TIDEE Transferable Integrated Design Engineering Education ________________________________________________________________________ Communication Section 5: Written Reports This section includes: • Defining Criteria for Formal Reports • Planning a Conceptual Design Report • Planning a Detail Design Report • Preparing Design Drawings • [IR] Providing Feedback on Formal Reports As an engineer you will be called upon to draft written reports. This section will familiarize you with the structure and content typical of formal reports. The goal is to prepare you to create logically organized, informative reports for a variety of audiences. The initial activity, Defining Criteria for Formal Reports, stimulates your thoughts about what constitutes a high quality written report. You and your team members will define attributes of a well conceived report along with the needs of the target audience. A sample report structure is included to help you organize the document into relevant sections. The second activity, Planning a Conceptual Design Report, focuses on the elements required to create a persuasive conceptual design report. You will identify the content needed to convince your project sponsor of the merit of your team’s idea. Planning a Detail Design Report will assist you in understanding and developing guidelines for a detail design report. The activity helps you rate the importance of specific content in order to decide on the emphasis given to individual points. Engineers often communicate via drawings. The activity, Preparing Design Drawings, offers the opportunity to critically evaluate the use of visual representations (e.g. systems, components, processes, etc.) to support project goals. This section concludes with an instructor resource titled, Providing Feedback on Formal Reports. It is an aid for assessing students’ strengths and areas for improvement in regards to formal report writing. _____________________________________________________________ Activity: Defining Criteria for Formal Reports Formal written reports become major communication tools for design teams. They declare project status at a point in time, present details of design processes and decisions, and support project continuation decisions. Design teams must prepare effective written reports to complete project requirements and achieve success. In this activity, your team will define criteria for high quality written design reports. Objective: Establish criteria for high quality formal written reports presenting design team activities, products, and proposals. Tasks 1. Assign team members roles to support this activity. 2. As a team, review the list of final design report sections presented in the Written Reports worksheet table. For each section, mark the types of people likely to skim (S) or carefully read (R) its contents. 3. As a team, list attributes of written technical reports that make them attractive, satisfying to read, and of high quality. Examples may include quality layout and illustrations, articulate and accurate writing, etc. List attributes that fit all or some of the report sections on the worksheet. 4. Review the Criteria for Written Reports handout. Identify any missing factors needed to represent quality in the eyes of readers of a final design report. Deliverables 1. Team Reporter presents: Any report sections that should be added or removed for a final design project report Any necessary revisions your team identified for the Criteria for Written Reports table 2. Team Reflector reports: a) Any quality factors (in Criteria for Written Reports) that concerned team members An insight gained from this activity 3. Team homework (due in next class): Edited Performance Criteria for Written Reports worksheet with estimates of your team’s performance now and at the end of your project. Criteria for Success • • • • Teams recognize attributes that make written reports of high quality. Teams are able to distinguish quality desired by varied audiences. Teams are able to recognize levels of performance in themselves. Teams learn about performance criteria for written reports. Resources • • • • • Personal experience with written technical reports and performance criteria Worksheet: Written Reports Handout: Criteria for Written Reports Worksheet: Performance Criteria for Written Reports 20 minutes of team discussion time Worksheet: Written Reports Readership for Report Sections The following table lists common sections included in a final design report for a capstone engineering design course. For each report section (row), mark its importance for each reader (column) by using “S” to indicate “skim only”, “R” to indicate “read carefully”, or blank to indicate “not read.” Add any other report sections you believe are missing. Body Executive summary Background and research Objectives for project Concepts considered Decision making process Conceptual design description Detail design description Justification of design features Cost and business issues Development/implementation plan Conclusions Appendix – Supporting materials Engineering analysis Business analysis Detail drawings, photos Testing of prototype (experiments) Research reports, client surveys Gantt chart (timeline) for project Team credentials Other – add items as needed Attributes of Quality Reports Course Instructor Technical Advisor Business Advisor General Public Other Students Handout: Criteria for Written Reports Quality of Writing Factor Organization & Structure Language & Mechanics Appearance & Format Confidence & Persuasion Low Level (1) Intermediate Level (3) High Level (5) Lacks rational flow; parts not reasoned, not connected to whole Poor word choice; spelling & syntax errors; poor sentences Shoddy work; implies lack of quality; poor visuals Organization moderately