o one a n o t h e r t h a t e x p e r i e n c e o f e a c h one i s m o d i f i e d o t h e r s " ."^ The s e p a r a t e greater autonomy bi-focal individual distance. that apparent exhibit but s t i l l story cycle t o see c l e a r l y o f t h e i n d i v i d u a l s t o r y must the u n i f y i n g p a t t e r n of the e n t i r e of a short story consciousness than n a r r a t i v e (1971) and WHO the n a r r a t i v e story between be work. be i s used) o r setting, A l i c e Munro has 1968 and (1978) show a p p a r e n t u n i t y focusing ( 1 9 6 8 ) , SOMETHING cycles voice). one, c y c l e may (where t h e s t o r i e s a r e l i n k e d t h r o u g h theme, short both the t o o , t h e f o r m i s a demanding t o Ingram, t h e u n i t y five form r a n g e and t h e e n t i r e work a t a pattern imagery, r a t h e r LIVES i n a novel, i n order (where a s i n g l e n a r r a t i v e published of For the w r i t e r against According or at close the inner balanced hidden story as "a the reader's the c y c l e For the reader of a short v i s i o n i s required cycle by h i s e x p e r i e n c e o f t h e stories within t h a n do c h a p t e r s a u n i f i e d whole. in story 1982. as a r e s u l t on a s i n g l e p r o t a g o n i s t ; (1974) and MOONS (1982) e x e m p l i f y DANCE hidden unity. This explain as s t u d y o f Munro's why t h e word " l e g e n d " and As t h e s e words short "story", "tale", recurs story as w e l l cycles seeks to as r e l a t e d words so f r e q u e n t l y i n her such fiction. p r o l i f e r a t e , they s i g n a l the importance of 2 stories i n the l i v e s repeatedly own is text of Munro s c h a r a c t e r s . mentioning as a t e x t , s t o r i e s , she draws a t t e n t i o n and r e m i n d s t h e r e a d e r t h a t an i n t e r p r e t e r o f t r u t h whose entirely objective. so point-of-view to her the narrator i s not By o f f e r i n g numerous r e a l i s t i c t o h e r r e a d e r s , Munro b r i n g s But, M o r e o v e r , by 1 them c l o s e the s t o r i e s her characters tell to her details characters. one a n o t h e r a r e o f t e n e x a g g e r a t e d , g r o t e s q u e , o r o t h e r w i s e u n c o n v i n c i n g as t o draw t h e r e a d e r b a c k f r o m t h e t e x t and a r o u s e h i s skepticism. Frequent references cycles, t o s t o r i e s appear in a l l five e s t a b l i s h i n g a m o t i f w h i c h o f f e r s a way prose, which, while g e n e r a l l y a d m i r e d by c r i t i c s readers q u a l i t y that a l i k e , has an e l u s i v e Even t h e a u t h o r h e r s e l f how h e r s t o r i e s work. w i t h Tim S t r u t h e r s , claims into Munro's and g e n e r a l baffles analysis. t o be u n a b l e t o u n d e r s t a n d Discussing Munro s 1 1981 interview Eva-Marie K r o l l e r observes t h a t Munro 2 seems r e l u c t a n t I t may to be t h a t that craft. of priestess As she a d m i t s her e a r l y talking of her c r a f t . Munro i s u n a b l e , r a t h e r a n a l y s e h e r own work. like of to a r t i c u l a t e the secrets than Her a p p r o a c h t o w r i t i n g to sacred i n an e s s a y spring i s more than craftsman to she w r o t e t o accompany s t o r i e s i n THE NARRATIVE VOICE, about w r i t i n g unwilling, "Writing two or makes(herj s u p e r s t i t i o u s l y 3 uncomfortable". of gratitude Her a t t i t u d e for gifts responsibility to the c r e a t i v e received; f o r inventing she n e i t h e r process i s one claims her s t o r i e s , nor i n q u i r e s into 3 the wellspring always claims tribute to of her writing. i s that their narrator the she i m p o r t a n c e by past, or that truth. a character reciting She at length, retelling an when a poem f r o m memory, r e a d i n g reading a letter. may book t i t l e mentioned i n conversation or glimpsed as myth o r reference a metaphoric pattern a may story cycles meaning i n h i s memories. writer, actress succumbing or to the than the storytelling that The appear i n the suggest, i s a other artist—differs temptation self or aspires recounting an and a shelf. story with a to t e l l immediate t o be his looks story family. Of applied artist to the t r u t h through t h e i r fictions. assumption t h a t essence of being i n which to t e l l Therefore, only wider stricter average the s h a r e a common d e s i r e alive to is one's s t o r y u n d e r l i e s words a r e in course, a n e c d o t e ; however, b o t h the for to a a r t must s a t i s f y discover Munro's f i c t i o n . storyteller from o t h e r s p e r s o n and a voice the past, ordinary having on a professional s t o r y t e l l e r — t h e s t a n d a r d s t h a n w o u l d be storyteller The c r y p t i c as which runs p a r a l l e l b e c a u s e e v e r y o n e remembers h i s own aesthetic other fairytale. Everyone, these audience as from a At to s t o r y t e l l i n g the be the incident reference cycle pays anecdotes the E v e n more s u b t l y , she fiction. newspaper s t o r y , w r i t i n g o r times, thing giving narrative treats storytelling describes one s t o r i e s embody t h e prominence i n a l l her Often The respected, held a l l of 4 almost and i n awe: they are i t a l i c i z e d , meanings d i s c u s s e d ; misunderstand t h e y p u z z l e c h i l d r e n who p e o p l e go u t t e r words. on t a l k i n g A senile a conversation w i l l presence by f o r m words c l e a r l y i t ; a man In t h e s e longer carry t o a word s a i d has lost the a b i l i t y of a stroke w i l l o f s p e e c h . Even on i n her still when t h e as t h e once g a r r u l o u s F l o does i n WHO, to grunt aged their and learn personalities i n chronological about and LIVES of a young w r i t e r , s t o r e up memories. (1974), i n which p o i n t - o f - v i e w and stories Del Jordan. MOONS ( 1 9 8 2 ) , stories Storytelling, through A l i c e Chapter reveal Two the Three i s devoted development analyses with storytelling. (19 7 8 ) , i n w h i c h Finally, f e m a l e ways o f Chapter of children form Munro e x p e r i m e n t s becomes a c o m p u l s i o n . i n which them, Chapter One influence influence e x p l o r e s the l i m i t s e x a m i n e s WHO Chapter stories the world around (1971), i n which Four order. (19 68) , i n w h i c h to SOMETHING published collections 1 c o n s i d e r s DANCE male and c a n no s t u d y examines M u n r o s f i v e separately Chapter the l o n g as t h e y a r e a b l e t o who as a r e s u l t and i s eloquent. This as t h e y as respond anh-anh-anh, i n a t r a v e s t y silence the confused. o l d woman who still spelling stop t a l k i n g , and sounds misuse them; t h e y c o n t i n u e t o s t r u g g l e o u t o f mouths o f t h e o l d , t h e s i c k , stories, repeated, t h e i r storytelling Five, discusses differences between thinking. t h e n , i s a common t h r e a d w h i c h Munro's f i c t i o n . runs Frequent r e f e r e n c e s to 5 stories by show how, stories as children, they hear or her r e a d and, characters as adults, are become storytellers t h e m s e l v e s when t h e y remember and their At past. individual narrative circular Without the same t i m e , h e r places within incorporates and the the characters larger story them, a s t o r y take cycles and f r o m books appear, i n Munro's f i c t i o n i n the imitates. memories o f influencing them i n ways t h e y may influencing them powerfully. not her Oral is or w o u l d be i t i s memory t h a t they r i g h t l y belong the myth. augment memory, and stories their i n which classical embedded s t o r i e s w h i c h e i t h e r she interpret whose s t r u c t u r e whose themes r e a c h b a c k t o u n d e r c u t e x p e r i e n c e , Munro's s t o r y influenced less stories because characters, understand, like but 6 Notes 1 F o r r e s t L Ingram, REPRESENTATIVE SHORT STORY CYCLES OF THE TWENTIETH CENTURY (The Hague: Mouton, 1 9 7 1 ) , p. 13. 2 E v a - M a r i e K r o l l e r , " C r a f t and C r i t i c i s m , " r e v . o f PROBABLE FICTIONS: A L I C E MUNRO'S NARRATIVE ACTS .ed. L o u i s K. M a c K e n d r i c k , CANADIAN LITERATURE, No. 103 ( 1 9 8 4 ) , p . 129. 3 A l i c e Munro, "The C o l o n e l ' s Hash R e s e t t l e d , " i n THE NARRATIVE VOICE, e d . J o h n M e t c a l f e ( T o r o n t o : M c G r a w - H i l l R y e r s o n ) , p . 183. 7 C h a p t e r One How S t o r i e s Shape P e r c e p t i o n , Beguiled fifteen by a c c u r a c y short stories drawn i n t o t h e r u r a l imperceptibly, P e r s o n a l i t y and Memory of d e t a i l i n the s e t t i n g s of the t h a t c o m p r i s e DANCE, t h e r e a d e r i s Ontario kitchens domestic order o f t h e past?" g i v e s way t o w i l d n e s s violence a s f o x pens and meat h o u s e s b e g i n linoleum and r a g r u g s . specific details Although A l i c e to refer the reader place—Southwestern Ontario forties—she references gives reality to stories mythic ORPHEO, b a s e d on t h e c l a s s i c a l For up to displace Munro s e l e c t s v i v i d t o an a c t u a l t i m e and s i g n i f i c a n c e through and l e g e n d s . the e n t i r e and i n t h e n i n e t e e n - t h i r t i e s and HAPPY SHADES, f o r example, p o i n t s which c o l o u r s Almost The t i t l e , to the Gluck DANCE OF THE. opera, myth o f Orpheus and E u r y d i c e collection. the mainly youthful protagonists o f DANCE, growing means d i s c o v e r i n g t h e l a y e r e d t e x t u r e o f r e a l i t y . narrators are r e s o l u t e l y unsentimental: their pasts Helen sums up i n "The P e a c e o f U t r e c h t " : nostalgia, courageously, trying striving they to avoid l o o k b a c k on the t r a p which "Cowardly t o g e t back t o a g e n t l e r t r u t h " memories, b u t o n l y tender (p.202). T h e s e n a r r a t o r s n e v e r manage t o l a y t h e g h o s t s t h a t their The haunt t o r e i n t e r p r e t them f r o m t h e 8 perspective of maturity. "Images", "Boys and a r e t h r e e key remembered appears stories stories t o her experiencing comparing surpasses to convey the protagonists. i t with i t into female observed For m a t r o n i n "The and also r e f l e c t i n g upon t h e y have r e a d , h e a r d , the raw the o u t e r world, not y e t hardened; own but they are and of to their have as w e l l history stories as and Not is harmful e x p e c t a t i o n s based Although i s the creating experience. l i v e s with in that their young personalities folklore, limited their satisfy. the characteristic f a m i l y legends, f r e q u e n t l y higher than can lives, p o s s i b l e c h o i c e s . At i n the process domaine f r o m comparing as w e l l as h e l p f u l , their are deeper concern lives, their supplement t h e i r circumstances daily G i r l s " , and Sharing their natures in their i n the p u b l i c are and the n a r r a t o r s attempt Therefore, private surprisingly, fiction invented c h r o n o l o g i c a l s t a g e s : the c h i l d i n determination, stages literature, or experience, m a t e r i a l of t h e i r Peace o f U t r e c h t " . these stories experience, p r o t a g o n i s t s i n the chosen s t o r i e s of t h e i r identity. only recognizable narrative patterns. inner world early Munro u s e s them, l i v i n g i s n o t "Images", t h e a d o l e s c e n t i n "Boys and understand Utrecht" t e x t u r e o f r e a l i t y as i t hunger f o r d i r e c t at d i f f e r e n t curiosity Peace o f T h e i r l o n g i n g f o r meaning i n e x i s t e n c e minds c o n s t a n t l y s c a n The but stories even t h e i r rearranging "The w h i c h i l l u s t r a t e how the world, themselves. G i r l s " and on actual the p l e a s u r e s and 9 corresponding the as literature well that her as tend but abiding to also pattern awareness of and g r o w i n g up, sensibility heroines relating of the to others p h r a s e s and A l t h o u g h the voice powerless are subtle see use of i s an still earlier evident explanations she from the express h e r s e l f well living the to express narrator the and, language. when of being almost from the moment she as she her words the reveals. ears older being self example, for the the destructive to protect cannot sense under a s p e l l . of It is is finally able earlier. time i n e a r l y becomes c o n s c i o u s o f b e i n g of contradict desperately senses, but suffered the her from a d u l t s enough t o a r t i c u l a t e she medium f o r "Images", f o r whose remembering v o i c e dread growing sense of P h i p p e n , whose tries d a n g e r she "Images" e x p l o r e s first Joe She inside a fairytale, older to e y e s and and do narrative the observations receives b e h a v i o u r o f Mary McQuade and strongly. In own only out as w e l l whose c o n f u s i o n impressions. Not draw a t t e n t i o n t o a d u l t woman's, t h e painfully fantasy Repetition language, which conceals i s h e l p l e s s when h e r parents l a n g u a g e as of capture and protagonists' italics a child her fact living forming a s e l f . a child's, feels weave o f t h e m s e l v e s as her power she Canadian w r i t e r s i n DANCE i s t h e and a staple o f b o o k i s h young g i r l s . relates reassuring are t h e y become h y p e r - s e n s i t i v e the of frequently few preeminence of slipperiness are self-dramatization Munro does t h e i s the patterns, An dangers of life when t h e s e p a r a t e from her knows she has child mother, a self, learns 10 to fear death. indirect to and form Sense i m p r e s s i o n s r e f e r e n c e s t o myths and f a i r y a continuous out of the text, allegorical "Images" i s more t h a n squares which i n v i t e concentrates on illusion. the f a t h e r ' s . Since leading the reader story. suggests illusion form conclusive text, death, and views, the range o f p o s s i b l e Instead, implications n o t outward, b u t back inside again is itself a o f t r a n s c e n d i n g s u b j e c t i v i t y and o f "Images" d i c t a t e s ending: i t s three t h e m a t i c a l l y through the absence o f a s e c t i o n s , separated f u n c t i o n a s do s t a n z a s i n a poem. their and m e t a p h o r i c a l l y t h r o u g h Joe Phippen. these t h e r e i s no r e s o l u t i o n o f at objective truth. The related when he c o n c e n t r a t e s because the d e s i g n comment upon t h e d i f f i c u l t y the L i k e t h e b l a c k and w h i t e The p e r s i s t e n c e o f p a r a d o x i n t h e s t o r y optical arriving i n the does n o t n a r r o w i n t h e e n d , a s i s u s u a l l y the p a t t e r n i n s h o r t s t o r i e s . the of a c h i l d Yet v i e w o f what i s h a p p e n i n g t h e d i s c r e p a n c y between t h e i r multiply, mind. one i n t e r p r e t a t i o n when t h e v i e w e r the c h i l d ' s interpretations t h e way m o r t a l i t y ; i t i s the verbal on t h e b l a c k , and a n o t h e r the white, contradicts elements suggest a c h a r a c t e r study o f an o p t i c a l Designed not i n a young c h i l d ' s o f coming t o t e r m s w i t h equivalent tales. pattern, but to f l i c k e r i n the f a i r y - t a l e f a n t a s y merges w i t h r e a l i t y process a r e s u p p l e m e n t e d by b r i e f by gaps i n The p a r t s a r e common p r e o c c u p a t i o n two v i l l a i n s , Mary McQuade The n a r r a t o r remembers h e r f e e l i n g s a d u l t s when she was a c h i l d . with about Her p e r c e p t i o n o f them 11 as e v i l and d a n g e r o u s anxiety over her mother's i l l n e s s , a c c u r a t e because allowing may of her have b e e n d i s t o r t e d o r i t may because have been innocent, unclouded v i s i o n . both p o s s i b i l i t i e s to p e r s i s t of her i n the By ambiguous e n d i n g , Munro i s a b l e t o s u g g e s t t h e p e r p l e x i n g character human l i f e , reality the i n s o l u b l e image, t r u t h from approach misgivings of s e p a r a t i n g from illusion. Occasionally, intuitive problem of Munro has attempted to w r i t i n g short to explain stories. over symbolic i n t e r p r e t a t i o n s denies d e l i b e r a t e l y setting up symbols her Expressing o f h e r work, i n her she fiction: 1 do t h i n k symbols e x i s t , o r r a t h e r , t h a t t h i n g s a r e s y m b o l i c , but I t h i n k t h a t t h e i r symbolism i s i n f i n i t e l y complex and n e v e r c o m p l e t e l y discovered. A r e t h e r e r e a l l y w r i t e r s who s i t down and s a y y e s , w e l l , now h e r e I-need a s y m b o l , l e t ' s see what I have i n t h e f i l e s ? 2 Such n o t i o n s , Munro w o u l d fiction who writers t o " c o l d - b l o o d e d m a n i p u l a t o r s and f o r genius s u b s t i t u t e fiction i s undoubtedly term of which writer's puppet, figure agree w i t h Annie D i l l a r d , a bag artiface—or Munro i s f o n d — i t remembered e x p e r i e n c e . whose s t r i n g s , of Pluto, goes on once existed: lord to explain, hermits, half he of t r i c k s " ? has a solid i n the the ancient R a t h e r , as portrait " H i s a n c e s t o r s were a few the i s n o t a mere when tweaked, a c t i v a t e i s a composite prose t o use basis Joe P h i p p e n of the underworld. gadgeteers While "illusion", reduce o f men o l d men, half madmen, o f t e n p a r a n o i d , o c c a s i o n a l l y she who 12 dangerous, living living around t h e c o u n t r y where I grew up, n o t i n t h e woods b u t i n o l d f a r m - h o u s e s , o l d f a m i l y homes". A figure belonging to r u r a l Depression Ontario i n the y e a r s , he i s t r u e t o h i s t o r y Discussing interviews the r e l a t i o n as w e l l as myth. between t r u t h and f i c t i o n i n and e s s a y s , Munro a g r e e s w i t h D.H. Lawrence's observations: The c u r i o u s t h i n g a b o u t a r t - s p e e c h i s t h a t i t p r e v a r i c a t e s so t e r r i b l y , I mean i t t e l l s s u c h l i e s . I s u p p o s e b e c a u s e we a l w a y s a l l t h e t i m e t e l l ourselves l i e s . And o u t o f a p a t t e r n o f l i e s , a r t weaves t h e t r u t h 5 The storyteller's as a s o u r c e on p a r a d o x Munro a c c e p t s as g i v e n , u s i n g i t o f t e n s i o n i n h e r work. the c r e a t i v e process recall R o m a n t i c s , who saw t h e p o e t into universal truth, creative itself o r chooses made by t h e as p o s s e s s i n g h e i g h t e n e d and e x p r e s s i n g i t t h r o u g h analysis, Munro i s h a r d - p r e s s e d scenes statements p r o c e s s , as she u n d e r s t a n d s to discursive A t t i m e s , h e r comments certain details art. The i t , does n o t l e n d but i s almost t o e x p l a i n why insight mystical. she j u x t a p o s e s certain f r o m h e r memory: B u t t h e f a c t i s , t h e m i n u t e I s a y t o show I am telling a lie. I d o n ' t do i t t o show a n y t h i n g . I p u t t h i s s t o r y a t t h e h e a r t o f my s t o r y b e c a u s e I n e e d i t t h e r e and i t b e l o n g s t h e r e . o She cannot s a y why but she r e w r i t e s e a c h p a t t e r n which she knows she w i l l story something many t i m e s belongs i n a story, searching f o r the r e c o g n i z e when i t f i n a l l y e m e r g e s . 13 Therefore, short a t t e n t i o n t o even the s t o r y rewards the revisions have c o n d e n s e d a distillation in the level final of the The one of Alice of writer's pattern place. As that remembered w i t h actual Alan others events taking i s of a completeness but the and are a p p r o p r i a t e l y blended creates i t s own world. In THE explains how imagination, fairy but in simplified meet The case only a l s o e n c o u r a g e him form the with of perceptions and unlikely in i t , using impressions fantasy, i s often on the the case fantasy in and to understand i t s ENCHANTMENT, Bruno s t o r i e s not specific the child's i t struggles obvious literary Munro r e n d e r s c h i l d ' s mind f e e d s f a n t a s i e s as USES OF In t h e from r e a l i t y between them b l u r r e d , as The in a perfect vividness tones of everyday speech. childhood. place a child's p l a u s i b l e as flat distinction element deepest Twigg s a y s i n h i s i n t e r v i e w illusion experience, a t the movie camera i s h e l d by the early C l e a r l y , each t o a d o c u m e n t a r y movie".'' The what r e m a i n s i s emerges i n DANCE i s t h e Munro, "Your w r i t i n g i s l i k e protagonist. numerous until work. i n a Munro consciousness. recorded "Images", however, t h e will material a much l o n g e r faithfully equivalent and the detail because her d r a f t i s bonded t o t h e first t i m e and reader smallest nurture Bettelheim the c h i l d ' s to confront v i c a r i o u s l y urgent e x i s t e n t i a l questions he later: I t i s c h a r a c t e r i s t i c o f f a i r y t a l e s t o s t a t e an e x i s t e n t i a l dilemma b r i e f l y and p o i n t e d l y . This 14 p e r m i t s t h e c h i l d t o come t o g r i p s w i t h t h e p r o b l e m i n i t s most e s s e n t i a l f o r m , where a more complex p l o t w o u l d c o n f u s e m a t t e r s f o r him. The f a i r y t a l e s i m p l i f i e s a l l s i t u a t i o n s . 8 The existential q u e s t i o n the c h i l d "Images" c o n c e r n s in and the form father, her m o r t a l i t y , but just as she has t h a t he as p e o p l e "Grandmother's h o u s e " , and What a c t u a l l y has then he h i m s e l f Only limited by disappeared. t o Mary T h e r e f o r e , her this "fact (p. 3 6 ) . as p r e s e n c e by h a n d l i n g t h e lifeless body c a n she legends. mother t e l l i n g her are the The mother b e f o r e h e r She had Princes mother's stories single t h e c l o s e n e s s w h i c h once e x i s t e d her already she concrete begin understanding e a r l y mention of access and to dead than e s t a b l i s h e s t h a t she to s t o r i e s The rather Although i n e x p e r i e n c e , an response father's trap i s a of death" r e v e a l s death her instinctive mother's s t o r y t e l l i n g her house i s linked t o a p p r e c i a t e what d y i n g means. is his only that his departure to touch absence. First mystery; t h e dead m u s k r a t d i s c o v e r e d i n h e r finally comprehend remains a 1 animal mother her disappeared. the itself grandfather McQuade s a r r i v a l . longing her t o o young t o began c a l l i n g became o f h e r understands from been c u t o f f f r o m d i e d , she was I t seems t o h e r name d i s a p p e a r e d , she i t presents of f e a r of becoming s e p a r a t e d g r a n d f a t h e r . When he death. own protagonist confronts i n her has remembers i n s t a n c e of between h e r s e l f and her illness: f o r g o t t e n a l l h e r s t o r i e s w h i c h were a b o u t i n t h e Tower and a queen g e t t i n g h e r head 15 knows i n t h e s e n a r r a t i v e s , hearing them. character i n her same p o i n t on gap her stories i s curious porch i t is plain between mother as adds t o i s made a g a i n by H o u s e s " , who sit The and the the child's narrator her of life she enjoys s t o r y t e l l e r and enough a b o u t t h e l i s t e n i n g to that as interest. "The old The Shining egg woman to history: And Mary f o u n d h e r s e l f e x p l o r i n g h e r n e i g h b o u r ' s l i f e as she had once e x p l o r e d t h e l i v e s o f g r a n d m o t h e r s and a u n t s — b y p r e t e n d i n g t o know l e s s t h a n she d i d , a s k i n g f o r some s t o r y she had h e a r d b e f o r e . . . (p. 19) Mary's s u b s e q u e n t refusal arises to out sign of l o y a l t y to the the establishes her against wishes of i s not based p a r t l y i s not In on 1 By In failure to this suburbanites instance, but a complex highly narrator the the story return, Mrs. and one of her Mrs. tumbledown house to their enhance a relationship f e e l i n g of partly on kinship, respect short-story more t h a n d e v e l o p s from into three-dimensional w i t h hopes and form the nevertheless, unerring. husband's d e p a r t u r e eccentric for suggest Fullerton; two-dimensional neighborhood individual her, listener. necessary d e t a i l i s Fullerton her Fullerton for condensed s u f f i c i e n t room t o do in the s t o r y t e l l e r - l i s t e n e r correlative l o y a l t y , and the i n s t i n c t for confiding the class p a s t , Mrs. remain i n her objective bond between t h e Munro s to friendship individuality. there about her right property values. which woman, e v i d e n t bond between s t o r y t e l l e r and stories bond becomes an egg neighborhood p e t i t i o n a g a i n s t Through her the the and a a dreams as valid 16 which i s not f r i e n d s h i p but b a s e d p a r t l y on class individuality. In there i s not l o y a l t y , and the highly sufficient narrator Munro s f o r the instinct By confiding failure the and one Mrs. three-dimensional as those condensed s h o r t - s t o r y Mrs. Fullerton; the form the nevertheless, is unerring. husband's d e p a r t u r e and a eccentric into a i n d i v i d u a l w i t h hopes and s h a r e d by for more t h a n s u g g e s t F u l l e r t o n develops from two-dimensional neighborhood kinship, respect necessary d e t a i l s t o r y of her to r e t u r n , p a r t l y on room t o do bond between t h e 1 a complex f e e l i n g o f young c o u p l e s dreams as scheming to valid displace her. Similarly, both the s e t t i n g and bias rather Not mother's s t o r i e s d e v e l o p only of do the than Canadian h i s t o r y , but child's stops theme. of Canadian s c h o o l s references to the telling stories, them, j u s t as crochets. Like of mourning, the storytelling d e a t h by the the she they a c c u r a t e l y period and the afghan's purple silenced storyteller mother r e c a l l s continuing to t e l l suggest—through queen—the When t h e assumes t h a t forgets reflect British, beheaded with death. child for they a l s o murdered p r i n c e s growing preoccupation forgotten she i n "Images", t h e she mother has afghan squares s q u a r e s , the implies S c h e h e r e z a d e , who death; which colour the postponed her stories: S c h e h e r e z a d e must go on t e l l i n g s t o r i e s — s t o r i e s t h a t compel t h e l i s t e n e r — o r t h a t same mad and sane l i s t e n e r , t h a t k i n g , h e r h u s b a n d , w i l l p u t her to d e a t h . She must i n v e n t life, literally, Linking by t e l l i n g stories. 9 t h e mother i n "Images" t o S c h e h e r e z a d e depend on Munro's c o n s c i o u s i n t e n t i o n . between t h e i n d i v i d u a l a whole; the i m p l i c a t i o n s relevance to l i f e , tradition: literary "Literary l e a d s back work and shape from r e l a t i o n c a n n o t come f r o m to has and literature of a s t o r y d e r i v e not but r a t h e r not As N o r t h r o p F r y e shown, t h e p r o c e s s o f r e a d i n g i n e v i t a b l y forth need as from literary life, i t comes ,. 10 only from literary Nevertheless, literature. tradition, and so u l t i m a t e l y from t h e s e a r c h f o r meaning i s n o t c o n f i n e d By w r i t i n g from the v i e w p o i n t o f a myth". to reflective narrator l o o k i n g back familiar e x p e r i e n c e o f a t t e m p t i n g t o see meaning i n one's life. Munro does situations and on h e r p a s t , Munro c o n v e y s n o t so much c r e a t e p l a c e s who 11 minds o f t h e r e a d e r " , inside at the n a r r a t i v e Munro's t o t a l gift she has association, understands and people, i n t h e h e a r t s and as she c r e a t e s a s e n s e o f b e i n g consciousness. recall way invented a kind she misunderstands reacting Whereas c r i t i c s of the p a s t , they o f t e n through which shows t h e c h i l d that come t o l i f e f o r evoking a c h i l d ' s purpose "real the of p e r c e i v i n g . o v e r l o o k her For of shorthand based s u g g e s t s how i t s world. the marvel this on word child R e p e a t e d l y , Munro t o language, h e a r i n g i n i t nuances the a d u l t misses or tunes out through f a m i l i a r i t y : She spoke o f h e r s e l f g l o o m i l y i n t h e t h i r d p e r s o n , s a y i n g , "Be c a r e f u l , d o n ' t h u r t M o t h e r , d o n ' t s i t on M o t h e r ' s l e g s . " E v e r y t i m e she 18 s a i d Mother I f e l t c h i l l e d , and a k i n d o f w r e t c h e d n e s s and shame s p r e a d t h r o u g h me as i t d i d a t t h e name o f J e s u s . T h i s Mother t h a t my own r e a l , warm-necked i r r a s c i b l e and c o m f o r t i n g human mother s e t up between us was an e v e r l a s t i n g l y wounded phantom, s o r r o w i n g l i k e Him o v e r a l l t h e w i c k e d n e s s I d i d n o t y e t know I w o u l d commit, (p. 33) By d i s c u s s i n g n u a n c e s o f meaning s u g g e s t e d "Mother", Munro makes t h e c h i l d ' s and guilt distinct Critics use s u c h as H e l e n of paradox mysterious story f o r the and and of Hoy have examined A l i c e The texture of expresses s u r f a c e of Miss music life. M a r s a l l e s ' music 222), the f a c e s of the Misses M a r s a l l e s are is "poetically contention is ugly" that not merely The title by which the r e t a r d e d Delores produces and the recital so b e a u t i f u l l y (p. 2 1 4 ) , Munro's the e x t r a o r d i n a r y beneath plays grotesque" estrangement reader. contradictory o f oxymorons. feelings t h e word, oxymorons i n o r d e r t o e x p r e s s in particular ordinary by "unemotional their (p. 2 1 3 ) . Munro's l i n k i n g a q u i r k of style> Boyle "kindly T h e s e examples of means happiness" o l d f a m i l y home i n linguistic but r e f l e c t s the (p. and Rosedale s u p p o r t Hoy's incongruities her double 19 vision of r e a l i t y , Another link a t once o r d i n a r y and e x t r a o r d i n a r y rhetorical device i s zeugma, t h e r e p e t i t i o n following narrator afghan of "Images" s a y s t h a t a l l her meaning. h e r mother f o r g o t adds i n t h e n e x t stories, structural o f t h e same v e r b i n a sentence, but w i t h a d i f f e r e n t s q u a r e s , and forgotten w h i c h a c t s as a t h e two sentence When t h e about that she meanings o f t h e v e r b her had are 19 not really the bedcovers, Not same: t h e while the squares stories cannot o n l y does t h e r e p e t i t i o n memories, b u t also mind a t t e m p t i n g mother, but i t strengthens to understand in interpreting distrust h a b i t o f mind. and she effect, Office", for similar reasons. w i t h w r i t e r s as i d e a s o f how l e w d n e s s had (p. 67). of a her of Similarly, the links is itself Mr. Although As he has died. has no "Images", a s k i n g Mary t o r u b h e r previous "Writing i n h i s mind" does n o t reason association. used as t h e medium o f thinking. b a c k , t h e mother literally, i s t h e c h i l d ' s v i e w o f what i s h a p p e n i n g . shows how the literal anxiety i s distorting exaggerating of the c h i l d ' s t h e d a n g e r she situation back" response her feels (p. 3 3 ) . says, dying on my In "Mary, I'm focusing the preconceived connection of confused to rub Mary's the n a r r a t o r says, ideas through f o r you cause Malley misunderstands i n "Images", he a source her memory o f grandfather a vague d e l i c i o u s L i k e the c h i l d but child's young t o comprehend L a n g u a g e , t h e n , w h i c h must be thought, illusion t e n a n t s , he w r i t e r s behave. and logically, the f e a r s Mary b e c a u s e o f h e r i n "The experience the n a r r a t o r ' s s c a t t e r e d language. Too the t o mind. what i s h a p p e n i n g t o i n t h e house when h e r Again, narrator recalled o f Mary McQuade i s c o n s i s t e n t w i t h associative presence unify be d r a w i n g wrong c o n c l u s i o n s as a r e s u l t inexperience child's l i e n e g l e c t e d among By to language, perception surrounding i s c o n s i s t e n t w i t h Bruno This, Munro and her. Her Bettelheim's view 20 account of the way young c h i l d r e n see their world: A young c h i l d ' s mind c o n t a i n s a r a p i d l y e x p a n d i n g c o l l e c t i o n o f o f t e n i l l - a s s o r t e d and o n l y p a r t i a l l y i n t e g r a t e d i m p r e s s i o n s : some c o r r e c t l y s e e n a s p e c t s o f r e a l i t y , b u t many more e l e m e n t s c o m p l e t e l y d o m i n a t e d by fantasy. F a n t a s y f i l l s t h e huge gaps i n a c h i l d ' s u n d e r s t a n d i n g w h i c h a r e due t o t h e i m m a t u r i t y o f h i s t h i n k i n g and h i s l a c k o f p e r t i n e n t i n f o r m a t i o n . 