CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE Learner’s Book answers 1 Nature and humans 1.1 1 • 1 3 Notes will vary, but may include the following ideas: • 2 The leopard a Impressions of nature: nature is permanent – the mountains are always there; nature is beautiful and pleasant – the sun rising and the sounds of the birds; nature is powerful and impressive – the children climb ‘up to the clouds’; nature is peaceful. It is also a place to escape to (fewer thoughts) Characters: Praveen and Ravi seem good, as they are innocently enjoying a country hike and appreciating nature; Toad and Stinger come across as bad because of the shot which may have harmed the leopard. Summaries should include the following ideas: • Praveen and Ruby are trekking up a mountain in the peaceful early morning. • They see the remains of a campfire. • They hear twigs cracking. • A shot suddenly fires. • They hide, then crawl towards the sound of men’s voices. • They see three men and a leopard. b The tone changes on Praveen raises his finger to his lips. c The tone becomes more tense, as the characters are suddenly fearful instead of relaxed. The action makes the reader more aware of the danger / that something bad may happen. 4 Learners’ answers will vary, but may include the following ideas: • The use of verbs in the present tense makes the story more immediate, as the events are happening as we read. • The writer creates a relaxed and pleasant scene of the dawn through present tense phrases such as The sun rises and the air fills as they are climbing up to the clouds. • As a result, the shot comes as a shock, disturbing the peaceful scene. There is a sense of the noise completely disrupting the peace as it rings out and echoes . . . disturbing the stillness. Learners’ answers will vary, but may include the following ideas: • The leopard is presented as a helpless victim due to its injury and limp, which makes it more unfair when the men shoot it. It thuds to the ground, which emphasises its dead weight and all its power gone. Its legs are spread in front of it makes it sound inelegant and lacks respect for such a magnificent creature. The velvet sheen of its coat is ruined by the bullet wound. • The men sound like villains as they tower over it, showing their power, but clasping their rifles makes them seem weak as they rely on weapons. Their lack of remorse makes them seem evil. • The narrator uses reactions to show how connected she feels to the leopard. She screams instinctively as it is shot and then collapses against a tree in shock. Her anger is obvious as the mountain roars with me, and this makes it clear that she thinks it is a crime against nature. Despite Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE her fear, she gathers herself to take a picture to use as evidence against the men. • • 5 When the leopard has been shot, the writer uses descriptive words to show its beauty. The coat is covered in black rosettes and has a velvet sheen, which sounds luxurious. The verb ‘snarling’ shows the leopard is warning the men despite being injured. The verb limp shows that the leopard is injured and vulnerable so makes the shooting seem more cruel and cowardly. The verb thuds shows the dead weight of it as it falls. The narrator is horrified, shown by her instinct to scream and collapse. 3 cradle: to hold gently 4 And the mountain roars with me suggests that not only Ruby but also nature itself is angry at the death of the leopard. The mountain is silent apart from howling wind. This sentence ending the extract reflects the narrator’s surprise at the discovery of the cub but also her need to stay silent to protect it. 5 Learners’ answers will vary. 1.2 foliage: greenery (plants, shrubs, leaves, etc.) Learners’ answers will vary, but may include the following ideas: • The story shows how little the men care for the natural world, as they shoot a leopard and feel no remorse. • The writer creates a beautiful setting in the early morning with the air filled with birds and tweets and then shows how they ruin it by needlessly shooting a defenceless creature. • When the narrator says the mountain roars with me she is showing that nature is angry and disturbed by the shooting. • When the leopard is dead, the men do not feel guilt, instead looking at its dead body admiringly. • However, Ruby’s actions show that not all people have bad attitudes to the natural world as she is devastated by the shooting of the leopard and stands up to the men bravely. She also saves the cub and her heart feels ready to burst with love showing how deeply she cares for it. The mysterious figure 1 Learners’ answers will vary. 2 Audio scripts should include details of the tone in which the characters say lines and sound effects to allow the listening audience to understand what is happening. For example: ruby: (shouting urgently) Get back, Praveen! toad: (yelling) Give me that camera! (Sound effect of camera being smashed against a rock and Ruby howling) ruby: (desperately) No! All my photos are stored on there. What have you done? toad: (threateningly) What are you doing out here? garian: (angrily) Who are you working for? Are you taking pictures of me? 1.3 ruby: 1 The eagle is described as isolated but powerful as he is high up. He sounds old and wise. His flight is dramatic. Learners should identify these ideas in their own words. 2 a (quickly) We’re here to take pictures of wildlife. I’m hoping to be a wildlife photographer. (Awkward pause) ruby: (hissed) You killed it. You cowards. toad: I’ve had enough of this. Get them! garian: Wait. Who the hell is up there with a gun pointing at us? (Sound effect of a gun being loaded and clicked above) 2 The wildness of eagles Techniques used include: • personification (He clasps the crag with crooked hands / the wrinkled sea) • hyperbole (close to the sun) • simile (like a thunderbolt he falls). Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE b Answers should include explanations of the techniques identified in part a, with examples and explanations of their effect on the reader. For example: • 3 4 5 6 3 The poetry of Tu Fu Notes on the poet’s life: Main points Subsidiary points Born CE 712 in China Born in Henan province Mother and elder brother died when he was young Had a number of siblings Started writing poems as a teenager Earliest surviving poem is CE 735 Failed the Imperial Exam in CE 735 Meant he couldn’t be a civil servant Met the poet Li Po in CE 744 Studied history and literature Married in CE 752 Had five children War broke out and famine in CE 755 Youngest child died and 35 million people died in ten years Moved around China for years and worked for the emperor Wanted to return home to the Henan province but didn’t get there Beautiful coat Wrote his best poems at the end of his life Wrote 400 poems at this time Golden eagle / weighs 7 kg / fearsome hunter Died in Tanzhou at age 58 Higher into the Hills Crooked hands Razor-sharp talons He stands Impressive hooded eagle He watches Big bird / two-metre wingspan Like a thunderbolt he falls Fly at speeds Answers may include some of the following ideas: • 1 The eagle is described as a powerful but isolated figure. The alliteration ‘He clasps the crag with crooked hands’ makes him sound old and wise as he surveys the world from high up ‘close to the sun in lonely lands’. This exaggerates how high he is. The mighty sea is personified and made to sound weak compared to the eagle, as it is personified as ‘wrinkled’ yet it ‘crawls’. His sudden descending flight is powerfully described using the simile ‘like a thunderbolt’ as he swoops down. ‘The Eagle’ • 1.4 2 The language used in the poem is more figurative. The poet uses alliteration (clasps the crag with crooked hands), similes (like a thunderbolt) and personification (wrinkled sea beneath him crawls). In the prose text, the language is plainer and offers more facts such as measurements like two-metre wingspan. Learners’ answers will vary, but learners should consider which text is more exciting/ creative/imaginative and which is more factual/informative. Learners’ answers will vary. 3 a He means they are carried along by the water. b The spiders are ruthless, like people working in business who get what they want. c It means he does not like the way the world works and has lots of negative feelings. Learners’ answers will vary, but may include the following ideas: • It means that animal behaviour as described has equivalents in human society. • It is mostly to do with some people ruthlessly taking advantage of others and exploiting their weaknesses. Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE 4 5 Discussions may include the following ideas: • How varied sentences are used: longer sentences using enjambment (for example, lines 1 and 2 put stress on Long time). • Shorter sentences: It is quiet too and I am happy here often used to convey contentment. • Longer sentence beginning When someone calls . . . indicates action and is more positive in tone. Shows the healing qualities of the house by the river. • Last two lines are humble – two short sentences. • The way that the lines are split means there are pauses and the poem is slower in places. This reflects the ill health and slow pace of life of the narrator. 4 Nature as aggressive: nature is presented as aggressive in ‘Loneliness’, as the hawk is hovering to catch birds, and the spider spins a web to catch prey. However, ‘Visitors’ presents nature as much more peaceful as the house by the river is quiet and he feels rested. • Nature can have a positive effect on humans: in ‘Visitors’, nature is seen to offer peace and tranquillity, which improves the narrator’s health – he is brighter and more rested. A simple life is presented. However, in ‘Loneliness’, nature is not presented as positive, as the narrator is clearly unhappy and lonely. • Nature is beautiful: in both poems, nature is presented as beautiful in some ways. The white gulls float on the stream is peaceful as they are unaware of the hawk above them. Likewise, although the spider’s web is deadly, it is also in the beautiful dew which sparkles in the grass. There is less description in ‘Visitors’ but there is some beauty suggested in the river and my thatched hut because it is simple and quiet. • The voice of poem is sad: the narrator seems sad in ‘Loneliness’ as he does not like the way the world works and seems to feel isolated from it. However, in ‘Visitors’, the narrator seems content because he feels better and enjoys the simple life he leads. • In ‘Visitors’, the narrator seems thankful for the simple life by the river and the joys of fresh vegetables given in friendship. The use of possession in ‘my straw hat’, ‘my thatched hut’ and ‘my son’ add to the idea of simple things in life make him happy at this stage of his life. His house, his simple possession and his family are what’s important to him now. In ‘Loneliness’, however, the narrator does not seem thankful, as he feels isolated and lonely. Discussions may include the following ideas: • 6 • Effect nature has on humans: ‘Loneliness’ presents nature rather negatively whereas in ‘Visitors’ nature is presented as peaceful and healing. In ‘Loneliness’, the white gulls are unsuspecting and unaware that they are about to be pounced on by a predator. This is likened to the behaviour of human society as though we reflect nature. This poem exposes the cruelty of nature and humans. In ‘Visitors’, nature is calm and soothing. It has the effect of making humans kind and hospitable. • The viewpoints: The narrator in ‘Loneliness’ seems bitter and resentful. He/she is lonely and isolated and seems to be blaming the world. The narrator is unhappy. The narrator in ‘Visitors’ seems gentle and accepting of their ill health. There is a sense that the narrator is grateful for the small things and does not have any bitterness or anger. The narrator is happy. • The purposes: ‘Loneliness’ seems to be warning the reader to be more aware of the cruelty and ruthlessness in the world. ‘Visitors’ seems to be asking the readers to consider the benefits of peace and solitude. It extols the virtues of a simple and uncomplicated life. Answers may include some of the following ideas: 7 Answers should be clearly split into preparation notes and an extended answer of 150 words. Answers should choose clear examples of language and explain how they present nature in the poem. Some of the following examples may be included: spring in the mountains; chopping wood echoes; silent peaks; icy; snow; sunset; stony mountain pass; aura of gold; silver ore; gentle; tamed; forgotten, hidden; empty boat, floating, adrift. Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE 1.5 1 Destroying the planet Learners’ answers will vary, but may include some of the following ideas: First text Second text No one is to blame fully as climate change is natural. Humans are to blame. Main points Earth is changing naturally. Earth does change over time, but the changes are happening faster due to humans. Humans cannot influence Earth’s movement. Greenhouse gasses have increased, causing Earth to heat up. 2 3 5 The angle of the Earth changes the climate. Earth is heating up ten times faster than ever before. The way the Earth orbits the sun influences climate. Ice is melting. Seasons change as a result of the Earth changing its position. Sea levels are rising. Climate change happens naturally. There is more extreme weather. Humans are victims of climate change not the cause. 