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ENGLISH FOR PROFESSIONAL PURPOSES (ENG3)
Prof. Jeffrey Engracia
UST-SHS - Accountancy, Business, and Management (Business Track) - Student No. 2021149426
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Synchronous: Wednesday 9:30 am 11:30 am| Asynchronous: Thursday,
9:30 am - 11:30 am
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Course Material:
Grading Scheme
Percentage
Written Outputs/Class
Standing
- WW1AS, WW2OSE, & RPs
25%
Performance Task
- IAs or MAJOR GAs
45%
Quarterly Exam
30%
2. Bottom-up
- reliant on the details of the texts
3. Interactive
- uses both top down and bottom
up
Difference of Academic Text from
Non-Academic Text
Academic
Non-Academi
c
Author
- from the
same field of
the
study/industry
- expert on
certain fields
- a person
who
writes as a
profession/la
y
person
- regular
writer
Purpose
- goes beyond
informing V-AN
(Validating,
affirming,
negating)
for public
information
Audience
- specific
audience
- experts on
the same field
like the author
- general
audience
- for the
public mass
Vocabulary
& Grammar
- uses
technical
language
- common
words for
experts on
certain field jargons
- uses plain
language
- do not use
jargons
Organizatio
n & Flow
structured
format
unpredictable
pattern/forma
t
COLOR CODING
Title, Section, Sub-section, Terminologies,
Definition, Important statements, further details
Lesson 1: Reading Academic Text
Process of Reading
● The reading process starts with
recognition of printed language symbols
● after written symbols are recognized,
the reader assigns meanings to the
symbols based on the readers
schemata (background knowledge)
● the reader makes a connection with
their schemata with the author’s ideas
● finally, the reader adjusts, modifies,
applies, and constructs new knowledge
about the text based on the merging of
the schemata and the authors
knowledge
Reading Strategies
1. Top-down
- reliant on the schemata
ENGLISH FOR PROFESSIONAL PURPOSES (ENG3)
Prof. Jeffrey Engracia
UST-SHS - Accountancy, Business, and Management (Business Track) - Student No. 2021149426
Content
specialized
knowledge
general
information
Academic Texts
- Is writing produced with a definite
purpose and structured in a specific
way in order to communicate a
message on an intended audience
Reasons on why we need to read Academic
Texts
- very good source of reliable data
- increase one’s credibility
- could help with other academic
ventures like seminars, presentations,
workshops
- broadens one’s knowledge and
perspective
- helps in figuring out what to choose the
best topic for thesis
- could contribute more on academic
conversations/discussions
- preparing ourselves for academic
writing Academic writing
- is a process
- is thinking
- has clear purpose
- demands special knowledge
- requires a complex and objective
language
- it follows a formal style
Characteristics of Academic Texts
1. Academic Texts begins with clear
assumptions
- assumptions may come in from
of thesis statements
- main idea of the author
2. Academic Texts rely on several sources
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an academic text may talk
about a lot of phenomena; but
for it to be credible, assertion or
assumptions made should be
well reasoned.
3. Academic Texts use formal words
- formality of a paper in academic
writing contributes to the
academic paper’s ability
● E.g. use damaged
instead of messed up,
use cannot instead of
can’t -use do not
instead of don’t, use as
soon as possible
instead of ASAP (avoid
abbreviations)
- avoid expressions like, kind of
like, as a matter of fact
3.1 use formal grammar styles
- use more formal negative forms
- limit the use of all-purpose
expressions like, etc.
- avoid making use of second
person pronouns
- place adverbs with verbs
- avoid making use of split
infinitives
- be more efficient in making use
of words
4. Academic Texts end with valid
conclusions
- in spite of the ideas presented
all throughout an academic text,
ending it with a conclusion;
reminds the readers of the ideas
presented supporting the ideas.