13 The fantasy which the child confusion of concocted f r o m a medley o f adhering l a n g u a g e and strictly t o any McQuade, whose p r e s e n c e its occupants, series happy of and trials i n "Images" i n v e n t s direct experience familiar one plot. i n the a journey fairy out is a fairy tales, I t has of but tale not a giantess, household casts the a spell Mary over t h r o u g h a d a r k wood, where a s u c c e s s f u l l y undergone leads t o an eventual outcome. Mary McQuade, t h e big b u l l y i n g a d u l t who the child her father. because and her The size (p. 3 1 ) , an disaster, playing large, well The looming the she In h e r the jokes narrator Mary's body, e n l a r g i n g deathlike on the focusing and enlarges child Mary's white uniform gloomy as an and size at the iceberg" death through the Titanic coldness Later, of ice. f a t h e r , Mary s w e l l s accentuates f i g u r e by between t h e i s " b i g and with the h o u s e h o l d , comes between later, associated as i s power p e r s o n i f i e d : constantly power. bedside, practical bullfrog. narrator object as enters m o t h e r , and implies grandfather's giantess, the on distorting impression separate up of parts them u n t i l her like a of legs, a 21 rising o u t o f a b a s i n o f h o t w a t e r , become "round drainpipes" (p. 3 2 ) , and kitchen wall: "My father as her head c a s t s a huge shadow on and Mary McQuade t h r e w gigantic shadows, whose heads wagged c l u m s i l y w i t h t h e i r talk laughing" Mary's spell, (p. 3 5 ) . the B e c a u s e he father's head a p p e a r s accomplice, next to h e r s , the joining magic by as the eaten presence as o f duped f a i r y - t a l e whose e v i l Snow W h i t e ' s w i c k e d o f a w i t c h by the a p p l e , Mary McQuade's The to the c h i l d silly o d o u r , and know what i t i s a man Mary's d u p l i c i t y fairy-tale witches. i s convinced her child when she the sinister recognizes the of the food, The The that suppressed nurse-confidante mentions telling ought t o e a t ! " child (p. familiar doubts Astutely, reasons The Mary's she her, endorses "Mary, 34). characteristic e v e r y t h i n g Mary t h o u g h Mary p r e t e n d s i n t e n d s t o harm. own diet, to help, realizes that, that " I f she of says. she f o r adopting the r o l e t o t h e f a m i l y , and as spellbound father wholeheartedly i s another black prepares, but a l s o a l l strange taste t h e c h a n g e s Mary makes i n t h e i r has works h e r however, a r e unaware o f what i s h a p p e n i n g . characteristic really stepmother n o t o n l y t h e f o o d she i n her presence. mother c a l l s She fathers powers a r e o b v i o u s the s t r a n g e s m e l l i n the house. parents, you When h i s enormous f a t h e r becomes Mary's legion means o f a p o i s o n e d power a l t e r s well under and daughters. Just food fallen shadow e n l a r g e s t o o . m i s l e d by w i t c h - s t e p m o t h e r s their has the had Mary of never 22 come my If mother would n e v e r Mary had n o t been a v a i l a b l e t h e mother m i g h t i n d e e d succumbing to her supernatural t o work h a n d i n g obedience and way and up out not captured u s i n g her w i t s As she The (p. ploy on, before through The f o r c e s her o f f motif of is familiar attempt puts in fairy tales When t h e the p r e v i o u s to break f r e e the c h i l d sees Mary as h e r t h e more t h e c h i l d witchlike. Although supernatural, conception summer, the n a r r a t o r never of her as a w i t c h ; much o f t h e however, she i s not retell any (p. her as by inhuman i s never t h e r e f o r e , these p r e s e n t d u r i n g the particular of From child and unequivocally childish fairy-tale characterization. Mary i s a c e n t r a l section 30). every r e p u d i a t e s the t o Mary's story, which forms the middle does not sees she spell. more Mary f o r c e s t h e Mary's b e h a v i o u r elements remain attached For The adversary: only child a d m i t remembering h e r . becomes a c o n t e s t . to submit, the of the b e c a u s e Mary c o u n t e r s t o make t h e c h i l d her outward Traditionally, i s to outwit her. i n her her t h e y a r d , where she by w i t c h e s . seems e f f e c t i v e , encounter 33). household, e x p l a i n s , " I t seemed t h e w i s e s t t h i n g t o do" attempting then into t o remember Mary f r o m is the o b e y s Mary, who clothespins. t o overcome a w i t c h pretends always p r e v a i l inner r e b e l l i o n about c h i l d r e n to take over bed" illness. power, t h e c h i l d m o t h e r ' s bed to her have s t r u g g l e d l o n g e r Because a w i t c h can her have t a k e n fairy-tale "Images". tale, character; she uses journey Although elements Munro 23 common t o many f a i r y tales: the s e t t i n g sudden a p p e a r a n c e o f a t h r e a t e n i n g sinister child dwelling. returns fearing the journey's when t h e she has s t o p p e d fairy-tale elements, the may a l s o i n t e r p r e t i t a s t h e f a t h e r d o e s , a s a w a l k n e i g h b o u r and v i s i t The double focus the pattern an e n c o u n t e r w i t h to the c e l l a r which enables truth—Munro's nearest fuller see the remains to bring not greater c e r t a i n t y The c h a r a c t e r s whose I n DANCE, Munro a s s i g n s to c h i l d r e n or the innocent old, like penetrating Miss blessing Marsalles s t o r y , who i s n o t s u r p r i s e d when one o f h e r students saintly who g e t simplicity p r o v e s t o be a t a l e n t e d musician: But i t seems t h a t t h e g i r l ' s p l a y i n g l i k e i s s o m e t h i n g she a l w a y s e x p e c t e d , and she f i n d s i t n a t u r a l and s a t i s f y i n g , (p. 223) The Unlike i n A BIRD IN THE suggest t h a t t r u t h always i s likely vision. into her to f i n a l l y awareness o f c o m p l e x i t y . their the t i t l e retarded maturing the t r u t h a r e f r e q u e n t l y those clarifies insight stories Maturity greater o f h i s b u r n e d - o u t home. t h a t M a r g a r e t L a u r e n c e employs understanding elusive. an e c c e n t r i c p e r s i s t s t o t h e end o f t h e s t o r y . HOUSE—that of a protagonist in that to a Mary. around h i s t r a p l i n e , but f i g u r e and t h e v i s i t A t t h e end o f t h e j o u r n e y , home, she d i s c o v e r s Disregarding reader i n a wood, t h e Miss M a r s a l l e s w h i c h may c r o p accepts this t a l e n t as a m y s t e r i o u s up anywhere. I t i s the middle-class 24 m o t h e r s i n t h e a u d i e n c e who a r e d i s t u r b e d between t h e young p i a n i s t ' s musical ability. confounds mental Appropriately enough, t h e p i a n o s o l o o f Orpheus and E u r y d i c e . Happy Shades o c c u r s i n t h e s e c o n d Orpheo h a s s u c c e e d e d t h e sweetness By c h o o s i n g t h i s Elysian that a c t of the opera the sympathies after of the Furies and t h e y have p e r m i t t e d him girl's t h e young p i a n i s t recital and M i s s of the blessed spirits of the Fields. classical allusions where t h e y a r e combined a l s o appear w i t h elements t h e l a d y o f romance, t h e c h i l d knight based The Dance o f t h e f o r the retarded share the s e r e n i t y Other Like which of the Blest: selection Munro i m p l i e s Marsalles i n winning o f h i s music, to enter the V a l l e y piece, h a n d i c a p and h e r s u p e r i o r t h e a u d i e n c e i s f r o m G l u c k ' s o p e r a , ORPHEO, on t h e s t o r y by by t h e d i s c r e p a n c y (father). underground Later, to t h e Underworld the c h i l d by e a t i n g candies that Phippen h i m s e l f J o r d a n evokes the Underworld by h e r who bound pomegranate s e e d s . "had a t a s t e o f n a i l s " heroes romance. t o Joe Phippen's Persephone, suggests Pluto, classical of medieval i s protected i n the v i s i t home, she r e c a l l s i n "Images", herself Joe gives (p. 4 1 ) . Joe K i n g o f Hades, and Ben like on r e s c u e m i s s i o n s . Orpheus, Even who d e s c e n d t o Joe's c a t i s a 25 comic of version o f C e r b e r u s , t h e t h r e e - h e a d e d dog Hades. Another link "Images", l i e s taking after between c l a s s i c a l being carried she has that seen living t i m e and by knight's she s e e s now of the t i t l e story "the o t h e r c o u n t r y " j o u r n e y has as i f i t were" are the f a m i l i a r own house. i s beyond (p. 2 2 4 ) , pity the c h i l d p l a n e from her everyday served i t s r i t u a l trial through adventure, ideal existence". ^ been c o n q u e r e d underground "the r e a l Accordingly, house, Undoubtedly, has claim romance and classical safe return the the Even story. along symbolic supports a concluding paragraph, and as i t s u p p o r t s a aura around f r o m Munro's u s e o f the t i t l e , lines, just from, rebirth. o f "Images" a l s o patterns adds f u r t h e r "our f e a r s fairy-tale, dimensions statement are based rather both "Images", e n c o u r a g e s the strong she has o f Mary McQuade as b o s s y s p i n s t e r results that her f e a r of death common-sense v i e w c h a r a c t e r s which the to provide a the c h i l d ' s t o , and the s u p e r n a t u r a l she been like o f Joe Phippen, But as because common-sense v i e w than w i t c h . Just one. purpose: a metaphor o f d e a t h and the t e x t ones meaning o f t h e k n i g h t ' s Mary i s b e l i e v a b l e ; by h e r v i s i t wakens i s astonished to j o u r n e y i n m e d i e v a l romance, i t was longer fears the journey i n When t h e c h i l d f r o m t h e windows o f t h e i r on a d i f f e r e n t The space. her f a t h e r , t h e woods she Miss M a r s a l l e s inhabits myths and i n i t s d r e a m l i k e atmosphere, place outside discover no a t the gates to speculation i n the on n o t h i n g b u t 26 the truth" and realistic not deliberately, motifs (p. 4 3 ) , confirms elements the view t h a t both are r e f l e c t i o n s Alice tales to suggest below the s u r f a c e of o r d i n a r y l i f e . about her a r t , as In storyteller persuading shown by Ambivalent a certain distrust may calls attention alter the h i s daughter not to t e l l her "After 'What a r e you is and crucial he I said, to the dangerous f i g u r e The able them. influence over of bats t o a comic of her she may collection. mother and not (p. 4 2 ) . i t out In her and with going possesses Joe to have t h e i n danger. the l a d d e r was him to hide man shoot Girls", Laird her f o r c e s him urges i d e a , but an o l d h o r s e . axe from a him he but up is also to the n a r r a t o r ' s tells him at by the bedtime. to a c t out a r o l e the barn of r e p o r t i n g to her and the changes Joe i s t o o young t o t e l l i n the barn mention Obviously, i s strengthened s k e l e t o n s w h i c h she thrill Phippen: c o n s i d e r a b l e power, and younger b r o t h e r she Mary one. "Boys and stories: the shows t h e f a t h e r encounter leaving i s v e r y y o u n g , she one is story; axe'" depths of language not o n l y t o d e s c r i b e events influence When he 'The storyteller t o use tales said, the feelings first t r u t h when she of t h e i r a while If t o the ease w i t h which McQuade t h e w h o l e s t o r y about?' mysterious are a l r e a d y e v i d e n t i n t h i s "Images", she truth. Munro u n c o n s c i o u s l y e x p l o i t s o f o l d myths and storytelling, of the fairy-tale l a d d e r so parents that that he them t h a t c l i m b i n g i s o l d e r when she watch t h e i r in f a t h e r and S i n c e the o l d e r s i s t e r persuades the hired must r e l y on 27 Laird's p r o m i s e t o keep t h e s e c r e t , h e r power diminishes once L a i r d i s c a p a b l e o f p u t t i n g the experience In to t e l l fact, Laird's growing p h y s i c a l he nearly Laird growing a b i l i t y strength. succeeds i n p h y s i c a l l y when he t e l l s allowed the horse and Girls", i s conceived and his sister fall. to escape. estate, i nthe s h e opened t h e g a t e Power, t h e theme o f "Boys a s one r i s e s , the other has c o n n o t a t i o n s o f power. must only also she t e l l s behaviour. escapes daring tell them t o h e r s e l f . s t o r i e s to her brother, Her f a n t a s i e s reveal a t odds w i t h h e r b o s s y and b e l l i g e r e n t Restless increasing struggle: succeed. does t h e n a r r a t o r hopes and f e a r s I t i s a name t h e outcome o f t h e b r o t h e r - s i s t e r male h e i r must Not and f r u s t r a t e d by h e r m o t h e r ' s p r e s s u r e on h e r t o h e l p w i t h t h e housework, she i n t o r o m a n t i c daydreams i n w h i c h she a c c o m p l i s h e s w a r t i m e r e s c u e s and f e a t s riding. Although these f a n t a s i e s very banality resistance i s poignant, life. read of shooting suggesting the u n i v e r s a l The daydreams a r e o b v i o u s l y as a girl: and h o r s e b a c k a r e commonplace, t h e i r o f t h e young t o t h e c o n s t r a i n t s American Western n o v e l s , well his sister, as a b a l a n c e w i t h L a i r d on one s i d e on t h e o t h e r : which f o r e t e l l s adult that i n which E v e n t h e b o y ' s name, L a i r d , meaning t h e p r o p r i e t o r o f landed but a f t e r the f i g h t overpowering their father and the p a r a l l e l sh i s s u r p a s s e s h e r t o become t h e d o m i n a n t c h i l d family a Shortly i n t o words. and r e p e t i t i o n o f influenced by a g e n r e i n w h i c h Munro h e r s e l f was 28 I u s e d t o make up t h e s e s t o r i e s w h i c h were i m i t a t i o n s of things I read. I r e a d Zane G r e y and so I u s e d t o make up a l o t o f s t o r i e s i n w h i c h I was a s h o o t i n g f r o m t h e h i p w e s t e r n c o w g i r l and t h i n g s l i k e t h a t . 1 ° Just a s Munro drew on h e r r e a d i n g , t h e n a r r a t o r o f "Boys and Girls" incorporates the v i c a r i o u s books i n t o her f a n t a s i e s , which p o s s i b i l i t i e s experience creating lose are l i m i t l e s s . i n books, c o m p l e t e l y c h a r a c t e r s . The h i s t o r i a n he lived Moving from isa the world of difficult f o r t h e n a r r a t o r , as i t i s f o r a l l c h i l d r e n themselves a prairie from an a l t e r n a t e w o r l d i n i m a g i n a t i o n back t o t h e a c t u a l w o r l d adjustment gained youngster i d e n t i f y i n g with the W. L M o r t o n h a s d e s c r i b e d how, a s who r e a d c o n s t a n t l y , he f e l t i n two s e p a r a t e who as though worlds: Thus my a c t u a l l a n d s c a p e , t h e one my n e i g h b o u r s had made and worked i n w i t h a p p a r e n t c o n t e n t , and my l i t e r a r y l a n d s c a p e f r o m t h e banks and b r a e s o f B o n n i e Doon t o t h e l o n g b e a c h e s o f C o r a l I s l a n d , were i n c o n f l i c t . I had no s i n g l e v i s i o n f o r b o t h , b u t had t o r e f o c u s l i k e one p a s s i n g f r o m d a r k t o l i g h t . Nor was t h e c o n f l i c t t o c e a s e f o r many y e a r s . 1 ? As a child, t h e n a r r a t o r o f "Boys and G i r l s " same c o n f l i c t ; experiences the h e r r e a d i n g encourages h e r t o see h e r s e l f i n roles incompatible with class i n h e r time life, however, s h e u s e s h e r r e a d i n g t o h e l p h e r t o i n t e r p r e t experience. the l i m i t e d future a g i r l and p l a c e c a n r e a s o n a b l y expect. of her Later i n She c a n compare h e r f a t h e r ' s a r r a n g e m e n t o f h i s f o x pens t o a m e d i e v a l town, and h i s s a t i s f a c t i o n t h a t he 29 derives his from favourite f a r m work book. to h i s delight i n ROBINSON CRUSOE, To c o n v e y t h e f r u s t r a t i o n an a d o l e s c e n t , t h e remembering n a r r a t o r connotations conflict opposing and s u b m i s s i v e ponders the thereby suggesting the s i d e s o f h e r n a t u r e , and t h e f o r c e s of her s o c i e t y agressive now "girl", as between h e r vague l o n g i n g t o e x p r e s s b o t h t h e dominating has o f t h e word, she f e l t e x p e c t i n g her to r e p r e s s her t e n d e n c i e s and become p a s s i v e . become a s o u r c e o f Her d u a l nature guilt: The word g i r l had f o r m e r l y seemed t o me i n n o c e n t and u n b u r d e n e d l i k e t h e word c h i l d ; now i t a p p e a r e d t h a t i t was no s u c h t h i n g . A girl was n o t , as I had s u p p o s e d , s i m p l y what I was; i t was what I had t o become, (p. 119) The e r o s i o n o f t h e n a r r a t o r ' s earlier convincingly over by h e r u n e a s i n e s s h e r g r a n d m o t h e r , she l e a r n s that sphere i s limited repetitive t h e word, a girl g o o d - t e m p e r e d , modest and i n c u r i o u s her narrow sphere. c o n f i d e n c e i s shown must "girl". be about e v e r y t h i n g o u t s i d e From h e r mother she l e a r n s t o t h e h o u s e , where and u n i m p o r t a n t she must that her perform work: I t seemed t o me t h a t work i n t h e h o u s e was e n d l e s s , d r e a r y and p e c u l i a r l y d e p r e s s i n g ; work done o u t o f d o o r s , and i n my f a t h e r ' s s e r v i c e , was r i t u a l i s t i c a l l y i m p o r t a n t , (p. 117) Since she r e s e n t s h e l p i n g h e r mother w i t h housework, she wonders w h e t h e r she c a n c a l l herself From a girl. The same n o t i o n o f a word a c q u i r i n g such a heavy 30 b u r d e n o f meaning t h a t recurs i n "The difficult to the Office". s t a t e her narrator The i s r e l u c t a n t t o use writer-narrator profession simply i t finds i t and naturally: But h e r e comes t h e d i s c l o s u r e w h i c h i s n o t e a s y f o r me: I am a w r i t e r . T h a t does n o t sound right. Too p r e s u m p t u o u s ; phony, o r a t l e a s t unconvincing. Try again. I write. Is t h a t better? I t r y to w r i t e . T h a t makes i t w o r s e . Hypocritical humility. W e l l t h e n ? (p. 59) Like the word,"girl", descriptive, be a writer but writes w e l l ; not on suggests the up has the stories. the writes his i s not the i r o n y by s t o r i e s are one but merely The not claim only i s published. word, " w r i t e r " , the By Munro fictionalizing having the l a n d l o r d make delusions, t r u t h of a l l s t o r i e s , "Boys and brackets the Girls", a c t i o n of the s a l e s m a n , whose o p i n i o n r e p e a t e d by daughter's the the "The they r a i s e O f f i c e " as First f a t h e r , whose o p i n i o n self-esteem. Repetition r h e t o r i c a l device unify narrator's "Thanks f o r t h e story. "only i s unimportant, favourite the phrase, a much l o v e l y f o r people girl", u s e d by i t is o f a key the phrase t o have t h i n g s " ( p . to the Munro to theme. "I always 50) feed phrase i s a i n DANCE, e n a b l i n g well, the finally is crucial memories t o f u r t h e r h e r R i d e " as to writes rest. In it's well nature of extends the doubts about the as only connotations of Since "writer", declaration that problematic She word, become a n o r m a t i v e t e r m . is a tacit focusing process. but the In think i s used by Lois's mother f i r s t , narrator, clothes for mocking had having the no and their Lois only-a-girl his, her family own adventures in "Red advice fantasies (p. 1 5 4 ) . adjusts her casts the i s one the the the childhood brother, full characterized she the which loses to grows of her power and heroic central role i s passive. role, Similarly, protagonist "Boys and "Be gay1 laughter Girls" g r o w i n g up acts on behaviour according by Let the boys i n your may be read as female, i t s from i t s c e n t r a l r a n g e o f human p o s s i b i l i t y . by of has In c o n t r a s t f a n t a s i e s from extrapolations i s characterized who w h i c h s u g g e s t s ways t o a t t r a c t f r u s t r a t i o n of restricting however, the expectations l e t them h e a r are Girls", i n w h i c h she As slap regrets slaughter, teen-age g i r l Although earns a accepting to her male r e a l i z e s that h e r s e l f i n the i n which her implications that later through r i t u a l i n w h i c h she account of denies way a d o p t i n g a s u i t a b l e manner: feminist is she your eyes s p a r k l e , concern narrator i n a magazine a r t i c l e voice!" who "Boys and awakening s e x u a l i t y . Dress—1946", b o y s by narrator, the discussing s t a n d a r d s , and maturation process her by vulgarity in In gives again h i s hands i s t a n g i b l e p r o o f . self-confidence, sexual her girl She up pretensions, weaker i n r e s p o n s e t o and to The h i s contempt. label. on gradually an f o r her manly s t r e n g t h blood see cost. s t o r y ends w i t h t h e the f o r her r i g h t to b e l i t t l e revealed achieved then picked annoyed a t L o i s her he and to gender Whereas a n d r o g y n o u s f r e e d o m , womanhood l i m i t a t i o n s of being female. As 32 Helen remarks "without t i m e and therefore, narrator narrator will an i m a g i n a r y freedom" i s always a fall Girls", expected be as (p. 196); from g r a c e . to f e a r . t o overcome h i s f e a r , expected live It is as young c h i l d r e n , her b r o t h e r can admit be be d i s p l a y e d In up i n "Boys and and will Peace o f U t r e c h t " , c h i l d r e n i n perfect growing n o t a b l e how Laird i n "The Later, just the last the to suppress her anger, which l o n g as she was a paragraph of the however, as could child. i n t e r v i e w p u b l i s h e d i n CHATELAINE, A l i c e comments on both "Boys and Munro Girls": W e l l , i t was i n t e n d e d t o c o n v e y t h e g i r l a c c e p t i n g her f e m i n i n i t y i n a l l i t s c o m p l e x i t y ; which i m p l i e s t h a t i f she's a g i r l , she's a l l o w e d t o p r o t e s t , h e r mind i s f r e e r t h a n i f she were a man. She d o e s n ' t have t o u n d e r g o t h e b r u t a l c o n d i t i o n i n g t h a t her b r o t h e r does. So t h e r e ' s a s o r t of irony t h e r e . "Oh, y o u ' r e o n l y a g i r l , " b u t maybe i t ' s b e t t e r t o be a g i r l i n t h e s e c i r c u m s t a n c e s . B u t . . . h e r p r o t e s t d o e s n ' t c o u n t , b e c a u s e she has no power. And i t ' s t h e l a c k o f power t h a t g i v e s her the freedom t o speak. I r e a l l y feel that, i n a l l c i v i l i z a t i o n s , probably the s l a v e s see t h i n g s most c l e a r l y . 1 ° In "Boys and problem forces Girls", the p o i n t i s not r e s t r i c t e d of view to the female b o t h b o y s and girls to conform upon them by their culture imposed i s female, but and sex. Growing to separate encoded the up roles i n the language. The developed tell interrelation i n "The Fred Powell of r e a l i t y and Peace o f U t r e c h t " . stories of t h e i r language i s further When H e l e n and p a s t , t h e y use him Maddy as a 33 buffer, truth and the of t h e i r stories as a means o f a v o i d i n g f a c i n g estrangement from each the other: Maddy s u r p r i s e d me by b r i n g i n g him home t o s u p p e r t h e f i r s t n i g h t I was h e r e and t h e n we s p e n t t h e e v e n i n g , as we have s p e n t many s i n c e , making t h i s s t r a n g e man a p r e s e n t o f our childhood . . . (p. 193) Their stories are not designed to repossess the p a s t , but make remembering b e a r a b l e by c o n c e n t r a t i n g on amusing r e c o l l e c t i o n s . Alva "Sunday p l e a s a n t or I t i s t h e same i m p u l s e t o w r i t e so r e s o l u t e l y cheerful a letter to which prompts home i n Afternoon": Don't w o r r y a b o u t me b e i n g lonesome and d o w n t r o d d e n and a l l t h a t maid s o r t o f t h i n g . I w o u l d n ' t l e t anybody g e t away w i t h a n y t h i n g l i k e that. B e s i d e s I'm n o t a maid r e a l l y , i t ' s j u s t f o r t h e summer. I d o n ' t f e e l l o n e s o m e , why s h o u l d I? I j u s t o b s e r v e and am i n t e r e s t e d . ( p . 167) The in gap between A l v a ' s the Gannett irony she realizes exploits class her household of the audience herself letter that the n a r r a t i v e of her life which frames i t i s not simply the knowing more t h a t the Gannetts above h e r own, advantage. The purpose partly to convince h e r s e l f of Alva's h e r mother f r o m a l l o w i n g the Gannetts similarity that to t r e a t letter, spoiling she has her her, later but put these plans, n o t demeaned and to then, i s as a s e r v a n t . between s t o r y t e l l i n g Alva t h e manners o f a i n f o r m a t i o n w h i c h she may to prevent The the c h a r a c t e r . are e x p l o i t i n g them t o o i n o r d e r t o l e a r n partly by and lying, and herself 34 approached directly indirectly i n "The Fred's a t t i t u d e in Peace "Sunday A f t e r n o o n " , i s d i s c u s s e d o f U t r e c h t " , when H e l e n to the s t o r i e s recalls she and h e r s i s t e r tell him: "You g i r l s have g o t good memories," F r e d P o w e l l s a y s , and s i t s w a t c h i n g us w i t h an a i r o f a d m i r a t i o n and s o m e t h i n g e l s e — r e s e r v e , e m b a r r a s s m e n t , d e p r e c a t i o n — w h i c h a p p e a r s on t h e f a c e s o f t h e s e m i l d d e l i b e r a t e p e o p l e as t h e y watch the keyed-up a n t i c s of t h e i r e n t e r t a i n e r s , (p. 193) Amused, b u t w i t h r e s e r v a t i o n s , conservatism who of t h e i r draw a t t e n t i o n outward Fred t y p i f i e s s o c i e t y , which suspects form o f i n n e r strength. The storytellers, i n t h e town. H e l e n has t w e n t y - f i v e hundred miles f o r t h i s v i s i t , living town where she grew up, i n the s m a l l i s her o n l y r e a l friend. r e l a t i o n s h i s h i p w i t h him he a l o n e s p e a k s The Mother used Peace as she linked whose i l l n e s s conspicuous too. appearance declares later, Similarly, who i n "The that calls of Utrecht". so c o n s p i c u o u s t h a t o f t h e o l d man that does. The anger phrase, her t h e mere m e n t i o n she u s e d through the p o s s e s s i v e pronoun was and Maddy, d e s p i t e stories, "your m o t h e r " re-awakens t h e r e s e n t m e n t being and H e l e n o f t h e shame and to cause her. Years an travelled 1 i n "The "your m o t h e r " r e m i n d s Maddy i s e x p r e s s e d by M a d d y s s a y i n g t h e same l a n g u a g e to i t s e l f as s t r e n g t h of her L a n g u a g e , t h e medium f o r t e l l i n g attention individuals t o t h e m s e l v e s , and v a l u e s r e t i c e n c e Helen, are o u t s i d e r s Fred the to f e e l at t o a mother i t made h e r daughters Time o f D e a t h " , comes a r o u n d of to sharpen the 35 scissors brother linked releases P a t r i c i a ' s unexpressed Benny's d e a t h . through The language b e e n one scissors because man had "The Peace o f U t r e c h t " t o o , the n a r r a t o r she feels H e a r i n g her reproached up life beyond Benny were words Benny c o u l d s p e a k . f o r having escaped sick mother. In i s sensitive s i s t e r speaking w i t h the Maddy assumed f o r t h e i r a and her "Bram", Benny's name f o r him, language. o f t h e few g r i e f over to local accent the r e s p o n s i b i l i t i e s Maddy's l o s t hopes f o r t h e c o n f i n e s o f t h e s m a l l town where t h e y grew are suggested by the loss of the educated a c c e n t she once cultivated. When Maddy and t h e n a r r a t o r were y o u n g , t h e y e a s e d pain of being m i s f i t s burden "Our o f w a i t i n g on G o t h i c Mother" father by m i m i c i n g the t h e i r mother by (p. 1 9 5 ) . l o c a l accent, i n "Walker B r o t h e r s Cowboy", t u r n s t h e c i r c u m s t a n c e s o f h i s j o b as d o o r - t o - d o o r anecdotes and everything songs: from "And corns into vaudeville courage reassures his family. like a f a i l u r e , he former or girlfriend. salesman, he e x p e r i e n c e and family and salesman; Not Jordan o f h i s own own a sympathetic as f o x farmer dramatizes h i s p r e s e n t s i t t o an a u d i e n c e i s the hero oils,/For S i n c e he r e f u s e s t o a c t manque who Ben the into renews h i s c o n t a i n e d by h i s r o l e s friends. into Transforming f o r e s t a l l s p i t y even from i s an a r t i s t close he comedy, he the unhappy salesman (p. 4 ) . humiliation and Ben, have a l l l i n a m e n t s and to b o i l s " and t r a n s f o r m i n g her In t h e same way, the composed o f h i s i s more t h a n life-story. a 36 "Walker B r o t h e r ' s Munro's f i r s t between r e a l when t h e is narrator the well-meaning the collection life s t r u c k by dying Cowboy" i s n o t and In a dying theatricality teacher child, has and, celebration i s missing, narrator one of as the i s hollow. to the heart" Myra, who 110), was As memory—the friend. always i n t o Myra's world" She she calls their calls the back t o girl who ending of died the the "the did girls (p. unusual a nurse cannot ether-smelling a t t e n t i o n to the enter hospital l i m i t a t i o n s of subjectivity. "The Peace of Utrecht" too, not treachery young—than she the importance popular an a the choose senses t h a t s t o r y , the that in moment f o r legendary uses" more as a of t o h e r s e l f , she preferred "unknown, e x a l t e d , Throughout for s i n g l e s out her acknowledges Helen's r e a l i z a t i o n (p. 1 1 0 ) , party succeeds when she n a r r a t o r , who words, s i g n i f i c a n t f o r e i g n e r , the and and "set apart Moreover, the returning out ritual sick g i r l , Helen admits (p. 110); i n other the i n e v i t a b l y over-emphasizes r e t u r n Myra's a f f e c t i o n . own play she A f o r h e r s e l f ; however, e v e n t h i s artificial o f Myra's a c t i o n . my and Myra, t h e special friend deathbed o c c a s i o n occasion. girls spontaneous gesture her the B u t t e r f l y " , joy which i s u s u a l l y a s s o c i a t e d with presents seems o d d l y the a l t h o u g h the birthday only of resemblance c o n t r i v e d a mock b i r t h d a y parts, making t h e "Day story i n schoolmate i n h o s p i t a l , of assigned gift-giving the only which suggests the theatre. visits the narrator to of 37 confronts and the l i m i t a t i o n s her s i s t e r evasions of her subjective viewpoint. are unable She t o overcome t h e f a l s e h o o d s and w h i c h t h e y have i n c o r p o r a t e d i n t o their s t o r i e s of the p a s t , " t h a t v e r s i o n o f our c h i l d h o o d which i s s a f e l y preserved i n a n e c d o t e , as i n a k i n d o f m e n t a l (p. 1 9 3 ) . The p r o p e r t i e s o f c e l l o p h a n e , coupled with extended serve over raspberries. The image i s w h i c h Maddy p l a n s t o use t o By r e f u s i n g t o a c k n o w l e d g e h e r g u i l t her mother's death, after make i t an a p t between t h e s i s t e r s . by t h e c u t - g l a s s bowl as g l a s s . transparency s t r e n g t h and i m p e r m e a b i l i t y , image f o r t h e b a r r i e r cellophane" Finally, Maddy h e r s e l f h a s become a s b r i t t l e t h e bowl s h a t t e r s on t h e k i t c h e n s h e a d m i t s t h a t she s a c r i f i c e d floor h e r mother's wish t o r e m a i n a t home t o h e r own o v e r w h e l m i n g d e s i r e t o b r e a k of (p. her: "'I couldn't 210). Having confessed succeed bowls. life" " I ' v e g o t a whole s h e l f are doubtful full of glass I ' v e g o t enough g l a s s b o w l s t o do me t h e r e s t ( p . 210) . One moment o f s e l f - r e v e l a t i o n , g l a s s b o w l s seems t o i m p l y , i s not s u f f i c i e n t Nevertheless, occasion the breaking f o r Helen Fragmentation, wholeness. over o f my so t h e s h e l f t o overcome lifetime. o f t h e g l a s s bowl p r o v i d e s t h e t o urge her s i s t e r then, a life'" Maddy may but her prospects a burden o f remorse accumulated of 'I wanted my her s e l f i s h n e s s , i n making a new l i f e , when, a s she s a y s , of go o n , ' s h e s a i d . free to forget the past. perhaps i m p l i e s the p o s s i b i l i t y o f Significantly enough, f r a g m e n t a t i o n dismemberment i s t h e f a t e of i n t h e form Orpheus i n t h e myth w h i c h 38 loosely by the structures DANCE. Orpheus i s e v e n t u a l l y Maenads, h i s head t h r o w n i n t o t h e the r e s t of the Muses. h i s body b u r i e d at the river torn apart Hebrus f o o t o f Mt. and Olympus by T h r o u g h o u t DANCE, Munro c o n s i s t e n t l y embeds s t o r i e s within the text. listen t o and storytelling From i n f a n c y tell stories. counters the s m a l l - t o w n and stories more e x o t i c in this milieu. rather well as elements of provide a larger protagonists. and of since the too, Moreover, the medieval with personal her child's fears imagination has imaginary ordeals, fed she on are would expect European f a i r y - s t o r y motifs, romance and frame f o r t h e and embedded t h e i r o r i g i n s are classical of temporarily s t o r i e s , by ultimately child Munro's t e c h n i q u e experience u n t i l as myth, everyday experience of a t m o s p h e r e c h a n g e s , b e c o m i n g m y s t e r i o u s and A l t h o u g h the narrators drab s u r p r i s i n g t h a n one "Images" i s t y p i c a l weaving f a n t a s y surface rural life Frequently than Canadian. these This c h a r a c t e r i s t i c realistic predictable are t o o l d age, of the menacing. increased passing because through becomes s t r o n g e r and more self-assured. As stories adolescents, as models: t h e m s e l v e s , and themselves. the stories influence a l s o determine the Unfortunately, suggesting p o s s i b i l i t i e s fantasy, and female p r o t a g o n i s t s lead the future s t o r i e s may which can way only to d i s i l l u s i o n m e n t and of DANCE they use see they imagine t a n t a l i z e them be realized in a retreat from for by 39 action into With whatever the p a s s i v i t y the p a s s i n g of time, lies protagonists of like for past l i v e s ( p. blind, language. Certain and 197), and the t r u t h . turn and with emotive as w e l l "your the c o n t r o l l e r phrases reveal problems In "The "a l i t t l e b l i n d window o f c o l o u r e d The Peace o f U t r e c h t " , the c o n t r a d i c t i o n s w i t h i n strain sister in pairing the the s t r a i n t r y to t a l k as d e s c r i p t i v e rather the adjective, Helen together. Words p r o p e r t i e s make i t sometimes words as t h e y must, b u t Helen as i s Language's than the v e h i c l e of thought. by w o r d s — a s in mysterious mother" i n t h e same s t o r y . manipulate manipulated These i n t o charms w h i c h evoke s t r o n g f e e l i n g , t h e way narrators her stories i n DANCE a r e r e f l e c t e d w i t h t h e noun, window, r e f l e c t s f e e l s when she Older paradox. suggests relationship. also fixed; Peace o f U t r e c h t " , a r e w h i c h Munro r a i s e s of ambiguity sisters' may i n "The example, t h e p h r a s e glass" become more aware o f t h e d i v e r g e n c e between t h e storytelling depths Helen of t h e i r problems of stories they c o n t a i n a c q u i r e a spurious t r u t h . uncomfortably they t e l l o f daydreams. i s i n "The Munro's they are also Peace o f U t r e c h t " , when Maddy h o l d s h e r a t a d i s t a n c e by c o n f i n i n g c o n v e r s a t i o n to anecdotes an outsider. about Storytellers the past which are s u i t a b l e are noteworthy to share with i n DANCE, where t h e y f o r m sub-class o f o u t s i d e r s who reject, o r a r e r e j e c t e d by, society. G e n e r a l l y they are female, a l t h o u g h Ben "Walker B r o t h e r s Cowboy" i s a s i g n i f i c a n t their Jordan i n exception. a 40 Frequently, they express storytelling, experience between to and into admit stories. storytelling draw i t . and ambivalent feelings about their to uneasiness over t r a n s f o r m i n g They b e l i e v e a l i n e lying, should but they are not exist s u r e where AH Notes 1 A l i c e Munro, DANCE OF THE HAPPY SHADES ( T o r o n t o : M c G r a w - H i l l R y e r s o n , 1968) . S u b s e q u e n t r e f e r e n c e s a p p e a r i n the t e x t . 2 A l i c e Munro, "The C o l o n e l ' s Hash R e s e t t l e d , " i n THE NARRATIVE VOICE, e d . J o h n M e t c a l f e ( T o r o n t o : U n i v . o f T o r o n t o P r e s s , 1 9 7 2 ) , p. 182. 3 A n n i e D i l l a r d , L I V I N G BY FICTION (New Y o r k : H a r p e r C o l o p h o n , 1 9 8 3 ) , p. 29. 4 : Munro, "The C o l o n e l ' s Hash R e s e t t l e d , " p. 182. 5 D.H. L a w r e n c e , "The S p i r i t o f P l a c e , " i n STUDIES IN CLASSIC AMERICAN LITERATURE 1924; r p t . i n D.H. LAWRENCE: SELECTED LITERARY CRITICISM, e d . A n t h o n y B e a l ( London: Heinemann, 1 9 6 4 ) , p. 297. 6 A l i c e Munro, "What I s R e a l ? " i n MAKING IT NEW, e d . John M e t c a l f e ( T o r o n t o : Methuen, 1 9 8 2 ) , p . 226. 7 A l a n T w i g g , CONVERSATIONS WITH 24 CANADIAN WRITERS ( M a d e i r a P a r k , B.C.: H a r b o u r , 1 9 8 1 ) , p. 15. 8 B r u n o B e t t e l h e i m , THE USES OF ENCHANTMENT (New Y o r k : K n o p f , 1 9 7 6 ) , p . 8. 9 R o b e r t K r o e t s c h , "Contemporary S t a n d a r d s i n the C a n a d i a n N o v e l , " ESSAYS ON CANADIAN WRITING, No. 20 (1980), p. 17. 10 N o r t h r o p F r y e , FABLES OF IDENTITY (New Y o r k : H a r c o u r t , B r a c e & W o r l d , 1 9 6 3 ) , p . 36. 11 Hugh G a r n e r , P r e f . , DANCE OF THE HAPPY SHADES by A l i c e Munro ( T o r o n t o : R y e r s o n , 1968) n. p a g . 12 H e l e n Hoy, " D u l l , S i m p l e , Amazing and U n f a t h o n a b l e : P a r a d o x and D o u b l e V i s i o n i n A l i c e Munro's F i c t i o n , " STUDIES IN CANADIAN LITERATURE, No. 5 ( 1 9 8 0 ) , pp. 100-15. 13 B e t t e l h e i m , p. 61. 14 P a u l E n g l a n d , F I F T Y FAVOURITE OPERAS, 5 t h . e d . (New Y o r k : H a r p e r , n . d . ) , p. 23. >2 15 E r i c A u e r b a c h , MIMESIS ( P r i n c e t o n : P r i n c e t o n U n i v . P r e s s , 1 9 7 1 ) , p. 136. 16 J o h n M e t c a l f e , "A C o n v e r s a t i o n w i t h A l i c e Munro," JOURNAL OF CANADIAN FICTION, 1, No. 4 (1972), 54. 17 W.L. M o r t o n , " S e e i n g an U n l i t e r a r y L a n d s c a p e , " MOSAIC, 3, No. 3 ( 1 9 7 0 ) , r p t . i n CONTEXTS OF CANADA'S PAST, e d . A.B. M c K i l l o p ( T o r o n t o : M a c m i l l a n , 1 9 8 0 ) , p. 19. 18 A l i c e Munro, as q u o t e d i n Kern Murch, "Name: A l i c e Munro, O c c u p a t i o n : W r i t e r , " i n CHATELAINE, Aug. 1975, p . 71. 43 Chapter Turning The story opening Life paragraph Two Into Fiction o f "The F l a t s Road", t h e f i r s t i n LIVES, i n t r o d u c e s a c h a r a c t e r c a l l e d o n l y t o add i n t h e s e c o n d p a r a g r a p h Uncle the following disclaimer: "He was n o t o u r u n c l e o r a n y b o d y ' s " . 1 the refers sentence address as " u n c l e " , i t a l s o i m p l i e s t h a t language i s n o t t r u s t w o r t h y , with reality. Since and t h a t i l l u s i o n these i n LIVES, which i s p r i m a r i l y feminine experience The occasionally tightly the i n d i v i d u a l i n DANCE a r e o f t e n already t o d i s c o v e r them concerned with the and y o u t h . two s t o r y c y c l e s d i f f e r , w h i c h Munro u n i f i e s stories of childhood i s easily themes have emerged i n DANCE, i t i s n o t s u r p r i s i n g again While t o t h e custom o f a l l o w i n g c h i l d r e n t o family friends confused Benny, linked however, i n t h e way i n s t o r i e s w i t h i n them. The t h e m a t i c a l l y and g e o g r a p h i c a l l y , b u t t h e y do n o t c o h e r e a s do t h e s t o r i e s as i n L I V E S . I n LIVES,, t h r o u g h t h e i n n o v a t i o n o f a n a r r a t o r who i s an a p p r e n t i c e w r i t e r , Munro unifies the stories within a single unfolding Since Del Jordan bound together grows up a l l o w rationale i s always t h e n a r r a t o r , consciousness. t h e segments a r e by common themes, and h e r e x p e r i e n c e s thematic d e v e l o p m e n t and p r o v i d e t h e f o r the country and town settings. a s she 44 S i n c e LIVES i s a n a r r a t i v e roughly chronological geographical mistaken their for a novel. "People's lives, found the protagonist. a novel, Forrest L. 249). epilogue t o draw a t t e n t i o n but instead, work p r o p e r l y of distorted example, resonant sentence, e v e r y w h e r e , were top-heavy" and a initially dull, R e v i e w i n g L I V E S as B o t h w o u l d be 2 the i t was u n f a t h o n a b l e — d e e p caves paved (p. minor c h a r a c t e r s as has i s , however, a James P o l k , f o r in Jubilee linoleum" to which term, n o v e l , 1 kitchen fact, voice, A l i c e M u n r o s theme i n t h e a m a z i n g , and of The response. simple, Polk narrative length, observes u n i t i e s made e a r l y r e v i e w e r s u n e a s y and critical identified substantial d e v e l o p m e n t , and s e t t i n g and misnomer t h a t of deplored a with novel, the away f r o m tendency the w e a k n e s s e s i f L I V E S were, i n they are belongs, Ingram's t e r m , o r strengths the story "open f o r m " , as of the cycle J.R. genre in Struthers 3 calls i t . The cycle i s the c h a r a c t e r i s t i c w h i c h marks L I V E S as balanced tension each s t o r y and the Since the conclusion cycle, the epilogue observations properly general of belong the pattern i s the of the a young w r i t e r . of Leitch Del town o f i n a work w h i c h c h r o n i c l e s of of whole j u s t as o t h e r p e o p l e i n the story individuality i n t e r p r e t i v e key i s appropriate, apprenticeship L I V E S , L.M. between t h e a Analysing to a story Jordan's Jubilee the the structure observes: As w i t h t h e d e l i n e a t i o n o f a community, e p i s o d i c s t r u c t u r e a l s o lends i t s e l f to the 45 autobiographical materials organized t h e s e l e c t i v e w o r k i n g s o f memory, a f o u n d t h r o u g h o u t Munro's work.