97% of scientists blame humans for climate change. • In the first text, many of the main points are the first sentence in each paragraph. • In the second text, they are sometimes the final sentence in the paragraph but also in the bulleted list. • The first text only uses a headline. It is quite a formal text. The second text uses a headline and subheadings. It also uses bullet points. It is a less formal text and perhaps has appeal to a wider readership so helps the reader find their way around the text more. Example Purpose Although it’s likely that . . . Introduces a contrasting idea. However, it also works . . . Introduces a new part of the argument. . . . therefore, it’s a natural process Concludes a point Hence, the ice caps melt Concludes a point 4 5 Answers should include examples for some of the following ideas: • Comparison of the more formal language used in Quotation A to create a detailed explanation. In contrast, Quotation B uses more straightforward vocabulary, but also more emotive language (suffers suffer). • Use of semi-colon in the first quotation to link cause and effect. Use of capitalisation of FACT in second quotation. • Complex sentence structures in the first quotation compared to simple sentences in the second. • Exclamation marks are used to make the writing more dramatic. Answers should be a clear rewording of the main ideas of the article in more informal language. The second article should be used to generate ideas about vocabulary, punctuation and sentence types. Answers to Activities 2 and 4 should be used to prepare this answer. Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE 1.6 1 Tsunami • Answers may include some of the following examples: epicentre: a precise point 5 The second sentence is more dramatic, as it starts with the house shaking. This gives the idea of the three children more impact as it is clear they are in danger. The first sentence is just factual and lacks excitement. 6 Learners’ answers will vary but should use the example from Activity 4 as guidance. residents: inhabitants constructed: built precaution: safeguard evacuated: left because of danger designated: nominated anguish: anxiety/torment congregating: gathering 2 Check your progress 1 Past tense verbs look back on what has happened. Present tense verbs make the action more immediate and exciting. For example, ‘the lion roared aggressively’ and ‘the lion roars aggressively’. 2 A drama script is written as a dialogue with additional instructions such as stage directions, whereas prose writing is written as continuous prose. 3 simile, metaphor, personification 4 The punctuation in poetry can create pauses when lines have a punctuation mark at the end (end-stopped) or where punctuation is used in the middle of the line (caesura). Poets also use enjambment (where one line continues into another line with no punctuation) to create a sense of movement or change in pace. 5 Learners’ answers will vary, but an example would be: ‘I do not like cakes because they are too sugary, so I eat fruit instead.’ 6 Looking at the words around it to work out the meaning in context. Answers may include some of the following examples (timings may vary slightly): 7.55 pm – the house began to shake 7.58 pm – the house stopped shaking 7.59 pm – the sea started to rise and crash into the coastline about 2 metres high 8.00 pm – they went into the bedroom 8.05 pm – they evacuated the house and went to the designated secure zone 8.15 pm – at the community’s designated secure zone 3.15 am – still at the secure zone. The electricity cuts out in the town 3 Learners’ answers will vary. 4 Notes may include some of the following ideas: • • 6 There is more focus on fear in the second quotation: absolute fear . . . Men, women, children: all of them. There is more variety of sentence structures in the second quotation as it is longer and more detailed. This allows it to speed up the pace. Looking up the origins of a word (its etymology) to discover its meaning. The choice of vocabulary in the second quotations emphasises the sense of speed and urgency: sprinted; ran for their lives, scrambled, hurtled . . . as fast as. Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE 2 ‘Grandmother’s Song’ 2.1 1 2 3 4 Life in the village Answers may include some of the following examples: • The setting is dramatic and contrasting: high mountains, gentle slopes. • The setting is beautiful: glistening rocks. • The use of colour: emerald green trees, new green shoots, milk-white lilies. The patterns link the present with the future. For example, They planted . . . then they watched as new green shoots sprang . . . This links the work of planting with the result in the future of the crops growing. Also They gathered . . . then took them to market . . . again shows the cycle of work developing into the next stage. It shows actions have results. Learners’ answers will vary, but may suggest that the comparison to delicate blossoms suggests that the granddaughter is young and innocent, pretty and sweet. 1 Granddaughter Stood proud and tall Delicate as the blossoms Downy cheeks stretched smooth and plump Tiny, bow lips Eyes were deep and warm brown . . . sad but also kind Wide-open eyes . . . black and clear Powerful legs and sturdy feet . . . rooted her to the earth As she played she trembled Arms were strong and her hands graceful She shook and shivered Prediction: the grandmother may get older and weaker; the granddaughter may get stronger and braver. 5 Answers may include some of the following examples: 2.2 Grandmother Answers may offer explanations of some of the following examples: • as delicate as the blossoms • wide-open eyes shone black and clear • tiny, bow lips looked as if she ate strawberries all day long • her heart fluttered • she shook . . . like dry leaves rustling in a sack on a windy afternoon • she shivered and shook as though it were a huge bear. Making progress Learners’ answers will vary but may include some of the following ideas: Paragraph What happens What it shows 1 Granddaughter returns; grandmother hugs her, sings to her, tells her she knows she is scared. Grandmother cares deeply for the girl; understands her. Granddaughter still has to get over her feelings of fear. 2 Grandmother holds granddaughter on her lap and strokes her head. She tells her that she is stroking trust into her from her female ancestors. It shows that she wants her granddaughter to follow in the footsteps of her strong female relatives. (continued) 7 Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE Paragraph What happens What it shows 3 Granddaughter feels filled with warmth, and she relaxes and falls asleep. It shows the strong effect that her grandmother’s words have on her. 4 A group of children run up to granddaughter noisily and ask her the way to the river. She is afraid but does not show it. She points them in the right direction. It shows that she is getting braver and facing up to her fears. 5 In the evening she tells grandmother and she is pleased with her. She tells her she has courage and has made progress. It shows that grandmother encourages her and knows that she will take small steps. 2 Learners’ answers will vary, but should use some of the ideas noted in Activity 1 using examples from the text to illustrate the ideas in the third column. 3 Learners’ answers will vary, but should include explanations of clear examples that show the power and effect of the grandmother’s direct speech. Examples might be: • • • 8 Repeat of I can feel . . . shows her connection to her granddaughter is very powerful. Repeat of the word trust makes it feel as though she is implanting it in her granddaughter as though she is casting a spell. • Grandmother says that helping others makes you stronger and braver using similar words to when she said the world is frightening for those without courage earlier on. • The hummingbird allows granddaughter to move forward / make progress in her attempts to be braver. 2.3 Growing up 1 Learners perform the extract. Check that they speak with confidence and use non-verbal forms of expression. 2 a The word snarled makes the man sound very aggressive as we usually associate snarling with wild animals. b Muttered makes it sound as though he is annoyed at the granddaughter’s interference. Declaration of That’s progress! shows her positivity and pride in her granddaughter. 4 Learners’ answers will vary. 5 Learners’ paragraphs should include some of the following ideas: c The grandmother is delighted – shown by her short exclamatory sentence. • The hummingbird may remind the reader of granddaughter earlier in the story. d She sang makes her sound happy. • Granddaughter helps the hummingbird in the same way that her grandmother has helped her. 3 The dialogue should include details of the tone in which the characters say lines. Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE 4 Answers may include some of the following ideas: Example of figurative language Meaning and effect Trembling granddaughter sensed a strange pride pour through her body. Personification is used to compare the feeling of pride to a liquid – ‘pour’ suggests a large, fast-moving quantity. The effect of this is to show the reader how much the granddaughter has developed from a hesitant girl to one whose positive emotions now move freely and quickly through her. She stroked trust and courage, skill and dignity into trembling granddaughter. A metaphor is used to show how grandmother’s actions have a positive effect on granddaughter. She understood well the language of grandmother’s hands. The metaphor is continued as grandmother’s stroking communicates clearly to her. 5 Key events: showing the children the way to the river; helping the hummingbird; helping the boy accused of stealing. 6 a Learners’ answers will vary. b Learners’ endings may include some of the following ideas: 1 Lights the fire. (Links to her grandmother keeping her warm as a child in Extract 3.) Boils water and cooks for her. (Links to the grandmother teaching her to plant and gather food in Extract 1.) Washes and brushes her hair. (Links to her grandmother stroking her head as a child in Extract 3.) Massages her feet and hands. (Links to the description of her grandmother’s sturdy feet in Extract 1. Links to her grandmother stroking her as a child.) Walks holding her arm to support her. (Links to the description of the grandmother’s powerful legs in Extract 1.) 2 a It symbolises grandmother dying and leaving granddaughter. b Grief striking like lightning; trembling like a raging storm; crying like a river. c The writer used these images because they represent the power of grief – it is a natural and strong emotion that cannot be controlled easily. The reader feels sympathy for granddaughter and empathises with her grief. 3 Learners’ answers will vary, but should link back to the idea expressed in Session 2.3 Activity 6 b. 4 a Spanish and North American b It amazes him. c independence from Spain • Grandmother gets older and more frail, so granddaughter has to look after her. d decorate buildings with flowers, play sports games and have parades (also, firework displays) • Granddaughter continues to face and overcome challenges, making more and more progress. e guitars and drums (also trumpets) f He identifies with his cultural heritage. • 9 2.4Climbing the mountains alone Granddaughter faces a very serious challenge where she has to act very bravely to save her grandmother. 5 Learners’ answers will vary. 6 Answers should give a clear personal response to the story and discuss how the events affected them as a reader. They should include some explanations of the story’s wider messages and explore the main theme: the Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE importance of human touch in encouraging well-being, confidence and trust. 2.5 1 a b 2 Celebrating grandparents We are influenced by our older relatives as children, and we in turn influence those who come after us. Main points Subsidiary points from Poland tall and handsome captain in the army looked good in his uniform chose to take his wife and both their families to safety abroad Listening to children helps them understand what they are feeling deep inside. the Russians took over the part of Poland he lived in had to make a difficult decision used cars, trains and walking to get to England She is showing love and protection through ‘scooping her up’ and ‘hugging her’. • Sitting her ‘on her lap’ and stroking her ‘like a cat’ is soothing and shows she is giving her attention and love. • She has learnt to care and show tenderness from the way that her grandmother has shown it to her so the cycle continues. • This shows that through her grandmother’s loving touch she builds her granddaughter’s confidence and character. 