HANDOUTS #1 CREATIVE WRITING IMAGERY, DICTION, FIGURES OF SPEECH, AND SPECIFIC EXPERIENCES TO EVOKE MEANINGFUL RESPONSES Creative Writing MELCS: 1. differentiate imaginative writing from among other forms of writing 2. cull creative ideas from experiences 3. utilize language to evoke emotional and intellectual responses from readers 4. use imagery, diction, figures of speech, and specific experiences 5. read closely as writers with a consciousness of craft ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** ***** Other Forms of Writing Journalistic Writing relies heavily on the • compromises much of art, fiction, and truths, facts, current events, and imagination. knowledge. • is seen undisciplined, personal, and • Academic is strictly organized and inspiration driven. analytical. • Scientific • The purpose is expression, exposition ▪ The purpose is communication • General ▪ Highly specific • Personal ▪ Impersonal If you have noticed, creative writing relies on imagination and expression. A part of creative writing is the use of imagery (images) to vividly express the thoughts of the writer or the author. • ***** What is Creative Writing? Creative writing is any composing that goes beyond ordinary expert, editorial, scholarly, or specialized types of writing, normally distinguished by an accentuation on account make, character advancement, and the utilization of abstract tropes or with different customs of verse and poetics. It is workable for composing, for example, include stories to be viewed as exploratory writing, despite the fact that they fall under news coverage, in light of the fact that the substance of highlights is explicitly centered around account and character improvement. Genres of Creative Writing 1. Poetry is said to be the oldest kind of literature as it predates even the written word. In its earliest form, poems were recited and passed on from one person to the next. The concentration of poetry lies on the line and its rhythmic qualities, and traditionally, a strict form or dependence on meter. Today however, with the invention of free verse, there are numerous ways that a poem can delineate from convention. 2. Fiction is a form of prose that depicts imaginary events and people. Novels, novellas, and short stories fall under this category, although recent trends have also introduced us to other formats such as hyperlink fiction and six-word stories. It pays close attention to elements central to fiction – plot, character, setting, and conflict. 3. Drama is a fiction written to be performed. Although it is traditionally written in verse, contemporary modes of drama now use prose and these are sometimes set to music or dance. This genre places an emphasis on dialogue and stage direction. 4. Creative nonfiction uses literary techniques to write about facts, actual events, and people. It distinguishes itself from technical or news writing by using literary devices such as imagery and dialogue. Information Map This part will give you the definition of other forms of writing. Creative Writing Other Forms of Writing • Technical Writing is to educate the • is to enthrall, entertain and arouse a audience with factual information and is certain feeling in a reader. presented in a logical manner. What Is Sensory Imagery? Sensory Imagery includes the utilization of elucidating language to make mental pictures. In abstract terms, it is a sort of symbolism; the thing that matters is that tangible symbolism works by drawing in a reader's five senses. It is an artistic gadget author utilize to draw in a reader's brain on numerous levels. This investigates the five human detects: sight, sound, taste, contact, and smell. • VISUAL IMAGERY engages the sense of sight. Descriptions can be associated to Visual Imagery. Physical attributes including color, size, shape, lightness and darkness, shadows, and shade are all part of visual imagery. The text in italics are some examples of lines using visual imagery. Her phone signaled, immediately setting her teeth on edge. She looked at the broken screen, saw his name, and slapped the phone back down on her desk. Armani stretched across her couch, legs twitching excitedly, and he knew he must be dreaming of the kittens he tries to capture every morning when he is at the dirty kitchen. • GUSTATORY IMAGERY engages the sense of taste. Flavors are the considerations in gustatory imagery which includes the five basic taste such as sweet, salty, bitter, sour, and umami—as well as the textures and sensations tied to the act of eating. The food tasted good. The sweet pondant icing melted on my tongue. The word delightful came to mind. Summer has always tasted like hot chocolate to me. His kisses tasted like strawberries under the sun. • AUDITORY IMAGERY engages the sense of hearing. Sound devices such as onomatopoeia and alliteration can help create sounds in writing. Erick sat alone at the bench nearest the main door so he wouldn't miss Via. The room was noisy. The clang of heavy dishes glided from the kitchen. Ice tinkled as it settled in his water glass. His watch read 9:30. She wasn't coming. Creative Writing | Page 1 of 6 • OLFACTORY IMAGERY