^ Loose o r g a n i z a t i o n its in distinctive according flavour. a straight line Unlike according to association, and Episodes are acquire t o memory g i v e s novels circles grouped M a r g a r e t L a u r e n c e ' s A BIRD IN THE structural principle, difference between t h a t work and in their d i r e c t i o n s of lines of her effect, according together to laws by arrangement. HOUSE f o l l o w s L a u r e n c e has work w h i c h move f o r w a r d meaning t h r o u g h and the laws o f c a u s e and t h e s e s t o r i e s move i n c o n c e n t r i c of r e c o l l e c t i o n . to i n d i c a t e preoccupation the expressed novels as same the a difference force: vertical i n the short 5 s t o r y c y c l e , and As both like interest is an very embryonic w r i t e r , the other young g i r l s i n words, the young as Stephen Dedalus a YOUNG MAN, as their sense. end and novel. protagonist, u n l i k e them. t o o l s of her a heightened trade, response to Del Jordon, i s Her pronounced a p p e a r s when language. i n James J o y c e ' s A PORTRAIT OF Del upon a d e a d cow, the h o r i z o n t a l i n the i s s e n s i t i v e to the When D e l Del of a s t i c k as first she and her traces ARTIST cow's eye eye words i n s t e a d : I s a i d , expanding the 'DAy-ud cow, d a y - u d cow'" f r o m a c t i o n i n t o words i s n o t typical well for (p. 4 4 ) . of Del, with itself. so, lusciously. settles socket U n a b l e t o b r i n g h e r s e l f t o do "'Day-ud cow,' AS Mary Agnes, come imagines p i e r c i n g the she Like sound o f words as cousin, the THE she probing word Retreating however; she 46 is an e n t h u s i a s t i c p a r t i c i p a n t i n l i f e as w e l l as i t s chronicler. A distinctive feature of her childhood i s that she i s s u r r o u n d e d by s t o r y t e l l e r s . Among them, two models o f o p p o s i n g n a r r a t i v e s t a n c e s emerge: U n c l e Benny and Uncle C r a i g . life that U n c l e Benny i s so immersed his tales rise up l i k e life home; U n c l e C r a i g h a s so s u c c e s s f u l l y by " p r e f e r r i n g n o t " , his sisters his book on t h e h i s t o r y o f Wawanash C o u n t y i s a record proudly i n t h e chaos o f b u b b l e s o f gas from t h e G r e n o c h Swamp w h i c h i s h i s n a t u r a l withdrawn from outstanding incorporate preference Craig's own d e s i r e actions that lifeless t o b e : s h e must Despite learns too, seeing her youthful Benny's to value Uncle i treincarnated i n t o document h e r p a s t . o f s t o r i e s and s t o r y t e l l e r s the d e s i r e t o remember one's p a s t i n i t i s not e x c l u s i v e to f i c t i o n h i s own f i c t i o n s i n LIVES d e f i n e themselves not only but a l s o through t h e i r of the narrative's subtle who a r e i d e o l o g i c a l l y o p p o s e d The i d e a and i s t h e The through s t o r i e s about t h e i r i r o n i e s i s that i n LIVES and f i n d writers. o f h i s own i d e n t i t y p e r m e a t e s t h e work. characters One fordetail each i n d i v i d u a l c r e a t e s artist Del aspires she u l t i m a t e l y proliferation suggests that that of writer manner, approach i s broad f o r t h e pungent v a r i e t y o f Uncle passion The Neither elements o f both u n c l e s . junkyard-swampworld, meaning his self-effacing o f f a c t s and f i g u r e s . enough f o r t h e k i n d her describe as Del's their past. aunts, to the attention-seeking 47 inherent allied i n being a writer w i t h her through their love of the r i d i c u l o u s . strictures of t h e i r like Although shaped artistically they resemble process: of t h e i r constructed with writer for Del w i l l themselves above a l l , a comic duet. "each the aunts obey the s o c i e t y , which emphasizes hard and, lives tempermentally i m a g i n a t i o n , p l a y f u l n e s s and good h o u s e k e e p i n g , their Del, are terrible through s e l v e s was care" their seen (p. 5 9 ) . become, t h e a u n t s as w e l l conformity, they D e l , as a r t i s t , two as t h e i r work, have stories until recognises t o be something L i k e the i n v e n t and tell the fiction stories audience: Aunt E l s p e t h and A u n t i e G r a c e t o l d s t o r i e s . It d i d n o t seem as i f t h e y were t e l l i n g them t o me, t o e n t e r t a i n me, b u t as i f t h e y w o u l d have t o l d them anyway, f o r t h e i r own p l e a s u r e , e v e n i f t h e y had b e e n a l o n e , (p. 33) The reflect aunts themselves upon i t as w r i t e r s artist's ask, detach urge what i f ? practical t o push events They r e v e a l joking and i n the p i l e s Elspeth shakes the b i t s herself to this just After o f hay Auntie Grace's have wanted to imaginary o f hay. a t v a r i a n c e with her difference, moreover, they from public in their D e l i n a game o f this episode, her h a i r , Aunt "with persona of of attention come by, w o u l d n ' t While little dignified comment draws f u r t h e r (p. 5 0 ) . the c o n c l u s i o n s , to (p. 5 0 ) , s h o w i n g a s i d e " ' I f a c a r had to d i e ? ' " i n order share these c h a r a c t e r i s t i c s sounds o f p l e a s u r e " rectitude. experience readiness to j o i n jumping snorting do; from paying you to 48 lip-service to the p r o p r i e t i e s , nevertheless, to that her p l e a s u r e . reveals the danger As implies, of being observed more d e t a i l s i t s complexity. romp, t h e i r A u n t i e Grace accumulate, Although the aunts contributes the join incident Del i n her p l e a s u r e i s n o t t h e same as h e r s : A u n t E l s p e t h and A u n t i e G r a c e had come and jumped i n t h e hay t o o , w i t h t h e i r a p r o n s f l y i n g , laughing at themselves. When t h e moment came t h e y w o u l d h e s i t a t e , and jump w i t h n o t q u i t e s u f f i c i e n t abandon, l a n d i n g i n a d e c o r o u s s i t t i n g p o s i t i o n , hands s p r e a d as b o u n c i n g on a c u s h i o n , o r h o l d i n g t h e i r h a i r . (p. 50) U n l i k e D e l ' s spontaneous self-conscious. hay coil which and w h o l e h e a r t e d I t i s not the leap into play, the c e n t r e of they enjoy, but the idea of Their in e x p e r i e n c e ; i t becomes t h e o c c a s i o n f o r recollecting flout themselves convention. sees a resemblance in t h e way inherently i s more p l e a s i n g that as spunky and L a t e r , when D e l r e a d s WAR a l l t h r e e see t h e i r mastery edge t o t h e i r and "Is it that was directed joking particularly f o r t h e dog!" (p. 3 6 ) . the r e s o r t aunts' apparent daring AND to PEACE, Tolstoy's she Natasha, Although the of housekeeping, t h e h a i r b r u s h you u s e traditionally the mimicry than b r o t h e r ' s work as more i m p o r t a n t t h a n t h e i r s . seem c o n t e n t i n t h e i r resentment, i n retrospect girlish, between h e r a u n t s and the themselves leaping. actual action theirs i s the suggests a degree aunts critical of a g a i n s t D e l ' s mother: on y o u r h a i r ? This kind Oh, we thought of s n i p i n g i s of the powerless, s u g g e s t i n g t h a t security i s t h r e a t e n e d by D e l ' s m o t h e r ' s 49 differing view convictions attention of the r o l e about their they crave. o f women. proper place i n l i f e Unconscious audience i n D e l , and u l t i m a t e l y relaying their As stories a child "went a l o n g s t r a i g h t 36). Ada J o r d a n lines", are and s t r a i g h t f o r w a r d way o f l i f e ; and that her to Del. The a u n t s mother t r i e s comfort opposed, they o f f e r synthesize the opposing and D e l ' s mother while her Although the order i s seductive, Del realizes the s a c r i f i c e thinking. of personal too, noticing the In her w r i t i n g , Del can v i e w p o i n t s o f U n c l e Benny and U n c l e a s a woman, however, she must c h o o s e between t h e o p t i o n s r e p r e s e n t e d by h e r mother and t h e a u n t s . c h a r a c t e r who s y m p a t h i z e s The o n l y w i t h b o t h v i e w p o i n t s and m e d i a t e s between them i s D e l ' s f a t h e r . his Ada when D e l a c h o i c e o f female She i s h e r m o t h e r ' s d a u g h t e r i n their and G r a c e a r e feelings i n t r y t o make h e r p r a c t i c a l , of the aunts' world i n expressing by u n d e r m i n i n g t o make h e r i n t e l l e c t u a l . inconsistencies Craig; Elspeth Since the aunts i t i s achieved through ambition. deserve. and d i s a p p e a r i n g and c o m i n g b a c k " ( p . i s direct diametrically models. voice, "wove i n and o u t d i s a p p r o v i n g o f h e r , b u t show t h e i r about they their w i t h h e r m o t h e r , who whereas t h e y s u b t l e and d e v i o u s ways, c h i e f l y talking audience and A u n t i e G r a c e her, retreating less them t h e they f i n d s h e becomes t h e i r t o t h e wider her d i s a p p r o v a l o f t h e i r no artists, cost o b s e r v i n g t h e women o f h e r f a m i l y , D e l compares Aunt E l s p e t h around The a u n t s ' He c a n r e m a i n detached, but d e t a c h m e n t i s n o t dynamic b u t p a s s i v e : "The F l a t s Road 50 w o u l d do 8). f o r him; In h i s p r o u d U n c l e Benny w o u l d do refusal e q u a l , he is closely w i f e , who collides t o seek allied a friend who w i t h the aunts. with d i f f i c u l t i e s ignores or minimizes for his friend" (p. would be h i s Unlike his head-on, Ben Jordan them: My f a t h e r s t a r t e d t r y i n g t o p e r s u a d e U n c l e Benny t h a t i t was n o t s u c h a bad t h i n g t o be r i d o f Madeleine, a f t e r a l l . He p o i n t e d o u t t h a t she had n o t been a p a r t i c u l a r l y good h o u s e k e e p e r and t h a t she had n o t made U n c l e Benny's l i f e e x a c t l y c o m f o r t a b l e and s e r e n e . He d i d t h i s i n a d i p l o m a t i c way, n o t f o r g e t t i n g he was t a l k i n g a b o u t a man's w i f e . (p. 20) H i s weary t a c t has at a distance. her and action. lack of r e s t r a i n t , Following of r e c y c l i n g asks, "Were you folks a t the f u n e r a l ? " brought father's the s t r a i n s avoiding speech i s excess of i t . concerning the p a r t s o f t h e body a f t e r t h e gap death, needs t o q u e s t i o n s about he the be between h e r v i e w p o i n t and i t raises of which future these ideas with (p. 4 8 ) . A l t h o u g h Ada h u s b a n d ' s i s so g r e a t t h a t marriage, her planning to discuss down t o e a r t h , of I f D e l ' s mother's b e s e t t i n g s i n Ada's i m p a s s i o n e d possibilities i n f l u e n c e , b u t i t p l a c e s him L i k e h i s humour, i t i s a way responsibility is a moderating her their Del senses but attempts to overlook: B u t a t t h i s moment, s e e i n g my mother go meek and b e w i l d e r e d . . . and my f a t h e r t o u c h i n g h e r i n such a g e n t l e , compassionate, g r i e v i n g way . . . I was a l a r m e d . . . I was a f r a i d t h a t t h e y w o u l d go on and show me s o m e t h i n g I no more wanted t o see t h a n I wanted t o see U n c l e C r a i g d e a d . (p. 49) 51 E v e n so c u r i o u s an draws b a c k f r o m I g n o r i n g her father analysis t h a t her by lives complex m u t u a l as on the farm, a r e happy t o g e t h e r . d i s c u s s i n g her but telling Del present stories her D e l wants t o Her t o b e l i e v e i n t h e myth o f m a r r i a g e never father, parents time Del dependence. m o t h e r ' s move t o t h e house i n town w h i l e encourages her ending of other people's of t h e i r r e m a i n s most o f t h e believe Del's observer feelings mother as a happy towards of the p a s t i n s t e a d : In t h e b e g i n n i n g o f h e r s t o r y was d a r k c a p t i v i t y , s u f f e r i n g , t h e n d a r i n g and d e f i a n c e and escape. Struggle d i s a p p o i n t m e n t , more s t r u g g l e , godmothers and v i l l a i n s . Now I e x p e c t e d as i n a l l momentous s a t i s f y i n g s t o r i e s — t h e b u r s t o f G l o r y , t h e Reward. M a r r i a g e t o my f a t h e r ? I hoped t h i s was i t . I w i s h e d she w o u l d l e a v e me i n no d o u b t a b o u t i t . (p. 78) At t h i s stage understanding life. her young g i r l life. she As her is a fairytale; appropriate Later, fairytale she has between a p p l i e s the difficulty life and into stories mother t e l l s i t , her life c o n c l u s i o n , marriage of her own, to as t h e r e f o r e Del a n t i c i p a t e s a fiction about shape o f f i c t i o n a the to her p r i n c e . i n Del's r e l a t i o n s h i p with Garnet retreats mother's life, the d i f f e r e n c e Unconsciously, mother's again of Del's French, heedless of she her warnings: "You've gone a d d l e d o v e r a boy. You w i t h y o u r intelligence. Do you i n t e n d t o l i v e i n J u b i l e e a l l your l i f e ? Do you want t o be t h e w i f e o f a lumberyard worker? Do you want t o j o i n t h e B a p t i s t L a d i e s A i d ? " (p. 217) 52 Del r e f u s e s t o c o n s i d e r her p r o b a b l e lives that entirely she i n the p r e s e n t . acknowledge h i s mastery t h e w a t e r does she is not Garnet own fiction. keep him 234), Not as he as of her she understands i n h i s golden i s r e l e a s e d from With understanding until to h e r s e l f i s , but Once she sewed up she admit f u t u r e with Garnet, Garnet t h e boy that she had lover's skin comes shame a t h a v i n g deceitful to creation; demands o f h e r . has She her to r e j e c t on an e n t i r e l y (p. and has 235). has committed f o r the f u t u r e that when he makes through him she her a r t i s t i c d e s t i n y s i n c e non-verbal my o f an a r t i s t s u p e r i o r i s shocked finally realizes his f a n t a s y , Garnet reality, i s that t h e r e f o r e , she been a t t e m p t i n g attracts to Garnet love. . . . matching to Del not o n l y f o r the p r e s e n t but Del's a t t i t u d e her offerings been e x p e r i e n c i n g l o v e as been e x p e r i e n c i n g i t as e v e r y d a y too. "meant t o "somehow met play-acting with his true intent" himself i n her the enchantment o f b e i n g i n complexity D e l has loves f o r e v e r " (p. w i t h my While she c r e a t e d him good o f f e r i n g s and insists i n the s t r u g g l e i n that has and he level: I c o u l d n o t have made s e n s e o f any book, p u t one word a f t e r a n o t h e r , w i t h G a r n e t i n t h e room. I t was a l l I c o u l d do t o r e a d t h e words on a b i l l b o a r d when we were d r i v i n g . I t was t h e v e r y o p p o s i t e o f g o i n g o u t w i t h J e r r y , and s e e i n g t h e w o r l d d e n s e and c o m p l i c a t e d b u t a p p a l l i n g l y u n s e c r e t i v e ; t h e w o r l d I saw w i t h G a r n e t was s o m e t h i n g n o t f a r f r o m what I t h o u g h t a n i m a l s must s e e , t h e w o r l d w i t h o u t names, (p. 218) Garnet t h e n , has appealed to her as an a l t e r n a t i v e t o books 53 or even speech. Del In the j o y o f her f i r s t i s speechless f o r once: "Nothing sexual fulfillment, t h a t c o u l d be s a i d by us w o u l d b r i n g us t o g e t h e r ; words were o u r e n e m i e s " (p. 217). For a time, Del's sexual connection with r e p l a c e s words and l i t e r a t u r e , b u t , when t h e r e l a t i o n s h i p ends and s h e mourns i t s e n d i n g , when s h e q u o t e s it Tennyson's "one o f t h e s i l l i e s t the she r e t u r n s t o l i t e r a t u r e "Mariana", e v e n t h o u g h she c a l l s poems I had e v e r read" ( p . 238) . In same way, she s i m u l t a n e o u s l y c l a i m s and d i s c l a i m s t h e sentiment i n Tennyson's line, Even as she g r i e v e s over having "He cometh n o t , she s a i d " . losing returned t o the world Garnet, Del f e e l s understand time a mild s e n s i b l e g r a t i t u d e f o r these I felt words, these strange t h a t I was r e a d i n g , and a f t e r possibilities t h e want a d s , t h e l i n e t o t h e o l d way o f l i f e , Garnet. Quoting letters poet's (p. 2 3 8 ) . some printed L i k e t h e words T e n n y s o n ' s poem r e s t o r e s D e l as she l i v e d i tbefore links s h e met h e r s e l f with her t h e pen name, P r i n c e s s I d a , when to the e d i t o r idyllic from T e n n y s o n , she a l s o m o t h e r , who a d o p t s relief at i n w h i c h words make s e n s e : " I made m y s e l f in Garnet writing i n which she i m i t a t e s t h e V i c t o r i a n description of nature. Munro's r e f e r e n c e s t o T e n n y s o n a r e c h a r a c t e r i s t i c o f her artistic Mariana lover, as method i n L I V E S . f o r the daughter The a l l u s i o n s who w a i t s are apt: i n v a i n f o r the absent P r i n c e s s I d a f o r t h e mother who b e l i e v e s i n e d u c a t i o n t h e means o f i m p r o v i n g particularly womens' l i v e s . appropriate heroine P r i n c e s s Ida i s a f o r D e l ' s mother t o i n v o k e . 54 In T e n n y s o n ' s poem, "The P r i n c e s s " , she women's c o l l e g e b a s e d on feminist principles succinctly described by the k i n g , her i s the father: " . . . knowledge so d a u g h t e r held,/Was a l l i n a l l . " " Ada name i s so Ida—gives 0 the conveniently c l o s e to d i s t r a c t e d " (p. 1 7 3 ) . a major d i s t r a c t i o n . crucial point i n her By falling career, just scholarship hoped t o w i n . and had of high o b l i q u e l y t o a p o e t and ironic relation have t h e vulnerable not through her learn this t h e m s e l v e s t o be teachers structure stops Princess by two Ida, of course, Jordan like Del's of g i r l s and work. I t i s Ada's q u o t i n g Ida but goals as rightly on treatment of the the chain stand in not reader allow scholars her and in there, a l l but "Locksley the briefly belongs one the Munro occasion anyway, makes a women" t h a t becomes t h e speech which completes loses the b o t h women l e c t u r e Del from a mother, i s instinct, Since is between them. s p e e c h w h i c h i s memorable b e c a u s e i t c o n t a i n s "lives at poems t h a t Having placed to brains. final parallels explanations is inclined that c h a r a c t e r s , Munro does swayed f r o m t h e i r o f Munro's s t o r y . who specific maternal marrying, Princess her first your him a my advice Having a l l u d e d upon t h e i n LIVES. short of d i d a c t i c when Ada, before s c h o o l , Del theme and narrator r e f l e c t i s true that will to her "Use i n love with end she Del Garnet French, examinations a t the It Jordan—whose p r i n c e s s h e r s e l f w o u l d have e n d o r s e d : Don't be founder of the title Hall" of references theme o f women's a s p i r a t i o n s . in to phrase, of the this Tennyson's Here too, 55 Munro u s e s Tennyson indirectly as a r e f l e c t i v e surface: T h e r e i s a change coming I t h i n k i n t h e l i v e s of g i r l s and women. . . . A l l women have had up t i l l now h a s been t h e i r c o n n e c t i o n w i t h men. . . . He s h a l l h o l d t h e e , when h i s p a s s i o n s h a l l have s p e n t i t s n o v e l f o r c e , a l i t t l e c l o s e r than h i s dog, a l i t t l e d e a r e r than his horse. Tennyson wrote t h a t . It's true. Was t r u e . You w i l l want t o have c h i l d r e n t h o u g h , ( p . 173) Despite t h e hope e x p r e s s e d a t t h e b e g i n n i n g o f t h e p a s s a g e , D e l ' s mother r e m i n d s in relation t o men h a s changed Munro makes Ada's work, u s i n g cycle. S i n c e Ada r e f e r s The of title s i n c e Tennyson's day. and t i t l e to "Locksley H a l l " of the entire i n the passage, a Tennysonian a classical word, "women" o f t h e t i t l e o f Ada J o r d a n as w e l l frame, frame by underlines the as h e r daughter, D e l . Ada i s p r e s e n t e d t h r o u g h t h e e y e s o f a n a r r a t o r who ambivalent f e e l i n g s Her h a b i t teen-age mother. effect o f women the thematic centre o f the t h e e n t i r e work w i t h i n problematic. the the position t o t h e myth o f O r p h e u s . importance Because that little a s s h e p l a c e s DANCE w i t h i n referring has statement i t as both s t o r y Munro p l a c e s just her daughter about of dramatizing herself D e l , who would B u t L I V E S goes of this her, her character prefer further on h e r m o t h e r ' s s t o r i e s from embarrasses a less conspicuous sort t h a n DANCE, e x a m i n i n g t h e mother n o t o n l y on a d a u g h t e r , b u t a l s o on a d a u g h t e r who wants t o be a w r i t e r . suffered i s always D e l h a s b e e n b r o u g h t up o f h e r m i s e r a b l e c h i l d h o o d when she the b u l l y i n g of a fiendish brother. Years 56 later, this brother v i s i t s with another After finds of as the t o r t u r e r D e l by h i s f a i l u r e i t difficult takes her his his version He Del view makes i n a the middle-aged b r i n g s a cocoon as Ada into on figure by remembers does, b u t as the house t h e wonder o f a b u t t e r f l y i s given a lesson here who spree w i t h the wicked fanatic, Bill She man o f h i s c h i l d h o o d , i n w h i c h he p e r s o n who it. Uncle compounds h e r p r o b l e m mother n o t as a r e l i g i o u s shows t h e c h i l d r e n reality. t o behave i n c h a r a c t e r . on a g r o c e r y - s h o p p i n g kindhearted provides Del i n Ada's s t o r i e s , to r e c o n c i l e her mother's s t o r i e s . telling and o p p o r t u n i t y t o compare s t o r y w i t h figuring surprises them i n J u b i l e e emerging the d i f f e r e n c e a and from point of story: T h a t was i n t h e same h o u s e . The same h o u s e where my mother u s e d t o f i n d t h e f i r e o u t and h e r mother a t p r a y e r and where she t o o k m i l k and cucumbers i n t h e hope o f g e t t i n g t o h e a v e n , (p.88.) Although and at this believe too. Uncle B i l l , Del sinister and By flaunting demonstrates b u t has prolonged that and suggests that he merely to suspect her falls under dies i s gradually h i s young w i f e i n h e r n o t g i v e n up refined fox-fur coat, torturing his h i s methods. the c h a r a c t e r of Uncle B i l l the resemblance breach o f c a n c e r , b u t a more of h i s motives has mother suspicion i s i n t e n d e d to h e a l the b e f o r e he interpretation emerging. sister, Ada is inclined g r a d u a l l y he O s t e n s i b l y the v i s i t between him he point The episode i s developed between A l i c e Munro's in a way 57 narrative technique and t h a t o f magic r e a l i s t painting: In much t h e same way c e r t a i n C a n a d i a n magic r e a l i s t p a i n t e r s f l o o d an o b j e c t i n a c l e a r l i g h t u n t i l i t seems t o t a k e on a new and strange l i f e , f i c t i o n w r i t e r s look at t h e i r s u b j e c t u n t i l i t s t a r t s to look strange, mysterious, fascinating.7 The longer steadily seems. he the a c t i o n p a u s e s and a t Uncle B i l l , Nothing his sister fox-farming, their increase his satisfaction the cancer way and of him, The sum he him; and to success. Like insisted is a f o o l s even f o r her hundred d o l l a r s , mother r e c e i v e d and satisfy h i s r e s e n t m e n t o f Ada b e l i e v e s h i s promise of a legacy their behaviour i n order material Outwardly b e n e f i c e n t , mentioned, three his brother-in-law life who legacy o f memory g a z e s triumph w i l l i n h i s own which i s k i l l i n g hidden malignancy. eye more s i n i s t e r short of absolute wants t o h u m i l i a t e denigrate the the in his recalls on Ada, will. the small spending on Bibles. Ada pities finally him because forgiveness other her "he she accepting her h a b i t u a l l y gives Accordingly, brother's hatred i s a dying i s i n keeping with people, doubt. overcomes h e r she man" them t h e r e j e c t s the she r e v e a l s her and the as c a p a c i t y o f an darker Her In to change. implied b e n e f i t of the explanation of one. By reconciliation, o p t i m i s m a b o u t human individual and analysing more h o p e f u l a genuine attempt at characteristic brother, (p. 8 9 ) . character. motives i n f a v o r of the his v i s i t f o r her As her nature account 58 of her l i f e r e v e a l s , she s e e s h e r s e l f a s a s e l f - w i l l e d individual who c h o s e t h e s e l f the o f h e r f a m i l y and s u b s t i t u t i n g new v a l u e s on values reason. Her f a i t h mother's r e l i g i o u s passion its The The society. Del's and A u n t i e as m a t e r i a l to l i f e by s u p p r e s s i n g and e m p h a s i z i n g denying Grace a r e a l l important t o for fiction approaches t o l i f e . o f i t s female D o g h e r t y , Naomi, M i s s b u t a l s o a s examples o f E a c h woman h a s a c c o m o d a t e d some a s p e c t s others. Unlike of her them, D e l hopes any p a r t o f h e r s e l f t o c o n f o r m t o h e r B u t , t h e s t o r i e s t h a t o l d e r women t e l l youth show D e l t h a t their s t o r i e s r a i s e i s , why do women g i v e Del as D e l t h e w r i t e r . t h e work i n t h e l i v e s mother, F e r n Aunt E l s p e t h personality to avoid and w e a k n e s s e s o f h e r p o s i t i o n a r e to centre not only herself i s supreme a n d subordinate. characters. differing To A d a , r e a s o n L I V E S OF GIRLS AND WOMEN, r e f e r s b e y o n d literature Del based as s a l v a t i o n r e p l a c e s h e r t o D e l t h e young woman, a s w e l l title, Farris, i n education faith. strengths important she w o u l d become by r e j e c t i n g they used becomes o b s e s s e d w i t h who s t u d i e d voice t o be l i k e her. about The q u e s t i o n up t h e i r t h e gap between t h e F e r n and t h e F e r n their dreams? Dogherty D o g h e r t y who i s t h e i r boarder now: " D i d y o u p l a n t o be a n o p e r a s i n g e r ? " I a s k e d . "No, I j u s t p l a n n e d t o be t h e l a d y w o r k i n g i n the post o f f i c e . W e l l , I d i d and I d i d n ' t . The work, t h e t r a i n i n g . I just didn't have t h e a m b i t i o n f o r i t , I g u e s s t h a t was my t r o u b l e , ( p . 142) 59 This explanation i s unsatisfactory t o D e l , who b e l i e v e s Naomi's s t o r y of Fern's would p r o v i d e the k i n d o f c o m p e l l i n g r e a s o n she hopes t o discover. To t e s t into betraying illegitimate partly Naomi's t h e o r y , D e l t r i e s child, to trap which Fern herself: I took t o n o t i c i n g p i c t u r e s o f b a b i e s i n the p a p e r , o r i n m a g a z i n e s , when F e r n was a r o u n d , s a y i n g , "Aw, i s n ' t i t c u t e ? " and t h e n w a t c h i n g her c l o s e l y f o r a f l i c k e r of remorse, maternal l o n g i n g , as i f someday she m i g h t a c t u a l l y be persuaded to b u r s t i n t o t e a r s , f l i n g out h e r empty arms, s t r u c k t o t h e h e a r t by an ad f o r t a l c u m powder o r s t r a i n e d meat. (pp. 143-4) The overwrought novelette failure, about L o o k i n g f o r Mr. C h a m b e r l a i n ' s stories how d i f f i c u l t rising is a this about verses. insight to creating do n o t s a t i s f y n o v e l , which from everything this her. L i k e the person. character i n f i c t i o n , but discovers she that the She i s d i s a p p o i n t e d i n h e r the S h e r r i f f s , t h a t was n o t t o l d " show D e l When she she s e e s a s , "an u n r e l i a b l e house, Del's birth Fern, these d i s c o v e r i e s i t i s t o know a n o t h e r than l e t t e r s , Del a chain l e t t e r , t o remove c o n t r a d i c t i o n s , results first of papers: i n f o r m a t i o n , and s m u t t y conflicting tries The t e s t i s more complex and c o n t r a d i c t o r y three bundles applies to a romantic b u t t h e s e a r c h o f F e r n ' s room t u r n s up e v i d e n c e her which control belongs o r one o f U n c l e Benny's t a b l o i d s . imaginings. finds tone o f the c l i c h e s structure a few p o o r (p. 2 4 7 ) . f a c t s , and Del's eventual 60 meeting with artistic Bobby S h e r r i f f c r e a t i o n with she i s more i n t e r e s t e d she has made f o r c e s her reality, t o compare whereupon she i n what r e a l l y her discovers that happened t h a n i n what up: And what h a p p e n e d , I a s k e d m y s e l f , t o M a r i a n ? Not t o C a r o l i n e . What happened t o M a r i a n ? What happened t o Bobby S h e r r i f f when he had t o s t o p b a k i n g c a k e s and go b a c k t o t h e a s y l u m ? Such q u e s t i o n s p e r s i s t , i n s p i t e o f n o v e l s , (p. 209) D e l wants h e r she novel t o be wants i t t o c o n n e c t mediator with between e x p e r i e n c e magnitude of the entire more t h a n task. She life. and the invented In a d o p t i n g a r t , she but melodrama; the r o l e i s conscious i s attempting town f r o m memory i n a f u t i l e transcend an of the up an glorious effort to s e l e c t i v i t y which i s b u i l t to conjure of into art: And no l i s t c o u l d h o l d what I wanted, f o r what I wanted was e v e r y l a s t t h i n g , e v e r y l a y e r o f s p e e c h and t h o u g h t , s t r o k e o f l i g h t on b a r k o r w a l l s , every s m e l l , pothole, p a i n , crack, d e l u s i o n , h e l d s t i l l and h e l d t o g e t h e r — r a d i a n t , e v e r l a s t i n g , (p. 249) The all-inclusive impossibility the details but fiction D e l wants t o w r i t e i s a a worthy g o a l ; out o f t h e p a s t comes f i c t i o n authenticity o f Munro's own. relationship to her author, but relationship In t h e of c l o s e a t t e n t i o n to with the documentary epilogue, Del's memories p o i n t s o u t s i d e t h e also inside the t e x t to Uncle to h i s possessions h o a r d s memories i n t h e same way i n "The as he practical t e x t to the Benny's Flats Road". hoards m a t e r i a l Del 61 things: "He v a l u e d pretended, get of to himself some p r a c t i c a l f o r i t s own sake and only- as w e l l as t o o t h e r s , u s e o u t o f i t " (p. 4 ) . two g e n e r a t i o n s material debris t h a t he meant t o The accumulation i n U n c l e Benny's house r e s e m b l e s of f i c t i o n t h e raw w h i c h D e l f i n d s r a d i a n t and e v e r l a s t i n g . It contrasts with Uncle C r a i g ' s to s t o r e i n t h e same room w i t h m a n u s c r i p t w h i c h she r e f u s e s h e r own w r i t i n g : I d i d n ' t want U n c l e C r a i g ' s m a n u s c r i p t p u t b a c k w i t h t h e t h i n g s I had w r i t t e n . I t seemed so dead t o me, so h e a v y and d u l l and u s e l e s s , t h a t I t h o u g h t i t m i g h t d e a d e n my t h i n g s t o o , and b r i n g me b a d l u c k . ( p . 62) The t e n d e n c y o f p r o s e t o d e a d e n what i s l i v e l y and interesting one to i n i t s pre-written of the f i r s t write f o r m i n t h e w r i t e r ' s mind i s p r o b l e m s c o n f r o n t i n g D e l when she a t t e m p t s a novel: Nobody knew a b o u t t h i s n o v e l . I had no need to t e l l anybody. I w r o t e o u t a few b i t s o f i t and p u t them away, b u t soon I saw t h a t i t was a m i s t a k e t o w r i t e a n y t h i n g down; what I w r o t e down m i g h t f l a w t h e b e a u t y and w h o l e n e s s o f t h e n o v e l i n my m i n d . ( p . 241) In t r a n s p o s i n g on the novel f r o m an i d e a t h e page, D e l i s f a c e d w i t h gives form t o l i f e , inclusiveness. i n h e r mind t o words the a r t i s t ' s b u t i n so d o i n g , robs i t of i t s How c a n t h e w r i t e r i n t e r p r e t forced t o d i s c a r d so much and u s e so l i t t l e ? claims t o have r e s o l v e d the final this question, dilemma: a r t experience when Del never w h i c h she r a i s e s i n segment o f t h e work, " E p i l o g u e : The P h o t o g r a p h e r " . 62 L I V E S ends a m b i g u o u s l y , parting can Sherriffs g e s t u r e p r o v i d i n g a metaphor w h i c h i m p l i e s t h a t succeed this y e t h o p e f u l l y , w i t h Bobby i n communicating "plump b a l l e r i n a " her artistic vision just Del as does: . . . he r o s e on h i s t o e s l i k e a d a n c e r , l i k e a plump b a l l e r i n a . T h i s a c t i o n , a c c o m p a n i e d by h i s d e l i c a t e s m i l e , a p p e a r e d t o be a j o k e n o t s h a r e d w i t h me so much as d i s p l a y e d f o r me, and i t seemed a l s o t o have a c o n c i s e m e a n i n g , a s t y l i z e d m e a n i n g — t o be a l e t t e r , o r a w h o l e word, i n an a l p h a b e t I d i d n o t know. (pp. 249-50) Del does n o t u n d e r s t a n d b u t h i s good w i l l e x a c t l y what Bobby i s t e l l i n g toward her encourages her tiptoe become a w r i t e r . and leaves her writing, thereby the first to suggest holding and t o make t h e e q u i v a l e n t e f f o r t the t e x t to comes t h r o u g h , By ending implying a c i r c u l a r segment. the mystery conflicting and ambiguity possibilities to r i s e opening up to story of a c t u a l manages experience i n suspension n a r r a t o r , or i s the whole f a b r i c Mystery Benny's t a l l by the tale ambiguity first e n t e r the o f Sandy S t e v e n s o n , on h i s f r o n t porch. and Together, which i s not o n l y d i a m e t r i c a l l y mother's k i n d of w o r l d child? Is of imagination? story are s e n s a t i o n a l h e a d l i n e s i n the t a b l o i d keeps p i l e d world and of h i s but also through strengthened newspapers they opposed t o by raising Uncle a figment b e a t i n g her and Is Madeleine the t a l e begin l e a d i n g back unanswered q u e s t i o n s . Benny a r e l i a b l e on saying, yes, i s about structure Moreover, t h i s h i s example with Del a t t h e p o i n t where she her, suggest he a Del's i s a w o r l d whose e x i s t e n c e 63 she denies: "But y o u d o n ' t b e l i e v e t h a t , do y o u ? " s a i d mother w i t h c h e e r f u l e n e r g y . She began e x p l a i n i n g how i t was a l l c o i n c i d e n c e , imagination, s e l f s u g g e s t i o n , (pp. 9-10) my A l t h o u g h D e l ' s mother h a s an a l t e r n a t i v e v i s i o n o f t h e world, she its reliability belatedly conclusion she i s also c a l l e d into question. r e a l i z e s that Madeleine i s beating i s b a s e d on t h e c i r c u m s t a n t i a l "You the conclusion o f Benny's s t o r y go and a s k Sandy S t e v e n s o n . s e e n them m y s e l f " corroborate (p. 1 0 ) . e v i d e n c e o f marks a ghost story, is reinforced by Ada's b e i n g that p o l i c e would institute the character She b e l i e v e s , f o r every i n the context who reaches, t h e Ada i s n a i v e i n questioned by t h e f o r instance, that a s e a r c h f o r M a d e l e i n e and D i a n e " n a t i o n - w i d e " , and bias a r a t i o n a l i s t ' s exists I have b e e n u s e d t o Madeleine beats her c h i l d . and h e r f a t h e r . Stevenson: an e l e m e n t o f d o u b t , w h i c h many ways; h e r judgement i s r e p e a t e d l y narrator bruises I seen t h e b r u i s e s . t h e i r recurrence M a d e l e i n e and D i a n e i n t r o d u c e s conclusion o f Sandy Since bruises of the Diane, her remembers n o t i c i n g on t h e c h i l d ' s l e g s . T h e s e recall When faith that a solution problem: "I d o n ' t know what t h e h e s i t a t i o n i s a b o u t . It's c r y s t a l c l e a r t o me." But what was c r y s t a l c l e a r t o my mother was o b v i o u s l y h a z y and t e r r i f y i n g t o U n c l e Benny, (p. 21) The ironic r e p e t i t i o n of her phrase "crystal clear" 64 emphasizes the gap Benny r e p r e s e n t . between t h e In LIVES t h e r e d i s t a n c e between us one p o l e , and Uncle By "The sharing i f he beyond is likely other and Madeleine a t the " I d o n ' t w a l k nowhere on (p. 1 6 ) . that she community. is doing she By her g i v e s the the as an truth, literary on experience rather than of individuals t r a g i c o m i c as the store. with g r a v e l roads this unless I have matter-of-fact reply fields. isolation g r a n t i n g her the neighbours to her suspects intervene to v i s i t self-imposed T h e r e i s more from the p r i v a c y she become a c c o m p l i c e s than plot Flats demands turns Road so i n whatever she child. D e m o n s t r a b l y , Ada ignorance Ada grocery a i r o n y i n their- c o n v e r s a t i o n s i n c e the Madeleine's fiercely, this, c o u l d come a c r o s s incidental on To other. Because c o m m u n i c a t i o n between M a d e l e i n e r e f u s e s Ada's i n v i t a t i o n to" to people. sometimes i n ways t h a t a r e as m e e t i n g o f Ada family at t o comment a p r i v a t e world, i n common w i t h of , particularly as itself Uncle sense q u e s t i o n o f i t s own Each i n d i v i d u a l were i n h a b i t i n g a world fails, excuse: Road Road" draws a t t e n t i o n t o i t s e l f sense of i s o l a t i o n , often Flats f a m i l y , a t the the however, i t a l s o r e f e r s as this of the his mail-order human l o n e l i n e s s . life i s a persistent and them: t h e members o f D e l ' s repeatedly raising Flats text; and the denizens Benny and e x t r e m e s w h i c h she i s not the k i n d of person who uses excuse t o evade moral r e s p o n s i b i l i t y . Madeleine of c h i l d to p r o t e c t the c h i l d , b a t t e r i n g , she and she wants i s distressed Once to to 65 think that didn't she I think have r e p o r t e d realize d i d not act sooner, asking of i t myself? her" (p. 2 0 ) . No what i s h a p p e n i n g . belonging I f I'd known t h e wonder she Since She approach Madeleine a t the only recalling her legs her like scissors" itself madwoman!" (p. "So narrator (p. M a d e l e i n e and of a grotesque t a l e alongside our w o r l d was (p. 2 6 ) . Del (p. 2 6 ) . powerlessness pervades he leaves area the approaches the a jacket, that "The true; but i t m i g h t be same b u t by the closeness i s extremely small. sphere, frustrates h i s attempt supply a the Although t o him a city as map, the Once Del's heavy t o f o l l o w d i r e c t i o n s , and the and w e l l , nothing s t a t i o n cannot of that encounters occur like of F l a t s Road", i m p l y i n g Benny i s h e l p l e s s . city true: never at a l l A nightmare sense country, which i s h i s proper i n the "The w i c k e d n e s s were g i g a n t i c of e f f e c t i v e n e s s city, child U n c l e Benny's w o r l d the and abuse o f h e r difficulties gas with That m o t h e r ' s common-sense s o l u t i o n s t o t h e the story, violence c a n n o t be i s troubled U n c l e Benny w o r l d where " l u c k unpredictable" her asserts the individual's quite defeat. of "Madeleine! that distorted reflection, and creature same red Even her joke, troubling same" i n her to never distance could 27) Road" s i m u l t a n e o u s l y lying admits the road 27). i n t o a wry In r e t r o s p e c t , seem p a r t the " g o i n g down t h e transforms Flats i s slow t o U n c l e Benny's t a b l o i d w o r l d , Ada Finally "Why truth I Madeleine i s a grasps her. can herself, his he works: traffic 66 determination rescue ebbs away. Diane suggests individuals childhood is lost, can G r o w i n g up futility t h a t once the i t cannot D e l move f r e e l y i s a process once p r o v i d e d a c c e s s Living The Body", D e l be o f Benny's a t t e m p t t e n u o u s c o n t a c t between regained. Only between a l t e r n a t e of s e a l i n g to d i f f e r e n t to in worlds. o f f the passages spheres. gradually v i s i t s her In aunts that "Heirs of the less often: What c o u l d I e v e r s a y ? T h e i r h o u s e became l i k e a t i n y s e a l e d - o f f c o u n t r y , w i t h i t s own o r n a t e c u s t o m s and e l e g a n t l y , r i d i c u l o u s l y c o m p l i c a t e d l a n g u a g e , where t r u e news o f t h e o u t s i d e w o r l d was n o t e x a c t l y f o r b i d d e n , b u t became more and more i m p o s s i b l e t o d e l i v e r , (p. 59) But news o f t h e w o r l d of the individual messengers. later enter except the r o l e i n "The becomes a Flats letter crucial p r e l i m i n a r y s t e p on letter f o r him, t h a t he a woman whom U n c l e account of the of Del's brings Uncle intermediary, o f messenger i s one dictates Benny has t h e way and a role one Del's w h i c h she takes Uncle never can met. By its writer. a home t o exaggerated p r o v i d e f o r the itself as much a f i c t i o n By w r i t i n g Madeleine she to becoming a Del w r i t e s o f f e r s t h a t he stories. Benny and and of D e l becomes h i s a m a n u e n s i s , a comforts later means o f writer. mail-order bride, i t proclaims any by consciousness Road", when she w r i t e s Benny's The imprisoned f u n c t i o n s as a c h i l d , when she Early cannot In f a c t , most i m p o r t a n t on o u t s i d e the the letter together, Del a c t s i s w e l l equipped as which as to p l a y because of 67 her youth and a d a p t a b i l i t y . She h a p p i l y d i v i d e s her time between U n c l e Benny's home and h e r own i n "The F l a t s Road", between h e r home and J e n k i n s Bend i n " H e i r s t o t h e L i v i n g Body", and between h e r home and Naomi's i n "Changes and Ceremonies". D e l sees h e r s e l f as o c c u p y i n g a p o s i t i o n with access t o p r i v i l e g e d seemed t h e n t h a t nobody e l s e what a p e r s o n was, b u t me" occupied special information: " I t often knew what r e a l l y went on o r (p. 4 5 ) . B e c a u s e s h e h a s more t h a n one w o r l d , and p e o p l e w i t h differing v i e w p o i n t s have c o n f i d e d i n h e r , s h e i s u n i q u e l y t o be a w r i t e r In and s p e a k f o r t h e p e o p l e " E p i l o g u e : The P h o t o g r a p h e r " , concept of writing imagining discovering. youthful from t o an a p p r e c i a t i o n Summarizing h e r f i r s t tendency o f h e r community. she e x p l a i n s how h e r g r a d u a l l y expanded and i n v e n t i n g qualified an e m p h a s i s on o f o b s e r v i n g and n o v e l , she r i d i c u l e s h e r to exaggerate: For t h i s n o v e l I had changed J u b i l e e , t o o , o r p i c k e d o u t some f e a t u r e s o f i t and i g n o r e d o t h e r s . . . . P e o p l e i n i t were v e r y t h i n , l i k e C a r o l i n e , o r f a t as b u b b l e s . T h e i r speech was s u b t l e and e v a s i v e and b i z a r r e l y s t u p i d ; t h e i r p l a t i t u d e s c r a c k l e d w i t h madness. The s e a s o n was a l w a y s t h e h e i g h t o f s u m m e r — w h i t e b r u t a l h e a t , dogs l y i n g a s i f dead on t h e s i d e w a l k s , waves o f a i r s h u d d e r i n g , j e l l y l i k e o v e r t h e empty h i g h w a y , (p. 243) Although from Del i s discussing h e r own n o v e l , s h e a l l u d e s t h e d i s t a n c e o f memory f u r t h e r Unlike her l e t t e r does n o t a p p e a r removed by i r o n y . on U n c l e Benny's b e h a l f , t h e n o v e l i n t h e frame, except to i t itself f o r an o c c a s i o n a l 68 phrase, belly" " h e r womb s w o l l e n l i k e (p. 2 4 3 ) , recalls itself to display her p l o t , t o be writers, a hard y e l l o w gourd i t s h y p e r b o l i c tone. c h a r a c t e r s and style, w i t h the r e s u l t only are there f a u l t s that i t never in style, the S h e r r i f f i s the o r i g i n a l does n o t know them w e l l . because tell for of t h e i r t h i n g s happening explain" (p. 2 4 4 ) . removed f r o m has is also embodies senses on it.