6 • This shows that the love is cyclical and the granddaughter repays the grandmother’s love. 2.6 Comparing texts used his money to buy train tickets for the family made his way across Europe for a month to reach England 1 This shows that because they were so physically close, she can still feel her grandmother’s presence. • Learners’ answers should include a plan, organisational features and use formal language. Discussions will vary, but may include: • The softness of her hair shows love and tenderness. • The delicacy of her head shows how frail she is. Human growth: instead of running away; that’s progress; this is progress; you stood tall between the earth and sky; her song went so deep; she grew up into a strong and confident woman; granddaughter has become a grandmother many times now. • The last line shows the cyclical nature of care in relationships. • The poem is a memory but is very detailed so is clearly an important one from the past. The cycle of life: held the hummingbird with the same tenderness as her grandmother had held her; this is my gift that I am stroking into you. It is also a gift of my grandmother; now granddaughter had children of her own. • The link between the hair and the silk of the wedding dress. • She is referred to as a widow so there is a hint of sadness from the past. • Her hair in the past was chestnut and thick. Shows the changes time brings. • My mother’s mother shows the generations. a But there is a photo of her / Sitting swathed in hair / That I imagine chestnut from the black and white, / Long enough to sit on. Quotations might be: • 10 5 Learners’ answers will vary. • • 3 4 • Memory: no one even remembered that she once ran from armadillos; Grandmother’s spirit is all around us. • Wisdom of older people: rooted her to the earth, like an ancient tree; I have to go on alone. 2 Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE b Answers may include some of the following: • 3 4 11 Granddaughter changes from being very nervous and timid to being brave and strong. Check your progress 1 through description of the location and the scenery, animals, people, buildings etc. 2 through direct speech; by describing their thoughts 3 by varying the tone, volume, pace, or emphasising words • As she is growing up grandmother uses her experiences to teach her to be brave. • She then looks after her grandmother when she is old. 4 any example of a folk story (including ‘Grandmother’s Song’) • She is devastated when grandmother dies but feels her influence and presence. She becomes a grandmother herself. 5 growing old; the cycle of life; developing as a person; the wisdom of age; the power of human touch 6 a simple storyline; a journey; characters who are good or bad • Both granddaughters are very loving to their grandmothers as they get old; both granddaughters like to touch and tend their grandmothers as a way of showing their love. • Both granddaughters learn about getting older and that inside the older person is their younger self; both granddaughters learn to respect old age. Paragraphs may explore some of the following ideas: • Her wet head felt delicate as a birdskull / Worn thin by waves of age: stresses her fragility and emphasises the effects of the aging process, as gradual but insistent like recurring waves. • Her downy cheeks stretched smooth and plump across wide cheekbones. Her eyes were deep and warm and brown: makes her sound soft and affectionate. Her eyes are sincere and imply she has great depth and sincerity. 5 All the conventions can be found in ‘Grandmother’s Song’ (the journey is a metaphorical one). 6 Learners’ answers will vary. Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE 3 Strange islands 1.1 1 The mystery of Oak Island 4 Learners’ answers may include: Michigan’s main men and coolest kids; local heroes; successful businessmen; if anyone can do it, the Lagina brothers can! 5 • Non-standard English includes: findin’ treasure!; unearthin’ the secrets of Oak Island; gettin’ their paws on Cap’n Kidd’s buried treasure; cool!; searchin’; Go get ’em, boys! • Explanations will vary, but should focus on the effects of the informality, acknowledging that the text is aimed at young readers. Answers should form useful notes of key points: 1799: Daniel McGinnis – found stones / evidence of tools / dug 9 metres / stopped due to strange feeling 1909: Gold Salvage Group – dug 34 metres / found nothing 1969: Triton Alliance – dug 72 metres / claimed camera recorded chests and tools / hole collapsed and project stopped 2006: Lagina brothers – findings include coin and sword but no treasure 2 They have spent a great deal of money but found very little so it was not worth it. 6 Comparisons should mention the following. • In the first article there is little emphasis on the brothers’ themselves, other than their names, whereas in the second, they are presented as local heroes. • The first article suggests that their progress has been disappointing and they have not achieved anything, whereas the second article calls their discoveries startling and thinks they are cool. • The first article suggests that they have wasted their money whereas the second describes them as successful businessmen and hunters instead. • The first article is saying they should give up whereas the second encourages them to continue with the treasure hunt. • The first article uses rather plain language describing their findings as ‘items, including a coin and a sword’ with phrases such as nothing like the huge hoard of treasure conveying the writer is unimpressed. In contrast, the second article uses more effusive language such as local heroes and Cool! to show that their actions are admirable and being celebrated. 3 Example Technique Comment an open secret in the world of treasurehunting oxymoron This explores the idea that everyone knew about Oak Island’s supposed treasure, but also that treasure hunting is full of mysteries and secrets. It makes it seem a challenge that everyone wants to overcome. Like a mag- simile net, it has drawn many people to it The island first captured people’s imagination almost 400 years ago personification This could be interpreted in two ways. Either the island is an attractive place, or it is a dangerous place that causes problems for treasure hunters – it traps them. hyperbole the whole world has been intrigued by the island 12 This shows that the lure of finding treasure is very powerful indeed. This exaggerates the sense of excitement generated by Oak Island, but also reflects the fact that finding treasure is a very attractive idea for most people. Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE 3.2 1 2 Strange islands Learners make notes from the audio. Island / country Key features Subsidiary features Strange feature Skorpios, Greece Sandy beaches Aristotle Onassis bought it in 1963 None Forests with 200 types of trees Large luxury resort built in 2018 In 2011, only 5 people were living there Celebrity parties used to be held there It has a helipad Okunoshima, Japan Full of tame rabbits but uninhabited by humans Used to be a chemical testing site There’s a museum dedicated to poison gas on the island Rabbits Most snakes are golden lancehead vipers Snakes Museum of poisonous gas Snake Island, Brazil The largest number of snakes in such a small place Uninhabited Illegal to land boats The island used to be inhabited by humans There was a lighthouse there until 1920 Poaching is a problem Island of the Dolls, Mexico 3 Situated in the Xochimilco canals Don Julian Santana Barrera is thought to have put the doll collection there over a There are hundreds of dolls 50-year period until 2000 placed on the island Short sentences and ellipsis (that’s right . . . dolls) creates a sense of disbelief. Question (creepy, eh?) invites reader to share sense of horror. change the landscape constantly. There’s only one solitary tree because the wind blows them all over! The island is known as ‘the graveyard of the Atlantic’ because so many ships have been wrecked there. You will not find many people who want to live in such a desolate place but there are lots of wild horses galloping around. Dashes (– or parts of dolls –) adds gruesome detail for shock effect. Strangeness rating: 2/5 – Too windy and lonely for us! Exclamation mark (or at least parts of dolls!) adds drama / a sense of horror. 4 Learners’ answers will vary, but should be modelled on the original text. Example answer: 5 Where? Canada What’s there? On Sable Island, near Halifax, you’ll be lucky not to be blown off your feet! Literally! The winds are so strong there that they Learners’ answers will vary. 3.3 Sable Island 13 Dolls 1 Treasure Island: Meeting Ben Gunn tint: colour out-topping: taller singly: on their own Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE clumps: grouped close together a gen’leman born than in these gen’leman of fortune. vegetation: foliage (leaves, trees, shrubs) sheer: steep jim: (confused) Well, I don’t understand one word that you’ve been saying. How am I to get on board? pedestal: platform ben: Learners’ answers will vary, but the maps should show details from the extract and from learners’ own imagination. (A noise in the distance) configuration: shape 2 3 4 a three years b Ben is very darkly sunburnt but has light eyes. c Marooned means left behind on an island with no way to escape. d Ben was left on the island after his ship landed there to find Flint’s treasure. After 12 days of looking for it, they went back to the ship and left him on the island alone. • • • 5 6 The way he refers to himself: ‘poor Ben Gunn’ shows he feels he has had a terrible deal. He always uses his full name – perhaps it has helped him remember his identity before being marooned. ben: jim: We need to keep left, left . . . keep to your left hand, mate . . . Jim! Under the trees! I’m coming with you! 4 Learners’ answers will vary. 3.5 Predictions will vary, but should use the information provided. 2 pitch-black: extremely dark palms: a type of tree with a tall vertical trunk and fern-like leaves on the top delicate crystal chimes: hanging glass pieces chinking together musically particles: small grains lulled: soothed nestled: snuggled hillocks: small mounds tide pools: large puddles of sea water left on the sand 3 a Learners’ answers will vary. 3 Learners’ answers will vary, but should be modelled on the original text. Sample answer: ben: Just you mention tell this to your squire, Jim. You say this: Gunn is a good man, and he puts a precious sight more confidence in Simon is missing his mother: I wish Mami were here. Maya is also missing her mother: Her heart ached. She is also missing her father: Tears welled up in her eyes at the thought of her father. Treasure Island: The play 2 Singing sand 1 Learners’ answers will vary. Learners perform the script. They have begun to fight! Follow me. ben: The use of contractions: ‘I’m’, ‘haven’t’, ‘you’re’, ‘here’s’, ‘let’s’ all informal and suitable for direct speech. 1 Hi! What’s that? (loud cannon fire erupts) Non-standard English: he uses words like ‘mate’, ‘these three years’, ‘so much I’ll tell you’ etc. Makes his dialect ‘apparent’ as it is not standard English. He also sounds uneducated and the language is very old fashioned such as ‘nigh on’. Monologues will vary, but should explore Ben’s feelings about being marooned by the other men. Details about the island should be used to support the ideas about food and shelter, as well as what he thought may happen. 3.4 14 If the worst come to the worst, we might try that after dark. They both get happier: suddenly Maya and Simon both felt more cheerful. b There is a jungle behind them and the sea before them. There are palm trees moving in the breeze at the edge of the beach. The sand seems to sing as it moves. Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE There are pools of water on the beach. • Helix seems to be warning Maya that she might not find help on Tamarind. • Helix seems to be very wary about what he says and is holding things back. There is a bright moon. c Answers may include some of the following ideas: • • • • Personification – muggy breath of the jungle – shows how hot and humid it is but also makes the jungle seem alive and mysterious. • Why he seems to doubt that they will finds their parents. • Why he is interested in the logbook and what he read in it. 15 Metaphor – little hillocks of moonlight – describing how the shapes of the sand look almost moonlike. Gives it a feeling of a dreamy otherworld. Simple: Maya knelt down ... pools. This simple sentence describes her movement concisely. Check your progress 1 Hyperbole is exaggeration. Example: ‘The whole world has heard about . . .’ 2 Writers use informal language with contractions, or deliberate misspelling to show how a word is pronounced. They also use dashes and exclamation marks. 3 He was left on the island three years earlier by the rest of the crew after they failed to find the treasure. Compound: The pools stretched out down the beach, and ... moon. This compound sentence gives an overview of the scene. Complex: As she watched ... jagged pieces. This complex sentence slows the writing down and allows the writer to develop a mysterious atmosphere through describing what is happening in detail. 