engages the sense of smell. Simile is common in using olfactory imagery, because it lets writers to compare a particular scent to common smells like dirt, grass, manure, or roses. The use of scents and stinks are common ways to use olfactory imagery. The scent of “latik” when my mother cooks rice cake is really nostalgic to me. The street going to their house stinks of manure and the courtyard of urine, the stairwells stank of moldering wood and rat droppings. • TACTILE IMAGERY engages the sense of touch. The feel, textures and many sensations a human being experiences when touching something are associated in tactile imagery. Differences in temperature is also a part of tactile imagery. When we quickly plunge into the cool water, it took our breath away and raised goose bumps to our arms. We had had been swimming in this pond since we were kids. In other references, there is a sixth sense which called Kinesthetic imagery engages the feeling of movement. This can be similar to tactile imagery but deals more with full-body sensations, such as those experienced during exercise. Rushing water, flapping wings, and pounding hearts are all examples of kinesthetic imagery. Learning Task 1: Sense it! Directions: Read the excerpts with understanding. Identify what sensory imagery is used in each statement. Write your answers on your answer sheet. Identify too those words used as descriptive in each excerpt. Copy the table and write your answers on their proper column. unbridled satisfaction of what was the original food. (One Hundred Years of Solitude by Gabriel García Márquez) Imagery: _______________________________________________________________________ 2. My little horse must think it queer To stop without a farmhouse near Between the woods and frozen lake The darkest evening of the year. He gives his harness bells a shake To ask if there is some mistake. The only other sound’s the sweep Of easy wind and downy flake. (“Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening” by Robert Frost) Imagery: _______________________________________________________________________ 3. Outside, even though the shut window-pane, the world looked cold. Down in the street little eddies of wind were whirling dust and torn paper into spirals, and though the sun was shining and the sky a harsh blue, there seemed to be no colour in anything, except the posters that were plastered everywhere. The black mustachioed face gazed down from every commanding corner. There was one on the house-front immediately opposite. BIG BROTHER IS WATCHING YOU, the caption said, while the dark eyes looked deep into Winston’s own. Down at street level another poster, torn at one corner, flapped fitfully in the wind, alternately covering and uncovering the single word INGSOC. In the far distance a helicopter skimmed down between the roofs, hovered for an instant like a bluebottle, and darted away again with a curving flight. (1984 by George Orwell) Imagery: _______________________________________________________________________ 4. 1. On rainy afternoons, embroidering with a group of friends on the begonia porch, she would lose the thread of the conversation and a tear of nostalgia would salt her palate when she saw the strips of damp earth and the piles of mud that the earthworms had pushed up in the garden. Those secret tastes, defeated in the past by oranges and rhubarb, broke out into an irrepressible urge when she began to weep. She went back to eating earth. The first time she did it almost out of curiosity, sure that the bad taste would be the best cure for the temptation. And, in fact, she could not bear the earth in her mouth. But she persevered, overcome by the growing anxiety, and little by little she was getting back her ancestral appetite, the taste of primary minerals, the In the period of which we speak, there reigned in the cities a stench barely conceivable to us modern men and women. The streets stank of manure, the courtyards of urine, the stairwells stank of moldering wood and rat droppings, the kitchens of spoiled cabbage and mutton fat; the unaired parlors stank of stale dust, the bedrooms of greasy sheets, damp featherbeds, and the pungently sweet aroma of chamber pots. The stench of sulfur rose from the chimneys, the stench of caustic lyes from the tanneries, and from the slaughterhouses came the stench of congealed blood. People stank of sweat and unwashed clothes; from their mouths came the stench of rotting teeth, from their bellies that of onions, and from their bodies, if they were no longer very young, came the stench of rancid cheese and sour milk and tumorous disease. (Perfume: The Story of a Murderer by Patrick Suskind) Imagery: _______________________________________________________________________ 5. She ran her hand across the dark, concrete wall. It was cold as ice. When she came to the middle of the room, she felt a thick, slimy substance actively oozing down the wall. Creative Writing | Page 2 of 6 Imagery: _______________________________________________________________________ What is Diction in Writing? Diction is the careful selection of words to communicate a message or establish a particular