ENGLISH FOR PROFESSIONAL PURPOSES (ENG3)
Prof. Jeffrey Engracia
UST-SHS - Accountancy, Business, and Management (Business Track) - Student No. 2021149426
5. Academic Texts follow a structure for
their words and paragraphs
- an academic text makes use of
varied strategies for using
words and different patterns of
development
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5.1 Nominalization
- act of transforming words from
verbs to nouns
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do not sound conclusive
accept room for errors (have
margin of errors, no matter how
certain you are)
do not appear to be too
confident, must test your
hypothesis
use references to other’s work
to build your own paper
Phases and Strategies of Reading Academic
Texts
5.2 Passivation
- uses passive voice that makes
academic texts more formal an
academic
5.3 Patterns of Paragraph Development
6. Academic Texts require Objectivity
- the tone of academic texts
should be impersonal and
should maintain a certain level
of social distance
- avoid personal pronouns
- avoid rhetorical questions (use
declarative forms)
- avoid emotive language
7. Academic Texts use explicit Language
- academic texts should be clear
in directing readers’ attention to
the points he/she wants to
make
- use effective transitional
devices (use conjunctions to
increase explicitness)
8. Academic Texts use Caution
- an academic text avoids making
hasty generalizations
1. Pre Reading
● Purpose
- get an overview of the
test and activate the
schemata
● Strategies
1. Scanning and
Skimming.
2. Checking the features
of the academic text
2. While reading
● Purpose
- monitor comprehension
and organize
● Strategies
1. Note-taking,
Highlighting, and
creating marginal notes
2. Creating graphic
Organizer
3. Post Reading
● Purpose
- evaluating and using
information
● Strategies
ENGLISH FOR PROFESSIONAL PURPOSES (ENG3)
Prof. Jeffrey Engracia
UST-SHS - Accountancy, Business, and Management (Business Track) - Student No. 2021149426
1. Critical thinking and
Critical Reading
● Critical reading
comes first than
critical thinking
Critical Reading
1. Critical Reading is an active process of
discovery
- it involves interaction with the
writer: when you question
his/her claims and comment on
his/her ideas
2. It involves scrutiny of any information
heard or read
- it means not easily believing
information that you received
Requirements and Validations in Critical
Reading
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The ability to pose problematic
questions
The ability to analyze a problem in all its
dimensions
The ability to find, gather, and interpret
data, facts, and other information
relevant to the problem
The ability to imagine alternative
solutions to the problem, see different
perspectives and way of answering the
problem
The ability to analyze competing
approaches and answers, state
arguments for and against alternatives,
and choose the best solution based on
identified values and criteria
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The ability to write an effective
argument justifying your choice while
acknowledging counter arguments.
How to become a Critical Reader
1. Annotate what you read
● What: the action of writing
comments on the text to further
the reader’s unique
understanding, draw
conclusions, and identify one’s
area of confusion
● Why: annotating forces your
brain to slow down and to think
about what you are reading
2. Outline the text
● How: identify and list down the
main points of the writer.
Identify the ideas that the writer
has raised to support his/her
stand. Not an outline
● But it should have: Roman
Numerals, Capitalized Letters,
Arabic Numerals, Lowercase
letters
3. Summarize the text
● What: Writing the gist of the text
in your own words in usually
one paragraph. Do not include
your analysis of the text. Cite
the general observation of what
it contains. It requires the
clearest overview of something
to avoid misrepresentations.
● Qualities/characteristics of a
good summary:
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comprehensive: The
summary should not
leave out any
indispensable idea
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concise: The summary
should not focus on the
minor points anymore
coherent: The summary
should not look like a
set of random
disconnected ideas
independent: The
summary should not
sound like an ugly
imitation of the original
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conventions:
watch 1:37:04 –
1:45:34 of
recording
Evaluate the text
● What: You question the author’s
purpose, intentions, and
assumptions in the claims.