6 Learners predict how the story might develop. He was scared as he watched the ship sail away and disappear. He made a shelter in a clump of bushes. He made a fire and drank seawater. He survived on berries and fruit. 4 Scripts are written and laid out as dialogue. Scripts have stage directions containing guidance for the actors on how to move or speak. Helix Scripts may contain sound effect details. 1 Learners’ answers will vary. 2 a desperately/loudly/angrily/petulantly b quietly/hopelessly/nervously c sincerely/sadly/wistfully Answers may include some of the following ideas: • Suggestions about why Helix is alone. Why Helix has told Maya things are different on the island than where she comes from. Answers should use the example as a guide. 3 • • 5 3.6 Answers may explore some of the following ideas: Metaphor – tears welled up – exaggerates the amount of tears and stresses her strong emotions. Answers should give a clear example of each sentence type with an appropriate explanation of its effectiveness. • 4 • • 4 Simile – like thousands of delicate crystal chimes – adds a magical feeling as though the island is enchanted. Helix appears to be thoughtful as he moves away with Maya but reassures her that they will keep her brother and sister in view. 5 Genre clues help the reader to anticipate what a story may be about and what kinds of things will happen, for example, fantasy, Science fiction. 6 Sound out the word by reading aloud each letter or syllable using phonetic knowledge. Use knowledge of word patterns, for example knowing that y on the end of a word becomes ies when pluralised. Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE 4 T his is the modern world 4.1 1 The birth of the internet Notes may include the following ideas: 1958: Advanced Research Projects Agency set up 1962: ARPA network created 1983: ARPAnet allowed National Science Foundation Network to use part of its network 1985: IT departments at US universities had computers connected 1989: the World Wide Web as we know it was created with the invention of http by Tim Berners-Lee 1995: internet available to the public at home. 2 Structural features and effects include: use of questions to arouse curiosity; chronological structure for clarity; use of dates creates a clear timeline; subheadings organises the material logically; final paragraph shifts in tone as it looks to the future. Images are included to add interest. 3 Learners’ answers will vary, but should address all bullet points and offer clear examples from the text. 4 Learners’ answers will vary but should address all bullet points and offer clear comparisons with examples from the texts. Structure Formality of language Use of punctuation Article 1 Article 2 • Uses heading and subheadings. • Uses heading only. • Has an introduction in italics. • Goes straight into the article. • he paragraphs are mostly short T and there are 6 of them. • here are three longer T paragraphs. • It uses lots of rhetorical questions. • There are no rhetorical questions. • It is mostly chronological but does • move around a bit. • both articles use images. he information is organised T logically giving a chronological account. • Includes a mini timeline at the end as a summary. • he article uses informal language • T and addresses the reader directly. • It uses informal words and phrases such as crazy I know! and daddy! • It uses brackets for chatty asides. • • It uses dashes to add extra information. rackets are used to explain B acronyms. • There are no dashes. • se of exclamation marks to make u the text more immediate. • both articles use images. • he language is formal T throughout. There is no informal language. Learners answers will vary but they should cover some of the features highlighted in the table. 16 Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE 5 Learners’ answers will vary, but should include the features outlined in the bullet points and show evidence of research from different sources. The content and tone should be suitable for the target audience of people aged over 70. 4.2 1 2 Phone problems Notes and learners’ responses will vary but may include: a In Script 1, the words used are fairly straightforward with some slang such as ‘yeah’ and ‘stuff’. In Script 2, the language is more complex (for example, ‘educational purposes’ and ‘social interaction’). It has no slang and is more polite. b The tone is casual in Script 1, as she is talking to a friend and is relaxed. She speaks in fragmented sentences shown by the use of dashes. In Script 2, she speaks in full sentences and addresses the teacher formally. She is less relaxed in script 2 and seems more eager to impress the teacher. a Samir: relationship between parent and child changed; daughter became obsessed with phone; daughter became less sociable; spent time watching silly videos; affected schoolwork and exam results; phone took over her life; do not allow a child to have a phone. Liu: children’s lives improved; phones allow them to engage with the world; phones make them more intelligent and knowledgeable; phones provide them with activities; no point in trying to stop children engaging with technology; children have a right to a phone. 17 2 b Learners discuss their responses to the texts. 3 a Answers may include the following ideas: • Technology replaced childhood creativity such as drawing. • Digital activities tend to be private/secret. • There are secrets kept from parents due to passcodes. b 4 • Technology has made young people better at communication. • Her daughter is good at reading people. • Technology allows knowledge to be accessed easily. • Her daughter has learnt two languages. • Children engage with global issues. • Technology encourages young people to care. Learners should recognise that this text is more balanced than Samir’s and Liu’s views. The writer acknowledges concerns and potential issues, but is generally in favour of technology. Speeches will vary, but should include ideas from the texts featured in this section, as well as learners’ own. 4.3 Predicting the future 1 Learners discuss the predictions. 2 Answers may include the following ideas: • Vocabulary: formal or technical vocabulary and less formal vocabulary. • Punctuation: question marks, exclamation marks, ellipses, brackets, dashes, etc. • Sentence types: questions, exclamations, one-word sentences, short sentences, complex sentences, etc. 3 Learners’ answers will vary. 4 • This is a serious text designed to persuade people that the future of technology may be dangerous. • Effective language and grammatical features include: the concerned tone, which builds throughout the article; the sense of urgency in the one-word sentence Now., and in the rhetorical question, Where will it end?; emotive language such as fills me with anxiety; . . ., become the slaves; . . . I fear it’s too late; the hopelessness of the final sentence: The future is here already. 5 Responses will vary. Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE 4.4 1 A dystopian future 4 Learners’ answers will vary. Notes will vary but may include: 5 Learners’ answers will vary. • 4.5 There is not much detail about the characters in The Queue; none are named except Yehya (a man) and a investigative journalist (at the end) which makes them seem anonymous, as though individuality is not important, although the journalist is likely to be important in uncovering the truth. The characters seem powerless and those in control hide behind companies and organisations. • • • • 18 1 Maps should show the following details from the text: the tree, the ivy-clad walls of the compound, the wooden building in the entire north-east corner, the grove of trees in the south-east, the farm area with fields spread across the north-west quarter, the animal pen/area in the south-east corner, concrete building 6 metres south of centre. 2 a This sounds eerie and sinister because of the shadows and the ivy. b This emphasises the noise the animals are making, as if they are disturbed by something. c This makes it seem as if there is something evil or unpleasant behind the door. Because it is iron, we get the impression that it is there to keep people out. In Leila the characters are a family – mother, father and child. They are presented as a unit. The other characters are described as ‘a gang’ so act as a group rather than individuals. There are clearly good and bad characters. The plot of The Queue is quite complicated and involved. The characters do not understand many things about their society and how it works. The journalist seems to be an important character. Leila has a plot that involves a family being split apart because they have broken the social laws about not mixing with other communities. But there is hope as Leila and her nanny escape so may be able to resolve it. Both settings are in cities in a dystopian future, although in different countres. They both have very controlled societies where there are rules that must be followed set by rulers that are not seen. Both seem to make life very difficult for people. The Glade 3 Learners’ answers will vary. 4 Example alternatives: huge: massive revealing: unveiling shocked: awestruck bigger: vaster deep: cavernous beginning: originating. 5 Learners’ answers will vary. 2 Learners’ responses will vary. 4.6 Closing doors 3 a It explores ideas and events that many humans may fear could come true in the future. 1 • b Dystopian fiction tends to take its inspiration from the society in which the writer lives and their experiences of that. The reader does not know: why the boy is in such a hurry; why the people look so ragged and weary; what they are doing in the maze – what is in there; what is inside the metal door and why they are going in there. c How people respond to dystopian fiction varies according to their own circumstances and society. • This heightens tension and makes the reader share his curiosity about what is going on; it adds a sense of mystery; it makes it quite sinister and makes the reader fearful. Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE 2 Learners’ answers will vary, but may explore the following structural and image choices: The big door finally popped open . . . ; deafening squeal of metal against metal; his mind churning; creepy old building; Goosebumps, a disquieting chill; use of complex sentences; the tone shift after the door has shut. 3 Learners’ answers will vary. 4 Learners’ answers will vary but should focus on the bullet points, offering some clear examples from the text. 5 Learners’ answers will vary. Check your progress 1 You should consider the age of your audience and the purpose of the text. 2 rhetorical questions, emotive language, direct address to the audience 3 tone, vocabulary, punctuation, sentence structures 4 It is fiction set in a future world where things have got worse for the human race. 5 Use complex words in formal texts but use them naturally. Be careful that you do not use too many complex words as it can make writing seem stilted or forced. 6 Learners’ answers will vary but should consider how writers build up tension and elicit reader response. Writers can reveal or withhold information to create tension. Writers can reveal or withhold information to create tension. 19 Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE 5 Heroes 5.1 Defining heroes 1 Odysseus is the ideal hero because he overcomes many obstacles and challenges over ten years and shows bravery and resilience. He never gives up. a b c d Modern heroes may include people fighting in wars, people who stand up to discrimination or people who save lives and rescue people. Leadership, loyalty, determination, bravery, selflessness and a willingness to take massive risks when needed. unselfish, brave and willing to give up their lives for others. 5 Learners’ responses in discussion will vary. 3 Young people think celebrities are heroes. conjunctions: and, or, although etc. • imperatives: Ask a young person . . .; think about the . . . ; Check out . . .; The heroes we must admire . . . • modal verbs: may, must. Learners’ answers will vary. 5.2 1 It means that people tend to admire heroes who have the sorts of qualities and strengths that they would also like to have. So, they wish they were like their heroes. 2 • 2 Celebrities have done nothing heroic. a The minor sentence shows that he is speechless so can only express himself in a fragmented way as he takes it all in. b Describing it as a madhouse shows how chaotic and disorientating it is. Nothing seems to make much sense. Answers may include some of the following ideas: • Simile: like electronic, coloured rain: captures the vibrancy of the scene but also its unnatural, human-made qualities. • Use of commas: long sentences listing what he can see adds to the effect that he is being visually bombarded. • Short sentence: A whole world of neon (also hyperbole) expresses amazement. • Use of lists: Flashing on and off . . . all glowing in the night. Emphasises how much Adam is having to take in and how overwhelming it is. • Ellipsis: suggests that there is more. • Complex sentence: Flashing on and off . . . seems quite fragmented reflecting the chaotic jumble of things he is taking in. Celebrities are motivated by selfish desires. Celebrities only donate to charity for the publicity. Celebrities do not help society. Some celebrities are immoral. Celebrities only care about money and fame. Real heroes are unselfish and brave. 