^ life. the level The The is far a r t , a process as i m a g i n a t i o n . of the i d e a l SEVEN GABLES. novel Her artist. suggests that imaginary c h a r a c t e r s , but vagueness of M o r e o v e r , he b e a r s literary about He and not o n l y r e c o r d experience photographer the u l t i m a t e t r u t h to reasons of metaphor. Del even but can he portraits a c l o s e resemblance H a w t h o r n e ' s d a g u e r r e o t y p i s t whose p i c t u r e THE into o f t h e word, o b s e r v e r His photographs shows t h e c h a r a c t e r i s t i c reveals tries fantasizing as w e l l the q u a l i t i e s create powerful drawn f r o m she t o them t o know, b u t c o u l d n o t Such s e l f - i n d u l g e n t thinking i n the f o r her n o v e l , i t s e x c e s s e s , however, D e l ' s a t t e m p t e d interpret already the s t o r y Not Although i s only attracted the t r a n s f o r m i n g of r e a l i t y a seer i n both visionary. other subject. impetus I seemed v a g u e l y a dreamlike coherence photographer from them: " A l l p i c t u r e s . w h i c h demands a n a l y t i c a l Despite She s t r a n g e n e s s , and i s a daydream a b o u t shows but a l s o d e f i c i e n c i e s understanding of her Del Del compels b e l i e f . would-be n o v e l i s t ' s family As her novel p a s t e d t o g e t h e r from borrowings i n her of the not to judge i t s s u b j e c t i n THE HOUSE OF 69 Del sees her implausible death C a r o l i n e . Now fact", as to her, Del Wawanash R i v e r her bathtub" her the effect i f she 243-4). The C l e a r l y , she the plot water have on was begin level of of to occur the Caroline's suicide: marked s h i f t and this or sexual initiation and she a t t i t u d e to In a c c e p t i n g takes first progress her important herself to t e s t she s e e n h e r s e l f as fantasy the Bobby S h e r r i f f c o m m o n a l i t y , he she as at judges failing, this with her final, Whereas she must see can Mr. approach to w r i t i n g invitation artistic against step: her on to a r t . onto she reality. outsider, with hails that the beyond f a n t a s y Bobby S h e r r i f f s an than rarely process in Garnet, always i n s i s t i n g unrepentant, can the epilogue, attempt note i s a s i g n of change. before audience; but i n her of the s i n c e she fundamental wrongness o f her she drowning h e r s e l f i n i n terms of p a s s i n g i s undamaged and has to her low considers a failure, through her porch, heroine, i r o n y a g a i n s t h e r s e l f more s h a r p l y behaviour fiction the "niggling considerations passage i s t y p i c a l Chamberlain, J e r r y Storey, she by i n summer w i l l uses self-critical pass f o r her f a c e as novel-writing past arranged has i s beset in this she before. she in i n t o i t s d e p t h s , C a r o l i n e w o u l d have t o l i e (pp. novel which most c l e a r l y o f m o v i n g , head bowed, m o o n l i g h t - n a k e d , acquiescent, down on failings common-sense o b j e c t i o n s s u c h as "Instead novel's the forces Until the the then, community b a s i s of a former u n i v e r s i t y student, and she as their as a 70 prospective one. He college must look you important. . . . You to brain" use the n o u r i s h m e n t and c a k e he has herself; her gives after 247-8). ordinary i s enabled unembellished p h o t o g r a p h e r s and suicidal by h i s t i p t o e s , he me, me in fiction. use therefore, find her a crucial artistic p e o p l e i n her d e p t h and one him melodrama o f as two artist. into implies cloaked When Before notice and t h a t comes o f b e i n g recognize experience. Whereas t h e heavy-handed symbol rooted in p h o t o g r a p h e r i s an artist, she a t t i t u d e to f r o m w h i c h t o make f i c t i o n the the things: must change h e r immediate v i c i n i t y , p a r a d o x i c a l , much l i k e eating closing incident i s , f o r Del of the on Bobby's c a k e i s saying authenticity and takes want to express h i s t r u t h i n the The v o i c e , she vitality very nymphomaniac h e r o i n e s . on to b r a i n i f you i n Del's icing, Bobby r i s e s and is go Bobby's d i a t r i b e t h a t she Offered without life That the b r a i n culminates t h e r e f o r e , she "When you your d i e t . baked, s u g g e s t i n g fiction. advice: have t o n o u r i s h (pp. the her can the i n them the w h i c h has the personal obvious Bobby S h e r r i f f and i s subtle p e o p l e Munro d e s c r i b e s in "Open L e t t e r " : One o f t h e t h i n g s f a s c i n a t i n g t o a f i c t i o n w r i t e r a b o u t s u c h towns i s t h e way p e o p l e l i v e i n the eyes of o t h e r s . E v e r y l i f e i s a drama, e v e r y b o d y i s on s t a g e . People are c a s t , they are d e f i n e d , p l a c e d i n r o l e s w h i c h t h e y tamper w i t h at t h e i r p e r i l . I t i s not t r u e t h a t such a p l a c e w i l l not a l l o w e c c e n t r i c i t y . Oddity i s n e c e s s a r y , j u s t as much as s i n i s ; i t i s j u s t t h a t b o t h t h i n g s must be c l a s s i f i e d , declared and a p p r e c i a t e d , and t h a t t h e r e i s no way b a c k 71 when t h i s r o a d i s t a k e n . Within these f i r m d e f i n i t i o n s — a n d t o u c h i n g them, p e r h a p s a t h a r d l y any p o i n t s — l i v e b e w i l d e r e d and c o m p l i c a t e d people. They a r e d r i v e n t o c u r i o u s e s c a p e h a t c h e s , sometimes, o r e x a g g e r a t e d performances. Which i s s o m e t h i n g f i c t i o n c a n be made f r o m . 9 Bobby S h e r r i f f the r o l e i s a p r i m e example o f a man who h a s t a k e n on o f town madman, and i s now t r a p p e d w i t h i n i t . work p r e o c c u p i e d storyteller. explanation life, with storytelling, He o f f e r s a peculiarly In a Bobby i s t h e l a s t unsatisfactory f o r h i s madness and w i s h e s D e l l u c k w i t h h e r a final b e n e d i c t i o n which completes the l i t e r a r y a p p r e n t i c e s h i p begun t h e summer when she was a c h i l d about t o e n t e r g r a d e f o u r , and U n c l e Benny demanded an answer t o the q u e s t i o n , (p. "Can y o u w r i t e ? " 10). 72 Notes 1 A l i c e Munro, LIVES OF GIRLS AND WOMEN ( T o r o n t o : M c G r a w - H i l l R y e r s o n , 1 9 7 1 ) , p . 1. S u b s e q u e n t r e f e r e n c e s appear i n t h e t e x t . 2 . James P o l k , "Deep Caves a n d K i t c h e n L i n o l e u m , " r e v . o f L I V E S OF GIRLS AND WOMEN, by A l i c e Munro, CANADIAN LITERATURE, No. 54 ( 1 9 7 2 ) , p . 103. 3 J.R. (Tim) S t r u t h e r s , " A l i c e Munro a n d t h e A m e r i c a n S o u t h , " THE CANADIAN REVIEW OF AMERICAN STUDIES, 6 No. 2 ( 1 9 7 5 ) , p . 19 7; r p t . i n THE CANADIAN NOVEL HERE AND NOW, e d . J o h n Moss ( T o r o n t o : N.C. P r e s s , 1 9 7 8 ) , p . 122. 4 L i n d a M a r g a r e t L e i t c h , " A l i c e Munro's F i c t i o n : E x p l o r a t i o n s i n Open Forms," M.A. t h e s i s U n i v . o f G u e l p h 1980, p . 45. 5 M a r g a r e t L a u r e n c e , "Time a n d t h e N a r r a t i v e V o i c e , " i n THE NARRATIVE VOICE, e d . J o h n M e t c a l f e ( T o r o n t o : M c G r a w - H i l l R y e r s o n , 1 9 7 2 ) , p . 128. 6 A l f r e d T e n n y s o n , THE PRINCESS I . 134-5 i n THE POETRY OF TENNYSON, e d . C h r i s t o p h e r R i c k s (London: Longmans, 1 9 6 9 ) , p . 755. 7 G e o f f Hancock, e d . , MAGIC REALISM: AN ANTHOLOGY ( T o r o n t o : A y a P r e s s , 1 9 8 0 ) , p . 10. 8 See a l s o , B r a n d o n C o n r o n , "Munro's W o n d e r l a n d , " CANADIAN LITERATURE No. 78 ( 1 9 7 8 ) , p . 110 . 9 A l i c e Munro, "An Open L e t t e r , " J U B I L E E No. 1 ( 1 9 7 4 ) , p . 6. 73 Chapter Three Relinquishing Authority SOMETHING, p u b l i s h e d between L I V E S and WHO, story collection whose o r g a n i z i n g p r i n c i p l e i s a short i s not 1 immediately as D e l ' s recount apparent. story and WHO the s t o r i e s separate stories uncertain Whereas a s i n g l e v o i c e u n i f i e s as Rose's, a v a r i e t y i n SOMETHING. are linked relations through the recurring Janus, i n two d i r e c t i o n s : the Jordans a r e more l i k e "Winter the looks of r e g r e t or bafflement. Rose, t h e c e n t r a l Wind" and "The Ottawa V a l l e y " , Lady", t h e more d i s i l l u s i o n e d suffer back t o a f a m i l y c h a r a c t e r o f WHO. the r u r a l Del Jordan. disappointment lovers, thereby learning pattern w h i c h Munro l a t e r s e t t i n g and from Me Yes o r No" and "The new p r o t a g o n i s t s who b e g i n than In members a r e f a m i l i a r Munro's p r e v i o u s w o r k s , b u t i n " T e l l Del,they Like o f DANCE and L I V E S , and a h e a d t o women who f a m i l y d o m i n a t e d by i t s f e m a l e Spanish theme o f between t h e g e n e r a t i o n s and t h e s e x e s , tone like of voices Nevertheless, the as w e l l a s a p e r v a d i n g SOMETHING LIVES t o emerge a r e Unlike the i r r e p r e s s i b l e a t t h e hands o f h u s b a n d s and painful lessons i n s e l f - r e l i a n c e , brings to i t s f u l l development i n WHO. Not only the s e n s i b i l i t y c h a n g e s i n SOMETHING, b u t a l s o of the c e n t r a l t h e tone In h i s 1982 i n t e r v i e w w i t h A l i c e a character of the n a r r a t i v e . Munro, T i m S t r u t h e r s 74 comments: "SOMETHING I'VE BEEN MEANING TO T E L L YOU establishes a relatively y o u r work."*' reflected talks is new and more m y s t e r i o u s The m y s t e r y t h a t Struthers i n t h e form o f t h e s t o r i e s . about h e r sense o f l i f e tone f o r discerns i s A l t h o u g h i n LIVES D e l as a m y s t e r i o u s p r o c e s s , LIVES n o t a m y s t e r i o u s book b e c a u s e D e l e s t a b l i s h e s h e r s e l f a s a reliable truth narrator, of her past. with her point which remains superior a young w r i t e r Therefore, o f view. separate to i t since b e n t on g e t t i n g a t t h e the reader She t e l l s f r o m t h e n a r r a t i v e and s l i g h t l y this i s her older and w i s e r period however, t h e n a r r a t o r s are less r e l i a b l e happened become b l u r r e d . express i n her l i f e . self I n SOMETHING, guideposts; between what d i d happen and what m i g h t optimistically believes himself what happened i n a v o i c e remembering an e a r l i e r distinctions can o r i e n t Compared t o t h e y o u t h f u l that she w i l l the t r u t h , these narrators eventually a r e jaded have Del, who learn to and c o n f u s e d , more aware o f t h e l i m i t a t i o n s o f s t o r y t e l l i n g than i t s possibilities. One the reason earlier creative f o r t h e d i f f e r e n c e s between SOMETHING and books i s t h a t title evolved during e x p e r i m e n t a t i o n when Munro a t t e m p t e d form from t h e s h o r t the i t was w r i t t e n story story to the novel. intending into a short a period of t o change h e r A l t h o u g h s h e began i t t o be a n o v e l , i t gradually story: You know I r e a l l y wanted t o w r i t e a n o v e l o f t h a t story. Then i t j u s t s o r t o f b o i l e d down l i k e 75 maple s y r u p . A l l I had l e f t was t h a t s t o r y . F o r me, i t w o u l d have been d a r i n g t o s t r e t c h t h a t material out i n t o a f u l l novel. I w o u l d n ' t be s u r e i t had t h e s t r e n g t h . So I d o n ' t t a k e t h a t c h a n c e .3 A l t h o u g h Munro's d e s c r i p t i o n o f h e r s e l f a s a t i m i d lacking is writer t h e n o v e l i s t ' s c o u r a g e i s t o o s e l f - d e p r e c a t i n g , she probably r i g h t i n choosing the short s t o r y as t h e b e t t e r vehicle f o r t h e e f f e c t s she wants t o a c h i e v e . writing i n chapters proved For her, disappointing: But t h e r e a l w a y s comes a p o i n t where e v e r y t h i n g seems t o be g e t t i n g r e a l l y f l a t . You d o n ' t f e e l the t e n s i o n . I c a n go on w r i t i n g i t so many words a d a y , and I p r e t t y w e l l know where i t h a s t o go, b u t I d o n ' t f e e l t h i s p u l l i n g on t h e r o p e t o g e t t o t h e o t h e r s i d e t h a t I have t o f e e l . And so I a l w a y s do t h e same t h i n g . I go b a c k . I chop i t up. I make i t i n t o t h e s e t h i n g s t h a t I can . . . . ^ Her dissatisfaction the tension story. only p r o d u c e d by t h e g r e a t e r stems f r o m the w r i t e r ' s f e e l i n g s b u t a l s o t h e e f f e c t on t h e the abrupt switch from e x p e r i e n c e s t o r y r e c a l l e d from t h e p a s t . juxtaposing fit together The greater expressed describe not The c h o p p i n g Munro m e n t i o n s i s e v i d e n t time s h i f t s , She b u i l d s memory and t h e p r e s e n t , complexity i n her increased experiments with voice i n sudden t o a dream o r t e n s i o n by nudging the reader t o t h e f r a g m e n t s and so d i s c o v e r formal losing compression o f the short The a n a l o g y o f p u l l i n g on a r o p e h e l p s reader. a with chapter w r i t i n g their o f Munro's l a t e r meaning. writing, u s e o f embedded s t o r i e s , and and s e l f - c o n s c i o u s narrators, 76 introduce ambiguity into disguised by a c a r e f u l reassures and factual Explaining of " T e l l indirectly structure Me Yes confiding how which i s being told h e r i m a g i n a t i o n works, o r No" h e r own nature i s of everyday d e t a i l c o n v i n c e s t h e r e a d e r t h a t he truth. narrator s t o r i e s whose f i c t i o n a l sounds artistic remarkably the like Munro method: Would you l i k e t o know how I was i n f o r m e d o f y o u r death? I go i n t o t h e f a c u l t y k i t c h e n , t o make m y s e l f a cup o f c o f f e e b e f o r e my t e n o ' c l o c k class. D o d i e C h a r l e s who i s a l w a y s b a k i n g s o m e t h i n g has b r o u g h t a c h e r r y pound c a k e . (The t h i n g we o l d p r o s know a b o u t , i n t h e s e f a n t a s i e s , i s the importance of d e t a i l , s o l i d i t y ; y e s , a c h e r r y pound cake.) (p. 109) Undoubtedly, cherries t h e r o u n d n e s s , r e d n e s s , and compel cake, but a l s o article not only i n the d i s c o v e r y of the l o v e r ' s revelation, homely d e t a i l , the t i t l e an a millionaire's mansion. These an e l e m e n t factual of doubt. of r e a l i t y , Contrary t o Munro's a s s e s s m e n t willing Blaikie Noble's The bus details but i s reminded to take a chance, to take r i s k s The Hill, reader i s p e r m i t t e d the that of h e r s e l f i t i s an illusion. as a w r i t e r i n SOMETHING she shows t o push and promote town, b u t t h e town's name, Mock illusion hesitates the cake. Indian graveyard, limestone gardens, i n an a c t u a l introduces d e a t h i n an o f Munro's n a r r a t i v e t e c h n i q u e . f o r example, passengers tour belief of the made c o n v i n c i n g by means o f t h e i s typical story, of i n the a u t h e n t i c i t y f r o m t h e newspaper wrapped a r o u n d surprising In belief sweetness a t the l i m i t s of who herself storytelling. 77 As with as the t i t l e suggests, meaning and t e l l i n g , the c o l l e c t i o n e x p l o r i n g the paradox o f t e l l i n g t h e means o f h i d i n g m e a n i n g , and s i l e n c e revelation. Accordingly, disclosures are less omits: guilt over similarly infer significant Char's death. more t h a n t h e statements she her j e a l o u s y o f Char, her " S o m e t h i n g " i s much a woman j i l t e d . E t discovers r a t poison narrative s t o r y f r o m DANCE Possibilities i n a kitchen The r e a d e r of "Postcard", town, i s k e p t The which a l s o concerns a love a small to f o r g e t t h a t he i s engaged transparent Been M e a n i n g t o T e l l issue of f i c t i o n cupboard; i s invited to one p o s s i b l e n a r r a t i v e s e q u e n c e . in I've than an e a r l i e r i s i l l ; Char i s unhappy. a s t h e means o f s t o r y , E t ' s major Structurally "Postcard", concerned with multiply: Arthur i n the t i t l e o f her love f o r Arthur, more complex t h a n the i s preoccupied t o encourage the reader i n reading a story; "Something You", however, d e l i b e r a t e l y versus f a c t when Char i s f o u n d " T h e r e was no f u s s a b o u t t h e c a u s e o f d e a t h a s t h e r e stories" committed affair (p. 2 3 ) . Blaikie Noble, over suicide, attends h e r f u n e r a l and k e e p s h i s raises dead: is in whom Char may have remorse, i f any, t o h i m s e l f : He had come b a c k t o Mock H i l l on t h e d a y Char was found. A few h o u r s t o o l a t e , l i k e some s t o r y . E t i n . h e r n a t u r a l c o n f u s i o n c o u l d n o t remember what i t was. Romeo and J u l i e t , she t h o u g h t later. B u t B l a i k i e o f c o u r s e d i d n o t do away w i t h h i m s e l f a f t e r w a r d s , he went b a c k t o T o r o n t o " (p. 2 3 ) . Comparing illusion and r e a l i t y i n this f a s h i o n demonstrates 78 how d i f f i c u l t experience the as w e l l as i n s t o r i e s . illusion The i t i s t o know what i s t r u e i n a c t u a l Separating the t r u t h becomes t h e p r o t a g o n i s t ' s c o m p e l l i n g and w r i t i n g writer, Hugo, t h r o u g h married t o him. fiction. "Material" of a former biography She r i d i c u l e s w i f e , the legend the capsule biography of l i t e r a r y the h a l f - l i e s , c h i d e s him f o r l e a v i n g he-man, w h i c h t h e o f Hugo: he i s a t p a i n s o u t h i s former to l i s t . j o b as One a f t e r self-portrait his ex-wife, he h a s p r o d u c e d he i s s e l f i s h , irresponsible, admits having a "filthy participated transforming Dotty, into as a fiction. who 29). masculine another, the w i t h him i n the f l a t t e r i n g for publication. unsympathetic, moral (p. examination n a r r a t o r ' s memories o f t h e p e r i o d when she l i v e d a Vancouver apartment c o n t r a d i c t "But the a b s u r d i t i e s " marker e v e n t h o u g h he p r e f e r r e d i t t o t h e r o b u s t l y occupations which To t h e j a u n d i c e d e y e promotes, i s n o t a t r u e p i c t u r e t o the l i e s , examines a t h e e y e s o f a n a r r a t o r who was once a c c o m p a n i e s one o f h i s s h o r t s t o r i e s . She task. n a r r a t o r s i n SOMETHING c o n s i d e r t h e e t h i c s o f storytelling listen from idiot" According to exploitive, (p. 4 1 ) ; yet, she w i t h him i n t h e game o f lived i n t h e basement apartment, L i k e Hugo, t h e n a r r a t o r r e f e r r e d to Dottie " t h e - h a r l o t - i n - r e s i d e n c e " and h e r mother a s " t h e G r e e n Hornet". B u t a s she came t o know D o t t y reluctant t o make t h e s e Hugo: " I g o t f o n d e r b e t t e r , s h e grew jokes or r e p o r t Dotty's of Dotty, used s t o r e up and r e p e a t what s h e s a i d " to her, less remarks t o l i k e l y to (p. 3 7 ) . B e c a u s e she was 79 kinder to D o t t y , the superior; relative story now, narrator however, she merits Hugo has in light written r e g a r d e d h e r s e l f as i s forced of an about Hugo's to re-examine astonishingly their perceptive Dotty: T h e r e i s D o t t y l i f t e d o u t o f l i f e and h e l d i n l i g h t , suspended i n the m a r v e l l o u s c l e a r j e l l y t h a t Hugo has s p e n t a l l h i s l i f e l e a r n i n g how t o make. I t i s an a c t o f m a g i c , t h e r e i s no g e t t i n g a r o u n d i t ; i t i s an a c t you m i g h t s a y , of a s p e c i a l , unsparing, unsentimental l o v e " (p. 43) . The r e v e l a t i o n i n Hugo's s t o r y of for love surprise. writing takes the a manifestation t h a t what she he has as l u m i n o u s as position as narrator's but she one of f o r D o t t y was making h e r "clear j e l l y " . a concluding earlier This love", narrator several to the references Magic a l s o o c c u r s Lougheed r e a c t s process therefore, to the books on lapses are spring i t is a explain the perceptions, phrase, t o magic i n t h i s its the enabling does n o t i n " W a l k i n g on of e m p h a s i z e d by i s the i n the Dotty, defense statement which r e v e r s e s The implies i n t o a s t o r y which i s ways i n w h i c h Hugo's a r t c h a n g e s h e r alludes she crimes against is unexpected ending; Hugo's mere d e c l a r a t i o n t h a t Hugo's m o r a l necessity. capacity calling convincing Hugo's s t o r y o f D o t t y launches the subtle by By "unsentimental r i g h t to s p e c i a l status indefensible. structural by unsuspected Whatever Hugo's p a s t redeemed h i m s e l f artist's which of herself felt sentimentality. the narrator an " a c t of magic" volume. Water", when Mr. h i s young f r i e n d Eugene's 80 shelves: Mr. L o u g h e e d ' s e y e s h a d s t r a y e d t o a s h e l f o f a n o t h e r k i n d o f books Eugene r e a d , w h i c h d i d n o t seem t o him t o t i e i n t o o r e a d i l y w i t h t h e f i r s t kind. These books were by and a b o u t p e o p l e who made p r o p h e c i e s , t h e y were a b o u t a s t r a l b o d i e s and p s y c h i c e x p e r i e n c e s and s u p e r n a t u r a l powers and e v e r y k i n d o f hoax o r m a g i c , i f t h a t was what you wanted t o c a l l i t . ( p . 74) By cataloguing t h e books' c o n t e n t s , suggests the p a r t i c u l a r ideas reasoned response intellectual to l i f e , the narrator which t h r e a t e n Mr. L o u g h e e d ' s b u t a l s o i n v o k e s t h e changed a t m o s p h e r e o f t h e d e c a d e , summed up by t h e k i n d o f books w h i c h many young p e o p l e were r e a d i n g . hippie place trio, Calla, the story sixties. Since help Eugene's and r e l a t e d m a t t e r s s h a r e h i s s h e l v e s with the philosophical writings reflect Like the Rex and R o v e r , books on t h e o c c u l t i n the nineteen books on m y s t i c i s m Teilhard not only de C h a r d i n , t h i n k e r s the c o n t r a d i c t i o n s o f H e i d e g g e r , K a n t , and Mr. Lougheed a d m i r e s , i n Eugene's p e r s o n a l i t y Mr. L o u g h e e d . dialectic between r e a s o n and u n r e a s o n , b u t t o Eugene t h e two are not necessarily exclusive. replying t o Mr. L o u g h e e d ' s s u g g e s t i o n on water i s some k i n d of joke" (p. of joke: in life He embraces isa paradox, that h i s plan " I t could t o walk be, a s e r i o u s kind 74). Eugene seems t o be a d v o c a t i n g negative druggist, which discomfit states To t h e r e t i r e d they capability: "that something like Keats' i s when man i s c a p a b l e o f b e i n g uncertainties, Mysteries, d o u b t s , w i t h o u t any i r r i t a b l e 81 reaching aptly after Keats' t h e detachment o f those traditional course the r e s p o n s i b i l i t y friendship. advocated tries epithet " i r r i t a b l e " The s t a t e a r o u n d h i m a s he o f a man o f good w i l l , pursues and assumes with o f mind e n v i s i o n e d by K e a t s and by Eugene i s b e y o n d Mr. L o u g h e e d , a l t h o u g h he because o f h i s i n s t i n c t i v e f o r Eugene. m a g i c , he c a n n o t "Using attempts t o f o r Eugene's w e l l - b e i n g t h a t goes t o understand respect this & reason".5 d e s c r i b e s Mr. L o u g h e e d ' s e x a s p e r a t e d penetrate the fact Attempting t o r e a d Eugene's books on make o u t what t h e young man s e e s a word o u t o f h i s own y o u t h , had h i m stumped" outworn r u r a l he t o l d ( p . 7 4 ) . The word man a t odds w i t h now lives. i n them: Eugene t h a t a l l "stumped" w i t h i t s connotations, mirrors the outdated old Again l i k i n g and t h e u r b a n young p e o p l e v i e w s o f an among whom he i n " T e l l Me Yes o r No", t h e n a r r a t o r d e s c r i b e s books on magic i n B a r b a r a ' s Book M a r t : O t h e r books d e a l w i t h m a g i c , t h e r e a r e r e a l l y h u n d r e d s o f books a b o u t w i t c h e s , s p e l l s , c l a i r v o y a n c e , r i t u a l s , a l l k i n d s o f t r i c k s and w o n d e r s , (p. 119) The list reader of subjects contained against comfortable reality The t o what i s r e a d i l y assumptions t h a t would limit explainable. same s t r a t e g y o p e r a t e s Families", i n t h e s e books warns t h e i n "Forgiveness i n i n w h i c h a d y i n g woman m i r a c u l o u s l y r e c o v e r s a heart attack. T o l d from from the b i a s e d p o i n t o f view o f her 82 daughter, grave the story relates t h a t d o c t o r s and the n i g h t . As how nurses t h e woman's c o n d i t i o n i s so do not expect the n a r r a t o r keeps v i g i l her i n the h o s p i t a l , ne'er-do-well b r o t h e r , a member o f an unnamed cult, with h i s "brother p r i e s t s " arrives conducting insists upon m o t h e r . N e x t m o r n i n g , t h e m o t h e r ' s c o n d i t i o n has improved relief and w h i c h he religious heal h i s and ritual and her claims w i l l greatly, a prayer to survive the n a r r a t o r i s l e f t disappointment. w i t h mixed f e e l i n g s Although she p r e s e n t s her as a s e l f i s h dilettante whose e n t h u s i a s m s a r e short-lived, she be cannot sure n o t worked magic upon t h e i r narrator's exasperated to a t t r a c t tone she fails her p r i d e which r e s u l t s Instead,the interested s t o r y has brother-sister differences the Along suffers t h e blow t o brother's magical success. Munro i s l e s s i n e x p l o r i n g the dynamics o f this Calling and attention actual the n a r r a t o r d i r e c t s convention i n t o bad narrator's her at a distance, took and sister attention toward good s i s t e r and her the the Reduced to bad good b r o t h e r , u s i n g p r i d e , t h e b e s e t t i n g s i n , to j u s t i f y the switch. similar and "Winter lines, the s i m u l t a n e o u s l y , employs transforms and to place outcome o f of r e v e r s i n g s t e r e o t y p e s . story and the t h a t events of f i c t i o n , essence, brother keeps the r e a d e r between t h e e x p e c t e d conventions shallow Since a i r of a r t i f a c e . relationship. mother's i l l n e s s , its s i c k mother. i n c o n v i n c i n g the reader as d e s c r i b e d , t h a n narrative an brother t h a t h i s i n c a n t a t i o n s have sympathy when she from of "Memorial" Wind" also 83 examine p r o u d than individuals submitting periodic to i t . feelings b e n t on c o n t r o l l i n g The n a r r a t o r life rather o f "Memorial" admits t o of helplessness: Compared t o J u n e , she d i d l i v e i r r e s p o n s i b l y . E i l e e n had t o s e e t h i s , she had t o a d m i t i t . Her l a z y g a r b a g e a l l thrown t o g e t h e r , h e r cupboards under t h e i r s u r f a c e t i d i n e s s b u r s t i n g w i t h c h a o s , (pp. 209-10) Although she c a s t i g a t e s everyday r o u t i n e , way o f l i f e herself Eileen i s superior f o r her f a i l u r e s i n managing i s not convinced that her s i s t e r ' s to hers: H e r e was a s y s t e m o f d i g e s t i o n w h i c h f o u n d everything to i t s purposes. I t stuck a t nothing. Japanese gardens, p o r n o g r a p h i c movies, accidental death. A l l o f them a c c e p t e d , chewed and a l t e r e d , a s s i m i l a t e d , d e s t r o y e d , (p. 216) June's consumer-like determination t o savor a l l a v a i l a b l e experiences Eileen's i s a p p a l l i n g when i t e x t e n d s t o h e r s o n ' s contrasting helplessness necessary accomodation mortality and g r i e f . Life as f i c t i o n life, f o r instance, haphazard quality grandmother the r e s t consequences her first a p p e a r s a humane and to the inescapable conditions of pervades these s t o r i e s . i s carefully of existence. constructed In t h i s J u n e ' s way o f t o deny t h e she r e s e m b l e s t h e i n " W i n t e r Wind", who m a r r i e d " w h i l e s t i l l i n l o v e w i t h , though For death. v e r y a n g r y a t , a n o t h e r man" o f her l i f e , t h e grandmother of her e a r l y d e c i s i o n , love, "that 200). bears the and n e v e r self-glorifying (p. relinquishes dangerous self-denying 84 passion, never (p. 200) . achieves satisfied, By m a r r y i n g marriages. t o have p e r s i s t e d d e s p i t e o f " W i n t e r Wind", l i k e "Memorial", questions the v a l i d i t y am I t o know what I c l a i m The narrator story from scraps story like "Tell love the narrator of of her i n t e r p r e t a t i o n : as I p u t t h i s together of transforming lover stop with distance the experience The s u p p o s i t i o n arriving. s u b s e q u e n t l y happens, t h e n a r r a t o r Instead of "Tell attempting i s that of letters recounting and d e s c r i b i n g what proposes v a r i o u s i n which t h e p l o t might u n f o l d . protagonist speculation to o f b o t h t i m e and r e a c t i o n to the cessation of l e t t e r s passion, but a The n e c e s s a r y e l e m e n t s a r e memory, space a c t i n g as a c a t a l y s t . obsessive down, how her grandmother's Me Yes o r No" goes beyond and i m a g i n a t i o n , directions self-consciousness, o f evidence accumulated over years, the mental process f r o m an a b s e n t h i s several t o know?" (p. 201) has p i e c e d into fiction. letters her and how i s anybody t o know, I t h i n k observe lifetime" t h e wrong man, t h e g r a n d m o t h e r W i t h a new t e n t a t i v e n e s s narrator "And a c o n t r o l o v e r h e r r e j e c t e d s u i t o r , whose c o u r t s h i p of her i s b e l i e v e d the never r i s k e d , t o l a s t possible A study o f Me Yes o r No" c o n c e r n s a to cure h e r s e l f of a love which c a u s e s h e r more s u f f e r i n g t h a n i t i s w o r t h : Love i s n o t i n t h e l e a s t u n a v o i d a b l e , t h e r e i s a c h o i c e made. I t i s j u s t t h a t i t i s h a r d t o know when t h e c h o i c e was made, o r when, i n s p i t e o f s e e m i n g f r i v o l o u s , i t became i r r e v e r s i b l e , (p. H I ) 85 As b e f o r e , drawing the absolute i s the difference line difficulty. between h e r s e l f between t h e provisional In LIVES, Del and Garnet identified French: committed herself t o him only p r o v i s i o n a l l y , committed himself to her absolutely. surrender of s e l f to the l o v e d one mysterious, irrational of "Tell but and having o r No" some t i m e before this subplots" (p. I l l ) . is the of given By up on equating n a r r a t o r shows how, A c c o r d i n g l y , an She had this remains being The i t i f possible: intrigues, falling this whereas he E x a c t l y how i s suspected the had i s accomplished would a v o i d narrative-consciousness: unfolding. she dangerous consequences. Yes subplot, Me the process and on narrator "I had anxious i n love with f o r her, self-consciousness sees life her exchange of s t o r i e s l o v e m a k i n g e v e n when i t i s a c a s u a l as a s t o r y precedes indulgence: B u t a f t e r a w h i l e I do t e l l somebody, a man I work w i t h , Gus M a r k s . He has r e c e n t l y s e p a r a t e d from h i s w i f e . He t a k e s me o u t t o d i n n e r and we d r i n k and t e l l e a c h o t h e r o u r s t o r i e s , t h e n m o s t l y on my i n i t i a t i v e go t o bed (p. 110) Sharing and woman a r e creates their by stories the an at least together, illusion liaison. extends the and the r e c i t a t i o n of c l o s e n e s s which In t h e case n a r r a t o r , a shared The narrator speculates for having known h e r l e n g t h of time of the past lover addressed especially before: man histories lends humanity i s a powerful t h a t she years of past the as to "you" aphrodisiac. loved t h i s man 86 I l o v e d you f o r l i n k i n g me w i t h my p a s t , w i t h my young s e l f p u s h i n g t h e s t r o l l e r a l o n g t h e campus p a t h s , i n n o c e n t t h r o u g h no f a u l t o f my own. If I c o u l d k i n d l e l o v e t h e n and t a k e i t now t h e r e was l e s s w a s t e t h a n I had t h o u g h t , (p. 113) The i d e a o f a l o v e re-awakened her by i t s power t o u n i f y p a s t and storylike seem t o By the end are of "Tell Me so i n t e r w o v e n feelings, i n her own The her and of attracts provide a experience account journey the o f what the The confused love i s a a fact verifiable t o t h e dead lover's l o v e r ' s widow a r e withdrawn i n the h y p n o t i c has two. the n a r r a t o r ' s t o which her mind, r a t h e r t h a n dreamlike the n a r r a t o r ' s to separate reflecting confrontation with t o be o r No", with t h e unknowable e x t e n t experience. only Yes that i t i s impossible confusion i s intentional, the present, time preclude. happened fiction earlier c o h e r e n c e w h i c h t h e random e v e n t s fantasies and f r o m an in city profered conclusion: Nevermind. I invented her. I i n v e n t e d y o u , as f a r as my p u r p o s e s go. I i n v e n t e d l o v i n g you and I i n v e n t e d y o u r d e a t h . I have my t r i c k s and my t r a p d o o r s , t o o . I don't understand their w o r k i n g s a t t h e p r e s e n t moment, b u t I have t o be c a r e f u l , I won't s p e a k a g a i n s t them. (p. 124) Not only also she i s the n a r r a t o r unable w o u l d r e f u s e t o do to e x p l a i n her so e v e n i f she c o n c l u s i o n draws a t t e n t i o n t o t h e s o m e t h i n g u n f a t h o m a b l e , and it too d e e p l y . necessary i f she The fictions, could. fictionalizing The process warns o f t h e d a n g e r s o f n a r r a t o r knows t h a t h e r i s to r e t a i n her identity; but as plumbing illusions are nevertheless, 87 she i n v i t e s the reader t o p a r t i c i p a t e i n the process of making t h e s t o r y by a d m i t t i n g interpretations, Throughout some o f them c o n t r a d i c t i n g "SOMETHING", magicians r e v e a l i n g Instead in twist of realism behave to the audience. story, s t r a i n s the a s does t h e c l e v e r I Met My Husband". who v o i c e control alludes t h e i r own n a r r a t i v e s totality of experience, puncture the i l l u s i o n Edward S a i d ' s of capturing she n e v e r a l l o w s h e r d o u b t s t o she i s c r e a t i n g . indispensable analysis of authority i n fiction d e p e n d s : one i s a s e n s e o f d o u b t f e l t upon w h i c h and e s p e c i a l l y t h e c h a r a c t e r s of a single voice unto i t s e l f ; approached another truer". ^ conclusion i s sufficient t r u t h can only "by means o f a m e d i a t i o n Said i s equally by a u t h o r , i n t h e work t h a t t h e because o f i t s f a l s e n e s s Although narrative o r group o f v o i c e s i s a b e l i e f that indirectly, paradoxically, t o be i n f i c t i o n the isolates special conditions authority is felt occasionally fiction reader by are c h a r a c t e r i s t i c of o f LIVES. Although D e l Jordan to the d i f f i c u l t y Puzzled, their uncertainty SOMETHING, w h e r e a s an a u t h o r i t a t i v e n a r r a t o r in like Me Yes o r No", o r l e t t e r s , a s i n the t i t l e tentative narrators undermining often Coincidence further a t t h e e n d o f "How others. of the t r u t h , they o f f e r p l o t s , as i n " T e l l "The S p a n i s h L a d y " . illusion narrators t h e i r magic t r i c k s of a single version alternative a range o f p o s s i b l e be that makes t h e t r u t h i s r e f e r r i n g to novels, h i s true of t h i s short story cycle. As he 88 points out, "the p r i n c i p l e of authority always attempting to steer p r o v i d e s a motion clear of obstacles that emerge t o 7 inhibit, maim o r d e s t r o y between a u t h o r i t y and m o l e s t a t i o n , engages t h e r e a d e r truth i tutterly." The u n e a s y t o use Said's i n the process of discovery: balance terms, "a t r u e r i s one a r r i v e d a t by a p r o c e s s o f e l i m i n a t i o n : Q alternatives s i m i l a r t o t r u t h a r e shed one b y o n e " . model o f a l t e r n a t i v e s b e i n g shed as t h e s t o r y many s t o r i e s i n SOMETHING: t h e p o i s o n The proceeds fits i n "Something I've Been M e a n i n g t o T e l l You" t h a t seems a t f i r s t for suspected i n Char's death; Margaret, i n Arthur, "The i s later t o be i n t e n d e d S p a n i s h L a d y " , who seems t o be t h e o u t s i d e r befriended by t h e n a r r a t o r , threatening to destroy alternatives In the narrator's to the deliberate authority, another SOMETHING i s t h e i m p l i e d narratives are addressed. marriage. and r e f u t e d , compels t h e r e a d e r ' s addition narrator's emerges a s t h e o t h e r woman, have been p r o p o s e d more s t r o n g l y graciously the conclusion belief. undermining o f the successful listener Since innovation i n t o whom t h e f i r s t - p e r s o n Munro h a s p r e v i o u s l y used t h e memoir f o r m w i t h . g r e a t s k i l l , b u t i n SOMETHING s h e introduces voice. a confiding Munro's f i r s t - p e r s o n f i c t i o n , three distinct According reveals In her a n a l y s i s M.G. O s a c h o f f t o n e s : memoir, c o n f e s s i o n t o Osachoff, the confiding t h e m o r a l qualms o f a n a r r a t o r behaviour, while the confiding voice distinguishes and voice of voice i n meditation. of the confession over her past of the meditation 89 reveals similar and i n c i d e n t s f r o m h e r p a s t . 