English for Academic and Professional Purposes Quarter 1 – Module 5: Writing the Concept Paper CO_Q1_ SHS English or Academic and Professional Purposes _ Module 5 SHS English or Academic and Professional Purposes Alternative Delivery Mode Quarter 1 – Module 5: Writing a Concept Paper First Edition, 2020 Republic Act 8293, section 176 states that: No copyright shall subsist in any work of the Government of the Philippines. However, prior approval of the government agency or office wherein the work is created shall be necessary for exploitation of such work for profit. Such agency or office may, among other things, impose as a condition the payment of royalties. Borrowed materials (i.e., songs, stories, poems, pictures, photos, brand names, trademarks, etc.) included in this module are owned by their respective copyright holders. Every effort has been exerted to locate and seek permission to use these materials from their respective copyright owners. 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Buaron EPS, English Printed in the Philippines by: ________________________________ Department of Education – Regional Office 10 Office Address: Zone 1, Upper Balulang Cagayan de Oro City 9000 Telefax: E-mail Address: (088) 880-7071, (088) 880-7072 region10@deped.gov.ph English for Academic and Professional Purposes Quarter 1 - Module 5: Writing the Concept Paper Introductory Message This Self-Learning Module (SLM) is prepared so that you, our dear learners, can continue your studies and learn while at home. Activities, questions, directions, exercises, and discussions are carefully stated for you to understand each lesson. Each SLM is composed of different parts. Each part shall guide you step-bystep as you discover and understand the lesson prepared for you. Pre-tests are provided to measure your prior knowledge on lessons in each SLM. This will tell you if you need to proceed on completing this module or if you need to ask your facilitator or your teacher’s assistance for better understanding of the lesson. At the end of each module, you need to answer the post-test to selfcheck your learning. Answer keys are provided for each activity and test. We trust that you will be honest in using these. In addition to the material in the main text, Notes to the Teacher are also provided to our facilitators and parents for strategies and reminders on how they can best help you on your home-based learning. Please use this module with care. Do not put unnecessary marks on any part of this SLM. Use a separate sheet of paper in answering the exercises and tests. And read the instructions carefully before performing each task. If you have any questions in using this SLM or any difficulty in answering the tasks in this module, do not hesitate to consult your teacher or facilitator. Thank you. What I Need to Know This module is solely prepared for you to access and acquire lessons befitted in your grade level. The exercises, drills and assessments are carefully made to suit your level of understanding. Concepts like the structure, language used from various disciplines, ideas contained in various academic texts, knowledge of the text structure to glean information that is needed, various techniques, and outlining reading text in various disciplines are discussed in the following lessons: • • Lesson 1 – Concept paper and its parts Lesson 2 – Ways in presenting a concept To accomplish the desired performance stated, please be guided with the following learning competencies as anchor: • Determines the ways a writer can elucidate on a concept by definition, explication and clarification (CS_EN11/12A-EAPP-Ig-j-20) • Compare and contrast various kinds of concept papers: (CS_EN11/12A-EAPP-Ig-j-20) a. Arts b. Business c. Law d. Philosophy e. Politics f. Religion g. Science h. Sports i. TechVoc - Home Economics - Agri-Fishery - IA - ICT • Presents a novel or project with accompanying visuals/graphic aids Learning Objectives: At the end of this module, you are expected to: 1. Define concept paper; 2. Identify the different elements in writing a concept paper; 3. Identify the parts of a concept paper and the importance of each part; 4. Comprehend on the different modes or patters that a concept paper can be explained; 5. Identify situations in which a concept paper may be effectively used on the society; 6. Explain and clarify concepts from different fields of specialization; 7. Write a concept paper on a specific topic related to your strand; and 8. Create a video where a concept paper is presented using visual/graphic aids. 1 CO_Q1_ SHS English or Academic and Professional Purposes _ Module 5 What I Know Direction: Choose the letter of the correct answer. Neatly and legibly, write the letter of your answer on a clean recycled sheet of paper. 