4 20 Learners’ answers will vary but may include some of the following examples. • emotive words: worship, selfish, immoral, boastful, offensive, aggressive • positive and negative language: false heroes, entirely, selfish, hardly heroic, aggressive / hero, great, highly motivated, rich, unselfish, admire, brave, willing to give up their lives • questions and answers: Do we worship false heroes? Of course we do; So what do celebrities contribute? Not much. • triples: worshipped, or rich, or most likely both; boastful, offensive and aggressive; Looking for Charlie 3 Learners’ answers will vary. 4 Discussions may include: • He is in a strange and unfamiliar environment where he has to use his wits. • The fact that he is described as ‘disorientated’ may make him seem unlike a hero as he does not seem confident. Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE 5 • He is on a mission to find Charlie whatever the challenges, which fits in with a heroic type of plotline. • The fact that he chooses the harder route rather than giving up and going home makes him seem heroic. • He is resourceful and finds his way around. • He uses what resources he has when he decides to ask people about the bar. Responses will vary, but should use relevant quotations from the text to support a clear viewpoint. 5.3 1 Danger? Piece a dirt place, man: it’s a bad place to build as he thinks he could get trapped and cannot see anything to defend himself. 5 3 21 • The tension building then decreases making the story more exciting as the reader is drawn in then shares his relief. Learners’ answers will vary. 1 Young heroes Notes will vary but may include: • you fine it up a few floors: you’ll find it up a few floors It’s always been part of her life as she cannot remember not having to care for her mother. • She loves her mother so does not mind. I don ‘member zackly: I don’t remember exactly • She is worried about her exams. da sign: the sign • She makes her mother’s breakfast. Learners’ answers will vary, but should address the features listed in the bullet points with a clear example from the text and an explanation. • She organises her mother’s medication. • She dresses her and makes her comfortable. • She texts her in the day. • She misses having friendships and fun like other young people. a The use of silhouetted adds mystery and danger as the man’s features cannot be seen. The word waiting makes it sound as though the man has intent and may be threatening. Then the gloom of what looked like a dead end makes the alley sound dangerous as he could get trapped. b He means that it is a hopeless situation and that, although he will try his best, fighting is not likely to be successful. c Adam feels relieved as he realises that he has been imagining the danger. His relief turns into embarrassment as he feels foolish for panicking. d 4 The tension is released in paragraph 3 when he realises that the man is not even looking down the alley. It then deflates completely when he realises he’s an old guy. 5.4 cross da street: across the street 2 • • It means that he felt slightly deflated and let down by the realisation that the danger was in his imagination. This shows that he seems to enjoy the thrill of an adventure. The tension starts to build in the first line on and stopped. This shows Adam is suddenly tense as he sees the man silhouetted. The tension then continues 2 Negative aspects: has to do a number of jobs in the house, (household chores, helps with medication and provides physical assistance) had to grow up quickly, was bullied at school. Positive aspects: is very independent, is confident, is assertive, is empathetic, good relationship with her parents, organised with studies, has made friendships with other young carers. 3 Answers should link back to the ideas explored in Activities 1 and 2. 4 Answers may include the following ideas: • The heading makes the topic and the intended audience very clear. It makes the informative nature of the article clear too. • The subheadings clearly indicate the focus of each section. Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE • Numbers help organise the material into sections, as there are subheadings within sections. • Bullet points are used in one section to list suggestions (numbers would be inappropriate as they have been used already for the sections). • • 5 1 Each sub-heading starts with an imperative verb. Imperative verbs are also used within the text where the advice being given is seen as crucial for all young carers. This is suitable for a guide as it is giving clear instructions. Modal verbs are used where some young carers could benefit from the advice – You should make an effort to provide them with extra help whenever they need it. Learners’ answers will vary, but should include ideas from Activity 4. 5.5 3 Superheroes Main points Superhero films are not realistic They follow similar plotlines Characters often wear disguises Answers may include some of the following examples: • Jewel is a pop star by day and a superhero by night. • Jewel wears a disguise at night. • The Mandarin is a supervillain. • Iron Man stops The Mandarin from destroying China’s rice crop. • Chakra is a teenage tech genius by day. • Chakra has a blue jumpsuit. • Chakra has special powers. • Chakra fights to keep Mumbai safe. • Some of the conventions listed in question 1 are followed. 4 Learners’ answers will vary. 5 Learners’ answers will vary. 5.6 1 Learners read the script aloud in groups. 2 Notes will vary but may include: • The events happen chronologically but some time is speeded up or missed out. Some events take place simultaneously, like Enviros flying towards Punch as the scene in his office is happening. • The settings vary from outside the school to a corridor then a classroom inside. It then returns to the street outside. The setting then changes to a sports hall then back to the exterior school shot. Then the next setting is the interior of Punch’s office, soon switching to the skyscraper roof and whole building. We then see Enviros outside his window from an interior shot. This is quite a wide range of settings. • There is more description than speech as the scenes move very quickly from one to another. • The characters do not have much dialogue. It is really just snippets to set the scenes and contexts. Enviros says nothing at all which makes it more dramatic as she seems very powerful. The character has a superpower The main story is usually a conflict between a superhero and a supervillain The superhero always wins 2 22 a Answers may include exploration of the following phrases and punctuation: super-real; Way beyond; Who doesn’t feel excited . . . again?; well . . . maybe not fascinated; . . . (at least to the audience . . . see through it!); these guys; – a super nasty person –; does not know his secret . . . b Viewpoints will vary, but discussions may refer to the generally ambiguous tone. While the writer seems to like the superhero genre and thinks the films are entertaining, he is also aware of its tendency towards superficiality and predictability. Scripting stories Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE 3 Discussion will vary but may include: • • Technical language is used such as ‘establishing shot’, ‘close-up shot’. This tells the camera operators what they need to achieve. Interior and exterior tell us whether scenes take place outside or inside. There is not much language associated with film-making though. It is written in the present tense as the action is happening in real time in the film. • The prepositions and nouns allow detailed descriptions of the settings, which is essential to allow us to visualise the action. • The imperatives are used by Punch to show he is demanding and dominating. His final one to Enviros is very threatening and dramatic. • Chun-hei says very little and is polite to her teacher even though the situation is urgent. Punch says a great deal, mostly shouting orders or threats at people. 4 Learners’ answers will vary, but should use the ideas in Activities 2–3. 5 Learners’ answers will vary. 6 Learners’ answers will vary. 3 Using non-standard English in dialogue can make speech sound more realistic and can be used to establish where a character is from, for example, if they are shown using a particular dialect. 4 Advice texts may use headings, subheadings, numbering and bullet points to organise the information helpfully. They will also use a lot of imperative verbs. 5 Superhero films are not realistic; they follow similar plotlines; characters often wear disguises; the character has a superpower; the main story is usually a conflict between a superhero and a supervillain; the superhero always wins. 6 A film script needs to describe the settings clearly and the way that the camera shoots the scene. It needs to explain switches between interior and exterior settings. Clear dialogue needs to be laid out with stage directions to show how the actor should perform. There should be a balance between dialogue and description. Check your progress 1 Example answer: leadership: being able to inspire and take others forward loyalty: reliable and steadfast determination: firm in decision-making bravery: courageous selflessness: puts others before themselves willingness to take massive risks: unafraid of being hurt or killed in the fight against evil 2 23 Writers can combine different techniques to create effects such as tension, for example, the combination of describing an atmospheric setting, then introducing a mysterious character but withholding crucial information from the reader. The writer can then suddenly release the tension through using an anticlimax before building it up again. This structural device is very effective. Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE 6 Monsters • There is an evolutionary fear of the dark in humans. 6.1 • Fears of the dark and monsters prowling are fears humans learn when babies. • Noises are heightened in the dark. • Children do not like being alone in the dark because they want adult protection. • The article is aimed at parents. • Parents may read it if they have a child who sleeps badly or is afraid of the dark. • It constantly says your child; at the beginning of the article it says, Your children are afraid of the dark, and they are certain that monsters live under their beds; it uses quotations from a professional psychologist. • This is an information article that explains to parents why their children are afraid of the dark. 1 2 Learners’ answers will vary, but should form useful notes of key points: buries its teeth into animals, glowing red eyes, huge claws, spikes along its back, leaps large distances, hairless, vicious, burnt patches on skin. It was described in 1995 as a fearless, hairless dog. a It means that humans have contradictory feelings – they are engaged by monster stories, but they are also scared by them. b It means that when they found one, it did not live up to their expectations as it was very unimpressive compared to the stories that had been told. It conveys a sense of disappointment. c 3 4 5 6 It means that anyone sensible did not believe the stories anyway. It shows how silly and implausible they were. Words and phrases that reveal the writer’s attitude my include: We love . . .; there’s the feared Chupacabra . . .; Typically; as with most supposed monsters; it was said to have; most supposed . . . ; there was no . . . ; No real surprise to most people; the ‘experts’ on web forums and the reality was a little less exciting than the myth. Plans will vary but should use the notes provided as well as the article. The structure should be planned carefully to organise the material effectively for the intended readers. 5 Learners’ answers will vary. 6 Learners’ answers will vary. The use of wildfires shows how rumours can get out of control easily as they spread so quickly. It also emphasises how completely destructive they can be. 1 Main points: The dark is scary and associated with danger. They are short prose texts. They are written to entertain, but also contain a moral lesson. They are written for children, but the deeper ideas in them appeal to older readers too. They contain fantasy elements such as monsters or talking animals. Characters in them may be named for what they are – for example, King or Wolf, and defined by their name, attitude or power. Fear of monsters evolutionary history: human development The giant They are written in a simple style. Learners’ answers will vary, but should address all bullets. • 24 6.3 Learners’ answers will vary but may include the following words and phrases: horrific red eyes; struck fear; will stay with me forever; incredible; sharp spikes; horrendous claws; serious damage. natural selection: the way that humans and animals have evolved to have features that suit their needs and environment 2 3 4 6.2 1 A modern monster 2 The garden may symbolise paradise and the wall may symbolise selfishness and greed. 