Check if the arguments are
supported by valid and credible
evidence
Spot flaws in reasoning
● What: Identify logical fallacies
committed in the text
● Could also be a fallacy
● As well as punctuations and
using multiple meaning words
Synthesizing
● What: It is a level higher than
summarizing. Discussing
commonalities that exist
between and among various
texts
Paraphrasing
● The 4Rs of paraphrasing
1. Reword
2. Rearrange
3. Realize
4. Recheck
*NOTE THAT NOS 6 AND 7 IS NOT AVAILABLE
IN THE RECORDING SESSION ONLY IN THE
VOPPT
LESSON 1.2: Reading Academic Text
(SUPPLEMENTAL)
Patterns of Development
1. Description
● Characteristics: Giving of
features and example
● Cues: For example,
characteristics
2. Sequence
● Characteristics: Giving of items
or events in numerical or
chronological order
● Cues: First, second, third, in the
beginning, in the end, shortly
after
3. Comparison
● Characteristics: Giving of
similarities between and among
different variables
● Cues: On one hand, on the
other hand, similarly
4. Cause-and-effect
● Characteristics: Giving of a
phenomenon and the reason for
its existence
● Cues: As a result, therefore,
consequently
5. Problem-solution
● Characteristics: Giving of a
phenomenon or problem and
ways on how to address it
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Cues: As a result, because
Academic Texts Require Objectivity
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The tone of academic texts should be
impersonal and should maintain a
certain level of social distance
How do you maintain objectivity?
1. Avoiding the use of personal
pronouns such as you, i, and
we
2. Avoiding rhetorical questions as
it marks closeness with the
reader and constantly seeks
his/her attention
3. Avoiding the emotive language
that shows biases and lessens
objectivity
Academic texts use Explicit Language
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Academic text should be clear in
directing readers’ attention to the points
he/she wants to make
What are examples of explicit markers?
● By making use of transitional
devices (the use of conjunctive
adverbs)
Academic texts use Caution
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An academic text avoids making hasty
generalizations
When and how do you observe
caution?
When
● When a hypothesis needs to be
tested?
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Drawing conclusions or
predictions from your findings
that may not be conclusive
Referencing others work to
build on your own paper
How
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Cautioning verbs like
tends, suggests, appear
to be, think, believe,
doubt, indicate
Modal verbs like will,
must, may, should,
could, and might
Adverbs of frequency
like often, sometimes,
usually
LESSON 3
Preparing a Working Bibliography
● Bibliography
- Shows a list of reference
materials used in a scholarly
written output; It is made up of
bibliographical entries
● Bibliographical Entry
- Shows pertinent pieces of
information about a reference
material
3 Main Parts of Bibliographical Entry
1. Author - Last name or Initial of Given
Name
● For APA, the middle initials is
not important
● If the author has more than
ENGLISH FOR PROFESSIONAL PURPOSES (ENG3)
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UST-SHS - Accountancy, Business, and Management (Business Track) - Student No. 2021149426
2. Title - Main Title, Subtitle
● Can be differentiated by the
layout
● Main Title is usually emphasized
3. Publication Information
● Year
● Place
● Publisher’s Name
Reference for more than Seven Author
Madrunio, M., Villamarzo, P., Vizconde, C.,
Engracia, J., Faigal, C., Legazpi,
S.,...Cervania, C.V. (2009). Managing
College Freshman Language Skills.
Espana, Manila: UST Publishing House.
Biographical Entries for Journal Articles
Reference for Book with One Author
E.g.
Madrunio, M. (2009). Managing College
Freshman Language Skill. Espana
Manila: UST Publishing House.
Reference for Books with Two Authors
Madruino, M., & Villamarzo, P. (2009). Managing
College Freshman Language Skills.
Espana, Manila: UST Publishing House.
Reference for Books with Three-Seven Authors
Salonga, R. (2009). Conventional vs.
Contemporary. ITechnology and
Beyond, 2(3), 6-10.