9 people Munro's readiness materials for qualms o v e r making f i c t i o n to explore marks h e r m a t u r i t y the v a r i e t y of voice self-consciousness herself i n this more p a i n f u l of actual collection, autobiographical a s a w r i t e r , and h e l p s and g r e a t e r of the stories has e x p r e s s e d out account narrative i n SOMETHING. dissatisfaction with Munro "Executioners", " W a l k i n g on W a t e r " and " S o m e t h i n g I ' v e Been M e a n i n g t o T e l l You"; them i m p o r t a n t her nevertheless, artistic she c o n s i d e r s steps i n development: Then I w r o t e a s t o r y i n h e r e t h a t I d o n ' t t h i n k works a t a l l . I t ' s a very embarrassing s t o r y , I t h i n k , c a l l e d " E x e c u t i o n e r s , " where, a g a i n , I was t r y i n g t o f i n d o u t how t o do a c e r t a i n k i n d o f t h i n g , and i t d i d n ' t q u i t e do i t . 1 0 Admittedly, Munro f a i l e d more complex succeeds the form she d e c i d e d i n producing result t o use; n e v e r t h e l e s s , she o f c r e a t i v e energy escaping virtuosity, into a l l the problems o f t h e a medley o f s t r o n g conventions of realism. finding to solve voices, from t h e r i g i d No mere d e m o n s t r a t i o n s o f Munro s experiments with 1 new ways t o t e l l competing stories, f o r m a r e aimed a t b a s e d upon h e r i n s i g h t t h e d i f f e r e n c e s between h a b i t u a l ways o f t h i n k i n g i n men and women. similarity intuitively different When t h e n a r r a t o r between h e r f i r s t understands from t h e i r s i n " M a t e r i a l " sees t h e a n d s e c o n d h u s b a n d s , she a l s o t h a t her view o f the world i s because she i s a woman: 90 A t t h e same t i m e , a t d i n n e r , l o o k i n g a t my husband G a b r i e l , I d e c i d e d t h a t he and Hugo a r e n o t r e a l l y so u n a l i k e . B o t h o f them have managed something. B o t h o f them have d e c i d e d what t o do about e v e r y t h i n g they r u n across i n t h i s world, what a t t i t u d e t o t a k e , how t o i g n o r e o r u s e things. I n t h e i r l i m i t e d and p r e c a r i o u s ways t h e y b o t h have a u t h o r i t y . They a r e n o t a t t h e mercy. Or t h i n k t h e y a r e n o t . ( p p . 43-4) The male a b i l i t y not accord writer's with to f i l t e r out aspects of experience a pragmatic view o f the world p a r a l l e l s the authority, or a b i l i t y to select d e t a i l s that d e v e l o p a s t o r y , and r e j e c t t h o s e t h a t Munro's f e m a l e n a r r a t o r s disorder can subvert and c o n t r a d i c t i o n a s p a r t t o master submitting jealousy life, to strong of l i f e . t h e a l t e r n a t i v e o f a c k n o w l e d g i n g and chaotic passions like love, and s o do t h e new f o r m s i n w h i c h Munro i n c o r p o r a t e s admission of uncertainty them. by t h e n a r r a t o r her story end o f "The S p a n i s h L a d y " , when t h e n a r r a t o r final her no t h e communication own t r o u b l e s longer true, i t i s slightly of a l i f e note: "This station, "What we s a y and f e e l beside ending, the narrator i s a message; At the witnesses the t h e p o i n t " (p. H a v i n g r e g i s t e r e d t h e gap between e m o t i o n a l pain puzzled rings seem i n s i g n i f i c a n t : i n telling process. c r y and d e a t h o f an o l d man i n t h e r a i l w a y 190). the sometimes a i d s g r i e f and Under s t r e s s , t h e women i n SOMETHING bend w i t h o u t b r e a k i n g , An A l t h o u g h women June i n " M e m o r i a l " , i s n o t n e c e s s a r i l y a weakness. narrative i t . But c o n t i n u a l l y a f f i r m the r e a l i t y of l e a r n t h e male a p p r o a c h , a n d , l i k e attempt t h a t do p a i n and c o n c l u d e s on a I really believe i t is; 91 but I don't attempting s e e how I c a n d e l i v e r to analyse the e f f e c t upon h e r , t h e n a r r a t o r e q u a t e s i t " (p. 191). Rather than of the s t r a n g e r ' s death i t w i t h a message t h a t she d o e s n o t know how t o send and communicates h e r s t a t e o f mind by P a r a d o x i c a l l y , by r e l i n q u i s h i n g means o f t h e a n a l o g y . authority, she c a n b e t t e r the r e a d e r t o imagine One o f t h e n a r r a t o r s who h a s r e l i n q u i s h e d method, b u t i n s i s t e d successful smoke c i g a r e t t e s she i n the past. grandmother authority i n i n "Marakesh". refused to a l t e r her upon r e p e a t i n g what she had S t u b b o r n l y , she c o n t i n u e d t o despite a petition u r g i n g h e r t o s t o p . Once had made up h e r mind on any s u b j e c t , she n e v e r Now t h a t she i s r e t i r e d , her years and the e l d e r l y she was a t e a c h e r , D o r o t h y teaching found of persuading her f e e l i n g s . SOMETHING i s D o r o t h y , While a c h i e v e her purpose however, she r a r e l y i n the classroom, becomes f a s c i n a t e d granddaughter, sloughs w i t h change. beauty, beauty she r e a l i z e s that houses she s e e s replaced by a s h o p p i n g the elm t r e e s Dorothy she s t i l l accepts the appreciates s h e no l o n g e r r e s e n t s t h e l o s s o f i n her surroundings familiar unduly Although rigidity, Whereas h e r young Jeanette, i s grieved to find o f change. l o o k s b a c k on o f f her former c u t down when s h e r e t u r n s f o r a v i s i t , inevitability altered. a s she once w o u l d h a v e . from I fthe h e r window were t o r n down and c e n t r e p a r k i n g l o t , s h e w o u l d n o t be upset: A n y t h i n g w o u l d do f o r h e r t o l o o k a t ; b e a u t i f u l o r u g l y had c e a s e d t o m a t t e r , b e c a u s e t h e r e was i n 92 e v e r y t h i n g s o m e t h i n g t o be d i s c o v e r e d . This was a f e e l i n g t h a t had come on h e r as she g o t o l d e r , and i t was n o t a t a l l a p e a c e f u l , l e t t i n g - g o s o r t o f f e e l i n g , s u c h as o l d p e o p l e were s u p p o s e d t o g e t ; i t was t h e v e r y o p p o s i t e , p i n n i n g h e r where she was i n i r r i t a b l e , b a f f l e d c o n c e n t r a t i o n , (pp. 162-3) It i s D o r o t h y ' s a t t e n t i o n t o what i s h a p p e n i n g i n present Viola, moment t h a t d i s t i n g u i s h e s h e r who more e f f e c t i v e l y change, m a i n t a i n i n g (p. 1 6 3 ) . What V i o l a o f y o u t h may denial that, not be fails accept the pain retired, interested she whose w i f e t h a t goes w i t h occurred. has her i s dying Later curiosity Blair King's Jeanette are by is on the respect young" illusion Rather than keep l i f e her love. and During of her her Although the her. she her a neighbour drink, have indulges garden to look into granddaughter sight disturbs to tremble v i o l e n t l y and fear that verge of a s t r o k e , u l t i m a t e l y i t confirms for herself: to a b o u t them, more t o come o v e r f o r a end a that o f e v e n t s t h a t need n e v e r to the at t o change same n i g h t , D o r o t h y f u r t h e r going making life impulsively invites of cancer a chain the allowing t o them t a l k . she the Dorothy i s prepared become more c u r i o u s s u n p o r c h where he Dorothy, causing i s t h a t the power o v e r y o u n g e r p e o p l e now in listening causing against t h o u g h t s keep you to r e a l i z e painful. granddaughter's v i s i t , thereby "pleasant through forced cheerfulness, Having r e l i n q u i s h e d is insulates herself sister, w o r t h p r e s e r v i n g when i t s p r i c e i s of e v e r y t h i n g distance from her the her she 93 What i f V i o l a had s e e n any o f t h a t ? More t h a n she could stand. S t r e n g t h i s n e c e s s a r y , as w e l l as s o m e t h i n g l i k e g r a t i t u d e , i f you a r e g o i n g t o t u r n i n t o a l a d y p e e p i n g Tom a t t h e end o f y o u r l i f e . (p. 174) Dorothy can admit voyeur. Unlike Viola, discovery. self, Her including A similar speech you be thing may blow Robina Robina's the she i s something i s committed of a t o the process of i s i n her a c c e p t a n c e o f her her curiosity. lewd tolerance bad that strength thing a l o t of t r o u b l e Instead she to the n a r r a t o r l e t one bad to to h e r s e l f refer for imperfection near like t h e end this f o r you to the gave t h e c h i l d of motivates b o t h e r you of l i f e there's going to (p. 1 5 3 ) . The i n the f i r e , or f o r m e n t i o n i n g Jimmy and b r o t h e r s , as t h o u g h Robina's "Executioners": "If i n this world" loss entire implicating them i n t h e Duval, fire. o f e n d i n g w i t h t h e n a r r a t o r w i s e r t h a n she was b e g i n n i n g , " E x e c u t i o n e r s " ends w i t h t h e n a r r a t o r distinguish happened. o n l y pass The between c o n f l i c t i n g mystery at unable memories o f what o f t h e f i r e c a n n o t be out of l i v i n g the solved; i t can memory: When e v e r y b o d y i s dead who c o u l d have remembered i t , t h e n I suppose t h e f i r e w i l l be f i n i s h e d w i t h , i t w i l l be j u s t as i f nobody had e v e r r u n t h r o u g h t h a t d o o r . (p. 155) Even though obliterated the the n a r r a t o r by t h e end c o n t e x t of her declares of the statement that lifetimes within the f i r e can be of i t s witnesses, a written narrative 94 widens the As circle well discovers word. evocative recalls readers. Del possibilities on the adjective level J o r d a n would pause t o r e l i s h narrators of SOMETHING a r e c o n n o t a t i o n s of words. they Munro a t the Struck interrupt their connotation. The y e a r s when she was of "Tell the a word's to the a period r e c o l l e c t i o n s to narrator of more a p t by power o f a p a r t i c u l a r word t o r e c a l l lives, directly all its i m p l i c a t i o n s of n a r r a t i v e , i n LIVES; the pause over the their new i n SOMETHING new individual sound as to i n c l u d e me a young mother by in comment Yes or No" the "mature": A word we o f t e n u s e d was "mature." We w o u l d meet somebody we had known a few y e a r s ago and we w o u l d r e p o r t t h a t t h i s p e r s o n had g r e a t l y m a t u r e d , (p. 107) The e f f e c t of that s i n g l i n g out "mature" was former n o t i o n s Elsewhere, for used o f t e n , about m a t u r i t y ironic purposes of narrator the word i s i r o n i c . the narrator c o m p a r i s o n , as compares t h e words stating implies were f a s h i o n a b l e e f f e c t i s d o u b l e d by By her nonsense. isolating two i n "Executioners", " a l c o h o l i c " and that words when the "drunk": A l c o h o l i c was n o t a word s p o k e n i n our h o u s e ; I d o n ' t b e l i e v e i t was s p o k e n much anywhere, a t t h a t time. Drunk was t h e word u s e d , b u t t h a t was i n t h e town. (p. 139) From t h e s e comments on infer of not only the his drinking. word c h o i c e , the reader f a t h e r ' s weakness, but As a child, the narrator also had i s led the only to secrecy a hazy 95 understanding efforts of the f a m i l y s i t u a t i o n . to reconcile wronged man, w i t h She r e c a l l s h e r mother's v e r s i o n o f h e r f a t h e r the taunts she h e a r d about direct rather t o make i n f e r e n c e s . to allow the reader statements commented u n f a v o u r a b l y on h e r e a r l i e r summing up i n t h e c o n c l u d i n g p a r a g r a p h s as a him a t s c h o o l . I n SOMETHING Munro r e j e c t s has her and chooses R e c e n t l y she penchant f o r of her s t o r i e s : And now, I w o u l d go b a c k , i f I c o u l d r e w r i t e most o f t h o s e s t o r i e s , and I w o u l d c h o p o u t a l o t o f t h o s e words and f i n a l s e n t e n c e s . And I w o u l d j u s t l e t each s t o r y stand w i t h o u t b o t h e r i n g t o do t h e summing up, b e c a u s e t h a t ' s r e a l l y what i t amounts t o . H Munro's i n c r e a s i n g narrative well subtlety understood early r e a s o n i n g t o c o n v e y m e a n i n g . Munro i n her a r t i s t i c i s natural o f dreams s u g g e s t career that t o t h e mind. that ritual, metaphorical Her f i c t i o n a l she h a s a r r i v e d same c o n c l u s i o n s a s Suzanne L a n g e r reason, progression of her t e c h n i q u e w h i c h h a s a l w a y s made u s e o f metaphor a s as d i s c u r s i v e thinking i s a logical portrayals intuitively a t the advances i n h e r study o f and a r t : M e t a p h o r i s t h e law o f g r o w t h o f e v e r y s e m a n t i c . I t i s n o t a development, b u t a p r i n c i p l e . This i s s t r i k i n g l y a t t e s t e d by t h e f a c t t h a t t h e lowest, completely u n i n t e n t i o n a l products o f t h e human b r a i n a r e madly m e t a p h o r i c a l f a n t a s i e s , t h a t o f t e n make no l i t e r a l s e n s e w h a t e v e r ; I mean t h e r i o t o u s s y m b o l i s m o f dreams. 1 2 Munro u s e s dreams t o augment o r m o d i f y of her c h a r a c t e r s . Think t h e waking o f Mr. Lougheed thoughts i n "Walking on 96 Water", p i e c i n g the long-ago is after farm. Clearly t o t h e o l d man's u n e a s i n e s s Eugene's mental search f o r a the d i s c o v e r y o f t h e boy's on a n e i g h b o r i n g related f r a g m e n t s o f dream and memory o f n i g h t when h i s f a t h e r h e l p e d demented y o u t h parents together murdered the r e c u r r i n g over h i s young dream friend state: T h e s e were t h e f a c t s . The dream, a s f a r a s he c o u l d t e l l , c o n t a i n e d b u t d i d n o t r e v e a l them. Awake he had a l l t h i s i n f o r m a t i o n a b o u t t h e murder, d o u b l e murder, i n h i s memory, t h o u g h he c o u l d n o t t h i n k when o r how i t was g i v e n t o him. I n t h e dream he n e v e r u n d e r s t o o d c l e a r l y what a l l t h e u r g e n c y and commotion were a b o u t , he knew o n l y t h a t he had t o f i n d h i s b o o t s and h u r r y o u t w i t h h i s f a t h e r and b r o t h e r ( i f he h u r r i e d , i n t h e dream, he w o u l d n o t be l e f t b e h i n d ) . (p. 82) Suggesting disaster, death, to prevent some unnamed t h e dream p r o v i d e s o b l i q u e commentary on t h e s t o r y o f Eugene. statement d a n g e r , t h e need t o h u r r y I t i s an a l t e r n a t i v e to the kind of d i r e c t E t makes a b o u t h e r own t h o u g h t s when she r e c a l l s how s h e l i e d after Char's t o Char a b o u t Blaikie Noble: The q u e s t i o n o f t e n c r o s s e d E t ' s mind i n l a t e r y e a r s — w h a t d i d she mean t o do a b o u t t h i s s t o r y when B l a i k i e g o t b a c k ? F o r s h e had no r e a s o n t o b e l i e v e he w o u l d n o t come b a c k . The answer was t h a t she had n o t made any p l a n s a t a l l . (p. 21) Having Mr. E t review her thoughts Lougheed r e v i e w probably h i s dream. not w i l l i n g l y communicating forego i s no l e s s helpful Munro's r e a d e r s than having would any o f h e r t e c h n i q u e s f o r her c h a r a c t e r s ' mental lives. Although she 97 u s e s them l e s s "hesitant reader 13 f r e q u e n t l y i n her summaries", as directly Through these audience i n t h e way e x c i s e these still pauses be i n the helpful but her stories. course explanatory they the of trained No the her d o u b t she paragraphs today have a d d i t i o n a l value a c t i o n which a l l o w the n a r r a t o r time reflect. Such moments make e a c h s t o r y n o t of but events them, l e a d summaries, Munro has to read understood, i n the Solecki calls to t r u t h s discovered story. now Sam l a t e r work, Munro's a vehicle for expressing "the and as to merely a felt could sequence quality of Ik an and individual response takes p l a c e because the memories f r o m t h e these the final By life". This bonding of p r o t a g o n i s t , which i s c h a r a c t e r i s t i c story, of to memories any b e t t e r than s t o r y , then, i s one o f a Munro s h o r t n a r r a t o r , although p a s t , does n o t start out does t h e reader understanding reader. o f d i s c o v e r y , as relating The process t h e much q u o t e d p a r a g r a p h o f t h e f i n a l s t o r y makes c l e a r : The p r o b l e m , t h e o n l y p r o b l e m , i s my m o t h e r . And she i s t h e one o f c o u r s e t h a t I am t r y i n g t o g e t ; i t i s t o r e a c h h e r t h a t t h i s w h o l e j o u r n e y has been u n d e r t a k e n . W i t h what p u r p o s e ? To mark her o f f , to d e s c r i b e , to i l l u m i n e , to c e l e b r a t e , t o g e t r i d , o f h e r ; and i t d i d n o t work, f o r she looms t o o c l o s e , j u s t as she a l w a y s d i d . She i s h e a v y as a l w a y s , she w e i g h s e v e r y t h i n g down, and y e t she i s i n d i s t i n c t , h e r edges m e l t and f l o w . Which means she has s t u c k t o me as c l o s e as e v e r and r e f u s e d t o f a l l away, and I c o u l d go on, and on, a p p l y i n g what s k i l l s I h a v e , u s i n g what t r i c k s I know, and i t w o u l d a l w a y s be t h e same. (p. 246) t a k i n g the reader i n t o her confidence to a greater extent 98 than b e f o r e , and understand her reminding the confessing past, the reader o f h i s own more complex t h a n t h o s e delineated self-conscious the left revelation Reid linger of earlier and By admitting endings r i n g stories i s the true i n an to the and appear o v e r l y are cannot existence of the of short reader extent has be Munro's mind b e c a u s e t h e of is the apparently speaks of the e f f e c t i v e n e s s s t r u g g l i n g with reader".^^ age of this, i n h i s study i n the to i n a d e q u a c y when denouement i n w h i c h , a t t h e so a way works; t h e y p r e c i s e nature "is still failed i n s i g h t s o f SOMETHING notes In a d d i t i o n , R e i d character feelings, short Ian about the incomplete central feeling o r peak o f a w a r e n e s s a c h a r a c t e r experienced. o f an of the h i t on n a r r a t o r s bear witness some s t o r i e s uncertain The i n language. i n e f f a b l e . As story, sense of having n a r r a t o r has c o n f r o n t i n g h i s memories. fully her end, the the knot of her Such i n c o n c l u s i v e when t h e certainties of earlier contrived: U n t i l 1950 o r s o , t h e s t o r y i n Canada a p p e a r e d t o be machine-made, w i t h t w o - d i m e n s i o n a l c h a r a c t e r s s o l v i n g a r t i f i c i a l dilemmas . . . . Soon t h e s t o r y was n o t one t o l d by a c a r e f u l l y e n g i n e e r e d p l o t , b u t by t h e s u b t l e i m p l i c a t i o n of s e l e c t e d i s o l a t e d i n c i d e n t s . A r r a n g e m e n t began t o p l a y a g r e a t e r p a r t , and s i g n i f i c a n c e l a y i n what a p p e a r e d , a t t h e o u t s e t , t o be c a s u a l e p i s o d i c moments, 1 ° In M u n r o s work c e r t a i n l y , 1 not only f o r the understanding. attempt reader's, The narrator to sharpen her but arrangement i s a l s o f o r the r e s h u f f l e s her perception. In "The crucial, narrator's memories i n an Ottawa V a l l e y " , 99 the declared goal i s t o r e k i n d l e t h e image o f t h e dead m o t h e r , b u t h e r image c o n t i n u e s t o elude finally memory, c a n n o t r e c a p t u r e t h e past realizes that a r t , like e x a c t l y a s i t was. The m o t h e r ' s t h e n a r r a t o r , who likeness w i l l over time because i t i s c o n t i n u a l l y being artist's a final experiences. perception. Neither Since the narrator discovers like reader i s drawn b a c k t o t h e b e g i n n i n g . of the c y c l i n g Precisely this q u a l i t y o f memory i s t h e l i k e l i e s t p o s e d by t h e t i t l e of the c o l l e c t i o n , SOMETHING I'VE BEEN MEANING TO T E L L YOU. linear stories. i n a novel, In the course a heightened point consciousness i n their presupposition Munro's later separates appears c i r c u l a r fiction, i n Munro's o f t h e m s e l v e s as s t a n d i n g of a c i r c l e memories, and t h e i r shared Time, w h i c h o f SOMETHING, h e r n a r r a t o r s on t h e c i r c u m f e r e n c e retrace that her h e r memories, c a n be r e v i s e d e n d l e s s l y , t h e answer t o t h e r i d d l e appears by t h e memory n o r a r t , c a n a r r i v e a t story, discovery modified change which they discovery by t h e n a r r a t o r s o f WHO possession of this t h e women f r o m t h e g i r l s . short acquire at a endlessly becomes a and MOONS. insight i s what In 100 Notes 1 A l i c e Munro, SOMETHING I'VE BEEN MEANING TO T E L L YOU (Toronto: McGraw-Hill Ryerson, 1974). A l l subsequent r e f e r e n c e s appear i n the t e x t . 2 J.R. (Tim) S t r u t h e r s , "The R e a l M a t e r i a l : An I n t e r v i e w w i t h A l i c e Munro," i n PROBABLE FICTIONS: A L I C E MUNRO'S NARRATIVE ACTS, e d . L o u i s K. M a c K e n d r i c k (Downsview, Ont.: ECW P r e s s , 1 9 8 3 ) , p . 28. 3 A l i c e Munro, q u o t e d i n an i n t e r v i e w w i t h A l a n T w i g g , "What I s : A l i c e Munro," i n FOR OPENERS: CONVERSATIONS WITH 24 CANADIAN WRITERS ( M a d e i r a P a r k , B.C.: H a r b o u r , 1 9 8 1 ) , p. 16. 4 S t r u t h e r s , p . 15. 5 J o h n K e a t s , l e t t e r t o George and Tom K e a t s , December 21-27, 1817, L e t t e r 45, THE LETTERS OF JOHN KEATS 1814-1821, e d . Hyder Edward R o l l i n s ( C a m b r i d g e : Cambridge U n i v . P r e s s , 1 9 5 8 ) , I , p. 193. 6 Edward S a i d , BEGINNINGS: INTENTION AND METHOD (New Y o r k : B a s i c B o o k s , 1 9 7 5 ) , p . 90. 7 S a i d , p. 95. 8 S a i d , p . 90. 9 Margaret G a i l Osachoff, " ' T r e a c h e r i e s of the Heart': Memoir, C o n f e s s i o n , and M e d i t a t i o n i n t h e S t o r i e s o f A l i c e Munro," i n PROBABLE FICTIONS, e d . L o u i s K. M a c K e n d r i c k (Downsview, O n t . : ECW P r e s s , 1 9 8 3 ) , p. 64. 10 S t r u t h e r s , p. 27. 11 S t r u t h e r s , p . 15. 12 Suzanne K. L a n g e r , PHILOSOPHY IN A NEW KEY: A STUDY IN THE SYMBOLISM OF REASON, RITE AND ART (Cambridge, Mass.: H a r v a r d U n i v . P r e s s , 1 9 6 9 ) , p. 147. 13 Sam S o l e c k i , " L i v e s o f G i r l s and Women," r e v . o f THE MOONS OF JUPITER, by A l i c e Munro, CANADIAN FORUM, 62, No. 101 722 58. ( 1 9 8 2 ) , 25. 14 S o l e c k i , p . 25. 15 Ian R e i d , THE SHORT STORY (London: Methuen, 1 9 7 7 ) , p . * i i v 16 D o n a l d S t e p h e n s , "The S h o r t S t o r y i n E n g l i s h , " LITERATURE, No. 41 ( 1 9 6 9 ) , p . 126. CANADIAN 102 Chapter The Four Temptation to T e l l F l o t e l l i n g a s t o r y — a n d t h i s was n o t t h e o n l y one, o r e v e n t h e most l u r i d one she k n e w — w o u l d i n c l i n e h e r head and l e t h e r f a c e go s o f t and t h o u g h t f u l , t a n t a l i z i n g , warning. "I s h o u l d n ' t e v e n be t e l l i n g y o u t h i s s t u f f . " 1 The irresistable appeal of stories listener i s t h e p r e m i s e o f WHO. activity often reported organizing principle obsessed with the previous darkest i n Munro's f i c t i o n , storytelling, contains people using shocking embedded 1 WHO' i s Munro's the d e p r a v i t y o f which as w e l l as t h e t i t i l l a t i n g which p r o v i d e i n Munro s accordingly, the s t o r i e s i t are f a b l e s which i l l u s t r a t e stories is M o r e o v e r , t h e g o t h i c and i n stories o f human n a t u r e ; i s an i t not only to recapture works become more p r o n o u n c e d . are capable, and and an o f L I V E S , t h e p r o t a g o n i s t o f WHO elements f a m i l i a r vision teller Whereas s t o r y t e l l i n g past but a l s o to exorcise i t . grotesque t o both counterpoint effect to of restricted lives. In t h e f o r m o f g o s s i p o r r e m i n i s c e n c e , t h e main i n d u l g e n c e before the television of a r u r a l sets. former h i r e d g i r l Ontario As a p o t h e o s i s and w a i t r e s s widowed f a t h e r and r u n n i n g a small herself and h e r a u d i e n c e w i t h storytelling i s housewife i n the days of t h i s group, F l o , , now m a r r i e d grocery t o Rose's store, entertains salacious stories about her 103 customers. Her stepdaughter, to be usual i s the a storyteller actress, a type the husband, At Flo the knew t h e hear" care jokers." storytelling s t e p up by her an index and of t h e i r set aside from F l o ' s , career separate her socially home on to t a l e s and the of centred as power, shared antagonism. her education, physically, from her stepmother, become t h e i r a visit s t o r e and relative mutual one to known t o F l o diverges and the waiting school, life about mutual a c q u a i n t a n c e s "When Rose was was Rose, a their after storyteller: forward high child, social d u t i e s i n the group a t the i n which they intellectually, her high home, F l o was i s a bond between F l o and and an but, however, to attend the c h a r a c t e r s and named H o r s e N i c h o l s o n , Rose's a d u l t up the Rose i s a listener; husband, F l o looks w e l l as b e i n g marriage, Rose t h e bringing stories student "those As Within c o n s i d e r a b l e power o v e r obvious one invalid a boy grows or economic p r e s t i g e , f r o m West H a n r a t t y Confined around activity and names o f t h e notorious As social who e v e n t u a l l y becomes of F l o ' s i n f l u e n c e while bridge the (p. 4 0 ) . o f an a girl g r a d u a l l y u s u r p s F l o ' s p l a c e as Rose was who t u r n , and young stepdaughter. in Hanratty—an ladder—she the and storyteller Rose c r o s s e s "Now i n her little the h e i g h t i s the school p r o t a g o n i s t o f WHO, f a m i l y , F l o enjoys son, Rose, h e r of p r o f e s s i o n a l s t o r y t e l l e r . community, F l o has within listener, stories l a s t common c o n v e r s a t i o n was ground: difficult, 104 so she w o u l d a s k F l o a b o u t Legion"(p.201). belligerance, circumvented did a Flo's the people i n c r e a s i n g b i t t e r n e s s and w h i c h mar Rose's i n f r e q u e n t v i s i t s , by e n c o u r a g i n g Flo to t e l l b e f o r e Rose went t o s c h o o l . long truce, her stories, In those days, c a n be just they as she enjoyed and Rose has happy memories o f t h e t i m e b r o t h e r was s t i l l telling she saw a t t h e stories from a baby i n h i s c a r r i a g e , her high s t o o l Rose h e r s e l f was on t h e f l o o r behind when F l o was t h e c o u n t e r , and w i t h h e r brown p a p e r and crayons. Although storytelling Munro's f i c t i o n , WHO dangerous r e s u l t s . such i s unusually preoccupied with i t s By d w e l l i n g i n h e r s t o r i e s a s murder and i n c e s t , v i e w o f human n a t u r e violence that and d e p r a v i t y . with unpleasant occurs f r e q u e n t l y throughout Flo instills accentuates Primed surprises, i n Rose a d i s t o r t e d i t s potential f o r t o expect life Rose e x p e r i e n c e s t o be with Flo's exploiters and v i c t i m s engage i n p e r p e t u a l c o n f l i c t . tells storyteller R o s e , who f e e l s guilty turning stories i t into intellectual aloud friends. a letter bare-breasted WOMEN: as a b a t t l e g r o u n d where who, a g a i n s t h e r b e t t e r unsuitable tales filled i t in accordance as g u i l t y accounts, on s u b j e c t s to a c h i l d , Flo, judgement, becomes t h e p a r a d i g m f o r f o r h a v i n g b e t r a y e d h e r p a s t by t o shock her m i d d l e - c l a s s On one o c c a s i o n , Rose b e g i n s reading i n which F l o denounces h e r f o r a p p e a r i n g i n a television p r o d u c t i o n o f THE TROJAN 105 H a l f w a y t h r o u g h , she had t o s t o p r e a d i n g . It w a s n ' t t h a t she t h o u g h t how shabby i t was t o be e x p o s i n g and making f u n o f F l o t h i s way. She had done i t o f t e n enough b e f o r e ; i t was no news t o h e r t h a t i t was s h a b b y . What s t o p p e d h e r was, i n f a c t , t h a t g u l f ; she had a f r e s h and o v e r w h e l m i n g r e a l i z a t i o n o f i t , and i t was n o t h i n g t o l a u g h a b o u t , (p. 186) Since F l o represents the past which Rose has Rose c a n n o t manage t o see h e r as a c o m i c escape from F l o ' s influence her to take F l o l i g h t l y . is a moot p o i n t . she now has been figure. too p a i n f u l Whether o r n o t she has At b e s t , Rose's ties Rose's to allow escaped F l o to the group i n which moves a r e t e n u o u s , as shown by h e r e a g e r n e s s t o ingratiate herself. An o u t s i d e r remember, she has n e v e r had "Rose t h o u g h t o f h e r own belonging child, repudiated, leaving it, felt family about her p a s t , paradoxically, middle-class superior she f e e l s l o n g as she a secure p o s i t i o n nowhere, b u t t h a t was she had f o r as as s t r a d d l i n g not t r u e " liberals who the By herself river, (p. 4 ) . telling she seems t o humble h e r s e l f , she e x a l t s in society: t o her environment; inferior. can As a after sordid stories but, i n the eyes o f these envy her the e x p e r i e n c e o f poverty: Rose knew a l o t o f p e o p l e who w i s h e d - t h e y had p o o r and h a d n ' t b e e n . So she c o u l d queen i t o v e r them, o f f e r i n g v a r i o u s s c a n d a l s and b i t s s q u a l o r f r o m h e r c h i l d h o o d , (p. 23) Unable to r e s i s t rationalizes the t e m p t a t i o n t o shock her f r i e n d s , her s t o r y t e l l i n g on t h e g r o u n d s that been of Rose she i s 106 telling true s t o r i e s w h i c h e x p l o d e r o m a n t i c myths o f perpetuated in literature reference to Mansfield was her "The never o b l i g e d agreeable" Unlike of poverty; ugliness, voices. as to look at stained f r i v o l o u s but Mansfield, exemplified Rose has that by These d e t a i l s a r e a girl disparaging "Katherine underwear; their accents 48). understands which t r a n s f o r m s In a Rose c o m p l a i n s , c r u e l and (p. Katherine she film. Garden P a r t y " , r e l a t i v e s m i g h t be w o u l d be and poverty i t s salient stained often like d i r e c t experience feature underwear and omitted in is harsh literature, Franny M c G i l l u n t i l she is unrecognizable: L a t e r on Rose w o u l d t h i n k o f F r a n n y when she came upon t h e f i g u r e o f an i d i o t i c , s a i n t l y whore i n a book o r a m o v i e . Men who made books and m o v i e s seemed t o have a f o n d n e s s f o r t h i s f i g u r e , t h o u g h Rose n o t i c e d t h e y w o u l d c l e a n h e r up. They c h e a t e d , she t h o u g h t , when t h e y l e f t o u t t h e b r e a t h i n g and t h e s p i t and t h e t e e t h : t h e y were r e f u s i n g t o t a k e i n t o a c c o u n t t h e a p h r o d i s i a c p r i c k l e s of d i s g u s t , i n t h e i r hurry to reward themselves w i t h the n o t i o n of a s o o t h i n g b l a n k n e s s , u n d i f f e r e n t i a t e d welcome, (p. 26) A l t h o u g h L a w r e n c e Mathews r e a d s Robertson Davies any one novel to 1 the p a s s a g e as an attack F I F T H BUSINESS, i t s i m p l i c a t i o n s go indict writers for sentimentalizing on beyond their 2 characters. Alice of WHO Munro's f i c t i o n ; the side Concern f o r t r u t h - t e l l i n g dark s i d e to equal i s more p r o n o u n c e d is however, t h e or g r e a t e r i n WHO i s nothing i n s i s t e n c e on time than the than elsewhere r u t h l e s s l y anti-romantic, new the right bright i n the especially in in canon. depicting 107 poverty. her Rose h a s s c a n t husband, C l i f f o r d , deserves patience with Jocelyn's notion that h a s been damaged by p o v e r t y and special consideration as a r e s u l t : What J o c e l y n c a l l e d bitterness seemed t o Rose s o m e t h i n g more complex and more ordinary; just the weariness, suppleness, d e v i o u s n e s s , meanness, common t o a c l a s s . Common t o C l i f f o r d ' s c l a s s , and R o s e ' s . Jocelyn had been i n s u l a t e d i n some ways, l e f t s t e r n and innocent, (p. I l l ) Poverty has a c o a r s e n i n g effect on t h o s e who e x p e r i e n c e rendering them l e s s v u l n e r a b l e to psychic protected middle-class Clifford, p r o j e c t i n g h e r own f i c t i o n children. pain i t , than a r e Jocelyn i d e a l i z e s upon t h e a c t u a l man much a s P a t r i c k i d e a l i z