1. I think that a darker color might look good too. I tried #152238 with white or #CFB53B for
example. The gold might be a bit tacky to use everywhere but maybe have an accent of it in
some places? I’m not sure, you can share your thoughts.
2. Agreed that the tagline should be “Revive, Repair & Rejuvenate…”
The top red box is redundant, it says exactly the same thing as the title. Maybe something like:
“Our LED therapy masks help you achieve the smooth, clear and healthy skin that you want”
The bottom red box should have something more wow. Maybe use the information from the before
and after section. Like “87% smoother wrinkles” “91% improved skin tone” “83% acne reduction”. I
would keep FDA approved though.
3. Agreed that “they already know this”. One option is to turn the title to something else and say
something that plays on their emotions but show that they are not alone? Like “Up to 50 million
Americans suffer from acne each year” (from google). Other option is to just leave this part out.
If we keep it, there’s some grammar issues. Should be “Lower Self-Esteem, Oil Secretion, Losing Skin
Tightness, Reduced Blood Flow, Faster Aging, Breakouts And Wrinkles”
4. Some points are in different form, should be:
-4. Clears And Prevents Acne Breakouts
-5. Evens Skin Tone And Fades Dark Spots
-6. Stimulates Collagen Production
-8. Calms Redness And Reduces Inflammation
Also it should be either “Why The Luxsking Mask?” or “Why Luxsking Masks?”
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5. Should be “We are thankful to all our customers around the world!”
“Free Worldwide Shipping”
6. Should be:
“A daily 3-minute session is like going to the beauty clinic five times a week. Minus the recurring
costs, time commitment, overpromises and upselling”
“The beauty of clinical results at home – minus the “clinical” costs
“One-time investment”
“No recurring payments”
“Recurring payments required”
7. I don’t like the “Starter, Most popular and Recommended” part. Maybe have it as a ribbon that
goes all the way across each box and have the text centered?
8. This part is what could get people excited. I would move it towards the top. Maybe below the
“We are thankful…” section?
9. The reviews, at least on a PC screen, look a little too squeezed together. Also if you go to page 2
they are in a random order. Maybe make them a little bit wider and have less on each row?
10. The buy button’s “I WANT A HEALTHY FACE” might not be the best thing to say. In essence it’s
health but actually nobody is thinking about their health imo. They probably want a CLEAR face
or something like that. I imagine when it comes down to what they actually want is to look
pretty lol