Working Bibliography vs. Annotated
Bibliography
● Working Bibliography is the list of
references
● Annotated Bibliography has a paragraph
or 2 that summarizes the reference after
the bibliography
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Bibliography vs. References
Bibliography contains all the list of
references, directly helpful or Indirectly
helpful references.
References list are only sources that
you have cited in-text
Concept Paper
● Is a prelude to a full paper which aims
to seek approval or funding
● Is a summary that tells the reader what
you are proposing, why it is important,
and how it will be carried out
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Provides your target reader an idea as
to how your paper is about. A more
formal way to ask permission/go signal
whether you should start your paper
right away
Concept Paper in the Academe
● In the academic setting, a concept
paper may come in a form of a research
proposal
● It is something that is done before a full
blown research paper is carried out,
implemented, or approved for funding
● There is a format that is followed in
creating a concept paper
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E.g., A Solar cell is a device
that/which converts the energy
of sunlight into electric energy
Extended Definition
used to define abstract concepts. It
allows the writer to broaden the
definition by using analogy, examples,
characteristics, components, historical
account, or something else
For further discussion:
Purpose of Writing a Concept Paper
● It involves defining some terms based
on the context of your research
● Defining the terms can be subjective
because you have the freedom to
choose what areas to emphasize
however freedom entails responsibility
Explaining a concept
● Definition is a mode of paragraph
development that answers the
questions: What is it? What does it
mean? What are its special features?
- Description
- Information Report
- Enumeration
Techniques in Defining
● Formal Definition
the term is first assigned to a class or
group to which it belongs and then
distinguished from other terms in the
class
- Elements of a Formal Definition:
Term, Class, Distinguishing
Detail
How to write a concept paper for
research?
1. RS Title
2. RS Questions (1 par.)
3. RS Hypothesis (1-2 par.)
4. Proposed Methodology (1 par.)
5. References
LESSON 4:
Reviewing the Types, Elements and Forms of
Argumentative Writing
Basic Types of Argumentative Writing
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Editorials (Insider)
- written by writers who are part
of the company
Opposite Editorials (Outsider)
- writers commissioned by a
newspaper company
- always found at the opposite of
the editorials (traditional)
- Because they want the readers
to see varying opinions about
the issue.
- The issues on hand should be
intelligently discussed so an
expert should be invited to talk
about the issue.
Letters to the Editor (Private Individuals)
- Written by a private individuals
(readers) to a company to agree
or disagree with the article
which the company publish
Advertisement
- Paid announcements that try to
convince people to buy
something
- E.g., propaganda
Basic Structure of Argumentative Writing
● Title
- Catches the reader's attention
into reading the work
● Introduction
- Establish the territory by
providing the main idea
- Shows the scope of your
discussion
● Body
● Conclusion
Elements of Argument
● Proponents
● Claim/Argument
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- Refers to the main argument
Counter Arguments/Counterclaim
- Refers to the arguments of the
opposing side
Another Academic Form of Argumentative
Writing
● Reaction Paper
- Requires the response of a
reader to a prompt which
requires thoughtful reading,
researching, and writing
● Reviews
- Short argumentative writing
which aims to provide readers
with some insights about a
published material
● Critique
Reviewing the Steps in Writing a Reaction Paper
1. Reading and studying the material
2. Annotate the text as you read
3. Ask questions as you read
4. Free write
5. Decide on your angle & Determine your
thesis
6. Organize your paper
7. Gather quotations
8. Structure your paragraph
Steps to consider in Book Review
- Mention the name of the book, the
author and your personal quality rating
of the book
- Provide your ‘Personal Quality Rating’
by evaluating the book on a scale of 0
to 5 based on your personal
liking/disliking of the book
Subparts of a Book Review
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Summary
Provides a brief detail
of the plot
Social/History
Gives the purpose for
which the book was
written
Style
Discusses its
distinctive features
like point of view,
language, used, etc.