1. It refers to a short summary that tells the reader what the project is, why it is important, and how it will be carried out. A. Position paper C. Research paper B. Concept paper D. Thesis 2. Advantages of writing a concept paper include A. You may be able to organize your ideas B. It gives an opportunity to stand out and receive a positive response from reviewers C. You are sure to get funding D. ‘A’ and ‘B’ 3. Which of the following is NOT true about references in the concept paper? A. We can cite references in Introduction and Methods section B. It is important to write references following standard guidelines C. Statements should be linked to references D. We can have as many references as possible 4. How many important parts that you need to consider in writing a concept paper in academic research? A. 2 C. 4 B. 6 D. 7 5. Which part of the concept paper that can be written in question form? A. Title C. Purpose of the Study B. Introduction D. Objectives of the Study 6. Which part of the concept paper that describes about the current issue of your study? A. Background C. Introduction B. Purpose of the Study D. Methodology 7. Which of the following is NOT included in developing the paragraph of writing the concept paper. A. labelling C. definition B. explication D. explanation 8. This mode of presenting the concept uses examples to develop the ideas in the paragraph. A. labelling C. definition B. explication D. explanation 9. Why do you need to include the distinguishing feature in formal sentence definition? A. To present the unique qualities of a term. B. To recognize it from the other terms. C. To be different in some terms. D. None of the above 10. Which section of the concept paper that states the process of how you will conduct the research project? A. Objectives of the Study C. Proposed Research Timeline B. Purpose of the Study D. Methodology 2 CO_Q1_ SHS English or Academic and Professional Purposes _ Module 5 Lesson 1 Concept paper and its parts What Is It Concept paper is an academic paper which tells about a brief summary of a certain research project, its importance and how it will be carried out. The main purpose of writing a concept paper is to convince your reader that your proposed research project is worth doing. There are many types of concept paper such as discussions, business projects, commentaries, and academic research. The structure of the paper depends mainly on the type of concept paper that the author or writer wants to write. In this module, we will focus on writing a concept paper for academic research. Seven important aspects to consider when writing a concept paper in academic research. 1. Title – this can be best presented in a question form. 2. Introduction – this is the brief overview of the topic or issue you wish to study. 3. Background - This section describes the current condition of the field you're researching, including the knowledge and issues that the study will address. You can also include the reason why you want to investigate or study the topic. 4. Preliminary Literature review - In this section, you will write related studies and papers that will support your research topic. 5. Methodology – This section contains the data analysis system, data gathering procedure, instruments to be utilized or used, and participants of the study. 6. Timelines - provide a reasonable and achievable timeline for your project. 7. References – provides all the list of all sources of your research such as books, journals, and other resources cited in your paper. You may use American Psychological Association (APA), Modern Language Association (MLA) and the Chicago style. 3 CO_Q1_ SHS English or Academic and Professional Purposes _ Module 5 What’s More Activity 1: Is TRUE or FALSE? Directions: Write T if the statement is CORRECT and F if it is NOT. Write your answer in a separate sheet required by your teacher. ______ 1. In writing a concept paper, one should have a background knowledge about the topic. ______ 2. The title should be the last part that you are going to write in your concept paper. ______ 3. You don’t need to recognize the source when writing your concept paper. ______ 4. You can have as many references as possible in your concept paper. ______ 5. Each part of a concept paper is important and needs to be included in your writing. Activity 2: Explain it! Directions: Explain each part of the concept paper in your own words. Limit your answer from 1-2 sentences only. Each item will have an equivalent score of five (5) points. Write your answer in a separate sheet required by your teacher. 