voice or writing style. For example, flowy, figurative language creates colorful prose, while a more formal vocabulary with concise and direct language can help drive home a point. What is the purpose of diction in writing? Writers pick explicit words and expressions relying upon the result they're attempting to accomplish. The motivation behind a bit of composing decides its expression. In writing and fiction composing, authors regularly utilize casual lingual authority and interesting expressions or words utilized for non-exacting implications, similar to comparisons and analogies. On the off chance that a researcher is distributing a paper on their exploration, in any case, the language will be specialized, succinct, and formal, composed for a particular crowd. In composing a fiction, the language a creator utilizes bolsters the fundamental story components, such as setting. Style sets up when and where a story is set by utilizing language local to that time and spots. Different Types of Diction in Writing Different styles of diction impact how different ideas are expressed. 1. Formal diction. Formal diction uses grammatical rules and uses proper syntax or the formation of sentences. It is considered as a professional choice of words which can be found in legal documents like business correspondences and academic articles. 2. Informal diction. Informal diction is more conversational and often used in narrative literature. This casual vernacular is representative of how people communicate in real life, which gives an author freedom to depict more realistic characters. Most of the short stories and novels use informal diction to make it easier to understand by anyone especially if the target audience is anyone. 3. Colloquial diction. These are expressions which are connected to informal. It is generally representing a particular region or place or era or period. Contractions in American English such as “ain’t” instead of isn’t is an example of colloquial expressions, the use of colloquialisms makes the writing more realistic. 4. Slang diction. Slang is very informal language or specific words used by a particular group of people. You'll usually hear slang spoken more often than you'll see it put in writing, though emails and texts often contain many conversational slang words. 5. Poetic diction. Poetic diction is driven by melodious words that identify with a particular subject reflected in a sonnet, and make a musical, or agreeable, sound. It generally includes the utilization of elucidating language, in some cases set to a beat or rhyme. Learning Task 2: Celebr8! Directions: Create a paragraph about Fiesta in the Philippines. Choose only one type of diction in writing. Write your paragraph on your answer sheet. What is Figure of Speech? A figure of speech is a rhetorical device that achieves a special effect by using words in a distinctive way. Though there are hundreds of figures of speech, here we'll focus on 20 top examples. You'll probably remember many of these terms from your English classes. Figurative language is often associated with literature and with poetry in particular. Whether we're conscious of it or not, we use figures of speech every day in our own writing and conversations. Some Figures of Speech Using original figures of speech in our writing is an approach to pass on implications in new, surprising ways. They can enable our readers to comprehend and remain puzzled by what we need to state. 1. Alliteration: The repetition of an initial consonant sound. Example: Betty Botter bought some butter. 2. Anaphora: The repetition of the same word or phrase at the beginning of successive clauses or verses. Example: Unexpetedly, we were in the wrong event at the wrong time on the wrong day. 3. Antithesis: The combination of two different elements to attian equillibrium or balance. Example: As Abraham Lincoln said, "Folks who have no vices have very few virtues." 4. Apostrophe: Directly stating or calling a nonexistent person or an inanimate object as though it were a living being. It commonly uses an apostrophe as a punctuation. Example: "Oh, rain! Rain! Where are are you? Rain, we really need you right now. Our town needs you badly.” 5. Assonance: It is the repetition of the vowel sounds in the structure of sentences or lines. Example: We shall meet on the beach to reach the “Meach” Concert. 6. Chiasmus: A sentence or line structure where the half of the statement is balanced against the other half. Example: The noble teacher said teachers should live to teach, not teach to live. 7. Euphemism: The use of subtle and nonoffensive words to conceal or to replace the offensive words in a statement. Example: "We're teaching our toddler how to go potty," Bob said. The use of the word potty is euphemism. 8. Hyperbole: An overstatement; the use of exaggerated terms for the purpose of emphasis or heightened effect. Example: I have a ton of homework to do when I get home. I need to go home now. 9. Irony: It is a statement or situation where the meaning is contradicted by the appearance or showing the concept. The use of words to convey the opposite of their literal meaning is the highlight of irony. Example: Thalia received a very high grade in her quiz resulting that her mother got mad. Creative Writing | Page 3 of 6 10. Litotes: An understatement in which an affirmative is expressed by opposing its counterpart. Example: A million pesos is no small chunk of change. 