Thoughts
Mentions your
personal reaction
Steps to Consider in Film Review
1. View the film more than once
2. Express your general opinions and
support them with examples
3. Decide your style of writing based on
your readership profile
4. Avoid spoilers
5. Judge the story based on its different
elements
6. Rate the actors
7. Rate the technical elements
Parts to consider in Paper/Article Review
● Abstract
– 200 - 300 words summarizing the
rationale of the review
● Introduction
- Giving the importance of the
topic being reviewed and
providing an outline of the
review
● Body
- Discussing thoroughly each
point by providing reliable
sources to support them
● Conclusion
Summarizing the review in
terms of importance, purpose,
main points and implications
Critique Papers
- Form of constructive criticism of an
expert’s work, based on the critical
analysis and evaluation of its strengths
and weaknesses
● Critiques may come in two different
types
1. APA Format (Introduction, Body,
Conclusion)
2. Art Criticism
- Made up of the description,
analysis, interpretation, and
evaluation
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UST-SHS - Accountancy, Business, and Management (Business Track) - Student No. 2021149426
QUARTER 2
LESSON 5:
Position Paper
Position Papers
- Is another example of argumentative
writing and is written to discuss the
writer’s stand on an issue of
phenomenon, in terms of how to deal
with it or if it’s a pressing matter, how to
address or solve it
Characteristics of a Position Paper
1. Debatable - It should focus on the
aspect of the issue of the issue that is
worth arguing about
● Facts cannot be a subject for a
position unless you challenge
the subject topic
2. Clear - It should specifically state the
author’s stand
● The thesis statement should be
well worded
● Should verbalize your actual
stand in a thesis statement
● Should focus on a single aspect
of the issue
3. Factual - It should be made up of
arguments that are well-supported
4. Engaging - It should sustain the
reader’s interest from the beginning to
the end
5. Resolute - It should provide not only
problems but also suggestions for
solutions
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Component of a position paper
1. Claim
2. Evidences
- Supporting details
3. Explanation
4. Counter Argument
5. Reputation
6. Transition
- Explicit market that shows the
relationship between your claim
& reputation
- Words or phrases that dictates
among your ideas
Other Explanation
● May seek to generate support from an
organization like the government by
creating policies/laws that support its
cause
● It discusses an issue to inform the
people and increase their awareness,
and ultimately, gain their support in
whatever means the public could
extend
● Position paper are commonly published
in academic, in politics, in law, in
medical field, and in other domains
- There are proper channels to
reach out to the correct
audience
● Position papers range from the simple
format of a letter to the editor through
the most complex, in the form of a
multi-author academic position paper
Steps to build a position
1. Read widely and gather all pieces of
information about the topic
2. Formulate your views about the issue
based on what you have learned
3. Each
assertion
should
be
well-supported
4. Evidences should come from reliable
resources
5. Refine your argument - Arguments
should be presented through the
following
structure:
AsseEvEx
(Assertion, Evidence, Explanation)
6. Prepare for the opposition - cite the
strongest
counter-arguments
and
prepare to counter them with your
strongest refutations
7. Write your position - compose the
position paper following the usual TIBC
structure (Title, Introduction, Body,
Conclusion)
Lesson 6
Professional Text vs Academic Text
Field Report
- The purpose of a field report is to
describe the observations of people,
places, and/or events and to analyze
that observation data in order to identify
and categorize common themes in
relation to the research problem
underpinning the study. The content
represents
the
researcher’s
interpretation of meaning found in data
that has been gathered during one or
more observational events
- Might need you to observe something
and identify why you need to observe
from the first place
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Examples of things to observe: Physical
setting, Objects & Material Cultures,
Use of language, Behavior Cycles,
Event, Body Movements
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To effectively observe, you need to
apply MAT: Methods, Approaches,
Techniques
Methods of Observation
An observation is the “skill of describing
scientific events” drawn from “any information
collected with the senses,”
- Scientific by nature
- Technical
- 2 Methods to Observation
Qualitative
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Uses our
senses (sight,
hear, touch,
smell, taste)
to record the
results
Example: the
colors of the
walls of the
room as red
Quantitative
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Those that
can be
measured
using
instruments
and yield
numerical
values
Example: the
square
meters of the
room floor
Types of Observation
1. Participant Observation
- Involves an intensive interaction
between the observer and the
subjects or participants by
joining the group he/she is
studying in their environment
and participate in their activities
● Overt: Awareness of the
participant,
interacts
with the subject
● Covert: Unaware that
they
are
being
observed, obtains a
richer
and
more
detailed observation
2. Nonparticipant Observation
- The
observer
does
not
participate in the activities of
the group being observed.