1. Title ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ 2. Introduction ____________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ 3. Background ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ 4. Preliminary Literature Review ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ 5. Methodology ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ 6. Timelines ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ 7. References ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ 4 CO_Q1_ SHS English or Academic and Professional Purposes _ Module 5 What I Have Learned The concept paper is a type of academic writing in which a writer can express his/her ideas on a certain topic, research, or certain issues. This paper is composed of three parts, mainly; Introduction, Body and Conclusion that contribute to the development of your paper. The main goal of concept paper is to present or explain a certain idea objectively. GETTING DEEPER! Lesson: ___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________ What I want to say about the lesson: ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________ What I found out: ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________ __________________________________________________ 5 CO_Q1_ SHS English or Academic and Professional Purposes _ Module 5 Lesson 2 Ways in Explaining a Concept What Is It A concept paper may be explained through different modes or patterns. This may be in the form of definition, explication, and explanation. 1. Definition - It is a technique for recognizing a phrase and clarifying its meaning; its primary goal is to clarify and explain concepts, ideas, and issues. Three ways in presenting definition: a. Formal definition– Explains a term by clarifying where it originates from and the characteristic that distinguishes it from others. This can be done also through term, class, and distinguishing features. Below is the diagram presentation on formal definition. Term Class Distinguishing Features Orange is a type of fruit is rich with vitamin C and antioxidant. b. Informal definition – It is done through brief explanation. It only includes the term to be defined and its class. Below is the diagram presentation on informal definition. Term Class is a piece of furniture. A chair 6 CO_Q1_ SHS English or Academic and Professional Purposes _ Module 5 c. Extended definition – It consists of at least one paragraph with a detailed description and facts. Signal Words for Definition: ➢ as defined, for example, for instance, is defined as, means, such as, to illustrate 2. Explication - It is an explanation method in which words, verses, quotes, or paragraphs are taken for a literary or academic work and then interpreted and described in detail. 3. Clarification - It is a method in which the points are organized from a broad abstract concept to more specific and particular details. Signal Words ➢ After all, as an example, for instance, in other words, in particular, specifically, to clarify, to be specific What’s More LET’S EVALUATE YOUR LEARNING. For activities, 1.1 to 1.4, neatly and legibly write your answers on a one whole sheet of paper. Activity 1.1 Write a formal definition of the following terms: 1. blog _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ 2. smartphone ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Activity 1.2 Rewrite the definition below to make them clearer. 1. A guitar is a musical instrument that uses strings to produce sound. _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ 2. Industrial engineering is a branch of engineering that deals with processes in the industry. _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ Activity 1.3 On this activity, you are expected to explain and clarify concepts. You are so lucky since the composition you are about to read is intriguing and exciting. You’ll enjoy better if you have a dictionary with you, preferably an English-Tagalog one. Below are questions you must answer after you read. These will guide you on what focus should you have upon reading the composition. Have fun and good luck! 7 CO_Q1_ SHS English or Academic and Professional Purposes _ Module 5 1. What is the title of the article? 2. What concept is explained in this piece? 3. What mode/pattern is used to explain the concept? 4. Do you agree or disagree on what the author says about the concept? Cite examples/points made by the author which you are agreeable or disagreeable about. 5. Why do you agree or disagree on them? Cite evidence(s) to support your answer. Field of Specialization: Law The Cyber Martial Law: The Plaintiff versus the Netizens of the Philippines By Kimberly C. Magaway What will you call a law that threatens to refute one‘s rights to freedom of expression yet has the concept of protecting it [freedom of expression]? Unconstitutional? Maybe. How about, a triggering device for netizens to participate in the issues, inside the cyber domain, responsibly? From House Bill No. 5808, authored by Representative Susan Yap-Sulit of the second district of Tarlac and 36 other co-authors, and Senate Bill No. 2976, proposed by Senator Edgardo Angara, the Cybercrime Prevention Act of 2012 or R.A. No. 10175 existed as President