effective; useful parts; good flow Good word choice; few errors in mechanics; good sentences Good quality presentation; nice visuals; respectable work Proposals/positions presented clearly; reasonable case presented Superb organization & flow; parts clearly support whole; labeling effective Excellent word choice and sentences; no distracting errors in mechanics Excellent presentation, visuals, overall appearance; communicates top quality Positions, proposals, requests stated strongly; supported well; persuasive case presented Intermediate Level (3) High Level (5) Information presented tentatively; arguments missing or weak Quality of Design Process Factor Low Level (1) Problem Scope and Definition Few, weak design criteria; Adequate design criteria, Diverse, measurable criteria, lacks key technical and/or technical & nontechnical* technical & nontechnical* nontechnical* constraints; constraints; considers client constraints; focus on client little concern for client needs & costs needs, societal issues Concept Few ideas & sources; Several ideas & sources; Many, creative ideas & sources; Generation & selection with minimal decisions made from decisions based on multiple Selection analysis, few factors established criteria and well-defined criteria and considered in decisions some analysis thorough analysis Analysis & Little or no analysis in Adequate analysis for Careful analysis to support all Decision decision making; scarce decisions; adequate use of critical decisions; skillful use of Making use of engineering tools tools and analysis proper tools and methods Product Single design, model, or Model or prototype made Model or prototype refined Development prototype made; no with few or only minor repeatedly; distinct generations significant refinements refinements produced Testing and No or minimal testing; no Some experimentation; Effective experiments; data Experiments structured experiments; data variability recognized; variability addressed ; results results only stated results casually interpreted carefully, correctly interpreted Business Little attention to cost Costs considered and Life cycle costs minimized in Issues issues; no cost analysis reflected in solution; low solution; time-value of money & done for solution initial & operational costs business issues addressed *Include most of these: Economic, environmental, sustainability, manufacturability, ethical, health and safety, social, and political. Quality of Design Solution Factor Technical Soundness Societal Acceptance Low Level (1) Intermediate Level (3) High Level (5) Meets few expectations of clients; significant flaws prevent implementation Has significant drawbacks to society or does not make business sense Performs to meet most expectations of clients; can be made and supported Meets societal norms; may be competitive with existing solutions Performance highly impresses clients; quick transition for fabrication and support Highly attractive to society; offers significant potential as a competitive business solution Worksheet: Performance Criteria for Written Reports Edit this table to reflect changes in factors or descriptions of performance at different levels. Also place an “O” along the left-to-right level scale to indicate your team’s estimated current level for each factor and an “X” to indicate your target for the end of this project. Quality of Writing Factor Organization & Structure Language & Mechanics Appearance & Format Confidence & Persuasion Low Level ( 1) Intermediate Level (3) High Level (5) Lacks rational flow; parts not reasoned, not connected to whole Poor word choice; spelling & syntax errors; poor sentences Shoddy work; implies lack of quality; poor visuals Organization moderately effective; useful parts; good flow Good word choice; few errors in mechanics; good sentences Good quality presentation; nice visuals; respectable work Proposals/positions presented clearly; reasonable case presented Superb organization & flow; parts clearly support whole; labeling effective Excellent word choice and sentences; no distracting errors in mechanics Excellent presentation, visuals, overall appearance; communicates top quality Positions, proposals, requests stated strongly; supported well; persuasive case presented Intermediate Level (3) High Level (5) Information presented tentatively; arguments missing or weak Quality of Design Process Factor Low Level ( 1) Problem Scope and Definition Few, weak design criteria; Adequate design criteria, Diverse, measurable criteria, lacks key technical and/or technical & nontechnical* technical & nontechnical* nontechnical* constraints; constraints; considers client constraints; focus on client little concern for client needs & costs needs, societal issues Concept Few ideas & sources; Several ideas & sources; Many, creative ideas & sources; Generation & selection with minimal decisions made from decisions based on multiple Selection analysis, few factors established criteria and well-defined criteria and considered in decisions some analysis thorough analysis Analysis & Little or no analysis in Adequate analysis for Careful analysis to support all Decision decision making; scarce decisions; adequate use of critical decisions; skillful use of Making use of engineering tools tools and analysis proper tools and methods Product Single design, model, or Model or prototype made Model or prototype refined Development prototype made; no with few or only minor repeatedly; distinct generations significant refinements refinements produced Testing and No or minimal testing; no Some experimentation; Effective experiments; data Experiments structured experiments; data variability recognized; variability addressed ; results results only stated results casually interpreted carefully, correctly interpreted Business Little