He/She is usually seated at the
sidelines observing the action
of the group. This means that
the observer is not directly
involved in the situation he/she
is observing.
3. Naturalistic Observation
- This
method,
which
is
commonly
used
by
psychologists and other social
science researchers, requires
that the researcher observes
the subjects under study in their
natural setting. The observer
simply observes and records
what is really happening as they
occur naturally like in laboratory
research.
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4. Simulation
- The observer simulates or
recreates
a
situation,
environment, or system and
observes the subjects under
study
in
the
simulated
environment. He/She may ask
the participants to portray a role
individually or by team. This
may not guarantee, however,
that the participants’ behaviour
would be the same as in natural
environment
Other approaches to observation
1. Ethnography - Study of People and
Cultures
2. Case Study - observing a person for a
period of time
3. Historical Approach - Observing a
people in the same position over a
period of time
4. Conversational/Interactional Analysis
A&D of Ethnographic Observation
Advantages
Disadvantages
More comprehensive
Dependent of the
researcher’s
observations and
interpretations
Gains deeper and
richer understanding
of one’s behaviour in
a natural setting
Observer bias in
difficult to eliminate
Suited in studying in
group behavior over
time
CLose supervision is
needed
From University of Southern California
1. Systematicaly observe and accurately
record the varying aspects of the
situation.
- Pay attention to every detail.
2. Continuously analyze your observation.
- Observe more than once to
validate first findings.
3. Keep the report’s aims in mind while
you are observing.
- Disregard observations made
that are nuances to your goal.
4. Consciously observe, record, and
analyze what you hear and see in the
context of a theoretical framework.
- Disregard logical and sensible
but unrelated observations.
By Bernard (2006)
- Each one has their own unique way of
writing field notes, however proposes
four types of field notes:
1. Jottings - Any observation
2. Diary - Entries are written in a
regular intervals
3. Log - Waits for a specific
behavior in a specific period of
time
4. Field notes proper - there is a
structure/format that you need
to follow which varies from work
place to another
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Tips on Jotting
Observations shouldn’t be dependent on the
notes but rather observe your surroundings to
analyze behavior
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Do not attempt to be a “court recorder”
Listening is more important than writing
Notes are memory triggers
Use pictures to illustrate concepts
Write down keywords only
Use multiple colors
Write on one side of the paper
Use the presenter’s pauses to enhance
your notes
9. Review and enhance the notes within
24 hours
10. File notes in a meaningful system
Disadvantage: have negative
effect
of
increasing how
intrusive you are as an observer
4. Illustrations/Drawing
- To draw a map of the
observation
setting
or
illustrating objects in relation to
people’s behavior.
- Forms of rough tables or graphs
documenting the frequency and
types of activities observed
5. Inferences
- conclusions or deductions based on
observations or form a given evidence
- a logical interpretation of an event that
is based on observations and schema
Other techniques to record your observation
1. Note taking
- organizing shorthand symbols
- Effective by creating codes or
shortcuts so
- Does not impede an individual's
ability to observe
2. Photography
- Documenting the details of a
space that would otherwise
require extensive note taking
- Does not absolutely reflect
reality
3. Video and Audio recording
- Advantage: Saves you the
trouble of going back to the
interviewee
Lesson 7
Survey Report
Data Commentary
- The verbal comment on visual
presentation. What is given is a graphic
organizer and you need to explain it.