Benigno Aquino III, shortly after Corona‘s impeachment trial, signed its right for passage last September 12, 2012 and took effect on October 3, 2012. This law ensures the use of cyberspace in a responsible manner, as Edwin Lacierda, Presidential spokesperson, echoed, “…ang sinasabi lang naman ng ating Pangulo is dapat din maging responsable ang isang tao sa pagsulat sa cyberspace”. However, this law received innumerable protests, not for its precept of preventing cybercrimes, but on the potential curtailment of the freedom of expression. Cyberspace, to most Filipino netizens, is the only space where they can freely express and share their opinions and views honestly and unfazed. On the other hand, Lacierda, in defense, has said, “May mekanismo for responsibility that accompanies any freedom, in this case, freedom of expression. We‘ve recognized that there are reasonable limitations to freedom of expression”. This Act has 8 chapters and 31 sections. It is addressed to several criminal offenses such as illegal access, data interference, cybersquatting, cyber fraud, child pornography, cybersex, spam, libel and so forth. With universal jurisdiction, its provisions apply to all Filipino nationals regardless of the place of commission. Its jurisdiction also lies when a punishable act is either committed within the Philippines, whether the erring device is wholly or partly situated in the Philippines, or whether damage was done to any natural or juridical person who at the time of commission was within the Philippines. Under the supervision of the Department of Justice, the Act prompts the creation of a cybercrime unit formed from the National Bureau of Investigation and the Philippine National Police empowered to exclusively handle cases violating the Act. Under this unit is the collecting of real-time traffic data from Internet service providers, require the disclosure of computer data within 72 hours after receipt of a court warrant from a service provider, conduct searches and seizures of computer data and equipment and mandates the establishment of special "cybercrime courts" which will handle cases involving cybercrime offenses (offenses enumerated in Section 4(a) of the Act). The protests against this act got even louder when some senate officials issued their counterpoints to the effect of the Act. Senator Miriam Defensor Santiago said that the Act was unconstitutional particularly on the statement enclosed in the provisions. Thus, she predicted that the Supreme Court would point its being unconstitutional. She also said that the construction of the provisions was vague. Other than being unconstitutional, Defensor viewed the Act as an obstruction to the commerce of free ideas as opposed to the absolute constitutional provisions stating: No law shall be passed abridging the freedom of speech. Since these provisions, as said, hinder the ‘freedom of expression in the Philippine 8 CO_Q1_ SHS English or Academic and Professional Purposes _ Module 5 cyberspace, it was already tagged as the Cyber Martial Law. Accordingly, the 13th petition, filed by the Bayan Muna party-list through Rep. Neri Colmenares, claimed that RA 10175 violates the freedom of expression, due process, equal protection, right to privacy and correspondence, and the right to unreasonable searches and seizures. As said by Panaglinan, “It… (RA 10175) does not explain what standards distinguish Internet users from other ordinary criminals”. The local business process outsourcing industry viewed the law as something relevant to the increase of their market. To them, it will be an attraction for investors. The media is most affected in the implementation of this Act since it [cyber world] is one of the places where they can gather and share information from and to the public in just a short period of time. On this, the social networkers, whom the media sees as potential and immediate audience to their cause, are mitigated from voicing out lucid and lurid yet honest opinions. As for me, the cyber world perhaps is a concrete representation and extension of unlimited freedom of expression, but I think, because of this unlimited freedom, many have gone overboard--- citing and using it to evoke malicious mischiefs. What can the right for freedom of expression bring if it will be used to step on the reputation of others? To me, the RA 10175, is more on protecting the freedom of expression rather than undermining it. This Act only pushes the netizens to responsibly participate in the exchange of ideas in such medium--- that their ideas must construct rather than destruct the disposition of others; so that they become aware that their ideas may pose a potential threat to somebody else‘s space. What one says is important but how he/she says it is crucial--- coherent to this statement is the concept of the cybercrime law. We have a say to everything