attention to cost Costs considered and Life cycle costs minimized in Issues issues; no cost analysis reflected in solution; low solution; time-value of money & done for solution initial & operational costs business issues addressed *Include most of these: Economic, environmental, sustainability, manufacturability, ethical, health and safety, social, and political. Quality of Design Solution Factor Technical Soundness Societal Acceptance Low Level ( 1) Intermediate Level (3) High Level (5) Meets few expectations of clients; significant flaws prevent implementation Has significant drawbacks to society or does not make business sense Performs to meet most expectations of clients; can be made and supported Meets societal norms; may be competitive with existing solutions Performance highly impresses clients; quick transition for fabrication and support Highly attractive to society; offers significant potential as a competitive business solution _____________________________________________________________ Activity: Planning a Conceptual Design Report Formal written reports describing conceptual designs are pivotal for gaining approval to initiate detail design efforts. This report presents to decision makers the design team’s proposed solution concept to address an important client or societal need. The team must convince project sponsors of the concept’s merits and their ability to produce a high quality final solution. In this activity, your team will specify the purpose and content of each part of a written conceptual design report. Objective: Develop specifications for a written conceptual design report prepared for a capstone engineering design project. Tasks 1. Assign team members roles to support this activity. 2. As a team, state and prioritize your goals for a written conceptual design report. Record this information on the Conceptual Design Report Planning worksheet. 3. For each report section listed in the worksheet table, rate its importance and identify report goals that it addresses. Identify those sections that are most important to a written conceptual design report. Deliverables 1. Team Reporter presents: a) A list of your team’s prioritized goals for a written conceptual design report The most important sections of a conceptual design report 2. Team Reflector reports: a) A strength of the team in this activity and how it improved team performance b) An area of improvement proposed for the team and a step toward that improvement An insight gained from this activity 3. Team homework (due at next class): Prepare a 1-to-2 page set of guidelines for a conceptual design report. Identify necessary report sections and content appropriate to each section. Also identify any important quality features (e.g., crispness of writing, strength of arguments) that should be exhibited in each section. Criteria for Success • • • Teams identify a comprehensive set of important goals for the conceptual design report. Teams identify the most important sections of conceptual design reports based on goals they help achieve. Teams evidence understanding of quality conceptual design reports. Resources • • • Personal experience in design and preparing technical reports Worksheet: Conceptual Design Report Planning 15 minutes of team discussion time Worksheet: Conceptual Design Report Planning Goals of Written Conceptual Design Report Priority Goal Statement Importance of Report Sections Identify importance (H/M/L) and goals addressed by each section of the report. Leave blank sections that are not relevant. Add important sections that are missing. Body Executive summary Background and research Objectives for project Concepts considered Decision making process Conceptual design description Detail design description Justification of design features Cost and business issues Development/implementation plan Conclusions Appendix – Supporting materials Engineering analysis Business analysis Detail drawings, photos Testing of prototype (experiments) Research reports, client surveys Gantt chart (timeline) for project Team credentials Other – add items as needed Importance Goals Addressed (priority no.) _____________________________________________________________ Activity: Planning a Detail Design Report The design phase of an engineering design project ends with a formal written detail design report, which documents the design solution and its supporting information. Design teams must communicate their designs effectively to provide those who implement the solutions all information needed for the next steps. In this activity, your team will consider the goals of details design reports and prepare report guidelines that support these goals. Objective: Develop guidelines for preparing formal written detail design reports for a capstone engineering design project. Tasks 1. Assign team members to roles that support this activity. 2. As a team, define the goals for a formal written detail design project report. List and prioritize these on the Detail Design Report Planning worksheet. 3. For each report section listed in the worksheet table, rate its importance and identify report goals it addresses. 