3 He is friends with an ogre. His voice is gruff and frightens the children. He is selfish because he does not want to share his garden. He is mean because he builds a wall to keep others out. Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE 4 a Personification: he jumped out of bed The Snow, Frost and Autumn are personified through being given direct speech. It was a lovely scene He was so small . . . wandering all round it, crying the trees forgot to blossom the Giant’s heart melted Then they invited the North Wind to stay . . . I will knock down the wall . . . he roared all day . . . My garden shall be the children’s playground for ever and ever The autumn gave golden fruit . . . the snow danced . . . b he crept downstairs and opened the front door quite softly The spring symbolises happiness and the winter symbolises suffering. stole up behind him and took him gently in his hand The fruit symbolises generosity and love, the nourishment needed by humans. The music symbolises joy and communication. 5 6 It tells us that they are mostly compound sentences. These are a simpler form of sentences than complex or compoundcomplex. This makes the language more straightforward and the story easy to follow. Time connectives include Then and One morning. Nouns include The birds, Spring, The Snow, The Autumn. Personification of the seasons makes them characters in the story and gives the reader a visual representation of what is happening in the garden. The connectives and nouns help the reader to see what is happening when. 6.4 The little boy he took a great axe and knocked down the wall 3 Learners’ answers will vary. 4 Learners’ answers will vary. 6.5 1 Learners read the poem aloud, emphasising the rhythm. 2 similes: as black as soot verbs and adverbs: dearly loves to bite specific adjectives: black comparative adjectives: most unpleasant brute 3 Learners’ answers will vary but should demonstrate careful planning. 4 Discussion may include: 1 The little boy makes the Giant feel empathy and realise how selfish he has been. • The family’s initial fear: paralysed, meaning they are too afraid to move. 2 Answers may include explanations of some of the following examples: • The mother using a broom as a weapon as she searches dark corners. My own garden is my own garden • The father pretending not to be scared by telling jokes. They know he is pretending but need him to be brave. • The children are scared but also excited because they know their parents will protect them. • Reactions change after the sister gets stung. The mother is very upset weeping and praying and scared, the father is still pretending to be brave, the narrator is frightened for her sister feverish, mumbling, struggling to breathe. he built a high wall all around it he sat at the window and looked out at his cold, white garden golden fruit . . . to the Giant’s garden she gave none it was so long since he had heard a bird sing . . . it seemed to him to be the most beautiful music in the world I believe the Spring has come out at last 25 A smaller monster Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE 5 Poem Scorpions ‘The Scorpion’ • seen as threatening and aggressive • they view it as an unpleasant brute • s uggests the scorpion enjoys causing pain (dearly loves to bite) • t hey see it as enjoying inflicting fear and pain on them • turns up unexpectedly • they fear it turning up in their bed • causes a sense of fear • e sat, paralysed uses hyperbole W to show the extent of their fear • • strangely excited implies that their feelings were mixed at first s een as mysterious and frightening – the simile like a monster suggests the fear it inspires • • My sister screaming is dramatic figurative term paralysed shows physical and emotional reaction • long night seared stresses how a terrifying it was • ifferent characters show different d reactions • laying the brave man shows her p father was also scared but putting on an act • sister’s pain (feverish) • nding suggests long-lasting e nature of human attitude. • eeping and praying shows w desperation ‘Shadow of the Scorpion’ 6.6 Human attitudes and reactions creature, watching me, no eyes, and desperate to drag me. Monster below ground 1 Learners’ responses will vary. 2 The comparison with eight double-decker buses emphasises huge size and weight. engineers armed . . . the use of armed makes it sound like a formidable enemy. 5 Check your progress 1 Emotive language is when vocabulary is used to evoke an emotional response in the reader, for example cruel, devouring, gruesome, struck fear, horrendous claws. 2 Use subheadings, numbering and bullet points to organise the advice logically and helpfully. 3 Fables are short; they usually use simple language; they have a moral message; they often use non-human characters; a lesson is learnt at the end. urging people not to feed the fatberg and growing under our feet makes it sound like a living thing that is eating and growing in the sewers. 4 The little boy evokes sympathy from the Giant and makes him realise how selfish he has been. He helps the boy and that makes him feel happy. 3 Learners make notes on the key points from the audio. 5 Look for similarities and differences in subject, structure and language. 4 Learners’ answers will vary but may explore the following: one-word sentence; dashes; complex sentences; colon; explanation of how the monster metaphor extends through vocabulary such as lair, growling noises, 6 An extended metaphor is a comparison which continues and develops throughout a text. An example may be describing the night sky using the extended metaphor of the sea so describing the sky as deep and black, the moon as a sailing ship and the stars as tiny islands etc. the greasy giants makes them sound like a foe. colossal exaggerates the size. spew makes it sound disgusting and as though it fights back. monsters from the deep, lurking . . . makes them sound like a hidden enemy waiting to attack. defeat these . . . continues the army metaphor. 26 Learners’ answers will vary. Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE 7 ‘The Plantation’ 7.1 The broken pipe 1 Notes will vary, but may include the following ideas: a b • It sounds like a challenging environment with moist underbelly of the swamps and greenery that blocked the sun. • The harmattan season sounds challenging too, as though nature makes his life more difficult: the parching land breeze charged at him. • moist underbelly sounds unpleasant • hairs on his skin bristle gives a sign of foreboding in the text Notes will vary, but may include the following ideas: • He works hard in challenging conditions. • He is a mysterious character: his face a picture of dark brooding. • the text shows Namidi’s affinity to nature since This place was an emblem of life to him. • c 27 slashing at the banners sounds like Namidi is frustrated or angry. Notes will vary, but may include the following ideas: • The plantation was suspended in a state of waiting builds tension and mystery. • There are strange sounds: the murmur of the plantation; an alien trickling sound. • There are strange smells: an odd sickly smell. • Namidi’s reaction creates tension: set his stomach on edge; paused; cocked his ears; stood still; listening, watching and sniffing. 2 Notes will vary but should include explanations of some of the following: • Aural, visual and tactile images: grew from the moist underbelly of the swamps; greenery blocked away the sun; made the hairs on his skin bristle; cold drizzle of the early morning dew; rubber trees that glistened with sap; the plantation seemed to glow; slashing at the banners of plantleaves; prickling silence; an alien trickling sound; cocked his ears; watching and sniffing; touched by an uncertain impulse. • Personification: the parching land breeze charged at him from the rubber trees; a curious mysteriousness which followed him about; the murmur of the plantation was suspended in a state of waiting. 3 Learners’ answers will vary, but should use ideas from questions 1 and 2, giving clear evidence from the text. 4 Learners discuss reactions to the views in groups. 5 Learners’ answers will vary. 7.2 1 Namidi’s family Notes may include explanations of some of the following: • Namidi returns the women’s greeting, which shows he is polite and friendly. • However, he then rushes past them, which shows he does not want them to know what he is doing. • The women think there is something wrong with Namidi because he rushes past. • They think he smells odd, but are just puzzled by his behaviour. • They do not seem particularly suspicious. Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE 2 Example answer: 2 Namidi does not trust the villagers, so he does not want to tell anyone what he has found. He is very poor and has worked hard for a long time to try to get out of poverty. He sees this as an opportunity to make his hard work pay off. 3 4 5 28 a This shows that Namidi is thinking about how he could improve their living conditions if he had money; it shows that he has good intentions and makes us sympathise with him. b This shows that Namidi is aware of the dangers but is deliberately not thinking about them; it makes the reader fear for him, as he is not thinking about the dangers. c This shows that Namidi is pressurising his wife not to question him, as he does not want her to change his mind; it shows that he is a bit of a bully to his wife, so may make the reader react more negatively to him; Efe could either remain silent and let Namidi make the decision, or she could try to persuade him not to do anything dangerous for the sake of her and the children. Discussions may refer to: • the fact that Namidi cannot afford to send Ochuko to school • the evidence that Efe has to work hard and has suffered. Paragraphs may include the following ideas: • Namidi has lived in the tiny village all his life and may feel trapped by his poverty. • Namidi wants to be able to afford to educate his children so they can have a better life than his. He feels guilty that his children cannot go to school. • Namidi may want to give his wife a better life so she does not have to suffer from working so hard in the terrible heat. 3 Outcomes will vary, but discussions may refer to the following: • 6 Outcomes will vary, but may consider the following in each line: The description of the village and the fact that Namidi has lived there for his whole life makes the reader understand why he wants a way out. • His desire to send his children to school shows he is thinking of them rather than himself. • The description of his wife shows exactly how hard their lives are and makes us understand why he does what he does. Discussions may include some of the following: • Namidi’s children are excited but do not understand what is going on. They are used to doing what their father asks them to, so they do not question him. • Efe knows what is going on and is very unhappy about it. She does not say anything because she knows how stubborn Namidi is. She has been worn down throughout her marriage and has given up. • Namidi seems very dominant and dismissive of Efe’s feelings and views. The fact that he is involving their children in something potentially dangerous makes the reader have a more negative view of him. Also, the way that he has behaved towards Efe in their marriage makes him seem stubborn and selfish. At this point he does not come across as a good husband or father. He seems blinded by money. Learners’ answers will vary. 7.3 Namidi and Efe 1 • Efe is worried: a wary, suspicious frown. • She thinks it is dangerous and does not want anyone getting hurt: What if a fire starts, eh? • She is not happy about it: doubt and anxiety . . . suddenly clouded her face. • She says nothing but thinks that it will end badly: this thing . . . will come to no good. 4 Learners’ answers will vary, but learners’ notes on which they base their monologues should include consideration of: • how Efe feels about her children being involved Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE 5 2 • an explanation of her face brooding and disturbed • what she is thinking to cause the storm gathering in her heart • what trouble lay in wait – what she is worried will happen • how she feels about the battles she has had during their marriage • what she means by the ruin his rigidness has cast upon them. 7.4 1 Learners perform their monologues; ensure they use voice and gesture for effect. Jackson and Ochuko Notes should include the following ideas: • Jackson draws attention to what they are doing; he is suspicious; there is a sense that he wants something when he rubs his hands; he seems to be threatening to make trouble for Namidi; he is afraid when he hears the hissing and runs back to the village. • Namidi clearly dislikes Jackson; he seems worried about him but also stands up to him; he wants to react but ignores him. • Efe observes the encounter but does not get involved until she thinks her husband may get violent; she stops her husband from reacting; she is afraid of what Jackson will do, but also of what Namidi may do. • Jackson adds a threat which makes the story more tense; the hissing noise reveals that the petrol leak may be getting worse. Adjective Quality What it reveals a greasy-looking youth opinion It shows Jackson’s appearance and suggests he is unclean. It implies he has untrustworthy aspects. measure It shows Namidi’s displeasure and suggests he is angry. opinion It shows that Namidi has a very low opinion of Jackson and views him as a nuisance. It also shows that he is aware that he could cause a problem. qualifier This shows that Efe’s actions hold Namidi back. shape This implies that he is tense and angry as he is walking very rigidly. (paragraph 1) he countered in a cold voice (paragraph 4) like some wayward fly (paragraph 4) a restraining arm (paragraph 6) walking, stiff-necked, down the narrow track (paragraph 6) 29 Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE 3 Outcomes will vary, but may include discussion of the following quotes and the mood created by them: burning noon; sun gliding overhead; circle of fire; swarmed; glitter with a wave of sweat-drenched bodies; bubbled and brawled; fought each other for space; clashed and flashed; weapons of survival. 