- It usually appears in the Results and
Discussion section of a thesis.
- The reverse process of a graphic
organizers
Main purposes of a data commentary
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To present the results of research
To interpret these results
To discuss the significance
implications of the study
and
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Why use data commentary?
1. Highlight results
2. Compare and evaluate different data
sets
3. Assess standard theories, common
beliefs, or general practices in light of
the results. It may reveal how the results
validate or invalidate the methods used
in the study.
4. Assess the reliability of data in terms of
the methods that produced it.\
Structure of Data Commentary
1. Location elements and summary
statements (Move 1)
- We give the ordinal position of
the graphic organizer that we
will use
- Move 1 Step 1 is when
● Example, (1) Table 5 shows the
points of entry of computer
viruses for XYZ company
(Summary Statement), (2) Figure
4 gives the results of the
second experiment
2. Highlighting Statement (Move 2)
- The generalizations that you
can draw from the
Do’s
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Simply repeat
all the details
Don'ts
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Spot trends
or regularities
in words
Attempt to
cover all the
information
Claim more
than is
reasonable or
defensible
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in the data
Separate
more
important
findings from
least
important
Make claims
of
appropriate
strength
Example: As can be seen, in the majority of
cases, the entry point of the virus infection can
be detected, with disks brought from home
being by far the leading cause in the list (42%).
However, it is alarming to note that the source
of nearly 30% of viruses cannot be determined.
3. Discussion of implication, problems,
exemptions,
recommendations
(DIPER)
- Highlights the move 2
- Answers the question: So
what?
Example: While it may be possible to eliminate
home-to-workplace infection by requiring
computer users to run antivirus software on
diskettes
brought
from
home
(Recommendation),
businesses
are
still
vulnerable to data loss, especially from
unidentifiable sources of infection (Exemptions)
Focus: Language verbs for introducing
summary statements
● Table 2 shows
● Figure 1 illustrates
● Table 3 demonstrates
● Provide, present, summarize, reveal,
indicates
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Some specific ways for qualifying or
moderating a claim
Survey Report
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1. Probability
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Stronger claim: The factory has
benefited from the recent technology
upgrade
Soft claim: The factory seems to have
benefited from the recent technology
upgrade
Weaker claim: It has been said that the
factory seems to have benefited from
the recent technology upgrade
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An academic text that documents the
data commentaries of a research paper
It can be a formal document that can be
used for submission to your research
teacher to show your progress in your
research paper, in terms of interpreting
the result of your data
It can be considered as a preview of
your chapter 4
It is an organized method of recording,
presenting, and interpreting your data
Structure:
1. a title page
2. table of contents
3. executive summary
4. background and objectives
5. Methodology
6. Results
7. conclusion
and
recommendations
8. Appendices.
2. Generalization
- When qualifying or defending a
generalization, use the verb “tend” or
qualifying modifiers
1. Title Page
2.
Table
of
contents
Provides the list of
the survey report’s
section
- Your
number of pages
for R&D depends
on the number of
3. Soft Verbs
4. Distance
- Distance yourself from the data
by showing in some way that it
is “soft.”
-
your table
Provide the list if the survey report’s
section
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You start with the actual page numbers
in the executive summary
In some formats, the preliminaries are
included in the table of contents: The
executive summary is also sometimes
considered part of the preliminaries
3. Executive summary
- Gives your reader an overview of your
survey report
4. Background & Objectives
- Gives the introduction of your survey
report
- Specifies the groundwork of the survey
conducted
- You may find in the previous chapters of
your paper\
5. Methodology
- This
summarizes
the
processes
involved in selecting the respondents &
generating the data
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Demographic: Age, gender, etc.
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Target vs Actual size: How many were
you expecting to answer vs how many
responded
How?: How the respondents were
selected, and how it was administered,
What assurance did you give to your
respondents that their responses will be
kept confidential?