4. Identify those sections that are most important to a formal detail design report. What content and qualities should each of them exhibit? Record this on the second page of the worksheet. Deliverables 1. The team Reporter presents: a) Your team’s priority goals for a written detail design report b) The most important sections of the report, their content and quality attributes 2. The team Reflector presents: a) The most challenging section of the detail design report to prepare, and why An insight you gained personally from this activity 3. Team homework (due next class): A 1-to-2 page set of guidelines for preparing a written detail design report for capstone design projects. Identify sections, content of each, and qualities that support its purpose. Criteria for Success • • • Teams identify a comprehensive set of goals for the detail design report. Teams identify important sections of detail design reports with content and quality attributes that support report goals. The team recognizes challenges to the preparation of quality detail design reports. Resources • • • Experiences with design and preparing technical reports Worksheet: Detail Design Report Planning 20 minutes of team discussion time Worksheet: Detail Design Report Planning Goals of Written Detail Design Report Priority Goal Statement Importance of Report Sections Identify importance (H/M/L) and goals addressed by each section of the detail design report. Leave blank sections that are not relevant. Add important sections that are missing. Body Executive summary Background and research Objectives for project Concepts considered Decision making process Conceptual design description Detail design description Justification of design features Cost and business issues Development/implementation plan Conclusions Appendix – Supporting materials Engineering analysis Business analysis Detail drawings, photos Testing of prototype (experiments) Research reports, client surveys Gantt chart (timeline) for project Team credentials Other – add items as needed Importance Goals Addressed (priority no.) Worksheet: Detail Design Report Planning (continued) Content and Qualities of Important Sections in a Detail Design Report Report Section Content Qualities _____________________________________________________________ Activity: Preparing Design Drawings Drawings are important to engineering design projects to communicate spatial and relational information. Drawings of systems and components, processes, or representations of phenomena enable viewers to visualize information that supports achievement of project goals. In this activity, your team will explore the roles of drawings in capstone design reporting and develop guidelines for quality drawings. Objective: Develop guidelines for preparing drawings to support achievement of important capstone design project goals. Tasks 1. Assign team members to roles that support this activity. 2. As a team, compile a list of types of drawings that could be useful in your capstone design project. Prioritize them for your project. Record this on the Drawing Features worksheet. 3. For your three or four top priority drawing types, define the function of those drawings and the features that make the drawing attractive and useful for the intended function. Include features such as line weight, colors, dimensions, tolerances, and definitions of notation. Record these on the worksheet. 4. Review the drawing tips and the two example figures on the Drawing Tips and Examples handout. Identify suggestions for improving each drawing. Deliverables 1. The team Reporter presents: a) The primary types of drawings expected in your design project reports b) Three essential features of drawings used in a design project report 2. The team Reflector presents: a) A strength of the team in this activity b) An area for team improvement, and how this can be achieved c) An insight you gained personally from this activity 3. Team homework (due next class): A 1-page set of guidelines for design report drawings, indicating overall guidelines and those specific to selected types of drawings. Criteria for Success • • • Teams are able to identify several drawing types important to design reports. Teams recognize quality features associated with different types of drawings. Team members gain new insights about the preparation of drawings for design reports. Resources • • • • Experiences with technical reports and drawings Worksheet: Drawing Features Handout: Drawing Tips and Examples 15 minutes of team discussion time Worksheet: Drawing Features Types of Drawings in Capstone Design Projects Priority Drawing Type Functions and Features of Drawings Drawing Type and Function Features for Function and Quality Handout: Drawing Tips and Examples Tips for Preparing Project Drawings • Establish drawing standards before starting; this will avoid redoing drawings later. • When work is divided among individuals, define interface requirements to ensure that parts • • • • • • • • • will be compatible. Use the correct tools for a job; if necessary, learn how to use new tools. Use “light” versions of software when possible, shortening learning curve and reducing cost. Backup work frequently so valuable effort is not lost. Make drawings available to team members to keep them informed and to enable them to use drawings for their work; web access is convenient. Label and date drawings so that progress can be documented and ideas can be recalled. Text included in drawings should be sized to be readable in the intended use of the drawing. Use line weight, colors, shading, orientation, labels, etc. to focus attention where desired. Drawings used as figures in written reports should be labeled with figure number and title to make references to drawings explicit. When presenting data graphically, show all data necessary to give a true picture of the conditions represented by the data. If mean (average) data is used, include “error bars” to depict the standard deviation (or other measure of variability) for the mean. Example Drawings Cum ulative Net Revenue $300,000 Amount ($) $250,000 $200,000 Figure 1. Estimated cumulative net revenue for XYZ System after $10,000 initial purchase cost. $150,000 $100,000 $50,000 $0 -$50,000 0 2 4 6 8 10 Years C C C P P P P i i i i t t t t #1 #2 #3 0 2 4 2 Figure 2. Camera positions and image planes in relation to target points. _____________________________________________________________ [IR]: Providing