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The diagram illustrates the outcomes of a study related to coffee and tea buying and
consumption statistics in five cities in Australian. The survey includes these consumption
habits in last 4 weeks according to 2 types of goods such as; fresh coffee, instant coffee. Also
it shows the percentages of people about going to a coffee for coffee or tea.
When it is looked at the highest percentage of going to a cafe is in Melbourne which is
slightly over Hobart with above 60%. In contrast, lowest percentage about visiting a cafe is in
Adelaide with below 50%. Sydney follows the Hobart in terms of this culture with
approximately 62% and Brisbane behind Sydney with nearly 55%.
Highest fresh coffee use exist in Sydney with almost 45% and Melbourne is just behind
Sysney with about 43%. Hobart follows these 2 cities with above 35% and Brisbane and
Adelaide share last position by having almost same percentages. In terms of instant coffee
consumption Hobart has highest percentage almost 55% and Brisbane is slightly behind
Hobart with nearly 53%. According to the chart, respectively, Adelaide, Melbourne and
Sydney follows Hobart.
In conclusion, the chart indicates cafe cultures and use of coffee percentages. It is clearly
seen that percentage of instant coffee selllings are well above the fresh coffee in all cities.
In some countries, owning a home rather than renting is very important for people
Why might be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In particular countries, for people having a house rather than renting one is crucial. I believe,
there are some fundemental reasons for this situation but one of them stands out; economic
conditions. Also, in my opinion, it is resulted in disadvantages for people.
First of all, economic conditions have huge impacts on people who do not have any house
especially in poor countries. This is the major cause of this situation because rent payments
has the biggest share in monthly spends for people. Moreover, it is not affordable in the long
run. Why rent payments cover most of the budget in month for a person? Because in most
countries construction and real estate one of the most valuable and lucrative sectors.
Additionally, bad economic figures in these countries causes increasing rents. Although
prices of houses increase simultaneously, it is still more senseful that having a house rather
than renting. For instance, people take credits in Turkey from the banks with a long run
payment and montly credit payment almost equals the rent.
This conditions encourage to people to buy a house. According to me, it is a negative
situation because people work for years to buy a house and after eventually they have a
home, they became old individuals who miss beauties and opportunities of the world. So,
people should not spend their lifes to buy a house or anything. For example, people can
attend lots of courses or travel rather than paying these credits if renting is relatively
cheaper.
Taking everything into consideration, today in several countries, people try to buy a house
while they can rent and it is essential milestone on their lives. In my opinion it has a negative
impression on them overall.
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