Where & When? What was given in
exchange for the response, where and
when it was conducted?
5. Results and Discussions
- Presents the tables & figures
with their corresponding data
commentaries
- What
should
be
the
arrangement of your data
commentaries?
- Question, Variables,
- Based on the themes used and
variables measured by the
survey
6. Conclusion
- Closes your survey report
- By summarizing, paraphrasing,
and synthesizing step 3 of all
your data commentaries
7. Appendices
- This
exhibits
all
the
survey-related documents you
used
- Examples: Questionnaire, Letter
of Consent, Request Letters,
Other pertinent docs
Lesson 4
Laboratory Report
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Laboratory Report
- Document that provides essential
details on what took place inside the
laboratory (before, during, and after the
laboratory experiment)
- Fundamental to hard science (such as
Engineering and health-related courses)
- Concrete evidences of the writer’s
understanding
of
the
rationale
principles, processes and results of the
experiment
Parts of a well-written Laboratory Report
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.
Title Page.
Introduction.
Methods and Materials (or Equipment)
Experimental Procedure.
Results.
Discussion.
Conclusion.
References.
Tips in Writing Laboratory Report
1. ABSTRACT - condensed version of the
experiment
● Tip 1: It must be substantial
enough that the reader need not
read the entire report to know
the details of the experiment
● Tip 2: It must concise and
comprehensible without giving
too much information
2. Introduction
● Tip 1: Highlights that need/s as
to why the experiment will be
conducted
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Tip 2: Gives the background
information
and
primary
motivation of the experiment
Tip 3: Outlines the investigation
question and objectives
Tip
4: Discusses related
theories and defines key
concepts
3. Materials
● Tiip 1: Lists the necessary
equipment
apparatus,
chemicals, glasswares needed
in the laboratory
● Tip 2: Gives how much and/or
how many of the materials
needed for the experiment is
indicated
● Tip 3: Outlines the specifics of
setting up the materials
4. Procedure
● Tip 1: Includes the detailed
steps undertaken and all
materials
used
in
the
experiment
● Tip 2: Provides the difficulties
encountered and how they were
solved are discussed
● Tip 3: You may present the
procedure
using
graphic
organizers
such
as
the
following:
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Presenting Creative Report
5. Results
● Tip 1: Shows what was
obtained in the experiment
conducted
● Tip 2: Uses narrative and
graphic format (e.g. tables,
graphs, etc.)
● Tip 3: Provides a brief
explanation for each graphs
6. Discussion
● Tip 1: Provides analysis and
interpretation of the raw data
● Tip 2: Interpolates the result as
relative
to
experimented
objectives and statement of the
problem
● Tip 3: Relates the result of the
experiment to scientific theories
and principles
7. Conclusion
● Tip 1: Includes any unforeseen
results/occurence
in
the
conduct of the study
● Tip 2: Restates the experiment’s
objectives, the methods used,
the
salient
findings,
the
knowledge acquires
● Tip 3: Encapsulates the content
of the laboratory report
Creating and Using Presentational Aids
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Aims to supplement your report through
a combination of the ff: Pictures, art
forms, illustrations, and/or sound
Why use presentational aids
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Clarifying the verbal message
Adding variety
Reducing Public Speaking Anxiety
Conveying information concisely
Increasing persuasive appeal
Increasing Listener Retention
Classification of Presentation Aids
1. Visual
- Appeals to the audience’s
sense of sight
- Examples: Chart, Slides, Flip
Chart,
2. Audio
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Appeals to the audience’s
sense of hearing
- Example:
sound,
musical
recordings, conversations
3. Audiovisual
- Supplements
both
the
audience’s hearing and visual
- Example: Videos
Characteristics of Presentational Aids
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Relevant: you have to ensure that your
presentation is related to your paper
Appropriate: whatever presentation
you will use should be suitable to your
audience
Appealing:
materials
should
be
interesting; do not use presentation that
are boring
Readable:
Varied: should be diverse
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