Feedback on Formal Reports Report writers benefit from timely, focused feedback on their design reports. The many sections of design reports, varied outcomes being assessed in the reports, and subjectivity of report assessments present challenges for giving quick and useful feedback. This set of materials provides you tools to help you provide valuable feedback to guide student improvement in preparing formal written design reports. Objective: Explore and refine a tool for giving students valuable feedback on design team formal written reports. Tasks 1. Identify your goals for design team formal written reports: • Develop student skills for preparing professional quality written reports • Document students’ achievement of program educational outcomes (written communication, design graphics, use of tools) • Communicate to external audiences the engineering capabilities of students • Obtain sponsor/client approval of design project continuation and support 2. Define your intent with regard to providing students feedback: • Individual or team or class feedback • Overall performance or feedback on detailed factors of performance • Performance ratings or suggestions for improvement 3. Adopt a standard format that makes your feedback effort efficient and provides students valuable information. Begin by reviewing the Example Written Report Feedback handout (attached) and determining its strengths and areas needing refinement to meet your needs. A blank form is attached as well for your revision and adoption. Deliverables 1. Create an Written Report Feedback Form to fit your needs. 2. Begin using your feedback form to give students valuable feedback on their written reports. 3. Identify an insight you gained from this process of preparing to give feedback on written design reports. Criteria for Success • • • You identify what is most important as feedback to students regarding their written reports. You establish an efficient but effective tool for providing feedback on written design reports. You learn from your preparation efforts. Resources • • • Your experience with technical report writing and providing feedback Handout: Example Written Report Feedback Handout: Written Report Feedback form Handout: Written Report Feedback The following is feedback provided to a team after submittal of their detail design written report. _________ Detail Design Draft Report Feedback Team/Project: XYZ Widget Project Date Received: 3/10/2003 Quality of Writing Factor Organization & Structure Language & Mechanics Appearance & Format Confidence & Persuasion Low Level (1) Intermediate Level (3) High Level (5) Lacks rational flow; parts not reasoned, not connected to whole Poor word choice; spelling & syntax errors; poor sentences Shoddy work; implies lack of quality; poor visuals Organization moderately effective; useful parts; good flow Good word choice; few errors in mechanics; good sentences Good quality presentation; nice visuals; respectable work Proposals/positions presented clearly; reasonable case presented Superb organization & flow; parts clearly support whole; labeling effective Excellent word choice and sentences; no distracting errors in mechanics Excellent presentation, visuals, overall appearance; communicates top quality Positions, proposals, requests stated strongly; supported well; persuasive case presented Intermediate Level (3) High Level (5) Information presented tentatively; arguments missing or weak Quality of Design Process Factor Low Level (1) Problem Scope and Definition Few, weak design criteria; Adequate design criteria, Diverse, measurable criteria, lacks key technical and/or technical & nontechnical* technical & nontechnical* nontechnical* constraints; constraints; considers client constraints; focus on client little concern for client needs & costs needs, societal issues Concept Few ideas & sources; Several ideas & sources; Many, creative ideas & sources; Generation & selection with minimal decisions made from decisions based on multiple Selection analysis, few factors established criteria and well-defined criteria and considered in decisions some analysis thorough analysis Analysis & Little or no analysis in Adequate analysis for Careful analysis to support all Decision decision making; scarce decisions; adequate use of critical decisions; skillful use of Making use of engineering tools tools and analysis proper tools and methods Product Single design, model, or Model or prototype made Model or prototype refined Development prototype made; no with few or only minor repeatedly; distinct generations significant refinements refinements produced Testing and No or minimal testing; no Some experimentation; Effective experiments; data Experiments structured experiments; data variability recognized; variability addressed ; results results only stated results casually interpreted carefully, correctly interpreted Business Little attention to cost Costs considered and Life cycle costs minimized in Issues issues; no cost analysis reflected in solution; low solution; time-value of money & done for solution initial & operational costs business issues addressed *Include most of these: Economic, environmental, sustainability, manufacturability, ethical, health and safety, social, and political. Quality of Design Solution Factor Technical Soundness Societal Acceptance Low Level (1) Intermediate Level (3) High Level (5) Meets few expectations of clients; significant flaws prevent implementation Has significant drawbacks to society or does not make business sense Performs to meet most expectations of clients; can be made and supported Meets societal norms; may be competitive with existing solutions Performance highly impresses clients; quick transition for fabrication and support Highly attractive to society; offers significant potential