11. Metaphor: An implied comparison between two dissimilar things that have something in common. Example: "All the world's a stage.” of As You Like It 12. Metonymy: A word or phrase is substituted for another with which it is closely associated; Linking words that are related to the word to be replaced. Example: The use of the word vow instead of wedding, the pen stands for "the written word. 13. Onomatopoeia: The use of words that imitate the sounds associated with the objects or actions they refer to. Example: The clap of thunder went bang and scared my poor dog. 14. Oxymoron: It is the combination of contradictory or incongruous words such as cruel kindness; Example: “bitter sweet” 15. Paradox: a statement or proposition that, despite sound (or apparently sound) reasoning from acceptable premises, leads to a conclusion that seems senseless, logically unacceptable, or self-contradictory. Example: "This is the beginning of the end," said Eeyore, always the pessimist. 16. Personification: The utilization of inanimate objects or abstraction to associate with human qualities or abilities. Example: The leaves of the Fire tree are dancing with the wind during dry season in our country. 17. Pun: A statement with a double meaning, in some cases on various faculties of a similar word and here and there on the comparative sense or sound of various words. Example: I renamed my playlist of The Titanic, so when I plug it in, it says “The Titanic is syncing.” 18. Simile: The comparison between two fundamentally dissimilar things that have certain qualities in common using like or as. Example: Michael was white as a sheet after he walked out of the horror movie. 19. Synecdoche: A figure of speech in which a part is used to represent the whole. Example: Mark is asking for the hand of our daughter. 20. Understatement: A figure of speech employed by writers or speakers to intentionally make a situation seem less important than it really is. Example: You win 10 million pesos in a lottery. Learning Task 3: Figure me out! Directions: Write which technique is being used on the line. There may be more than one correct answer; you may write more than one answer. Then, explain how you know your answer on your answer sheet. Slashes represent line breaks. Example: This falling spray of snow-flakes is / a handful of dead Februaries What technique is being used? Personification and Alliteration Choices: Alliteration, Rhyme, Onomatopoeia, Idiom, Simile, Metaphor, Hyperbole, or Personification 1. The moon is faithful, although blind What technique is being used? ___________________________ Choices: Alliteration, Rhyme, Onomatopoeia, Idiom, Simile, Metaphor, Hyperbole, or Personification 2. children sleeping softly in their bedroom bunks What technique is being used? ___________________________ Choices: Alliteration, Rhyme, Onomatopoeia, Idiom, Simile, Metaphor, Hyperbole, or Personification 3. They chained themselves to subways for the endless ride from Battery Park to the Bronx What technique is being used? ___________________________ Choices: Alliteration, Rhyme, Onomatopoeia, Idiom, Simile, Metaphor, Hyperbole, or Personification 4. Time is a green orchard. What technique is being used? ___________________________ Choices: Alliteration, Rhyme, Onomatopoeia, Idiom, Simile, Metaphor, Hyperbole, or Personification 5. At dusk there’s a thin haze like cigarette smoke / ribbons What technique is being used? ___________________________ Choices: Alliteration, Rhyme, Onomatopoeia, Idiom, Simile, Metaphor, Hyperbole, or Personification What I Have Learned Learning Task 4: “T-M-L” Phrase Complete the following phrases. The Topic was about ______________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ It Matters because ________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ I’ve Learned today that ____________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ Learning Task 5: Read, Appreciate, and Critique Time! Directions: There are millions of literary pieces. Each of them has its unique characteristics and styles written by the effective and efficient writers. As Plato said that literature must be Dulce et Utile which means that literature must have beauty/aesthetics and moral/values to be earned. Here are some of the well-known literary pieces. Let's appreciate them. 1. When I was One-and-Twenty by Alfred Edward Housman When I was one-and-twenty I heard a wise man say, “Give crowns and pounds and guineas Creative Writing | Page 4 of 6 But not your heart away; Give pearls away and rubies But keep your fancy free.” But I was one-and-twenty, No use to talk to me. When I was one-and-twenty I heard him say again, “The heart out of the bosom Was never given in vain; ’Tis paid with sighs a plenty And sold for endless rue.” And I am two-and-twenty, And oh, ’tis true, ’tis true. 2. Richard Cory by Edwin Arlington Robinson Whenever