Case A Type of Elements Purpose: the purpose is to send out info about financials and new positions to be filled Audience boss to employee: know the people whom we are writing to Type: internal mail Writers tone: informative Issues that can be corrected to improve impact F pattern is not followed Subject is not clear Lacks clear deadline Too much content – paragraphs splitting Salutation is missing From: Rhonda Murphy To: Raj Patel Subject: Recent developments in Finance Department Hi Raj, Jake finished the quarterly report and distributed it to the executive committee for review. Although sales are down 3% this quarter, projections were considerably higher. The good news is that we have managed to pay off 30% of our debt, 12 months ahead of schedule. And just yesterday, Liza, one of our top auditors, gave her notice and will be taking a position with a new company at the end of the week. Her accounts have been distributed among her team members, and we want to make a smooth transition for our clients. Please review the resumes you have for senior auditors and set up some interviews within one week. As you know, we are in the process of acquiring NJT company. Although the recent audit did not uncover any fraud in the company, it did find some accounting errors, as NJT showed a pattern of aggressive accounting. Therefore, as they become part of our company, their auditors must take a more responsible and conservative accounting approach. To ensure this result, John announced that Bill Edwards will accept the position of Director, Corporate Finance. That means that we also need a new Director of Special Projects. Please begin that search too, both internally and externally. See me if you have any questions. Thanks and Regards, Rhonda