e s R o s e , p r o j e c t i n g upon h e r h i s fiction roles of the Pre-Raphaelite of knight-rescuer hateful Once Rose m a r r i e s restrictions impose upon h e r . Patrick's resistance to Patrick's t h a t P a t r i c k ' s seemingly benign skepticism yielding, Instead, but slowly, overlapping but, like self-protective against view fiction Rose i s u n a b l e t o s u s t a i n h e r r o l e a s Even a s a c h i l d , a p e r s o n a l i t y which c o n t r a d i c t s the sweetly pinapple, enough P a t r i c k , she d i s c o v e r s t h e damsel-in-distress. stereotype. The r o m a n t i c and l a d y - v i c t i m a r e s e d u c t i v e t o overcome Rose's i n s t i n c t i v e of her. Beggar Maid. her nature . . . " (p. 5 ) . the pineapple, rind. The f i e r c e h e r stepmother r e a s s e r t s submissive "was g r o w i n g and s e c r e t l y , h a r d she p o s s e s s e d like a prickly p r i d e and She i s n o t sweet and has a tough resistance itself she m u s t e r s against h e r husband 108 as he attempts to dominate her. In c o n t r a s t t o t h e b a r e Maid's s t a t u s indirectly i n the refers, f e e t which r e v e a l the Beggar Burne-Jones p a i n t i n g to which P a t r i c k Rose's emblem f o r h e r own origins is the 3 outhouse behind d a r k and her first frightening Girls' seemed, d e c l i n e d t o use she can get dares not call the home, r i s k i n g confide a pail and hole" wet important the (p. 2 3 ) , shovel, p a n t s and by situation (p. 2 4 ) . i n the and Rose Girls' 's revealed suppressed. to which p r e v i o u s l y aspects their of Rose's c h i l d h o o d great s e c r e t her extent i n f l u e n c e upon h e r f e a r of the school the first The l i n k between t o i l e t s s t o r e of t h i n g s throughout t h e work. of t o i l e t s and Mr. and she outhouse, could her brother, i s glimpsed concealed narrative "She forged has building (p. here noted the toilet crush, up 24). holds the In a d d i t i o n t o has suggests Keeping was prevalence linking been r a p e d in the image r e l a t e s t o i n h i s o u t h o u s e , and whom Rose d e v e l o p s a s c h o o l g i r l being never t e l l " telling Struthers i n which grows up. t o F r a n n y M c G i l l , who o u t h o u s e by B u r n s who Tim she as e x c r e m e n t i n WHO. Rose t o F l o and school from F l o i s power by dominate t h i s school, determination Toilet s e c r e t s w h i c h c a n n o t be The will lambasting b e c a u s e i t draws a t t e n t i o n t o t h e way gain She stepmother a t the i t until Flo's scorn. arriving c l e a n i n g up, bargain" the Rose w a i t s i n F l o f o r f e a r t h a t her everyone i n t o the conceal Rather than v i s i t T o i l e t where "Many p e o p l e , unwanted a t t e n t i o n t o h e r "with to school. i n that to Cora, her on 109 grandfather interprets i s known as t h e honey-dumper. the t o i l e t as an image i n w h i c h Munro t h e c h a n g e s i n H a n r a t t y , when, i n t h e of "Privilege", disappearance plumbing. this t o a change i n A l i c e in three and introduction of paragraphs r e f e r e n c e s i n WHO. the indoor explanation alone s c a r c e l y t h e numerous s c a t o l o g i c a l narrative, last expresses p r o g r e s s i s d i s c u s s e d i n terms o f of outhouses But Struthers accounts f o r They p o i n t Munro's n o t i o n o f what b e l o n g s contradicting the o p i n i o n expressed also in by Ada Jordan LIVES: N e x t day t h e y w i l l be t e l l i n g a b o u t how t h e y go t o t h e t o i l e t , why do t h e y l e a v e t h a t o u t ? T h e r e i s n ' t any o f t h a t i n S i l a s M a r n e r . There i s n ' t any i n t h e c l a s s i c w r i t e r s . They were good w r i t e r s , t h e y d i d n ' t need i t . " 5 Ada believes belong that neither in literature, private physical reflect life installed, sex b u t WHO scenes insists acts are v i t a l accurately. the n a r r a t o r change t h a n a symbol of nor bathroom reflects lost the o p p o s i t e , t h a t to l i t e r a t u r e When F l o has on scenes i f i t i s to the indoor i t less toilet as a symbol of privacy: They were a l l f a m i l i a r w i t h e a c h o t h e r ' s n e t h e r v o i c e s , n o t o n l y i n t h e i r more e x p l o s i v e moments b u t i n t h e i r i n t i m a t e s i g h s and g r o w l s and p l e a s and s t a t e m e n t s . And t h e y were a l l most p r u d i s h p e o p l e . So no one e v e r seemed t o h e a r , o r be l i s t e n i n g and no r e f e r e n c e was made. The p e r s o n c r e a t i n g t h e n o i s e s i n t h e b a t h r o o m was n o t c o n n e c t e d w i t h t h e p e r s o n who w a l k e d o u t . (p. 4) The phrase, nether v o i c e s , directly associates the image 110 with narrative. father talking In a p a r a l l e l passage, Rose o v e r h e a r s her t o h i m s e l f i n h i s workshop: From t h e shed came n o t o n l y c o u g h i n g , b u t s p e e c h , a c o n t i n u a l muttering, r e p r o a c h f u l or e n c o u r a g i n g , u s u a l l y j u s t below the l e v e l a t w h i c h s e p a r a t e words c o u l d be made o u t . . . . Now and t h e n some words w o u l d b r e a k t h r o u g h and hang c l e a r and n o n s e n s i c a l on t h e a i r . When he r e a l i z e d t h e y were o u t , t h e r e w o u l d be a q u i c k b i t o f c o v e r - u p c o u g h i n g , a s w a l l o w i n g , an a l e r t u n u s u a l s i l e n c e . . . . The p e r s o n who spoke t h e s e words and t h e p e r s o n who spoke t o h e r as h e r f a t h e r were n o t t h e same, t h o u g h t h e y seemed t o o c c u p y t h e same s p a c e . I t w o u l d be t h e w o r s t p o s s i b l e t a s t e t o a c k n o w l e d g e t h e p e r s o n who was s u p p o s e d t o be t h e r e . . . (pp. 3-4) Words a r e i m p o r t a n t h e r e n o t as c o m m u n i c a t i o n utterance, perhaps meaningful t o t h e s p e a k e r h i m s e l f , and depths of h i s being. individual powerful The narrator from the t h e s e i n v o l u n t a r y words, i s , and o f WHO feels h i s need a compulsion i s as s t r o n g as t h a t after t o do an so i s a too, a drive (p. 2 6 ) . Her Go a n o t h e r , as h a r d t o s t o p as away o r I ' l l punch y o u . Difficult name s u g g e s t s flow which cannot be reticence: "she was as F r a n n y they Franny I_ w i l l . the s o r t She "Go I_ r e a l l y i s to suppress, Flo i s i t s homophone, f l o w ; h e r t a l k staunched. to of C o l e r i d g e ' s a n c i e n t unwelcome o v e r t u r e s t o Rose i n t h e s c h o o l y a r d : away, F r a n n y . worse. arising but Once t h e s e h i d d e n memories a r e u n s t o p p e r e d , o u t one wil1" to a l i s t e n e r , as compulsion. mariner. McGill's Through e x p r e s s e s what he c o n f e s s which pour unintelligible but has o f woman who no is a decent will make p u b l i c Ill what she f i n d s i n t h e l a u n d r y childhood, for Rose h a t e s the s a d i s t i c bag" (p. 2 4 ) . Throughout h e r F l of o r t e l l i n g pleasure F l o takes everything, especially i n d e s t r o y i n g Rose's illusions. Y e t she i s f a s c i n a t e d t o o by t h e s t o r i e s F l o tells The i m p l i e d c o m p l i c i t y between t e l l e r and her. listener parallels Rose d u r i n g their t h e c o m p l i c i t y between R o s e ' s f a t h e r and the beatings, violent o r between Rose and P a t r i c k d u r i n g m a r i t a l q u a r r e l s . I n WHO, between p e o p l e i s thoroughly words o b s e r v e d i n Munro's the strange case fiction the f a s c i n a t i o n takes a different o f t h e o l d woman Rose e n c o u n t e r s C o u n t y Home who no l o n g e r words explored: s p e e c h a s t h e bond i f she i s g i v e n speaks b u t w i l l with form i n i n the obediently spell them: " I s n ' t she a wonder," t h e n u r s e s a i d . "She c a n ' t see and t h a t ' s t h e o n l y way we c a n t e l l she c a n hear. L i k e i f y o u s a y , 'Here's y o u r d i n n e r , ' she won't p a y any a t t e n t i o n t o i t , b u t she m i g h t s t a r t s p e l l i n g d i n n e r . " ( p . 183) When t h e n u r s e spelled, a word w h i c h r e c a l l s a word t o be the c o r r e c t s p e l l i n g of Hagar's i n s i g h t near t h e o f M a r g a r e t L a u r e n c e ' s THE STONE ANGEL: " I must a l w a y s have wanted this t h a t Rose s u p p l y t h e o l d woman o b l i g e s w i t h "celebrate", end suggests sentiment, rejoicing that—simply WHO r e c o g n i z e s to r e j o i c e . " 0 always, Endorsing words a s t h e means o f i n t h e human c o n d i t i o n i n a l l i t s a s p e c t s . simulataneously acknowledges t h e s q u a l o r b a c k g r o u n d and r e j o i c e s o f Rose's i n i t s r i c h n e s s as e x p e r i e n c e : WHO 112 She knew she w o u l d n e v e r f l o u r i s h , n e v e r g e t t o any v e r y s e c u r e p o s i t i o n — i f i n d e e d t h e r e was such a t h i n g — i n t h e w o r l d o f s c h o o l . B u t she was not m i s e r a b l e , except i n the matter of not b e i n g a b l e t o go t o t h e t o i l e t . L e a r n i n g t o s u r v i v e , no m a t t e r w i t h what c r a v e n n e s s and c a u t i o n , what s h o c k s and f o r e b o d i n g s , i s n o t t h e same as b e i n g m i s e r a b l e . I t i s t o o i n t e r e s t i n g , (p. 27) Learning to s u r v i v e i n the harsh world develops early related has in the to a c t i n g , technique her a h a b i t of walking the inside lighted as actress; for she can Rose, her ambivalent imitation the streets f i t i n anywhere" this a sense the of imagining She can she looking herself picture herself "Rose i s an (p. 1 5 2 ) . to her suggests. to i l l u m i n e Rose places, i n the evening, o r modest h o u s e s : usual attitude than overcome by d e s t i n e d c a r e e r . In new or a guest. equally well in lavish youth, of adapting, which i s c l o s e l y windows o f h o u s e s and the h o s t e s s of her acting Unfortunately i s more O b s e s s e d by the t r u t h s of experience, failure she of i s often shame: The t h i n g she was ashamed o f , i n a c t i n g , was t h a t she m i g h t have b e e n p a y i n g a t t e n t i o n t o t h e wrong t h i n g s , r e p o r t i n g a n t i c s , when t h e r e was a l w a y s s o m e t h i n g f u r t h e r , a t o n e , a d e p t h , a l i g h t , t h a t she c o u l d n ' t g e t and w o u l d n ' t g e t . And i t wasn't j u s t a b o u t a c t i n g t h a t she suspected t h i s . E v e r y t h i n g she had done c o u l d sometimes be s e e n as a m i s t a k e , (p. 205) These t h o u g h t s meeting with occur Ralph Ralph i s almost actor by t o Rose i n t h e c o n t e x t o f h e r Gillespie Rose's a l t e r instinct. i n the Hanratty ego i n WHO. Legion L i k e her Famous f o r h i s i m i t a t i o n final of a Hall. he i s an local 113 c h a r a c t e r whose name, M i l t o n Homer, i s a r e m i n d e r esteem has i n which Hanratty h o l d s poets, Ralph been a c q u a i n t e d w i t h s i n c e occupied a d e s k ahead o f h e r s . affinity for their of the i s someone school days, she when E v e n t h e n , Rose f e l t low he an him: B o t h o f them l o s t o r m i s l a i d o r n e v e r a d e q u a t e l y provided themselves with a l l the p e n c i l s , r u l e r s , e r a s e r s , pen n i b s , r u l e d p a p e r , g r a p h p a p e r , t h e compass, d i v i d e r s , p r o t a c t o r , n e c e s s a r y f o r a s u c c e s s f u l s c h o o l l i f e ; b o t h o f them were s l o p p y w i t h i n k , s u b j e c t t o s p i l l i n g and b l o t t i n g m i s h a p s ; b o t h o f them were n e g l i g e n t a b o u t d o i n g homework b u t p a n i c k y a b o u t n o t h a v i n g done i t . (p. 199) As shy as t h e y were i m p r a c t i c a l , c o n v e r s a t i o n , b u t communicated t h e y c o u l d n o t manage a on another level: T h a t wasn't q u i t e a l l . T h e i r s h o e s and b o o t s became w e l l a c q u a i n t e d , s c u f f l i n g and p u s h i n g i n f r i e n d l y and p r i v a t e e n c o u n t e r , sometimes r e s t i n g t o g e t h e r a moment i n t e n t a t i v e encouragement; t h e i r mutual k i n d n e s s p a r t i c u l a r l y h e l p e d them t h r o u g h t h o s e moments when p e o p l e were b e i n g s e l e c t e d t o do m a t h e m a t i c s p r o b l e m s on t h e b l a c k b o a r d , (p. 199) Ralph's nearness^comforted comfort h e r when he Like h e r , he h i d e s b e h i n d she was because continues to comes t o s i t b e s i d e h e r a t t h e s c h o o l d a y s when R a l p h desk, Rose t h e n , and manner. In their shook snow o u t o f h i s h a i r charmed; she i t so c l o s e l y a joking the c o n c l u d i n g sentence onto appreciates his oblique resembles o f WHO, have been h e r s : "What c o u l d she h e r own. Ralph's As life say a b o u t Legion. she her approach realizes in could nearly herself and Ralph 114 Gillespie, the lives own?" except that of the (p 2 0 6 ) . returned men She herself, she escaped Ralph's appealing Had of h i s . Simon e n t e r t a i n s as Rose by one close, closer slot over from she stayed, Renouncing t h a t drawn t o men falls qualities, his acting. Just life, f r o m H a n r a t t y whereas war. later his loved, i s nevertheless Simon, w i t h whom she by felt she'd home a f t e r t h e have been a v e r s i o n her she i n c l u d i n g the Ralph would playing would for Ralph. many o f ability "do" various life life i n l o v e , has her Ralph her like than Milton to amuse Homer, parts: She a l r e a d y knew a few o f h i s c h a r a c t e r s . This was The Humble Workman. Some o t h e r s were The O l d Philosopher . . . and, where a p p r o p r i a t e , The Mad S a t y r , n u z z l i n g and l e a p i n g , making triumphant s u c k i n g n o i s e s a g a i n s t her n a v e l . (P. 161) Rose d r e a d s t h e falling allow i n love. her to play h u m o u r l e s s man feelings love l o s s of accompanies A p l a y f u l l o v e r who mimics a f r e e of like to h i s . independence which l o v e r ' s r o l e too, P a t r i c k makes t h a t This i s s u g g e s t e d by strong Flo's she love the match seems to demand a her dramatic element i n e r o t i c euphemism f o r t h e sex act: T h a t was F l o ' s word f o r i t : p e r f o r m . Back i n t h e c o u n t r y , b a c k on t h e h i l l f a r m s she came f r o m , F l o s a i d t h a t p e o p l e had gone d o t t y , been known t o e a t b o i l e d hay, and p e r f o r m e d w i t h t h e i r t o o c l o s e r e l a t i o n s , (p. 25) As usual, that there Flo's s t o r i e s are warnings f o r Rose. i s something r i d i c u l o u s i n s e x u a l i t y . They The imply idea 115 of performance i m p l i e s the p o s s i b i l i t y oneself Flo's of from a ritual h a r p i n g on with perverse attempts sexuality throwing window, e v e n s l a s h i n g g a r d e n and unhealthy tearing cycle been she light To responds the into T h e i r marriage the repeats reconciliation, been done, u n t i l time, t h e d i n i n g room her w r i s t s or r u s h i n g out o f q u a r r e l i n g and enough damage had her, head a g a i n s t through a t the g r a s s . same Patrick develop. possess b e a t i n g her a gravy-boat At the i s suggestive i n Rose and t o d o m i n a t e and overwhelming rage, bedpost, n e a r l y mortal the "until damage had done"(p.95). The scenes make i t t h e moves f r o m of v i o l e n c e t a i n t most d i s t u r b i n g v i o l e n c e has has which i s acted out. the d e s t r u c t i v e r e l a t i o n s h i p Patrick's of withholding who i s suspected i s the beaten as instigator, i s an of b e a t i n g her Her i n WHO insistent her anger a g a i n s t her by blood i s the final necessary detail: blood came l e a p i n g o u t which erupts the phrase, banners" as of a stepmother. "Royal Blood i n F l o ' s s t o r y of her i n the h o s p i t a l when she As she Beating", "Someone k n e l t (p.l). Rose the i n Rose's f a n t a s i e s . suggested o f human p a i n i s r e p e a t e d Jordan only c o u r t s v i o l e n c e out scene like of who motif i t child, recollection the nosebleed fiction, i n the b e a t i n g s , not need t o r i t u a l i z e Blood pictures child. i m p l i c a t e s her but perverse i n her and Although t h e p e r i p h e r y t o t h e c e n t r e . Whereas D e l experience victim, o f Munro's w o r k s . a l w a y s been p r e s e n t a neighbour herself t h e a t m o s p h e r e o f WHO, and as the emblem severe visits the 116 woman f o r whom she u s e d of Flo's stories, Becky T y d e ' s f a t h e r snow he was l y i n g assailants window: steps i n turned finally leave, "She w a t c h e d make h i s d e l a y e d stories blood Becky bloody progress (p. which flows i s not released In another i s beaten u n t i l "the r e d " ( p . 8 ) , and a f t e r h i s isstill t h e men l e a v e o f the verandah" The t o work a s h i r e d g i r l . watching at last from t h e and h e r f a t h e r t h r o u g h t h e snow and up t h e 8). from t h e b e a t i n g s when Rose's f a t h e r i n these a c t u a l l y beats her: He h a s n e v e r managed t o r e a l l y i n j u r e h e r , t h o u g h t h e r e a r e t i m e s , o f c o u r s e , when s h e p r a y s t h a t he will. He h i t s h e r w i t h an open hand, t h e r e i s some r e s t r a i n t i n h i s k i c k s , ( p . 17) Paradoxically, deliver the ultimate rebellion c e n t r a l t o WHO. f o r daring identity, self-critical, led she p r o v o k e s a g a i n s t also herself superior critical of to others. s u g g e s t s Rose's q u e s t f o r i s t h e main i s s u e . She b e l i e v e s Habitually pride h e r f a t h e r was t r a p p e d when she and F l o p u s h e d h i m t o o f a r : comes a t i m e when y o u c a n ' t herself WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE? Rose wonders w h e t h e r h e r own s t u b b o r n to the beatings. into violence R o s e ' s own a s k e d Rose by a t e a c h e r to consider her pride the c y c l e of The d e g r e e o f The t i t l e , Although the question t o l o s e a l l c o n t r o l and perpetuates f o r the violence comes f r o m a q u e s t i o n her failure beating and p u n i s h m e n t . responsibility is her father's draw b a c k " ( p . 1 6 ) . "there Later, 117 reflecting upon h e r v i o l e n t f i g h t s with them a s symptoms o f i l l n e s s , each o t h e r , P a t r i c k , she sees and r e c a l l s "What do y o u t h i n k how t h e y would ask t r i g g e r s t h e r e a c t i o n ? " (p. 95) Blood WHO, and v i o l e n c e a r e n o t mere b a c k g r o u n d d e t a i l i n b u t a r e p a r t o f an image p a t t e r n when he f i r s t falls i n love with s u g g e s t e d by P a t r i c k Rose: "You d o n ' t know how I love you. T h e r e ' s a book I have c a l l e d Every time I look 78). Whereas P a t r i c k r e f e r s t o t h e c o n n o t a t i o n s and spirituality a t the t i t l e THE WHITE GODDESS. i t r e m i n d s me o f y o u " ( p . s u g g e s t e d by t h e t i t l e of purity o f t h i s work by Robert G r a v e s , Graves' a n a l y s i s o f t h e White Goddess her as more p e r v e r s e Rose—than P a t r i c k guesses. muse o f p o e t r y , achieve, and c o n t r a d i c t o r y — h e n c e According and by i n v o k i n g "the experience more reveals like t o G r a v e s , she i s t h e her the true poet may o f mixed e x a l t a t i o n and h o r r o r that 7 her presence e x c i t e s " . symbolized special White i s t h e f i r s t of her c o l o u r s , by t h e new moon; however, h e r s e c o n d c o l o u r s i g n i f i c a n c e f o r the protagonist of i s of WHO: When S u i d a s t h e B y z a n t i n e r e c o r d s t h a t Io was a cow t h a t c h a n g e d h e r c o l o u r f r o m w h i t e t o r o s e and t h e n t o b l a c k , he means t h a t t h e New Moon i s t h e w h i t e g o d d e s s o f b i r t h and g r o w t h ; t h e F u l l Moon, t h e r e d g o d d e s s o f l o v e and b a t t l e ; t h e O l d Moon, t h e b l a c k g o d d e s s o f d e a t h and d i v i n a t i o n " (p. 6 9 ) . I n WHO, the protagonist's suggesting triumvirate name comes f r o m t h e c o l o u r , rose, t h e r e d of the second goddess o f Graves's and t h e c o l o u r of blood; m o r e o v e r , t h e Rose 118 Goddess her i s the d e i t y i s to invoke fright and embrace o f l o v e and s e x u a l w a r f a r e . what G r a v e s c a l l s , lust—the i s death" " t h e a n c i e n t power o f f e m a l e s p i d e r , o r t h e queen-bee whose (p. 24) . G r a v e s blames h i s c e n t u r y ' s inimical To summon e m p h a s i s on m a r r i a g e , a state t o the goddess, f o r the d e c l i n e of p o e t r y : The W h i t e Goddess i s a n t i - d o m e s t i c ; she i s t h e p e r p e t u a l " o t h e r woman" and h e r p a r t i s d i f f i c u l t i n d e e d f o r a woman o f s e n s i b i l i t y t o p l a y f o r more t h a n a few y e a r s . . . (p. 447) This description except t o note admiration never fits Rose s o e x a c t l y i t r e q u i r e s no comment t h a t G r a v e s ' argument, d e s p i t e i t s i m p l i c i t f o r the female p r i n c i p l e , admits the p o s s i b i l i t y however, Rose assumes therefore the sexual muse p r e s u p p o s e d complicated. Clifford of a female poet. the r o l e s liason of a r t i s t and context, to s a t i s f y disbelieving, she was s a d " (p. 1 3 2 ) . drives Since female t h e s c e n e when Rose her dual nature: slightly too s l u g g i s h to reach The a f t e r t a s t e their "Rose of g u i l t allows suggests t o w h i c h she w i l l hardly w i l l i n g , Rose f r o m C l i f f o r d morning. and t o make l o v e t o h e r a l o n g w i t h J o c e l y n some l e v e l WHO, i n THE WHITE GODDESS becomes f u r t h e r In t h i s doomed a t t e m p t at In and g o d d e s s ; between male p o e t Rose's d e s p e r a t i o n , the l e n g t h s curious, t h e g o d d e s s as muse, go i n a felt aroused f o r , appalled and d i s g u s t and J o c e l y n ' s h o u s e e a r l y lovemaking o f R o s e ' s l o v e f o r them b o t h , is a ritual and, the next acknowledgement Rose m i g h t have t a k e n comfort 119 from i t , but i n s t e a d she t h e p a s t , and vindicated Clifford's b e f o r e when he affair: thing. b e l i e v e s t h a t they decided I t ' s not It's ordinary mischief"(p. events a c k n o w l e d g e t h a t she never rejection trivialized of her a g a i n s t consummating t h e i r "What we're d o i n g . Once a g a i n , have forcing is a solitary people last. Alice Munro c o r r o b o r a t e s In an this love necessary 122). seem t o be other some b i g years Rose to whose c o n n e c t i o n s interview with Alan with Twigg, view: Twigg: My w i f e ' s comment on WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE? was t h a t y o u r c h a r a c t e r , Rose, i s never allowed to get anything. She's always u n f u l f i l l e d . May be s h e ' s j u s t wary of emotion. Munro: She g e t s s o m e t h i n g . She g e t s h e r s e l f . She d o e s n ' t g e t t h e o b v i o u s t h i n g s , t h e t h i n g s she t h i n k s she w a n t s . Like i n "Mischief," Rose d o e s n ' t r e a l l y want t h a t l o v e a f f a i r . What she does g e t i s a way o u t o f h e r m a r r i a g e . She g e t s a knowledge o f h e r s e l f . 8 Despite the author's empty-handed, t h i s and destroyer literary c o n t e n t i o n t h a t Rose does n o t vision o f a woman i n h e r i s somewhat b l e a k . themes i n r e l a t i o n emerge p r i m e as lover D i s c u s s i n g Canadian to Graves' t h e s i s GODDESS, M a r g a r e t Atwood r e m a r k s on "the i n THE notable WHITE absence of 9 Venuses" WHO (Rose G o d d e s s e s ) i n t h e f o l l o w e d Atwood's distinguished SURVIVAL, and filled between D i a n a - M a i d e n s and Rose s u f f e r s i n a way Del Jordan, does n o t . her d e s t i n y enables her P u b l i c a t i o n of the gap Atwood Hecate-Crones. t h a t the e a r l i e r protagonist, artistic literature. and younger Perhaps Del's to detach herself sense from of her 120 experiences, regarding A l t h o u g h Rose a l s o ill-defined to them as m a t e r i a l has a r t i s t i c Incapable of deciding state of i n e r t i a , her f u t u r e , dreaming o f p l a y i n g correspondent. she i s a s c h o l a r , gifts have won h e r a s c h o l a r s h i i p , she i s . than D e l . i n p u b l i c " (p. Rose d r i f t s in a t h e harp o r becoming a A l t h o u g h Rose's i n impulses Patrick rouses sensed she i s more a t t h e mercy Her r e l a t i o n s h i p w i t h against t o murder and s u i c i d e . i n Rose i s a f u l l e r i n characters Patrick like Lois The a n g e r development o f the f u r y i n DANCE, who contains a dramatic Rose's c h o i c e o f a c t i n g believable lashes out that she w o u l d d i s c o v e r s u i t s Rose's d r a m a t i c s u i t s her a u t h o r i t y , herself and h e r l i f e , w h i c h Rose s u f f e r s . searches been f o r c e d element which accords as h e r p r o f e s s i o n , writing similar their the l i m i t a t i o n s of her c l a s s . Hysteria Acting tells intellectual makes h e r h y s t e r i c a l a t t i m e s , and c u l m i n a t e s b e f o r e divorce need Rose f e e l s u n e a s y b e c a u s e she h a s no s e n s e o f who her f e e l i n g s a shameful When D r . Henshawe r e p e a t e d l y clear of fiction. they are "She wanted t o p e r f o r m 69). her ambitions, and e m b a r r a s s h e r by r e v e a l i n g attract attention: foreign f o r future accidentally. j u s t as D e l ' s her a i r of being detached from the g u i l t Both a r t i s t - h e r o i n e s for artistic and makes i t i t almost temperment with i n control of and r e m o r s e a r e engaged i n t r u t h , b u t D e l has n o t y e t t o a c k n o w l e d g e h e r own m e d i o c r i t y a s Rose h a s : I t ' w a s p a r t o f h e r j o b t o go on l o c a l t e l e v i s i o n c h a t t i n g about these p r o d u c t i o n s , t r y i n g 121 t o drum up i n t e r e s t , t e l l i n g amusing s t o r i e s a b o u t t h i n g s t h a t had happened d u r i n g t h e tour. T h e r e was n o t h i n g s h a m e f u l a b o u t any o f t h i s , b u t sometimes Rose was deeply, u n a c c o u n t a b l y ashamed, (p. 177) R o s e ' s shame d e r i v e s from u n r e c o n c i l e d between F l o ' s s t a n d a r d s and which moves. she now enmeshed i n t h e The a t t r i b u t a b l e to the in two As novel, A.A. the with interposed the between t h e e v e n t s have a l r e a d y i n the first history, suffering of of experience the Struthers i t — i s view I of on the and the Del the is reader is felt reader's to to be I." that L I V E S , f o r example, i s Jordan, apparently reviewing kunstlerroman form, i n i s a young w r i t e r , i m p l i e s has the reader f i r s t - p e r s o n narration implies taken p l a c e . past the of a l l o w i n g novel time i n been p u r g e d i n the that the transformation into art. contrast, narrator's from "Another person Moreover, the narrator focus i s detached i n h i s study of Instead p e r s o n by which the the out protagonist, M e n d i l o w a l s o n o t e s how By group i n s e n s e t h a t Rose i s first-person narrative's effect identify past artistic d i f f e r e n c e between p o i n t o f Mendilow p o i n t s to expectations. her Del the conflict works. contrary told reader's story—whereas partly the those of inner the third-person c l o s e r to the c o n t r o l over comments on n a r r a t i o n o f WHO events d e s c r i b e d , the tale. In a 1983 his impression n a r r a t o r s : Rose h e r s e l f a t t e n or and that sacrifices interview, there thirty-two, brings are and a the Tim several narrator 122 who " a d o p t s a s u p e r i o r ironic sees t h i s a s an i n c o n s i s t e n c y resulting from tone towards Rose". of narrative point t h e r e v i s i o n s Munro made t o WHO, author emphatically denies Struthers o f view butthe this: No, I d o n ' t t h i n k s o . No, I d o n ' t t h i n k s o . I d o n ' t t h i n k t h a t h a s a n y t h i n g t o do w i t h , i t . T h e r e may w e l l be an u n c e r t a i n t y , a problem t h a t I had, but I don't t h i n k t h a t h a s t y r e w r i t e i s t h e r e a s o n . I t h i n k t h e r e were j u s t t i m e s when I f e l t t h a t t h e s t o r y had t o work t h a t way, and I r e a l l y c a n ' t t e l l y o u why. 1 1 Munro's r e p l y artistic to Struthers process, reflects i n which she d i s c o v e r s work a s i t p r o g r e s s e s a n d w i l l allow change h e r mind a b o u t what b e l o n g s originally the first third intended as a t w o - p a r t person devoted person devoted creation. galleys complication similar her d i s c o v e r i e s t o in i t . WHO o f t h e form was s t r u c t u r e w i t h one p a r t i n t o Rose, who was J a n e t ' s Munro b e l a t e d l y epilogue, t h e form o f t h e t o J a n e t , and t h e o t h e r I t was n o t u n t i l that h e r commitment t o h e r fictional t h e work had b e e n p r i n t e d i n realized she had u s e d that t h e form, a i n L I V E S and w i t h a was n o t t h e most s u i t a b l e o n e . e x p e n s e , she made t h e c h a n g e s s h e c o n s i d e r e d the first contained included with the f i n a l v e r s i o n WHO three According (the f i r s t to Leitch, i n had a t w o - p a r t s t r u c t u r e , and stories i n MOONS. version. A t h e r own necessary. L.M. L e i t c h h a s compared a r e v i e w e r ' s c o p y version) i n the that Munro e x c i s e d and l a t e r The s t o r i e s w h i c h she removed a r e "The Moons o f J u p i t e r " , " C o n n e c t i o n " , and "The S t o n e i n t h e 123 12 Field". Leitch also individual the o r i g i n a l references first , a l t e r a t i o n s Munro made i n stories after their magazines t o prepare that traces first publication i n them f o r i n c l u s i o n i n WHO. version of "Half a Grapefruit" t o Rose a s c h r o n i c l e r , and " W i l d published version does n o t c o n t a i n u n d e r t a k e r who r e g u l a r l y buys c a n d y ? ^ s u p p o r t s t h e i n t e r p r e t a t i o n o f WHO self-reflexive more p r o m i n e n t . suggest that the reference Rose, and t h e m o t i f blurring explain is she of blood but also i m p o s e d by t h e a u t h o r discovered Flo's of narrative as d e l i b e r a t e l y These r e v i s i o n s to the structure but considers compelled Whatever an a c t r e s s , i n this work, i t aptly t o which life for Rose i s a t o n c e and t h e c h a r a c t e r . she i s a l w a y s on s t a g e t o t h e s h e i s aware o f c r e a t i n g an i m p r e s s i o n , o f s t o r i e s t o engage t h e a t t e n t i o n or p u b l i c . which i s S i m i l a r l y , the i t s source, " I " and t h e " s h e " , t h e s e l f private within t o make, n o t one w h i c h the it o f WHO, necessary i s a s e r i e s o f r o l e s which she p l a y s . telling to the and t h e c o n t r a d i c t i o n s Rose's c o n c e r n o v e r t h e e x t e n t that further are linked not only her extent work v i e w p o i n t , w h i c h Munro was u n a b l e t o d e l i b e r a t e l y chose. befits of the (the m a s c u l i n e paradigm) b u t an a c c o m o d a t i o n she f e l t As story Leitch's by h e r ( t h e f e m i n i n e p a r a d i g m ) . to Struthers, reflects Swans" i n i t s t o t h e WHITE GODDESS, t h e name, and v i o l e n c e Rose's c h a r a c t e r , not has no by s h o w i n g how t h e a u t h o r ' s r e v i s i o n s made- storytelling themes o f l o v e She n o t e s In the f i n a l o f an a u d i e n c e , be paragraph of the 124 concluding story glad segment, Rose m a s t e r s of Ralph G i l l e s p i e : that telling, there though was "Rose d i d n ' t thing at least she knew i t was honorable r e s t r a i n t renunciation one the temptation to t e l l tell t o anybody, she w o u l d n ' t lack of material t h a t kept her q u i e t " of a r t i f a c e this recalls the spoil by as much as (p. 206) . Prospero's epilogue Her in THE TEMPEST: Now my charms a r e a l l o ' e r t h r o w n And what s t r e n g t h I h a v e ' s mine o w n , — Which i s most f a i n t : (V. Ep. 1-3) THE TEMPEST, i t w i l l be r e c a l l e d , i s t h e p l a y the opening " R o y a l B e a t i n g s " , Rose o v e r h e a r s h e r father reciting towers, and reach palaces" encompassing or h i n t e d herself. f o r t h e m s e l v e s , showing they a c t out or r e t e l l circle is how, the p a t t e r n s be artist Through identity in cloud-capped embedded a t i n t h e t e x t , Munro e x t e n d s f u r t h e r below the s u r f a c e construct The i s a l s o a female f o r t h e muse w i t h i n told (p. 4 ) . "The s u p p r e s s e d memories demanding t o a Rose Goddess who searching stories as he works i n h i s s h e d : the gorgeous complete, told segment, from which her that individuals against o f myth. their will, 125 Notes 1 A l i c e Munro, WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE? (Toronto: M a c m i l l a n , 1 9 7 8 ) , p . 7. Subsequent r e f e r e n c e s appear i n t h e text. 2 L a w r e n c e Mathews, "Who Do You T h i n k You A r e ? : A l i c e Munro's A r t o f D i s a r r a n g e m e n t , " i n PROBABLE FICTIONS, e d . L o u i s K. M a c K e n d r i c k (Downsview, O n t : ECW P r e s s , 1 9 8 3 ) , p . 181. 3 A L y s B a l d r y , BURNE-JONES: MASTERPIECES IN COLOUR (London: T.C. & E . C . J a c k , n . d . ) , p . 50. 4 J.R. (Tim) S t r u t h e r s , " I n t e r s e c t i n g O r b i t s : A S t u d y o f S e l e c t e d S t o r y C y c l e s by Hugh Hood, C l a r k B l a i s e and A l i c e Munro, i n t h e i r L i t e r a r y C o n t e x t s , " D i s s . W e s t e r n O n t a r i o 1981, p . 222. 5 A l i c e Munro, L I V E S OF GIRLS AND WOMEN ( T o r o n t o : M c G r a w - H i l l R y e r s o n , 1 9 7 1 ) , pp. 171-2. 6 M a r g a r e t L a u r e n c e , THE STONE ANGEL ( T o r o n t o : M c C l e l l a n d and S t e w a r t , 1 9 6 4 ) , p . 292. 7 R o b e r t G r a v e s , THE WHITE GODDESS (London: F a b e r and F a b e r , 1 9 5 2 ) , p . 14. S u b s e q u e n t r e f e r e n c e s a p p e a r i n t h e text. 8 A l a n T w i g g , "What I s : A l i c e Munro," i n CONVERSATIONS WITH 24 CANADIAN WRITERS ( M a d e i r a P a r k , B.C.: H a r b o u r P u b l i s h i n g , 1 9 8 1 ) , p . 19. 9 M a r g a r e t Atwood, SURVIVAL: A THEMATIC GUIDE TO CANADIAN LITERATURE ( T o r o n t o : A n a n s i , 1 9 7 2 ) , p . 199. 10 A.A. M e n d i l o w , TIME AND THE NOVEL (New Y o r k : H u m a n i t i e s P r e s s , 1 9 7 2 ) , p . 107. 11 J.R. (Tim) S t r u t h e r s , "The R e a l M a t e r i a l : An I n t e r v i e w w i t h A l i c e Munro," i n PROBABLE FICTIONS, e d . L o u i s K. M a c K e n d r i c k (Downsview, O n t . : ECW P r e s s , 1 9 8 3 ) , p . 32. 12 L i n d a M a r g a r e t L e i t c h , " A l i c e Munro's F i c t i o n : E x p l o r a t i o n s i n Open Forms," M.A. T h e s i s G u e l p h 1980, p . 150. 13 L e i t c h , p p . 113, 130. Chapter Life MOONS i s A l i c e characters Five as a R e c u r r i n g M u n r o s most b o o k i s h 1 a r e engaged i n a s p e c t s as w r i t e r s , e d i t o r s , a r c h i v i s t s , Despite the in their a workaday w o r l d their with these intellectual share men s e l f i s h , their an when a y e a r intellectual, Scrabble history. points have r e p l a c e d A l t h o u g h Mrs. Kidd once knew, she s t i l l schoolgirl, has r i s e n fall confined find since the previous made Ada J o r d a n i n Jubilee. represented to a nursing home o f t h e d a y , and p a s t i m e s her former i n t e r e s t i n natural has f o r g o t t e n much t h a t she t o i t as a she r e c i t e d as a talisman: She wanted t o f l o a t h e r s e l f c l e a r . she c o u l d do i t by l y i n g on h e r b e d i n h e r head a l l t h e poems she knew, w h i c h g o t h a r d e r and h a r d e r t o h o l d (p. 175) i n love On t h e w h o l e , h a s grown o l d , r e t a i n s the poetry and c l i n g s they a t Teacher's College where m e a l s a r e t h e h i g h The f e m a l e p r e f e r men who a r e or p r i g g i s h . Mrs. Kidd, feel and d r e a m e r s i n LIVES. and t h e r e f o r e a m i s f i t , now by a woman l i k e books, they love o f books, f r e q u e n t l y level working or booksellers. readers but should I n MOONS, Ada's g e n e r a t i o n like felt instinctively faithless however, t h e e d u c a t i o n a l generation, about b e i n g inferiors, Many o f i t s o f t h e book t r a d e , librarians as D e l J o r d a n i n MOONS o f t e n men who work. p r o f e s s i o n a l a s s o c i a t i o n with same s e l f - c o n s c i o u s n e s s narrators Story Sometimes and s a y i n g or the f a c t s , i n place. 