and I think, the law only requires us to, if very important and can possibly contribute to the progress in the discussion of a certain issue, share it in a manner that highlights reason over plain gossips and hearsays. Beyond reasonable doubts, I say, RA10175, being the plaintiff, is not guilty for undermining freedom of expression. Activity 1.4 (1) Look for three concept papers from different fields of specialization (art, business, philosophy, politics, religion, science, sports, home economics, agri-fishery, industrial arts and information, communications technology) and (2) compare and contrast them using a Venn Diagram. You may include “Cyber Martial Law: The Plaintiff versus the Netizens of the Philippines” as one of the compositions. For other references, you may use those that are found in the reading materials you have at home, or you may search the internet, just make sure to cite your sources properly. Venn Diagram 9 CO_Q1_ SHS English or Academic and Professional Purposes _ Module 5 What I Have Learned Presenting concept can be done in three modes or patterns. These are through definition, explication, and explanation. These three patterns contribute to the development of the ideas presented in the paragraphs. Each pattern has unique feature on how to show your idea in a certain topic. But, in order to come up with a good work, you have to follow the rules in each pattern. GETTING DEEPER! Lesson: ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ What I want to say about the lesson: ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________ What I found out: ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ What I Can Do Think of a certain topic that suits your interest and make a concept out of it following one mode/pattern in presenting a concept. Present this through a video. During the presentation, use visual/graphic aids for your concept paper to supplement understanding. Your concept paper and concept paper presentation will be rated using the rubrics below. Meanwhile, for those who have no source/gadget, you may present this activity in person. Inform your teacher so he/she can set a schedule for your presentation. Rubrics for Rating Your Concept Paper Evident 5 pts. Features of the Concept Paper Partially Evident 2 pts. The introduction covers the background for the concept and the thesis statement. The paragraphs of the body explain, explicate, or define the concepts. Each paragraph uses at least two supporting details to clarify the concept. The conclusion presents the summary of the concept paper and restates the thesis. Adequate transitions make sure that paragraphs and ideas in the sentences are connected and organized. Uses simple language in order for the reader to easily understand the piece. The essay is free of grammatical errors and all sources were listed in the reference. 10 CO_Q1_ SHS English or Academic and Professional Purposes _ Module 5 Rubrics for Rating Your Video Presentation Presentation Marking Rubric Visual Appeal 4 There are no errors in spelling, grammar and punctuation. Information is clear and concise on each slide. Visually appealing/eng aging. Extensive knowledge of topic. Members showed complete understanding of assignment. Accurately answered all questions posed. Presentation Regular/consta nt eye contact, Skills the audience was engaged, and presenters held the audience’s attention. Appropriate speaking volume & body language. Comprehen sion 3 There are some errors in spelling, grammar and punctuation. Too much information on two or more slides. Significant visual appeal. 2 There are many errors in spelling, grammar and punctuation. Too much information was contained on many slides. Minimal effort made to make slides appealing or too much going on. Most showed a Few members good showed good understanding understanding of topic. of some parts All members of topic. able to answer Only some most of members audience accurately questions. answered questions. 1 There are many errors in spelling, grammar and punctuation. The slides were difficult to read and too much information had been copied onto them. No visual appeal. Most members spoke to majority of audience; steady eye contact. The audience was engaged by the presentation. Majority of presenters spoke at a suitable volume. Some fidgeting by member(s). Minimal eye contact by more than one member focusing on small part of audience. The audience was not engaged. Majority of presenters spoke too quickly or quietly making it difficult to understand. Inappropriate/disi nterested body language. 