4 •The adults: described as a swarm, showing that there are many of them all intent on one thing; it is described as a war where they fought each other for space and metal pans and buckets clashed and flashed – this shows they were acting desperately while trying to get the petrol; they seem to be acting selfishly and greedily. • • 5 Ochuko does not seem to understand that the adults are very tense and ending up hurt; does not understand that there is any danger. They seemed entertained by their noise and bustle. Ochuko’s innocence makes the reader worried that something will happen to his parents that he will not understand. The beginning and end of the extract show the mounting tension among the adults fighting to get the petrol. In the middle section, Ochuko playing with his friend and thinking the adult behaviour is entertaining makes the danger seem more real. 7.5 30 Ochuko: loses focus and seems unaware of the seriousness of the situation (wandered about); is a typical child and finds a friend to play with (laughing and swinging playfully). The explosion 1 Learners should use clues from the previous extract to support their prediction as well as the current extract. 2 •Contrasts between innocence and danger include: the innocence of the young boys playing soldiers, unaware of the danger close to them; Ochuko’s childish fascination as the adults run screaming from the explosion site; Ochuko running to their hut for safety in a familiar place, unaware that it is his father who has put him in danger; Ochuko hiding under his mother’s bed for safety. • Contrasts in understanding include: the descriptions of burnt chicken feathers and screaming demons show his lack of understanding; the reader understands that the fuel has caused an explosion whereas Ochuko does not; the reader knows his father’s actions led to this danger; the reader understands that his parents and siblings could be hurt or dead and may not come back. 3 Learners’ answers will vary. 4 Discussion outcomes will vary. 5 Learners’ answers will vary, but should address each bullet and use the details of the story to reflect on the events from Ochuko’s perspective. 7.6 Disaster reports 1 Learners prepare reports. They should follow the structure of the bullets, using details and ideas from the story. 2 Learners perform their report. 3 Learners should make notes using an appropriate format, including evidence and/or details to support each opinion. 4 Learners may consider some of the following ideas: • Namidi’s decision not to report the broken pipe and his reasons for the decision. • Namidi ignoring Efe’s concerns and her subsequent silence. • Involving the children in collecting the petrol. • The fact that so many people came to collect petrol. • The issue of poverty. • Corporate responsibility for health and safety. • Whether large companies should put more back into communities. 5–6 Learners’ answers will vary but should be planned carefully using the bullets. The language used should be suitable for a formal report. Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE Check your progress 1 It is a key moment because it indirectly leads to the explosion as he did not report the petrol leak. It means that he is responsible for what happened, although others did not report it either. 2 It is his poverty that makes him want to steal the leaked petrol. He feels a failure for not being able to afford to educate his children. 3 Their relationship is very strained, as she feels he does not listen to her. She also seems a bit scared to stand up to him, but she is full of resentment about mistakes he has made in the past. 4 opinion or measure, size, shape, age, colour, origin, material, qualifier (almost part of the noun) 5 Ochuko is certainly a victim, as at the end he is alone and scared. However, he is not dead so is luckier than most. The fact that there is the sound of a woman crying means that some people in the village have survived so hopefully he will find help. 6 headings, subheadings and bullet points introductions and conclusions written in a factual tone – they avoid emotion use the active voice where possible use connectives to organise and link ideas use clear, precise language. 31 Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE 8 C hoices and decisions 8.1 The Merchant of Venice Outcomes will vary. Life choices 1 Outcomes will vary. 8.2 2 • 1 • 3 4 The Prince of Morocco chooses the gold casket and finds a scroll; the Prince of Aragon chooses silver and finds a picture of a fool’s head; Bassanio chooses lead. fair: attractive equally: the same Outcomes will vary. trodden: walked upon Character Attitude to the test Moral lesson Morocco He thinks that things which are worth the most moneys are the best. He chooses gold in the hope of improving his fortune. The scroll tells him: All that glitters is not gold. He feels nervous because he might make the wrong choice. The scroll tells him: You that choose not by the view, / Chance as fair and choose as true! way: road hence: in the future 2 This means that he should not judge by outward appearances as sometimes they are deceiving. This means that he does not judge by outward appearances and recognises that it is what is inside that counts. 5 diverged: went in different directions undergrowth: foliage The lead casket contains a picture of Portia. Bassanio 32 6–7 a Portia tells Bassanio to wait a day or two before choosing so she can have his company. b Portia obviously wants Bassanio to choose the right casket, but she says if he does not he has to leave, so it is clear she has no choice. c The message is that people who choose things by outward appearance are shallow and expensive things to do not bring happiness. 3 • long I stood / And looked down one as far as I could – This suggests that he needed to think carefully and observe things before making the decision. • knowing how way leads on to way, / I doubted if I should ever come back – This suggests that once you have made a choice, it will lead to other choices, and you won’t ever return to the same point again as life will have moved on. • I took the one less traveled by, / And that has made all the difference – This suggests that choosing the safest or most popular decision is not necessarily the best thing to do. It suggests we should take risks. Paragraphs should include the following ideas: • How the narrators feel about their choices: both seem pleased with their choices. • Key lines in each text: I took the one less traveled by, / and that has made all the difference; I doubted if I should ever come back; There was no going back. • The metaphors each writer uses: the road less travelled is a metaphor that extends throughout the poem, representing the choices we make in life and how important it is to choose carefully; no going back indicates that when we make a choice we need to stick with it as we should only move forward and develop. • The use and effect of adverbs: long I stood; equally lay; trodden black; aggressively; rigidly; steadily; hesitantly (explanations will vary). Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE • 4 Structures such as rhyme, rhythm and sentence variety (notes will vary but should see the difference in the structures of the poem and the prose text). Learners’ answers will vary. 8.3 Making decisions 1 a Durjoy thinks that we use our instincts to make small decisions all the time, so should always trust them – that feelings are never wrong. b Chaturi thinks it is easy to get distracted by minor details so we lose sight of what is important. She advises to keep focused on the main goal. c d Helmut thinks asking for advice is good, as the people who know you best will always have your interests in mind and can offer good advice; Helmet also thinks that sometimes asking for advice means that you end up with too many different opinions and can be put under pressure to do what other people tell you to do. Learners’ answers will vary 2 Outcomes will vary. 3 Learners’ answers will vary but may include some of the following ideas: Main points Subsidiary information Volunteers asked to randomly choose from four items. Research conducted by Simona Botti from Cornell University and Ann McGill from University of Chicago. Pleasant or nasty choice offered. Asked to rate their satisfaction with their choice. People with pleasant items were satisfied. People with unpleasant smells were dissatisfied. 33 4 5 Subsidiary information Work suggests that volunteers would have preferred professionals to have made the choice for them? Perhaps choice doesn’t always bring happiness. a Paragraph 1 introduces the topic. Paragraph 2 describes the method – how the experiment was carried out and by whom. Paragraph 3 shows the results/ findings. Paragraph 4 draws conclusions. b Linking verbs and time adverbs make the time frame clear, as well as how future predictions are being made from the research evidence – examples include last year, later, once Learners’ answers will vary. 8.4 A dangerous decision 1 Learners plan and perform their mimes. 2 • Chad says it was an instinctive decision when he panicked. • The story shows that when humans have to make a decision very quickly they do not always consider the consequences of their actions. • Chad is saved from death when a crew member hears his cries and prompts an emergency stop. 3 Pleasant items were chocolate and coffee. They completed a questionnaire. People blamed themselves for poor choices. Main points Notes may include the following: • Extra details: date; where the train is going; why he decided to chase the train; the fact that first class diners ignored him; what he was wearing; the freezing temperatures; his symptoms of hypothermia and how serious it was. • It makes the article more dramatic as he reveals the details later and gives Chad a voice. 4 Discussions should focus on the bullets, giving clear examples from the paragraph. 5 Learners’ answers will vary. Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE 8.5 Impossible choices 1 Ahmad is willing to travel to Europe because he has been shot at three times. His daughter (aged 9) has also been shot – so where they live is dangerous. He wants his children to have a better life. a b 3 34 Learners’ answers will vary but should develop ideas from the previous activities. 8.6 1 Different views Discussions may consider: the idea that a developed country should provide for its own people before helping refugees • the ways in which refugees can have a negative impact on developed countries The reader’s initial reaction is likely to be one of sympathy and shock. • problems that refugees can face when they get to more developed countries It means that if you won in the game of life, you are simply lucky rather than superior. No one is to blame – refugees are unlucky. • what alternatives are suggested • whether the article is biased. a Paragraph 2: Developed countries should meet the needs of their own people before helping refugees. a b 4 5 Whether the language used exaggerates or tries to get the reader’s sympathy rather than offering an objective viewpoint. • c 2 Doaa fled Syria after her father’s business was bombed. She and her boyfriend paid human traffickers to get to Europe but the boat was attacked and most of the passengers drowned. Either way, she was risking her life – whether she stayed in a dangerous place or risked the boat crossing. • Learners may note the following examples: haunt me; fled; witnessed the murders of many others; face the danger; decimated in an explosion; family had nothing left; risk their entire life savings; human traffickers; perished; attacked by pirates; aware of her fate; impossible choice; unspeakable fate. 2 Paragraph 3: Refugees can disrupt a country due to different cultural norms and beliefs. Paragraph 4: Taking in refugees is not always good for them and does not lead to improvements in their lives as the journeys are often treacherous and they are often housed in camps which are substandard where they could catch diseases. Using refugees’ personal experiences: makes it more personal and immediate; means that the claims are evidenced with real-life stories; uses names rather than anonymous examples; is more likely to make the reader sympathetic to their plight. b The opening paragraph poses a question which is addressed in the article; the closing paragraph concludes firmly that refugees should stay in their own countries and be offered help to rebuild them. • Text 1 purpose: to evoke sympathy and support for refugees. Refugees are fleeing war zones. Refugees are in danger. Refugees try to get to Europe for a better life. Refugees will take risks to get there. Refugees pay human traffickers. Many refugees die trying to cross the Mediterranean. Refugees think it’s risky to stay or go. Refugees are just unlucky. It could happen to any of us. Discussions may include consideration of the following: • Whether the stories are true / the people reliable. • Whether the writer has missed out other details which could make the stories less convincing. • Whether the role of people traffickers has been brushed over. • Whether seeking new lives is more about money than safety. 