127 The remembrance o f poems and despite the gradual something of her for reassurance characters Not essential helps characterization, possesses carry a powers as self still poems t h e y she but Mrs. she recall has used from poems he eyes of a c e r t a i n that This need having their i n each i t i s p a r t of the Kidd grows o l d e r , remains. embedded q u o t a t i o n r e l a t e o f h i m s e l f . The like reassures e x p l a i n Munro's h a b i t o f a technique o n l y does t h e definition l o s s of her quote the schooldays, facts collection. t o theme quoting knows by character's heart shade o r t h e and he ability to tune. E v e n more s e l f - d e f i n i t i v e stories, anecdotes from the tell another. one Cousin though u n w i l l i n g , the u b i q u i t o u s family p a s t w h i c h Munro's c h a r a c t e r s Iris example o f t h e u r g e t o t e l l are i n "Connection" o n e ' s s t o r y t o an i s an extreme available, audience: We d r a n k ; we a t e ; t h e c h i l d r e n came i n and were praised. R i c h a r d came and went. Nothing fazed h e r ; she was r i g h t . Nothing d e f l e c t e d her from h e r s t o r i e s o f h e r s e l f ; t h e amount o f t i m e she c o u l d spend n o t t a l k i n g was l i m i t e d . She t o l d a b o u t t h e c a r p e t bag and t h e m i l l i o n a i r e ' s son a l l over again. She t o l d a b o u t t h e d i s s o l u t e a c t o r . How many c o n v e r s a t i o n s she must have r i d d e n through l i k e t h i s — l a u g h i n g , i n s i s t i n g , rambling, r e c o l l e c t i n g , (p. 16) Cousin Iris's determination stories b e t r a y her to e s t a b l i s h longing for approval, a connection with I n MOONS t h e r e a r e many g a r r u l o u s c h a r a c t e r s other like her people. her, but 128 they are accept balanced by restricted them m e a n i n g . their l i v e s unredeemed by Descended from t a l k e r s and non-talkers and Flemings" i s the her heritages have n o t talker, but on they alternately her prototype blended r e v e a l and she criticism of characters on mother's her narrators separate, a as casts d o u b t on aunts f a s c i n a t e the because t h e i r side i n MOONS: making h e r her to uneasy no chooses. e v e n more i n f l u e n t i a l t h a n a frivolous n a r r a t o r of of give moderate implies life "The is entirely Her Stone i n the different the a e s c a p e f r o m work, and the whole n a r r a t i v e e n t e r p r i s e . way to "Chaddleys causing Chaddleys because speechlessness of t a l k mutely of t a l k n a r r a t o r of the and who a flow t o make h e r conceal, s i l e n t Flemings are loquacious she f a t h e r ' s , the have r e m a i n e d matter which o p t i o n The opposites, so father's Field" from the one knows: Work w o u l d be what f i l l e d t h e i r l i v e s , n o t c o n v e r s a t i o n ; work w o u l d be what gave t h e i r d a y s shape.... What was f e l t i n t h a t room was t h e p a i n o f human c o n t a c t , (pp. 26-7) There i s something s p l e n d i d about the aunts' A l t h o u g h the them, t h e suspects that n a r r a t o r ' s mother p i t i e s they possess strengths isolation. unknown t o narrator talkative people: My mother l o o k e d a t t h e i r l i v e s and t h o u g h t o f how t h e y c o u l d be b r i g h t e n e d , opened up. . . . n o t ? my mother w o u l d a s k , s e e i n g l i f e a l l i n t e r m s o f change and p o s s i b i l i t y . She Why 129 imagined they would y e a r n f o r t h i n g s , not o n l y m a t e r i a l t h i n g s but c o n d i t i o n s , a b i l i t i e s , which they d i d not even bother t o d e p l o r e , d i d not t h i n k t o r e j e c t , b e i n g so p e r f e c t l y e n c a s e d i n what t h e y had and were, so f a r b e y o n d i m a g i n i n g t h e m s e l v e s o t h e r w i s e , (p. 29) The aunts routine their seem t o have a c h i e v e d a r a r e c o n t e n t m e n t of never-ending way of acceptance people and like In life has work. Despite i t s l i m i t a t i o n s , enabled them t o r e a c h a l e v e l e n d u r a n c e i m p o s s i b l e f o r more the n a r r a t o r addition of the p a r t language not crucial. o n l y uses characteristic pauses c o n n o t a t i o n s of words, but requirements relationships Field", t o be talking to paralysing In MOONS, Munro t o c o n s i d e r t h e sound she tests f o r communication established. not exchange s t o r i e s their also to the aunts is difficult shyness, they can stroke victim Instead t h e i r Cross's attempts who Stone has lost because way which t h e power t o s p e a k . In story, Turkey do. do Owing t o themselves somewhat t o communicate w i t h J a c k , r e p l y by means o f a g i g g l e r a t h e r "The they b r o t h e r manages t o they o f t e n another and i n the scarcely bring communicate w i t h them i n a s i m p l i f i e d Mrs. to take place In "The Season", languages a t work i s e x p l o r e d . The narrator, a s t r a n g e r t o the working or t h e minimum as f a m i l y members u s u a l l y answer q u e s t i o n s . resembles i n developing human i s shown t o be language ambitious i t plays i n establishing relationships her of to reach. to the r o l e self-consciousness, in their Like Jack, t h a n a word. the r o l e of special highschool-girl w o r l d , must learn i t s a 130 vocabulary turkey and gutter idioms i n order and to perform her f i t into this co-workers t e l e g r a p h new job as s o c i e t y where messages c o n c e r n i n g sex whose s p e c i a l meanings a r i s e f r o m t h e i r a her through phrases context: L i l y s a i d she n e v e r l e t h e r husband come n e a r h e r i f he had been d r i n k i n g . Marjorie said since t h e t i m e she n e a r l y d i e d w i t h a hemorrhage she n e v e r l e t h e r h u s b a n d come n e a r h e r , period. . . . I c o u l d see t h a t i t was a m a t t e r o f p r i d e n o t t o l e t y o u r h u s b a n d come n e a r you, b u t I c o u l d n ' t q u i t e b e l i e v e t h a t "come n e a r " meant "have s e x . " (p. 68, e m p h a s i s added) As an outsider Jamesian a t the innocent In t h i s more c o n s c i o u s l y has become h e r s t r a i n i n g to understand a close a n a l y t i c a l than before. subject observation differences as w e l l as especially and so the similarities among women In h e r reluctant of her earlier rather to s t r e t c h her their situations. often enough t h a t h e r v e h i c l e of w h i c h has itself expression. always relied the generalized, than d i f f e r e n c e s , characters. work, she compromise t h e Language become more in a language i s p a r t i c u l a r to reveal between p e o p l e , has concerned with is a foreign v o l u m e , Munro's a p p r o a c h t o M o r e o v e r , Munro's c h a r a c t e r i z a t i o n , on narrator abroad, r e g i s t e r i n g f r e s h impressions f o r e i g n m i l i e u and language. Turkey Barn, the tended t o use symbols metaphors beyond the individuality Munro has denied critics word; however, MOONS i s t h e of her being have t e n d e d first of her warily, single characters a writer of to take her works t o be story, and ideas at her 131 structured it around by a c o h e r e n t p s y c h o l o g i c a l t h e metaphor o f J u p i t e r ' s moons. these s t o r i e s r e l a t e women's b e h a v i o u r force of their the argument t h a t u n i f i e s a t t r a c t i o n toward Repeatedly, to the i r r e s i s t a b l e t h e men t h e y love. moons, t h e y t r a v e l i n f i x e d o r b i t s beyond control. often This ironic unwritten The already and w r i t t e n growing t h e i r own message i s r e p e a t e d w i t h a wry humour, i n n a r r a t i v e s layered s u b t l e t y , and with references t o s t o r i e s which f u r t h e r e l a b o r a t e i t . s e l f - r e f l e x i v e n e s s o f Munro's discussed Like i n t h e two p r e v i o u s fiction chapters culminates i n MOONS, where t h e l i n k between w r i t i n g and l i f e i s insistently called t o the reader's a t t e n t i o n , perhaps most memorably b y means o f t h e c a r d i o g r a m r e f e r r e d t o t w i c e i n the title s t o r y . The n a r r a t o r ' s a t t e n t i o n i s drawn t o t h e screen above h e r f a t h e r ' s jagged l i n e was c o n t i n u a l l y b e i n g Naturally the daughter's worried b e c a u s e s h e knows t h a t father's h o s p i t a l bed, beating on w h i c h , written" (p. gaze f o c u s e s "a b r i g h t 217). on t h e l i n e i t s c o n t i n u i t y represents her heart. So l o n g a s t h e l i n e w r i t e s , he lives. Whereas WHO was p r e o c c u p i e d w i t h obsessed with connection. the first and l a s t separation, The f a m i l y h i s t o r i a n who n a r r a t e s s t o r i e s i n MOONS r e p l a c e s Rose, t h e iconoclast o f WHO, h e l l b e n t on escape,' f i r s t and c l a s s , and l a t e r from h e r husband's social Pygmalian-like himself. attempts In order MOONS i s from h e r f a m i l y t o mold h e r i n t o a f e m a l e r e p l i c a o f to discover h e r own i n d i v i d u a l i t y , Rose 132 must b r e a k f r e e o f t h e s e conclusion, villainess c o n s t r a i n t s ; but, s h e h a s become c l o s e r by t h e t o her stepmother, the o f h e r c h i l d h o o d , now s t r i p p e d o f h e r f o r m e r power t h r o u g h destruction senility. I n MOONS, t h e p r o g r e s s i o n to rebuilding continues: a r e r e - j o i n e d , and c o n n e c t i o n s desirable. with shattered family Several n a r r a t o r s undertake l a n d t o mark where t h e i r survive, preserving the past w h i c h marked t h e g r a v e people into sentimental the present. of a reclusive hired i n "The S t o n e i n t h e F i e l d " , "Visitors", t h e f a m i l y farm journeys r e m a i n s on once were; y e t disappeared Conservation ties t h e p a s t have become to a n c e s t r a l farms, o n l y t o d i s c o v e r t h a t nothing the from memories The s t o n e man h a s while i n h a s been t u r n e d into a Area: A l b e r t w a l k e d up a n d down i n t h e g r a s s . He made a t u r n , he s t o p p e d a n d l o o k e d a r o u n d and s t a r t e d again. He was t r y i n g t o g e t t h e o u t l i n e o f t h e house. W i l f r e d f r o w n e d a t t h e g r a s s and s a i d , "They d o n ' t l e a v e y o u much." (pp. 211-12) Inexorably, time great extent, changes t h e landscape MOONS i s p r e o c c u p i e d with of childhood. To a time: F o r i n s t a n c e l a s t s p r i n g , l a s t autumn i n A u s t r a l i a , when I was happy, t h e l i n e t h a t w o u l d go t h r o u g h my h e a d , a t a m e r r y c l i p , was t h i s : "Even s u c h i s t i m e , t h a t t a k e s i n t r u s t — " I c o u l d n o t go o n , t h o u g h I knew t r u s t rhymed w i t h d u s t and t h a t t h e r e was s o m e t h i n g f u r t h e r a l o n g a b o u t "and i n t h e d a r k a n d s i l e n t g r a v e , s h u t s up t h e s t o r y o f o u r d a y s . " I knew t h e poem was w r i t t e n by S i r W a l t e r R a l e i g h on the eve o f h i s e x e c u t i o n . My mood d i d n o t a c c o r d w i t h s u c h a poem a n d I s a i d i t , i n my h e a d , a s i f i t was s o m e t h i n g p r e t t y and l i g h t h e a r t e d . 133 I d i d n o t s t o p t o wonder what i t was d o i n g i n my head i n t h e f i r s t p l a c e , ( p . 122) The metaphorical experience l i n k between t h e poem and t h e n a r r a t o r ' s was p r e s e n t i n h e r mind long b e f o r e she 2 understood time i t . Even i n h e r h a p p i n e s s , s h e was aware o f and c h a n g e , and knew t h a t h e r j o y w o u l d e n d . In t h e mind, p r e s e n t e x p e r i e n c e modified with Elizabethan i s continually reference to recollections poem o r a s p i n s t e r being a s d i v e r s e a s an relation: I t h i n k o f b e i n g an o l d maid i n a n o t h e r generation. T h e r e were p l e n t y o f o l d maids i n my f a m i l y . I come o f s t r a i g h t e n e d p e o p l e , madly s e c r e t i v e , t e n a c i o u s , e c o n o m i c a l . Like them, I c o u l d make a l i t t l e go a l o n g way. (p. HO) The n a r r a t o r r e c o g n i z e s t h a t i t i s n o t outward, b u t i n n e r , experience that matters; about i t . The f r e e - w h e e l i n g n a r r a t o r s o f MOONS, w i t h temporary lovers, n o t what happens b u t how women seem a t f i r s t glance e n d up f i n g e r i n g their t h e one l e t t e r , needing heart, hidden their keepsakes while moves o n : "A p i e c e o f C h i n e s e silk folded under maidenly their f a r removed f r o m t h e l o n e l y o l d maids o f t h e p a s t ; b u t , l i k e they feel forerunners, t h e b e l o v e d man i n a drawer. garments, . . . never t o be opened o r r e a d b e c a u s e e v e r y word i s known by and a t o u c h communicates women who t r e a s u r e t h e r e l i c s t h e whole" of their (p. 110). lost the d i s c a r d e d m i s t r e s s i n "Prue", who s t e a l s lover's Prue's amber c u f f l i n k . Although loves These resemble h e r former friends b e l i e v e she 134 is "somebody who so u n i n t e n s e , demands doesn't take and c i v i l i z e d , or complaints" questionable. generations, disturbed I n common w i t h Prue behaves w i t h inner life the of Similarly, narrator man. his different as women i n h e r p o s i t i o n to i r r a d i a t e life someone who compares X's s u c c e s s i o n at Sian women. Row i n Australia i s an s t u d i e s human b e i n g s ; malicious His friend, of mistresses i n China: whom t h e "He s a i d with the (p. 1 1 9 ) . Although therefore, i s consistent Dennis, excavated i t r e m i n d e d him o f X's on row and a l w a y s a new one a p p e a r i n g the l i n e " always and temper t h e l o s s A p p r o p r i a t e l y , the lover with his professional curiosity. figures but her from her h a b i t o f moving f r o m one woman t o t h e n e x t with of fortitude, She i s s u s t a i n i n g h e r s e l f by o f "Bardon B u s " l i v e d anthropologist, stoical t h e n a r r a t o r o f "Bardon Bus" e x e m p l i f i e s power o f f a n t a s y a beloved assumptions are t h e o l d maids o f p a s t i s radically of f a n t a s i e s , just have. and n e v e r makes any r e a l (p. 1 2 9 ) , t h e i r outwardly calm appearance. means h e r s e l f t o o s e r i o u s l y , who i s a t t h e end the n a r r a t o r r e j e c t s c o m p a r i s o n , h e r p r o t e s t has a h o l l o w this ring: I t h i n k t h e c o m p a r i s o n ' s a b i t o f f . Nobody has t o d i g t h e women o u t and s t a n d them on t h e i r feet. Nobody p u t s them t h e r e . They came a l o n g and j o i n e d up o f t h e i r own f r e e w i l l . T h e y ' r e n o t a s t a n d i n g army. Most o f them a r e p r o b a b l y on t h e i r way t o s o m e p l a c e e l s e anyway, (p. 120) X replies, allows " B r a v o " , as w e l l he m i g h t , s i n c e h e r a t t i t u d e him t o p u r s u e h i s p r e d a t o r y course undeterred by 135 tearful recriminations. Yet the tears w i l l e v e n t u a l l y when t h e n a r r a t o r g r i e v e s compulsively recalling though she r e c o g n i z e s self-torture: lurid the f o l l y monotonous leading to despair" of their of this passion even kind of but by t r a n s f o r m i n g she can achieve and m e c h a n i c a l l y (p. 1 2 3 ) . f a n t a s i e s , the narrator into makes h e r s e l f more unhappy; h e r memories the lover seductive, By e s c a p i n g i n t o a decadent some c o n t r o l o v e r them. e n h a n c e d by c a l l i n g recalling i n private, "The i m a g e s , t h e l a n g u a g e , o f p o r n o g r a p h y and romance a r e a l i k e : quickly the d e t a i l s be s h e d Artificiality is "X", t h e c h o i c e the s e n s a t i o n a l c o n f e s s i o n a l novel HOOKER, w r i t t e n by a p r o s t i t u t e w i t h fiction, of l e t t e r THE HAPPY a conspicuous "X" i n 3 her name, X a v i e r a directly T h i s book i s r e f e r r e d t o i n " L a b o r Day D i n n e r " , teen-age g i r l ' s oblique Hollander. summer r e a d i n g reference prostitute, i n w h i c h i t a p p e a r s on a list. to p r o s t i t u t i o n I n "Bardon B u s " , t h e s u g g e s t s how, t h e n a r r a t o r o f "Bardon B u s " a l l o w s l i k e the herself to be a c o n v e n i e n c e a man may u s e and t h e n d i s c a r d , being obliged to l i s t e n Another without to her protests or face her g r i e f . s t o r y o f l o v e and l o s s i s t o l d point o f v i e w by L y d i a sight o f h e r l o v e r , Duncan, when he came t o t h e b o o k s t o r e where she worked t o a s k f o r a c o p y o f THE PERSIAN The M o n t e s q u i e u work i n "Dulse". f r o m t h e woman's serves She r e c a l l s as a p r e t e x t h i s b i b l i o g r a p h i c knowledge f o r t h e s t o r e Overhearing their conversation, Lydia her f i r s t LETTERS. f o r Duncan t o a i r clerk. forms a first 136 0 impression o f Duncan a s a s h o w - o f f , t h e r e a d e r ' s a s s e s s m e n t o f him f r o m this o v e r t use o f a l i t e r a r y the unstated p a r a l l e l s much then on. In a d d i t i o n t o reference to reveal character, between Duncan and h i s book c h o i c e go deeper. In THE PERSIAN Usbek, and R h e d i , and a judgement t h a t c o l o u r s institutions. LETTERS, t h r e e P e r s i a n g e n t l e m e n , R i c a , travel t o Europe, Particularly where they study r e l e v a n t t o Duncan letter w r i t t e n t o Usbek by Fatme, one o f h i s w i v e s behind i n t h e s e r a g l i o , who d e s c r i b e s f e e l i n g s L y d i a ' s when s h e i s r e j e c t e d manners i s the left similar to by Duncan: How h a p l e s s i s t h e l o t o f a woman who has s u c h v i o l e n t d e s i r e s and y e t i s d e p r i v e d o f t h e s o c i e t y o f t h e o n l y p e r s o n who c a n s a t i s f y them. Left to h e r s e l f , with nothing to p r e o c c u p y h e r mind, h e r whole l i f e i s s p e n t i n ^ s i g h s and i n t h e d e l i r i u m o f e x a s p e r a t e d p a s s i o n . Fatme's d e l i r i u m existence Duncan. through buying i s recalled i n Toronto Living such a loaf alone after i n Lydia's her f i n a l trance-like attempt to telephone a g a i n , she has d i f f i c u l t y elementary getting r o u t i n e s a s t a k i n g t h e subway o r of bread: She t h o u g h t a f t e r w a r d s t h a t s h e had b e e n s e i z e d up, as m a c h i n e s a r e s a i d t o b e . E v e n a t t h e t i m e she had an image o f h e r s e l f . She saw h e r s e l f a s s o m e t h i n g l i k e an egg c a r t o n , h o l l o w e d o u t i n b a c k . ( p . 41) F o r Fatme and L y d i a , l o s i n g the beloved i s like losing a 137 part of themselves. their everyday retain private In c o n t r a s t , l i v e s when a l o v e a f f a i r areas of s e l f E v e n w h i l e L y d i a was l i v i n g retained only men more e a s i l y because they where women a r e n e v e r a l l o w e d . w i t h Duncan, h i s a p a r t m e n t i t s bachelor character, a temporary ends resume reminding her that s h e was resident: She t h o u g h t a b o u t Duncan's a p a r t m e n t . . . . A l l d i s o r d e r was a c t u a l l y o r d e r , c a r e f u l l y t h o u g h t o u t and n o t t o be i n t e r f e r e d w i t h . T h e r e was a b e a u t i f u l l i t t l e r u g a t t h e end o f t h e h a l l , where he s a t and l i s t e n e d t o m u s i c . T h e r e was one great, ugly armchair, a masterpiece of e n g i n e e r i n g , with a l l i t s attachments f o r the head and l i m b s . „(pp. 53-4) Into t h i s selfish sybarite's f l o w e r s and g i f t s , arrangements, reminiscences privacy adapting herself fitting h e r needs tiptoes Lydia, to her lover's bringing household t o h i s , even e n d u r i n g h i s a b o u t o t h e r women: Duncan spoke a b o u t h i s f o r m e r g i r l f r i e n d s . E f f i c i e n t Ruth, p e r t Judy, v i v a c i o u s Diane, e l e g a n t D e l o r e s , w i f e l y Maxine, L o r r a i n e t h e g o l d e n - h a i r e d , f u l l - b r e a s t e d beauty; Marian t h e m u l t i l i n g u a l ; C a r o l i n e t h e n e u r o t i c ; R o s a l i e who was w i l d and g y p s y - l i k e ; g i f t e d , m e l a n c h o l y L o u i s e ; s e r e n e s o c i a l i t e J a n e . ( p . 52) T h i s harem r e c a l l ' s Usbek's, o f women a s amusing playthings. THE and p r e s u p p o s e s a s i m i l a r A significant PERSIAN LETTERS i s a n a n s w e r i n g Fatme, whereas t h e c o l l e c t i o n communications administrator letter contains f r o m Usbek t o h i s c h i e f of the s e r a g l i o . view omission i n f r o m Usbek t o several eunuch, t h e 138 Like life; Usbek, Duncan c o n s i d e r s h i sa t t i t u d e i s best "Man's l o v e friend or men, C e r t a i n l y Kay, t h e n a r r a t o r ' s exemplifies t a k e n o v e r by l o v e : story wholeheartedly. literally" By f a l l i n g extreme case o f female f o l l y , she i s typical: She does what women d o . fervently" desperation An with and more i s t h a t women t e n d t o but t a n t a l i z i n g By way o f reference to Willa literary i n "Dulse". e l d e r l y man s t a y i n g a t t h e same g u e s t h o u s e as L y d i a engages h e r i n c o n v e r s a t i o n a b o u t W i l l a C a t h e r , once a summer r e s i d e n t o f t h e i s l a n d , the that she does i t more o f t e n , A LOST LADY, a f f o r d s a c l o s e Lydia insists i s she so e x c e p t i o n a l . need f o r men's l o v e . a brief Cather's novel, parallel The p o i n t a s e r i e s of e a c h o n e , Kay seems an a b i t more i l l - a d v i s e d l y i n their reinforcement, Perhaps figuratively i n love with but the narrator " I n none o f t h i s (p. 116). o f woman who i s She l e a r n s h i s l a n g u a g e , (p. 116). just the kind "She t a k e s up a man and h i s and r e m a k i n g h e r s e l f t o s u i t more o p e n l y , i n B y r o n ' s Don J u a n : a t h i n g a p a r t , / ' T i s woman's (I c x c i v ) . i n "Bardon Bus", completely expressed i s o f man's l i f e whole e x i s t e n c e " women i n c i d e n t a l i n h i s and a r e s e a r c h interest of o l d man, who names A LOST LADY a s h i s f a v o u r i t e o f h e r works. The lost l a d y o f C a t h e r ' s romance i s M a r i a n a b e a u t i f u l a d v e n t u r e s s who, a s t h e young w i f e powerful older man, commands t h e a d m i r a t i o n o f male a c g u a i n t a n c e s . Forrester, t o a r i c h and o f a wide As h e r h u s b a n d ' s f o r t u n e circle and h e a l t h 139 decline, Mrs. F o r r e s t e r ' s s t a t u s intensifies, men, slips and h e r need f o r f i n d i n g i t s o u t l e t i n younger, t o t h e dismay o f t h e a d o r i n g imagined h e r as a lady c h a s t e love less suitable young N i e l , w h o h a s and f a i r : Mrs. F o r r e s t e r ' s hand t i g h t e n e d on h i s arm. She began s p e a k i n g a b r u p t l y . 'You s e e , two y e a r s , t h r e e y e a r s , more o f t h i s , and I c o u l d s t i l l go back t o C a l i f o r n i a — a n d l i v e a g a i n . But a f t e r t h a t . . . P e r h a p s p e o p l e t h i n k I ' v e s e t t l e d down t o grow o l d g r a c e f u l l y , b u t I ' v e n o t . I f e e l such a power t o l i v e i n jne, N i e l . ' Her s l e n d e r f i n g e r s gripped his wrist.5 Niel i shorrified longings, morally when h i s f o r m e r i d o l and d i s g u s t e d and s o c i a l l y savage d i s r e s p e c t . narrative sexual sexual: looked s u c h human when she forms a l i a i s o n w i t h a inferior Although young man who t r e a t s h e r w i t h there are hints i n the t h a t Mrs. F o r r e s t e r responds t o Ivy P e t e r s ' treatment, Ivy's m o t i v e s a r e more v e n g e f u l he i t c h e s t o p u n i s h the l o c a l rough than a r i s t o c r a c y which F o r r e s t e r ' s example i l l u m i n a t e s L y d i a ' s situation. t o o i s a woman who l o s e s t h e p r o t e c t i o n o f a man, and whose s t a t u s i n t h e eyes o f o t h e r men d e c l i n e s accordingly. In t h e new m i l i e u o f t h e i s l a n d , h e r former p o s i t i o n as Duncan's m i s t r e s s Like her f i c t i o n a l predecessor, To once down on h i m . Mrs. She confesses i s irrelevant. Lydia s e e k s male c o m p a n i o n s h i p and a d m i r a t i o n . t h e t e l e p h o n e work crew w i t h guesthouse k i t c h e n , she i s j u s t sexual as they speculations whom she p l a y s cards i n the a woman, t h e o b j e c t o f t h e i r are objects of hers. From h e r 140 d e t a c h e d vantage p o i n t beyond p h y s i c a l d e s i r e , L y d i a that Vincent impelled would have b e e n h e r choice, t o a c t upon i t ; i n s t e a d , she m i g h t have been like had she settled but she is decides not m e r e l y wonders what i t down w i t h someone like him: T h a t i s , s h o u l d she have s t a y e d i n t h e p l a c e where l o v e i s managed f o r y o u , n o t gone where you have t o i n v e n t i t , and r e - i n v e n t i t , and n e v e r know i f t h e s e e f f o r t s w i l l be enough? (p. 52) The emotional loving hard strain outside on Lydia. psychiatrist, conversation how the little traditional She and of attempting has a remembered respect fragment of vulnerable she new has the most o f i n accordance with man loves. their men, and mother i n t h e mollifying been a their affair has made "What do her, retained: t h e women i n MOONS, L y d i a p e r s i s t s i n v a l u i n g herself she of f e e l i n g s with "What a b o u t y o u ? " s a i d t h e d o c t o r . you want?" " F o r him t o l o v e me?" "Not f o r you t o l o v e h i m ? " (p. 53) Like forms f o r m o f m a r r i a g e has been d i s c u s s i n g h e r r e v e a l s how self to invent the Such women a r e take title touch on pains arm arouses naturally afraid to p l a c a t e s t o r y as the f e e l i n g s she she them. the annqy Think of observes her o f a young to in the daughter's man: J u d i t h moved ahead and t o u c h e d Don's arm. I knew t h a t t o u c h — a n a p o l o g y , an a n x i o u s r e a s s u r a n c e . You t o u c h a man t h a t way t o r e m i n d him t h a t you 141 a r e g r a t e f u l , t h a t you r e a l i z e he i s d o i n g f o r y o u r sake s o m e t h i n g t h a t b o r e s him o r s l i g h t l y endangers h i s d i g n i t y . I t made me f e e l o l d e r t h a n g r a n d c h i l d r e n w o u l d t o see my d a u g h t e r t o u c h a m a n — a b o y — t h i s way. (p. 223) What moves t h e mother i s t h e s i g h t daughter's lives independent d e p e n d e n c e on a man's a p p r o v a l . w i t h her b o y f r i e n d i n s t e a d r e l a t i o n s h i p w i t h Don traditional apologetic of her i s no of marrying different w i f e ' s t o her husband. attitude parallels from him, that "Chaddleys There, t h e m o t h e r - n a r r a t o r was of a In f a c t , J u d i t h ' s linked F l e m i n g s " , w h i c h opens t h i s unable to d r i v e her aunt Judith her her mother's i n the story, ask her husband and Although volume. to b r i n g h e r s e l f from her h o t e l to to their house: I had n o t wanted t o ask R i c h a r d t o go t o t h e h o t e l for her. I w o u l d n o t s a y I was a f r a i d t o a s k him; I s i m p l y wanted t o k e e p t h i n g s f r o m s t a r t i n g o f f on t h e wrong f o o t , by making him do what he h a d n ' t o f f e r e d t o do. (p. 13) Despite these r a t i o n a l i z a t i o n s , the n a r r a t o r b e t r a y s her fear o f making demands o f h e r h u s b a n d . that she name, and has relinquished the duty her r i g h t s to adapt movement i n MOONS i s c i r c u l a r , cycles t o by o f t h e moons a r o u n d the n a r r a t o r t o become d o m i n a t e d i n "Chaddleys by a man just and The line, hers. the like the girl child F l e m i n g s " has believe maiden is entirely straight revolving Jupiter. seems t o along w i t h her to marriage R a c i i e r t h a n b e i n g an a d v a n c i n g She heavenly alluded grown as h e r mother was. up Life 142 is seen, then, as a r e c u r r i n g story, most i r o n i c a l l y i n the c a s e o f M r s . K i d d and M r s . C r o s s , two o l d women who re-establish i n t h e n u r s i n g home t h e m o t h e r - c h i l d relationships t h e y had y e a r s b e f o r e : M r s . C r o s s a d o p t s a stroke victim, and M r s . K i d d r e c i p r o c a t e s by b e f r i e n d i n g C h a r l o t t e , who h a s m u l t i p l e Mrs. sclerosis. K i d d and M r s . C r o s s e s t a b l i s h e d reawakened o v e r pattern of children as l i t t l e growing girls i s and t h e f a m i l i a r up and l e a v i n g pair which their mothers i s o f f , leaving t h e two women a l o n e t o g e t h e r o n c e a g a i n . Inured has As The r i v a l r y these surrogate c h i l d r e n , r e p e a t e d when J a c k and C h a r l o t t e old Jack, to loss, they r e t a i n happened, t h e r e b y p a r t l y the a b i l i t y restoring o l d a c q u a i n t a n c e s who u n d e r s t a n d unspoken t h o u g h t s , and storytelling their perspective. each o t h e r ' s s p o k e n and they exemplify the importance as a b a s i s for friendship. Jack, h i s speech b l o c k e d by t h e e f f e c t s struggles t o communicate: vainly t o d i s c u s s what o f speech By c o n t r a s t , of a stroke, He opened h i s mouth and s a i d , "Anh-anh-anh," "Yes," s a i d M r s . C r o s s e n c o u r a g i n g l y . "Yes?" "Anh-anh-anh," s a i d J a c k . He f l a p p e d h i s r i g h t hand. T e a r s came i n t o h i s e y e s . ( p . 167) Jack i s desperate Without his Mrs. Cross about being able to o f f e r background about to t e l l i n f o r m a t i o n about i n e x c h a n g e f o r t h e i n f o r m a t i o n she g i v e s h i m h e r s , he c a n n o t education, her e s s e n t i a l h i s past. be h e r f r i e n d . Despite her limited M r s . C r o s s h a s t h e good s e n s e to treat J a c k as 143 she treated questions h e r c h i l d r e n when t h e y were young; s h e makes up requiring y e s o r no a n s w e r s f r o m h i m : J a c k was p o i n t i n g a t one o f t h e p i c t u r e s . . . . "What a b o u t i t ? T h i s i s l i k e one o f t h o s e t h i n g s on t e l e v i s i o n . T r e e s ? Green? Pine t r e e s ? Is i t t h e deer? Three deer? No? Y e s ? Three r e d deer?" He f l a p p e d h i s arm up and down and s h e s a i d , " I d o n ' t know, r e a l l y . Three-red-deer. Wait a minute. That's a p l a c e . . . . Red D e e r . " ( p . 170) Mrs. Cross patient i s intelligent enough t o i n v e n t t h e game and enough t o p l a y i t b e c a u s e S e e i n g M r s . K i d d and C h a r l o t t e immediately and playing thinks of using the l e t t e r communicate. Scrabble of her l i k i n g Instead of pleasing letters Charlotte provoke join throw o f f t h e i r forces f o r Jack. S c r a b b l e , she tiles to help Jack to J a c k , however, t h e the c l i m a c t i c scene i n which Jack a g a i n s t M r s . C r o s s and M r s . K i d d , power and l e a v e them f e e l i n g weak and ridiculous: He made a sound o f d i s g u s t and p u s h e d t h e S c r a b b l e b o a r d and a l l t h e l e t t e r s t o t h e f l o o r , a l l t h e t i m e l o o k i n g a t M r s . C r o s s so t h a t t h e r e c o u l d be no d o u b t t h a t t h i s d i s g u s t and f u r y had been a r o u s e d by h e r . She knew t h a t i t was i m p o r t a n t a t t h i s moment t o s p e a k c o l d l y and f i r m l y . . . . B u t she was n o t a b l e t o s a y a word, s u c h a f e e l i n g o f g r i e f , and s h o c k , and h e l p l e s s n e s s r o s e i n h e r h e a r t , ( p . 177) Weakened by o l d age and a b a d h e a r t , M r s . C r o s s by the emotional As comfort, describes i s drained expenditure of the confrontation with her f r i e n d Mrs. Kidd's Mrs. Kidd o f f e r s her a s t o r y own weakness f o l l o w i n g Jack. which a b l a c k - o u t she 144 s u f f e r e d , b u t ends r e a s s u r i n g l y w i t h h e r b e i n g restored to strength: As a m a t t e r o f f a c t , M r s . C r o s s had h e a r d Mrs. K i d d t e l l t h i s s t o r y b e f o r e , b u t i t was a l o n g t i m e ago and she l a u g h e d now n o t j u s t t o be o b l i g i n g ; she l a u g h e d w i t h r e l i e f . Mrs. K i d d ' s f i r m v o i c e had s p r e a d a numbing o i n t m e n t o v e r h e r m i s e r y , (p. 179) The s t o r y has a c h i e v e d Mrs. the d e s i r e d e f f e c t of encouraging C r o s s n o t t o l o s e hope d e s p i t e relationship she had b u i l t manner, M r s . K i d d than the regard help. M r s . C r o s s may a t her s i d e . with Jack. o f a young man have l o s t Moreover, although M r s . C r o s s knew i n s t i n c t i v e l y and h e r s e l f was not t o a n g e r him, and was fragile. matter-of-fact there a r e worse whom she was trying to Jack, but her o l d f r i e n d i s it, to tease By h e r reminds her f r i e n d t h a t losses still the c o l l a p s e of the that she t r i e d to ignore t h e t i e between She a l w a y s t o o k e x a g g e r a t e d amazed t h a t he p e r m i t t e d Jack care Charlotte him: "Anh-an-anh?" s a i d C h a r l o t t e , t e a s i n g h i m . What k i n d o f a word i s t h a t , anh-anh-anh?" Mrs. C r o s s w a i t e d f o r t h e s k i e s t o f a l l , b u t t h e o n l y t h i n g J a c k d i d was g i g g l e , and C h a r l o t t e g i g g l e d , so t h a t t h e r e was a s o r t o f g i g g l i n g match s e t up between t h e two o f them. (p. 177) Charlotte's appreciative giggle draws h e r c l o s e r t o J a c k t h a n M r s . C r o s s has managed t o g e t d e s p i t e k i n d n e s s . By g o i n g o f f w i t h C h a r l o t t e , superior force of sexual communication. Jack r e v e a l s communication over I t i s another a l l her p a t i e n t illustration verbal of the the 145 gravitational Mrs. f o r c e between J u p i t e r Cross has proven h e r s e l f Charlotte a better i s , he abandons t h e o l d e r who a t t r a c t s This and t h e moons. friend t o Jack him s e x u a l l y . pattern i s repeated describes i n "Hard L u c k S t o r i e s " , narrator man she was i n l o v e w i t h but t o t h e woman a t whose h o u s e t h e y were s t a y i n g : b r o u g h t me t h e r e the was p a s s i o n a t e l y t o counter her with. stand i t " (p. 195). same s e n t i m e n t paying h e r dismay a t t h e d i s c o v e r y 1 was t h e woman he l i k e d . I couldn't lip-service rational, irrational than f o r t h e y o u n g e r woman the choice. Although to the notion "He'd I was h i s s e n s i b l e couldn't earlier: that that the drawn n o t t o h e r , stand Here t h e n a r r a t o r she h a s d e c l a r e d she i n s t i n c t i v e l y sexual I when that the best that. repeats despite love i s u n d e r s t a n d s t h a t what m a t t e r s i s attraction: T h e r e ' s t h e i n t e l l i g e n t s o r t o f l o v e t h a t makes an i n t e l l i g e n t c h o i c e . That's the kind y o u ' r e s u p p o s e d t o g e t m a r r i e d o n . Then there's the kind that's anything but i n t e l l i g e n t , that's like a possession. And t h a t ' s t h e one, t h a t ' s t h e one, everybody values. T h a t ' s t h e one nobody wants t o have m i s s e d o u t o n . ( p . 195) Since of past in i s n o t commanded by r e a s o n , luck, with being two love obsessed t h e odds a g a i n s t by e a c h o t h e r . love are properly women t e l l Julie's case. She b o t h members o f t h e c o u p l e Therefore, designated about t h e i r i t becomes a m a t t e r as hard previous the s t o r i e s of luck affairs, speaks d e p r e c a t i n g l y stories. The unconsummated of her 146 revelations (p. 191), a s , " l a y i n g - b a r e my r i d i c u l o u s a l m o s t - a f f a i r s " prompting D o u g l a s t o m i s q u o t e t h e song f r o m GAMMER GURTON'S NEEDLE: Back and s i d e B o t h f o o t and But b e l l y God Whether i t be go b a r e , go b a r e , hand go c o l d : send t h e e good a l e enough, new o r o l d . 6 i Douglas a l t e r s lay bare", the f i r s t line and t h i s u n u s u a l t o "Back and s i d e l a y i n s t a n c e o f Munro's c h a n g i n g word i n an embedded q u o t a t i o n assumes added because o f i t s r a r i t y . strengthen reader one who r e c o g n i z e s another ragged importance o f t h e change i s t o between b e i n g the l i n e s , a and t e l l i n g . For a t h e two v e r s i o n s p l a y o f f so t h a t t h e image o f t h e h a l f - n a k e d body o f t h e a l e d r i n k e r complements t h e image o f t h e women attempting to t e l l experiences who t e l l with stories the truth men. stories, private business about t h e i r Significantly, about t h e i r whose male p r e s e n c e their The e f f e c t the connection bare, past i s probably unhappy i t i s t h e two women loves. Douglas instrumental rivals. youthful-looking Reider, i n provoking c o n f i n e s h i s anecdotes t o t a l e s dealers i n old diaries past of the and l e t t e r s who a r e h i s The n a r r a t o r d e s c r i b e s h i m a s i n a special sense o f t h e term: I am t h i n k i n g o f t h e h a r d y o u t h f u l n e s s , t h e j a u n t y grim looks you o f t e n see i n photographs o f s e r v i c e m e n i n t h e S e c o n d W o r l d War. D o u g l a s was one o f t h o s e , and i s p r e s e r v e d , n o t ripened. Oh, t h e modesty and s a t i s f a c t i o n o f t h o s e f a c e s , c l a m p e d down on t h e i r s e c r e t s 1 With s u c h men t h e d e s c e n t i n t o l o v e i s s w i f t and 147 p r i v a t e and a m a z i n g — s o (p. 184) Unlike his Julie past less and t h e n a r r a t o r , loves, scarred so t h e r e a d e r by l o v e as really" D o u g l a s does n o t " l a y b a r e " i s f r e e t o assume t h a t he i s the narrator says, ( p . 1 8 4 ) , and c e r t a i n l y Describing "He's a s o r t o f t h e metaphor o f men p i r a t e s o f women's l o v e p e r v a d e s t h e s t o r i e s i n MOONS. I t c a n be a p p r o p r i a t e l y a p p l i e d Alex Day recovery, t h a n a r e t h e two women. h i s work t o h e r f r i e n d , pirate, i s their t o Duncan i n " D u l s e " , t o i n "Bardon B u s " , G o r d o n i n " P r u e " and G e o r g e i n " L a b o r Dinner". A significant "Visitors", rejected exception, a man who e p i t o m i z e s by t h e n a r r a t o r who r e s c u e s however, i s W i l f r e d i n Mildred with the sensible marital o f "Hard L u c k S t o r i e s " . h i s marriage proposal d e a t h o f h e r f o r m e r p r o t e c t o r , Mr. T o l l , alter-ego similarity tastes f o rMildred, i n their i n leisure a conclusion names. activities darts and d r i n k beer), story as a c o n s t r u c t value as h i s t o r y : isa choice Wilfred, a f t e r the friendly r e i n f o r c e d by t h e In a d d i t i o n t o t h e i r shared (evenings a t the Legion t h e y s h a r e a common c o n c e p t i o n w h i c h has meaning b e y o n d to play of a i t s factual I f W i l f r e d had been t e l l i n g t h a t s t o r y , M i l d r e d t h o u g h t , t h e r e w o u l d have been some k i n d o f ending t o i t . . . . I n W i l f r e d ' s s t o r i e s you c o u l d a l w a y s be s u r e t h a t t h e gloomy p a r t s w o u l d g i v e way t o s o m e t h i n g b e t t e r , and i f somebody b e h a v e d i n a p e c u l i a r way t h e r e was an explanation f o r i t . I f Wilfred figured i n h i s own s t o r i e s , a s he u s u a l l y d i d , t h e r e 148 was a l w a y s a s t r o k e o f l u c k f o r him somewhere, a good meal o r a b o t t l e o f w h i s k y o r some money. N e i t h e r l u c k n o r money p l a y e d a p a r t i n t h i s story. She wondered why A l b e r t had t o l d i t , what i t had meant t o him. (p. 215) As she s o o n as Mildred realizes that brother-in-law up not "Visitors", appetite she has by nothing a character's and him thin, Unlike Mildred b e c a u s e he place Pentecostal church. they and are picked said, 'It's and rigidity. h i s wife who and reveals her trying faithful s t o r y comes o u t , struggling like central characters meaning o f their girlfriend Kimberly Albert i s like they to cannot except the i n Munro's i s frequently a sign Because the i n " L a b o r Day has almost sister i n t e r e s t e d i n seeing the lives. Albert his his enthusiastic brother, know i n a d v a n c e how the teetotal becomes e x h a u s t e d faith In parallels They c o n f o r m t o a p a t t e r n i n which r e l i g i o u s blindness The ability is a colourless individual s u g g e s t any fiction "Albert i t down and storytelling drink. about h i m s e l f . entertain Her curiosity: put story, I t ' s something t h a t happened'"(p. 215). meagre p h y s i c a l a p p e t i t e s . he her o f hamburger and f o r food Wilfred, meaning o f t h e made a m i s t a k e . i s offended a cold piece a story. i n q u i r e s about the think are they not to understand David's of the beatific Dinner": K i m b e r l e y i s e n d a n g e r e d on two s i d e s , R o b e r t a thinks. But she w i l l manage. She i s s t r o n g enough t o h o l d o n t o D a v i d t h r o u g h any number o f A n g e l a s , and s t r o n g enough t o h o l d h e r s m i l e i n t h e f a c e o f G e o r g e ' s a t t a c k on h e r f a i t h . Does h e r s m i l e f o r e s e e how he w i l l b u r n ? Not likely. She f o r e s e e s , i n s t e a d , how a l l o f them 149 w i l l s t u m b l e and wander a r o u n d and t i e t h e m s e l v e s i n k n o t s ; what does i t m a t t e r who w i n s t h e argument; F o r K i m b e r l y a l l t h e a r g u m e n t s have a l r e a d y been won. (p. 156) There i s a s t r e a k of malice Kimberley, orthodox similar of her principal d i s c h a r g e s her put unfaithful his sister-in-law's In from the and remain events. deliver sister's highschool As a result, the h i m s e l f by divorcing his wife the overturning his p a s t , and the lives but story, second sees her of o t h e r s . of a s t o r y with i t was altered I f F r e d B e e c h e r had not the tense w i f e , now how t h a t the p a t t e r n of her single, the child, to r e v e a l her segment o f t h i s memories r e m i n d h e r believes As she middle-aged, has had been looks back, alternate life by life endings. t o use of Ted w o u l d n o t have m a r r i e d her She been f o r h e r a combination decided changes to chance h i s car a baby c a r r i a g e a c r o s s town, Ted's son would have d i e d , and so intentions. her with of the over e v e n demands t h a t t h e justifies p a s t t o p r e s e n t as interwoven duty takes dead mistress, completely final contemplates sister's of i n "Accident", t h a t she a s t o p t o the a f f a i r . husband marrying i n the p o r t r a i t righteousness husband's i n f i d e l i t y , mother's a p p r a i s a l sister-in-law arrangements f o r her confidently and malice F i n n i s h Lutheran convinced funeral and i n David's to not her: She's had h e r l o v e , h e r s c a n d a l , h e r man, her children. But i n s i d e s h e ' s t i c k i n g away, a l l by h e r s e l f , t h e same F r a n c e s who was t h e r e b e f o r e any o f i t . (p. 109) 150 D e s p i t e her a l t e r e d inner core of s e l f her. She Shared by t h i n k s she has an w h i c h i s u n a f f e c t e d by what happens t o knows she several circumstances, Frances i s more t h a n t h e sum of her e x p e r i e n c e s . p r o t a g o n i s t s i n MOONS, t h i s affects their attitude to s t o r y t e l l i n g , them up s h o r t i n the middle realize how storytelling new suddenly o f a n a r r a t i v e , when tends to t r i v i a l i z e insight bringing they people's lives: I f I had b e e n y o u n g e r , I would have f i g u r e d o u t a story. I w o u l d have i n s i s t e d on Mr. B l a c k ' s b e i n g i n l o v e w i t h one o f my a u n t s , and on one o f t h e m — n o t n e c e s s a r i l y t h e one he was i n l o v e w i t h — b e i n g i n l o v e w i t h him. I w o u l d have w i s h e d him t o c o n f i d e i n them, i n one o f them, h i s s e c r e t , h i s r e a s o n f o r l i v i n g i n .a s h a c k i n Huron C o u n t y , f a r f r o m home. L a t e r , I m i g h t have b e l i e v e d t h a t he wanted t o , b u t h a d n ' t c o n f i d e d t h i s , o r h i s love e i t h e r . I w o u l d have made a h o r r i b l e , p l a u s i b l e c o n n e c t i o n between t h a t s i l e n c e o f h i s , and t h e manner o f h i s d e a t h . Now I no l o n g e r b e l i e v e t h a t p e o p l e ' s s e c r e t s a r e d e f i n a b l e and communicable, or t h e i r f e e l i n g s f u l l - b l o w n and e a s y t o r e c o g n i z e , (p. 35) There i s a new awareness here as more complex them e v e r show. mysterious than stories inevitably fall short of conveying lives, she as t h e n a r r a t o r hears herself about of people of the t r u t h "Hard-Luck S t o r i e s " and Words of people's realizes d e p r e c a t i n g a word i n a v e r s e on when a tombstone: "Waft," I s a i d . " T h a t sounds n i c e . " Then I f e l t s o m e t h i n g go o v e r m e — a shadow, a c h a s t e n i n g . I h e a r d t h e s i l l y sound o f my own v o i c e a g a i n s t t h e t r u t h o f t h e l i v e s l a i d down h e r e . (p. 196) 151 The s e l f - c o n s c i o u s tone o c c a s i o n a l l y p r e s e n t b o o k s becomes s e l f - c r i t i c a l the failure of l i f e . narrators barriers The knowledge p a i n f u l l y i s knowledge o f t h e i r which the s t o r y t e l l e r Season", the n a r r a t o r was f i r e d , to confront ordered a c q u i r e d by limitations, of cannot c r o s s . speculates h o m o s e x u a l , and a t t e m p t s but i n MOONS, a s n a r r a t o r s o f n a r r a t i v e s t o encompass t h e m u l t i p l i c i t y and contradiction these i n a l l Munro's t h a t Herb was I n "The T u r k e y probably t o i m a g i n e h i s f e e l i n g s when Brian o u t o f town and d e n o u n c e d a s a p e r v e r t ; u l t i m a t e l y she a c k n o w l e d g e s t h e f u t i l i t y o f h e r a t t e m p t e x p l a i n what happened: L a t e r s t i l l , I backed o f f from t h i s e x p l a n a t i o n . I g o t t o a stage o f b a c k i n g o f f from t h i n g s I c o u l d n ' t r e a l l y know. I t ' s enough f o r me now j u s t to t h i n k o f Herb's f a c e w i t h t h a t p e c u l i a r , s t r i c k e n l o o k ; t o t h i n k o f B r i a n monkeying i n t h e shade o f H e r b ' s d i g n i t y ; t o t h i n k o f my own m y s t i f i e d c o n c e n t r a t i o n on H e r b , my need t o c a t c h him o u t , i f I c o u l d e v e r g e t t h e c h a n c e , and t h e n move i n and s t a y c l o s e t o h i m . ( p . 74) An explanation since, it o f f e r e d and l a t e r u n l i k e the other arts, r e j e c t e d does n o t d i s a p p e a r literature i s able t o s a y what has c h o s e n n o t t o s a y , a s Suzanne L a n g e r e x p l a i n s i n FEELING AND FORM: Where t h e r e i s no e x c l u s i o n o f o p p o s i t e s , t h e r e i s a l s o , s t r i c t l y s p e a k i n g , no n e g a t i v e . In n o n - v e r b a l a r t s t h i s i s o b v i o u s ; o m i s s i o n s may be s i g n i f i c a n t , b u t n e v e r a s n e g a t i v e s . In l i t e r a t u r e , t h e w o r d s , "no," " n o t , " " n e v e r , " e t c . , o c c u r f r e e l y , b u t what t h e y deny i s t h e r e b y created. 7 Therefore, when t h e n a r r a t o r claims t o no l o n g e r believe 152 something, neither to the o r i g i n a l erased forget it. possibilities without i t from By belief the n a r r a t i v e illusion and i n succeeding b a c k f o r them t o opinions how and the that memories a r e confident that their her her changes of continually reflection. but not memories e x t e n d t h e y have a l t e r e d of time. reader ambiguity reporting a discernible, realize i t has the n a r r a t o r i s By books, t h e i r i n the course grown l e s s caused m o d i f i e d i n the process of Munro's n a r r a t o r s age, trend that experiences. mind, t h e n a r r a t o r s u g g e s t s As nor f o r suggesting complexity b r e a k i n g the extended stands; denying means o f n e g a t i o n , Munro w i d e n s remembering a c t u a l being still invariable, f a r enough their A c c o r d i n g l y , they have p o i n t of view r e p r e s e n t s the truth. Growing o l d e r , detached. men The M u n r o s n a r r a t o r s have a l s o grown more sadness 1 they diminishes i s balanced reached a vantage feel by as t h e i r a calm power t o attract pleasure i n having p o i n t above t h e h u r l y - b u r l y of the sexual arena: She had n o t i c e d s o m e t h i n g a b o u t h e r s e l f , on t h i s t r i p to the M a r i t i m e s . I t was t h a t p e o p l e were no l o n g e r i n t e r e s t e d i n g e t t i n g t o know h e r . It w a s n ' t t h a t she had c r e a t e d s u c h a s t i r b e f o r e , b u t s o m e t h i n g had been t h e r e t h a t she c o u l d r e l y o n . . . She was n o t s u r p r i s e d b e c a u s e she was i n a new, s t r a n g e c o n d i t i o n a t t h e t i m e . She made e f f o r t s one a f t e r t h e o t h e r . She s e t l i t t l e b l o c k s on t o p o f one a n o t h e r and she had a day. Sometimes she a l m o s t c o u l d n o t do t h i s . At o t h e r t i m e s t h e v e r y d e l i b e r a t e n e s s , t h e seeming a r b i t r a r i n e s s , o f what she was d o i n g , t h e way she was l i v i n g , e x h i l e r a t e d h e r . (pp. 36-7) 153 Since erotic l o v e i n MOONS i s a l m o s t possession, has life demonic b e y o n d menopause, a l t h o u g h i t s compensations " L a b o r Day like f o r L y d i a , as i t has somewhat arid, f o r Roberta in Dinner": B u t R o b e r t a has t h e i d e a t h a t , much as she l i k e s them b o t h and w i s h e s them w e l l , l o v e i s r e a l l y s o m e t h i n g V a l e r i e c o u l d do w i t h o u t b e i n g reminded o f . In V a l e r i e ' s company you do wonder sometimes what a l l t h e f u s s i s a b o u t . Valerie wonders. Her l i f e and h e r p r e s e n c e , more t h a n any o p i n i o n she e x p r e s s e s , r e m i n d you t h a t l o v e i s n o t k i n d o r h o n e s t and does n o t c o n t r i b u t e t o h a p p i n e s s i n any r e l i a b l e way. (p. 140) According with her t o t h i s v i e w , a woman's p a s s i o n has affection, In l o v e , Roberta t u r n her resources (p. 141) . i s ended by than Valerie, that there h i s death; are left is still with other to whereas w i t h o u t energy, a lover, enabling the speak l o n g i n g l y o f setting "a house i n i s fortunate i n having f o r h e r s e l f when h e r life o t h e r women, o l d e r and damaged p r i d e and some p o i n t t o t h e i r do achievements. summer home i n t o Valerie to create a l i f e to d i s c o v e r s new have i n mind when t h e y the country" man Valerie to singlehandedly people is a barrier becomes e n e r v a t e d ; h e r widowed f r i e n d her and little the the with a frailer pretense lives: Mrs. C r o s s and Mrs. K i d d u s e d t o p l a y c a r d s i n t h e R e c r e a t i o n Room e v e r y a f t e r n o o n . They p u t on e a r r i n g s , s t o c k i n g s , a f t e r n o o n d r e s s e s . They t o o k t u r n s t r e a t i n g f o r t e a . On t h e whole t h e s e a f t e r n o o n s were p l e a s a n t , (p. 165) The two o l d women c l i n g the afternoons to t h e i r b e c a u s e i t i s one c u s t o m o f d r e s s i n g up of the few comforting in 154 rituals still p o s s i b l e i n t h e n u r s i n g home. other women c h a r a c t e r s their pride or d i s t r a c t In "Connection" i n MOONS, t h e y use c l o t h e s t o b o l s t e r themselves from a n x i e t y and g r i e f . t o o , t h e n a r r a t o r remembers h e r mother w e a r i n g a secondhand from a r e l a t i v e , silk jersey afternoon and r e c a l l s o f women o f t h a t g e n e r a t i o n powers. Like several dress acquired how t h e ample c o r s e t t e d f i g u r e s proclaimed their I n "Bardon B u s " , however, b u y i n g r i g h t s and c l o t h e s becomes an obsession: I've become f e v e r i s h l y p r e o c c u p i e d w i t h c l o t h e s . . . . I'm h a l f c o n v i n c e d t h a t a more a r t f u l g e t u p w o u l d have made a more p o w e r f u l i m p r e s s i o n , more d r a m a t i c c l o t h e s m i g h t have made me l e s s d i s c a r d a b l e . I have f a n c i e s o f m e e t i n g X u n e x p e c t e d l y a t a p a r t y o r on a T o r o n t o s t r e e t , d e v a s t a t i n g him w i t h my a l t e r e d l o o k s and l a t e - b l o o m i n g s p l e n d o r , ( p p . 124-5) Clothes her shopping i s an i r r a t i o n a l l o v e r , a u s e l e s s attempt response t o the loss of to present h e r s e l f i n a new and irresistable f o r m , e v e n t h o u g h t h e man f o r whom t h i s is t o see t h e t r a n s f o r m a t i o n . not there shopping a f f o r d s temporary r e l i e f does i n t h e t i t l e trying leukemia t e s t s for self on h e r l i t t l e i t t o be t i m e t o v i s i t surgery. Simultaneously, from s u f f e r i n g , s t o r y , i n which t h e n a r r a t o r on c l o t h e s once w h i l e The f u t i l i t y she a w a i t e d girl, as i t recalls while her father i n h o s p i t a l she w a i t s awaiting t o e s c a p e i n t o a new by d o n n i n g a new costume i s s u g g e s t e d dressing just the r e s u l t s of and a g a i n o f such attempts i s done by t h e boy up i n women's c l o t h e s i n "Bardon B u s " : 155 F i n a l l y e v e r y b o d y i s s a t i s f i e d and a b e a u t i f u l young l a d y , who i s n o t a young l a d y a t a l l , b u t a p r e t t y boy d r e s s e d up as a l a d y , emerges f r o m t h e shadow o f t h e m i r r o r . His smiling face i s t e n s e and t r e m u l o u s . I remember how when I was t e n o r e l e v e n y e a r s o l d I u s e d t o d r e s s up as a b r i d e i n o l d c u r t a i n s , o r as a l a d y i n rouge and a f e a t h e r e d h a t . A f t e r a l l t h e e f f o r t and c o n t r i v i n g and my own e n c h a n t m e n t w i t h t h e f i n i s h e d p r o d u c t t h e r e was a c o n s i d e r a b l e l e t d o w n . What a r e you s u p p o s e d t o do now? (p. 126) The illusion c a n n o t be hidden sustained. Typically, a s p e c t s of the wearer, instance, Angela o f change f l e e t i n g l y produced t h e costume c h o s e n enabling the d e v e l o p i n g s e x u a l i t y i n " L a b o r Day by d r e s s i n g up reveals Munro t o show, f o r of the adolescent Dinner": As f o r A n g e l a and E v e , t h e y a r e d r a m a t i c a l l y a r r a y e d i n o u t f i t s c o n t r i v e d f r o m a box o f o l d c u r t a i n s found i n the u p s t a i r s o f George's house. A n g e l a wears e m e r a l d - g r e e n damask w i t h l o n g , s u n - f a d e d s t r i p e s , d r a p e d so as t o l e a v e one g o l d e n s h o u l d e r b a r e . . . . A n g e l a i s t a l l and f a i r - h a i r e d , and e m b a r r a s s e d by h e r r e c e n t l y acquired beauty. She w i l l go t o g r e a t t r o u b l e t o f l a u n t i t , as she does now, and t h e n w i l l r e d d e n and f r o w n and l o o k s t u b b o r n l y a f f r o n t e d when somebody t e l l s h e r she l o o k s l i k e a g o d d e s s , (p. 135) Clearly, appears Angela i s t r y i n g at dinner i n this on t h e g o d d e s s costume, j u s t charms on D a v i d : "Angela try on a c o u s i n them o u t e v e n child" (p. 1 5 6 ) . sexual relationship, practising She on D a v i d , i s trying r o l e when she a s she t r i e s out her o u t h e r powers; she she has known s i n c e will she was i s t o o young t o be r e a d y t o e n t e r a but prepares f o r t h i s who i s s a f e l y beyond coming phase her r e a c h . by a 156 In h e r she journal is still behaviour too, Angela too young, t h a t since living with tries on a r o l e of c r i t i c of her f o r which mother's George: "I have s e e n h e r c h a n g e , " A n g e l a has w r i t t e n i n h e r j o u r n a l , "from a p e r s o n I d e e p l y r e s p e c t e d i n t o a p e r s o n on t h e v e r g e o f b e i n g a n e r v o u s wreck. I f t h i s i s l o v e I want no p a r t o f i t . He wants t o e n s l a v e h e r and us a l l and she w a l k s a t i g h t r o p e t r y i n g t o keep him f r o m g e t t i n g mad." (p. 147) Subtly, Angela's of Roberta's journal declining reinforces the n a r r a t o r ' s account self-confidence and growing desperation. "Labor reflect Day Dinner" uses c h a r a c t e r and weakness and daughter d e p e n d e n c e upon men. lace curtains, she i s d r e s s e d up (p. 1 3 8 ) . BRIDE OF feminine i n a costume made o f Eva is. T h u s , she c o n t e x t of S i r Walter o f THE r e f e r e n c e s to When t h e h o s t e s s ' s s a y s , " I know who B r i d e o f Lammermoor" heroine literary t o e l a b o r a t e t h e theme o f g r e e t s E v a , who romantic brief Scott. She's the p l a c e s Eva The i n the unfortunate LAMMERMOOR i s t h e pawn i n a family o struggle f o r power. the s i m i l a r The c i r c u m s t a n c e s o f t h e mother and daughters i n "Labor good w i l l o f t h e man book t i t l e s listed her confused childhood realism, S c o t t r e f e r e n c e a c t s as a g l o s s and state Day D i n n e r " because chosen Her adult she reflect i s between r e a d i n g m i x e s romance literature. the Furthermore, summer r e a d i n g l i s t o f mind, p o i s e d as and two t h e y depend upon the mother. i n Angela's adolescence. children's by her on and Its contrasts 157 reveal t h e wide e x t e n t o f h e r s e a r c h f o r f e m i n i n e models t o emulate: D u r i n g t h e summer A n g e l a h a s s p e n t a l o t o f t i m e reading. She h a s r e a d ANNA KARENINA, THE SECOND SEX, EMILY OF NEW MOON, THE NORTON ANTHOLOGY OF POETRY, THE AUTOBIOGRAPHY OF W.B. YEATS, THE HAPPY HOOKER, THE ACT OF CREATION, SEVEN GOTHIC TALES. Some o f t h e s e , t o be a c c u r a t e , s h e h a s n o t r e a d a l l t h e way t h r o u g h , (p. 148) T h i s book l i s t could belong Angela's Against their age. t o many o f t h e women i n MOONS a t b e t t e r judgement, t h e y a r e attracted t o romantic tradition o f THE NORTON ANTHOLOGY'and Y e a t s ' s his beloved reflect v i e w s o f women s u g g e s t e d by t h e p o e t i c devotion to Maud Gonne. ANNA KARENINA a n d SEVEN GOTHIC TALES a E u r o p e a n p a s t t h a t i s remote f r o m o f a young C a n a d i a n g i r l , the b u t exerts a powerful experience attraction, nevertheless. The inclusion o f L.M. Montgomery's EMILY OF NEW MOON i s a r a r e i n s t a n c e o f Munro's r e f e r r i n g han in an E n g l i s h , 1923, t o a Canadian, A m e r i c a n o r E u r o p e a n work. EMILY OF NEW MOON i s an e n d u r i n g about an orphan r a i s e d b y maiden a u n t s First rather published c h i l d r e n ' s novel on a P r i n c e Edward 9 Island farm. Its heroine a forerunner o f Del Jordan therefore recent own Munro's i s an a s p i r i n g i n ambition poet, i n some ways and i n c l i n a t i o n ; comments on EMILY OF NEW MOON i n h e r interview with T i m S t r u t h e r s shed conception of therole of the a r t i s t new l i g h t on h e r i n Canadian s o c i e t y . Munro a c k n o w l e d g e s Montgomery's n o v e l as an e a r l y 158 f a v o r i t e which s t i l l would someday l i k e interests h e r , and a b o u t which she to write: I f e e l i n t h a t book s h e was g e t t i n g v e r y c l o s e t o t h e book s h e s h o u l d have w r i t t e n and n e v e r d i d write. T h e r e ' s a r e a l s e n s e o f b r o o d i n g and menace a n d e v e n h o r r o r i n t h a t book w h i c h s h e j u s t does n o t p e r m i t h e r s e l f i n a book l i k e ANNE OF GREEN GABLES. T h e y ' r e a b i t l i k e TOM SAWYER and HUCKLEBERRY FINN. You know how i n TOM SAWYER everything i s sort of popular-entertainment l e v e l , a n d i n HUCKLEBERRY FINN we g e t down t o some r e a l s t u f f . W e l l , EMILY OF NEW MOON i s a b i t l i k e that.10 Munro r e v e a l s h e r f a s c i n a t i o n w i t h t h e d a r k side of e x i s t e n c e w h i c h s h e c o n s i d e r s i n d i s p e n s a b l e i n a work o f art. She b e l i e v e s distinguishes she willingness t h e s e r i o u s from sympathizes polite that k e p t h e r from of J u p i t e r ' s insinuates she i s c o n v i n c e d t h a t h e r novelist. t o EMILY OF NEW MOON, Munro p a y s speeding presence influencing her daughters being driven without a drinking moon i n t o h e r own i m a g e r y EMILY OF NEW MOON. Day D i n n e r " t h e moon h a s become a c a r which narrowly which Roberta, (p. 1 5 8 ) . another moons by means o f t h e t i t l e , t h e e n d o f "Labor dominating is Although t o L.M. Montgomery's i n f l u e n c e on h e r , a n d simultaneously By thepopular a r t i s t . becoming a f i r s t - r a t e N e v e r t h e l e s s , by r e f e r r i n g tribute darkness w i t h Montgomery's r e l u c t a n c e t o b r e a k t h e conventions o f her time, timidity to face this a l l their escapes lives. crashing into thecar i n and h e r l o v e r a r e t r a v e l l i n g , lights. The d r i v e r , p a r t y , "sees t h e r o a d by t h e l i g h t Before t h e i r The narrow escape, returning from o f t h e moon" Roberta points out 159 the gibbous moon and recalls how meaning o f t h e word, g i b b o u s , more t h a n h a l f appropriate as a later full. figure The she a term gibbous rather i s never to persuade on new, but principle. structures The scaffolding functions without without her audience she calling verse quoted r e a d e r can by grasp a l o n e : "'Behind Gates o f H e r c u l e s ; / B e f o r e him facing cast to i t s e l f . For Moons o f J u p i t e r " the ghost only shoreless seas'" (p. 2 2 5 ) . likely with uncertainty. The p a s t accomplishment poem a f f o r d s several u n s t a t e d i n the s t o r y , d i s c o v e r y , both t h e poem's r e f r a i n , familiar "On, on!" man and other p a r a l l e l s World and metaphors of d e a t h . sail A future i s "Columbus", i t w i t h t h e i d e a o f t h e New the t o have h i s contrast of the of " b e f o r e " , and connects of the from "behind" title, example, l a y the gray Azores,/Behind not light this l i n e s w h i c h r e p e a t t h e words Its on not i n p l a c e , but a d a n g e r o u s o p e r a t i o n would be mind f i x e d a u t h o r does i t s general significance him the the source of the fragment i n "The even suggested old stories i s firmly lines s h o r e s , / B e f o r e him that attention the f a t h e r still The are h e r work a c c o r d i n g t o bothering to trace also, Thus, duty, yet Correspondences upon t h e r e a d e r . attempt but Montgomery. does d o u b l e strained. than f o r c e d Roberta, moon, i s a c o n t i n u a t i o n and i t e m i n a book l i s t symbolism f o r t h e moon when i t i s f o r the middle-aged p h a s e o f t h e new the moon n o t o n l y i s an e x t e n s i o n o f t h e r e f e r e n c e t o L . M. a single t a u g h t George m i r r o r s the too. which o f a voyage Moreover, father's 160 11 fortitude. With her usual fragment o f verse leaves restraint, to reflect explanations Munro p r o v i d e s t h e the father's s i t u a t i o n and to the c r i t i c . W i t h t h e same s u b t l e t y , t h e work's c o n t r o l l i n g metaphor of J u p i t e r and t h e moons i s i n t r o d u c e d desultory during the conversation their last through a seemingly between t h e n a r r a t o r visit and h e r f a t h e r i n the h o s p i t a l . After she d e s c r i b e s show she h a s j u s t w a t c h e d a t t h e p l a n e t a r i u m , they try t o remember t h e names o f t h e moons o f J u p i t e r , and between them r e c a l l The that that male) i n o r b i t sexual holds four moons a t t r a c t i o n i s implied (p. 2 3 3 ) . Munro p r o v i d e s colloquial term relationship, list "girlfriend", as their Duncan o r A l e x i n t o one modern they?" epithet. sexual i n "Dulse", through the "Duncan spoke a b o u t h i s Ruth, p e r t Judy, vivacious . . ." ( p . 5 2 ) . Men i n "Bardon B u s " r e s e m b l e J u p i t e r i n commitment t o t h e c h a s e , t h e i r Lydia " I o and two s t o r i e s has o v e r t o n e s o f a w i f e l y Maxine woman once t h e y have c a p t u r e d like than s t a t e d : thereby condensing lovers: Efficient Delores, and t h e power o f J u p i t e r ' s , weren't shown p r e v i o u s l y former g i r l f r i e n d s . like rather usage, g i r l f r i e n d o f Duncan's d i s c a r d e d Diane, elegant f e m a l e s and one t h e l i n k by means o f t h e f a t h e r ' s t h e god's amorous p u r s u i t s In r e c e n t (three a r o u n d a c e n t r a l male p l a n e t , E u r o p a , t h e y were g i r l f r i e n d s of E u r o p a and Ganymede. c o r r e s p o n d e n c e between t h e power o f g r a v i t a t i o n a l attraction of they a r e Io, C a l l i s t o , her. loss of interest i na For t h e i r i n "Dulse", Prue, o r the n a r r a t o r p a r t , women o f "Bardon B u s " 161 cling to their rekindle l o v e r s a s Juno c l u n g t o J u p i t e r , hoping t o t h e dead embers o f p a s s i o n i n men who have abandoned them, and j e a l o u s o f t h e women who have displaced them. Y e t none o f t h e s e parallels between t h e G r e e k myths and M u n r o s men and women a r e s p e l l e d 1 this r e s p e c t , Munro's method i s more l i k e than a prose allows fiction into account o f memory w h i c h i t s p e c u l i a r power t o make r e c o l l e c t e d resemble r e c o l l e c t e d experience. transforming o f remembering b r i n g s together. as Having d i s c o v e r e d literature process Munro i s a b l e recollections combines e v e n t s and f a m i l y anecdotes o f e a r l i e r characters, writers As most o f whom a r e r e a d e r s , The e m p h a s i s on suits t h i s group o f and some o f whom a r e as w e l l . M u n r o s p r o t a g o n i s t s change f r o m a p r e - w a r 1 with a high-school generation with a university but literate, volume, i n c o n t r a s t t o t h e collections, generation against experience, t h e semblance o f a of this c a n be and t h a t t h e m i d d l e - a g e d n a r r a t o r ' s remembering v o i c e . literary t h e two c l o s e f o r meaning i n p a s t t o reproduce stories t h a t memories o f s t o r i e s of r e c o l l e c t i o n i n i t s search takes The o r g a n i z i n g , i n t e n s e as memories o f e x p e r i e n c e s , associative poet's itself. MOONS i s a c o n c e p t i o n process In w r i t e r ' s : s h e c r e a t e s h e r image a n d i t t o speak f o r Underlying a lyric out. education education, a background d e r i v e d n o t o n l y a l s o from literary tradition. rural t o a post-war they see t h e i r from f a m i l y The l i t e r a r y urban lives tradition, influence i s 162 strongest values on t h o s e and f o r g e parents. who a r e a t t e m p t i n g new, l e s s restricted Not s u r p r i s i n g l y then, to cast off inherited lives given than her f a i t h i n progress i n LIVES i s and her longing f o r s e l f - i m p r o v e m e n t , Ada J o r d a n the outstanding instance work f o r whom l i t e r a r y of a character references T e n n y s o n i a n p e n name, P r i n c e s s element to her c h a r a c t e r i z a t i o n . mother's dogmatic r e l i g i o u s writing the i n search writing as d e t e r m i n e d l y gospel. Munro s recent 1 Having r e j e c t e d her Ada h a s t u r n e d to secular question the t r u t h of secular as Ada o n c e q u e s t i o n e d references faith i n the truth of add a n o t h e r layer to w r i t i n g , b u t i t i s a l a y e r w h i c h does n o t by s h o w i n g a mind s e t i n c e r t a i n On t h e c o n t r a r y , ambiguity, raising characters understand about t h e e x t e n t truth. important i n MOONS i s t h a t t h e i r Literary to f i x character lines. adds an Ada's The d i f f e r e n c e between Ada and h a s d e c l i n e d and t h e y religious tend of ideals. women Munro d e s c r i b e s progress faith, i n Munro's e a r l y are provided. Ida, their literary references doubts about t h e extent their own b e h a v i o u r , add a l a y e r o f t o which as w e l l as d o u b t s t o w h i c h t h e w r i t t e n word c a n embody t h e 163 Notes 1 A l i c e Munro, THE MOONS OF JUPITER: STORIES BY A L I C E MUNRO ( T o r o n t o : M a c m i l l a n , 1 9 8 2 ) . A l l subsequent r e f e r e n c e s appear i n t h e t e x t . 2 S i r Walter Raleigh, "Written thenight before h i s death. Found i n h i s B i b l e i n t h e G a t e - h o u s e a t W e s t m i n s t e r , " (1618; r p t . L o n d o n : B l a c k i e , n.d.) p . 370. 3 X a v i e r a H o l l a n d e r , THE HAPPY HOOKER (New Y o r k : D e l , 1972). 4 C h a r l e s L o u i s I I M o n t e s q u i e u , THE PERSIAN LETTERS: WITH INTRODUCTION AND NOTES, NOW COMPLETELY DONE INTO ENGLISH FROM THE ORIGINAL BY MONTESQUIEU (London: Athenaeum, 1 8 9 7 ) , p . 15. 5 W i l l a C a t h e r , A LOST LADY (1923; r p t . B o s t o n : Houghton M i f f l i n , 1 9 3 8 ) , p . 120. 6 W i l l i a m S t e v e n s o n , GAMMER GURTON'S NEEDLE, A c t I I , Song. ( c . 1562; r p t . L o n d o n : G i b b i n g s , 1 9 0 6 ) , p . 14. 7 Suzanne L a n g e r , FEELING AND FORM (New Y o r k : C h a r l e s S c r i b n e r ' s S o n s , 1 9 5 3 ) , p . 242. 8 S i r W a l t e r S c o t t , THE BRIDE OF LAMERMOOR, (1819; r p t . London: Dent, 1906). 9 L.M. Montgomery, EMILY OF NEW MOON, ( T o r o n t o : McClelland & Stewart,1923). 10 J . R. (Tim) S t r u t h e r s , "The R e a l M a t e r i a l : An I n t e r v i e w w i t h A l i c e Munro," i n PROBABLE FICTIONS, e d . L o u i s K. M a c K e n d r i c k ( T o r o n t o : ECW P r e s s , 1983) , p . 18. 11 J o a c h i n M i l l e r , "Columbus," i n BEST LOVED STORY POEMS (Garden C i t y , N.Y.: H a l c y o n House, 1 9 4 9 ) , p . 310. 164 Conclusion In A l i c e told provide Munro's f i c t i o n , ironic experiences. narrators, in daily settle they life adding the form tends unlike strong in v e r s i o n of the LIVES are the every anecdote, i d e n t i f y with tale t h e h e r o e s and the limitations world. They r e j e c t a community, b u t small Their first identity not stories with and i n books meals. their legend who and s t e p toward d e p a r t u r e are of personalities. they significance are told. of s t o r i e s , reality. and and geographical intellectual to They often Frequently, are determined upbringing also their but understanding them, s t o r i e s only t h e i r w h i c h i s as d i f f e r e n t t h a t i s so teenagers between s t o r i e s of a p r o v i n c i a l short story the c h i l d r e n heroines Munro's p r o t a g o n i s t s a r e g i r l s they as work and allegorical and to life, around attribute having Thus, and found e x e r t throughout preoccupied i n molding fairy cannot d i s t i n g u i s h truth. stories Since people paramount i m p o r t a n c e children or her ambiguity rounding-off influence stories t h e m s e l v e s and and characters' lives i n childhood. DANCE and to t h a t of sense of c l o s u r e t h a t the Munro makes o r a l shows t h e Typically, complexity t o impose, t h e n e a t life. especially the viewpoints a l l o w Munro t o a v o i d f i n a l l y commonplace i n h e r She rival reflect and t h a t are mentioned commentary o n ' h e r c h a r a c t e r s ' f o r o n l y one counter as By stories to escape enter a wider isolation isolation. i s to c o n s t r u c t an as p o s s i b l e f r o m t h a t of in 165 their mothers. emulate, they Searching rely f o r models o f a d u l t women t o on o r a l stories reading t o supplement t h e i r stories abound and distort encouraging limited i n the l i t e r a t u r e their or stories experience. their Romantic t o w h i c h t h e y have t h i n k i n g by r a i s i n g them t o w a i t from passively false access, expectations or t o be r e s c u e d by a male hero. In two o f Munro's works artist-protagonist (LIVES widens t h e scope o f s t o r y r e f e r e n c e s . Not o n l y does t h e young a r t i s t — D e l but also they One she r e f l e c t s distort dwell on p o v e r t y human l i f e soiled by l e a v i n g i s preoccupied existence usually left out s i g n i f i c a n t with stories out of l i t e r a t u r e , toilets and p h y s i c a l t o women b e c a u s e t h e y clean-up t a s k s and e n d u r e b e a t i n g s . women a r e s t o r i e s MOONS l o o k s a t a s p e c t s little from stories which world, Also significant to t h e n a t u r a l c y c l e s o f female o f women's l i v e s w h i c h examining of their d e p e n d e n c e upon men, and s h o w i n g how t h e y to need men d e s p i t e g r e a t e r p o s s i b i l i t i e s f o r independence than existed many s t o r i e s i n their change the extent continue female mothers' day. t h a t Munro's c h a r a c t e r s t e l l of a Chinese one o f violence, i s especially one g e n e r a t i o n t o t h e n e x t , units details. a r e o f t e n f o r c e d t o perform which r e f l e c t life. smallest extent about a s p e c t s o f Munro i m p l i e s t h a t t h i s familiar The stories, as a c o n d i t i o n i n which t h e s q u a l o r o f dominates. laundry, or R o s e — t e l l upon them, w o n d e r i n g t o what the truth work, WHO, and WHO) an Box s t r u c t u r e . are the They a r e 166 enclosed inside can by Munro's s h o r t stories, which a r e themselves a l a r g e r box, t h e s t o r y c y c l e . Beyond i t , t h e d i s c e r n the o u t l i n e s of y e t another enclosure, which i s i m p l i e d but not r e t o l d followed. story, I t serves rather in detail as a c o n t e x t Triple by t h e t i t l e story. Jordan, thus a l t e r i n g the c l a s s i c a l common i n Munro's f i c t i o n . highwire is a c t without omission questioning strictly i t s own contained Munro's o t h e r LIVES uses f o r D e l and Ada reference pattern departure, myth. s i n c e t h e s u b j e c t o f SOMETHING with point-of-view narrative strategies. within cycles. more T h i s work t e s t s t h e b o u n d a r i e s o f n a r r a t i v e by e x p e r i m e n t i n g those and Y e t , i t i s more b o u n d a r i e s t h a n any o f I t does n o t r e a c h outside itself to t h e s t r i n g s o f myth. The fiction as i t i s the t h e s a f e t y n e t o f an i n f o r m i n g itself. own I n t h i s work, Munro p e r f o r m s h e r i s appropriate storytelling catch I n WHO, The most r a d i c a l however, i s i n SOMETHING. closely f i g u r e of G o d d e s s , and i n MOONS, t h e g o d , J u p i t e r . T e n n y s o n ' s poems as a f r a m e o f r e f e r e n c e a myth f o r Munro's o r a g l o s s on i t . I n DANCE, t h e m y t h i c a l Orpheus i s i n v o k e d The o r even reader structural s i g n i f i c a n c e of stories i s far-reaching. The n a r r a t o r s i n Munro's claim storytelling a mode o f t h o u g h t n a t u r a l t o women and s t r i v e a feminine way of w r i t i n g f i c t i o n contrivance i n favor of submission discovery. Finally, Munro d e c l a r e s which r e j e c t s a u t h o r i a l to a process by h e r c o n s t a n t her b e l i e f t h a t man to develop references of to s t o r i e s , i s a storytelling animal. 167 Of a l l the t o o l s important. another them t h a t he has y e t d e v i s e d , words a r e t h e most They a r e t h e l i n k s and t h e p a s t . into By t e l l i n g words, her c h a r a c t e r s their lives. their hopes f r u s t r a t e d . and life failures, their explain, that lives t o one stories, putting attempt lives to gain control are often inner events l i v e s , t h e memories by making up t h e i r their own their seem mere a p p e a r a n c e and reality. 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