Richard Cory went down town, We people on the pavement looked at him: He was a gentleman from sole to crown, Clean favored, and imperially slim. And he was always quietly arrayed, And he was always human when he talked; But still he fluttered pulses when he said, 'Good-morning,' and he glittered when he walked. And he was rich - yes, richer than a king – And admirably schooled in every grace: In fine, we thought that he was everything To make us wish that we were in his place. So on we worked, and waited for the light, And went without the meat, and cursed the bread; And Richard Cory, one calm summer night, Went home and put a bullet through his head. 3. The Rhodora by Ralph Waldo Emerson In May, when sea-winds pierced our solitudes, I found the fresh Rhodora in the woods, Spreading its leafless blooms in a damp nook, To please the desert and the sluggish brook. The purple petals fallen in the pool Made the black water with their beauty gay; Here might the red-bird come his plumes to cool, And court the flower that cheapens his array. Rhodora! if the sages ask thee why This charm is wasted on the earth and sky, Tell them, dear, that, if eyes were made for seeing, Then beauty is its own excuse for Being; Why thou wert there, O rival of the rose! I never thought to ask; I never knew; But in my simple ignorance suppose The self-same power that brought me there, brought you. Critique Time! Directions: Using the template below, write your comments and observations on the elements used in each literary piece presented above. Write your answers on your answer sheet. Literary Pieces Text 1 Sensory Experiences Imageries Diction Figures of Speech Text 2 Text 3 PERFORMANCE TASK – Essay Writing! Now that you have learned about the essential lessons on introduction to Creative Writing, you can now write your first ever output as your final output in this subject. As a student, how are you going to employ the use of imagery, diction, and figures of speech in your writing. Cite the importance on becoming a creative writer and in your future profession specifically in expression one’s thoughts and ideas and as a vehicle in presenting social realities. Your essay must be in three paragraphs with each paragraph containing not less than five (5) sentences. Kindly be guided by the rubric below and have your essay be written in cursive manner in presented in a short bond paper. Traits Focus and details Organization 4 There is one clear, wellfocused topic, Main ideas are clear and are well supported by detailed and accurate information The introduction is inviting, states 3 2 1 There is one clear, wellfocused topic. Main ideas are clear but are not well supported by detailed information. There is one topic. Main ideas are somewhat clear. The topic and main ideas are not clear. The introduction states the main The introduction states the main There is no clear introduction, Creative Writing | Page 5 of 6 Traits Voice 4 the main topic, and provides an overview of the paper. Information is relevant and presented in a logical order. The conclusion is strong. The author’s purpose of writing is very clear, and there is strong evidence of attention to audience. The author’s extensive knowledge and/or experience with the topic is/are evident. Word Choice The author uses vivid words and phrases. The choice and placement of words seems accurate, natural, and not forced. Sentence Structure, Grammar, Mechanics. & Spelling All sentences are well constructed and have varied structure and length. The author makes no errors in grammar, mechanics, and/or spelling. 3 topic and provides an overview of the paper. A conclusion is included. 2 topic. A conclusion is included. 1 structure, or conclusion. Traits 4 3 but they do not interfere with understanding. 2 and/or spelling that interfere with understanding. 1 that interfere with understanding. References: • Creative Writing Quarter 1, PIVOT IV-A Learner’s Material First Edition, 2020 by Department of Education Region IV-A CALABARZON The author’s purpose of writing is somewhat clear, and there is some evidence of attention to audience. The author’s knowledge and/or experience with the topic is/are evident. The author uses vivid words and phrases. The choice and placement of words is inaccurate at times and/or seems overdone. Most sentences are well constructed and have varied structure and length. The author makes few errors in grammar, mechanics, and/or spelling, The author’s purpose of writing is somewhat clear, and there is evidence of attention to audience. The author’s knowledge and/or experience with the topic is/are limited. The author’s purpose of writing is unclear. The author uses words that communicate clearly, but the writing lacks variety. The writer uses a limited vocabulary. Jargon or clichés may be present and detract from the meaning. Most sentences are well constructed, but they have a similar structure and/or length. The author makes several errors in grammar, mechanics, Sentences sound awkward, are distractingly repetitive, or are difficult to understand. The author makes numerous errors in grammar, mechanics, and/or spelling Creative Writing | Page 6 of 6