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Paragraph editing 4 How to Skate Safely year 4-6

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How to Skate Safely
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GL Ms P
ISH a
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how do you buy skates First, wear your skating socks
when you try on skates. Second, kick your feet into the
backs of the boots After that, buckle the boots and stand
up! Next, make sure your toes arent squashed. last, make
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m
sure your heel doesnt slide up and down. From Safe
skating magazine by Mike Hulon
Error Summary
Capitalization 4
Punctuation:
Apostrophe 2
Period 2
Other 1
What kind of safety equipment should you buy buy wrist
guards with plastic plates for wrist protection Get elbow
and knee guards in case of falls. The most important
thing is a padded helmet! make sure its snug. you dont
want a head injury. Now youre reddy to roll
From skate equipment today by Tracy Hill
Error Summary
Capitalization 6
Punctuation:
Apostrophe 3
Period 1 O
ther 3
Spelling 1
How to Skate Safely
EN
GL Ms P
ISH a
CL
AS
SJ
B
how do you buy skates First, wear your skating socks
when you try on skates. Second, kick your feet into the
backs of the boots After that, buckle the boots and stand
up! Next, make sure your toes arent squashed. last, make
s
'
m
sure your heel doesnt slide up and down. From Safe
skating magazine by Mike Hulon
Error Summary
Capitalization 4
Punctuation:
Apostrophe 2
Period 2
Other 1
What kind of safety equipment should you buy buy wrist
guards with plastic plates for wrist protection Get elbow
and knee guards in case of falls. The most important
thing is a padded helmet! make sure its snug. you dont
want a head injury. Now youre reddy to roll
From skate equipment today by Tracy Hill
Error Summary
Capitalization 6
Punctuation:
Apostrophe 3
Period 1 O
ther 3
Spelling 1
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