Revising Messages: Conciseness [LO-3] 5-16. The board cannot act without a consensus. 5-17. To surpass our competitors, we need new innovations in products and operations. 5-18. George McClannahan wanted to be head engineer for a long period, and he has finally gotten the promotion. 5-19. Don’t pay more; you can get our new fragrance for $50. Revising Messages: Conciseness [LO-3] 5-20. It is important that the payments be stopped before the company accumulates an excessive deficit. 5-21. There was an agreement among the executives that Ms. Jackson’s mannerisms were cause for a mandatory meeting with the company’s personnel director. 5-22. The approaching liquidation of the company’s assets was cause for joy among the company’s competitors. Revising Messages: Conciseness [LO-3] 5-23. I require money to live. 5-24. They did not find sufficient evidence to believe in the future. 5-25. To bring about the destruction of a dream is tragic. Revising Messages: Conciseness [LO-3] 5-26. We are convinced that writing is important. 5-27. We should have a price increase in all probability. 5-28. Our goals include making a determination soon. 5-29. I’d like to summarize the final windup after the conclusion of the experiment. Revising Messages: Modifiers [LO-3] 5-30. High pay increases were given to skilled and conscientious employees. 5-31. The union’s proposals were inflationary, demanding, and bold. Revising Messages: Hedging [LO-3] 5-32. It appears that someone entered illegally. 5-33. It is possible that in the near future the situation will improve. 5-34. Your report suggest that we might be losing money. 5-35. Nancy apparently has a greater influence over employees in the new-accounts department. Revising Messages: Indefinite Starters [LO-3] 5-36. Several examples here show that Elaine can’t hold a position very long. 5-37. Every employee who makes a generous contribution to Mara Cook’s retirement party would be greatly appreciated. 5-38. Learned in Washington today from generally reliable sources that an important announcement will be made shortly by the White House. 5-39. The rule states that we cannot work overtime without permission. Revising Messages: Parallelism [LO-3] 5-40. Mr. Hill is expected to lecture three days a week, counsel two days a week, and write for publication in his spare time. 5-41. She knows accounting and reads Latin. 5-42. Both applicants had families, college degrees, in their thirties, and considerable accounting experience but few social connections. 5-43. This book was exciting, well written, and interesting. Revising Messages: Awkward References [LO-3] 5-44. The vice president in charge of sales is responsible for funding the demo unit program and the production manager is responsible for the loaner unit program. 5-45. The demo unit program is funded from the budget of the vice president and the loan unit program is funded from the budget of the production manager. 5-46. The budgets for both the demo unit program and loaner unit program were increased by 10 percent. 5-47. A laser printer was delivered to John and an inkjet printer was delivered to Megan. Revising Messages: Dangling Modifiers [LO-3] 5-48. We watched the countryside glide by in a cloud of smoke, while running down the railroad tracks. 5-49. Ruby saw the seashell which was lying on the shelf. 5-50. I think the factory, which needs a major equipment upgrade, would be a bad investment. 5-51. Sandy took the whole afternoon to clean her desk, which was cluttered and filthy. Revising Messages: Noun Sequences [LO-3] 5-52. The focus of the meeting was discussion about the issue of bank interest rate deregulation. 5-53. Following the recommendations of the government task force, we are revising our job applicant evaluation procedures. 5-54. The components of the quality assurance program of production department includes employee training, supplier cooperation, and computerized detection equipment. 5-55. The inventory reduction plan of the supermarket warehouse will be implemented next month. Revising Messages: Sentence Structure [LO-3] 5-56. Trudy ran when she first saw the bull pawing the ground. 5-57. According to Ted, who is probably the worst gossip in the office (Tom excepted), it was Terri who, mailed the wrong order. 5-58. In his book Investment Capital Reconsidered, William Oberstreet, writes of the mistakes that bankers have made through the decades. 5-59. After passing up several sensible investment opportunities, Judy Schimmel invested her inheritance in a jojoba plantation, despite the warning of her friends and family. Revising Messages: Camouflaged Verbs [LO-3] 5-60. The employees easily adapted to the new rules. 5-61. The assessor will determine the tax due. 5-62. Identity of the employees must be verified daily. 5-63. The board of directors recommend that Mr. Ronson be assigned to a new division.