11 Members focused on only part of audience. Sporadic eye contact by more than one presenter. The audience was distracted. Speakers could be heard by only half of the audience. Body language was distracting. Mark Presenters didn’t understand topic. Majority of questions answered by only one member or majority of information incorrect. CO_Q1_ SHS English or Academic and Professional Purposes _ Module 5 Content The presentation was a concise summary of the topic with all questions answered. Comprehensiv e and complete coverage of information. The presentation was a good summary of the topic. Most important information covered; little irrelevant info. Preparednes s/ Participation / Group Dynamics All presenters knew the information, participated equally, and helped each other as needed. Extremely prepared and rehearsed. Slight domination of one presenter. Members helped each other. Very well prepared. The presentation was informative, but several elements went unanswered. Much of the information irrelevant; coverage of some of major points. Significant controlling by some members with one minimally contributing. Primarily prepared but with some dependence on just reading off slides. The presentation was a brief look at the topic, but many questions were left unanswered. Majority of information irrelevant and significant points left out. Unbalanced presentation or tension resulting from overhelping. Multiple group members not participating. Evident lack of preparation/rehe arsal. Dependence on slides. Total Source: https://www.jibc.ca/sites/default/files/.../Group_Presentation_Marking_Rubric.doc Assessment Direction: Choose the letter of the correct answer. Neatly and legibly, write the letter of your answer on a clean recycled sheet of paper. 1. Which section of the concept paper that states the process of how you will conduct the research project? A. Objectives of the Study C. Proposed Research Timeline B. Purpose of the Study D. Methodology 2. Advantages of writing a concept paper include A. You may be able to organize your ideas B. It gives an opportunity to stand out and receive a positive response from reviewers C. You are sure to get funding D. ‘A’ and ‘B’ 3. How many important parts that you need to consider in writing a concept paper in academic research? A. 2 C. 4 B. 6 D. 7 12 CO_Q1_ SHS English or Academic and Professional Purposes _ Module 5 4. Which part of the concept paper that can be written in question form? A. Title C. Purpose of the Study B. Introduction D. Objectives of the Study 5. Which part of the concept paper that describes about the current issue of your study? A. Background C. Introduction B. Purpose of the Study D. Methodology 6. This mode of presenting the concept uses examples to develop the ideas in the paragraph. A. labelling C. definition B. explication D. explanation 7. Why do you need to include the distinguishing feature in formal sentence definition? A. To present the unique qualities of a term. B. To recognize it from the other terms. C. To be different in some terms. D. None of the above 8. Which of the following is NOT true about references in the concept paper? A. We can cite references in Introduction and Methods section B. It is important to write references following standard guidelines C. Statements should be linked to references D. We can have as many references as possible 9. Which of the following is NOT included in developing the paragraph of writing the concept paper. A. labelling C. definition B. explication D. explanation 10. It refers to a short summary that tells the reader what the project is, why it is important, and how it will be carried out. A. Position paper C. Research paper B. Concept paper D. Thesis 13 CO_Q1_ SHS English or Academic and Professional Purposes _ Module 5 Module 5 Key Answers 14 CO_Q1_ SHS English or Academic and Professional Purposes _ Module 5 REFERENCES Cybercrime Prevention Act of 2012. (nd). Retrieved on: 11 October 2021, from: https://www.doj.gov.ph/files/cybercrime_office/RA_10175Cybercrime_Prevention_Act_of_2012.pdf How to write an effective concept paper? (2021) – Author Assists Blog. Retrieved on 10 October 2021 from: https://blog.authorassists.com/2020/12/01/how-to-write-aneffective-concept-paper/> Phneah, E. (2012). Philippine cybercrime law under fire, 6th petition filed. Retrieved on: 11 October 2021, from: https://www.zdnet.com/article/philippine-cybercrime-law-underfire-6th-petition-filed/ Philippine Supreme Court suspends cybercrime law. (2012). Retrieved on: 11 October 2021, from: https://www.mercurynews.com/2012/10/09/philippine-supreme-courtsuspends-cybercrime-law/ Santiago, M.D. (2012). Cybercrime law is unconstitutional. Retrieved on: 11 October 2021, from: http://legacy.senate.gov.ph/press_release/2012/1006_santiago3.asp 15 CO_Q1_ SHS English or Academic and Professional Purposes _ Module 5 For inquiries or feedback, please write or call: Department of Education - Bureau of Learning Resources (DepEd-BLR) Ground Floor, Bonifacio Bldg., DepEd Complex Meralco Avenue, Pasig City, Philippines 1600 Telefax: (632) 8634-1072; 8634-1054; 8631-4985 Email Address: blr.lrqad@deped.gov.ph * blr.lrpd@deped.gov.ph 5