3 Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE • 4 5 35 Text 2 purpose: to persuade the reader that refugees are best supported by staying in their own countries. Are developed countries responsible for refugees? Developed countries should look after their own people first. Refugees cause resource shortages. Refugees heighten cultural tensions because they have different values and customs. Refugees are often subjected to bad living conditions in camps. It is better to help refugees rebuild resources in their own countries. Learners’ answers will vary, but an example might be: • paragraph introducing the topic: paragraph 1 • rhetorical question: do developed countries have a responsibility to welcome refugees? • topic sentences: developed countries should prioritise and meet the needs of their people first; refugees bring with them a different way of life. • modal verbs: should; may • examples from real life (e.g. 1 in 40 people die attempting to sail from Libya to the Mediterranean coast). • connective to introduce another point: moreover; while. • acknowledgement of the other side of the argument: while it is true that. • concluding remark to summarise the main idea: final paragraph. Check your progress 1 You would need to rehearse and perform a script using movement, gesture and voice to bring it to life. 2 A manner adverb tells you the way something is done: He ate noisily. A degree adverb tells you the extent to which something happened: He almost fell. 3 A linking adverb helps the reader to see how stages in time link together: Soon, I will go home. A time adverb shows when something happens: Today, I will leave work early. 4 The opening paragraph will establish the key facts, often using a single sentence, or sometimes a rhetorical question. 5 Bias can make the reader support or oppose a viewpoint without knowing both sides of the argument. For example, the writer may only explore one viewpoint in an article because they want the reader to agree with it without offering any alternative views. 6 a paragraph introducing the topic; a rhetorical question; topic sentences; modal verbs; examples from real life; a connective to introduce another point; an acknowledgement of the other side of the argument; a concluding remark to summarise the main idea. Learners’ answers will vary but should use ideas from the texts studied. Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE 9 Endings 9.1 1 2 Saying goodbye 9.2 Outcomes will vary, but should include discussion of key points: 1 Learners read the poem aloud with expression. • 2 Discussion of the metaphor might include: how busy her home life was when the children lived at home; her sense of being their ‘sun’; their company; the idea of keeping them safe • the idea that the mother taught the child to ride a bike – prepared her for independence • the idea that when they visit the energy and life returns and life gets better • the mother’s reaction when she rides independently – reluctance to let go • saying goodbye to them in order; the drive home without them; missing their company • the curved path of the park – challenges in life ahead • life goes on but it changes. • waiting for the thud – mother being ready to react if there are problems • the joy of independence and the sadness of letting go. Sun and planets metaphor: shows that she is stable and life-giving while they move and revolve around her – separate but connected. Books: each part of life is a chapter – things change but it is all part of the same story. 3 Doors: when one thing comes to an end, new things replace them. Birds: unlike birds, parents do not replace their children with new chicks each year. 3 Outcomes will vary. 4 Voice 1 is an older woman who identifies with what the writer says. She recalls her own similar experiences as a mother, feeling great sadness when her children left home. 4 • it describes a single moment that represents growing up and letting go • stresses the finality of letting go. • because it focuses on one significant moment in a child’s development • perhaps to reflect the uncertainties and inconsistencies of life and growing up. Both narrators are mothers. Both feel sadness. In the article the author uses different metaphors such as sun/planets, doors, a book and birds to explore different ideas about children leaving home, whereas in the poem it is one subtle extended metaphor using teaching a child to ride a bike to represent the way that parents bring children up and let them go. Voice 3 is a mother who has yet to experience her son leaving home. She identifies with the writer’s feelings because she is dreading her son going to college. Learners’ answers will vary, but learners should consider their own age, gender, culture, etc. when reflecting on their response to the text. Paragraphs may include some of the following ideas: Both narrators are reluctant to let their children go but know that they have to as it is a normal process. Voice 2 is a young teenage boy who does not really identify with the feelings expressed in the text. He refers to arguing with his own mother and finds it difficult to believe that she will be sad when he leaves home. 5 5 Answers may explore: • 36 The end of childhood the sons’ / as harsh / as the fathers: as the sons grow older, they replace their fathers’ silhouettes; the daughters / will take off Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE their aprons: a symbol of them growing up and the temporary nature of the family as it stands presently • 6 9.3 The stranger 1 His father invited the stranger into the house; his parents appear to have had a conversation with him speaking quietly which implies they did not want him to hear; the parents seem afraid of the stranger as they do what he tells them to do and let him take their son. • • He is scared as he hides behind his father’s legs; he realises that something strange is happening but does not understand; he obeys his mother; he does not understand that his father is crying; he thought it was an adventure at first but then becomes scared; he is confused and frightened when they arrive in China. Improvised monologues should build on ideas and details from the text. 3 Scripts should build on ideas and details from the text and use the bullets to plan the script. 1 2 • Tony seems to respect and admire Lowsi but also seems quite emotionally distant. a Discussion may explore some of the following: b 3 The grandfather seems very distant and stern. 2 9.4 A new beginning • Lowsi’s heritage as a direct descendent of Gong Soo; his reputation; his status as a Grand Master; the handing down of knowledge from father to son; his expectations of Tony. The reader gets the impression that for Lowsi, passing on his skills and knowledge is more important than developing a relationship with his grandson. In the years ahead Tony will be taught the secrets of the martial arts by his grandfather to become an unbeatable 4 • Huang is an elderly Chinese man, so is very respectful of older traditions. He therefore approves of Lowsi teaching Tony. • Kim is young and female but as an athlete she focuses on the importance of having a good trainer. • Andre is young and focuses on the positive impacts that change can have. He sees Lowsi taking Tony as a positive thing for Tony as it leads to new adventures. Individual responses may consider Tony being taken to a new country, his parents, the opportunity offered to him by Lowsi, etc. Example answers: a I pushed quickly past him and tried to hide behind my father’s legs, being careful not to look directly at the man. b He began to develop his own styles and teach the ways of Kung Fu, after leaving the temple of his training. c I was his most unexpected and unlikely disciple since Lowsi had no son of his own. Answers may explore some of the following: • 37 the last two lines refer to the closing of the photograph albums – the family unit is temporary and will keep changing until it will only exist in the albums. Learners’ answers will vary, but should use the ideas explored in previous questions to draw comparisons. • warrior. He is expected to spend time observing Lowsi and clearly finds this challenging at first but the reader senses that his interest seems to grow as his understanding increases. Learners’ answers will vary. 9.5 How stories end 1 Outcomes will vary. 2 • The moral message is that villainy does not pay. They are reminded that they are selfish and that people should think about the impacts of their actions on others. • As he was poaching animals, it seems fitting that he should be ‘punished’ by an animal. He was trying to harm Joey at the Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021 CAMBRIDGE LOWER SECONDARY ENGLISH 8: TEACHER’S RESOURCE time so Polly was protecting Ruby when she heard her cry protecting her owner. 3 4 Discussions may include some of the following ideas: 4 Answers may explore some of the following ideas: Grandma bringing her the fruit and showing concern; Ruby’s conversation with her father; the idea of her mother living on in her; her mother being proud of her. Joey’s injury shows that the problems caused by the poachers are ongoing – it stresses the seriousness of their actions and the way they have affected the animals. • Ruby’s concern for Joey is greater than her pleasure that the villains have been caught. This shows the reader she has morals and priorities and makes her admirable. Check your progress 1 It can sound more like spoken English and bring the reader closer to the writer. • Focusing on Joey means that the villains fade away rather than focusing on them too much as the reader. 2 a I agree. Stringer seems to realise his actions have not paid off and has some regrets, so he probably does agree with Ruby. The punctuation and structure can help indicate the pace or pauses. It can show whether a poem is about one single idea or lots of ideas. For example, ‘To a Daughter Leaving Home’ is about one moment in childhood so is a continuous sentence. 3 Use voice, gesture and body language carefully to enhance what is being said. 4 A present participle puts emphasis on the first action in the sentence. For example, ‘Holding my umbrella tightly, I battled through the strong winds and rain.’ 5 Some stories end with a main character finding success and learning something. Other stories end with the main character being disappointed or failing to reach their goal. 6 You need to choose an appropriate level of formality and think about the difficulty level of the language and structures that you use for your target audience. b I disagree. I think Ruby wants to stop Joey getting hurt. And that is the thing that most concerns her. c I disagree. Ruby is brave but Polly helps her to rescue Joey as well as the police. d I disagree. The police officer comes to check on Joey so is also concerned. e I agree. Ruby is right when she says the world does not belong to them. She is reminding them that selfish actions harm others. I agree. I think the writer gives Ruby the final word, so we agree with her viewpoint. Learners’ answers will vary but should consider the qualities of a hero explored in Unit 5, as well as the evidence from the extract. 9.6 38 Discussion should consider vocabulary and expression, looking at how these were adapted for the different audiences. • f 5 3 Learning things 1 Speeches will vary but should be written for a younger audience. They should consider the characters and their actions, Ruby’s motivation and courage, and the moral message of the story. 2 Learners should adapt the ones previously written for a younger audience to make it appropriate for adults. Cambridge Lower Secondary English 8 – Creamer, Clare & Rees-Bidder © Cambridge University Press 2021