as a competitive business solution Comments to Guide Report Improvement General Comments The report was received on time and complete. All key sections are provided. Strengths of the report and impacts of these strengths: Your report has the appearance of a professional document. The cover and contents are attractive; the report is easy to follow. Visuals are clear, well constructed to make a point, and effective. Sentence structure and mechanics are good, not detracting from the report. These qualities communicate professionalism to the reader. This lends credibility to your project in the eyes of the reader. Your executive summary was especially well written. This grabs the reader’s attention and provides strong incentive to read on. You also set their expectations that the design solution does indeed meet their needs. Great job! Areas of improvement for the report and ways to achieve them: Writing style varies from section to section. This suggests that multiple writers have contributed (which is good), but it is noticeable to the reader. You could alleviate this concern by having one member of your team serve as the editor-in-chief to bring consistency. It also would help if, when planning the report, you agree on the person from which the report is written, and you all write in that person. Your concept generation section is a bit brief. It does not show the scope of ideas you considered, perhaps implying that you accepted the first good idea you found. A brief statement about the number or range of ideas considered would give readers more confidence that you had considered all relevant ideas. Your economic analysis section leaves the reader wondering about the economic viability of your solution. Data in the appendix shows that the project has significant economic benefit from the start, but this is not clear from the report body. You would strengthen your case by adding a prominent graph of projected expenses and revenues over time in the body of the report. Remember that decisions are made by considering cost as well as performance. Feedback on Written Design Report Team/Project: Date Received: Report: Note that X marks the level of your performance for each factor evidenced in your written report. Quality of Writing Factor Organization & Structure Language & Mechanics Appearance & Format Confidence & Persuasion Low Level (1) Intermediate Level (3) High Level (5) Lacks rational flow; parts not reasoned, not connected to whole Poor word choice; spelling & syntax errors; poor sentences Shoddy work; implies lack of quality; poor visuals Organization moderately effective; useful parts; good flow Good word choice; few errors in mechanics; good sentences Good quality presentation; nice visuals; respectable work Proposals/positions presented clearly; reasonable case presented Superb organization & flow; parts clearly support whole; labeling effective Excellent word choice and sentences; no distracting errors in mechanics Excellent presentation, visuals, overall appearance; communicates top quality Positions, proposals, requests stated strongly; supported well; persuasive case presented Intermediate Level (3) High Level (5) Information presented tentatively; arguments missing or weak Quality of Design Process Factor Low Level (1) Problem Scope and Definition Few, weak design criteria; Adequate design criteria, Diverse, measurable criteria, lacks key technical and/or technical & nontechnical* technical & nontechnical* nontechnical* constraints; constraints; considers client constraints; focus on client little concern for client needs & costs needs, societal issues Concept Few ideas & sources; Several ideas & sources; Many, creative ideas & sources; Generation & selection with minimal decisions made from decisions based on multiple Selection analysis, few factors established criteria and well-defined criteria and considered in decisions some analysis thorough analysis Analysis & Little or no analysis in Adequate analysis for Careful analysis to support all Decision decision making; scarce decisions; adequate use of critical decisions; skillful use of Making use of engineering tools tools and analysis proper tools and methods Product Single design, model, or Model or prototype made Model or prototype refined Development prototype made; no with few or only minor repeatedly; distinct generations significant refinements refinements produced Testing and No or minimal testing; no Some experimentation; Effective experiments; data Experiments structured experiments; data variability recognized; variability addressed ; results results only stated results casually interpreted carefully, correctly interpreted Business Little attention to cost Costs considered and Life cycle costs minimized in Issues issues; no cost analysis reflected in solution; low solution; time-value of money & done for solution initial & operational costs business issues addressed *Include most of these: Economic, environmental, sustainability, manufacturability, ethical, health and safety, social, and political. Quality of Design Solution Factor Technical Soundness Societal Acceptance Low Level (1) Intermediate Level (3) High Level (5) Meets few expectations of clients; significant flaws prevent implementation Has significant drawbacks to society or does not make business sense Performs to meet most expectations of clients; can be made and supported Meets societal norms; may be competitive with existing solutions Performance highly impresses clients; quick transition for fabrication and support Highly attractive to society; offers significant potential as a competitive business solution Comments to Guide Report Improvement General Comments Strengths of the report and impacts of these strengths: Areas of improvement for the report and ways to achieve them: