i The Right Word other writers & artists titles include Writers’ & Artists’ Guide to Writing for Children and YA by Linda Strachan Writers’ & Artists’ Guide to Getting Published by Alysoun Owen Writers’ & Artists’ Guide to How to Hook an Agent by James Rennoldson Writers’ & Artists’ Guide to Self-publishing by self-publishing experts The Organised Writer by Antony Johnston upcoming titles include Writers’ & Artists’ Guide to How to Write by William Ryan The Writer’s Journal Workbook by Lucy van Smit Writers on Writing: The Writers’ & Artists’ Book of Quotations The Writers’ & Artists’ Yearbook and the Children’s Writers’ & Artists’ Yearbook are published annually in July You can buy copies of all these titles at your local bookseller or online at www.writersandartists.co.uk The Right Word a writer’s toolkit of grammar, vocabulary and literary terms BLOOMSBURY YEARBOOKS Bloomsbury Publishing Plc 50 Bedford Square, London, WC1B 3DP, UK 29 Earlsfort Terrace, Dublin 2, Ireland BLOOMSBURY, BLOOMSBURY YEARBOOKS, WRITERS’ & ARTISTS’ and the Diana logo are trademarks of Bloomsbury Publishing Plc First published in Great Britain 2021 Copyright © Bloomsbury Publishing Plc, 2021 All rights reserved. No part of this publication may be reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means, electronic or mechanical, including photocopying, recording, or any information storage or retrieval system, without prior permission in writing from the publishers Bloomsbury Publishing Plc does not have any control over, or responsibility for, any third-party websites referred to or in this book. All internet addresses given in this book were correct at the time of going to press. The author and publisher regret any inconvenience caused if addresses have changed or sites have ceased to exist, but can accept no responsibility for any such changes A catalogue record for this book is available from the British Library ISBN: PB: 978-1-4729-8695-5; eBook: 978-1-4729-8696-2 Typeset by Deanta Global Publishing Services, Chennai, India To find out more about our authors and books, visit www.bloomsbury.com and sign up for our newsletters CONTENTS introduction vii part i Grammar Guide chapter 1: Grammar and the parts of speech 3 chapter 2: Words working together 29 chapter 3: Punctuation 55 chapter 4: Spelling 73 chapter 5: Breaking the rules 87 chapter 6: Glossary of grammatical terms 93 part ii Vocabulary Builder chapter 7: Choosing the right word 115 chapter 8: Commonly confused words and word pairs 209 chapter 9: Commonly misused words 265 chapter 10: Word families 295 chapter 11: Just the opposite 317 chapter 12: Clichés and redundancy 345 part iii Dictionary of Literary Terms Literary terms 361 list of contributors main text (chapters 1–12) edited and rewritten by Sarah Waldram, based on text by the Bloomsbury Encarta Dictionary team. Sarah Waldram is an editor who has worked on languagereference books for Bloomsbury, Oxford University Press and Collins among other publishers. dictionary of literary terms written by Alysoun Owen with research and additional content from Lauren MacGowan and Elaine Owen. Lauren MacGowan joined the Writers’ & Artists’ team as an editorial assistant in 2019 shortly after graduating from Oxford Brookes University with a Masters in Publishing. Alysoun Owen is the Editor of the Writers’ & Artists’ Yearbook (published every July) and author of the Writers’ & Artists’ Guide to Getting Published (2019). Introduction Words matter. An appreciation of their subtle power is vital for anyone who seeks to use them. David Hewson, Writing: A User Manual (2012) This book is for writers: anyone who gathers words together in order to educate, or to entertain or to inform. Words – and the ways in which they combine and mingle in a phrase, a statement, a sentence or a paragraph – are the essential tools of any writer’s workbox: the ways in which they are grouped become the author’s ‘style’. They can be used to be concise and precise or deliberately to obfuscate or shock, to confuse or amuse. Between these pages are definitions, wordlists and the ‘rules’ of English grammar – how language is structured, how words are used and spelt and the typical ways in which sentences can be arranged and punctuated. Rules can be straitjackets. Creative writers – novelists, dramatists and poets – know that rules exist to be broken and circumvented. For example, the standard approach when punctuating speech in a novel might be to include single or double quotation marks, usually so it is clear who is speaking to allow the reader to follow the narrative. An experienced and talented writer can overturn such a convention for stylistic effect, to create greater immediacy and naturalistic speech patterns. An inexperienced writer might find it sensible to adhere to the conventions until they are more used to marshalling their text. Knowing the standard styles, formats and usage can be helpful. Once mastered they might be successfully sidestepped. Being au fait with grammatical norms makes life easier for you as a writer in your efforts to convey mood and meaning in prose. vii Introduction This book is not a checklist of what you should follow every time you put pen to paper or tap on a keyboard. It is a celebration of words in all their magnificence. The English language makes claim to more than a million words, including terms that have fallen out of use and variant forms, of which it is estimated that around 170,000 are in current use. This lexicon can be fashioned and bent to each writer’s will to evoke atmosphere, tone, tension, emotion and meaning to suit their narrative. Words change and usage develops. New words get created, others die back to become archaisms or anachronisms or less legitimate forms to do with shifts in spelling or meaning because of fashion or changes in culture and society. But there remain some underlying and unifying patterns and facts about grammar, structure, forms and the terms we use to describe these elements. You don’t need to know the definition of an oxymoron or chiasmus to make use of such literary devices effectively. You won’t be judged wanting if you are unaware that a sentence can include a subject, a predicate, and subordinate clauses or that there are five basic types of adverb. You can be a skilled writer who has great command of their work, and not know or care what transitivity means or how to identify an auxiliary verb. (Though you can find out what these are in this book’s Glossary.) But knowledge of parts of speech and punctuation, literary devices, clichés to avoid for example, combined with an interest in how words are formed might make you understand your craft better. This knowledge is likely to improve your writing and might mean you enjoy being a writer even more. Why does grammar matter to the writer? Apart from the joy that words can bring, it matters because text should be meaningful and achieve what it sets out to do for the audience for which it is intended. The right word is le mot juste for the context in which it is used. It’s the word that feels right and reads right to its writer-creator and to its readers. viii part i Grammar Guide 2 chapter 1 Grammar and the parts of speech He who writes badly thinks badly. William Cobbett A Grammar of the English Language (1819) The controversial English pamphleteer William Cobbett, in a letter to his son James, observes the link between clarity of thought and clarity of writing. He emphasises paying attention to grammar as a means of dispelling confusion, and pours scorn on those in public life who omit to do so. Whatever one makes of Cobbett’s political views, his ideas on grammar still resonate today. This is especially true for writers looking to connect with their readership. Put simply, grammar enables users of language to combine words in ways that convey meaning clearly. There is no mystery to grammar. Those who learn English as their first language from native speakers absorb its essentials while they are picking up the vocabulary required for basic communication. For writers, however, there are good reasons to explore English grammar more deeply. Getting to grips with grammar improves one’s understanding of the English language and consequently enriches one’s writing. As a starting point, this chapter looks at the basic elements of the English sentence and explains terms used to describe these elements. We’ll present these in the traditional way, as parts of speech, even though, as touched on in chapter 2, some experts favour other approaches to analysing the language. 3 Grammar Guide The parts of speech The parts of speech, sometimes referred to as word classes, comprise (in the order they appear in this chapter): ●● ●● ●● ●● ●● ●● ●● ●● nouns verbs adjectives adverbs pronouns prepositions conjunctions interjections. It’s worth remembering that a word’s part of speech gets defined only in use. Of course, it’s safe to say that a word like plumber is a noun, because it’s difficult to think of a case where it could be anything else. But a word like up can be a preposition, a verb, an adjective or an adverb, depending on the context: The cat climbed up the tree and can’t get down. [preposition] Introducing that proposal will really up the stakes. [verb] The up escalator is on the other side. [adjective] Send John right up as soon as he gets here. [adverb] Therefore, in this book, when we identify a word as a verb, conjunction, adjective or other part of speech, our focus is on the role it fulfils in the context under consideration. Nouns A noun is a word that names something: a person, place or thing. Nouns are the largest word class in English. ●● A noun can be a single word (car, truth) or a compound word made up of two or more single words (pruning shears, playwright, double-decker). 4 Grammar and the parts of speech ●● ●● ●● A group of words that acts as a noun in a sentence is called a noun phrase. A proper noun is one that begins with a capital letter and usually names a person or some other unique thing: Mary Seacole, Windsor Castle. A common noun names a class of things: book, music. Most nouns have two possible forms: singular or plural. The plural is usually created by adding -s, sometimes along with other changes to the word’s ending. There are only a small number of irregular plurals (ones that aren’t formed by adding -s), for example, child Æ children. The system by which nouns agree with verbs – that is, a singular noun takes a singular verb form, and a plural noun takes a plural verb form, we cover in more detail in chapter 2 (see page 39). Count and non-count nouns Singular nouns in English can be classified as one of two types: those that have a plural form and those that do not: ⚪⚪ Nouns that can be pluralised are called count nouns (because they can be preceded by a number): one shirt, two shirts one mouse, two mice one alumnus, two alumni For some words, such as sheep, the plural form is the same as the singular, but they are count nouns nonetheless: one sheep in the north pasture; a hundred sheep in the south pasture ⚪⚪ Singular nouns that cannot be pluralised are known as non-count nouns: music, happiness, fuss. A non-count noun denoting something such as a feeling or substance that cannot be quantified is called a mass noun: envy, air. One feature of mass nouns is that they can be preceded by words such as some, any and no. 5 Grammar Guide Many mass nouns can be used as count nouns, however, when they refer to a particular type or quantity of what they denote: French cheeses Two coffees and five teas, please. Collective nouns A distinctive group of nouns are known as collective nouns. Examples of collective nouns are: audience, committee, crowd, flock, government, jury and orchestra These nouns are singular in form but refer to a group made up of a number of individuals or things. When the group is spoken of as a unit, the collective noun takes a singular verb: The jury has handed down a unanimous verdict. ‘The best government is no government at all.’ Henry David Thoreau, Civil Disobedience (1849) However, when the emphasis is on the individuals or things that make up the group, the noun takes a plural verb: The jury have been arguing among themselves for twelve hours, and no verdict is expected. A collective noun that denotes a class of objects, for example, furniture or luggage, is always singular: My luggage is missing. When using collective nouns, it is important to ensure agreement between verbs and pronouns. The following example, for instance, is inconsistent: 6 Grammar and the parts of speech The committee has [singular] decided to reject the proposal and will give their [plural: should be its] reasons in writing tomorrow. ‘The jury eagerly wrote down all three dates on their slates, and then added them up, and reduced the answer to shillings and pence.’ Lewis Carroll, Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland (1865) (It’s more common for a collective noun to take a plural verb in British English than in American English.) Verbs A verb is a word that indicates an action or a condition. In English, verbs also express whether the action or condition is associated with the past, present or future. English verb forms are relatively simple. As outlined immediately below, verbs have only three principal parts, which are predictable, apart from those for a significant number of irregular verbs. Despite this, English tenses, when taken to include such features as aspect, are capable of rich, varied and complex expression. (For more detail, see pages 12–14). Principal parts The three principal parts of the verb are the forms from which all other forms are derived. ⚪⚪ The main or root part of a verb is the infinitive. This is the form of the verb to be found in a dictionary. Because the derivative inflected forms (marked by changed endings or other variation), of English verbs are on the whole not complicated, many forms of the verb are actually identical to the infinitive. 7 Grammar Guide Examples of infinitives are be, see, dig, automate, thrill. Since many uses of the infinitive in English require the preposition to before the verb, to is sometimes – erroneously – thought to be part of the infinitive. ⚪⚪ The second principal part of the verb is the simple past. Except for irregular verbs, English adds -ed or -d (for verbs already ending in e) to the end of an infinitive to form the simple past tense: thus, using our examples above, automated, thrilled. The others noted above are irregular and have different past tenses: be Æ was and were; see Æ saw; and dig Æ dug. ⚪⚪ The third principal part of the verb is the past participle. It’s used only in combination with auxiliary verbs (see page 16). In regular verbs, the form of the past participle is identical to that of the simple past tense: automated, thrilled. In irregular verbs, it may be identical to the simple past of those verbs, or it may be a different word: thus, be (was and were) Æ been; see (saw) Æ seen; and dig (dug) Æ dug. Verbs have another part – the present participle, but it’s usually not included among the principal parts because it’s always regular. The present participle is formed by adding -ing to the infinitive. Like the past participle, it’s used only in combination with auxiliary verbs. Examples of present participles for our group of sample verbs are being, seeing, digging, automating, thrilling. Note that verbs ending in a single consonant usually double the consonant before the -ing (as in digging), and verbs ending in silent e drop the e before the -ing (as in automating). Transitivity A common way to classify verbs is by whether or not they are followed by an object (a noun, noun phrase, or pronoun) to complete their meaning. ⚪⚪ Those verbs that do not take an object – and relatedly do not form passives (see page 15) – are called intransitive verbs: 8 Grammar and the parts of speech You’d better leave. He snores. ⚪⚪ In dictionaries, these verbs are often indicated by the letters vi. Verbs that are followed by an object – the person or thing that receives or experiences the action of the verb – are transitive verbs: Do you love me? Put your books away. In dictionaries, these verbs are often indicated by the letters vt. A few transitive verbs can have two objects: a direct object and an indirect object. The direct object is the one acted on directly by the verb, and the indirect object is the one affected by the action of the verb: I gave him £100. [the direct object is £100; the indirect object is him] Many verbs can be either transitive or intransitive, depending on how they’re used and what they mean. In The dealer sells used cars, the verb sell is transitive, but in This used car won’t sell, the same verb is intransitive. In dictionaries, these verbs may be indicated by the letters vti. ‘Do I dare to eat a peach?’ T. S. Eliot, ‘The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock’ (1915) ‘While someone else is eating or opening a window or just walking dully along.’ W. H. Auden, ‘Musée des Beaux Arts’ (1940) Copulas and complements A small number of intransitive verbs can be followed by a complement, a noun or adjective that relates back to the 9 Grammar Guide subject. These intransitive verbs describe the relationship between the subject and complement and are called linking verbs or copulas: I am Fred. I feel sick. Other copulas are grow, act, look, smell, taste and sound. The kind of complement that follows an intransitive verb is called a subjective complement, because it describes the subject. In She has fallen ill, she is the subject, has fallen is the intransitive verb, and ill is the subjective complement. A few transitive verbs can also be followed by a complement. This kind of complement is called an objective complement, because it describes the direct object of the verb: I find her books fascinating. [the object is her books; the complement is fascinating] The team elected Sarah captain. [the object is Sarah; the complement is captain] Person, number and tense Features such as whether a verb is transitive or requires a complement can be described as lexical features. In other words, they relate to the verb’s meaning and cannot be changed at will. Such features of verbs as person, number and tense, on the other hand, are variable, and these variations are effected by conjugating the verb, that is expressing it in its different forms. Another way of stating this is that the features of person, number and tense, when present, mark a verb form as a finite verb. Finite in this case means ‘limited’, since these three features limit the reference of the verb to a particular person, number or time. (This contrasts with the infinitive (see page 7), which is not limited. Rather, the infinitive form indicates only meaning – it’s not constrained by person, time or number.) 10 Grammar and the parts of speech Person: There are three grammatical persons: the speaker (who is the first person), the addressee or one spoken to (the second person) and someone spoken about (the third person). On the whole, English verbs aren’t very concerned with person. English uses other features of language to express this concept. The only marker of person in standard English verbs is the -s at the end of the third-person singular form of verbs in the present tense: I sing, you sing, he sings. The irregular verb be is non-standard and so exceptional: I am, you are, he is, etc. Number: Grammatical number as it relates to verbs is concerned only with whether a verb has as its subject one person or thing (singular) or more than one (plural). As with person, English verbs aren’t too concerned with number. Instead, English depends on nouns to signify this. The only regular marker of number in English verbs is the same as for person: an -s at the end of the third-person singular form of verbs in the present tense: They sing, she sings. Again, the irregular verb be is exceptional: I am, we are, etc. Tense: Tense is the feature of a verb that indicates, in a general way, when. The simplest division of English verb tenses is into past, present and future. ●● ●● ●● The past tense uses the simple past (see page 8). The only English verb that has variable parts for the past tense is be, which uses was for the first and third persons singular, and were for all other persons and numbers. The present tense uses the root form (infinitive) of the verb except, as noted above, for two cases: the third person singular in standard verbs and all forms of be. The future tense is also based on the root form together with the auxiliary or modal (see page 17) verbs will or shall: She will sing. Shall I sing? 11 Grammar Guide We have already noted that, owing to limited inflection in English, many forms of verbs are identical to the infinitive. Because of this, it only becomes apparent whether a verb is finite or an infinitive when one sees it in context. Take, for example, these three sentences: I always return library books on time. You need to return this book to the library by next week. The letter demanded that he return the book immediately. The form of the verb is identical in each sentence. But in the first sentence, return is a finite verb: first person singular present tense. In the second sentence, return is an infinitive. In the third sentence, return is another finite verb, this time a subjunctive form (for more detail, see pages 14–15). Aspect, mood and voice Further features that English verbs have in common with those in other languages include aspect, mood and voice. In some languages these are expressed using the root of the verb altered by suffixes, changed vowels and the like. In English verbs, these features are mainly expressed through the use of auxiliary verbs (see page 16). Aspect: Experts differ as to whether to consider aspect a separate feature of verbs, or to regard it as part of tense. Certainly, the two aspects that English verbs show – the perfect and the continuous – cannot be separated from tense. They are always bound up with the finite features of a verb. ⚪⚪ The perfect aspect of verbs is evident in the perfect tenses – those formed using a finite form of the auxiliary verb have plus the past participle (-ed form) of the main verb. The perfect tenses indicate an action or condition existing in more than one point in time. For example, I have lived here for twenty years 12 Grammar and the parts of speech indicates the time when I started living here, and also the present time (because I still live here). In the sentence When I arrived at the restaurant she had already left the past perfect is used (she had left) to show that the action of leave happened before the action of arrive. ‘You have stolen my dreams and my childhood with your empty words.’ Greta Thunberg, UN Climate Action Summit (2019) ⚪⚪ The continuous (also called progressive) aspect of verbs expresses a continuing, unfinished action or condition. It’s formed with a finite form of be and the present participle (-ing form) of another verb. The continuous aspect can refer to either things that are going on in the present: I’m cleaning my shoes. Or things that were going on in the past: We were living in Japan then. Or things that will be going on in the future: She’ll be waiting there till the train comes in. ‘Sittin’ in the mornin’ sun, I’ll be sittin’ when the evenin’ come.’ Otis Reading/Steve Cropper, ‘The Dock of the Bay’ (1967) Not all verbs can be used in a continuous aspect. Notably, verbs that describe a permanent condition and verbs connected with perception cannot. Examples include have, as in Do you have any brothers or sisters? (not Are you having…?), and hate, as in I hate him (not I am hating...). 13 Grammar Guide Both the perfect and the continuous aspects of verbs can be expressed at the same time. For example, in the sentence She has been working at home for several months now there is a notion of continuous action starting in the past and still going on in the present. Mood: Mood is a complex feature of verbs in some languages, but in English it’s relatively simple. There are only three moods associated with English verbs: the indicative, the imperative and the subjunctive. ⚪⚪ The indicative mood is used for ordinary statements and questions, in which verbs simply describe actions or conditions: Birds sing. Does he live here? ⚪⚪ The imperative mood is used to give orders or make requests. English has no separate form for imperative verbs; the imperative form is identical to the infinitive: Go away! Give me that! ⚪⚪ The subjunctive mood is used for special statements that may express a command, a wish, or something that is unreal. For all verbs except be the subjunctive form is the same as the infinitive, so it’s only evident the mood is subjunctive from the context: I suggested to her that she drop by for a drink before the concert. They demanded that he answer their questions. Notice that the third person singular present omits the final -s (drop rather than drops, answer rather than answers). 14 Grammar and the parts of speech The subjunctive form of be is either be or were: The governor demanded that the letter be published. If you were to go, you might regret it. Be is used where the action is hypothetical or in the future. Were is used in clauses introduced by if, as if, as though or suppose: Suppose I were to meet you outside the theatre. (For more on conditional clauses, introduced by if, and the subjunctive, see chapter 2, page 51.) A typical use of the subjunctive is in clauses introduced by that expressing a wish or suggestion: We recommend that she be promoted to a supervisory position. The subjunctive also occurs in fixed expressions such as: as it were, be that as it may, come what may and far be it from me. Voice: There are two ‘voices’: the active and the passive. ⚪⚪ In the active voice, the subject of the verb is the one who does the action described by the verb, and the object is the one acted upon: The waiters will collect the plates. ⚪⚪ In the passive voice, this situation is reversed. The subject of the verb is the one acted upon by the verb, and the one who does the action – if mentioned at all – is relegated to a separate phrase, typically beginning with by: The plates will be collected by the waiters. The passive can be used for a variety of purposes, for example, if the identity of the doer of the action is unknown, if the writer wants to conceal the identity of the doer of the action, as in The vase was broken, 15 Grammar Guide or if the writer wants to put special emphasis on the object or the action rather than on the doer of the action, as in The bomb was defused by experts. Formal writing tends to use the passive more frequently than informal writing. Auxiliary verbs We’ve already encountered several verb forms that use auxiliary or ‘helping’ verbs. Auxiliary verbs in English perform the work that complex inflections do in some other languages. So, while English has only three principal parts of the verb (the infinitive, the simple past and the past participle), auxiliary verbs enable a broader range of expression. Do, be and have: The core auxiliary verbs in English are do, be and have. They are used: ●● ●● ●● ●● to form questions and negations (a finite form of do plus the infinitive) to form the passive voice (a finite form of be plus the past participle) to form the continuous tenses (a finite form of be plus the present participle) to form the perfect tenses (a finite form of have plus the past participle). Of course, do, be and have can alternatively function as ordinary verbs. Because they can be either auxiliary verbs or ordinary verbs, confusion over identifying the main verb in a sentence may arise. Consider these examples: Does he know all the people at the party? I don’t work Fridays. In both sentences, a form of do is the auxiliary verb: in the first sentence used to create a question, and in the second to negate the main verb. The main verb in the first sentence is know; the 16 Grammar and the parts of speech main verb in the second sentence is work. Note that, in both sentences, the auxiliary verb is a finite form and the main verb an infinitive. We have already seen how a finite form of be is used to form the continuous tenses (see page 13), and the passive voice (see page 15). Consider this sentence: Joe is staying with us for a few months. Here, a form of be (in its finite form, is) is the auxiliary verb. The main verb is stay, expressed by its present participle. For examples of have functioning as an auxiliary verb to form the perfect tenses, see pages 12–14. Modal verbs: The other important group of auxiliary verbs in English are the modal verbs (also called modal auxiliaries): can, could, may, might, must, ought to, shall, should, will and would. (In some cases, the verbs dare, need and used are also considered part of this group.) We have already noted the use of modal verbs: ●● to form future tenses (will and shall plus the infinitive). More broadly, modal verbs are used to convey certain modalities (possibility, obligation, etc.) that affect the meaning of the main verb. ‘“But suppose we need that men should be better than we are,” said Gwendolen.’ George Eliot, Daniel Deronda (1876) Modal auxiliaries are different from ordinary verbs in two important respects. First, they generally don’t have infinitives or other inflections. Second, they’re never used alone, but 17 Grammar Guide always in combination with a main verb. Since they tend not to have all the inflections of ordinary verbs, modal verbs are sometimes called defective, implying they work differently to other verbs. In speech and some other contexts, modal verbs may be found used alone but, in these cases, the main verb is always implied and can often be found in the immediate context, typically the previous sentence or clause. For example: They wanted me to stay on until the end of the project, but I really couldn’t. ‘Are you going to do anything for Michael’s birthday?’ ‘I know I should, but I probably won’t.’ In the first example, I really couldn’t means ‘I really couldn’t stay.’ In the second example, both should and won’t (contraction of will not) refer back to do anything in the first sentence. Phrasal verbs A special group of verbs in English are called phrasal verbs. A phrasal verb is a verb that consists of a main verb – which inflects (changes its form) like any other verb – and another word, usually an adverb or preposition. The meaning of a phrasal verb is often something other than simply the sum of the main verb and the second word. It may extend the main verb’s meaning or it may have a very different sense. Take, for example, the phrasal verb look up, as in You can look up those words in the dictionary. It means more than look, and it doesn’t have anything in particular do to with up, but when used in combination the meaning is clear. Other examples of phrasal verbs are come round (= regain consciousness, be converted to someone’s opinion, etc.), pay back (= repay, take revenge on, etc.), and set aside (= preserve for future use, decide not to consider, etc.). 18 Grammar and the parts of speech Phrasal verbs can be transitive or intransitive, just like standard verbs. A feature of many transitive phrasal verbs is that the direct object of the verb is movable. Consider these two examples: I’ve plugged in the fridge. Have you plugged it in? So, when the object of a phrasal verb is a personal pronoun (in the example above, it), this appears between the main verb and the other component word of the phrasal verb. When the object is a noun (in the example above, fridge), this usually comes after the entire phrasal verb, but may occasionally appear between its two component words if it’s a short word. (For more on personal pronouns, see page 23.) Adjectives An adjective is a word that describes a particular quality associated with a noun. In the phrases a tall man and a green hat, tall and green are adjectives. Attributive and predicate adjectives Typically, adjectives appear in one of two places in the sentence. They can come before the noun they describe: We ate a delicious meal. The people next door have a very friendly dog. Or they can come after the noun and a linking verb (copula) such as be, seem, feel, look, turn or remain: The meal we had there was delicious. Next door’s dog seems very friendly. An adjective that precedes a noun is called an attributive adjective. One that follows a noun and linking verb is called a 19 Grammar Guide predicate adjective (it forms part of the predicate, the part of the sentence that contains the verb and says something about the subject). Some adjectives can be used only attributively (before the noun), for example elder or main. Others can be used only predicatively (after the verb), for example afraid or ajar. Furthermore, some adjectives that can be used either way change their meaning when they’re used attributively or predicatively: There are certain things we need to discuss. [attributive meaning] I think it’s him, but I’m not absolutely certain. [predicative meaning] Comparatives and superlatives Many adjectives inflect (change their form) to show that something has relatively more of a particular quality or the most of that quality. The comparative form, which indicates ‘more’, is made by adding -er or using the word more (lighter, more difficult). The superlative form, which indicates ‘most’, is made by adding -est or using the word most (lightest, most difficult). Adjectives that change their form and describe qualities that exist in degrees are called gradable adjectives. There are a great many adjectives, however, that are considered non-gradable – the quality they describe doesn’t exist in degrees. This sort of adjective is called a non-gradable or classifying adjective. Examples include mortal, nuclear, living and flightless, all qualities that something either possesses or doesn’t. For example, The penguin is a flightless bird. [not more flightless or most flightless] The word unique is generally agreed to be a non-gradable adjective. Consequently, sentences such as It was the most unique experience I ever had are usually regarded as incorrect, even though they’re commonly used. 20 Grammar and the parts of speech Adverbs An adverb is a word that modifies a verb, adjective, another adverb, or a word group. Like adjectives, adverbs are words that add flesh to the bare bones of sentences. They perform many different roles. Typically, adverbs follow verbs, and indicate how, when or where the action described by the verb takes place: Prices have increased dramatically. [how] They are arriving today. [when] Planes flew overhead. [where] Adverbs also commonly precede and modify adjectives or other adverbs: The cherries look tantalisingly ripe. [modifying adjective] He learnt to sail surprisingly quickly. [modifying adverb] -ly endings Often, adverbs are formed from adjectives by adding -ly (or -ally). For example, the adjectives quick, sharp and drastic form the adverbs quickly, sharply and drastically. Note, however, that some adjectives too end in -ly: lovely, friendly, lively. Moreover, many adverbs are either completely independent forms or are identical to their corresponding adjectives: adjective an overhead cable a fast car a daily vitamin adverb planes flew overhead he drove fast I take vitamins daily In a small number of cases, the adjective form of a word can correctly be used as an adverb, even though an -ly form exists as well: Hold on tight [or tightly]. He spelt my name wrong [or wrongly]. 21 Grammar Guide Adverb types Because adverbs perform different roles in sentences, it’s helpful to identify types of adverb. In addition to what we might call ‘standard’ adverbs – those that tell how, when or where – there are three kinds. Sentence adverbs: These occur at the beginning (or, more unusually, at the end) of a sentence and comment on the sentence as a whole, or on conditions affecting it. For example: Frankly, I didn’t believe a word he said. Unfortunately she won’t be able to join us. He remembered visiting the park once when he was a child, strangely enough. The use of hopefully as a sentence adverb, as in Hopefully, someone can resolve this, has sometimes been regarded as controversial. This is because in such sentences no one is indicated as doing the hoping. (The issue can be avoided by writing Let’s hope or It is to be hoped.) Despite the controversy, however, hopefully has become well established as a sentence adverb, perhaps since there is little ambiguity as to what it actually means. Conjunctive adverbs: These introduce a new clause in a sentence, while at the same time characterising its relationship with the preceding clause. For example: Mark doesn’t have the grades to get into Manchester; besides, he doesn’t even want to go there. You’ve made progress in your work, but nevertheless you need to keep applying yourself. I’ve agreed to every suggestion he’s made and still he hesitates to join us. Intensifying adverbs: These are adverbs that make an adjective or another adverb more – or sometimes less – intense. They are sometimes termed sub-modifiers, because they modify a word that is itself a modifier. 22 Grammar and the parts of speech The idea is totally ridiculous. Carl is much better at making speeches than I am. She’s driving too fast. Don’t you think he was slightly embarrassed by what happened? Pronouns A pronoun is a word that takes the place of a noun or noun phrase, so its meaning is always dependent on context. Pronouns stand in for nouns, so that we don’t have to repeat them. Consider the sentence: Mr McMillan lent Mary Mr McMillan’s car for a day, and she didn’t give it back to Mr McMillan for a week. Once Mr McMillan has been mentioned, we can safely refer to him with personal pronouns (here, his and him), without being misunderstood: Mr McMillan lent Mary his car for a day, and she didn’t give it back to him for a week. Personal pronouns Personal pronouns in English inflect for two of the same grammatical features that we have already encountered for verbs, that is, person and number (see page 11). A third feature affecting pronouns, which in English has no bearing on verbs, is gender. English pronouns distinguish between gender in one set of pronouns only: the third person singular. Three genders, masculine, feminine and neuter, are represented by he, she and it respectively. A fourth grammatical feature affecting the inflection of pronouns is case, leading to such variation as I, me, my, etc. (Case, including a full table of personal pronouns inflected for person, number and case, is covered in detail in chapter 2, see page 35.) 23 Grammar Guide Relative pronouns Relative pronouns introduce a kind of subordinate clause (dependent or secondary clause) known as a relative clause (see chapter 2, pages 49–50) and usually identify the noun from the main clause that they refer to. The main relative pronouns are who, whom, whose, which, that and what. These are called definite relative pronouns, because the person or thing they refer to – known as their antecedent – is explicit. For example, in I have a friend who lives in Scotland the relative clause is who lives in Scotland and the antecedent is friend. An indefinite relative pronoun introduces a relative clause but has no antecedent. The compounds formed with -ever from the pronouns above often serve as indefinite relative pronouns: whoever, whichever, whatever, etc.; but the real test of an indefinite relative pronoun is whether it has an antecedent. In the sentence We saw what had happened what is an indefinite relative pronoun because it has no antecedent. (For more on antecedents, see chapter 2, page 50.) Indefinite pronouns Indefinite pronouns refer to a person or thing whose name or identity is not known: someone, something, anybody, any, etc. Any and its compounds are used for questions and negative statements. Otherwise some and its compounds are used. Someone is at the door. Is there any soup left? Note that sentences using words like hardly or scarcely have negative force and should be treated as negative sentences with regard to pronouns: After only three days on holiday they had hardly any money left. 24 Grammar and the parts of speech Reflexive pronouns Pronouns ending in -self or -selves are called reflexive pronouns because they reflect on someone or something already referred to. The reflexive pronouns are: myself, yourself, himself, herself, oneself, itself, ourselves, yourselves and themselves. Typically, reflexive pronouns function as objects (either direct or indirect): He shot himself in the foot. We’ve created a huge problem for ourselves. ‘In the strangest torment of anger, merriment, and pity she flung off all disguise and admitted herself a woman.’ Virginia Woolf, Orlando (1928) Note that in the above examples, himself and ourselves refer to the subjects of the sentences. Use of myself and other -self pronouns to refer to something other than the subject of the sentence is usually not correct: The coach chose Sarah and me. [not myself] There may also be a temptation to use reflexive pronouns incorrectly in contexts such as: My wife and I want to thank you for your support. [not On behalf of my wife and myself, I want…] That’s up to you. [not up to yourself] A secondary use of -self compounds is to intensify or emphasise a noun (usually the subject): I repaired my bike myself. 25 Grammar Guide Prepositions A preposition is a word that introduces a prepositional phrase, or completes a phrasal verb. Prepositions express relationships between different language elements. Prepositions usually come before the noun or pronoun with which they form a prepositional phrase: under the bed; during the performance; by myself. However, in certain circumstances, despite the objections of some grammarians, it is quite acceptable for a preposition to appear at the end of a sentence, for example, in phrasal verbs such as attend to. Where else could one put the preposition in Are you being attended to? Some questions and clauses opening with wh-, for example what, which, who, typically have the preposition at the end, as in What were they hoping for? Some infinitive clauses also have prepositions at the end, as in I would love to go to the dance, but I need someone to go with. Conjunctions A conjunction connects different elements of language: words, phrases, clauses or sentences. ●● ●● The commonest conjunctions are: and, because, but and or. Sometimes a conjunction is itself a fixed phrase, for example as soon as. In English, when two items, whether words, phrases or clauses, are joined together, a conjunction is required between them. When more than two items are joined – that is, when a list is presented – a conjunction typically separates only the last two items, though it’s not impossible to use conjunctions between all items in a list: The farmyard was full of ducks and pigs and chickens. 26 Grammar and the parts of speech Some conjunctions not only join two language elements but also express a relationship between them. Or, for example, indicates that the second of two items is an alternative to the first. Subordinating conjunctions, such as when, where, why and how, join a subordinate clause (secondary clause, see chapter 2, page 48) with a main clause: They were happy when I won. He wasn’t able to tell me why he was leaving. Here, when I won and why he was leaving are the subordinate clauses. Interjections An interjection is a word or phrase that can stand alone to express an emotion or an idea. ●● Common interjections include Ouch! oh dear and Wow! Interjections are the most straightforward of the traditional parts of speech. While there are hundreds of them in English, since they occur in relative isolation, either independently from other sentences (often followed by an exclamation mark), or separated by a comma, they can readily be identified. For example, Bless you, how kind you are. ‘“Ow!” “Sorry!” “Tell me, Doctor, what exactly are you looking for?”’ David Nicholls, Sweet Sorrow (2019) Some linguists regard interjections as sentence substitutes, utterances that express a complete idea, as a sentence does, but without the use of a subject and a predicate. 27 28 chapter 2 Words working together liza: I don’t want to talk grammar. I want to talk like a lady. George Bernard Shaw Pygmalion (1912) In chapter 1 we took a traditional approach to grammar by identifying English words as parts of speech or word classes, and exploring the ways these various parts of speech behave. There are other ways to understand language, however. Some of the roles performed by words depend less on their part of speech and more on the way they are put together with other words. The study of this area of language, that is, the way words combine to form meaningful statements and express ideas, is called syntax. At its simplest, syntax is about word order, for example, the subject, verb, object convention usual in English. As outlined in this chapter, however, it can become quite subtle and complex. Initially, we’ll touch on a few further grammar concepts and examples with a particular bearing on syntax. This will lead into an analysis of the main building blocks of the language: the phrase, the clause and the sentence. Grammar concepts relating to syntax Functional shift Functional shift is the process by which a word shifts from one grammatical function to another. 29 Grammar Guide As already noted (see chapter 1, page 4), a number of words in English can fulfil more than one role in a sentence, that is, they can behave as more than one part of speech. Another way of understanding this phenomenon is to think of it as functional shift. Historical context In English, the process of functional shift, whereby, for example, words that traditionally function as nouns begin to be used as verbs, or words that mainly function as adverbs take on meanings as nouns, has been under way for centuries. Dictionaries with etymologies – records of the origins of a word and the way its meaning has changed – record this phenomenon. Here are some examples of functional shift that are firmly established in English: 1. Noun changing to verb: The noun access has existed in English since about the 14th century. The verb access (for example, to access a computer file) came into use in the 1960s. 2. Verb changing to noun: The word laugh is originally a verb in English and was in use as early as the 12th century. The use of laugh as a noun (for example, to give a laugh) only came into use in the 17th century. 3. Noun taking on adjectival use: The current sense of prestige as a noun dates from the 17th century. In the mid20th century, the word became common as a modifier (for example, a prestige apartment complex). 4. Interjection changing to verb: The word wow as an interjection expressing surprise or admiration dates from the 16th century. As a verb (for example, Audiences were wowed by his new musical), it first appeared in the 1920s. 5. Adverb becoming a verb: The adverb up occurs in the earliest examples of English, before the 12th century. As a verb, (for example, upping the limit), it appeared in the 18th century. 30 Words working together Participles to noun forms Present participle to gerund: A type of functional shift particularly useful to note for understanding syntax is that from present participle to gerund. English verbs that have an infinitive form also have an -ing form. When we see this form out of context, we think of it as the present participle (see chapter 1, page 8): running, being, frustrating. It has an important job in forming the continuous tenses (see page 13): The engine has been running continuously for three weeks. Joshua was being a nuisance again. The weather today is frustrating all attempts to rescue the survivors. And nearly all present participles can be used as adjectives: a fascinating subject, a going concern, a vibrating mechanism. ‘O, it came o’er my ear like the sweet sound, That breathes upon a bank of violets’ William Shakespeare, Twelfth Night (1602) The -ing form of the verb can also be used as a noun, when it’s called a gerund. Consider these sentences: Swimming and bicycling are two of the best all-around exercises. Do you mind my taking this seat? She was picked up for violating the conditions of her parole. All the -ing forms in these sentences are nouns. Swimming and bicycling is the subject of the first sentence; the noun phrase my taking this seat is the direct object of the verb mind; and violating the conditions of her parole is the object of the preposition for. 31 Grammar Guide Past participle to noun form: Another long-established shift is that from past participle to noun form. The past participle of regular English verbs is formed by adding -d or -ed to the root (see chapter 1, page 8). In regular verbs it’s identical to the simple past form. Irregular verbs, however, show a variety of patterns in the past participle. As a reminder, past participles are important components in two kinds of verbs: the perfect tenses, which consist of a finite form of have plus the past participle (see page 12), and the passive voice, which consists of a finite form of be plus the past participle (see pages 15–16): I have seen all his films. [perfect tense] The suspect was seen leaving the area after 11 pm. [passive voice] A verb can be expressed as both passive and perfect by using its past participle with a finite form of have along with the past participle of be, that is, been: All the applications have been acknowledged. In addition to their roles in compound verb tenses, most past participles can also act as adjectives: a done deal; a recorded message; a wrecked car In a few cases, past participles have also acquired uses as nouns: It’s a given that he will demand a higher rate than any other consultant. A past participle preceded by the typically becomes a noun that designates a group: They believe that the damned live in hell for eternity. (In some ways, this is analogous to other noun use of adjectives, for example, young or poor: The young, by which I mean digital natives… or The poor take recourse to food banks.) 32 Words working together ‘The beautiful and the damned.’ F. Scott Fitzgerald, The Beautiful and the Damned (1922) Determiners A determiner is a type of function word that precedes a noun or noun phrase, modifying it to specify definiteness, quantity or possession. The concept of the determiner is similarly worth getting to grips with for understanding syntax. Determiners include: ●● ●● ●● ●● ●● definite and indefinite articles: the, a and an (see immediately below) adjectives that indicate relative quantity, such as more, less, few, many and enough. Some grammarians classify these determiners as quantifiers adjectives that indicate which of all possible things is designated, such as all, such, some, any, several and various. Also classified as quantifiers the personal possessive pronouns, such as my, your, his, her and our (see chapter 1, page 23, and page 36) the demonstrative pronouns (those indicating which), such as this, that, these and those. Numbers and possessive nouns (such as Boris’s, the Prime Minister’s) are also sometimes classed as determiners. One characteristic of determiners is that they precede other attributive modifiers of a noun or noun phrase. For example: the black cat; more solitary walkers; some ambitious construction projects; my little sister; these unaccountable local agencies 33 Grammar Guide Determiners as function words The term determiner started to be used by linguists only in the 20th century. Central to its definition is the concept of the function word. The first four parts of speech discussed in chapter 1 – nouns, verbs, adjectives and adverbs – generally have what linguists call lexical meaning, that is, a meaning based on common understanding. Words such as pomegranate, abdicate, green and slowly, for example, to varying degrees, bring an image to mind. Words in other word classes – pronouns, prepositions, conjunctions and interjections – as well as some words in the first four classes, depend on their context for meaning. They have what is called grammatical meaning, that is, a meaning based on the rules of syntax. Linguists argue that we know what the words mean because we already have an in-built knowledge of these syntactical rules. Function words, then, are words that have grammatical (rather than lexical) meaning. Determiners represent one type of function word. Before the name determiner came into use, the words in this category were divided among a number of different categories, as outlined above. Determine comes from a Latin word meaning ‘to set the limits of ’, and the role of determiners in English is to limit a noun or noun phrase. But unlike ordinary modifiers, which describe the qualities of a noun or noun phrase, determiners specify definiteness, quantity or possession. A determiner occurs before a noun or noun phrase; if there are modifying adjectives it precedes them. Articles The articles, by way of example, are the most frequently used determiners in English. There are three: the definite article, which is the, and the indefinite articles, a and an. The grammatical functions of the articles mostly concern number (how many of the associated noun), definiteness (already mentioned or not) and countability (existence or not of a plural form of the noun). 34 Words working together The way articles are used in English is partly determined by logical rules, but partly it is idiomatic – that is without obvious reason. Consider, for instance, the following: indefinite Joe is singing a song. Joe is singing (some) songs. Joe is listening to music. definite Joe is singing the song. Joe is singing the songs. Joe is listening to the music. [countable and singular] [countable and plural] [uncountable] Note that a and an are really variations on the same word. A is the form of the indefinite article used before words that are pronounced with an initial consonant sound (even if the spelling does not begin with a consonant): a banana; a hunk; a ewe. An is the form used before words that begin with a vowel sound (even if an unpronounced consonant comes first): an elephant; an heir. The same rule regarding sound rather than spelling applies to abbreviations: a CD, a USB but an SSD. Case Case is a feature of a noun, pronoun or adjective that reflects its relationship with other words in a sentence. Some languages have more than a dozen cases, and some require inflection (changes in form) for nouns, pronouns and adjectives according to case. English is by comparison simple and straightforward. First, there are only three cases in English: nominative (also called subjective), objective and possessive. Secondly, only personal pronouns have inflections for case in English. Nouns are identical, whether in the nominative or the 35 Grammar Guide objective case, and they require only ’s to show the possessive case. English adjectives are identical in all cases. A word in the nominative case is the subject of a sentence or clause. A word in the objective case is either the object of a transitive verb, or the object of a preposition. A noun or pronoun in the possessive case indicates possession. Personal pronouns (see chapter 1, page 23) are the only words in English that inflect (that is, change their form) for case differences: 3rd person singular 3rd person plural relative and interro­gative Depen­dent posses­sive 2nd person Nomina­t ive 1st person plural Case: 1st person singular personal pronouns I we you he, she, it they who ours yours his, hers us you my Indepen­dent mine possessive Objective me our your his, her, its their whose theirs him, her, it them whom The few usage issues involving case in English arise when there is a conflict – real or imagined – about which case should govern a pronoun in context. Possessive pronouns with participles and gerunds: Which sentence is correct? Consider the following: I was surprised to hear of him refusing. I was surprised to hear of his refusing. In fact both sentences can be considered correct. In the first option, the -ing word refusing is a participle functioning as an adjective that modifies him. The case of the adjective is 36 Words working together governed by its role in the sentence – as part of the object of the preposition of, it’s in the objective case. In the second option, the -ing word refusing is a gerund and a synonym for the noun refusal. When an -ing form is a noun, it must be preceded by a possessive form. This second option is generally considered the better choice, and should be used in formal writing. Nevertheless, the first option is overwhelmingly common in spoken English. The intent of the speaker or writer with respect to the choice of gerunds or participles is apparent in the following examples. Take, for example, We were amused to watch the press secretary weaving and dodging during a tense news conference. This means the speaker was amused to watch the press secretary being evasive (adjective). Alternatively, take: We were amused to watch the press secretary’s weaving and dodging during a tense news conference. Here the speaker was amused by the press secretary’s evasions (the noun equivalent of the gerunds weaving/dodging). There are some exceptions to this pattern. Take: ●● ●● ●● a plural noun such as visitors, or an abstract noun such as panic, or a noun modified by other words, for example, Member of Parliament. When these are used with a present participle -ing form, this is usually an adjective, not a gerund, and the possessive does not normally appear. Thus: The guards will not put up with visitors roaming the corridors of the House of Commons. It was a case of panic overwhelming the speculators. 37 Grammar Guide There was something sleazy about a Member of Parliament having friendly relations with a convicted criminal. Pronouns in comparatives after than and as…as: Which sentence is correct? Consider the following: You’re stronger than me, or You’re stronger than I. Because than is a preposition as well as a conjunction, either construction is possible, as is the fuller version of the second option than I am. The form than me (or than him, than her, than us and than them), with the pronoun in the objective case after the preposition than, is common in conversation and other speech: We’re older than him. But it may still be frowned on in formal writing where, despite its awkwardness to some ears, the pronoun in the nominative case after the conjunction than may be preferred: We’re older than he. An undoubtedly correct alternative is to follow than and pronoun in the nominative with a full subordinate clause (see page 48): We’re older than he is. A similar situation arises in the case of as…as when it’s used in comparisons. Though common, such sentences as the following are not strictly correct: I was sitting close, but not as close as them. [as…as] She makes a lot more money than me. [than] The phrase as…as, where an adjective or adverb fills in the blank, acts as a conjunction between clauses. The second clause, in cases where it contains only a pronoun in the nominative case, has an implied predicate that is the same as the predicate of the first clause, and can therefore, in theory at least, be omitted: I was sitting close, but not as close as they. [as…as] She makes a lot more money than I. [than] 38 Words working together Fuller forms of the preceding sentences are: I was sitting close, but not as close as they were. [as…as] She makes a lot more money than I do. [than] These have the advantages of both correctness and naturalness. ‘He’s more myself than I am.’ Emily Brontë, Wuthering Heights (1847) Agreement Agreement is the matching of the form of a word belonging to one part of speech with the form of a word belonging to another part of speech. For example, subject noun or pronoun must agree with the verb. In English, agreement mainly relates to person, number and gender, and occurs mainly between subject noun or pronoun and verb, but also between subject and subsequent pronouns (see, for example, chapter 1, page 10). Many centuries ago, English had a fully-fledged system of person agreement (see chapter 1, page 11) for its verbs. In other words, it was possible to tell simply by looking at the ending of a verb whether the subject was I, you, he, she, it, we or they. Modern European languages such as French and German still have similar specialised verb forms, but in modern English they’ve almost completely died out. This makes matching the correct form of the verb to the subject, that is, making the verb agree with the subject, comparatively easy when the timeframe is the present or the past: I sing/you sing/we sing [simple present tense] I sang/Nicole sang/the birds sang [simple past tense] Leaving aside special cases like the verb to be (because it changes to I am, you are, he is, etc.), as we have seen in chapter 1, 39 Grammar Guide (page 11), modern verbs change their basic form only in the present tense, where the third person singular (the form used with he, she, or it) adds an -s or sometimes -ies: he sings/she carries/it hurts Complexities relating to agreement arise, however, when number (see chapter 1, page 11) is not immediately apparent. Agreement for number Here are some of the trickier cases of agreement for number. Two subjects joined by and: Two or more subjects of a sentence joined by and form a plural subject and take a plural verb, even if they’re individually singular: The politician and the journalist have a lot in common. She and I are alike in many ways. In respect of the verb, the politician and the journalist become a collective they, and she and I become a collective we. Two subjects joined by or, either...or, or neither...nor: Two or more subjects linked by or, either … or, or neither … nor, can take either a singular or a plural verb. When both subjects are singular, use a singular verb: One or the other of them has to be right. When both subjects are plural, a plural verb should be used: Neither politicians nor journalists are agreed on this. What happens when there are two subjects both in the third person, one singular and one plural? There’s no definitive answer to this, but as a general rule the verb usually agrees with the subject nearest to it: Neither they nor their friend is involved in the dispute. Either he or his opponents are wrong. 40 Words working together When the subjects are a mixture of nouns or pronouns in different persons, the rule is the same: the verb agrees with the pronoun nearest to it: Neither my friends nor I am involved in the dispute. Either he or we have to give way. Pronouns either, none, there, what, any and nothing: ⚪⚪ Either is normally used with a singular verb: Has either of you been to Paris? Informally, however, when the question is regarded collectively rather than individually, the plural can be used, so it would be quite natural to say, Have either of you been to Paris? ⚪⚪ This permits the possibility that both the people addressed have been there. None: When none refers to a singular noun, and it can be replaced with no + noun, a singular verb should be used: We were desperate for information, but none [= no information] was available. When none refers to a singular noun, and it can be replaced with not one, a singular verb similarly appears: None of my friends [= not one of my friends] was able to come. I’d have liked a sandwich, but none [= not a single one] was left. When none refers to a plural noun, and it can be replaced with not any, a plural verb should be used: None of you [= not any of you] have handed in your work yet. ⚪⚪ There: When the pronoun there opens a sentence followed by a linking verb like be, appear or seem, the verb must agree with the grammatical subject coming after the verb: 41 Grammar Guide There is [not are] a beach nearby. There are [not is] beaches nearby. There appear [not appears] to be mistakes in your essay. There appears [not appear] to be a mistake in your essay. There’s stands for there is. It should be used only with a singular grammatical subject, as in: There’s a lot still to be done. There’s a car in the garage. With compound grammatical subjects there used with a singular linking verb is acceptable only when the compound subject is regarded not as two separate entities but as a single compound noun. Thus it is acceptable to say: There is/There’s food and drink for everybody. ⚪⚪ (Stylistically, There is/are sentences tend to be flat and lacking emphasis, so it may be wise to avoid overusing them.) What: If you use what as the subject of a clause, it takes a plural verb if its complement (the word or phrase relating back to it to complete the sentence, see chapter 1, page 9) is plural: She makes what seem [not seems] to be exaggerated claims. If you use what as the subject of a clause, it takes a singular verb if its complement is singular: I see what looks like a deer in the front garden. The same rule applies to what clauses that occur at the beginning of sentences: What we wanted was fairness. What we wanted were fairness and truth. If the what clause has both singular and plural complements, the verb usually agrees with the complement closest to: What we expected was truthfulness and honest claims. What we got were fraudulent claims and mendacity. 42 Words working together ⚪⚪ Any used as a pronoun is followed by a singular or plural verb depending on the writer’s intended meaning: Any of these suggestions is acceptable. [= Any one of these suggestions is acceptable.] Are any of the children coming? [Are any of several of them coming?] Is any of the children coming? [One is expected, but which one?] ⚪⚪ Nothing is a singular indefinite pronoun. It is usually treated as singular even if it’s followed by a phrase introduced by a phrase like except for and a plural noun: Nothing except for your boxes and bags has [not have] been removed from the apartment. Moving the subject closer to its verb reduces the chance of grammatical error and more closely follows the natural flow of speech: Except for your boxes and bags, nothing has been removed from the apartment. Sentences starting nothing but become a little more subtle, however. The following are both acceptable, depending on emphasis: Nothing but truthful answers is acceptable on this questionnaire. [emphasising an instance] Nothing but truthful answers are acceptable on this questionnaire. [emphasising the whole] ‘We had to tolerate flaws in our loved ones: nothing was ever perfect, he said.’ Rachel Cusk, Outline (2014) 43 Grammar Guide Negation Negation is the denial of the truth of a clause or a sentence, that is, changing its status from true to false. Negation is accomplished with a very small group of words in English: no, not, none, neither, nor, nothing, nobody, no one and never. Of these, the true workhorse is not, and it’s used regularly with auxiliary and modal verbs (see chapter 1, pages 16–18) that reduce it to the contraction n’t: isn’t, doesn’t, can’t, won’t, shouldn’t, mustn’t. The hard and fast rule of negation in English is that its required only once in a sentence. Using two of the above negating words in the same clause is called a double negative, and, when intended to reinforce, is grammatically incorrect: for example, I don’t know nothing, They haven’t got no more flour. The non-standard negating word ain’t can stand for am not, are not, is not, have not, has not, do not, does not and did not. With this kind of versatility, it’s a pity that no matter which of these it substitutes for – and despite its occasional poetry – it’s incorrect. While acceptable in some fixed expressions that occur in informal contexts, such as You ain’t seen nothing yet, it’s never a part of correct, formal writing. (Ain’t is typically used with another negative word, perhaps guided by the notion that if one is going to break one rule, one might as well break two.) While double negatives in which two negatives are intended to reinforce each other are considered illiterate in current standard English, these are to be distinguished from the acceptable, if somewhat uncommon, constructions in sentences such as: It is not impossible. [= It is certainly possible.] This isn’t a non-trivial question. [= It is a trivial question.] 44 Words working together Here, the negatives are intended to cancel each other out. This is a figure of speech called litotes (see Literary terms on page 390). It’s worth bearing in mind that the adverbs hardly, barely and scarcely have negative force, so that no further negative is needed with them in a clause or sentence: I can hardly see you. [not I can’t hardly see you.] Note that when and not than is used in any continuation of a sentence using one of these adverbs: Hardly had I begun to speak when she interrupted me. Interestingly, a similar construction, using the conventional negating word no, uses than rather than when: No sooner had I begun to speak than she interrupted me. This is because sooner here is a comparative (see chapter 1, page 20). The phrase, the clause and the sentence In isolation, the various parts of speech, which we examined in chapter 1 (see page 4), are not very meaningful. They only start to make sense when combined with other elements. While conversations may include many one- and two-word utterances, if we analyse these, we’ll usually find that words are left out because they’re mutually understood by the speakers. Most often, words combine into groups that we designate as phrases, clauses or sentences. While we have been unable to avoid using these three terms up to now, below we explore what they mean in more detail. Phrases A phrase is a group of words that function as a single part of speech. It is neither a clause nor a sentence. 45 Grammar Guide Five distinct types of phrase can be identified: noun phrases, verb phrases, adjective phrases, adverbial phrases and prepositional phrases. 1. Noun phrases: The main word in a noun phrase is a noun. It may be accompanied simply by an article (an apple), or by an adjective or series of adjectives (a big, red, well-polished apple). It can comprise more than one noun (apples and oranges). 2. Verb phrases: The main word in a verb phrase is a verb. It may be accompanied by one or more auxiliary verbs (had finished; ought to have been resting). All tenses, moods, aspects and voices of English verbs except the simple present and the simple past are expressed by verb phrases. 3. Adjective phrases: The main word in an adjective phrase is an adjective. It may be accompanied by one or more adverbs (completely incredible; not altogether believable). Adjective phrases modify nouns or pronouns 4. Adverbial phrases: The main word in an adverbial phrase is an adverb. It may be accompanied by other adverbs (somewhat surprisingly). 5. Prepositional phrases: A prepositional phrase consists of a preposition followed by a noun, a pronoun, or another phrase (under the bed; during intermission; for me; in the best of times and the worst of times). Overlaying this, some grammarians classify phrases according to the verb form that introduces them: participial phrases, gerund phrases or infinitive phrases. Participial phrases usually function as adjectives or adverbs: A teacher burdened with unruly students can burn out very quickly. [adjective phrase] She ran out of the room crying her eyes out. [adverbial phrase] 46 Words working together Gerund phrases usually function as nouns: Reading the dictionary sounds like a punishment to me. (For more on the gerund, see page 31.) Infinitive phrases can function as nouns or adjectives: To see the Northern Lights was his abiding wish. [noun phrase] There are many issues still to be dealt with. [adjective phrase] A compound phrase comprises two or more phrases, often of different classifications, that act as a single unit. In The great dream of my childhood was to live in Paris the infinitive phrase to live is completed by the prepositional phrase in Paris. In combination, the whole compound phrase is the complement of the verb was. Clauses A clause is a unit of language that contains a verb, either explicit or implied. It also usually contains the subject of the verb, and very often other words such as the object of the verb. A clause contains a subject, expressed or implied, typically by a noun, noun phrase or pronoun, and a predicate, expressed by the verb and any other elements that modify the verb. In the clause, we encounter the grammar rules involving subject–verb agreement (see pages 39–43). The general principle is simple: a singular subject requires a singular verb; a plural subject requires a plural verb. There are two types of clause: main clauses and subordinate clauses. 47 Grammar Guide Main (or independent) clauses can stand alone as sentences. Help! is a main clause. So are: She left. He finished his drink. The squirrel buried its nuts under the old chestnut tree at the bottom of the garden. When two or more main clauses occur in a compound sentence, they are joined with a coordinating conjunction. The main ones are and and or: Stop or I’ll shoot. I made all the beds and Erika did the vacuuming. In formal writing, joining main clauses with only a comma is considered incorrect. They should either be separate sentences, or joined with an appropriate conjunction. Subordinate (or dependent) clauses cannot stand alone in formal writing; they need to be attached to a main clause. They are sometimes called dependent clauses because they depend on a main clause for their meaning. For example, what the time was is a subordinate clause. It makes no sense on its own and has to go with a main clause: I’d forgotten what the time was. Similarly, the subordinate clause although I like chocolate requires a main clause: Although I like chocolate, I can’t stand chocolate milk. Subordinate clauses are generally introduced by one of two different kinds of words, which we met in chapter 1: 1. The relative pronouns, including who, whom, whose, which, that and what (see chapter 1, page 24). 2. The subordinating conjunctions, which include although, because, when, where, why, whether, which, who, how and that (see chapter 1, page 27). 48 Words working together One way to analyse subordinate clauses is by function. Clauses can perform the same roles in sentences that phrases do. For example, an adjective clause modifies a noun or pronoun; an adverb clause acts as an adverb in a main clause – that is, it modifies a verb or an adjective; and a noun clause acts as a noun in a main clause. Relative clauses A relative clause, introduced by a relative pronoun, is a type of subordinate clause. Relative clauses tend to be adjective clauses, modifying nouns or pronouns. They can be differentiated according to their relationship to the main clause. Restrictive and non-restrictive clauses: ⚪⚪ Restrictive clauses limit, specify and define the particular person or thing being referred to. For instance, in The team that I support has won all its games this season the restrictive clause that I support specifies which team is referred to. Broadly, restrictive clauses can begin with any of the relative pronouns given above. However, when the clause refers to a thing, it is considered better to begin it with that than with which: All the fabrics that I ordered have arrived. In practice, many such relative clauses may eliminate the relative pronoun all together: All the fabrics I ordered have arrived. ⚪⚪ Non-restrictive clauses add information about a person or thing previously mentioned. They don’t limit, specify or define. For example, in The team, which I support, has won all its games this season, the non-restrictive relative clause is providing the extra, nonessential, information that the speaker happens to support the particular team already under discussion. Note 49 Grammar Guide that in writing, a non-restrictive clause is marked off with a pair of commas. Any of the relative pronouns other than that can begin restrictive clauses. ‘The bear, which could reach either of them in two easy scooches, loses interest.’ Richard Powers, The Overstory (2018) Antecedents: As we have seen in chapter 1 (page 24), an antecedent is a word or phrase that a following word (especially a relative pronoun) refers back to: I have a friend who lives in Scotland. As noted, relative clauses generally refer back to a noun form as their antecedent. Moreover, the relationship between the clause and its antecedent needs to be clear. In formal writing constructions in which the antecedent is missing or vague should be avoided: I’d sign up for advanced calculus if I were clever, which I’m not. The clause which I’m not has no clear antecedent. (Moreover, there is redundancy, since if I were clever already indicates that I am not, and can be safely deleted.) Stylistically, it is also advisable to avoid making an entire clause the antecedent for a relative clause. Instead of He crashed the ultralight aircraft into the motorway, which was his own fault. it is better to rephrase Crashing the ultralight aircraft into the motorway was his own fault. 50 Words working together Conditional clauses Often a subordinate clause contains a condition, that is something that must be true if the main clause is true, will happen, or did happen. Conditions can be expressed in various ways in English, but the standard is a dependent clause beginning with if. For this reason, conditional clauses are often called if clauses: If you clean your plate you can have some ice cream. A major distinction between types of if clauses is whether they express possible or impossible conditions. This distinction is sometimes expressed as a factual condition or a condition contrary to fact. Perhaps the simplest way to understand the distinction, is to divide if clauses into real and unreal conditions. Here is an example of a sentence containing a possible or real condition: If he doesn’t put on a mask I’ll simply walk away. And here is an example of a sentence containing an impossible or unreal condition: If you hadn’t seen the lorry coming we’d both be dead. [but you did see it] A degree of complexity arises as to which form of the verb is correct for different types of if clause. Real conditions: When an if clause expresses a real condition, the indicative mood (see chapter 1, page 14) for the appropriate tense of the verb is used in that clause: If I finish in time I’ll stop by the post office. [finish is present indicative] If Jon was still on the mountain during the storm, he probably tried to shelter somewhere. [was is past indicative] 51 Grammar Guide Unreal conditions: When an if clause expresses an unreal condition, it gets trickier. ⚪⚪ For an unreal condition in the present, a past tense (see chapter 1, page 8) is used in the if clause, and a modal auxiliary verb (see chapter 1, page 17), usually would (or, less commonly, should or another modal) is used in the main clause: If I liked raves, I would attend more of them. [liked is past tense] Furthermore, if the verb is be, then the subjunctive form (see chapter 1, page 14) of the verb is apparent in the if clause (If I were [not ‘was’] you): If I were you, I would not try that at home. ⚪⚪ For an unreal condition in the past, a past perfect tense (see chapter 1, page 13) is used: If you had texted me, I would have come. If they had done it right to begin with, these problems would not exist. (Sometimes, would have may be encountered in such if clauses – If you would have texted…, but it is incorrect.) ‘If my books had been any worse, I should not have been invited to Hollywood, and if they had been any better, I should not have come.’ Raymond Chandler, letter to Charles Morton (1945) Sentences A sentence is a set of words that stands independently, consisting of one or more main clauses and sometimes one or more subordinate clauses. 52 Words working together We have now explored all the component elements of sentences, starting from the parts of speech (see chapter 1), through some considerations as to how these function in relation to syntax (see page 29), to putting them together to create phrases (see page 45) and clauses (see page 47). This makes the remainder of our subject easy, for sentences are only phrases and clauses joined and punctuated in the correct way. English sentences are of three types: 1. Simple sentences comprise just one main clause. The following are all simple sentences: Scram! Birds sing. This film is awful. All the squirrels in my garden are burying acorns today. 2. Compound sentences contain two or more main clauses. The following are examples of compound sentences: A beam cracked and men started shouting. I’m not her boss, but I am familiar with her work. Stand up and fight or get out of here. 3. Complex sentences include at least one subordinate or dependent clause (see page 48) in addition to the main clause. The following are examples of complex sentences: I think you’re wrong. She found the letters that her grandfather had sent her. If he believes that, he’ll believe anything. The person whose name appears at the top of the list should send the letter to five further people who have not received it before. She kept the party secret, because she wanted to surprise him. The remaining important features of sentences concern punctuation, capitalisation and style, and are covered in the following chapters in the first part of this book. 53 54 chapter 3 Punctuation What would it be like to live in a library of melted books. With sentences streaming over the floor and all the punctuation settled to the bottom as a residue. Anne Carson Wildly Constant (2009) Punctuation is used in writing to clarify meaning. Spoken language may be supplemented by such features as pauses, tone of voice, changes in pitch, facial expressions and even gestures, all of which give additional clues as to meaning, as well as to the intentions or feelings of the speaker. Without these, written language relies on punctuation marks to convey much of the same sense and emotion. Creative writers, of course, may play games with punctuation. Chapters of James Joyce’s Ulysses, for example, contain very little punctuation at all – obliterating convention in one stream-of-consciousness fell swoop. Other literary fiction writers have adopted different ways of treating punctuation creatively or poetically – see, for example, the instances in chapter 6 of this book. 55 Grammar Guide ‘first I put my arms around him yes and drew him down to me so he could feel my breasts all perfume yes and his heart was going like mad and yes I said yes I will Yes.’ James Joyce, Ulysses (1922) As a starting point, and certainly in formal writing, however, it is advisable to stay within the standard rules of punctuation. A good basic principle is to use only as much punctuation as is necessary to make one’s meaning clear; too much punctuation can be a distraction for the reader. This chapter sets out some standard guidance. Full stops The full stop (.) – known in American English as the period – ends a sentence (see chapter 2, page 52) that is neither a question nor an exclamation (for which, see page 63). It can also be used to end what is called a sentence substitute, that is, a word or phrase that contains a complete thought, even though it does not include all the elements required in a sentence, for example, Yes. More broadly, this type of point is the main mark of punctuation for showing the end of one item and the beginning of another. It can be used to indicate the end of an element of text, even when not a full sentence, for example, at the end of a note, caption or bibliographic entry. A full stop also appears at the end of certain abbreviations, for example, etc., e.g., no., ed. (Note some abbreviations that take full points in American English, usually in the pattern of contractions that comprise the first and final letter, do not in British English, for example, Mr, Dr, St – for Saint or Street.) Many abbreviations that consist only of capital letters, often but not always those with pronunciations that are based on initials, don’t take full stops, for example, SARS, NATO, 56 Punctuation EU. Full stops are used, however, in most cases where capital initials abbreviate any of a person’s names: J. K. Rowling, George W. Bush. Ellipses Three full points in a row make an ellipsis, a punctuation device for showing that words have been left out or that something is unfinished. An ellipsis should only be used when there’s a good reason for leaving out text. For example, if a writer quotes someone, an ellipsis can appear to show where material considered less important for the writer’s purposes has been omitted: Among the bargains were 20th-century first editions in excellent condition…with several signed by the authors. An ellipsis with four points occurs when text before the part being omitted ends with a full stop: We expected the shipment to arrive at any moment…. The dispatcher had been notified that the lorry was on its way. An ellipsis occurs at the end of a sentence or paragraph when the writer wants to show that a text is unfinished. It can also be used as a literary device to indicate speech by someone who didn’t finish his or her sentence: ‘I know what you’re thinking, but you’ve got to understand that…’ Commas The general use of the comma (,) is to introduce a break between words, phrases or clauses (see chapter 2, pages 45–52) to show that they are separate from each other in some sense. Good practice The following comma conventions are standard in written English and should generally be observed: 57 Grammar Guide 1. Quoted speech: ⚪⚪ A comma follows a reporting verb and precedes quoted speech: She said, ‘The treasure is buried under the sundial.’ ⚪⚪ A comma ends quoted speech followed by a reporting verb when the speech is not an exclamation or a question: ‘The treasure is buried under the sundial,’ she said. 2. Subordinate clauses: ⚪⚪ Non-restrictive relative clauses (see chapter 2, page 49), often starting with which, are separated out with commas: The novel, which was her second, proved very popular. ⚪⚪ Introductory subordinate clauses of all types (see chapter 2, page 48) are followed by a comma: Despite having no money, she insisted on coming with us. 3. Main clauses: Long main clauses (or independent clauses, see chapter 2, page 48) that are joined by and, but, for, or, nor, so or yet usually benefit from a comma at the end of the first clause, before the conjunction: My mother bought fresh fruit, and my brother made several sponge cakes. 4. List items: Short items in a list or series, provided they feature no internal punctuation (see immediately below), can be separated by commas: Dinner consisted of fried chicken, mashed potatoes, green beans and salad. According to some style conventions, there should also be a comma after the penultimate item (in this example, before 58 Punctuation and). This is called the serial comma, or alternatively the Oxford comma. While it is optional, it is important to be consistent in its use. 5. Parts of geographical names: In running text, a comma separates the name of a place from the name of its surrounding area, whether county, state or country, and another separates the name of the area from what follows: She grew up in Wasdale, Cumbria, on a farm owned by her grandfather. 6. Nouns in apposition: Commas separate out a short phrase that is in apposition to a noun, in other words, that is next to it and explains it in some way: Bella Feezer, the club’s secretary, read the report. 7. Serial adjectives: Commas separate two or more serial adjectives that precede a noun when the adjectives could logically be linked by and: Long, narrow, dark corridors crisscrossed the building in all directions. However, in both informal and technical writing, long strings of adjectives may precede a noun without being separated by commas: A great big fat green caterpillar was stuck to the bottom of his shoe. The replacement part is a 9 volt 2.4 amp 60 watt LPS power source. 8. Bibliographies: In certain styles of bibliography or reference list, a comma is used to break up elements in an entry: Roese, H. (1982), ‘Some Aspects of Topographical Locations of Neolithic and Bronze Age Monuments in Wales’, Bulletin of the Board of Celtic Studies, 29 (1): 763–5. 59 Grammar Guide 9. Numbers: A comma separates thousands in numerals. If no figures larger than 9999 appear, the comma is optional, but if there are both four- and five-figure numbers, the comma should be used to set apart thousands, millions, billions, trillions, etc.: 4,239 54,796 3,525,598 (Note, however, that in scientific, mathematical and similar writing, spaces rather than commas may be used.) Poor practice A comma should not be used in the following cases: ⚪⚪ To break up independent clauses that are not connected by a conjunction. The technical term for this is comma fault or comma splice. For example: Her new car is a Golf, it runs on diesel. Such clauses should be divided into two sentences, separated by a semi-colon, joined by a conjunction, or reworded so that one or other clause is subordinate. Her new car is a Golf and it runs on diesel. ⚪⚪ To separate list items that are long or contain internal punctuation: The topics included the increase in crime, things the police were doing to stop it, complaints that residents have had, including ones about police harassment, and a list of things that residents could do to minimise the crime in their neighbourhood. Items in such a list are better separated by semicolons: The topics included the increase in crime; things the police were doing to stop it; complaints that residents have had, including ones about police harassment; and a list of things that residents could do to minimise the crime in their neighbourhood. 60 Punctuation Semicolons The semicolon (;) can be thought of as a stronger version of the comma, introducing a more definite or prolonged pause between text elements. In many cases, semicolons are used in places similar to where commas appear, but the items requiring separation are longer or more complex, or the material in the second clause already contains commas: I thought about trying to convince her to join us; but the timing was bad, there wasn’t any space, and I don’t think she was really interested. ‘It was not easy to make out Little Dorrit’s face; she was so retiring, plied her needle in such removed corners, and started away so scared if encountered on the stairs.’ Charles Dickens, Little Dorrit (1857) A semicolon is typically used to separate two main clauses. Often it appears before a clause that begins with a contrastive conjunction, such as accordingly, also, anyhow, besides, consequently, furthermore, hence, henceforth, however, indeed, instead, likewise, meanwhile, moreover, nevertheless, otherwise, still and then: Many of the protesters were arrested; however, they were all released soon after questioning. Semicolons are also used to separate lengthy list items or those that feature internal punctuation (see commas, on page 57). Colons The colon (:) introduces an even more pronounced pause than the semicolon. It is used mainly for the following purposes: ⚪⚪ To introduce a list that needs to be set apart from what precedes it. In this case, care must be taken not to insert the 61 Grammar Guide colon between a verb and its object, between a preposition and its object (see chapter 1, page 26), or between a verb and its complement (see chapter 1, page 9). So, this is acceptable: The meeting will take up the following subjects: deadlines, holidays and unpaid leave. But this is not: The meeting will take up: deadlines, holidays and unpaid leave. ⚪⚪ To introduce a second clause that is an explanation, illustration, justification or restatement of the first. In this case, the second clause is usually, though not always, independent and could stand as a sentence. Starting it with a capital letter is optional, though it is important to be consistent within any particular text. For example, No one was willing to answer the most important question: Who was responsible? The takeover was not in the economic interests of the company: it was done mainly to oust the CEO. ‘No one seemed to even glance at him, and he realized what he had known before, only now it came to him differently: He was just an old man with a sloppy belly and not anyone worth noticing.’ Elizabeth Strout, Olive, Again (2019) ⚪⚪ If the second clause is a subordinate clause that requires a pause, it is often better to introduce it with a semicolon than with a colon. To set apart, that is, to follow, a speaker’s name in transcripts of conversation or dialogue: 62 Punctuation Reporter: But how did you know that the captors would be ready to negotiate? Officer Collins: I am not prepared to comment about that right now. ⚪⚪ To give quoted speech more emphasis than usual, or to indicate the anticipation of it: His response was direct, forceful and unambiguous: ‘Fire him immediately.’ Exclamation marks The exclamation mark, also called the exclamation point (!), is used after interjections, sentence fragments and sentences to show that they are accompanied by strong feeling or great surprise. For example: Drain the swamp! That’s outrageous! The exclamation mark is frequent in reported dialogue and has become more acceptable in journalism. It is advisable to use it sparingly. If writing is set out in a logical order and explained in sufficient detail, there are not likely to be surprises sufficient to call for an exclamation mark. Question marks The question mark (?) is used to end a sentence that is in the form of a question: Is this the director’s office? What time did you say you got off work? In a sentence that is written in conventional word order (that is, subject, verb, object), a question mark at the end indicates that, despite this, the speaker was in fact asking a question. The verbal equivalent is a rising tone of voice. Surely you don’t really think she stole it? 63 Grammar Guide Similarly, a question mark at the end of a sentence fragment or a single word indicates that it is a question: How long will it take to get there? Twenty minutes? An hour? A day? Apart from this, the question mark can be used in some contexts to indicate that material presented is uncertain, of questionable authenticity, or appears not to make sense. For example: St Bede (673?–735) Here, the question mark indicates that Bede’s birth year is not known for certain. A question mark in square brackets [?] following a quoted word or passage is usually intended to indicate that the material could not be read accurately, or does not appear to make sense. This is not the same as [sic] (see square brackets on page 69). Hyphens A hyphen (-) is used to separate the elements of a compound word. Dictionaries offer advice on whether a compound is spelt open (that is, with a space but no hyphen), hyphenated, or solid (that is, with no space and no hyphen, as in playwright). Since conventions vary, the principle to bear in mind is that consistency in hyphenation needs to be maintained within the same piece of writing. In some dictionaries, standard prefixes, for example anti-, bi- extra-, meta-, micro-, mid- multi-, non-, super-, trans-, un-, and standard suffixes, for example, -like, -fold, have their own entry with advice on how to hyphenate in various compounds. Note that whole numbers from twenty-one to ninety-nine are hyphenated. Sometimes a compound word may be hyphenated or open, depending on where it appears. The logic is essentially to avoid ambiguity and enable ease of understanding. For example, 64 Punctuation adjectives used need a hyphen: attributively (see chapter 1, page 19) may She gazed at the deep-blue sea. There aren’t any well-known paintings in this museum. But when the same adjective appears as a complement, it’s not hyphenated: The sea was a gorgeous deep blue. This painting is particularly well known. The same rule usually applies to compounds formed by combining a noun with a participle. These phrases are hyphenated when used attributively, but open when part of the predicate: She insists on wearing only designer-made clothes. The label says it is designer made. Dashes A dash ( – ) is an unofficial separator of text similar in function to parentheses (see page 69) or a colon (see page 61). Dashes predominantly occur in opening and closing pairs, but sometimes appear singly. (Note that in British English a spaced en rule (–) is usually used to represent a dash, whereas in American English a closed em dash (—) is often preferred.) Dashes can be used: ⚪⚪ To separate out a gloss (an explanation following an unfamiliar word or concept): One of the common diseases caused by protozoa – microscopic amoeba-like organism – is leishmaniasis. ⚪⚪ To separate out, in a more informal way, a comment that would otherwise be put in parentheses: His comment – and I’m quoting directly now – was ‘That should teach them about withholding information from us in the future.’ 65 Grammar Guide It is advisable not to use dashes too freely in formal writing, since it can give the impression the writer doesn’t understand the role of semicolons or colons. Quotation marks Quotation marks are used to mark: ●● ●● ●● ●● quoted speech or text titles of articles from magazines or chapters from books; in general, any title that specifies a section of a work that has a title of its own titles of short poems and songs: ‘Time is Hardcore’ words being treated in a special way, in order to ensure the reader understands that they’re special: Hund in German means ‘ dog’. For fiction writers, the main use is likely to be the first, that is, quoted speech, and often this means dialogue. It’s worth noting, however, that there is a literary tradition of overturning this convention. Cormac McCarthy, for example, prefers a less cluttered effect, and uses no punctuation in dialogue, starting a new line with each speaker. ‘She’s gone to San Antonio, said the boy. Don’t call her she. Mama. I know it. They drank their coffee.’ Cormac McCarthy, All the Pretty Horses (1992) In more standard works, British English uses single quota­ tion marks (‘Hooray!’) to mark quoted text or speech. (In American English, double quotation marks (“Hooray!”) are preferred.) 66 Punctuation If the quoted material ends with a full stop, question mark or exclamation mark, most style guides suggest the mark of punctuation should appear before the closing quotation mark. (Some style guides advise, however, that a closing full stop should come after the closing quote – as ever, consistency through the piece of writing as a whole is key.) If quoted material ends with a full stop but is followed by he said, she said, or words to that effect, the full stop should be converted to a comma: ‘Thank you,’ she said. Any final colon or semicolon should appear outside the quotation marks. Note that these are not part of the quoted material, but rather help structure the surrounding sentence: I loved his ‘ little jokes’; she was less keen. Double quotation marks (“Exactly.”) are typically used for quotations within quotations: ‘This charge of “ fraudulent conversion” will never stick,’ he remarked. (Note that in American English the convention is reversed, and a quotation within a quotation appears in single quotation marks.) Apostrophes The apostrophe (’) has two main uses in English, which rarely conflict with each other, to indicate a contraction and to show the possessive case. Contractions In contractions, that is, words shortened by leaving out some letters, the apostrophe shows the point at which letters have been omitted. Many contractions are so convenient, and so 67 Grammar Guide firmly established in English, that they are widely used in writing, and in both formal and informal speech. These include: ●● ●● ●● ●● contractions of auxiliary verbs (see chapter 1, page 16) with not: isn’t, can’t, wouldn’t, haven’t, etc. contractions of the personal pronouns (see chapter 1, page 23) with finite forms (that is, forms showing person, number and tense, see chapter 1, page 10) of be: he’s, they’re, I’m, etc. contractions let’s, that’s and there’s, for let us, that is and there is contractions of the personal pronouns with modal verbs (see chapter 1, page 17) shall or will: I’ll, he’ll, etc. In very formal writing, contractions tend to be avoided altogether. Their use is a question of judgement. There’s usually no need to avoid them entirely, especially if the spelt out forms make one’s writing sound stilted. There are a number of more informal contractions that are probably better avoided in formal writing, however, unless used in quotation. These include contractions of had or would that consist of only a terminal ’d: it’d, where’d, they’d, etc. Similarly, in formal contexts it is safest to avoid contractions of is and are with question words: why’re, how’s, when’s, etc. Possessive case When the apostrophe indicates the possessive case (see chapter 2, page 36) after nouns, it usually occurs with the letter s: Jerry’s book, Berlin’s nightlife, a dog’s life, the architects’ drawings. The difference between the architect’s drawings and the architects’ drawings is that one architect is designated in the first, and more than one in the second. 68 Punctuation Because the pronoun its is a possessive pronoun, there may be a temptation to add an apostrophe, but it would be incorrect. It’s with an apostrophe is not the possessive form of it; it’s is the contraction of it is. Other There are a few other contexts where use of an apostrophe is appropriate. One case is plurals of letters of the alphabet. For these, an apostrophe helps dispel potential ambiguity: Dot the i’s and cross the t’s. An apostrophe may also appear to indicate that letters have been omitted from the end of words in dialectal pronunciations: What are you doin’ sittin’ on the bed? The use of the apostrophe to indicate the plural of a word that is written in capital letters, or of a number, is best avoided. For example, it is safest to stick with: YMCAs, 3s, 8s, 1950s. Parentheses and brackets Both parentheses ( ) and square brackets [ ] are used to separate out text that’s optional. It is important to be sure that, first, the text separated out is not required for the meaning of the whole. Secondly, it should be possible to read what’s written without the parenthetical material (text separated out) and for it still to be grammatical. If these conditions are not met, then the parenthetical material should be reworded, or set apart by means of other marks of punctuation, for example, commas or dashes (see pages 57 and 65). Parentheses Common uses of parentheses include the following: ⚪⚪ To indicate a person’s birth and death dates: Benjamin Disraeli (1804–81) was prime minister twice. 69 Grammar Guide ⚪⚪ To provide an expansion of an abbreviation or the explanation of a technical term: The species is identified by markings on the worm’s parapodium (unjointed limb-like part). ⚪⚪ To introduce an abbreviation that will be used in the rest of the document, after the full form has been given: He was appointed director of the Crown Prosecution Service (CPS). ⚪⚪ To refer to a figure, table or other point in the same text: The results were ranked to give a gradation of risk over the area analysed (Table 4). ⚪⚪ To refer to an entry in a bibliography or list of references: Tasseled Cap transformation offers a way to optimise data viewing for vegetation studies (Erdas, 1998). In formal writing, parentheses are the best choice for presenting in context short pieces of information outside the flow of the text, and should be used in preference to dashes. They should be used sparingly, however. It is irritating for readers to have to wade through large amounts of parenthetical material, and it also presents a challenge for anyone wanting to read the text aloud. Square brackets Square brackets appear in a more limited set of standard circumstances: ⚪⚪ To mark off editorial comments in quoted material. A question mark in brackets [?] indicates that the material quoted is either illegible or unclear. The word [sic] in square brackets indicates that material is being quoted faithfully, 70 Punctuation even though it appears to be incorrect or misspelt, or is surprising: The letter was signed ‘Yours sincerly [sic], Anne Benson.’ ⚪⚪ To set apart material added to quoted material for clarification: ‘Those works [the late string quartets] are in my estimation the fullest expression of his creative genius.’ 71 72 chapter 4 Spelling My spelling is Wobbly. It’s good spelling but it Wobbles, and the letters get in the wrong places. A. A. Milne Winnie-the-Pooh (1926) English spelling is famed for its vagaries and eccentricities. Despite attempts to impose some standardisation from the late 16th century, it was not until Samuel Johnson’s dictionary of 1755 that a more comprehensive effort was made. Johnson was generally not concerned with reform, but simply in recording the most common spelling forms. In the early 19th century, Noah Webster similarly recorded American usage, this time with a view to reform. The illogicality of English spelling persists to this day, however. While it is not required that a writer be a perfect natural speller, it is useful to be familiar with resources that enable one to spell correctly, for the purposes of clarity and professionalism, that is, for creating texts that are free from error. This chapter arms writers with some tools to improve spelling. It offers examples of how different letters can represent the same sound in English, and also of how the same letters can represent different sounds. This provides a means of looking up in the dictionary words whose spelling one does not know. A trusted dictionary, of course, should be regarded as the indispensable and ultimate source of correct spelling. 73 Grammar Guide Dictionary look-up The main alternative spellings for consonant and vowel sounds are given below. If a word cannot be found in the dictionary at the first attempt, it may be worth referring to these tables to identify alternative possible spellings. To the same end, variant word endings and word beginnings, as well as a list of silent letters, are also included. Consonants Consonants are the letters of the alphabet apart from a, e, i, o, u, and sometimes y. Alternative spellings for consonants Sound Alternative spellings ch arch chin tch kitchen patch tu puncture statue j cajole jam g (before e, i, or y) gem logic edgy dg badge judge c crowd ck chicken gn gnaw campaign kn kneel acknowledge f defend fair k kitten n now done qu liquid quick ph dolphin phone cqu acquire gh rough kw awkward 74 qu opaque ch chaos technique Spelling Sound s send base sh shop cash w forward x taxi z daze marzipan Alternative spellings c (before e, i or y) centre acid juicy sc scent ascend ss passion procession ti patience cautious ks thanks xc except u (before vowel) persuade s (before vowel) please easy x anxiety xylophone ss professor confess cs physics There’s also a sound somewhere between z and sh for which there is no letter of the alphabet or standard combination. It’s usually spelt su, as in pleasure or casual, but can also be spelt si, as in vision or precision, or zu, as in seizure. Some dictionaries represent it by /zh/. Note that consonants in English can generally be doubled; the exceptions are h, j, k, q and x, which can be doubled only rarely, for example, dekko, anti-vaxxer. If a word cannot be found under a doubled consonant spelling, an obvious next recourse is to try it spelt with a single consonant, or vice versa. (See also discussion of vowel pronunciation in relation to doubled consonants at vowels immediately below.) Vowels The vowels in the alphabet are a, e, i, o, u, and sometimes y. All these vowels have a ‘long’ vowel sound and a ‘short’ vowel sound. The ‘long’ sound is generally the sound of the letter as it is pronounced in reciting the alphabet. The ‘short’ sounds are those in bad, bed, bid, body and bud. Exceptionally, the letter y, 75 Grammar Guide as a vowel, has the same long and short sounds as i, as in cycle and bicycle. A vowel on its own (between two consonants or at the beginning of a word) can have either the long or short sound. A vowel before a double consonant will have the short sound, as in latter (compare later) or hopping (compare hoping). Long vowels In general, a vowel followed by a single consonant and then an -e (with the e not pronounced, known as ‘silent e’) is a long vowel, for example, spade, these, bite, phone, prune, style. Alternative spellings for the long vowels a, e, i, o and u Sound Alternative spellings a make amiable ai complaint aim ay day ea great ie believe i friday ice igh light ea peace eat ie pie y cry oe hoe ou although u rude union ew grew few ow show own oo goose ou group e lethal even o ghost over ee sheep oa roast oats ue glue due 76 ei rein eight ei ceiling Spelling Other vowels Alternative spellings for the short vowels e, i and u Sound Alternative spellings e bed elephant ea ready u hundred under o dozen i him ink y gym oo blood ou touch Alternative spellings for non-alphabetic vowels Sound Alternative spellings aw straw awful al alter fall or fork order au fraud author ar harm artist al calm almond a father oir boudoir memoir ur cure eur euro air pair ier fierce oor poor ow cow shower ar care various eer beer eerie ou round sour ear eardrum ere severe 77 oo door ore shore ough bought ought Grammar Guide Sound oy toy u push ur curve urgent Alternative spellings oi voice oil oo foot er merge ir birth ear pearl earn The schwa: Note that the vowel sound uh is so short it’s almost not pronounced at all. It can be written as e, a, i, o or u, as in barrel, miserable, referee, about, turban, definite, responsible, common, pursue and circus. In dictionaries, this sound is indicated by a symbol called schwa, and written as an upside down lowercase e: /ə/. It’s the vowel sound of most unaccented syllables in English. Word endings, word beginnings and silent letters Knowledge of variant word endings and beginnings and awareness of possible silent letters are also helpful when using a dictionary. Word endings Sounds like el er i idj/ij Possible spellings le cattle al dental y happy ie calorie er driver age manage or actor re lustre ege privilege idge cartridge 78 ey money ar eur burglar chauffeur Spelling Sounds like ius jus shul shun shus sul ul us Possible spellings ious delirious eous hideous tial substantial cial commercial geous courageous tion position tious cautious stle castle el barrel ous jealous gious prestigious sion mansion cion coercion sle tussle sel mussel cious precious le cattle scious conscious al dental Note also that: ●● ●● endings sounding like -ent may also be spelt -ant endings sounding like -ence may also be spelt -ance. Word beginnings This list gives possible alternative spellings for some common word beginnings: acs try acc: air try aer: ca try cha: ce try che: clor try chlor: co try cho: cr try chr: ecs try ex: ef try af: accelerate aerial character chemical chlorine cholera Christmas exercise affection, afraid 79 Grammar Guide egs try exh: fer try fur: fol try fal: for try four: gi try gui: hi try high: ho try who: meca try mecha: na try kna: ne try kne: ni try kni: no try kno: nur try neur: nut try neut: ocs try ox: pel try pol: per try pur: pre try pro: quo try qua: ra try wra: re try wre: ri try wri: ro try wro: se try sce: si try sci: sic try psych: sosh try soci: spesh try speci: squo try squa: uf try euph: uph try euph: ur try eur: vial try viol: wa try wha: we try whe: exhaust furry false fourteen guilt higher whole mechanic knack, knave knee, knell knife, knit knob, know neurosis neutral oxygen polite purple, pursue provide qualification, quarrel wrap wreck wriggle, write wrong, wrote scene, scent science, scissors psychology social special, species squabble, squad euphoria euphoria Europe violin whack, whale when, wheel 80 Spelling wi try whi: wo try wa: wor try wa: wur try wor: which, while wander, wash water work Silent letters Sound Often silent in: d handkerchief, supposed to g design, length, recognise e h n r u different, interest, several diarrhoea, eighth, exhibition, rhythm condemn, environment, government advertise, February, governor, surprise guarantee, guard, Portuguese These consonants and vowels may not be pronounced, or not pronounced by some speakers, so can easily be forgotten when spelling the words shown and similar ones. Spelling rules Why does English have so many words that are difficult to spell? The main reason is that the twenty-six letters of the alphabet have to represent forty-four different sounds. And confusingly, as we have seen, the same combinations of letters can be used to represent quite distinct sounds. Other parts of this book deal with some aspects of this phenomenon that have a more obvious bearing on meaning and the creative aspects of self-expression, for example, commonly confused and misused words (see chapters 8 and 9), word families (see chapter 10) and the delights of the spelling idiosyncrasies of proper nouns. 81 Grammar Guide Meanwhile, this chapter focuses on the more technical aspects of spelling. Fortunately, in this area, there are at least a few rules that hold good. Noun and verb ending -s or -es The regular plural ending for nouns and the third person present singular (see person, number and tense, chapter 1, page 10) ending for verbs is -s. However, words already ending in -ch, -s, -sh, -x and -z take -es for plural nouns or third person singular verbs: beech [noun] batch [noun, verb] boss [noun, verb] bush [noun] fox [noun, verb] waltz [noun, verb] Æ Æ Æ Æ Æ Æ beeches batches bosses bushes foxes waltzes Words already ending in -f, or -fe, sometimes take -s and sometimes change to -ves: scarf Æ scarves Exceptionally, while the plural of the noun gas is gases, the third person singular of the verb gas is gasses. Another anomaly is that the plurals of hero, potato and tomato end in -es rather than -s. Noun, verb and adjective ending -y to -ie- Verbs that end in -y keep the -y before the present participle ending (-ing), but this changes to -ie- for third person present singular (-ies) and the past tense (-ied) forms (see principal parts, chapter 1, page 7). Meanwhile, nouns that end in -y also experience a change to -ie- in the plural (-ies); and adjectives ending in -y similarly undergo a change to -ie- in the comparative (-er) and superlative 82 Spelling (-est) forms (see comparatives and superlatives, chapter 1, page 20): worry [noun, verb] try [noun, verb] happy [adjective] Æ Æ Æ worries, worried, worrying tries, tried, trying happier, happiest Exceptionally, words that have a vowel before the -y ending, retain the -y before -s, -ed, -er -est: play [noun, verb] key [noun, verb] grey [adjective] Æ Æ Æ plays, played, playing, player keys, keyed, keying, keyer greyer, greyest Names of people and places that end in -y similarly keep the -y and just add -s in the plural, for example, Mr and Mrs Perry Æ the Perrys. Verb ending -ie to -y- Verbs ending -ie, such as lie, tie and die, replace the -ie with -y- in the present participle: lie Æ lies, lied, lying die Æ dies, died, dying Note the difference between die above and dye Æ dyes, dyed, dyeing. Verb and adjective ending dropping -e Verbs that end in a consonant and final -e (‘silent e’) generally lose the -e before -ing; adjectives of a similar pattern do the same before -ise (or -ize): hike [verb] private [adjective] Æ Æ hikes, hiked, hiking, hiker privatise Exceptions are the present participles of singe (= burn), which is singeing (to avoid confusion with singing), and age, which can 83 Grammar Guide be spelt ageing or aging. Note also swingeing (= severe, extreme), spelt with an -e- to avoid confusion with swinging. Verb ending -c adding -k Verbs ending in -c add -k before simple past and past participle -ed and present participle -ing: panic Æ panics, panicked, panicking An exception is arc, for which the corresponding forms are arced and arcing. Verb and adjective ending doubling the consonant Single-syllable words that end in a single vowel and a consonant usually double the consonant before -ed, -ing, -er and -est: pot [verb] fit [adjective] Æ Æ pots, potted, potting, potter fitter, fittest Verbs of more than one syllable that end in a single vowel and a consonant and are stressed on the last syllable usually double the consonant before -ed and -ing: regret omit Æ Æ regrets, regretted, regretting omits, omitted, omitting Compare these examples with listen and happen, which are stressed on the first syllable: listen happen Æ Æ listens, listened, listening happens, happened, happening In British English, there are some exceptions, however. Note the doubling pattern for benefit and cancel, both stressed on the first syllable: benefit Æ benefits, benefitted, benefitting cancel Æ cancels, cancelled, cancelling 84 Spelling (For these examples, American English follows the rules more closely; so, in American English, it is benefited and benefiting, while canceled and canceling are preferred.) Internal -ie- and -ei- The well-known rule ‘i before e except after c’ applies when the vowel rhymes with sheep: shriek, niece [i before e] ceiling, deceit […except after c] Exceptions include caffeine, protein, seize, weird, and the names Sheila and Keith. Verb ending -ise (or -ize) In British English verbs like characterise are often spelt with the -ise ending, but some style guides prefer -ize. (In American English, in contrast, the standard is -ize.) No matter the general style adopted, there are a few exceptions that are always spelt -ise: advertise advise apprise arise chastise circumcise comprise compromise despise devise enfranchise excise exercise improvise merchandise prise (open) revise rise supervise surmise surprise televise Adjective ending -able and -ible The ending -able is attached to whole words (often minus any final ‘silent e’ in the case of verbs); the ending -ible is usually not. 85 Grammar Guide Some words ending in -able: affordable available comfortable debatable doable enjoyable laughable lovable manageable washable Some words ending in -ible: audible feasible incompatible incredible indestructible irresistible permissible plausible responsible susceptible Exceptions include liable and pliable. 86 chapter 5 Breaking the rules I suddenly discovered the delight of rebellion. Jack Kerouac (1941) We have explored a number of rules of grammar required to write English correctly. But there are also various so-called rules that can be safely – or creatively – ignored. Such ‘rules’ tend to relate to putting words together in ways that some grammarians in the past used to object to strongly. Today, they’re regarded as less vital to clear or correct communication in English, so writers are at liberty use their discretion. The degree to which writers break the rules depends, of course, on artistic intent. Meanwhile, it helps to bear in mind that some understanding of the rule being broken is key to stylistic effectiveness. Rule 1: Do not use and or or to start a sentence. The conjunctions (see chapter 1, page 26) and and or are essentially joining words. Therefore, it is relatively unusual for them to appear at the start of a sentence. On occasion, however, this can be powerful stylistically, calling attention to what follows: ‘You can’t get away with this,’ he threatened. And we knew he meant it. I’ll give you ten minutes to get out of here. Or else. 87 Grammar Guide We could ask him to stay here while we go out to dinner and take in a film. Or is that too selfish? Obviously, excessive use of and and or at the start of sentences becomes less effective. So, it is important to be judicious in breaking this rule. Rule 2: Do not use but to start a sentence. Some people object to using but at the beginning of a sentence, for the same reasons that they object to and or or: they regard it as a conjunction, or joining word, that needs to follow and precede other words. There are no real grounds for this in English grammar and usage, however. So, while it is acceptable to start a sentence with but, it’s best not to overuse the construction. Using but at the start of a sentence emphasises that what comes next takes away some of the force of the content of the preceding sentence: According to the old saying, there are lies, damned lies and statistics. But statistics, as we know, are generally more useful than old sayings. Rule 3: Never split an infinitive. The ‘rule’ of not splitting the infinitive has gained some common currency. It means that another word should not be placed between to and the verb in the infinitive (the construction in to do, to make, to sing, etc., see chapter 1, page 7). There is no basis in grammar for this, however. More broadly, it’s a feature of English that adverbs and other words and phrases can separate the elements that make up a verb. For example, in the sentence I have never been to Mexico, the word never separates have and been, which together make up the verb. 88 Breaking the rules This is a question of style, not of grammar. If splitting an infinitive makes for awkwardness, then it’s better not to split it. If, on the other hand, the split supports one’s intended meaning, there can be no justifiable objection to it. Here are some examples: Prices are likely to more than double. This is a simple case, because there is nowhere else in the sentence for the phrase more than to go. Rephrasing as Prices are more than likely to double, for example, completely changes the meaning. More than is firmly attached to the verb double in this context and must precede it, so there is no choice but to split the infinitive. This gave them the chance to flatly refuse to have any more involvement in the project. ‘To boldly go where no man has gone before.’ Gene Roddenberry et al., Star Trek (1966) Flatly is an adverb that sounds awkward if it’s used after the verb in any context. For example, They flatly forbade him to go is more natural than They forbade him flatly to go. This is just as true for flatly and the infinitive. They were plotting to illegally copy the files. ‘She wants to honestly and legally marry that man she has already married virtually.’ Thomas Hardy, Jude the Obscure (1895) The first example is less straightforward, because it would be perfectly good English (better English, some might argue) to say They were plotting to copy the files illegally. Let us consider what is being done illegally. Is it illegal to plot? No, we can assume that the potential illegal act involved is the copying of 89 Grammar Guide the files. To make that clear, the adverb illegally is better placed as close to the verb it supports as possible. And in this sentence that entails splitting the infinitive to copy. Nonetheless, it’s worth remembering that the split infinitive is a controversial topic. Where there is nothing to gain by splitting an infinitive, it may be better to avoid it, especially in formal writing. Rule 4: Do not end a sentence with a preposition. (see chapter 1, page 26) are used mostly in prepositional phrases, where they occur as the first word. Perhaps as a result of this, the idea has arisen that it’s grammatically incorrect to end a sentence with a preposition. This is not strictly true, however, and trying to avoid putting a preposition at the end of a sentence may sometimes result in awkwardness. Consider the following. prepositions 1. Some questions and clauses opening with wh-, for example, what, which, who, typically have the preposition at the end, as in What on earth were they thinking of? Statements based on wh- questions also very often are best expressed with a preposition at the end: The students were asked to give their names and say where they came from. 2. Some infinitive clauses also have prepositions at their ends, as in Make sure you have something to talk about. 3. Finally, several informal or slang expressions end in prepositions: That dress is to die for! She took one look at their faces and knew what they’d been up to. 90 Breaking the rules Rule 5: Never dangle a participle. In general, it is important to avoid dangling participial phrases – that is, those not clearly associated with a subject. For example: Lying in the sun, it was hard to imagine the winter back home. [Who was lying in the sun?] Such mismatches can be corrected by changing the wording: Lying in the sun, he found it hard to imagine the winter back home. However, there are a number of dangling participles (see chapter 1, page 8) that are well established and idiomatic, for example, given, granted, and speaking. These cause no problem for readers or listeners because they understand that no particular association with a subject is required: Given that dividends depend on earnings, what determines earnings? Other similar words, including considering and regarding, are so well established in such contexts that they are generally thought of as independent of the verbs from which they sprang and are now said to be prepositions. Rule 6: Always write in complete sentences. Of all the ‘rules’ of writing, the decision not to write in complete sentences (see chapter 2, page 52) should be used cautiously and possibly sparingly, but there are times when it works. In literary fiction, as we have touched on (see chapter 3, page 55), it has sometimes been a mark of ground-breaking creativity. The rule can be broken in an huge variety of ways, ranging from sentences so long they cease to be sentences, to sentence fragments. It is acceptable to write sentence fragments too 91 Grammar Guide in journalistic feature writing, and informal contexts such as letters and e-mails, so long as the meaning is clear. As ever, however, in formal writing, the traditional approach applies; it is best to write only in complete sentences. ‘…running his little country store now for his bread and meat, haggling tediously over nickels and dimes with rapacious and poverty-stricken whites and negroes, who at one time could have galloped for ten miles in any direction without crossing his own boundary, using out of his meagre stock the cheap ribbons and beads and the stale violently-colored candy with which even an old man can seduce a fifteen-year-old country girl, to ruin the granddaughter of his partner, this Jones-this gangling malaria-ridden white man whom he had given permission fourteen years ago to squat in the abandoned fishing camp with the year-old grandchild-Jones…’ William Faulkner, Absalom, Absalom! (1936) ‘I will soon be thirty-one years old. Perhaps. If my crumbling, over-used body permits. But I have no hope of saving my life, nor can I count on having even a thousand nights and one night.’ Salman Rushdie, Midnight’s Children (1981) 92 chapter 6 Glossary of grammatical terms This glossary defines terms relating to grammar and usage outlined in the Grammar section (Part I) of this book. abbreviationShort form of a word or group of words. Abbreviations include shortenings, contractions, initialisms and acronyms. abstract nounNoun representing something nonmaterial, for example nonsense, truth or similarity. acronymAbbreviation formed from parts of other words, for example, COVID19 (for coronavirus disease 2019), or an initialism that has become a word in its own right, for example, UNESCO (for United Nations Educational, Scientific and Cultural Organization). active voiceFeature of a verb when the subject of the sentence performs the action of the verb, as in the sentence The storm destroyed the house. (The other category of voice in English is the passive voice.) 93 Grammar Guide adjectiveWord that describes a noun or pronoun, for example, happy. adverbWord that modifies a verb, an adjective, another adverb or a clause, for example, happily. Adverbs usually characterise relationships between words and give such information as when, where, why and how. affixElement that is bound to a word and changes its meaning, or produces an inflection or derivative of the word. It may be a prefix, such as non- , or a suffix, such as -ism. agreementCorrespondence of form between words, in English predominantly between subject noun or pronoun and verb, but also between subject and subsequent pronouns, to show that the words are connected with each other. Agreement may be required to show person, number, gender or occasionally case. antecedentWord, phrase or clause that a subsequent word refers back to. In the sentence I’ll give this to Mary when I see her, Mary is the antecedent of her. apostropheMark of punctuation (’) showing that letters have been omitted (as in it’s late), or preceding or following the s that indicates the possessive for nouns (as in the dog’s bowl). 94 Glossary of grammatical terms appositionRelationship between two expressions, usually consecutive, that refer to the same person or thing. Words in apposition are nouns or noun phrases, for example, my husband, the football fan. articleKind of determiner that shows whether a general or a specific example of something is referred to. The indefinite article in English is a or an; the definite article is the. aspectGrammatical feature of verbs that indicates, for example, whether an action is finished or ongoing. In English, there are two aspects, the perfect and the continuous. asteriskMark (*) used to signal the presence of a footnote, or of characters not included in the text. In emails it marks emphasis. attributiveAn attributive adjective is one that immediately precedes a noun, for example painful in a painful memory. auxiliary verbVerb such as be, have or do that is used with other verbs to indicate person, number, mood, tense or aspect, as in I have met him or Do you know each other? (Modal auxiliaries are a special kind of auxiliary verb.) bracketOne of a pair of marks, [ ], that are used to set apart text requiring particular treatment. 95 Grammar Guide caseForm of an adjective, noun or pronoun in some languages that shows its relation to other words in the sentence, for example whether it is the subject (nominative case). In English, only personal pronouns show inflection for case. clauseGroup of consecutive words containing a subject and a predicate, forming part of a sentence or constituting a sentence itself. closed compoundCompound word that is written with no intervening space between the elements, such as highland. collective nounNoun that is singular in form but that denotes a group of people or things, such as committee or flock. colonMark of punctuation (:) used, for example, before a list of items. commaMark of punctuation (,) used to indicate a pause. comparativeThe form of an adjective or adverb used in comparisons, ending in -er or formed by using more, for example fuller, more friendly. complementWord or phrase coming after the verb in a sentence that completes the verb and describes the subject of the sentence. In, She was a good doctor, the complement is a good doctor. 96 Glossary of grammatical terms common nounNoun that denotes any or all of a class of things, such as dog or magazine. It is usually spelt in lowercase letters, unlike a proper noun, and can be preceded by an article. complex sentenceSentence that contains at least one subordinate clause. compound sentenceSentence consisting of two or more clauses that can stand as independent clauses. compound wordWord made up of two or more single words (pruning shears, playwright, double-decker). concordOld-fashioned term for agreement. concrete nounNoun representing something that can be touched or seen, such as window, flower or desk. conditional clauseSubordinate clause, usually beginning with if (or unless), that expresses a condition that has to happen (or not happen) for the main part of the sentence to be true. For example, Let’s go out, unless he calls in the next ten minutes. conjugationThe different forms, or inflections, of a verb, such as sings, singing, sang and sung. conjunctionWord such as and or because that links words, phrases or clauses and shows the relationship between them. 97 Grammar Guide continuousThe form of a verb denoting continuous or uninterrupted action, formed by be and the present participle: He was crying, He’s really enjoying it! Also called progressive. contractionWord or pair of words such as she’d that is shortened by leaving out certain letters and replacing them with an apostrophe. Or, an abbreviation, for example, Dr for Doctor or St for Street or Saint. copulaLinking verb, such as be or seem. A copula is an intransitive verb that can be followed by a complement, a noun or adjective that relates back to the subject, as, for example, in I am Fred, or I feel sick. count nounNoun that refers to a countable thing and is typically used in both the singular and plural, for example, one shirt, two shirts, or one mouse, two mice. dangling participleParticiple or participial phrase that is placed so as to modify the wrong noun, or no noun at all, as in the incorrect Driving down the street, the house came into view. dashInformal mark of punctuation (– or —), often occurring as one of a pair, that sets apart parenthetical remarks. declensionThe inflection of nouns, pronouns and adjectives. The related verb is 98 Glossary of grammatical terms decline: Pronouns decline in English, but adjectives don’t. demonstrative pronoun Pronoun that specifies the thing it refers to, such as this, that, these and those. dependent clauseAnother name for subordinate clause. derivativeWord that is derived from another word, by inflection or by the addition of affixes that change the meaning. For example, quickly is a derivative of quick. determinerWord that precedes a noun or adjective to limit or determine its reference. For example, this, each, some or either. direct objectNoun or pronoun in the predicate of a sentence that receives the action of the verb, such as the ball in She hit the ball. ditransitive verbVerb, such as give or take, that can take both a direct and an indirect object. double negativeThe incorrect use of two negating words in a clause or sentence, such as He doesn’t have no money. ellipsis1. A sequence of three full points that is used in writing to show that words have been left out or text has been left unfinished. 2. The omission of words from a phrase, clause or sentence because they are understood by the reader from the context. 99 Grammar Guide exclamation markMark of punctuation (!) that signals an exclamation. finiteVerb form that signifies a tense, person and number, for example, I ate the apple, or They are playing on the swings. Finite is used as both a noun and an adjective. (Compare infinitive.) full sentenceIndependent sentence that has a subject and a predicate. full stopMark of punctuation (.) used to end a written sentence and for various other purposes. functional shiftChange in a word from one grammatical function to another, without a change in the spelling. As when the noun wallpaper is used as a verb, for example, to wallpaper. future perfectVerb tense used to indicate completion in the future of something that is currently not complete, for example, By this time tomorrow he will have left. genderCategory of inflection that affects only pronouns in English, dividing them into masculine (he, his, him), feminine (she, her, hers) and neuter (it, its). gerundNoun ending in -ing that is formed from a verb, for example, smoking in the phrase non-smoking carriage. governmentThe grammatical principle by which the form of one word determines 100 Glossary of grammatical terms what form another syntactically connected word must take. The related verb is govern. gradable adjectiveAdjective denoting a quality that can be present in varying degrees, and that regularly appears in the comparative and superlative form. homonymAny of two or more words with identical pronunciation but different meanings, such as bare and bear. hyphenMark (-) that separates syllables of certain compound words, or of words that break over a line. hyphenated compoundCompound word that is written with a hyphen, such as higgledy-piggledy. imperativeThe mood of verbs used in commands and requests. In English verbs the form of the imperative is identical to the infinitive. impersonal verbVerb that does not have a personal subject, such as rain in it is raining. indefinite pronounPronoun that does not specify who or what it refers to, such as some or any. independent clauseAnother name for main clause. indicativeThe mood of verbs used to make ordinary statements and questions. indirect objectNoun or pronoun in a predicate that is the usually the recipient or the beneficiary of the action of the verb, such as Mum in We gave Mum a bouquet for her birthday. 101 Grammar Guide infinitiveThe basic, uninflected form of a verb that has no markers as to number, tense or person. Many infinitive constructions in English are accompanied by modal verbs, as in You must go, or by the preposition to, as in I’m dying to see you. (Compare finite.) inflection1. Form of a word that is derived, usually in a predictable way, from the main form, such as the past tense of a verb, the comparative of an adjective, or the plural of a noun. 2. System by which words in a language make these systematic changes. initialismAbbreviation formed by putting together the first letter of a group of words, for example, BBC for British Broadcasting Corporation or CIA for Central Intelligence Agency. intensifying adverbOlder term for sub-modifier. interjectionAny of a class of words or phrases that express emotion and that are usually used in isolation, such as um, Wow! or Cool! interrogative pronounPronoun used to ask a question, such as who or what. intransitive verbVerb that cannot take a direct object, such as abound, cling, hanker and skateboard. irregular verbIn English, a verb in which the past tense and/or past participle cannot be predicted from the form 102 Glossary of grammatical terms of the infinitive and must be learnt. Examples include bite, eat, see and wind. Also called a strong verb. limiting adjectiveDeterminer that limits the noun it modifies, such as certain or this. linking verbAnother name for copula, for example, be or seem. main clauseClause in a sentence containing a finite verb form and capable of standing alone as a complete sentence. Also known as an independent clause. mass nounNoun that is typically used in the singular and without an indefinite article, denoting something that is homogenous or abstract, such as meat, sand or happiness. modal auxiliaryVerb such as can, could, may, might, shall, should, will, would and must that is used with an infinitive or other verb forms to express modality or mood. A kind of auxiliary verb. modifier Adjective or adverb. moodEssentially, there are three moods associated with English verbs: the indicative (expressing fact), the imperative (expressing command) and the subjunctive (expressing possibility). negationThe conversion of a positive statement to its opposite, using no, not, never, none, nor, nothing, nobody or never. 103 Grammar Guide nominativeThe case of nouns, pronouns and adjectives that are the subject of a sentence. In English only the personal pronouns show variable nominative forms, for example, I, he, she, we. Also called subjective. non-gradable adjectiveAdjective denoting a quality that does not exist in degrees, for example, mortal, failing and unique. non-restrictive clauseSubordinate clause, typically beginning with who or which and enclosed by commas, that is not essential for establishing the identity of its antecedent. nounWord that stands for a person, place or thing. noun phraseUnit in a clause that functions as a noun, consisting of a noun or pronoun and all of its modifiers. numberCategory of inflection for nouns, pronouns and verbs that distinguishes whether one or more than one thing is referred to. objectiveThe case of direct objects, indirect objects, and objects of prepositions. open compoundCompound word that is written with a space between the elements, such as fast lane. parenthesis1. Word or phrase functioning as an additional remark within text, which remains grammatically complete without it. 2. In the 104 Glossary of grammatical terms plural, parentheses, a pair of marks, ( ), used to enclose such material. part of speechAny of the usually eight functional categories into which English words are traditionally divided. participleNon-finite form of a verb that is used to form compound tenses and also functions as other parts of speech. English verbs have a present participle (ending in -ing), and a past participle (ending in -ed, except in irregular verbs). passive voiceFeature of a verb when the subject of the sentence is the recipient of the action of the verb, as in the sentence, The house was destroyed by the storm. (The other category of voice in English is the active voice.) past perfectTense formed by adding the past participle to had, used to distinguish the earlier of two actions in the past, when the later one is expressed in the past tense or implied by context. perfectTense or aspect of English verbs denoting an action or condition existing in more than one point in time, formed by combining a finite form of have with the past participle of a verb, for example, has passed in She has passed the examination. 105 Grammar Guide personCategory of inflection affecting personal pronouns in English, and distinguishing between the speaker (first person), the person spoken to (second person) and a person or thing spoken of (third person). English verbs mostly have a unique form for the third person singular present. personal pronounPronoun that stands in place of the speaker, the person spoken to, or the person spoken about. The English personal pronouns are I, we, you, he, she, it and they. phrasal verbVerb consisting of an inflecting root and one or more adverbs or prepositions that functions as a semantic unit, for example, break down, look forward. phraseSequence of two or more words acting together that does not contain both a subject and a predicate, so is not a clause. pluralThe division of grammatical number that denotes two or more things, as in, for example, apples, mice, we. possessiveGrammatical case showing possession and indicated by inflection in English pronouns, and by the addition of ’s or ’ to the end of nouns. predicateGrammatical term meaning the part of a sentence that includes the verb and the other elements that 106 Glossary of grammatical terms modify the verb, for example sat on the sofa in Sophia and her friends sat on the sofa. predicate adjectiveAdjective that is used in the predicate of a sentence, and not before a noun (attributively), such as awake in Suddenly she was wide awake. prefixLetter or group of letters added to the beginning of a word, such as anti- in anti-nuclear. prepositionWord that introduces a prepositional phrase or completes a phrasal verb, for example, to, for or with. Prepositions express relationships between words. present perfectTense formed by adding the past participle to a present form of have, expressing action begun in the past and still continuing in, or having an influence on, the present. An example is, have done in You have done very well. principal partsSet of forms from which all inflections are derived. In English the principal parts of verbs are the infinitive, the simple past tense and the past participle. progressiveAnother name for continuous. pronounWord that takes the place of a noun. proper adjectiveAdjective derived from a proper noun, such as Japanese from Japan. 107 Grammar Guide proper nounNoun that refers to a particular person, place or thing, for example, John, London, the Louvre. It generally begins with a capital letter and is not usually preceded by an indefinite article. punctuationMarks added to written language in accordance with rules that help to clarify its meaning. Examples include the full stop, the comma, the colon, the semicolon and the apostrophe. question markMark of punctuation (?) that ends a question, or indicates that the writer is making a guess. quotation marksMarks (‘ ’) placed around words to indicate that they are a quotation, or that they are being considered in a special way. redundancyThe unnecessary repetition of words with the same meaning. The related adjective is redundant. reflexive pronounPronoun with the same referent as the subject of the sentence or of clause in which it stands. The English reflexive pronouns have the suffix -self or -selves. reflexive verbVerb that can take a reflexive pronoun as a direct or indirect object, such as enjoy in He really enjoyed himself. regular verbIn English, a verb in which the past tense and the past participle 108 Glossary of grammatical terms are identical with each other and formed by adding -d or -ed to the infinitive, while sometimes also making other predictable changes. Examples include bandy, mow, strut and type. relative clauseSubordinate (or dependent) clause that is usually introduced by a relative pronoun, for example, who delivers the paper in The boy who delivers the paper lives in the next street. relative pronounAny of a large group of pronouns that link relative clauses to their antecedent. The commonest ones are that, who and which. reported speechThe use of verbs such as say and tell to indicate that the writer is quoting what someone else said. restrictive clauseSubordinate clause, typically beginning with that or who, that identifies or limits its antecedent. An example is that I chose in The dress that I chose was full length. semicolonMark of punctuation (;) that indicates a pause and is intermediate in function between a comma and a colon. sentenceUnit of language consisting of a subject and a predicate, either of which may be present or implied, that expresses an independent statement, wish, question, command, exclamation or request. 109 Grammar Guide sentence adverbAdverb, typically placed at the beginning of a sentence, that modifies or expresses some condition about the entire sentence, for example, Incredibly in Incredibly, she believed everything he said. shortening Abbreviation usually consisting of just the first few letters of the word, for example, etc. for et cetera, or deli for delicatessen. simple past1. The second principal part of English verbs, most often formed by adding -d or -ed to the infinitive. 2. The finite tense that uses this form. simple sentenceSentence with a single main clause and no subordinate clauses. singularThe division of grammatical number that denotes a single thing, as in, for example, apple, mouse, I, jumps. split infinitiveInfinitive construction in which an adverb intervenes between to and the infinitive, as in He claims to actually know the king personally. stative verbVerb that expresses a condition or state rather than an action, such as like or believe. subjectIn grammar, the thing that a sentence is about. It can be represented by a noun, a noun phrase, a pronoun, or something that is nominalised by the use of punctuation. An example is 110 Glossary of grammatical terms The floating restaurant in The floating restaurant has re-opened. subjectiveAnother name for nominative. subjunctiveThis mood is used for special statements that may express something imagined, wished for, or possible. An example is were in If he were to visit, would you go to the seaside? sub-modifierAdverb that indicates the intensity, degree or extent of an adjective or another adverb, for example, surprisingly in She drove surprisingly fast. subordinate clauseClause that does not constitute an independent sentence and modifies the main clause or some part of it. substantiveTechnical term for noun. suffixLetter or group of letters added to the end of a word, such as -less in waterless. superlativeThe form of an adjective or adverb used to indicate the highest or most extreme degree, ending in -est or formed by using most in front of the modifier: fullest, most particular. syntaxThe set of rules governing the order of words in phrases, clauses and sentences. The related adjective is syntactic. tenseThe feature of a verb that indicates, in a general way, when. The simplest 111 Grammar Guide division of English verb tenses is into past, present and future. transitive verbVerb that can take a direct object, such as bash, give, peel and whip. verbWord that describes an action or characterises a state or condition. voiceSet of categories for which verbs inflect, used to indicate the relation of the subject to the action of the verb. English has an active and a passive voice. word classAnother term for part of speech. 112 part ii Vocabulary Builder 114 chapter 7 Choosing the right word Si je mets bleues après pierres, c’est que bleues est le mot juste, croyez-moi. Gustave Flaubert letter to Charles-Augustin Sainte-Beuve (1862) The first part of this book focused on some of the more technical aspects of grammar and usage in English. In this second part, we move away from such analytic considerations and turn to words themselves – that is, words as used creatively by writers for the purposes of expression. This means thinking about the meaning and resonance of words, and the nuances that shape the writer’s intended effect. English has one of the richest and largest vocabularies of the world’s languages, owing partly to its historically having come under many linguistic influences – whether Germanic, French or Latin, or broader global ones. It may be true that no two English words have precisely the same meaning. Certainly, many words overlap in sense, and convey notions that are similar but with marginally different emphases. Such words are known as synonyms and can be found in a thesaurus, a tool often recommended for exploring words and finding inspiration for, or more likely reminding oneself of, alternative modes of expression. In this chapter, we list sets of words that have shared meanings but are used slightly differently. The sets are divided into three main word classes – adjectives, nouns and verbs. Writers may find these interesting to browse in pursuit of fresh 115 Grammar Guide and varied language for their purposes – ideally, the below might even trigger some happy instances of lighting upon exactly the right word, or mot juste. Choosing the right adjective More than any other type of word, adjectives (see chapter 1, page 19) enable the description of fine shades of meaning. They are not the largest class of words in English, but they probably feature the most variants, so having a wide selection of them at one’s fingertips is vital to being able to fine-tune speech and writing. Below are sets of adjectives whose meanings closely overlap. Each adjective is briefly defined, and then examples are given of how it is used. Most adjectives have a corresponding adverbial form ending in -ly. If so, the adverb usually has the same nuances of meaning as its related adjective. For example, quiet Æ quietly; stealthy Æ stealthily; stoic Æ stoically. Adjectives also often have a corresponding noun, again with the same shades of meaning, ending perhaps with -ness, -ity or -cy. For example, naked Æ nakedness; efficient Æ efficiency; fragile Æ fragility. aware, cognizant, conscious, mindful, sensible having knowledge of the existence of something aware knowing something either intellectually or intuitively • I wasn’t aware of any problem. • The leadership is well aware of the current situation. • I wasn’t aware that I was sitting in the wrong seat until I saw people nudge each other. cognizant (formal) having knowledge of something • make people cognizant of the fact that the committee’s decision will be final conscious fully appreciating the importance of something • conscious of the need to make progress • He was conscious that 116 Choosing the right word his predecessor had not lasted long in the job, so he was acting cautiously. mindful actively attentive, or deliberately keeping something in mind • mindful of the need to proceed cautiously • mindful that the younger children would have to be watched carefully sensible (formal) keenly aware of something • We are very sensible of the fairness of your offer. bad, criminal, delinquent, mischievous, naughty guilty of wrongdoing or disruptive behaviour bad term that may apply to a whole range of wrongdoing, from the most trivial to the most immoral or evil, though usually reserved for the less serious • He’s a nice little boy, not so bad, really. • His lie did not seem very bad at the time, but it later came back to haunt him. criminal punishable as a crime under the law • Their driving was at best incompetent and at worst downright criminal. • criminal behaviour delinquent antisocial or unlawful, or (formal) neglectful of a duty, commitment or responsibility • Most of the delinquent youngsters with whom I worked did not need to be involved in antisocial activity. • We had two types of delinquent taxpayers: those who could not pay on time owing to hardship, and those who refused to pay in response to poor services. mischievous playfully naughty or troublesome, or (formal) causing or meant to cause little serious trouble, damage or hurt • She was just normal – active, sports-loving, fun-loving, a little mischievous. naughty mildly badly behaved or disobedient, or (humorous) mildly indecent or sinful • my naughty little cousin splashed in the bath • a set of naughty postcards 117 Grammar Guide careful, conscientious, scrupulous, thorough, meticulous, painstaking, assiduous, punctilious, finicky, fussy exercising care and attention in doing something careful wide-ranging term, suggesting attention to detail and implying cautiousness in avoiding errors or inaccuracies • The project was given approval after careful consideration. • the result of some very careful planning conscientious showing great care, attention and industriousness in carrying out a task or role • a very conscientious secretary • Are you always so conscientious about keeping promises? scrupulous having or showing careful regard for what is morally right, or for correct procedure • draw up the sheet with scrupulous care • I will be absolutely scrupulous in not favouring one candidate when I moderate the debate. thorough extremely careful and accurate • a thorough search • a thorough understanding of programming principles meticulous extremely careful and precise • meticulous attention to detail • She pasted the reviews with meticulous care into her scrapbook. painstaking involving or showing great care and attention to detail • years of painstaking research • a lengthy and painstaking investigation assiduous undeviating in effort and care • They paid assiduous attention to the sorting of each submission as the contestants registered. • He is assiduous in ensuring compliance with the law. punctilious very careful about the conventions of correct behaviour and etiquette • She was usually very punctilious about telling her mother if she was going to be late. • He has always been punctilious in the exercise of his duties. 118 Choosing the right word finicky difficult to please, and tending to concentrate on small or unimportant details • He was finicky about how his fish was seasoned. • finicky car buyers fussy tending to worry over details or trivial things • The dog isn’t all that fussy about where he naps. • She’s got a right to be fussy about the seating plan for the state dinner. cautious, careful, chary, circumspect, prudent, vigilant, wary, guarded, cagey attentive to risk or danger cautious aware of potential risk and behaving accordingly • his cautious approach to economic reform • Years of army training had taught her to be cautious when faced with an unknown situation. careful taking reasonable care to avoid risks • Be very careful when you withdraw money from an ATM in full public view. • I was extra careful not to make any mistakes. chary cautiously reluctant to act • Why had Janet been so chary of telling us where she had gone? circumspect taking into consideration all possible consequences of an action and so unwilling to take risks • Both men offered only circumspect answers to my questions. • Government officials were circumspect about the incident. prudent showing good judgement or shrewdness • prudent financial planning for foreseeable expenses • It’s certainly prudent to use sunscreen if you are out in the midday sun. vigilant alert and conscious of possible dangers • Doctors are urging the public to be vigilant about the virus. • A vigilant neighbour foiled the attempted burglary. wary showing watchfulness or suspicion • She was always wary of dogs. • People were becoming more wary about voicing their opinions in public. 119 Grammar Guide guarded reluctant to share information with others • He was guarded, and there was a note of scepticism in his tone. • Her responses to these personal questions were heavily guarded. cagey (informal) secretive and giving little away • She was cagey about why she had rejected the offer. • Asked by a comparative stranger about his personal finances, he was understandably and sensibly cagey. cowardly, faint-hearted, spineless, gutless, ­pusillanimous, craven, chicken lacking in courage cowardly lacking in courage, or caused by a lack of courage • too cowardly to admit his mistake • a wicked and cowardly attack faint-hearted timid and lacking in resolve • The industry’s huge International Spring Show is not for the faint-hearted. spineless seriously lacking willpower or strength of character • The prime minister was criticised as spineless over his U-turn. • too spineless to stand up to their boss gutless seriously lacking in courage and determination • They’re too gutless to oppose the measure in public. pusillanimous showing a contemptible degree of cowardice • The general could not of course tolerate pusillanimous conduct in battle. craven showing a contemptible degree of cowardice and weakness of will • an act of craven stupidity • a craven surrender to pressure chicken (informal, often used by children and young people) cowardly, or too scared to do a specific thing • The boy refused to climb the tree, and got called chicken by the other kids. 120 Choosing the right word dead, deceased, departed, late, lifeless, defunct, extinct no longer living, functioning or in existence dead term describing organisms that are no longer alive, physical objects that no longer function or exist, and abstract entities that are no longer valid or relevant • He was dead before his body hit the floor. • The car battery was dead. deceased (formal, restricted to people, especially in legal or other technical contexts, or as a euphemism) no longer living • the heirs of a deceased partner • His grandmother, now deceased, hailed from Yorkshire. departed (literary, restricted to people) no longer living • the soul of our dear departed brother late (restricted to people) having died recently or within living memory • the late George Burns lifeless not living, or apparently not living • They lay lifeless in the snow. • They found the deer cold and seemingly lifeless. defunct no longer operative, valid or functional, or no longer in existence • attempts to revive a defunct ceasefire • former editorin-chief of a now defunct newspaper extinct no longer in existence, or no longer active • an animal that was declared extinct in 1936 • small houses clinging to the lower slopes of extinct volcanoes dirty, filthy, grubby, grimy, soiled, squalid, unclean not clean dirty marked by dirt or covered in dirt • Diesel engines have very dirty exhaust emissions. • That year, over a million children died from diarrhoea spread by dirty water. 121 Grammar Guide filthy extremely or disgustingly dirty • Just look at your shoes – they’re filthy! • I was flung into a filthy cell with a lot of other poor wretches. grubby slightly dirty • a rather grubby handkerchief • Travelling always made her feel grubby. grimy heavily ingrained with accumulated dirt • the faint light from a grimy window • Her face was grimy with tears. soiled stained or marked, especially during normal use • soiled linen • His white shirt was a little soiled. squalid unsanitary and unpleasant • living in squalid conditions • She lived alone in a squalid boarding house. unclean dirty or impure, especially in moral or religious contexts • casting out unclean spirits from people • unclean political battles doubtful, uncertain, unsure, in doubt, dubious, sceptical feeling doubt or uncertainty doubtful undecided or feeling hesitant • The council was doubtful that the public would want to pay for the changes. • She felt doubtful that their next date would be any more interesting than their first one had been. uncertain or unsure lacking certainty or confidence • She seemed uncertain of her English, and asked for everything to be repeated. • Some of the biggest names in investment banking are unsure about the future of the economy. in doubt feeling uncertain • When in doubt, the jury must acquit and not convict. • If the umpires are in any doubt about what to do, they consult with the referee. dubious doubtful and, often, suspicious • The Mayor was dubious about exactly what the new alliance planned to do with the 122 Choosing the right word funding. • The food at the back of the refrigerator looked distinctly dubious. sceptical questioning the truth or likelihood of something • Most people are sceptical about get-rich-quick schemes. • I remained highly sceptical about the results of the survey. dry, dehydrated, desiccated, arid, parched, shrivelled lacking moisture dry having little or no moisture • prolonged periods of hot, dry weather • Use an exfoliating cream to remove patches of dry skin. dehydrated experiencing fluid loss, or preserved by drying • They were seriously dehydrated after five days without food or water. • instant foods such as oatmeal and dehydrated soup desiccated (used of products, especially food) free from moisture, or preserved by drying • desiccated coconut arid (used pertaining to land) dry from lack of rain • a plant that grows in hot, arid climates • the arid Red Sea coast parched dry from excessive heat or lack of rain • My throat was parched. • the recent floods in this usually parched region shrivelled dry, shrunken and wrinkled • an unwatered plant with sad, shrivelled leaves • His skin was shrivelled like a dried apple. effective, efficient, effectual, efficacious producing a result effective causing a result, especially the desired or intended result • an effective solution to the water supply problem efficient capable of achieving the desired result with the minimum use of resources, time and effort • an efficient use of personnel 123 Grammar Guide effectual (formal) potentially successful in producing a desired or intended result • The two countries need to reach an effectual understanding. efficacious (formal) having the power to achieve the desired result, especially an improvement in someone’s physical condition • Diet may be as efficacious as medication in controlling the condition. fragile, delicate, frail, flimsy, frangible easily broken or damaged fragile not having a strong structure or not made of robust materials, and therefore easily broken or damaged • protected by a fragile wooden structure • an ecologically fragile area delicate similar to fragile; used especially of things that are beautiful or remarkable because of their fragility • a delicate lace fabric • delicate fernlike foliage frail too easily damaged, or not likely to survive rough treatment • Only one frail hope remained. flimsy weak and too easily broken, or thin and easily torn • The bottom fell out of the flimsy carton. • a flimsy folding chair frangible (technical) brittle, or designed to be easily broken • glass and other frangible products • frangible aluminium masts funny, comic, comical, droll, facetious, humorous, witty, hilarious causing or intended to cause amusement funny causing amusement, especially enough to provoke laughter • funny spontaneous banter • He realised the ad was trying to be funny, but it went beyond good taste. comic used in the same way as funny, especially to describe books, poems or plays • a comic actor • a comic novel about the difficulties of being different 124 Choosing the right word comical funny to the extent of being absurd, especially if unintentional • Their dismay was almost comical. • had a comical rolling walk droll funny because it is playful or odd, or dryly humorous • a droll description of a new recruit who had arrived that day facetious supposed to be funny but ill-timed, inappropriate or silly • Don’t try to be facetious; it doesn’t suit you. • a facetious remark that seemed disrespectful humorous intended to make people laugh • He could keep people entertained with a seemingly endless fund of jokes and humorous anecdotes. witty using words in a clever, inventive, humorous way • He gave a witty account of their first date. • It is not just informative, but presented in a witty fashion. hilarious extremely funny • Just when you think you’re in for a standard ending, the play surprises you with a hilarious twist. generous, liberal, magnanimous, munificent, bountiful giving readily to others generous willing to give money, help or time freely • I was deeply touched by her generous gift. • I’ve seen how generous he is with his time and what an inspiration he is to young writers. liberal free with money, time or other assets • During her lifetime, she was a liberal benefactor to public institutions. magnanimous very generous, kind or forgiving • She gave him the disputed point in a magnanimous gesture of fair play. • It is easy to be magnanimous when you have been as fortunate in life as I have. munificent very generous, especially on a grand scale • She received a munificent sum for books written and yet to be written. 125 Grammar Guide bountiful (literary) generous, particularly to less fortunate people • The company was bountiful in its donations to charity. hard, difficult, strenuous, tough, arduous, laborious requiring effort or exertion hard requiring mental or physical effort or exertion • The work was always hard and sometimes dangerous. • It is hard to imagine Paula being afraid of anything. difficult requiring considerable planning or effort • Some of the questions on this paper are too difficult for the children. • Improvements in this area may turn out to be the most difficult to achieve. strenuous requiring physical effort, energy, stamina or strength • strenuous physical activity • Let’s have those who are the fittest do the more strenuous tasks. tough requiring great effort or strength, often emotionally • Tough decisions await the administration, not least over public spending. • It will be tough for him on his own, but I think he’ ll cope. arduous requiring hard work or continuous physical effort • a long, arduous task • He left the comforts of the town to make the arduous journey into the interior. laborious requiring unwelcome, often boring, effort and hard work • slow, laborious hand-picking of fruit • Producing charts and graphs without the appropriate software is a laborious process. impassive, apathetic, phlegmatic, stolid, stoic, unmoved showing no emotional response or interest 126 Choosing the right word impassive showing no outward sign of emotion, especially on the face • a rare smile that transformed his usually impassive face • The defendant was impassive as the jury announced its verdict. apathetic not taking any interest in anything, or not bothering to do anything • The political turmoil has left voters apathetic. phlegmatic generally unemotional and difficult to arouse • Although she was disappointed at the news, her response was phlegmatic. stolid solemn, unemotional, and not easily excited or upset • He was a stolid, dignified judge, who spoke in deliberate and measured tones. stoic showing admirable patience and endurance in the face of adversity without complaining or getting upset • a stoic acceptance of the lack of job security in the industry • He was a stoic child, unfazed by the hospital’s procedures. unmoved showing no emotion, surprise or excitement when it would normally be expected • The country’s head of state appeared unmoved by widespread international criticism of her policies. • His desperate pleading left her unmoved. intelligent, bright, quick, smart, clever, able, gifted having the ability to learn and understand easily intelligent having a highly developed ability to learn facts and skills and apply them • a highly intelligent group of engineers • We’re looking for trainees who are intelligent, inquisitive and passionate about their work. bright showing an ability to think, learn or respond quickly, especially used of younger people • He’s a bright and unusually focused little boy. • lucky to work with a team of very bright colleagues 127 Grammar Guide quick alert, perceptive and able to respond quickly • She’s quick: you’ll only need to explain it to her once. smart (informal) showing intelligence and mental alertness • too smart to be taken in by the hype • He’s smart, but he should have listened to their advice. clever having sharp mental abilities, sometimes suggesting showy or suspect motives • As a bridge player, he’s very clever at anticipating his opponents’ moves. • clever use of the media to gain public sympathy able capable or talented • an exceptionally able manager who gets results from her team gifted talented, especially artistically or creatively; also used in educational circles of children who are exceptionally intelligent • acclaimed as an exceptionally gifted pianist from the time of his first solo recital • take on the challenge of teaching the gifted students legal, lawful, decriminalised, legalised, legitimate, licit permitted, recognised or required by law legal established or allowed under the law • It is perfectly legal to charge a reasonable interest rate on unpaid accounts. • Your spouse will still have a legal right to inherit from you. lawful a less common word meaning legal • The rate increases were found to be reasonable under the regulations and therefore lawful. • He believed he had lawful authority to be on the property. decriminalised no longer categorised as a criminal offence • Possession of marijuana in small amounts is decriminalised in the Netherlands. legalised to create a new law declaring something to be legal • casino-style and other legalised gambling 128 Choosing the right word legitimate correct according to the law, or having official status defined by law • The bill of sale is your proof that you sold your old car in a legitimate business transaction. • He was declared the king’s legitimate heir. licit (formal) a rarely used word meaning legal • Laws vary for licit and illicit drugs. living, alive, animate, extant having life or existence living having life; not dead or non-existent • Deserts harbour very few living things. • one of our greatest living film stars alive not dead, or (of inanimate things) still in existence • Is your granddad still alive? • An inspiring teacher, he kept Latin alive at a time when it had ceased to be taught in many schools. animate used especially to distinguish living animals and plants from inanimate objects such as rocks, water or buildings • The pronoun ‘they’ may refer to animate beings, or to objects. extant still in existence or alive; surviving • The crypt is the earliest extant part of the cathedral. lucky, fortunate, happy, providential, serendipitous experiencing or relating to advantage or good fortune lucky bringing or experiencing success or advantage, especially when this seems to happen by chance • You’re lucky she didn’t see you do that. fortunate bringing or experiencing unexpectedly great success or advantage • I feel very fortunate to have such great colleagues. happy resulting in something pleasant or welcome • By a happy coincidence, we already knew each other. 129 Grammar Guide providential happening at a favourable time • It was providential that a runner happened to pass just at that moment. serendipitous favourable and happening entirely by chance • Our serendipitous discovery of the chemical’s medicinal properties led us to the patent office. mean, nasty, vile, low, base, ignoble below normal standards of decency mean unkind or malicious • All he does is give me a hard time. He’s got to be the meanest man I’ve ever had the misfortune to work for. nasty showing spitefulness, malice or ill-nature • She’s got a nasty streak, a nasty snide way of putting people down. vile despicable or shameful • a vile exploiter of his fellow human beings • a vile thing to say low without principles or morals • How could he be so low as to make political mileage out of last week’s tragedy? base (formal) lacking proper social values or moral principles • appeal to people’s baser instincts ignoble dishonourable and contrary to the high standards of conduct expected • When even our best and brightest behave so ignobly, we face a bleak future indeed. moving, pathetic, pitiful, poignant, touching, heartwarming, heartrending arousing emotion moving causing deep feelings, especially of sadness or compassion • a very moving description of life for children in these orphanages • the deeply moving funeral of a friend who had died young 130 Choosing the right word pathetic arousing feelings of compassion and pity, often centred on someone who is vulnerable, helpless or unfortunate • There was a pathetic dignity about the old mare as she stood there, patient and undemanding. • He looked so pathetic: cold, frightened and alone. pitiful arousing compassion and pity, or arousing contempt or derision • a picture of a pitiful starving kitten • a pitiful sum of money poignant causing strong, often bittersweet feelings of sadness, pity or regret • the opera’s most poignant moment • The girl died just three days after our poignant pictures were taken. touching causing feelings of warmth, sympathy and tenderness • He has been a tremendous support to me and my family in many small and touching ways. • You have a touching faith in your employer’s generosity! heart-warming inspiring warm or kindly feelings, usually by showing life and human nature in a positive and reassuring light • It is heart-warming that so many youngsters would like to see older members of society enjoying a better standard of living. • The former director recently found a heart-warming way to repay his childhood nanny – he helped build her a new house. heartrending causing intense sadness or distress, especially arousing sympathy for someone else’s suffering or hardship • heartrending handmade posters depicting victims who are still missing • These refugees often have heartrending stories to tell. naked, bare, nude, undressed, unclothed devoid of clothes or covering naked not covered or concealed, especially having no clothing on any part of the body • a ceiling decorated with frescoes of naked cherubs 131 Grammar Guide bare without the usual furnishings or decorations, or not covered by clothing • The three men sat around a bare wooden table. • have bare legs in summer nude not wearing any clothes at all, especially in artistic contexts • the nude statue in the courtyard undressed not wearing any or many clothes, used especially when clothes have just been removed or are about to be put on • The children were undressed and ready to put on their nightclothes. unclothed wearing little or no clothing • a window full of unclothed mannequins • He felt awkwardly unclothed in just a towel. necessary, essential, vital, indispensable, requisite, needed describes something that is required necessary required to achieve a desired result, or by authority or convention • Our son says he’ll get a bank loan if necessary. • Repairs are necessary to ensure everyone’s health and safety. essential of the highest importance for achieving something • The essential things for a good meal are one tasty ingredient and some imagination. • It is essential that a social worker review the home environment before the patient’s discharge. vital extremely important to the survival or continuing effectiveness of something • The MP’s support for the negotiations was vital to their success. • The neighbourhood watch has a vital role to play in reducing crime. indispensable essential, or extremely desirable or useful • No one is truly indispensable, although it is hard to get ahead without a trusted second-in-command. • Online resources have become almost indispensable to history teachers. requisite (formal) necessary for a specific purpose • The UN resolution fell only four votes short of achieving the requisite 132 Choosing the right word two-thirds majority. • We ended up rejecting the majority of applicants because they didn’t have the requisite skills. needed required or desired • Further research is needed to confirm these findings. new, novel, innovative, fresh, newfangled, original never experienced before or having recently come into being new recently invented, discovered, made, bought, experienced, or not previously known or encountered • new research in AI technologies • over 125,000 species of flora and fauna, many of which were entirely new to science novel new and different, often in an interesting, unusual or inventive way • The company came up with a novel idea for reaching coffee drinkers. • The bank will pioneer a novel way of detecting credit crime. innovative new and creative, especially in the way something is done • a programme to support flexible, innovative transport alternatives fresh excitingly or refreshingly different from what has been done or experienced previously • I want a completely fresh approach. • a fresh start in a different city newfangled puzzlingly or worryingly new or different, especially seeming gimmicky or overcomplicated • one of those newfangled small cameras that do almost everything for you • A traditionalist at heart, he is wary of newfangled ideas. original unique and not derived from anything else •When we analysed the report more closely, we realised that the ideas were not so original after all.• Leonardo da Vinci’s highly original use of light 133 Grammar Guide obscure, abstruse, recondite, arcane, cryptic, enigmatic difficult to understand obscure difficult to understand because it is expressed in a complicated way or because it involves areas of knowledge or study that are not known to most people • a rather obscure branch of mathematics called graph theory • a notion that may at first seem somewhat obscure abstruse not easy to understand, often because it involves specialist knowledge or is expressed in specialist language • academic books with abstruse titles • He is so occupied with abstruse ideas that he is incapable of coping with everyday activities. recondite requiring a high degree of scholarship or specialist knowledge to be understood • an excellent professor with an obvious knowledge of an often recondite subject arcane requiring information that is secret, or known only to a few people, in order to be understood • The current pay structure is arcane and outdated. • arcane symbols were drawn around the entrance to the ancient tomb cryptic deliberately mysterious or ambiguous and seeming to have a hidden meaning • cryptic clues • a fax worded in cryptic language so that others could not understand enigmatic having a quality of mystery and ambiguity that makes it difficult to understand or interpret • the enigmatic smile of the Mona Lisa esoteric understood by or intended for only an initiated few • dictionaries for more esoteric or specialist domains • an esoteric lecture about the origins of black holes 134 Choosing the right word old-fashioned, outdated, antiquated, archaic, obsolete, passé, antediluvian no longer in current use or no longer considered fashionable old-fashioned no longer considered fashionable or suitable because of changes in taste or technology, or nostalgically favouring or maintaining the style of a former time • They had very old-fashioned notions of gender. outdated no longer relevant to modern life because it has been superseded by something better, more fashionable, or more technologically advanced • With the advent of streaming, my old CD player is starting to look outdated. • a hopelessly outdated computer system antiquated regarded as in need of updating or replacing, though still functioning or in use • How can we make any progress with these antiquated notions about what our mission is? archaic belonging to a much earlier period of time, often suggesting a lack of relevance to modern life • Opponents argue that the practice is archaic and degrading. obsolete superseded by something new, and in some cases therefore no longer in use • a software tool for managing data that renders everything else obsolete passé dismissed as no longer current or fashionable • Will attaching ‘e-’ to the front of a word soon become passé? antediluvian extremely old-fashioned and outdated • The old rotary dial phone must seem antediluvian to my grandson. • He condemned what he called antediluvian attitudes to work practices. periodic, intermittent, occasional, sporadic recurring over a period of time 135 Grammar Guide periodic recurring or reappearing from time to time • carry out periodic inspections • El Niño, a periodic weather pattern intermittent occurring at irregular intervals • The pain was usually intermittent, although in some patients it was continuous. • Thunder, lightning and intermittent rain delayed the start of the tournament. occasional occurring infrequently at irregular intervals • Her family kept in contact by email, social media and occasional visits. • He sat silent, emitting only an occasional suppressed giggle. sporadic occurring irregularly and unpredictably • Despite a truce announced last month, sporadic fighting continues. • Prior to the mid-1960s, pollution issues received only limited and sporadic attention from the general public. pliable, ductile, malleable, elastic, pliant, plastic able to be bent or moulded pliable flexible and easily bent or moulded • good-quality, pliable leather • The pliable minds of youngsters are easily influenced by the media. ductile (of metals) easily drawn out into a long continuous wire or hammered into thin sheets • The alloy possesses a high proportion of tin to copper, giving the metal special ductile qualities. malleable (of metals or similar substances) able to be shaped without breaking or cracking • Iron possesses a very low carbon content, which makes it tough and malleable. elastic able to be stretched without breaking and then to return to an original shape • An elastic material such as rubber is easily pulled into long strings. • Add enough water to form a soft elastic dough and knead until smooth. pliant supple and easily bent • To execute this move, the wrist must be pliant and completely relaxed. plastic easily shaped, moulded or modelled • plastic clay 136 Choosing the right word proud, arrogant, conceited, egotistical, vain pleased with oneself proud justifiably pleased and satisfied with one’s achievements or similar circumstance, or self-satisfied and having an exaggerated sense of self-worth • We were very proud of our DIY project. • Some people may be too proud to accept help, even in times of great need. arrogant feeling or showing self-importance and contempt for others • What made this arrogant man assume that I would be interested in him? • Sometimes he displays not just extreme selfconfidence, but an almost arrogant attitude. conceited showing excessive satisfaction with your personal qualities or abilities • She was less brilliant than her sister and, perhaps as a consequence, also less conceited. • I don’t know how to say this without sounding conceited, but my son is something special. egotistical having an inflated sense of self-importance, especially when this is shown through constantly talking or thinking about yourself • a documentary that portrays her as egotistical and hungry for publicity • an intensely egotistical and unfeeling man vain excessively self-satisfied, especially suggesting that someone is overly concerned and pleased with his or her own personal appearance • He was vain about his looks, and even more vain about his physique. • Being vain, she did not want to be seen without make-up. sarcastic, ironic, sardonic, satirical, caustic intended or intending to mock sarcastic characterised by words that mean the opposite of what they seem and are designed to mock • She cared little for 137 Grammar Guide his sarcastic jokes. • ‘Nice shot,’ she said sarcastically, as I missed the waste-paper basket. ironic deliberately stating the opposite of the truth, usually with the intention of being amusing • The nickname Charles the Bald may not have been descriptive but ironic, implying Charles was exceptionally hairy. sardonic mocking and cynical or disdainful, though not deliberately hurtful • a sardonic smile • He gradually evolved into a more polished politician – his sardonic humour emerged, and his views became more refined. satirical using ridicule to criticise faults, especially in the arts or politics • a satirical TV puppet show • He was a sharp, satirical observer of the social scene. caustic harsh and bitter and intended to mock, offend or belittle • a barrage of witty and caustic editorials • His caustic style made him the most controversial American sports commentator of his time. secret, clandestine, covert, furtive, stealthy, surreptitious involving concealment secret known by only a few people and intentionally withheld from general knowledge • supported by a majority in a secret ballot • The find was kept secret so that it could be professionally excavated by the archaeology department. clandestine concealed, usually because illegal or unauthorised • It appeared he was having a clandestine relationship with a married woman. • clandestine arms deals covert not intended to be known, seen or found out, often for official reasons • a covert police operation • a covert intelligence and sabotage campaign furtive cautious and careful in order to escape notice • Sandra was whispering to her neighbour, with occasional furtive glances in 138 Choosing the right word Tom’s direction. • The stranger looked around, then walked in an oddly furtive manner towards the gate. stealthy done quietly, slowly and cautiously in order to escape notice • Casting a stealthy glance around, he leant forward and lowered his voice. surreptitious done in a concealed or underhand way to escape notice • surreptitious checking for clues to the thief ’s identity • take a surreptitious look at the name on the envelope silent, quiet, reticent, taciturn, uncommunicative not speaking or not saying much silent not speaking or communicating at a particular time, especially through choice, or not inclined to speak much • Both men were silent for a moment. • He’s a rather silent type, not fond of small talk. quiet not inclined to speak much, often because of shyness, or not speaking or communicating at a particular time • Keep quiet and sit still, would you? • Dan, who was nearly five years old, was very bright, but quiet. reticent unwilling to communicate very much or talk freely, or to reveal all the facts about something • The usually reticent athlete surprised us by sharing his views on the rest of the season. • The boss of the cosmetics empire was reticent when it came to discussing his business philosophy. taciturn habitually reserved in speech and manner • Both men were taciturn and found it difficult to put ideas into words. • The team’s coach, never particularly talkative, has been even more taciturn than usual. uncommunicative not willing to say much, or tending not to say much • Fred was somewhat reserved and uncommunicative concerning his recent experiences. 139 Grammar Guide talkative, chatty, gossipy, garrulous, loquacious talking a lot talkative willing to talk readily and at length • The normally talkative champion refused to be drawn on his prospects for the tournament. • Danny was in a talkative mood. chatty talking freely about unimportant things in a friendly way • My niece was her usual chatty self, talking about her hamster. gossipy talking with relish about other people and their lives, often unkindly or maliciously • articles ranging from the informative to the gossipy • a gossipy neighbour garrulous excessively or pointlessly talkative • a garrulous host with a thousand stories to tell to any guest who would listen loquacious tending to talk a great deal • Usually loquacious, she was so surprised that she was momentarily at a loss for words. • Her loquacious older brother was talking enthusiastically about the new venture. temporary, fleeting, passing, transitory, ephemeral, evanescent, short-lived lasting only a short time temporary lasting or designed to last for a limited time • The flash caused only temporary injury to the man’s sight. • In some organisations, temporary jobs offer a step on the way to regular employment. fleeting very brief or rapid • a fleeting moment of happiness • Most reviewers predicted the book would enjoy only fleeting success. passing superficial and not long-lasting • This man had no feelings for her other than a passing interest. • Are recycled clothes just this year’s passing fad? transitory existing only for a short time • the transitory nature of stardom 140 Choosing the right word ephemeral lasting for a short time and leaving no permanent trace • Fashions are ephemeral; new ones regularly drive out the old. evanescent (literary) disappearing after a short time and soon forgotten • a shimmering, evanescent bubble short-lived lasting only for a short time • The actor, who earlier this year vowed never to go on stage again, has been tempted out of his short-lived retirement. thin, lean, slim, slender, emaciated, scraggy, scrawny, skinny, svelte without much flesh, the opposite of fat thin having little body fat • I’d forgotten how thin her face has become. lean muscular and fit-looking • He had a typical runner’s physique, short and lean. slim pleasingly thin and well-proportioned • Tall and slim, the ballerina’s body had the tautness of an athlete’s. slender gracefully and attractively thin • A tall, slender model walked down the fashion-show runway. emaciated unhealthily thin, usually because of illness or starvation • Aid officials in the war zone reported seeing seriously undernourished, even emaciated people. scraggy or scrawny unpleasantly or unhealthily thin and bony • A scraggy old cat lives in the barn. • A dog with a scrawny look rooted around in the bins. skinny extremely thin, or tight-fitting • A new-born chimpanzee seems a skinny little thing compared with a human baby. • He was wearing skinny jeans. svelte slender and elegant • She was svelte and sophisticated in her little black dress and pearls. 141 Grammar Guide verbal, spoken, oral expressed in words verbal using words, especially spoken words • a stream of verbal abuse • Body language conveys meaning often missed in merely verbal communication. spoken expressed with the voice • the development of students’ understanding of the spoken word • Written language needs to be more ‘correct’ than spoken language. oral expressed in spoken, as opposed to written, form • Assessment will be by written essays and an oral examination. • The committee’s findings relied on oral histories and journals, DNA evidence and genealogical records. unlawful, illegal, illicit, wrongful not in accordance with laws or rules unlawful not permitted by the law or by the rules of an organisation or religion, or not recognised as valid by those laws or rules • The police officer was aware that possessing a knife was not per se an unlawful act. • This change makes it unlawful for employers to have different compulsory retirement ages for men and women. illegal contravening a specific written statute, rule or law, especially a criminal law • drug smuggling and other illegal activities • Under the new ruling, it is illegal to gather in groups of more than six people. illicit not permitted by the law, suggesting especially that something is considered morally wrong or unacceptable • illicit weapons and drugs • The divorce papers cite his numerous illicit affairs. wrongful (often used in civil lawsuits) unjust, unfair or against conscience, but not punishable by criminal law • the 142 Choosing the right word wrong ful use of confidential information • awarded damages for wrong ful arrest unruly, intractable, recalcitrant, obstreperous, wilful, wild, wayward not submitting to control unruly boisterous, disruptive and difficult to control or discipline • Police tried to subdue the more unruly elements of the crowd. • unruly behaviour intractable (formal) strong-willed and refusing to be controlled, or difficult to solve • The new party leader proved to be even more intractable than his predecessor. • The area has some intractable social problems. recalcitrant obstinate and defiant in refusing to submit to discipline or control • an armed force sufficient to enforce the law on recalcitrant individuals • When she spoke, it was in the voice that she reserved for recalcitrant children. obstreperous noisy, difficult to control, and uncooperative • an incident between a shop assistant and an obstreperous customer wilful stubbornly disregarding the opinions or advice of others • His wilful refusal to listen to the other side was infuriating. • the challenge of raising a wilful child wild showing a general lack of control or restraint • When we were young and inexperienced, we did some rather wild things. wayward disobedient and uncontrollable • The boy’s mother worked hard to keep track of her sometimes wayward son. • It was years before I gave up trying to change his wayward lifestyle. unwilling, reluctant, disinclined, averse, hesitant, loath lacking the desire to do something 143 Grammar Guide unwilling not prepared to do something • The authorities seem unable or unwilling to take tough action. • He put down rebellions viciously, in an attempt to impose his harsh rule on his unwilling subjects. reluctant showing no enthusiasm for doing something and only doing it if forced • Although elderly, she valued her independence and was often reluctant to accept help. disinclined showing a lack of enthusiasm for something rather than a strong objection to it • It will probably be a long session, so I’m disinclined to go this time. averse (formal) strongly opposed to or disliking something • I’m not averse to putting it all in writing if you think it will help. • averse to marriage hesitant not eager to do something because of uncertainty or lack of confidence • Throughout the first set, both players looked tense and were hesitant to attack. • She felt hesitant about getting involved. loath very unwilling to do something • Today’s Hollywood producers seem loath to take chances on newcomers. • I’m loath to admit it to her for fear of what she’ll say. usual, customary, habitual, routine, wonted often or frequently done, used, bought or consumed usual normal, common or typical • He made his way home by his usual route. • Mum responded in the usual way. customary conforming to regular or typical practice • It’s customary for us to give presents to everyone in the family. • He responded with his customary good humour. habitual done so often or repeatedly that the behaviour or practice has become ingrained • a habitual slouch • He addressed the meeting with his habitual frankness. 144 Choosing the right word routine normal, regular and usual in every way, even predictable, repetitive and monotonous • nurses who are engaged in routine work on the wards • They found a fault in the fuel supply during a routine check. wonted (formal) usual or typical • Briefly overcome with emotion, she soon resumed her wonted composure. vacant, unoccupied, empty, void lacking contents or occupants vacant without occupants or contents, often temporarily • positions left vacant by teachers • In this part of the country, there is plenty of vacant land. • vacant hotel rooms unoccupied not lived in by anybody, or currently without occupants • The building was unoccupied at the time of the fire. • You can use the unoccupied desk over there. empty not containing or holding anything, or without occupants • She took a last hasty gulp of coffee and put the empty cup on the counter. • Cinemas showing the film were almost empty. void having no contents, or having no incumbent, occupant or holder • void spaces between the particles • She was without rental income during the period the property was void. valid, cogent, convincing, reasonable, sound worthy of acceptance or credence valid having a solid foundation or justification • Mrs Smith raises a valid point in her letter. • We are required to notify all other parties unless there is a valid reason why such notice should not be given. cogent forceful and convincing to the intellect and reason • You presented a cogent analysis of the situation. • The way they argued their case was neither logical nor cogent. 145 Grammar Guide convincing likely to overcome doubts and win support • Your explanation leaves questions unanswered and is not wholly convincing. • I need to see convincing evidence before I can accept this theory. reasonable acceptable and in keeping with common sense • We must show reasonable grounds for wanting to dismiss the employee. • It seemed a reasonable assumption at the time. sound based on good sense and acceptable reasoning, and worthy of approval • Her portfolio is diversified in accordance with sound investment policy. • He offers some sound advice on road safety. weak, feeble, infirm, debilitated, decrepit, enervated lacking physical strength or energy weak not physically fit or mentally strong • By this time I felt too weak to think rationally. • I’m just a weak fool who can’t do what he knows he should. feeble lacking physical or mental strength or health • Weak from loss of blood, he made a feeble attempt to stand. infirm lacking strength as a result of long illness or advanced years • elderly and infirm people • Increasingly infirm, she was unable to visit us this year. debilitated with strength and energy temporarily diminished as a result of illness or physical exertion • feeling thoroughly debilitated after his surgery • Rescuers found the pair in a halffrozen and debilitated condition. decrepit (informal) made weak by advanced years • His body may have grown increasingly decrepit, but his mind remains sharp. enervated (literary) made weak and tired by physical or mental exertion • The morning outside in the intense heat made us feel faint and enervated. • enervated by worry and the long ordeal of waiting 146 Choosing the right word wet, damp, moist, dank, humid, sodden, saturated, soaking, sopping not dry wet term used to describe everything from paint that is not yet quite dry to something that is completely covered in water • a wet sponge • I was wet through but completely unharmed. damp slightly wet, especially undesirably so • The mattress was too damp to sleep on. moist slightly wet, usually desirably so • a rich moist cake dank (of a place) unpleasantly damp and cold and usually with a bad smell • The walls of the cave were cold, dank and rather slimy. humid (of air) having a high water content, often also suggesting accompanying heat • the humid swamps of Florida sodden extremely wet and heavy with retained moisture • Torrential rain left their clothes and packs sodden. saturated penetrated with moisture and thoroughly soaked • There is no indication that farmers would be able to work the saturated fields even if the weather were drier. soaking (informal) extremely and undesirably wet • After he had walked half a mile in driving rain, his shoes were soaking wet. sopping (informal) extremely and undesirably wet • a tangle of sopping hair widespread, prevalent, rife, epidemic, universal occurring over a wide area widespread existing or happening in many places, or affecting many people • This graceful antelope was once widespread in North Africa. • Drugs in sport are becoming a much more widespread problem. 147 Grammar Guide prevalent occurring commonly or widely as a dominant feature • the prevalent public mood • These diseases are prevalent among young children. rife full of or very common, especially in reference to something undesirable • Looting was rife in the region. • The City was rife with rumours of takeovers. epidemic spreading more quickly and more extensively than expected • Bribery in the country was reported to have reached epidemic proportions. universal affecting the whole world, a whole country, or everyone in a large group or wide area • His decision was met with almost universal condemnation, even from those who had earlier supported him. • Mobile phones have become a universal feature of life. wordy, verbose, long-winded, rambling, prolix, diffuse using too many words or not concisely expressed wordy using an excessive number of words in writing or speech • Avoid being wordy in memos: stay brief and to the point. verbose expressed in language that is wordy and not precise • He recently finished writing his memoirs which, at 1,088 pages, are just as verbose as his endless political speeches. long-winded tediously wordy in speech or writing • a longwinded question • The records were disappointingly terse in respect of important topics, and infuriatingly long-winded when it came to trivial ones. rambling excessively long with many changes of subject • a rambling fifteen-page letter • He told a long, rambling story to which he forgot the punchline. prolix tiresomely wordy • This prolix style will put readers off. 148 Choosing the right word diffuse lacking organisation and conciseness • His ideas were so diffuse I couldn’t really understand what he was saying. • the conflicting, volatile and diffuse demands of different political groups Choosing the right noun (see chapter 1, pages 4) are the largest class of words in English and, like adjectives, are rich in synonyms. Precision in using nouns is important for both accuracy and style, so it’s helpful to have a selection of different, but related, nouns at one’s disposal. Below are thirty-one sets of nouns that – in at least one of their main senses – share the same core meaning but have slightly different nuances. nouns ability, skill, competence, aptitude, capacity, capability necessary skill, knowledge or experience to do something ability natural tendency to do something successfully or well • Her first attempt at the hurdles course already demonstrated her unusual ability for the sport. • Honeybees show a remarkable ability to respond collectively to outside stimuli. skill ability to do something well, gained through training or experience • She made all the arrangements with consummate skill and professionalism. • good communication skills competence ability that has been developed, measured against a standard • professional competence built up over the preceding twenty years aptitude natural tendency to do something well, especially one that can be further developed • The students’ aptitude for mechanical design is clear from the robot they made. capacity mental or physical ability • his youthful energy and capacity for hard work • limited capacity to sustain an interest in politics 149 Grammar Guide capability power or practical ability to do something • Do they have the capability to cover such a large service area? • the relationship between a company’s size and its technological capabilities anger, annoyance, irritation, resentment, indignation, fury, rage, wrath, ire feeling of strong displeasure in response to an assumed injury anger strong feeling of grievance and displeasure • His face turned red with anger. • I didn’t want to face their anger. annoyance mild anger and impatience • a source of annoyance to him • I couldn’t find my credit card, much to the annoyance of the people queueing behind me. irritation impatience and exasperation • reply with ill-concealed irritation • a sign of his intense irritation with the bureaucracy he was up against resentment aggrieved feelings caused by a sense of unfair treatment • The policy of reducing overtime provoked bitter resentment throughout the workforce. • Try to overcome your feelings of resentment at not being chosen and move on. indignation anger because something seems unfair or unreasonable • The suggestion that she could perhaps have worked harder was met with indignation. fury violent anger • Their eyes were fixed on each other in cold fury. • Fury at the rejection welled up in him. rage sudden and extreme anger • jealous rage • When the boy clumsily dropped the tray, Toby flew into a rage. wrath strong anger, often with a desire for revenge • the wrath of God • I don’t want to incur the wrath of my manager by changing the plan. ire (literary) strong anger • This decision drew the ire of rights activists. 150 Choosing the right word answer, rejoinder, reply, response, retort, riposte thing said, written or done in acknowledgment of a question or remark, or in reaction to a situation answer reaction, usually written or spoken, to a question, communication or situation • give the right answer • She searched for an appropriate answer to Jason’s question. rejoinder (formal) sharp, critical, angry or clever reply, usually spoken • ‘Of course the school is to blame,’ came the parents’ angry rejoinder. reply answer or reaction to a question, communication or request • a written reply to our letter • ‘How do you know that?’ she asked, but her friend only giggled in reply. response spoken or written answer, or a reaction to a situation • Could I have your response by Wednesday? • His comments sparked an angry response in the press. • a steady improvement in ambulance response times retort sharp spoken response, often to criticism • Polly managed to suppress a cutting retort. riposte quick or witty reply, usually spoken • I never manage to deliver a riposte at the time, but always think of one later. backer, angel, guarantor, patron, sponsor person who provides financial support backer someone who gives moral or financial support • The project’s main backer has withdrawn his support. angel someone who provides financial support for an enterprise, for example, a theatrical venture • Without the investment of West End angels, many shows would never open. guarantor someone who gives a legal undertaking to be responsible for another person’s debts or obligations • My mother acted as guarantor for the loan. 151 Grammar Guide patron someone who gives financial or moral support to another person, an institution or a charity, especially in the arts • monarchs were great patrons of the arts • A wealthy patron brought the young opera singer to this country and paid for his music lessons. sponsor person or organisation that contributes money to help fund an event, usually in return for publicity, or gives money to a person taking part in a fundraising activity • look for sponsors for a charity concert • We would like to thank our sponsors for donating the prizes. beginner, apprentice, novice person who has not acquired the necessary experience or skills to do something beginner someone who has just started to learn or do something • classes for both beginners and advanced students • a course that teaches beginners the basics of drawing apprentice someone who is being taught the skills of a trade over an agreed period • become an apprentice electrician novice someone with no previous experience or skill in an activity undertaken • a political novice working on his first campaign • a ski trail for novices candidate, contender, contestant, aspirant, ­applicant, entrant person who is seeking to be chosen for something or to win something candidate someone who is being considered for a job, grant or prize, running for election, or taking part in an examination • the Liberal candidate •candidates for the newly created supervisory posts 152 Choosing the right word contender competitor, especially a person who has a good chance of winning • a contender for the best supporting actor award • She is emerging as a strong contender for the presidency. contestant someone who takes part in a contest or competitive event • a contestant on a popular TV quiz show • To win, the contestant must score eleven points. aspirant someone aspiring to distinction or advancement • another aspirant to the peerage • a challenge from a rival aspirant to the role applicant someone who has formally applied to be a candidate for something • the hiring manager will choose eight applicants to interview • It’s claimed that the company is turning away hundreds of job applicants. entrant someone who enters a competition or examination • I was the only entrant, so the event was cancelled. courage, bravery, fearlessness, nerve, guts, pluck, mettle personal resoluteness in the face of danger or difficulties courage ability to show strength and determination, whether physical, mental or moral, against a wide range of difficulties or dangers • a supreme act of courage • It took courage to speak out against the proposal. bravery ability to deal with pain, challenge or danger without showing fear • She was awarded the George Cross for her bravery. • A friend paid tribute to his bravery throughout his long illness. fearlessness extreme lack of fear in the face of dangers or challenges • a police officer displaying grit, fearlessness and devotion to duty • We walked across the viaduct with the fearlessness of the young. nerve coolness, steadiness and self-assurance • He didn’t have the nerve to confront me. • She almost lost her nerve and backed out. 153 Grammar Guide guts (slang) strength of character and boldness • It takes a lot of guts to get back to normal activities after such a terrible injury. • Why don’t they have the guts to tackle the problem? pluck resolution and willingness to continue struggling against the odds • Very few people have the pluck to stand up to a huge corporation. • With a sizable dose of pluck, he managed to secure an interview. mettle spirited determination • The match today will test their mettle. • Only time will tell if she has the mettle to rise to the challenge. dislike, distaste, hatred, disgust, loathing, repugnance, abhorrence, animosity, antipathy, aversion, revulsion feeling of not liking someone or something dislike attitude or feeling of aversion, disapproval or distaste • a dislike for sudden change • Their cat took a dislike to me and stalked away. distaste mild dislike, mainly of behaviour and activities • He wrinkled his nose in distaste at the rubbish in the park. • a distaste for horror films hatred or hate intense dislike or hostility • verbal expressions of hatred • It was an inflammatory speech designed to stoke hate. disgust feeling of horrified and sickened disapproval • He pointed in disgust to the animal’s filthy cage. loathing intense dislike • A passionate loathing of materialism is evident in his writing. • I developed an irrational loathing for the song after having heard it repeatedly. repugnance strong disgust, mainly directed at behaviour and activities • He expressed his repugnance at the motiveless assault. • international repugnance at the past week’s violence abhorrence feeling of aversion or intense disapproval • our deep and abiding abhorrence of social injustice 154 Choosing the right word animosity feeling of hostility and resentment • a nation with a history of animosity towards rival exporters • There was no personal animosity between my sister and me. antipathy deep-seated dislike or hostility • his well-known antipathy to the nationalist cause • These rumours fuelled the crowd’s antipathy towards the government. aversion strong feeling of dislike • He has always shown an aversion to most forms of exercise. • an instinctive aversion to being bossed around revulsion sudden violent feeling of disgust • experience a deep feeling of revulsion at the waste of human life • The case sent a wave of revulsion through the community. fight, battle, war, conflict, engagement, skirmish, clash struggle between opposing forces fight physical struggle between individuals or groups such as battalions or armies • They had a fight with the guard and captured his rifle. • The fight for the village was part of an operation to subdue local resistance. battle large-scale fight involving combat between opposing forces, warships or aircraft as part of an ongoing war or campaign • killed in the Battle of Arras • Her brother was one of the casualties of the air battle. war state of hostilities between nations, states or factions involving the use of arms and the occurrence of a series of battles • at the outbreak of war • a long-running civil war • the war years • the post-war period conflict warfare between opposing forces, especially a prolonged and bitter but sporadic struggle • an end to bloody conflict in the Balkans • a border conflict with sporadic troop clashes • armed conflict 155 Grammar Guide engagement hostile encounter involving military forces • the rules of engagement • Planes attacked artillery bases in the largest military engagement of the war to date. skirmish brief minor fight, usually one that is part of a larger conflict • a skirmish with guerrillas in which several soldiers were killed • The last skirmish in the three-day battle came just after midnight. clash short fierce encounter, usually involving physical combat • The meeting was marred by a clash between the demonstrators and security guards. fire, blaze, conflagration, inferno burning and flames fire light, heat and flames caused by something burning, whether deliberately or accidentally produced • the crackling fire in the hearth • a fire that gutted the building blaze brightly and intensely burning, or large, fire • The blaze threatened to engulf a nearby house. • A 7,500-acre blaze closed the main road over the weekend. conflagration large fire that causes a great deal of damage • The explosion of the fuel tanks consumed the warehouse in a terrifying conflagration. inferno fire or place that is burning fiercely • The store rapidly became a roaring inferno of smoke and fire. flaw, imperfection, fault, defect, failing, blemish, shortcoming feature that detracts from perfection flaw physical feature that prevents something from being totally perfect and detracts from its value, or weakness in someone’s character, or in a plan, theory or system • a tiny flaw in the glass • a fatal flaw in their strategy 156 Choosing the right word imperfection something that makes a person or thing less than perfect • a minor imperfection on the shiny surface • They accepted us, with all our imperfections, as colleagues. fault something that detracts from the integrity, functioning or perfection of a thing, or a weakness in someone’s character, usually more serious than a flaw • a design fault • regarded it as a serious fault of the education system • His worst fault is his unreliability. defect fault in a machine, system or plan, especially one that prevents it from functioning correctly, or a personal weakness • A house may show a hidden defect several years after construction. • a metabolic defect • She regarded my reluctance to stand up for myself as a character defect. failing something that mars a person or thing in some way, especially an unfortunate feature of someone’s character • The management acknowledged this failing in the system. • At least rudeness isn’t one of my failings. blemish mark that detracts from the appearance of something, or a feature that detracts from someone’s personal standing • a small blemish that only an expert would have noticed • the only blemish on an otherwise perfect record shortcoming failure or deficiency in someone’s character or in a system or organisation • The omission of this quality check is a shortcoming in the service offered. • The team’s main shortcoming has been defence. habit, custom, tradition, practice, routine, wont established pattern of behaviour habit action or pattern of behaviour that is regularly repeated, so much so that it becomes predictable or typical of someone • He has the habit of buying two coffees with his paper every morning. 157 Grammar Guide custom way someone normally or routinely behaves in a situation, or traditional practice of a community or group • It’s our custom to wait until everyone has arrived before we sit down. tradition long-established action or pattern of behaviour in a certain community or group, especially one that has been handed down from generation to generation • In keeping with local tradition, beef will not be served. practice established way of doing something, especially one that has developed through experience and knowledge • It’s always good practice to rinse the cutting board. US spelling uses ‘practice’ only, whereas UK spelling uses ‘practice’ as a noun and ‘practise’ as a verb after each use. routine typical pattern of behaviour that is regularly followed on a day-to-day basis, sometimes with the suggestion that this is monotonous • He had quickly re-established his old routine of writing all day and then going out at night with his friends. wont (formal) something that someone does regularly or habitually • The spaceship’s crew, as is their wont, have run into a spot of trouble and solutions are being sought. jargon, vocabulary, terminology, slang, idiom, argot, parlance, lingo, -speak, -ese language used by a certain group of people jargon expressions associated with a certain specialised activity, profession or culture, especially terms that are not generally understood by outsiders • technical jargon • We have the opportunity to generate a billion-dollar tourism product – to use that ghastly jargon. vocabulary words used by or known to a particular group, activity, profession or culture • My Chinese vocabulary has improved. • Ongoing scientific, technological and social changes generate a stream of new vocabulary. 158 Choosing the right word terminology words and expressions used by people involved in a specialised activity • commercial and financial terminology • Of the world’s fifty-three subspecies of Asian hornbills, only nine, in the terminology of a recent conference on the status of these birds, are ‘stable’. slang words, expressions and turns of phrase used instead of standard terms in casual language • He used vulgar slang inappropriate to someone in his position. idiom style of expression associated with a certain person or group • Her new book fails to capture the American idiom quite as well as her last one did. • Only a teenager can write in an authentic teenage idiom. argot specialised terms associated with a particular group • prison argot parlance style of speech or writing used by people in a particular context or profession • In estate agent parlance, the house is in a ‘ desirable’ part of the city. lingo (informal) way of speaking associated with a certain, usually specialised group of people, or foreign language • My wife picked up the lingo as soon as we moved here. • An expert can help translate the lingo used by lawyers into plain English. -speak suffix added to nouns to describe the language used by a certain group of people or in a certain context, suggesting that it is obscure or difficult to follow • I’m not put off by techspeak. • The document is full of politician-speak. -ese suffix added to nouns to describe the language associated with a group of people, especially when it is jargon-like • No matter what the government announces, it always seems to be expressed in bureaucratic officialese. • confusing legalese job, assignment, task, chore, duty piece of work to be done 159 Grammar Guide job activity done regularly for pay • He had managed to get himself a job on a building site. • Omar said he would make himself useful doing odd jobs. assignment particular task given as part of the work required for an occupation or a course of study, often with a deadline; allocation of a task to someone • He rarely turned down a modelling assignment. • She had been sent on special assignment to assist the head of security at headquarters. task piece of work that requires effort, often imposed by an employer or someone in authority, and usually of short duration or with a deadline • Your group has the task of finding three different materials, with costs, delivery methods and dates, by the 15th. chore relatively short routine undertaking, either imposed by someone in authority or self-imposed, requiring effort and considered dull or even unpleasant • ask for help with the household chores duty something required to be done to meet obligations to other individuals or to society • One duty of law enforcement is to investigate suspected cases of fraud. knowledge, erudition, information, learning, scholarship, wisdom what can be or is known knowledge understanding gained through observation, investigation, reasoning, experience or study • The family brought decades of experience and knowledge to the making of fine furniture. erudition learning gained through advanced study of scholarly subjects, often of a specialised or difficult nature • His essays combine keen observation with wit, erudition and compassion. 160 Choosing the right word information facts or data • The organisation provides the public with information about the vaccine to help them make informed choices. • the increasing use of social media as a source of information learning understanding gained through formal study, especially study of an advanced nature • a writer of obvious learning with a great admiration for Western civilisation scholarship learning gained through study of an academic, often specialised, subject • a multi-volume work of scholarship that took more than a decade to complete wisdom ability to use what is known or learnt sensibly and to combine it with experience and good judgement • Will he use his experience and wisdom to resolve the dispute? • another health report challenging the conventional wisdom about high blood pressure lack, shortage, deficiency, deficit, want, dearth insufficiency or absence of something lack shortage or complete absence of something • There was a distinct lack of interest in cleaning up after the party. • The charity suffers from a lack of funds. shortage lack of something that is needed or required • a shortage of skilled labour • The drought will cause severe food shortages. deficiency shortfall in the amount of something necessary, for example, a nutrient in the human body, or an inadequacy in the supply or performance of something • People who don’t drink milk may develop a calcium deficiency. • We accept responsibility for any deficiency in our safety procedures. deficit amount by which something falls short of a target amount or level • rally from a two-goal deficit to win the game • a budget deficit 161 Grammar Guide want or dearth scarcity or absence of something • exhausted from overwork and want of sleep • People were paying in banknotes so there was a dearth of coins for change at the fair. language, tongue, speech, dialect, idiolect communication by means of words language speech of a country, region or group, or use of spoken or written words as a communication system • the delight of hearing new languages when travelling in other countries • Persian was the official language of much of the Indian subcontinent for centuries. tongue language used by a specific country, nation or community • students whose mother tongue is unknown to me • Neither of them could speak the other’s native tongue. speech spoken language, especially as distinct from written language • In many cultures, children begin to acquire speech between ages one and two. • Her speech was slow after her surgery, but she understood everything we said. dialect regional variety of a language, or a form of a language spoken by members of a certain social class or profession • the dialect spoken on the island idiolect individual person’s speech habits or vocabulary • an unfamiliar word that was not in my idiolect lie, untruth, falsehood, fabrication, fib, white lie thing that is not true lie false statement made deliberately • He described the statements of his accusers as ‘a pack of lies’. • What Susan said was a blatant lie. untruth something that is presented as being true but is in fact false • This young woman was clearly quite capable of telling untruths when it suited her. 162 Choosing the right word falsehood (formal) lie or untruth • Conspiracy theorists perpetrate falsehoods online. fabrication invented statement, story or account, devised with the intent to deceive • His story of putting it in his car so he could find the real owner later was a complete fabrication. fib (informal) insignificant harmless lie • It shows on your face when you tell a fib. • ‘I haven’t left my desk all day.’ ‘That’s a fib! I can see the raindrops on your coat!’ white lie minor harmless lie, usually told to avoid hurting someone’s feelings • tell little white lies to avoid conflict • Why hadn’t she told a white lie and said the colour was flattering? love, liking, affection, fondness, passion, infatuation, crush strong positive feeling towards someone or something love intense feeling of positive emotion towards, or enjoyment of, a person or thing, especially a passionate feeling of romantic desire and sexual attraction • When Lynn met Paul it was love at first sight. • She was the love of his life. liking feeling of enjoying something or finding someone or something pleasant • He sipped his coffee, which was just to his liking. • She developed a liking for him. affection fond or tender feelings towards someone or something • a man with a deep affection for animals • Twelve-year-old boys don’t usually welcome displays of affection. fondness feeling of affection or preference • gazing with fondness at her two little sons • He developed a fondness for music as a child. passion intense or overpowering emotion, either love for someone, usually of a strong sexual nature, or strong liking or enthusiasm for something • He wanted to experience a grand passion. • Her early passion for painting had developed into a successful career. 163 Grammar Guide infatuation intense but short-lived, often unrealistic love for someone, usually of a romantic or sexual nature • his infatuation with an older student • She had thought she was in love, but it had only been an infatuation. crush (informal) temporary romantic infatuation, especially in teenagers and young people • I was a young girl of eleven with a crush on a film star. • Soon afterwards he met Clare and immediately developed a crush on her. mistake, error, inaccuracy, slip, blunder, faux pas act or judgement that is incorrect or improper mistake incorrect, unwise or unfortunate act or decision caused by bad judgement, lack of information or carelessness • Everyone makes mistakes; just try to learn from them. • Our big mistake was to forget the map. error something that unintentionally deviates from a recognised standard or guide • If it had gone undetected, this dosage error would have had disastrous consequences for the patient. • The leadership made an error in appointing such an outspoken personality to head the committee. inaccuracy something that is incorrect because it has been measured, calculated, copied or conveyed wrongly • I crosschecked the lists and found two inaccuracies, which I corrected. slip minor mistake or oversight, especially one caused by carelessness • There was a slip in the first act, but I don’t think anyone noticed. blunder serious or embarrassing mistake, usually the result of carelessness or ignorance • The young Ghanaian scored another goal after a blunder by Scotland’s defence. faux pas (literary) embarrassing mistake that breaks a social convention • I made a reference to her elder brother, then realised I had committed a faux pas. 164 Choosing the right word mixture, blend, combination, compound, alloy, amalgam thing formed by mixing materials mixture number of elements or ingredients brought together • Add the water and beat until the mixture is light and fluffy. • She felt a mixture of emotions. blend something formed by putting together two or more things to form a new whole in which the original elements lose their distinctness • her little-known first novel, a lively blend of romance and mock-romance • a blend of passion fruit, peach juice, aromatic herbs and spring water combination something formed by the association of two or more things that retain their distinctness • the combination of beauty, wit and charm • A combination of talent and hard work has given the company an edge. compound chemical formed of two or more elements; more generally, something composed of two or more separate parts • volatile chemical compounds • compound words such as ‘ bookstore’ and ‘air conditioning’ alloy term for a metal formed by combining two or more elements • Steel is basically an alloy of iron and carbon. amalgam alloy of mercury with another metal; more generally, something that is a mixture of two or more elements or characteristics • The technique of ‘mercury gilding’ involved using an amalgam of gold and mercury. • The culture of the United States is a complex amalgam of various traditions. motive, incentive, inducement, spur, stimulus, impetus reason or thing that prompts action 165 Grammar Guide motive reason for doing something or behaving in a certain way • a crime that appears to have no motive • Walker stressed the need to maintain the highest standards in this new enquiry, fearing there were ulterior political motives for the investigation. incentive external motive, often some kind of reward, that inspires extra enthusiasm or effort • Seeing a clear path to advancement was the incentive we needed to complete that difficult phase of training. • financial incentives for companies to reduce pollution inducement reward or other benefit intended to persuade someone to do something or to attract someone to a certain course of action • The government offered inducements to homeowners who lived in the flood area to persuade them to relocate to higher ground. • The library’s summer festival will hopefully be an inducement for children to read more. spur thing such as the hope of a reward or the fear of punishment that encourages action, effort or energy • Trade frequently acts as a spur to economic expansion. • Shopkeepers saw sales increase as the street was upgraded, and that in turn was a spur for them to spruce up their stores. stimulus thing that encourages an activity or process to begin, increase or develop • The arrival of new businesses provided the commercial stimulus the town needed. • The possibility of lower interest rates acted as a stimulus to the economy impetus energy or driving force that prompts someone to undertake or accomplish something • In the early 19th century, the impetus for setting up schools came almost exclusively from the Church. • data that gives further impetus to the growing environmentalist movement origin, source, derivation, provenance, root beginning 166 Choosing the right word origin beginning, whether in terms of time, place, situation, or the idea from which something arose • Some of the concepts now in vogue have their origins in the 19th century. • Researchers from overseas often decide not to return to their country of origin. source place, person or thing from which something came into being or was obtained • It is important to trace the source of your error. • Consider the source of the information before you decide whether to trust it. derivation origin or source of something, especially a word, phrase or name • The word ‘candid’ is a derivation from the Latin candidus, meaning white or shining. provenance place of origin of something, or history of ownership of a work of art or artefact • a jade disc of Chinese provenance • Some experts have questioned the provenance and even authenticity of many of the museum’s exhibits. root fundamental cause, basis or origin, especially of a feeling or a problem • Various factors appear to be at the root of the discontent. • The root of the problem lies in lack of communication. problem, mystery, puzzle, riddle, conundrum, enigma issue difficult to solve or person hard to understand problem difficult situation, matter or person • an ongoing problem • problems with the staff mystery event or situation that is difficult to explain, understand or find out about, or a person about whom little is known • the key to understanding the mysteries of the universe • Barry’s comings and goings are unpredictable: he remains a mystery. puzzle problem whose solution requires ingenuity, situation that is difficult to resolve, or someone whose behaviour or motives are difficult to understand • He was almost ready to confront the murderer; one final piece of the puzzle remained. 167 Grammar Guide riddle perplexing or confusing issue • ‘The riddle of Tsar Nicholas II’s remains has been solved,’ the DNA team announced. conundrum something puzzling or confusing that seems to have no solution • The moral dilemma posed a conundrum. enigma someone or something that is not easily explained or understood • Juliet was very much an enigma to him. smell, odour, aroma, bouquet, scent, perfume, fragrance, stink, stench, reek way something smells smell general term, covering neutral, pleasant or unpleasant smells • a black substance that had the most awful smell • the smell of wet mittens odour neutral or unpleasant smell • the rank odour of sweat • Horses can smell dry oats, which for us essentially have no odour. aroma distinctive pleasant smell, especially one related to cooking or food • the heady aroma of roasted coffee beans bouquet characteristic pleasant smell, usually associated with fine wines • the wine has an oaky bouquet scent pleasant, sweet smell, for example, of flowers; characteristic smell given off by an animal • The air was heavy with the scent of blossom. • Badgers can sometimes become nervous if they catch the scent of a stranger. perfume sweet, pleasant and heady smell, especially that of flowers or plants • the perfume of jasmine fragrance sweet pleasant smell, especially a delicate or subtle one • the faint, elusive fragrance of his cologne • The red roses filled the air with their fragrance. stink strong unpleasant smell • the stink of sewage stench strong unpleasant smell, especially one associated with burning or decay • The stench of rotting cabbage hung in 168 Choosing the right word the air. • Rescue workers wore face masks to protect them from the stench. reek strong unpleasant smell • the pungent reek of salted fish subject, topic, subject matter, matter, theme, burden issue under discussion subject issue being discussed, examined or otherwise considered • I didn’t bring up the subject of money with my cousin. • Restoration of the wreck will be the subject of an exhibition at the Maritime Museum this year. topic matter dealt with in writing or discussion • The paper identified four major topics for consideration. • the current hot topic of conversation subject matter subject focused on in a book, film, discussion or other medium • Her favourite subject matter is suburban family life. • a photographer whose subject matter is the aftermath of war matter well-defined area of mutual concern, discussion or correspondence • Let’s take up this matter when we have our schedules in front of us. • I’ll hold, please – it’s an urgent matter. theme distinct recurring and unifying idea in music, literature, art or film • Loyalty and betrayal are the principal themes of this book. burden (literary) main argument in, or gist of, a piece of literature, music or art • The main burden of the book is that the middle classes have lost their moral compass. talent, gift, flair, bent, knack, genius ability to do something well 169 Grammar Guide talent natural ability to do something well • a persuasive speaker with a natural talent for diplomacy • Our company has a great wealth of underutilised talent. gift natural ability, especially an artistic ability or a social skill • Hannah had inherited a gift for music. • He had the rare gift of speaking to the point just at the appropriate moment. flair natural ability to do something well, especially a creative or artistic one • The film director creates a sense of place with masterly flair. bent natural ability, inclination or liking for something • Technical schools are always looking for students who have a resourceful, practical bent. knack intuitive or acquired skill for something • There is a knack to opening the bottle. genius exceptional intellectual or creative ability • Beethoven’s unparalleled genius for the symphonic form type, kind, sort, category, class, species, genre group having a common quality or qualities type group of individuals or items with strongly marked and readily defined similarities • Certain types of bacteria can build up resistance to disinfectants. • The reactor was of the same type as the one used at Chernobyl in 1986. kind group of individuals or items connected by shared characteristics • comparing soils of different kinds • the kind of music danced to in the 1600s sort group of things or people with a common feature • leisure activities of various sorts • What sort of subjects will you be painting? category set or group of things or people that are classified together because of common characteristics • I’m looking for the best deal in each category: desktop, laptop and handheld. • It’s not a usual pudding, but I’d still put it in that category. 170 Choosing the right word class set of things with a property in common • there are other classes of drugs used in the treatment of cardiac arrest • They won eleven medals in the twelve weight classes at the world championships. species taxonomic unit for groups of animals, plants, insects or other organisms • a meadow containing several species of rare orchid genre style or category of painting, writing, dance or other art form • genres such as the thriller and the spy novel • The club promises to showcase quality music of all genres. wage, salary, pay, fee, remuneration, emolument, honorarium, stipend money given for work done wage fixed regular payment made to an employee • The club pays my wages. • a national minimum wage salary fixed regular annual sum, usually paid monthly, especially to a clerical or professional worker • teachers’ salaries • an annual salary of £100,000 pay wage or salary • a month-long strike for better pay and conditions • ‘Equal pay for equal work’ is a slogan of the feminist movement. fee payment made to a professional person by a client • Such lawyers charged high fees and served only the elite. • The costs of expert’s fees are to be met equally by the parties concerned. remuneration payment for work, goods or services • a review body to advise on the proper remuneration for teachers • a need to investigate the levels of remuneration paid to day-care workers emolument (formal) payment for work • Unfortunately, his fame was not accompanied by large emoluments and he died nearly penniless. 171 Grammar Guide honorarium money given in exchange for services for which there is normally no fixed charge • Group members receive a small honorarium in recognition of their expertise and time spent. stipend regular payment or allowance for living expenses, especially one made to a member of the clergy or a student • The priest’s yearly stipend was barely sufficient to live on. work, labour, toil, drudgery sustained effort required to do or produce something work physical or mental effort required to do or achieve something, used of animals and machines as well as people • Most installation programs will do the configuration work for you. • You will have general managers to coordinate your work. labour strenuous work, usually physical • Joseph began a hard life of prayer, fasting and manual labour. • After three hours of litterpicking, the results of our labour were evident. toil tiring, often boring, physical work, usually over a long period • His rough hands bore testimony to a life of toil. drudgery work that is hard and unrewarding, especially work that continues over a long period • the drudgery of sorting, coding, boxing and stacking a warehouse full of files worry, unease, care, anxiety, angst, stress troubled state of mind worry troubled state of mind resulting from concern about current or potential difficulties • I’m beside myself with worry. • She quite forgot her own worries in her concern for him. unease feeling of anxiety or lack of satisfaction with a situation • I felt a sense of unease as soon as the phone rang late that night. • The announcement provoked considerable unease among UN officials. 172 Choosing the right word care object of concern • He began whistling as though he hadn’t a care in the world. • Your good news has banished my cares. anxiety nervous apprehension about a future event or a general fear of possible misfortune • parental anxieties about a child’s academic progress • Although she has been teaching for eight years, she always feels a twinge of anxiety at the beginning of a new year. angst non-specific ongoing worry about the human condition or the state of the world • the angst that accompanies shifts in global power • Only in our youth-obsessed culture could such adolescent angst be of such interest. stress worry and nervous apprehension related to a situation or event • relaxation techniques to help relieve the stress of everyday life • Now that my workload is lighter, I feel less stress. Choosing the right verb Consider the following everyday English verbs of movement: crawl, slither, creep, clamber, stagger, lurch. Each is different, with its own vivid associations. Like other word classes in English, verbs (see chapter 1, page 7) arrived from various linguistic sources, and some initially had roughly the same meaning. But over time, individual verbs have taken on their own sense distinctions, resulting in a richness found only rarely in other languages. Listed below are sets of verbs whose meanings are close. The short definitions and example sentences are intended to suggest, or prompt memory of, which of the alternative verbs might best fit which kind of context. accomplish, achieve, attain, carry out, pull off, realise bring something to a successful conclusion 173 Grammar Guide accomplish carry out or complete something successfully • You don’t accomplish anything by blaming other people. • Mission accomplished, we headed for home. achieve succeed in doing something, usually with effort • three main ways in which the committee hopes to achieve its aims • an example of what can be achieved through good planning attain reach a specific objective • a desire to attain certain goals • attain a full command of the English language carry out perform a task or activity • carry out the instructions to the letter • She found it hard to believe that Jim would carry out his threat. pull off (informal) achieve something impressive, particularly through a combination of skill and luck • The goalkeeper pulled off a fine save. • They pulled off a fine performance despite having missed rehearsals. realise fulfil a specific vision, plan or potential • Why not realise your full potential? • His dream was realised when he signed with Arsenal. agree, concur, acquiesce, consent, assent accept an idea, plan or course of action that has been put forward agree have the same opinion as someone else about a course of action • We agreed to meet at nine o’clock the next morning. • They have agreed in principle to sell off the land. concur agree or reach agreement formally on a specified point • I fully concur with my colleague’s comment. • Do the two sides concur that a settlement can be reached? acquiesce agree to or comply with something or after an initial refusal • Peter was not entirely happy with the proposal, but eventually acquiesced. 174 Choosing the right word consent agree to something or give formal permission for something to happen • consent to the marriage assent approve something formally • The directors assented to the new policy in a statement to the board. annoy, irritate, exasperate, vex, irk cause a mild degree of anger in someone annoy cause impatience or anger in someone • Must you tap your foot when you know how much it annoys me? irritate annoy someone slightly • If this medication irritates your skin, call me right away. exasperate arouse anger or frustration in someone • Exasperated at the lack of progress, he shouted at the team to pull harder. vex annoy someone, especially causing upset or distress • The question about the relative importance of economics and welfare is one that always vexes me. irk annoy someone by being tiresome or tedious • It irked her to see how little attention he paid to her efforts. change, alter, modify, convert, vary, shift, transform, transmute make or become different change make or become different in some way • The society we live in is changing rapidly. • pressure to change public attitudes to health alter change, especially change an aspect of something • try to alter the perception of the city as a cultural desert • Don’t alter the schedule. modify make minor changes or alterations, especially in order to improve something • It is possible to modify even the very oldest of behaviour patterns. • modifying the maths curriculum 175 Grammar Guide convert change something from one form or function to another • the process by which food is absorbed and converted into energy and heat • plans to convert the buildings into luxury apartments vary change within a range of possibilities, or in line with something else, with a suggestion of instability • Opening times may vary with the season. • You can vary the menu according to your taste. shift change from one position or direction to another • The focus of your paper may shift as you write. • For most of us, our native language is alive and constantly shifting. transform make a radical change into a different form • The playground is being transformed into a community garden. • A good teacher can transform the life of a student. transmute change into another form, used especially in technical contexts • The Old Norse word borg, meaning ‘citadel’, was later transmuted into borough. • The ancient alchemists tried to transmute base metals into gold. collect, accumulate, gather, amass, assemble, stockpile, hoard bring dispersed things together collect bring things together, or put a group of similar things together as a hobby • He started collecting stamps at the age of nine. • Our sensory organs collect information about everything around us. accumulate obtain over a period of time • We seem to accumulate objects faster than we can organise them. • An enormous amount of information about the species has been accumulated over the last century. gather bring together things from various locations • go to the forest to gather firewood • She is gathering information on the subject. 176 Choosing the right word amass put a large quantity of things together over time • the growing evidence that is being amassed by investigators • He is thought to have amassed a fortune of hundreds of millions of dollars. assemble bring together in an orderly way • one of the greatest orchestras ever assembled stockpile collect and store things in large amounts for future use • The town stockpiled sand and salt for the roads in case of another cold winter. hoard collect and store in large amounts, often secretly • The squirrels hoarded hundreds of acorns under the porch. • I wondered what had happened to those carefully hoarded letters. complain, object, protest, grumble, grouse, carp, gripe, whine, nag indicate dissatisfaction with something complain express discontent or unhappiness about a situation • Nearby neighbours had complained about the noise and the mess. • He complained bitterly that no one ever took him seriously. object be opposed to something, or express opposition to it • We object strongly to the two proposals. • Sports groups have objected that the plan takes away space once intended to be used as a playing field. protest express strong disapproval or disagreement • a day of action to protest against the proposed fare hikes • From about eight months old, babies are likely to protest loudly at being passed around between people. grumble complain or mutter in a discontented way, sometimes repeatedly or continually • Grumbling, he picked up his brush and got down to work. • She grumbled about the cold coffee. grouse complain regularly and continually, often in a way that is not constructive • grouse about the commercialism of art • ‘These talks are leading nowhere,’ one of the negotiators groused. 177 Grammar Guide carp keep complaining or finding fault, especially about unimportant things • He was a mean employer, carping all the time. • carp about the seating arrangements gripe (informal) complain continually and irritatingly • He was griping about the fact that I had not presented him with an advance copy of the book. • You griped when I was in the house all day, and now that I’ve found a job you’re still unhappy! whine complain in an unreasonable, repeated or irritating way • Stop whining – there’s nothing we can do about it! • She always suggests the cinema, then whines that it’s so expensive. nag find fault with someone regularly and repeatedly • He nagged his sister about her visiting them in the country. copy, reproduce, duplicate, clone, replicate, re-create make something that resembles something else copy make a sample or instance that is the same as something else • Taking a photo is quicker than copying longhand. reproduce make a copy of something by technical means • an attempt to reproduce human speech digitally • No part of this publication may be reproduced without the prior permission of the publisher. duplicate create an identical version of something • Give the notes to my assistant so they can be duplicated. • She had the office key duplicated for the fire and police departments. clone make a near or exact reproduction, especially of a piece of equipment or an organism • any scientist who wishes to clone a human being faces an ethical dilemma • The gene has been cloned and sequenced. replicate create an identical version of something • undocumented experiments that cannot be replicated in the laboratory • The original findings have been successfully replicated by other investigators. 178 Choosing the right word re-create make something that looks the same as something that either no longer exists or exists in a different place • The theatre company has gone all out to re-create the play’s 1970s ambience. • The stories attempt to re-create the magic of childhood. criticise, censure, castigate, blast, condemn, find fault with, pick holes in, nitpick express disapproval of or dissatisfaction with someone or something criticise express disapproval of or dissatisfaction with something • The new policy was strongly criticised by leading charities. • He has criticised the government for not launching an investigation. censure make a formal, often public or official statement of disapproval • The three senators were censured by their peers. • It is not known whether the player will be censured for his bad sportsmanship. castigate (formal) criticise or rebuke someone severely • In her speech she castigated her political opponent for exaggerating the problem. • He was castigated as an alarmist by the rest of the profession. blast (informal) criticise someone severely • She blasts homeowners who waste water during the drought. • The Olympic champion yesterday blasted critics who claim sport is driven by endorsement. condemn give an unfavourable judgement on someone or something • The committee condemned the ruling for denying care to those who need it most. • This breach of medical confidentiality was strongly condemned by the patient’s attorney. find fault with criticise someone, often unfairly • He finds fault with everything I do. • It is difficult to find fault with this entertaining and lively account. 179 Grammar Guide pick holes in look for and find mistakes, particularly in an argument • pick holes in someone’s ideas • I invited them to pick holes in my paper before I did the final version. nitpick find fault, often unjustifiably, with insignificant details • You’d have thought he would be easy to work with, but Maria said he was always nitpicking. • We’re nitpicking now at the difference between the words fundamentally and basically. deduce, infer, assume, reason, conclude, work out, figure out reach a logical conclusion deduce come to a logical conclusion, often without using all the relevant information • While it is relatively easy to deduce a cause from an effect, it is more difficult to predict effects from causes. • From the bustle and activity we deduced that a guest was expected. infer draw a conclusion from specific circumstances or evidence • We can infer from the witty menu that the owner has a sense of humour. assume accept something as true without checking or confirming it • She had always assumed that her mother was born in Paris. • He could have reasonably assumed from what was said that his employment prospects were good. reason consider information and use it to reach a conclusion in a logical way • Scott reasoned that it wouldn’t be Ann knocking at the door, because she had a key. • Either there was no burglar at all, or the burglar was not interested in diamonds, he reasoned. conclude form an opinion or make a judgement after much consideration • The report concluded that a world recession was likely. • They were forced to conclude from the evidence that the case had been mishandled. 180 Choosing the right word work out find a solution or explanation through careful thought or reasoning • Try and work out what the poem is about. • It took me a long time to work out the answers in the maths section. figure out find a solution or reach a conclusion by careful thought or reasoning • Your task is to figure out what this phrase means. • I just can’t figure out what he’s going to do with himself all day long. defeat, beat, conquer, vanquish, overcome, ­triumph over, thrash, trounce, wallop win a victory defeat win a victory over an enemy or competitor, or cause someone or something to fail • The Spartans succeeded in defeating their enemies. • She played a major role in defeating the bill. beat defeat someone in a contest, or succeed in the face of difficulty • ‘I am the champion of the world and will beat him again,’ he said. • After a paralysing accident a month ago, his goal is to walk again, though he realises he will have to beat the odds to do it. conquer defeat and take control of a people in war, or succeed despite difficulty • They vowed to retake their conquered land. • She’s already conquered her toughest career challenge. vanquish defeat someone decisively in a battle or competition • Pakistan emerge victorious and England are once again vanquished. overcome win or succeed after a struggle • After struggling to overcome injuries and a serious illness, she finally got to play before the end of the season. • The effects of centuries of prejudice will not be easily overcome. triumph over succeed against an opponent or against difficult odds • That one person’s letter of protest set off a chain of events, proving that sometimes right can triumph over the big corporations. • He triumphed over a formidable opponent. 181 Grammar Guide thrash gain an easy decisive victory in a contest • Manchester United, who were thrashed in their last game by Liverpool, took the lead. trounce defeat an opponent decisively • In the first-round match the veteran player fired powerful and well-placed groundstrokes to trounce the newcomer. wallop (informal) hit hard; defeat a competitor easily and decisively • Though they got walloped in the first round, they were excited to have finally qualified for the tournament. disagree, differ, argue, dispute, take issue with, contradict, agree to differ, be at odds have or express a difference of opinion with someone disagree have or put forward a different view or opinion • He strongly disagrees with what was said. • I have to disagree since I find the atmosphere quite stifling, not relaxing. differ be different; have different opinions about something • People may well differ on the issue of whether this development is a good or a bad thing. • Accounts differ as to how many were present. argue express disagreement, especially continuously or angrily • My brother and I argue about football all the time. • She knew better than to argue with him when he used that tone of voice. dispute have a heated argument • For years, scholars have disputed this translation. • The two brothers are disputing the terms of their parents’ will. take issue with disagree strongly with a person or an opinion • I would take issue with her view. • It is with regret that I have had to take issue with a fellow member of our committee. contradict argue against the truth or correctness of a statement or claim • Let her tell her story and don’t contradict her. • Important witnesses are contradicting each other’s accounts. 182 Choosing the right word agree to differ stop arguing and accept that the opposing viewpoints are irreconcilable • We might as well agree to differ about that and get along as well as we can. • If after discussion the social worker and client agree to differ with respect to the report’s content, both versions will be recorded. be at odds be in disagreement • The Mayor seems to be at odds with his own officials over this question. disapprove, frown on, object, criticise, condemn, deplore, denounce, censure have an unfavourable opinion of something or someone disapprove give a negative judgement of something based on personal standards • Why do you disapprove so strongly of my choice of car? • My aunt will disapprove if she finds out my sister has moved out. frown on express dislike or disapproval of something • a practice that would be frowned on today • They come from an era when skimpy clothing was frowned on. object be opposed to something, or express opposition • a petition objecting to the proposals • I don’t object to people smoking in their own homes. criticise point out flaws or faults • The retailers have been sharply criticised for putting flyers on every car. • It is important to observe and praise the good things as often as you criticise the child. condemn pass an unfavourable judgement on someone or something • The present system has been widely condemned as unfair and archaic. deplore disapprove of something strongly • We deplore all use of violence. • I deeply deplore the government’s action. denounce criticise or condemn something publicly and harshly • a letter to the Financial Times denouncing the government’s economic strategy • waiting for someone to denounce the wrongdoers 183 Grammar Guide censure make a formal, often public or official, statement of disapproval • A partner with the firm was officially censured for unprofessional conduct. follow, chase, pursue, tail, shadow, stalk, trail go after or behind follow take the same route behind another person • ‘Will you please follow me,’ she said. • He’s usually closely followed by two bodyguards. chase try to reach, catch or overtake another person who is in front • Once a pack of reporters had chased him to his car. pursue make an effort to catch up with a person being followed • decide to pursue the thief tail (informal) follow someone secretly for purposes of surveillance • The report claimed officers tailed him, tapped his phones and screened his mail. shadow follow someone secretly, used especially of spies and detectives • Until he saw the photographs, he had had no idea he was being shadowed. stalk try to get close to a person or hunted animal unobtrusively; follow and criminally harass a person obsessively • be accused of stalking the film star • a cat patiently stalking a bird trail follow tracks or traces left by a person or animal no longer in sight • Luckily the snowfall enabled us to trail the deer. gaze, gape, gawk, ogle, rubberneck, stare look at someone or something steadily or at length gaze look for a long time with unwavering attention • He gazed into her eyes. • People stood around gazing up at the arrivals board. 184 Choosing the right word gape look at someone or something in surprise or wonder, usually with an open mouth • The boys gaped at the sportscar. • Matt gaped in astonishment. gawk (informal) stare stupidly or rudely • There were crowds of people gawking at the sculpture. ogle look steadily at someone to show sexual interest • Don’t let your date see you ogle anyone! rubberneck (informal) stare at someone or something in an over-inquisitive or insensitive way • Rubbernecking drivers slowed in both directions to look at the wreckage. stare look at someone or something directly and intently without turning one’s eyes away • She tried hard not to stare. • He stared in astonishment at the unwashed dishes that covered every surface. get, acquire, obtain, gain, procure, secure come into possession of something get come to have something • He managed to get a job on a building site. • ‘The public will get a raw deal,’ she claimed. acquire come to possess something • the knowledge, skills and understanding that students are expected to acquire • He inherited some property and acquired more through marriage. obtain get something, especially by making an effort or having the necessary qualifications • The best results are obtained from using quality materials. • You can obtain the forms you need from your bank. gain get something desirable through effort, skill or merit • With daily physical therapy, I was gaining mobility in my knee. • Students are encouraged to look for jobs in the summer to gain work experience. procure get something, especially with effort or special care • He procured the spare part he needed by ordering it from a catalogue. 185 Grammar Guide secure get something, especially after using considerable effort to persuade someone to grant or allow it • She finally secured the agreement to buy her first house. • The team has secured significant support from two local firms. guide, conduct, direct, lead, steer, usher show someone the way guide lead someone in the right direction • Another rescue team, guided by a search dog, located a baby that had survived the collapse of the building. conduct take someone to or around a certain place • I was conducted by an attendant through a maze of corridors to an enormous room. direct show or indicate the way • We didn’t see a sign to direct us to the Roman site. lead show other people the way, usually by going ahead of them • She led us into the house and introduced us to her two sisters. steer encourage someone to take a certain course • She steered them around the puddles. usher escort someone to or from a place, especially a seat • She ushered them into her office. harm, damage, hurt, injure, wound weaken or impair someone or something harm cause injury or damage to, have a bad effect on, something or someone • Smoking while pregnant harms the baby. • decisions that will harm the economy damage spoil, break or injure an object so it is less useful, valuable or able to function; have a negative effect on something abstract • The bombings have damaged prospects for a negotiated settlement. 186 Choosing the right word hurt cause physical or mental pain or harm to a person or animal • Laura tripped and fell, but didn’t hurt herself. • His words hurt. injure cause physical harm to a person or animal, usually causing at least a temporary loss of function or use; harm something abstract such as reputation or pride • Two other people were seriously injured in the quake. • He crash-landed his light aircraft but walked away, suffering from nothing more than injured pride. wound inflict physical harm on someone, especially from the use of a weapon, a violent incident, or a serious accident; upset or offend someone • be wounded in battle • He feels wounded by the accusations. hesitate, pause, falter, stumble, waver, vacillate show uncertainty or indecision hesitate pause before doing or saying something, as a result of uncertainty or reluctance • He hesitated for a moment, then walked swiftly to the door. • Please do not hesitate to call me if you have any questions. pause stop doing something briefly before continuing, or wait a moment before doing something • She paused for a moment to recover her self-possession. • Scarcely pausing for thought, she sat herself down at the keyboard and started to play. falter show a loss of confidence, often by speaking with hesitation • the announcer faltered over the news headlines • In such circumstances, our allies might falter in their commitment to the defence treaty. stumble trip; speak or act hesitatingly, confusedly or incompetently • He stumbled over his answer, not knowing what to say. waver become unsure or begin to change from a previous opinion • The defendant never wavered from his story. • He saw the agony in her eyes and his resolve wavered. 187 Grammar Guide vacillate be indecisive or irresolute, changing between one opinion and another • Her mind vacillated between laughing at her fears and expecting something terrible. hinder, block, hamper, hold back, impede, obstruct put difficulties in the way of progress hinder delay or obstruct the development or progress of someone or something • Carrying so many bulky things will hinder your progress. • The completion of the project was hindered by bad weather. block prevent movement through, into or out of something, or prevent something from taking place • The street was blocked for the parade. • Police blocked the tunnel until the fumes had cleared. hamper prevent something from happening normally or as planned • The rescue effort, hampered by foul weather over the weekend, was resumed on Monday. • She claimed her injury did not hamper her in the race. hold back keep something from happening, or restrain someone from doing something • The expense of data collection and analysis is holding back development in this area. • He stopped suddenly and held the child back. impede interfere with the movement, progress or development of someone or something • We had no flashlights, but darkness did not impede our progress. • The two leaders agreed not to let their rival claims to offshore oil fields impede the development of trade. obstruct cause a serious delay in action or progress; block a road or passageway • plead guilty to charges of conspiring to obstruct justice • Obstructing the exit doors can be dangerous. imitate, copy, emulate, mimic, ape adopt the behaviour of another person 188 Choosing the right word imitate copy another person’s behaviour, voice or manner, sometimes to make fun of them • Children learn many skills by imitating their parents. copy do exactly what someone else does • Lennie admired George and tried to copy him. • A puppy will often watch and copy an older dog’s actions. emulate try to equal or surpass someone who is successful or admired • She has a tough act to follow in attempting to emulate her elder sister’s success. • He’s a great team-builder, and one whom I would like to emulate. mimic imitate someone in a deliberate and exaggerated way, especially to amuse people • mimic the teacher’s home counties accent • She whined, mimicking a spoiled child. ape imitate someone in an absurd or grotesque way • ape the lifestyle of the rich and famous increase, expand, enlarge, extend, augment, intensify, amplify make larger or greater increase become or cause to become larger in number, quantity or degree • They increased admission prices by ten per cent last month. • a world of ever increasing financial pressures expand become or cause to become larger or more extensive • Wood expands and contracts with temperature and humidity changes. • We bought the property next door, which gave us space to expand the business. enlarge become, or cause something to become, larger generally, or broaden something in scope and detail • They enlarged the kitchen and created a home office. • The programme was enlarged to include short summer courses for younger children. extend make greater in length or area, longer in time, or otherwise larger • Around the same time, both east and west 189 Grammar Guide breakwaters were extended. • The supermarket has extended its range to include vegan and gluten-free products. augment (formal) add to something to make it larger or more substantial • augment the family income by doing some freelance work • The municipality needs new recruits to augment the existing police force. intensify become, or cause something to become, greater in strength or degree • As fighting intensified, communication links became increasingly critical to the success of the mission. • The incident only intensified her determination to do something about the quality of the instruction her son was receiving. amplify become, or cause something to become, louder, or greater in intensity or scope • The floor and walls amplify the noise. • attempt to amplify positive attitudes and reduce negative ones kill, murder, assassinate, execute, put to death, slaughter, slay, put down, put to sleep deprive of life kill cause the death of a person or animal • Floods have killed at least three people and forced hundreds from their homes. murder commit the crime of taking the life of another person deliberately and not in self-defence • She was found guilty of murdering a teaching colleague. assassinate murder a public figure by a sudden violent attack • A police spokesperson told reporters that a plot to assassinate the pontiff had been foiled. execute take someone’s life as part of a judicial or extrajudicial process • It was possible that the order would come to execute the prisoner. put to death deliberately take someone’s life in accordance with a legal death sentence • put to death for treason 190 Choosing the right word slaughter kill farm animals for food, or kill a person or people brutally • He said he’d slaughtered the calf humanely. • Hundreds of soldiers were slaughtered in the offensive. slay (formal or literary) kill a person or animal • Cain plotted to slay his brother Abel. put down or put to sleep kill a sick or injured animal • Some of the animals were beyond help and had to be put down. make, produce, create, fashion, manufacture bring something into existence make bring something into existence • The concern is the top of the downhill course, where it is impossible to make artificial snow. • Both bottles are made from the same recyclable plastic. produce make something in large quantities or in a commercial setting • The northern oil facility produces 5,000 gallons per day. create make something using imagination and artistic skill, or cause something to exist • creating a work of fiction on this subject may present challenges • a building project designed to create employment and training opportunities fashion make something by shaping and working raw materials, especially when using only the hands or handheld tools • an exquisite brooch fashioned from mother-of-pearl and gold manufacture make something in large numbers, usually by machine in a factory • a plant manufacturing synthetic rubber malign, defame, slander, libel, vilify say or write something damaging about someone malign criticise someone or something in a spiteful and misleading way • The initiative had already been much maligned in the press. • You’re maligning a man who was once your colleague and a friend. 191 Grammar Guide defame make an attack on someone’s reputation with a view to damaging it • The lawyer says his former partner defamed him on a television news programme. • The company director explained, ‘Our competitors have defamed our character and called us pirates.’ slander (legal term) make false accusations in speech that are damaging to someone’s reputation • Tensions remain high between the two countries, with each side slandering the other. • The former employee claimed the company had slandered her. libel (legal term) make false and damaging accusations about someone in writing, signs or images • the detective claims that he was libelled in a television documentary vilify make viciously damaging statements about someone • They maintain the answer to the problem of homelessness is not to vilify the vulnerable. • The candidate has been vilified as a toff with no experience, making use of his connections. mistreat, abuse, ill-treat, maltreat, ill-use treat someone or something wrongly or badly mistreat treat someone or something badly or roughly • It was clear that some prisoners had been mistreated. • Children should be taught that mistreating animals is unacceptable. abuse treat a person or animal cruelly or violently, especially on a regular or habitual basis • He was given a prison sentence for abusing his son. • She has been accused of abusing the animals in her care. ill-treat or maltreat behave cruelly towards a person or animal • If one child in a family is maltreated, others in the same family are at high risk. ill-use treat someone cruelly or unkindly • With a feeling of being ill-used, he started to clear up the remains of last night’s dinner. 192 Choosing the right word misuse, abuse, misappropriate, misapply use something for an inappropriate purpose misuse put something to an inappropriate use • The former CEO is charged with misusing government subsidies. abuse use in a wrong or inappropriate way something that should be used responsibly • A handful of cynical local officials have behaved deplorably by abusing their powers. • She admitted to having abused drugs and alcohol. misappropriate take something, especially money, dishonestly and use it improperly or illegally • He was sentenced to twelve years in jail on charges of misappropriating company funds for personal use. misapply use something badly or wrongly • He said the appeals court ‘ disregarded the facts and misapplied the law’. nullify, abrogate, annul, repeal, invalidate, negate put an end to the effective existence of something nullify make something legally invalid or ineffective, or overturn something • Only the courts can nullify the decision. • The country’s military rulers nullified national elections after prodemocracy candidates won a landslide. abrogate (formal) end an agreement or contract formally and publicly • The President abrogated the Intermediate-Range Nuclear Forces (INF) Treaty with Russia. • We cannot abrogate our international obligations. annul declare something officially or legally invalid or ineffective • A court on Wednesday annulled the decree, saying it was illegal. • Many parties have called for the election results to be annulled because of alleged fraud. 193 Grammar Guide repeal end a law officially • We would like to repeal the ban on hunting with hounds. invalidate deprive something of its legal or other force or value • Failure to disclose all relevant changes may invalidate your insurance policy. • Does the result of this latest poll invalidate the findings of the earlier survey? negate (formal) make something ineffective • This argument does not negate the point I am making. object, protest, demur, remonstrate, expostulate indicate opposition to something object be opposed to something, or express opposition to it • Two companies objected strongly to the proposals. • I don’t object to people smoking in the privacy of their own homes. protest express strong disapproval of or disagreement with something, or refuse to obey or accept something, often by making a formal statement or taking action in public • a peaceful demonstration of several hundreds of thousands protesting against the war • On the other side of the door, he heard Anne protesting loudly at having to meet with him. demur raise objections in a hesitant or tentative way • In response to Alan’s offer, they at first politely demurred, but finally succumbed to his persuasion. • Janet was invited to go, but demurred, preferring to stay at home. remonstrate reason or argue forcefully with someone against something • ‘You don’t mean that!’ she remonstrated. • The court heard that the shop owner had remonstrated with the couple for unruly behaviour on his premises. expostulate express strong disagreement or disapproval, or attempt to dissuade someone from doing something • ‘Look here, Peter, don’t be ridiculous!’ expostulated Cynthia. • Now and again someone would try to expostulate with him, but he never changed his mind. 194 Choosing the right word overlook, neglect, forget, omit fail to do something overlook fail to notice something or someone as a result of inattention, preoccupation or haste • Despite the value of their work, caregivers’ needs are often overlooked. • You seem to be overlooking one central fact. neglect fail to give proper attention to someone or something, or fail to do something, especially owing to carelessness, forgetfulness or indifference • The previous speaker neglected to mention that unemployment has actually fallen. • They accused industry officials of neglecting safety standards. forget fail, or fail to remember, to give due attention to someone or something • Don’t forget to bring a passport-sized photo with you. • I forgot to tell you that we’re bringing the dog. omit fail to do something; leave out • I omitted the smaller beauty spots from the list to save space. • The organisers somehow omitted to inform members of the time of the meeting. perform, do, carry out, fulfil, discharge, execute complete an action or task perform carry out an action or accomplish a task, especially when this requires skill or care, or is part of a set procedure • Six patients had the procedure performed under local anaesthesic. • Each child was to perform the same task within the specified length of time. do complete an action or accomplish a task • I’ve got a lot of admin to do tomorrow. • A robot will do anything you ask it to. carry out complete an action or task • Carry out the plan as we agreed. fulfil do what is necessary for the successful accomplishment or realisation of something planned, promised or anticipated 195 Grammar Guide • promise to fulfil the request on time • The course will fulfil a requirement for his degree. discharge (formal, of a responsibility) complete successfully • The people who take on the duties must be competent to discharge them. execute put an instruction or plan into effect, or complete an action or procedure that requires skill and expertise • Once a plan is approved, the agency will execute it. pull, drag, draw, haul, tow, tug, yank move something towards oneself or in the same direction as oneself pull move something towards oneself or in the same direction as oneself • They pulled their sledge ten miles without skis. • If you pull the cord, your light will come on. drag move something large or heavy with effort across a surface • drag the crate over to the car • a scraping sound of something being dragged along the ground draw pull something with a smooth movement • I reached out and drew her gently towards me. • He drew the note from his pocket. haul pull something with a steady strong movement, often involving considerable effort • a train hauled by a steam locomotive • He grasped the narrow sill and hauled himself up. tow pull something along behind by means of a rope or chain • The two boats were towed into port. • We had to tow the damaged car back to the repair shop. tug pull at something with a sharp forceful movement, without necessarily moving the object • Frantically, I tried to tug my foot free. • The child approached and tugged at his arm, whining, ‘I want to go home, Daddy.’ yank pull something suddenly and sharply with a single strong movement • He yanked the cable from the hook. • When the child stepped off the curb, she yanked him back. 196 Choosing the right word question, quiz, interrogate, grill, give the third degree ask for information question ask someone for information, especially formally or officially and on a specific topic • Callers are questioned in detail about their symptoms. quiz subject someone to persistent questions • Alix was being quizzed about her new boyfriend. interrogate question someone systematically and intensively in a formal or official context, for example, in a court case • Police are interrogating two men and a woman arrested on Thursday. grill (informal) question someone intensively • Lawyers on both sides grilled a DNA expert about his analysis of the blood found in the vehicle. give the third degree (informal) question someone intensively, especially in an aggressive way • My mother gave me the third degree whenever I was out late. recoil, flinch, quail, shrink, wince draw back in fear or distaste recoil move back suddenly and violently or react instinctively with fear, pain or disgust • As the snake got closer to her, she instinctively recoiled. • My legs were bare, and I recoiled in pain from the burning leather of the car seat. flinch make a usually small backward physical movement because of fear or pain, or to avoid confronting something unpleasant • He flinched at the needle’s prick. • I’m not a coward, and I don’t flinch from trouble. quail tremble or cower with fear or apprehension • Her voice was steady, but she quailed inwardly. • Pat quailed at the thought of being caught. 197 Grammar Guide shrink move away physically from something because of fear or disgust, or feel reluctance to do something because of fear or apprehension • She shrank away in undisguised terror. • It was not the work I shrank from on my uncles’ farm, but the lack of freedom. wince make an involuntary movement away from something in response to a stimulus such as pain or embarrassment • He shook his head and winced as she touched the cut. • Charles winced at the thought of what he must look like in his ridiculous costume. recommend, advise, advocate, counsel, suggest put forward ideas to someone deciding on a course of action recommend suggest something approvingly • The report recommended a number of changes. • I would recommend that you try growing the following plant varieties that are suited to shade. advise propose a certain course of action, or give advice in a relatively open and objective way • Your lawyer can advise you on the matters mentioned in this leaflet. • I would strongly advise against buying this model. advocate support or speak in favour of something • They have never used, nor advocated the use of, violence. • We advocate the teaching of fire safety practices, starting with very young children. counsel (formal or literary) advise someone on a course of action • Her cousin counselled Marie to delay her decision until she had had time to think things over. • The team manager counselled patience as the best strategy in the forthcoming match. suggest propose something in a tentative way • I suggest that we open the subject for discussion. • This issue is suggested as an area for further research. renew, recondition, renovate, restore, revamp improve the condition of something 198 Choosing the right word renew replace something that is worn, broken, or no longer suitable for use • The roof leaked badly and had to be renewed. • Bones usually constantly renew and rebuild themselves, but when someone has osteoporosis this doesn’t happen. recondition return a machine or appliance to a good condition or working state by means of repairs or replacement of parts • reconditioned used cars • the workshop where they recondition the aircraft engines renovate get something into a better state by means of repairs, redecoration or remodelling • newly renovated offices • money needed to renovate crumbling school buildings restore return something to its original state after it has been damaged or has fallen into a poor condition • a fully restored flour mill dating to 1830 • The painting is newly cleaned and restored. revamp improve the appearance, condition or structure of something by making sometimes superficial changes • a construction programme to revamp the city’s shabby waterfront • As the airline revamped its business, the workforce was reduced by about 900. overhaul return something to its original or working state by means of extensive repairs, changes or adjustments • We stayed in the town while the ship was being overhauled. • Industry analysts had expected the company to overhaul its corporate structure. refurbish bring something to a cleaner, brighter, more functional state • It would cost about one million less to refurbish the school than to build a new one. • refurbish the kitchen by buying new appliances ridicule, deride, laugh at, mock, send up belittle by making fun of someone or something ridicule make fun of or mock someone or something in a contemptuous way • His feat has been ridiculed by reporters, who 199 Grammar Guide question whether he truly swam the whole distance, or whether he went some of the way in his support boat. deride ridicule or show contempt for someone or something • Critics have derided his recent novels, but he still commands huge advances. laugh at make scornful fun of someone or something • People laughed at our bulky winter jackets, but at least when the sun went down we were warm. mock treat someone or something with scorn, often by cruel mimicking • It’s easy to mock, but you try doing it! send up (informal) parody or mimic someone or something • We’d mercilessly send up Dad’s complete incompetence with tools, but he was a good sport about it. safeguard, protect, defend, guard, shield keep safe from actual or potential damage or attack safeguard prevent something or someone from being harmed, badly treated, or lost • They promised to safeguard local industry while promoting a free-market approach. • measures to safeguard our children against bicycle injuries protect keep someone or something from harm or damage • advice on protecting your skin against sun damage • efforts to protect areas of outstanding beauty from overuse defend ward off an actual or threatened attack • Fresh troops were sent in to defend the beleaguered capital. • Charlie defended himself well, and eventually beat off his attackers. guard work to prevent damage, loss or attack through vigilance and taking defensive measures • The main prison was guarded by armed officers. • Guard against misuse of your credit card. shield prevent harm, damage or attack by using a physical barrier or by intervening in a protective way • shield young 200 Choosing the right word children from alarming news bulletins • Dark glasses shielded his eyes from the sun. steal, pinch, filch, nick, purloin, pilfer, embezzle, misappropriate take property unlawfully steal take something that belongs to someone else, illegally or without the owner’s permission • a 1992 robbery in which more than £20 million was stolen from a Geneva bank pinch (informal) steal something • Who’s pinched my wallet? filch (informal) steal something furtively and opportunistically, usually a small item or something of little value • He filched the wood he needed from his neighbour’s garden. nick (informal) steal something, usually of relatively little value • My bike’s been nicked! purloin (formal) steal something, sometimes used humorously or euphemistically • They pledge to prosecute sales of purloined software, pirated videos, and the like. • The former weapons inspector told how he had once caught a member of his team purloining a topsecret document. pilfer steal small items of little value, especially habitually • He accused the children of pilfering fruit from his stand. • It was estimated that 25 per cent of food sent to the refugee camps was being pilfered and sold on the black market. embezzle take for improper or illegal personal use money or property that has been given in trust by others • The former executive embezzled company funds and will be prosecuted. misappropriate take something, especially money, dishonestly or to use it for an improper or illegal purpose • The treasurer insisted that no company money had been misappropriated and used for personal expenses. • The defendant was found guilty of misappropriating public funds. 201 Grammar Guide teach, educate, train, instruct, coach, tutor, school, drill impart knowledge or skill in something teach impart knowledge or skill to someone by instruction or example • She taught maths at the school for twenty-one years. • He taught me a great deal about crosswords, and I taught him how to swim. educate increase the knowledge or develop the abilities of someone by formal teaching or training, especially in a school or college context • a cost-effective way of educating children to meet their individual needs • The police stress that they want to educate bad drivers as much as bring them to court. train teach the skills necessary for a task or job by means of instruction, observation and practice • It is important for professionals to be trained to work with volunteers. • We hired new staff and trained them in skills ranging from bookkeeping to business administration. instruct teach someone a subject, methodology or skill, not necessarily in a school or college context • a manual instructing users how to run the computer software • get a professional to instruct us in scuba-diving coach give special instruction to one person or a small group of people, especially in preparation for an exam, or to teach sporting, artistic or life skills • On Saturdays, I used to coach the local rugby team. tutor give someone individual instruction in a subject or skill • A native French speaker, he has been hired to tutor five students after school for their French exam. school train someone in a skill or area of expertise in a thorough and detailed way • She had been schooled in good manners by her parents. 202 Choosing the right word drill teach something to someone by means of repeated exercises and practice • The most common intonation patterns should be drilled early in the course. • The recruits were drilled endlessly on the parade ground. tear, rend, rip, split pull or come apart by force tear pull something apart, either by accident or on purpose, or come apart • He tore the paper into little strips. • She was always climbing trees and tearing her clothes. rend pull something apart violently, or be pulled apart violently • Something exploded with a sound of rending metal and shattering glass. rip tear something with a sudden rough action, accompanied by a distinctive noise, especially accidentally • With one determined movement, she ripped open the envelope. • You can’t wear those flimsy clothes skateboarding – if you fall off, you’ll rip them to shreds. split divide something with a single movement, usually by force and into two parts • he was splitting wood to start a fire • Split the cake in half horizontally and sandwich it together with jam and buttercream. throw, chuck, fling, heave, hurl, toss, cast send an object through the air throw use a physical movement to cause something to go through the air • Fred applauded and threw his hat into the air. • Police used blue-dyed water after a few pro-democracy protesters threw petrol bombs at passing vehicles. chuck (informal) throw something in a reckless or aimless way • I chucked the application forms in the bin. 203 Grammar Guide fling throw something fast using a lot of force • She flung herself face down on the bed. • Johnny flung aside his jacket and raced to help his brother. heave (informal) pull or throw something large or heavy • He heaved the massive, rusty door open. hurl throw something with great force • Demonstrators hurled stones at the police. • His opponent seized him and hurled him to the ground. toss throw something small or light in a casual or careless way • One of the children tossed a ball high in the air. • David sat back in his armchair, tossing aside his magazine. cast (literary) throw something in a particular direction • He was cast overboard by the force of a huge wave. try, attempt, endeavour, strive make an effort to do something try make an effort or an attempt to do or achieve something • I tried so many times to convince her to go, but it was useless. • I will try to get the report to you by Tuesday. attempt make an effort to do something, especially without much expectation of success • There are various theories that attempt to explain the phenomenon of dreaming. • Several climbers had already attempted the ascent, without success. endeavour make a serious and sincere effort to do or achieve something • They endeavoured to include every single family in the history of the town. strive make persistent efforts to achieve something • At this hotel we are constantly striving to improve the level of service to our guests. • Competing firms must strive to satisfy their customers or they will not prosper. 204 Choosing the right word use, employ, make use of, utilise put something to use use put something into action or service • In photography, different lenses are used for different purposes. • When talking about computers we use the word ‘ hardware’ to describe the machine and its accessories. employ make use of something such as a tool or a resource • the high-pressure selling techniques sometimes employed by doorto-door salespeople • There are seven base metals that are commonly employed in the making of coins and artefacts. make use of use what is readily available, especially in a sensible or economical way • A split-level house makes maximum use of land. • Members of staff are encouraged to make use of the new health centre before or after work, or during their lunch break. utilise (often formal) use something in a way that takes advantage of its potential • Karate is a method of fighting that utilises all parts of the body as weapons. • We need to ensure that the country’s varied and rich reserves are utilised in the most efficient way. want, desire, wish, long, yearn, covet, crave seek to have, do or achieve something want feel a need or desire for something • What do you want to do this summer? • All I wanted was to pass my driving test and buy my first car. desire want something very strongly • He needed to conquer his phobia if he was to lead the normal, happy life he so desired. 205 Grammar Guide wish have a strong, sometimes unrealistic, desire to have or to do something • ‘I wish I could live in a big apartment with high ceilings,’ he said. • ‘I do wish we could help her somehow,’ sighed Christine. long have a strong desire for someone or something, especially something difficult to achieve • We’ve all been longing to see him. • She’d been longing for peace and quiet so that she could finish her book. yearn want something very much, especially with a feeling of sadness when it seems unlikely that it can ever be obtained • people who yearn to be free covet have a strong desire to possess something, especially something that belongs to someone else • This is his third failure to get the job he so covets. • He covets his brother’s sportscar. crave want something very much, especially when this desire is physical • We’d been driving all day and craved a hot meal. • Will craved the attention of his fans. yield, capitulate, submit, succumb, surrender give in yield give way to something such as force, pressure, entreaty or persuasion • The government would not yield to pressure, she promised. • Many people yield to the temptation to smoke although they realise the health implications. capitulate stop resisting a superior force, especially one that seems unbeatable • If we capitulate to these demands, we will lose what we have worked so hard to gain. submit accept someone else’s authority or will, especially reluctantly or under pressure • We don’t intend to submit to that kind of pressure. • The defeated army had no choice but to submit. succumb give in to something owing to weakness or the failure to offer effective opposition • In 1239 the city succumbed 206 Choosing the right word to Tartar invasion. • The actor, who once famously turned his back on Hollywood, has succumbed to temptation by taking a role in a blockbuster film. surrender give way to the power of another person and stop offering resistance, usually after active opposition • Still the enemy refused to surrender. • Two of the suspects walked out of the woods and surrendered to the authorities. 207 208 chapter 8 Commonly confused words and word pairs mrs malaprop: If I reprehend any thing in this world, it is the use of my oracular tongue, and a nice ­derangement of epitaphs! Richard Brinsley Sheridan The Rivals (1775) The mistaken use of a word for a similar-sounding one is known as a malapropism, after the character of Mrs Malaprop in Sheridan’s comedy The Rivals (1775), who excels at this sort of error, to humorous effect. An earlier literary personification of this kind of misspeaking is Dogberry in Shakespeare’s Much Ado About Nothing (1598), though his name has less currency today. Of course, many words in English resemble one another in spelling, sound or some other feature, while being unrelated or only partly related in meaning, so mistakes are all too easy to make. The word groups in this chapter give some hints as to possible pitfalls. Some are more obvious than others, but are included nonetheless, for good measure. Whatever arrangement of epithets (adjectives), or indeed ‘derangement of epitaphs’, one has in mind, it is always advisable to take care. As a writer, it is doubtless amusing to exercise one’s wit, even at a fictional character’s expense, but perhaps more awkward to end up on the receiving end of the joke. 209 Grammar Guide accept and except These words with similar pronunciations have no other features in common. ⚪⚪ Accept functions only as a verb. It means variously ‘take (something offered)’, ‘believe’ or ‘agree to’, as in We cannot accept [not except] such a pathetic excuse. ⚪⚪ Except can be a preposition (see chapter 1, page 26) meaning ‘to the exclusion of ’, as in All students except [not accept] the freshers are eligible. It’s also a conjunction (see chapter 1, page 26) meaning ‘if it were not for the fact that’ and ‘otherwise than’, as in I would have finished the course except [not accept] that I became ill at the end of term. The demonstrators did not quieten down except [not accept] to regroup and create new slogans for later use. Finally, it’s a verb used most often in the passive voice in the meaning ‘leave out’ or ‘exclude’, as in Only children were excepted [not accepted] from attendance. adapt and adopt These similar-sounding verbs are unrelated in meaning. ⚪⚪ Adapt means ‘change to meet requirements’, ‘adjust’ or ‘rewrite’, as in adapt [not adopt] the cottage to a year-round dwelling flora and fauna that had adapted [not adopted] to an arid climate adapt [not adopt] the novel for television. ⚪⚪ Adopt means ‘legally bring up (another’s child)’, ‘choose and decide to use’ or ‘assume (a behaviour pattern)’, as in adopt [not adapt] two boys 210 Commonly confused words and word pairs adopt [not adapt] a new ideology adopt [not adapt] an attitude of superiority. Note that both adapt and adopt can be either transitive or intransitive (see chapter 1, page 8). adjacent and adjoining These adjectives are similar but not identical in meaning. ⚪⚪ ⚪⚪ Two houses are said to be adjoining when they are next to each other with a common wall. And, adjoining tables are next to each other end to end, forming one long unit. In other words, adjoining items join or touch. Houses that are adjacent, on the other hand, can have a space between them or even be on opposite sides of a road, so long as there is nothing significant between them (for example, another house) and they are close enough for someone to pass easily from one to the other. Similarly, adjacent tables are next to each other but not necessarily touching. Note also that adjoining, when used as a present participle, can govern an object (the house adjoining ours), whereas adjacent needs the addition of to (the house adjacent to ours). adverse and averse These adjectives have related meanings but are used in different constructions. Both words mean ‘opposed’ in different ways. ⚪⚪ Adverse is normally used before an abstract noun such as circumstances or conditions when they are unfavourable or likely to cause difficulties: His tweet has brought them some adverse publicity. ⚪⚪ Averse describes a person who is disinclined to do something or has a strong dislike for something. Sometimes 211 Grammar Guide it is used in the negative with a touch of irony. The pattern is averse to, as in He is not averse to eating out. Averse is never used attributively (that is to say, before a noun, see chapter 1, page 19), as adverse normally is. affect and effect These words not only sound similar but are also very close in meaning. ⚪⚪ In everyday conversation and writing, affect is usually a verb meaning ‘influence’ or ‘change’. Something that, or someone who, affects another person or thing, influences and/or changes that other person or thing. The weather is unlikely to affect the result. The new bus schedules won’t affect me. I drive to work. ⚪⚪ Effect, on the other hand, in everyday use, is usually a noun meaning ‘change’, ‘influence’ or ‘changed state’. When someone or something does something to another person or thing, the result is an effect. What would be the likely effect of raising the price by £10? The effect was instantaneous: everyone fell silent. Effect is often used in the phrase have an effect on (which is very similar in meaning to affect): The weather is unlikely to have any effect on the result. In formal English, effect can also be used as a verb meaning ‘succeed in carrying out’: The thieves effected an entry by smashing the lock on the back door of the house. It’s worth bearing in mind, though, that someone can effect only a thing like an entry, a change or an escape (whereas someone can affect either a person or a wider range of things). 212 Commonly confused words and word pairs afflict and inflict The difference between these related words is largely one of how they are used in constructions. Afflict and inflict both express the idea of causing pain or trouble for someone or something. The chief difference between these verbs is in how they are used in grammatical constructions. ⚪⚪ A person inflicts something unpleasant on someone or something: They promoted measures to avoid inflicting further harm on the environment. ⚪⚪ But a thing afflicts someone, or, more usually, a person is afflicted (in the passive, see chapter 1, page 15) with or by something unpleasant: The population was afflicted by a series of natural disasters. allusion, delusion and illusion The common sounds in these words belie the differences in their meanings. While all three words can be traced back to the Latin verb ludere, which means ‘play’, their modern meanings are quite distinct. Allusion and illusion are the closest in sound but the furthest apart in sense, while delusion shares some meaning with illusion. ⚪⚪ An allusion is an indirect reference to a person, thing or event: The story contains allusions to her childhood in Africa. ⚪⚪ An illusion is something that deceives the senses or mind: The shimmering effect above a hot road is an optical illusion. By shutting himself in his room for hours, he kept up an illusion of studying hard. 213 Grammar Guide ⚪⚪ A delusion is something falsely believed, often to the believer’s disadvantage (while an illusion is a wrong impression received): Visitors often labour under the delusion that the weather is always hot here. already and all ready These word forms have distinct functions and meanings, and slightly different pronunciations. Already and all ready don’t mean the same thing, so they’re not interchangeable. ⚪⚪ Already, an adverb, means ‘at a time earlier than expected’, as in When we got there they’d already left. Adverbial already usually either precedes or follows a verb, and is pronounced in short syllables. ⚪⚪ All ready means ‘all or totally prepared’, as in Are the provisions all ready for tomorrow? It typically follows a noun and a linking verb as a predicate adjective (see chapter 1, page 20), and the all receives a slight stress in pronunciation that is missing from already. alternate and alternative These adjectives have related but different meanings. ⚪⚪ The word alternative is often used to mean ‘available as a possible substitute’, as in The band decided to go with the song’s alternative title. (Note that in American English alternate is the preferred word in this context.) Alternative also has an established sense of ‘mutually exclusive’, as in 214 Commonly confused words and word pairs Scientists are examining two alternative theories as to the origin of the universe. A more modern meaning of alternative is ‘departing from or challenging traditional norms’, for example He is an enthusiast for alternative therapies. ⚪⚪ Alternate, on the other hand, tends to mean ‘every second’, as in The year groups come into school on alternate days. although and however These words have similar meanings, but belong to different parts of speech and have a different emphasis. These two words both have the function of showing up a contrast. ⚪⚪ Although is a conjunction, and tends to soften the contrast. For example, We got along very well, although we were from different backgrounds. Here, although, meaning ‘despite the fact that’, is used to play down any expectation of contrast. The positive statement comes first in the sentence, but the effect would be the same if the clauses were reversed. If the subordinate (or dependent) clause (see chapter 2, page 48) came first, this would suggest from the outset that one would be wrong if one thought this might cause us not to get along. Although is not usually followed by a comma, but it is often preceded by one. ⚪⚪ However, on the other hand, is an adverb, and tends to emphasise a contrast. For example, We were from different backgrounds. However, we got along very well. 215 Grammar Guide Here, the initial sentence sets up an expectation: we were from different backgrounds and so might not be expected to get along. The purpose of however is to introduce a statement that contrasts with the first. However in this sense (but not when it is used in phrases such as however hard you try) is always set apart by commas when it comes in the middle of a sentence: She, however, had other ideas. It can also be preceded by a stronger punctuation mark when it comes in the middle of a sentence: The mistake was a very obvious one; however, the examiner still managed to miss it. although and though These words have very similar meanings. In many cases although and though are interchangeable. ⚪⚪ Although is a conjunction meaning ‘in spite of the fact that’. For example, Although she is clever, she lacks emotional intelligence. In this example, although could be safely replaced by though. ⚪⚪ Though, however, is generally more versatile, in that it can occupy different positions in a sentence with more grammatical flexibility. Though can function as either a conjunction or an adverb. It’s the only option in the phrases as though and even though, and in the following types of uses: I don’t like them, though. It is true, though, that they have been kind to us. The chair, though damaged, could still be used. We enjoyed the day outside, cold though it was. 216 Commonly confused words and word pairs altogether and all together These word forms have different meanings and are distinct parts of speech. These words mean different things. ⚪⚪ Altogether means ‘completely’, ‘in total’ or ‘on the whole’, and is an adverb: It was an altogether spectacular tennis championship. Altogether seventeen people are missing. ⚪⚪ All together means ‘everyone together’ or ‘all at the same place or time’; it functions as an adjectival phrase. Usually the word all can be removed without affecting the grammar or the sense: They arrived (all) together at nine. The plates are (all) together on a separate shelf. ambiguous and ambivalent These adjectives share some of the same sense, but differ in their application. Both words describe uncertainty in understanding what is meant. ⚪⚪ ⚪⚪ Ambivalent is used of people and their attitudes. If people are ambivalent about, for example, Scottish independence, they are unsure about the advantages and disadvantages and cannot easily decide between the various arguments. In contrast, ambiguous refers to information or context. If a person makes an ambiguous statement about, for example, nuclear power, then the statement has more than one possible interpretation. 217 Grammar Guide amount and number These nouns are interchangeable in some informal contexts, but should be distinguished in formal writing. ⚪⚪ Amount is normally used with singular words that have no plural, that is, so-called non-count nouns (see chapter 1, page 5), such as coal, happiness and warfare: a large amount of coal; any amount of happiness. ⚪⚪ In contrast, number is used with plural count nouns, such as books, questions, ships and cheeses (= types of cheese): a large number of books; an excessive number of questions; a fair number of cheeses. Note that, in everyday speech, amount is sometimes used when number is strictly called for: a large amount of books. It is better to avoid this usage in formal speaking and writing. anxious and eager These adjectives have some overlap in meaning but different overtones. Anxious and eager both refer to feelings regarding a future event. In informal contexts, these two adjectives appear interchangeably: I am anxious to attend the concert. I am eager to attend the concert. ⚪⚪ In writing, and in correct speaking, it is better to use eager when there are feelings of eagerness or enthusiasm, as in Sheila has never been more eager for the school year to start. ⚪⚪ And anxious is more appropriate when there are feelings of anxiety, for example We are anxious to hear news of the missing students. 218 Commonly confused words and word pairs anymore and any more These word forms have distinct meanings and are different parts of speech. ⚪⚪ Anymore is an adverb: She doesn’t live here anymore. Don’t you eat out anymore? ⚪⚪ The two-word any more is a common collocation (juxtaposition) of two determiners (see chapter 2, page 33) and refers to any unspecified additional amount, as in Is there any more pasta left? anyone and any one These word forms have distinct senses. ⚪⚪ Anyone is somewhat more common than anybody (which has the same meaning). They both are used only of human beings after a negative (see chapter 2, page 44) or a question: Has anyone seen my pen? They don’t let in anyone who doesn’t have ID. ⚪⚪ The words any and one are written separately as any one when they mean any one particular person or thing: Any one of them could have started the fire. The tables are all free, so you can sit at any one you like. aural and oral These adjectives are pronounced in a similar way but their meanings are distinct. These two words are often confused because they are homonyms (sound the same) and have meanings that are close. 219 Grammar Guide ⚪⚪ ⚪⚪ Aural relates to hearing and sounds. An aural test is an examination testing hearing or comprehension by listening. Oral, on the other hand, relates to speaking or the mouth. In an oral test the answers are spoken rather than written. avenge and revenge These related words cannot always be used interchangeably, and differ as to the parts of speech they can be assigned. Both these words are associated with inflicting harm to repay a wrong and related to the abstract noun vengeance. The differences between them have to do with grammar and shades of meaning, though there is a lot of overlap in meaning, dictated by usage over time. ⚪⚪ Avenge is a verb, meaning ‘inflict harm in return for (a wrong)’, and implying getting some sort of justice on someone’s behalf: They avenged their sister’s murder by securing life imprisonment for the perpetrator. ‘When will our consciences grow so tender that we will act to prevent human misery rather than avenge it?’ Eleanor Roosevelt, ‘My Day’ (February 16, 1946) ⚪⚪ Revenge is a verb but more usually a noun. It too implies hurting someone in response to an injury, perhaps with overtones of malice. Traditionally it suggests getting even with an adversary by inflicting punishment or harm: In an act of revenge for the bombing of our ship, the navy shelled the terrorists’ training camps. Bands of irregular soldiers set out to revenge their leader’s assassination. 220 Commonly confused words and word pairs ‘Punishment is not for revenge, but to lessen crime and reform the criminal.’ Elizabeth Fry, Note among her papers (1848) avoid, evade and elude These three verbs have related meanings but vary in tone and nuance. ⚪⚪ Avoid is neutral in tone. If one avoids a responsibility, one takes measures to prevent it from being necessary. Avoid can be followed by a verbal noun ending in -ing, as in We avoided having to pay. ⚪⚪ If one evades a responsibility, on the other hand, one gets out of it in an underhand or deceitful way. Unlike avoid, evade must be followed by an ordinary noun: We evaded payment. ⚪⚪ Elude implies clever or ingenious avoidance: We eluded our pursuers by hiding in the rafters of an old hay barn. It also has an extended meaning ‘fail to be recalled by’, as in Her name eludes me. await and wait for These word forms are almost identical in meaning. Await is slightly more formal in register. Someone awaits or waits for test results or the arrival of a teacher, and travels to exotic lands where great adventures wait or await. However, await is not used with a for construction, for example, Let’s review our notes as we await the judge. Let’s review our notes as we wait for the judge to arrive in the courtroom. 221 Grammar Guide awhile and a while These word forms are different parts of speech and so behave differently. Both these expressions are derived from the word while, but they have different roles in sentences. ⚪⚪ Awhile is an adverb: Let us wait awhile [not for awhile]. ⚪⚪ A while – written as two words – is a noun phrase (see chapter 2, page 46) and is normally preceded by for: I’m going to be away for a while. Sometimes, however, the word for is left out, making a while look more like an adverbial phrase, though it is still strictly a noun phrase: We had to wait quite a while. This use is fairly easy to identify because while is qualified in some way, for example, quite a while or a long while. backward and backwards While the sense of these words is similar, they are different parts of speech. ⚪⚪ ⚪⚪ Backward is the only form available for the adjective: a backward glance. Backwards is more usual for the adverb. The vehicle moved slowly backwards. (Note that in American usage, backward is more frequently used in such adverbial contexts.) because, as, for and since These conjunctions can all be used to introduce explanatory subordinate clauses, but they have slightly different meanings and functions. 222 Commonly confused words and word pairs ⚪⚪ The conjunction since is used to introduce a dependent clause giving a reason for the statement in the main clause. The reason is either already well known or considered not as important as the main statement: Since you’re only staying a little while, we’d better eat now. ⚪⚪ The same is true of because, but this conjunction puts a greater emphasis on the cause: He liked her because she was witty and lively. ⚪⚪ The conjunction for functions in a similar way to since and because, but is more formal in register. For tends to introduce reasons that justify a statement (as because can too), rather than explaining it: She must have forgotten to invite them, for they didn’t turn up. Note that for as a conjunction is never used at the beginning of a sentence. ⚪⚪ As can function in a similar way to the other conjunctions. However, its use can lead to ambiguity, for example: As Luisa went back to work, Tony stayed at home to look after the baby. In this example, as can also be understood to mean either ‘because’ or ‘at the time that’. In such cases, it may be better to avoid ambiguity and use either because or while depending on the intended sense. beside and besides These words largely have distinct meanings and functions. ⚪⚪ Beside is a preposition referring to physical position meaning ‘next to’: Come and sit beside me. It’s also used to mean ‘in addition to’, and this can lead to potential ambiguity in respect of the ‘next to’ sense: She owns another property beside this one. 223 Grammar Guide ⚪⚪ Besides is an adverb meaning ‘moreover’: It’s late – besides, the weather’s too cold. It’s also a preposition meaning ‘in addition to’: They’ve already spent a considerable sum on the house, besides the cost of the extension. between and among As prepositions, these words function slightly differently. ⚪⚪ Some people insist on using among, and not between, when more than two people or things are under consideration: Her estate was divided equally among her five children. In some instances, though, between may sound just as natural: We need to address the ongoing tensions between the sales team, the art department and the management office. ⚪⚪ Certainly, when there are only two people or things are under consideration, between should be used: Conflict between East and West is not inevitable. Among is never used in such cases. biannual and biennial These adjectives have distinct meanings. ⚪⚪ Biannual means ‘twice a year’. Semi-annual is a synonym for biannual. For example, Payment of interest is biannual. ⚪⚪ Biennial, on the other hand, means ‘every two years’. For example, They met at a biennial conference on the environment. 224 Commonly confused words and word pairs Owing to general potential confusion as to which is which, it may be advisable to use more straightforward expressions. For example, Interest is paid twice a year. They met at a conference on the environment held every two years. blatant and flagrant These adjectives have meanings that are similar but also quite distinct. Both these words describe openly offensive behaviour, but there’s a difference. ⚪⚪ Blatant emphasises the brazen conspicuousness of the offence, as in a blatant breach of good faith in the negotiations A blatant lie is one so bare-faced that no one can miss it. ⚪⚪ Flagrant, on the other hand, emphasises the shocking seriousness or gravity of the offense, for example flagrant racism Flagrant disregard for human life is unforgivably shameless or outrageous. Note that blatant should not be used to mean merely ‘obvious’. Instead, use obvious, clear or glaring: There is a glaring [not blatant] contradiction…. borne and born These words have a common root but are differentiated by conventions as to usage. ⚪⚪ Borne is the primary past participle (see chapter 1, page 8) of the verb bear: 225 Grammar Guide The following points should be borne in mind. His account is simply not borne out by the facts. In meanings relating to birth, borne is used when the mother is the subject of the verb, or when the verb is passive followed by the preposition by: Michelle had already borne six children. The twins were borne by an Italian mother. ⚪⚪ When the subject is the child, born is the form used: He was not born in hospital. Born is also the adjective used in a combination, to indicate condition, location or status of birth: newly born pups; a northern-born poet. borrow, loan and lend These three verbs have related meanings, but differ in their application. All these verbs are used in connection with the temporary use or possession of something that belongs to someone else. ⚪⚪ When a person borrows something from someone they get it: Can I borrow your car for an hour? I borrowed £100 from my brother. ⚪⚪ When a person lends or loans something to someone they give it: Will you loan me your car for an hour? My brother lent me £100. Lend can be used figuratively, whereas loan cannot: The old silver lends [not loans] an air of elegance to an otherwise drab room. 226 Commonly confused words and word pairs censor and censure These words have different pronunciations and distinct meanings. Though spelt similarly, and from a common root, Latin censere, which means ‘assess’, these two nouns have different meanings. ⚪⚪ A censor is a person who suppresses or removes information: Film board censors have cut some of the more violent scenes. ⚪⚪ Meanwhile censure is severe criticism or condemnation: The political manoeuvre came under censure. Both words can also work as verbs, and as such they preserve their distinct meanings. centre on and centre around These phrasal verbs have slightly different meanings. While the phrasal verbs (see chapter 1, page 18) centre on and centre around are close in meaning, there is a difference in nuance. ⚪⚪ If one uses the verb centre to mean ‘focus on something’, it can be used with the prepositions on or upon, as in The court’s interpretation of the law centred on the issue of freedom of speech. ⚪⚪ Here, the idea of a specific, narrow focus is implicit. In the above example, substitution of around, which signifies circular or diffuse movement, is imprecise. Centre around is more acceptable if one wishes to convey a generalised focus on a number of things, as in Discussions centred around the witness’s credibility, his previously conflicting statements and their admissibility. An alternative to centre around is revolve around. 227 Grammar Guide ceremonial and ceremonious These adjectives are related but have slightly different meanings. ⚪⚪ ⚪⚪ Ceremonial is the more neutral of the two words, describing things that involve ceremony or are a part of it, for example, ceremonial occasions. It’s not now used of people. Ceremonious is used of people or their behaviour. A ceremonious person, or a person with a ceremonious manner, is one who likes and adheres to formalities. It is advisable to avoid ceremonious where ceremonial can be used. childish and childlike These adjectives are broadly alike in meaning, but with crucial distinctions. Both words describe people or behaviour that have qualities associated with children. ⚪⚪ ⚪⚪ However, childlike is complimentary and even affectionate (childlike innocence). Meanwhile, childish is a dismissive and disapproving term (a childish tantrum). classic and classical These closely related words differ in their usage. The meanings of the two words overlap. ⚪⚪ Essentially, classic as an adjective describes the value or status of something (a classic example of Art Deco). The noun classic means something created or made that is of the highest quality. With an upper-case initial, Classics is the study of the languages and cultures of ancient Greece and Rome. 228 Commonly confused words and word pairs ⚪⚪ The adjective classical, though often implying a judgement of value or worth, is a more factual reference to the literature, art and culture of the ancient world or to the high period of an art form (a classical education, classical music, classical ballet). climactic and climatic These adjectives derive from different root words, and so have separate meanings. ⚪⚪ Climactic means ‘forming an exciting climax’, as in In a climactic [not climatic] passage, the author kills off the heroine. ⚪⚪ Climatic, deriving from climate, means ‘relating to weather’, as in These severe climatic [not climactic] changes are caused by global heating. collaborate and corroborate These verbs are unrelated in meaning, despite their superficial similar appearance. ⚪⚪ Collaborate means ‘work with others to achieve something’: Two authors collaborated on the biography. ⚪⚪ Corroborate means ‘present evidence in support of the truth of something’: As any language teacher can corroborate, spelling and grammar are important. The two words are not interchangeable. compare to and compare with These collocations have slightly different meanings. 229 Grammar Guide ⚪⚪ In careful usage, compare to is preferred when two unlike things are being likened: She compared her skin to ivory. ⚪⚪ Compare with is used when the comparison is between similar things and implies differences as well as similarities: We can compare this hotel with the ones we visited in Europe last year. When compare is used intransitively (that is, without a direct object), with should always be used: The new model compares well with others in the same price range. Note that the adjective comparable follows compare in being followed either by to or with, depending on whether unlike or like things are being considered: The agency provides a service comparable to that of a good library. The fires are comparable with the ones that recently hit Australia. complement and compliment These words, while pronounced in a similar way, have unrelated meanings. The words are close in spelling but their meanings are quite different. ⚪⚪ As a noun, a complement is something added to perfect a thing and make it complete, as in A fine wine is the perfect complement to good cooking. There is also a specifically grammatical sense of complement, a noun or adjective that relates back to the subject after a linking verb (see chapter 1, page 9). 230 Commonly confused words and word pairs ⚪⚪ A compliment, on the other hand, is an expression of praise: The cook received many compliments from the guests that evening. Both words are also used as verbs, and both have adjectival forms: complementary and complimentary. Complimentary has the special meaning ‘given free’, so a complimentary copy of a book is one given without charge. A complementary copy, on the other hand, is a book that completes a set. consist of, comprise, include, compose and constitute These five verbs overlap in meaning, but are distinct in usage. ⚪⚪ Consist of is concerned with a whole having a number of parts. It is used in the active voice, with the whole as their subject and the parts as their object: The meal consisted of several small dishes that everybody dipped into. ⚪⚪ Comprise can be used in the same way as consist of: The house comprises three bedrooms, a bathroom, a kitchen and a living room. But it also has another sense of ‘form’, so: Retirees now comprise 20 per cent of the population. And, so, potentially confusingly, can also be used in the passive: The house is comprised of three bedrooms, a bathroom, a kitchen and a living room. ⚪⚪ If some but not all the parts of the whole are mentioned, include is used instead: The house includes a kitchen and a living room on the first floor. 231 Grammar Guide ⚪⚪ Compose and constitute are also concerned with parts making up a whole. Compose is usually used in the passive, and constitute in the active: The team is composed of experts in the field. The following commodities constitute the average household diet. connote and denote These verbs have related but distinct meanings. Denote refers to the main or literal meaning of a word, whereas connote refers to its implications or associations. The word family, for example, denotes a group of people related by blood or marriage, but connotes the bonds of affection, trust and loyalty that unite them. continual and continuous These related adjectives differ in usage. ⚪⚪ ⚪⚪ Something continual continues, with breaks, over a period of time. So a continual noise is one that is constantly repeated, such as a dog barking. Something continuous goes on without a break, and a continuous noise is one that continues without stopping, such as the roar of a waterfall. The same distinction applies to the adverbs continually and continuously: Hecklers continually interrupted the speaker. She drove continuously for two hours. In popular usage, however, continual and continually are now frequently used to mean ‘without stopping’. 232 Commonly confused words and word pairs corporal and corporeal These adjectives with a common root have developed independent meanings. Both these words derive from the Latin corpus, which means ‘body’. ⚪⚪ ⚪⚪ Corporal means ‘relating to the body’ and is mainly used in the expression corporal punishment, referring to the infliction of physical hurt. Corporeal means ‘material or physical rather than spiritual’: The gods of antiquity were not just spirits but enjoyed a corporeal existence. council and counsel These words are pronounced in a similar way but have distinct meanings. ⚪⚪ ⚪⚪ Council is a noun only, meaning a body of people, especially in an advisory or administrative context. Counsel is both a noun and a verb, and is associated with advice, particularly of a professional nature, and the giving of it. The noun counsel means either ‘advice’ itself, or a barrister or other legal adviser. The verb counsel describes the activity of professional advisers: The company psychologist counsels employees coping with stress problems. International financial analysts counselled caution. credible, credulous and creditable These three adjectives are related but have different meanings. These adjectives, and the corresponding nouns credibility, credit and credulity come from the same root, Latin credere, which means ‘believe’, but have distinct meanings. 233 Grammar Guide ⚪⚪ A person or thing is credible when he, she or it can be easily believed: My story may sound barely credible but I assure you it’s true. Credible also has the newer meaning ‘inspiring confidence’: The government needs to develop a credible monetary policy. ⚪⚪ Someone is credulous when he or she is all too ready to believe: Only the most credulous person would believe such a story. ⚪⚪ Creditable is connected with the word credit and means ‘bringing credit’: An excellent squash player, she plays a creditable game of tennis as well. defective and deficient These adjectives are related but have different senses. Both words describe things that are less than perfect. ⚪⚪ Defective means ‘faulty’ and describes functional things, whether processes, machines or the human senses: If the workmanship is defective, they’ll replace the shoes with a new pair. Artillery officers sometimes have defective hearing. ⚪⚪ Deficient describes things that lack a quality, element or ingredient necessary to their working: Her voice is beautiful but a little deficient in power. Their diet is deficient in vitamin D. 234 Commonly confused words and word pairs definite and definitive These adjectives are closely related but differ in sense. ⚪⚪ Definite describes something as being distinct or precise without making any strong judgement about it: He has definite ideas on the subject. ⚪⚪ Definitive denotes something authoritative, conclusive or decisive; it is therefore a more evaluative word: She wrote the definitive book on the subject. denote and represent These verbs have similar but distinct meanings. ⚪⚪ Denote is used to express ‘mean’, ‘refer to’ or ‘signify’: That word denotes ‘ life’ in Spanish. For our purposes, the word ‘corporation’ will denote the XYZ Foundation. ⚪⚪ Represent is used to mean ‘symbolise’: The red maple leaf represents Canada. dependant and dependent These words are interchangeable in only one context. Dependant is interchangeable with dependent only in the noun sense, which means ‘family member supported financially’. deprecate and depreciate These verbs have similar meanings, but also differ. ⚪⚪ To deprecate something is to express disapproval of it: We deprecate the use of public money for non-essential purposes. 235 Grammar Guide The adjective self-deprecating is derived from deprecate, and means ‘criticising oneself ’, and hence ‘being modest’. Deprecate also has a technological sense, meaning ‘become obsolete’, as in The app is being deprecated. ⚪⚪ To depreciate something is to belittle or disparage it, even though it may not be wrong or bad in itself: They were constantly depreciating our attempts to speak Italian. This use is increasingly rare. Depreciate is also commonly used intransitively (without an object), in financial contexts, to mean ‘lose value’: The yen has depreciated 20 per cent in real terms. derisive and derisory These related adjectives have very similar meanings but are applied differently. ⚪⚪ Derisive usually refers to a person or action and means ‘showing contempt or ridicule’: He gave a derisive laugh. ⚪⚪ Derisory is often used of a thing and means ‘deserving contempt or ridicule’: They made us a derisory offer. Derisory is sometimes substituted for derisive, as in She looked at me with a derisive [or derisory] smile. Careful writers try to maintain the distinction, however, and it is advisable to avoid the use of derisory where derisive is correct. dessert and desert These words have quite different meanings. 236 Commonly confused words and word pairs ⚪⚪ ⚪⚪ Dessert is a noun, pronounced with the stress on the second syllable, and has only one modern meaning: ‘sweet course eaten at the end of a meal’. Desert is pronounced with the stress on the first syllable when it is a noun meaning ‘arid area’. The stress is on the second syllable when it is a noun meaning ‘something someone deserves’, in such expressions as They got their just deserts. The stress is also on the second syllable when desert is used as a verb, meaning ‘abandon something’ or ‘run away’. discreet and discrete These adjectives are unrelated in meaning, despite identical pronunciation. The homonyms discreet and discrete have quite different meanings. ⚪⚪ Discreet is the more frequent word in general use and means ‘tactful’, ‘not revealing secret information’ or ‘subtle and unobtrusive’: I made a few discreet enquiries. ⚪⚪ Discrete is a formal or technical word meaning ‘separate, unconnected and distinct’: Several discrete strands of evidence were pursued. disinterested and uninterested These adjectives have different senses. Both words are related to the noun interest, and the adjective interested. ⚪⚪ Uninterested is connected with the sense of interest ‘feeling of curiosity and concern’ (She has no interest in cooking). If a thing doesn’t interest someone, it’s uninteresting. If a 237 Grammar Guide person is not interested in something, they are uninterested in it: They seemed completely uninterested in what was going on around them. ⚪⚪ Disinterested, on the other hand, is connected with the sense of interest ‘personal stake or connection’ (She has interests in various pharmaceutical companies). Disinterested means ‘impartial’ or ‘not having a personal stake’. A disinterested observer of a contest between two sides wouldn’t be concerned who won, because they would have no personal commitment to either side. (An uninterested observer, on the other hand, would take no interest in what was going on.) If you were really disinterested, you’d have given Bobby as much help as you gave Sal. Increasingly, the word disinterested can be observed in use to mean uninterested. This is strictly speaking incorrect. each and every These determiners have similar meanings but with different connotations, and sometimes require different syntax. Each and every both designate all the members of a group. In some contexts, they follow the same syntax (see chapter 2, page 29) and are almost interchangeable, as in I examined each puppy in the litter. I examined every puppy. Here, there is just a slight shift in perspective from considering the animals individually, with each, to considering them collectively, with every. ⚪⚪ Each (like every), when placed before the noun, requires the noun and the verb to be singular: Each puppy is affectionate. 238 Commonly confused words and word pairs Each (though not every) may also be placed after a plural noun, with the effect that the plural governs the verb: The puppies each have their own toys. Each can refer to two or more (whereas every cannot refer to two). Moreover, each can function not only like an adjective (each puppy), but also as a pronoun (each of them) or an adverb (Give them a bowlful each). ⚪⚪ As already noted, every (like each) placed before the noun requires the noun and the verb to be singular: Every puppy is affectionate. However, every (unlike each) cannot follow a plural noun, and it can only refer to three or more. Moreover while it can function like an adjective (every puppy), it cannot (unlike each) be other parts of speech. economic and economical Long-established usage preferences differences between these adjectives. ⚪⚪ dictate the The adjective economic relates to economics or the economy, and is concerned with aspects of the production, distribution and consumption of goods and services: He’s writing a comparison of Nobel Laureates’ economic theories. ⚪⚪ The adjective economical, on the other hand, means ‘good value’ or ‘careful with money’: Public transport is economical, compared with taking taxis. She was economical in her spending. An area of overlap is the sense ‘justified in terms of avoiding expenditure’: an economical [or economic] use of electricity. 239 Grammar Guide fewer and less These determiners both indicate a comparison of quantities, but they are used differently. ⚪⚪ ⚪⚪ Fewer is generally used with things one can count (fewer meetings, fewer people). The same rule applies to fewer than (fewer than twenty people). Less is generally used with things one cannot count (less time, less prestige). The same rule applies to less than (less than a two-thirds majority). In an exception to the rule, less than is used with nouns that indicate distance, weight, volume, amounts of money, or units of time, because they are thought of as collective amounts instead of numbers: a house less than two miles down the road use less than five gallons of petrol presents for less than £50 take less than four hours Furthermore, plural nouns often precede the set phrase or less: You may use the express checkout lane if you have eight items or less. Explain your career goals in one hundred words or less. Here, the plural nouns are regarded as collective amounts. flammable and inflammable These adjectives have the same meaning. Although inflammable may at first glance look like the opposite of flammable, the two words actually have the same meaning: both describe something that is easily set on fire. In view of 240 Commonly confused words and word pairs the potentially disastrous consequences of misinterpretation, flammable has become the word of choice, especially in the labelling of commercial and industrial products. The word most frequently used to convey the opposite meaning is non-flammable. flounder and founder Despite apparent similarities, these verbs are different in meaning. Both verbs indicate that someone or something is in distress. ⚪⚪ ⚪⚪ Flounder means struggle to regain one’s balance, or to know how to proceed. Its literal sense is ‘flail about in water’. Someone who is floundering is typically in a temporarily bad situation that can be overcome with effort. Founder means fail, become disabled or collapse. Its literal sense refers to a ship and is ‘fill with water and sink’. It’s usually too late for someone or something that is foundering or has foundered. forebear and forbear The noun has two possible spellings, but the verb only one. Either spelling may be used for the noun, meaning ‘ancestor’. ⚪⚪ But forebear is the more frequent of the two: The walls were lined with portraits of his illustrious forebears [or forbears]. ⚪⚪ Forbear is the only acceptable spelling for the verb, meaning ‘hold back’ or ‘refrain’: We should forbear [not forebear] from judging people on first impressions. 241 Grammar Guide historical and historic These adjectives are derived from the same noun, but they are used in different ways. Both these adjectives relate to the noun history. ⚪⚪ Historical means ‘belonging to or concerning the past’ and may describe people or things, as in a historical figure; a historical novel. ⚪⚪ The principal meaning of historic, on the other hand, is ‘important enough to go down in history’: The election of the United States’ first African–American president was a historic moment. We support preservation of our city’s historic district. Historic can sometimes be used in place of historical, but historical should not be used in the sense of historic given above. idyll and ideal These words are unrelated, can be assigned different parts of speech, and have distinct meanings. The noun idyll (and its related adjective idyllic) and the noun (and adjective) ideal are quite distinct. ⚪⚪ Idyll (and idyllic) are narrower in meaning, referring to a ‘carefree and happy situation or period, often featuring unspoilt beauty and serenity’, as in a pastoral idyll; an idyllic way to spend a summer afternoon The title of Alfred Tennyson’s Idylls of the King (1885), a set of poems about Arthur, Guinevere and Lancelot, references the poetic form known as the idyll, which focuses on rustic life. 242 Commonly confused words and word pairs ⚪⚪ Ideal refers to perfection, or to being the best in every respect, as in the ideal of beauty; the ideal way to tackle the problem Note that an idyllic setting for a hotel, in the heart of the countryside, is not necessarily ideal; an ideal setting for a hotel, near a major airport, may be far from idyllic. in, into and in to These word forms are used differently. ⚪⚪ In formal written English, the preposition for inward movement is into, not in: She came into the room. We welcomed him into the family. It’s sometimes acceptable to use either in or into, but the latter is usually preferable in formal English: He put it into [or in] his pocket. Using in for into can be misleading, as in She jumped in the pool. (Did she jump into the pool, or was she already standing in the pool when she jumped?) ⚪⚪ Into should not be confused with in to. The preposition into is never written as two separate words: I went into [not in to] the house. When the separate words in and to are juxtaposed, they should not be joined together: I went in to [not into] get my jacket. Here, in is an adverb, and to the prepositional marker for the infinitive (see chapter 1, page 7). 243 Grammar Guide imply and infer These verbs have distinct meanings. Both these verbs deal with communication that takes place indirectly, without words that make the message explicit. But the critical distinction relates to who: ⚪⚪ Imply is something a writer or speaker does. To imply something is to suggest that it is true without actually saying so. Her testimony implied that she had seen her husband plant the evidence. ⚪⚪ Infer is something a reader or listener does. To infer something is to conclude that it is true without having actually read it or heard it. We inferred from her testimony that she had seen her husband plant the evidence. It is important to resist the temptation to substitute infer when imply is intended. For example, She didn’t actually say who was going to chair the meeting but she implied [not inferred] that she was. it’s and its These word forms have different grammatical functions and senses. The confusion of its with it’s is one of the commonest mistakes in the writing of English, and one of the easiest to avoid. ⚪⚪ It’s is a contraction of it is. Because the contraction it’s is more frequent than its, it may be tempting to get into the habit of always putting an apostrophe in this combination of three letters. To avoid errors, after writing it’s, read what your text aloud, substituting it is 244 Commonly confused words and word pairs ⚪⚪ for it’s. If it doesn’t make sense, then you are using the wrong form. Its is the possessive form of the pronoun it (see personal pronouns, chapter 2, page 36); its is always followed by a noun. Here are examples of the correct use of the possessive pronoun its (no apostrophe). Every dog has its day. Sales of the book have skyrocketed; its success is attributed to recent events in the news. The station is struggling to keep its advertisers. lay and lie These verbs have different meanings, despite overlapping inflections. ⚪⚪ The verb lay is mainly transitive (that is, takes an object), as in Lay the blanket across the bed. The past tense of the verb lay is laid: I laid [not lay] the blanket across the bed. ⚪⚪ The verb lie is intransitive (that is, does not take an object). A common error is to use lay in place of the present tense or present participle (see chapter 1, page 13, and chapter 4, page 82) of lie, but this is unacceptable in standard English: Lie [not Lay] down on the bed. The letter was lying [not laying] on the table. Confusion may arise because lay is the simple past (see chapter 1, page 8) of the verb lie: I lay down on the bed. 245 Grammar Guide lose and loose These similar-appearing words have distinct pronunciations and meanings, and can be assigned different parts of speech. ⚪⚪ Lose is a verb only, meaning variously ‘mislay’, ‘fail to win’ or ‘be deprived of ’, as in I’ve lost my purse. If we don’t improve our form, we’ll lose the game. ⚪⚪ Loose is an adjective, adverb and verb. As an adjective it means variously ‘not firmly fixed’ or ‘not restrained’, as in loose [not lose] floorboards; loose [not lose] dogs. As an adverb, loose means ‘freely’, as in dogs running loose [not lose]. As a verb it means variously ‘make less tight’, ‘untie’ or ‘fire a projectile’, as in She loosed her grip. When they are about to set sail, they first loose the mooring rope. He loosed a volley of arrows. luxuriant and luxurious These adjectives have a common root but different meanings. Both these adjectives are related to the noun luxury, but their meanings don’t overlap. ⚪⚪ ⚪⚪ Luxuriant is used to describe something that grows in rich profusion, for example, hair or vegetation. Luxurious means ‘characterised by or suggestive of luxury’ as in a luxurious bedroom; a luxurious lifestyle 246 Commonly confused words and word pairs mythological, mythical and mythic These adjectives are interchangeable in some contexts, but have slightly different meanings. These adjectives are interchangeable in the senses of ‘relating to myth’ and ‘lacking factual basis’. ⚪⚪ Mythological has the narrowest range of meanings, as indicated above. For example, The unicorn is a mythological creature. ⚪⚪ Mythical can also be used in such contexts. In addition, it has a sense of ‘fictitious’, for example, a mythical client who gives rave endorsements ⚪⚪ Meanwhile, the variant mythic is the best option for the sense ‘befitting or suitable to myth’, though mythical is also possible: the orator’s mythic [or mythical] ability to excite audiences a mythic [or mythical] figure in global politics nauseating, nauseated and nauseous These closely related adjectives have distinct meanings. ⚪⚪ If a person experiences something sickening (that is, suffers nausea or feels inclined to vomit), that thing is nauseating, as in a nauseating odour in the barn Something that is disgusting in a moral sense is also nauseating, as in The way she flatters the boss is nauseating. ⚪⚪ If one feels sick (inclined to vomit) or disgusted, one is nauseated. I feel nauseated by the smell of food. He is nauseated by their behaviour. 247 Grammar Guide ⚪⚪ Meanwhile, nauseous can mean either nauseated (in the physical sense) or nauseating (in either the physical or the moral sense). For example, She woke up feeling nauseous. The stench was nauseous. Their xenophobia is nauseous. neither and none These negating words are used in different ways. Both words are used to effect page 44). ⚪⚪ negation (see chapter 2, Neither is used when two items are under discussion; it means ‘not either’. When only two things are involved, neither is an appropriate choice: Neither of the twins made it to the reunion. When neither is used as a conjunction, it should be followed with nor, not or, and the verb should agree (see chapter 2, page 39) with the nearest noun: Neither rain nor snow is going to stop mail delivery. ⚪⚪ The pronoun none is used when there are more than two items under discussion; it means ‘not one’ or ‘not any’. None, rather than neither, is the appropriate choice in the sense ‘not one of several’: None [or Not one] of these (four) options has any appeal. number and quantity These quantifying nouns have distinct areas of application. Careful writers distinguish between quantity (‘amount of something’) and number (‘total of countable persons or things’. 248 Commonly confused words and word pairs ⚪⚪ Number is used for count nouns, as in A large number [better than quantity] of people had gathered in the square. ⚪⚪ Quantity is best reserved for references to inanimate objects or inanimate non-count nouns, as in a huge quantity of rotten wheat; a large quantity of fuel on, on to and onto These word forms are used in different contexts. ⚪⚪ Despite the objections of traditionalists, who hold that on to is the correct choice, the preposition onto is now largely established as the one to use when onward movement is indicated: The kids jumped onto the trampoline This means that the kids moved from the ground to the surface of the trampoline. Potentially confusingly, on is sometimes alternatively used in this context: The kids jumped on the trampoline But this is ambiguous, since it could mean that the kids, already on the trampoline, jumped up and down on it. ⚪⚪ On to, spelt as two separate words, should certainly be used with verbs, where on is an adverb, as in Let’s move on to [not onto] another topic. partly and partially These related adverbs are not always interchangeable. Both these adverbs mean ‘in part’, ‘not completely’ or ‘to some extent’, and are sometimes interchangeable: Our first attempt was only partly [or partially] successful. 249 Grammar Guide However, there are subtle distinctions. ⚪⚪ Partly can be seen as meaning ‘in part’ or ‘with regard to the part not the whole’, as in He left early, partly [not partially] because he was bored. Partly is always preferred when there is a distinct division into parts: The houses were built partly of wood and partly of stone. ⚪⚪ Partially means ‘incompletely’ or ‘not fully’, as in Her mother is partially [not partly] sighted. Partially should, of course, be avoided when there is any risk of confusion with its other sense of ‘in a biased way’. passed and past Despite being pronounced alike and having related meanings, these words are distinct in meaning and belong to different parts of speech. These homonyms are both derived from the verb pass. ⚪⚪ Passed is the past tense of the verb pass, as in He passed me at 80 mph. ⚪⚪ Past is an adjective meaning ‘one-time’ or ‘former’, as in She is the past president of our mountaineering club. people and persons These plural nouns are used in different contexts. ⚪⚪ The plural noun people is the preferred form for designating human beings generally: Thousands of people [not persons] jammed the stadium. What on earth will people [not persons] think if you do that? 250 Commonly confused words and word pairs ⚪⚪ Persons is used only in certain narrow, typically legalistic or otherwise official, contexts: the Bureau of Missing Persons the arrest of three suspicious persons loitering in Parliament Square plain and plane These words with identical pronunciation have separate meanings. ⚪⚪ Plain is more frequently used as an adjective meaning ‘simple’, ‘clear’ or ‘not patterned’, as in a plain fabric As a noun, plain simply denotes a large expanse of flat land, as in a treeless plain ⚪⚪ Plane is more commonly used as a noun denoting (among other things) a flat surface or a level, as in different planes of existence As an adjective, plane means ‘flat and level’ or ‘twodimensional’, as in a plane surface practicable and practical These adjectives overlap in meaning, but certain contexts require one or the other. These adjectives have overlapping meanings. Both indicate that something can be done. ⚪⚪ Practicable means no more than ‘can be done’, as in It is practicable to do the calculation in the traditional way. Relatedly, impracticable means ‘impossible’. 251 Grammar Guide ⚪⚪ In contrast, practical additionally implies that it is appropriate, useful or sensible: It is far more practical to use a computer to do the calculation. Again, relatedly, impractical means ‘inadvisable because of having little practical value’. principle and principal These words are pronounced the same but their meanings are different. These homonyms have not only different meanings but also different functions. ⚪⚪ Principle is a noun only, meaning ‘basic assumption’, ‘ethical standard’ and ‘way of operating or working’, as in the principles of a democratic system a woman of principle study the principles of the internal-combustion engine ⚪⚪ In contrast, principal, as a noun, is often a person, perhaps a ‘college administrator’, ‘important participant’ or ‘lead performer’, or an ‘amount of money invested’, as in be sent to the principal’s office a principal in an accounting firm a principal of £500,000. As an adjective it means ‘primary’: our principal [not principle] reason for an appeal. prophecy and prophesy A single letter distinguishes the noun from the verb. Though spelt almost alike, these words are pronounced differently and have different grammatical functions. 252 Commonly confused words and word pairs ⚪⚪ Prophecy, a noun only, means ‘prediction’ or ‘ability to predict the future’, as in a dire economic prophecy ⚪⚪ Prophesy, a verb, means ‘predict’, as in I would not go so far as to prophesy a recession just yet. purposely and purposefully These adverbs with a common root are not used interchangeably. These adverbs are sometimes confused. Although both imply that someone has a specific purpose in mind, they’re used in different contexts and aren’t interchangeable. ⚪⚪ Purposely means ‘on purpose’ or ‘intentionally’: I purposely left the door unlocked. ⚪⚪ Purposefully means ‘in a determined way’ or ‘with a particular goal’: She strode purposefully across the garden. read and red These words are entirely different. ⚪⚪ The verb read has two pronunciations. In the infinitive or present tense it rhymes with weed, and as the simple past or past participle it rhymes with wed: I read [not red] the letter aloud. Have you read [not red] this book? ⚪⚪ The adjective or noun red denotes the colour of blood. It sounds the same as read as a past form but is not a variant spelling. Confusion may arise because the past tense and past participle of the verb lead is led. 253 Grammar Guide rebound and redound These verbs are unrelated, but have similar contexts for usage. ⚪⚪ In its figurative use, rebound is a metaphor based on an object bouncing and returning. A ball that rebounds on the person who threw it affects that person. In a similar way, an action or statement can rebound on its creator, affecting him or her directly and usually in a negative or unwelcome way: The decision to cut library services rebounded on local officials when they were unable to get the information they required. Rebound can also be used as a noun. ⚪⚪ Redound is a much rarer word and is sometimes used in a similar way to rebound. But in its primary meaning it’s followed by to and means ‘have a particular consequence’, with something good or positive as the object (the opposite connotation of rebound): His efforts redounded to his credit. Redound cannot be used as a noun. regrettable and regretful These related adjectives are applied to different sorts of noun. ⚪⚪ Regrettable describes something that is a cause for regret: These mistakes are regrettable. The related adverb regrettably similarly refers to a cause of regret: The exam results are regrettably poor. ⚪⚪ Regretful often describes someone who has feelings of regret for something: They felt regretful at missing the opportunity. 254 Commonly confused words and word pairs The adverb regretfully follows a similar pattern, referring to feelings of regret: She regretfully turned down the invitation. reverend and reverent These related words have different meanings. ⚪⚪ Reverend is an adjective or noun which refers to a member of the clergy. For example, the Reverend John Wesley ⚪⚪ Reverent is an adjective meaning ‘feeling or expressing reverence’. For example, a reverent silence; reverent pilgrims review and revue Though they sound alike, these words have different meanings. ⚪⚪ Review is a common noun, for example The novel had both good and bad reviews. It is also the only acceptable spelling for the verb, meaning ‘examine again’ or ‘write a critique of ’. ⚪⚪ The spelling revue is restricted to the noun denoting a form of theatrical entertainment. sensual and sensuous These adjectives are related but have different connotations. Both words are connected with gratification of the senses. ⚪⚪ Sensual is the older word. In the 17th century it developed special meanings associated with bodily appetites, for example, eating and especially sexual satisfaction: Her mouth looked sensual and inviting. They enjoyed the sensual pleasures of the table. 255 Grammar Guide ⚪⚪ At about the same time the poet John Milton seems to have invented the word sensuous to refer more specifically to the aesthetic and spiritual senses (for example, seeing and hearing). It was taken up by Samuel Taylor Coleridge in the 19th century. In current use, the two sets of meanings increasingly overlap, since the senses are not readily compartmentalised. Sensuous remains associated with the physical senses in contradistinction to the intellect. It is the word to use, for example, in connection with music or poetry: The conductor relished the sensuous parts of Ravel’s score. should and would These modal verbs are interchangeable in some instances, but in other contexts they are distinct. Teasing out the differences between these two (see chapter 1, page 17) is not at all easy. ⚪⚪ modal verbs Broadly, would is more usual than should in conditional scenarios (see chapter 2, page 51) or in expressing desire: If it were to rain, I would shelter in the cave. [conditional] They would like to come. [desire] In British English, there is a lingering distinction made between first person and second or third person uses. Would [not should] you like to go to the cinema? [second person] I would [or should] like a cup of tea. [first person] Would is also required when referring to habitual past action: On Wednesdays I would go to the library. ⚪⚪ Should has the special role of denoting obligation, validity or likelihood: 256 Commonly confused words and word pairs I should stay until they arrive. Should you be lifting that? That should be our visitors now. As already noted, in British English there are some minor distinctions made on account of person. For example, Should I open the window? [compare Would you open the window?] Should must be used in inverted constructions expressing a condition: Should it rain, the party will be held indoors. Note that in conversational English, the contracted forms I’d, you’d, etc., are regularly used instead of the full forms of would and should in making simple statements (They’d like to come), but these cannot be used in place of should in its senses of obligation or likelihood. social and sociable These related adjectives differ in meaning. ⚪⚪ ⚪⚪ Social is a general classifying adjective. It is a neutral word that classifies a person or thing as being concerned in some way with society or its organisation. For example, a social club is a place provided for people to enjoy themselves, and a social worker is involved in work done for people’s welfare. Sociable, in contrast, describes a particular quality. It refers to a person’s capacity to deal in social ways with other people, so, for example, a sociable worker is a worker who enjoys the company of colleagues. stationary and stationery These adjectives are pronounced the same way but are unrelated in meaning. 257 Grammar Guide The homonyms stationary and stationery are distantly related, but have quite different meanings. ⚪⚪ ⚪⚪ Stationary is an adjective meaning ‘not moving’ (normally used of vehicles), Stationery, on the other hand, is a noun meaning ‘paper products used for writing’. straight and strait These words are pronounced the same but are unrelated. Straight and strait, despite some apparent similarities in meaning, are unrelated in origin. ⚪⚪ Straight is an adjective meaning ‘not bent, curved or crooked’, as in a straight line Note that the related word straightened, from the verb straighten, means ‘made straight’. ⚪⚪ Strait is a noun denoting a narrow body of water or a difficult situation, as in dire straits Strait was formerly used as an adjective meaning ‘narrow’, ‘confined’ or ‘strict’. But these senses survive only in derived or combined forms, for example straitened; straitjacket; strait-laced Straitened, meaning ‘restricted’ (not to be confused with straightened) is used chiefly in the phrase straitened circumstances. Note that straitjacket and strait-laced, however, are also spelt straightjacket and straight-laced. 258 Commonly confused words and word pairs such as and such that These conjunctive phrases introduce different sorts of clauses or phrases. ⚪⚪ Such as and such as, where the space is filled by a noun, are used to introduce an item or items that exemplify the thing already mentioned: He quotes such illustrious writers as Shakespeare, Milton and Austen. The curriculum includes readings from illustrious writers such as Shakespeare, Milton and Austen. The new law affects only such people as are eligible for supplementary benefits. ⚪⚪ The construction such that, where a noun fills the space, indicates the consequence of a stated circumstance: The country faces such hardship that it will need a great deal of foreign aid. suspicious and suspect These adjectives overlap slightly in meaning but have particular applications. These adjectives have overlapping meanings and so are readily confused. ⚪⚪ Suspicious, the more frequent and versatile of the two, may describe either a person who suspects, or a person or thing that causes suspicion: Her behaviour made us suspicious. There were a couple of suspicious characters lurking by the cash machine. His behaviour was suspicious. 259 Grammar Guide ⚪⚪ Suspect is used chiefly of things that cause doubt, suspicion or distrust because they seem likely to be false, illegal or dangerous: His claims sounded suspect. The police confiscated a suspect package. The remains of a suspect tuna sandwich were sent away for analysis. their, there, and they’re These three word forms sound alike, and all relate to pronouns. Even seasoned writers may on occasion be lured into the pitfall of misusing these words. ⚪⚪ Their is a pronominal adjective, that is, an adjective derived from a pronoun. It shows possession: They have made their decision. ⚪⚪ There can be an adverb or a pronoun, for example, Look over there quickly. [adverb] There are several unanswered questions. [pronoun] ⚪⚪ They’re is a contraction of they are: They’re sitting in the front row. A similar confusion may arise in relation to theirs and there’s. Theirs is an independent possessive pronoun: Take your coats but leave theirs on the rail. There’s is a contraction of there is: There’s no good reason for you to stay here. till and until These words have the same meaning and differ mainly in register. 260 Commonly confused words and word pairs Both words have the same meaning and function (conjunction and preposition), and are largely interchangeable. ⚪⚪ Till (the older form) is more likely to be heard in speech: Just wait till we get home! ⚪⚪ Until is more usual at the beginning of a sentence: Until last week none of the post-graduate students had arrived back at the university. tortuous and torturous These adjectives have a common root but different modern meanings. Both words come ultimately from Latin torquere, which means ‘twist’, but their meanings diverge in English. ⚪⚪ ⚪⚪ A mountain pass is tortuous (‘with many turns or bends’). By figurative extension, a legal argument can be tortuous (‘complex or intricate’). Torturous is more immediately derived from torture. This may function as a reminder that a severe illness can be torturous (‘causing pain’), as can a decision. troop and troupe These related words have similar meanings, but their range is different. Both these words can be used as nouns denoting a group of people. ⚪⚪ Troop can apply generally to any large group or specifically to a military unit. The verb meaning ‘go in a large group’ is spelt troop (not troupe): We trooped in to school assembly. 261 Grammar Guide ⚪⚪ Troupe is more limited, applying only to a group of actors, dancers or other entertainers. unaware and unawares This pair of words are different parts of speech. ⚪⚪ Unaware is usually used as an adjective: They ran forward, unaware of the danger. ⚪⚪ Unawares is an adverb only, used especially in the idiom catch (or take) someone unawares, but also in other ways: They crept up on us unawares. wave and waive These words are pronounced the same, but are unrelated and have different meanings. These homonyms have distinct meanings and spellings. ⚪⚪ The more common, wave, is a noun and verb with various meanings. For example, radio waves; tidal wave; wave goodbye ⚪⚪ To waive is to surrender or refrain from enforcing something: She waived her right to remain silent. They decided to waive the restrictions. The related noun is spelt waiver. whose and who’s These word forms sound alike, and have a shared relation to pronouns. ⚪⚪ Whose means ‘of whom’ or ‘of which’ and denotes possession or association: 262 Commonly confused words and word pairs These are the children whose father [= the father of whom] we saw yesterday. There was a church whose steeple [= the steeple of which] had been struck by lightning. Some people feel uncomfortable with the use of whose to mean ‘of which’, but it’s established usage, and the alternatives are usually awkward. ⚪⚪ Who’s is a contraction of ‘who is’ or ‘who has’: She’s the one who’s [= who is] coming to dinner next week. Who’s [= who has] got my pen? your and you’re These word forms sound alike and are related to the same pronoun. ⚪⚪ The word your, like their, is a pronominal adjective: Your e-mail password must be protected. ⚪⚪ You’re is a contraction of ‘you are’: You’re protecting your e-mail password, aren’t you? 263 264 chapter 9 Commonly misused words Otherwise, it is the usual abuse. Hilary Mantel Wolf Hall (2010) Language changes constantly. It has to, because the world and society are continuously in flux. New words, and new ways of using existing words, are needed to deal with new realities. As a result, linguists and grammarians are always at risk of finding themselves behind the times. Additionally, if these factors do not act as sufficient barriers to defining correct usage, language experts (much like other types of experts) rarely entirely concur. Despite all this, there is still at least broad agreement on what words in English mean and how they should be used. And, although the language is living and fluid, it would be unreasonable to suggest that at any stage in its development there has been a norm of ‘anything goes’. Instead, notions of correct English usage have tended to be based on a mixture of tradition, scholarship and the linguistic habits of educated people. The key to good English remains clear and effective communication. This can be challenging when words are used in complex or subtle ways. This chapter examines some of the more involved aspects of English usage and, more specifically, some of the ways words are commonly misused. Words in this chapter are treated in three categories: 265 Grammar Guide 1. Misuse of words: this section focuses on individual words that are often misused. 2. Misuse of word forms: this section examines inflected forms (forms derived from the main word form) that are often misused. 3. Problems with agreement: this section tackles issues relating to subject–verb agreement for particular words. Misuse of words The commonly misused words in this section are categorised and organised by part of speech (see chapter 1): noun, verb, adjective, adverb, pronoun, preposition and conjunction. Problem nouns alibi In formal contexts, this technical noun should not be used in the weakened meaning of ‘pretext’, because this potentially compromises its precise legal sense of ‘claim or evidence that someone was elsewhere’. It is better to avoid overuse when excuse is the more natural word to use: He used his illness as an excuse [not as an alibi] for leaving work early. crescendo When used as a noun (or less commonly as a verb), crescendo describes a process and not the end of a process. This is usually well understood in musical contexts, where the word is a technical term. In figurative uses, though, one may be lured into using it as an alternative for climax, which is indeed the end point or culmination of a process. In thoughtful usage, noise or feeling can increase to a climax but it does so in a crescendo. The following examples are correct: The bird’s calls rose in a crescendo. 266 Commonly misused words The abusive phone calls reached a peak [not crescendo] the following week. enormity Enormity shares a history with and closely resembles the common adjective enormous. It’s easy to make the mistake of thinking that enormity is the noun form of enormous, and simply means ‘immensity’. This isn’t the case. Enormity carries with it the idea of something very large, but it also conveys the notion of something extremely bad: We are shocked at the enormity of the terrorist attacks. They committed crimes of unsurpassed enormity. percentage The noun phrase a percentage is better avoided when simply ‘some’ is intended. For example, Some [not a percentage] of the students have tablets. The word percentage is meaningless unless it’s qualified by an adjective such as large or small, as in a large percentage of the population. It’s still best avoided where many, much, a few or a little will suffice. Problem verbs aggravate The standard meaning of the verb aggravate is ‘make worse’. Sometimes the use of aggravate to mean ‘irritate’ meets with disapproval, despite a history of usage dating to the 17th century: We were aggravated by the continuous loud noise from the street. Their bad behaviour is very aggravating. Except in informal conversation, when aggravate appears in this way it’s usually better to replace with another word such as annoy, exasperate or irritate. 267 Grammar Guide author Although the verb author has been in existence for over four hundred years, some object to it in contexts such as She has authored several books. This is because, unlike write, it means to be responsible for the content of a printed or published document. The verb author may sound more natural in contexts referring to the creation of, for example, reports or studies. decimate The popular meaning of decimate, ‘destroy’, now predominates, perhaps because the need for a word meaning specifically ‘kill one person in ten’ is unlikely to be needed today. Even so, decimate is still better reserved for ‘removing a proportion of ’ or ‘reducing the strength of ’. For example, Lack of funding has decimated public transport. For the broader popular meaning, it is advisable to use annihilate, exterminate, destroy or devastate. depend The verb depend should be followed by on when it introduces a clause (see chapter 2, page 47) beginning with how, what, where, whether, who or why: It depends on how you interpret the word ‘ liberal’. The amount you pay depends on what you earn. The omission of on in sentences of this type is more acceptable in speech than in writing, as in ‘Are you planning to go?’ ‘It depends.’ get The use of get instead of be to form the passive is more acceptable in some contexts than others: 268 Commonly misused words The house is [or gets] cleaned once a week. The exhibition was [not got] opened by the mayor. Get is usually more informal than be: an interviewer might ask an interviewee, If you are offered the job, will you accept it? Whereas the interviewee might tell a friend, If I get offered the job, I’ll take it. Get is probably most acceptable when it implies that the subject of the sentence has at least some responsibility for an event or action, as in If you play with matches, you may get burnt, as opposed to The passengers may have been burnt during the crash landing. may While in modern usage modal verbs (see chapter 1, page 17) may and might overlap, it is helpful to bear in mind that might is the past tense of may. In certain contexts, however, may is used to refer to the past. Perhaps influenced by the idiom be that as it may, meaning ‘that may be so, but…’ or ‘with all due respect…’, it is legitimate to use may in a clause admitting something was the case before going on to make a more important point. He may have been bad-tempered but he was a genius. It remains more appropriate to use might when a more straightforward past tense is required, usually implying something was not the case: He might have graduated from college in 2015, but his curriculum vitae says 2016. Might should also be used when a very unlikely hypothetical situation is under discussion: 269 Grammar Guide We can still speculate that some passengers and crew members of the downed aircraft might have survived in the cold Atlantic waters. refer It is tempting to think that back in the phrase refer back is an unnecessary repetition or redundancy (see chapter 12, page 350), because one of the implicit meanings of re- is ‘back’. But a person may refer a problem or request on to a new authority for a decision, or refer it back to the original decision-maker for reconsideration. However, if refer directs people to something already mentioned, for example, a text quoted, there is no need to use back: Let me refer you again to page 321 of my book. transpire The use of transpire to mean ‘happen’ or ‘occur’, is sometimes regarded as not strictly correct, even though it’s been in common use for several centuries. It may be safer to write, for example, Tell me what happened [not transpired] at the meeting. Less controversially transpire refers to something previously unknown and means ‘be disclosed’: It transpired that the prime minister had known about the plan all along. Problem adjectives actual The adjective actual is legitimately used to mark a contrast. In the sentence The actual total was much higher than we had expected, it serves to create a contrast with projected or estimated totals. 270 Commonly misused words This adjective is often overused, however, as a merely emphatic term with no real meaning. For example, in He wanted to know if any damage had been done. it may be tempting to add actual for emphasis (any actual damage), but this would be redundant and poor style. analogous When used correctly, analogous should include a notion of analogy, that is, of similarity in certain respects: The mutual aid group is somewhat analogous to a colony of bees. It is better to avoid analogous when the comparison is only general, and a more straightforward word such as similar, equivalent, comparable or corresponding serves equally well, as in The new system is comparable [not analogous] to that used in the electronics industry. crucial The core meaning of crucial is ‘decisive’: Her casting vote was crucial. However, crucial has been diminished and is often used to mean nothing more than ‘important’. This is especially true when the author wants to use a hard-hitting word, but it is better to avoid such overuse: If proportional representation is adopted, it is important [better than crucial] to choose the best method. due to Traditionally, owing to rather than due to is the appropriate prepositional phrase (see chapter 2, page 46) to use in sentences such as these: 271 Grammar Guide The concert has been cancelled owing to [not due to] circumstances beyond our control. The flight was delayed owing to [not due to] bad weather. The objection is based on the fact that due is an adjective (without prepositional force) and so should describe a noun, as in The delay was due to bad weather, where due modifies delay. endemic The adjective endemic refers to something that is found throughout a particular area or group. Originally used of diseases, it is now often used in other contexts: Corruption is endemic in the industry. Endemic is sometimes misused in the sense of ‘universal’ or ‘found everywhere’, without a particular context being identified. In the following examples Swearing is endemic among young people and Swearing is endemic in the office, the inclusion of the group (among young people) or area (in the office) is required for correctness. optimum Note that the word optimum refers to quality, not quantity. It means ‘best’, not ‘greatest’ or ‘most’: the optimum temperature for the storage of perishable foodstuffs It sometimes happens that the best is also the greatest or most, which may be the reason for the confusion about the meaning of the word: We are seeking optimum return on our investment. 272 Commonly misused words similar to In its meaning ‘sharing some qualities’, the adjective similar is followed by to, not as: My own experience has been similar to yours. I had a similar experience to [not as] yours. this In formal writing, the determiner (see chapter 2, page 33) this should be avoided where the definite article the or the indefinite articles a/an are the appropriate choices. After the exam I had the worrying thought [not this worrying thought] that I had not answered the third question. Suddenly a woman [not this woman] selling cosmetics appeared at my door. Problem adverbs actually Like its root actual, the adverb actually is used most effectively when it contrasts with what is theoretical or only apparent: It sounds difficult, but it’s actually quite straightforward. It is regarded as poor style to use actually as a sentence filler with no real meaning, although this practice is common in informal conversation: Actually, I prefer her to her cousin. ago If ago is used, it should be followed by that and not since in a following clause: It was several weeks ago that I saw them. If ago is left out, then since is used: It is several weeks since I saw them. 273 Grammar Guide basically Using basically as a sentence adverb (see chapter 1, page 22), where it is reduced to adding emphasis, as in Basically it’s a waste of time. is common in informal conversation but should be avoided otherwise. So too should the meaning ‘generally’, as in It is basically the case that fats can cause heart disease. Both uses are essentially conversation fillers and are not required in speech, and certainly not in formal writing. deceptively When people are asked whether, for example, a deceptively dangerous place to stand is a place that is more or less dangerous than it appears, they respond variously. A substantial minority admits they have no idea what deceptively is intended to convey. Is a deceptively large house surprisingly large or surprisingly small? Unless the context makes the meaning clear, deceptively is best avoided. It is advisable only to use it when the meaning is clear: The solution is deceptively simple. else The adverb else (in some contexts categorised as an adjective) should not be combined with besides, but, except or other prepositions of this type. This creates redundancy, because else has the same function as the accompanying prepositional phrase. For example, it is appropriate to write: No one but the guard saw the intruder. [but not No one else except the guard…] When else follows an indefinite pronoun such as anyone, nobody or someone in a possessive construction, the ’s should be added to else, not to the preceding indefinite pronoun: 274 Commonly misused words We will not accept anyone else’s offer. Else works possessively with the pronouns who and whose as follows: Who else’s mistakes could these be? and Whose else are these boots but yours? however If however is used to mean ‘to whatever degree’, ‘in whatever way’ or ‘how’ at the start of an introductory clause, a comma should appear after that clause, as in However hard it snowed during the night, the road crews were able to clear the main arteries before the rush hour. If however meaning ‘in whatever way’ modifies another adverb and they appear as a pair in mid-sentence, one comma needs to precede and another to follow the two words: The coach has begun, however reluctantly, to admit major flaws in the team’s tactics. It is redundant to pair but with however. One or other should be used, not both. In the following sentence, for example, any temptation to add a final however should be resisted: The flight was postponed, but the plane did eventually take off five hours late. literally The use of literally to mean actually or really, as a way of adding emphasis to a colourful figure of speech, is incorrect. For example it should be: The leader of the opposition is breathing fire. [not literally breathing fire] To add literally in this context would suggest that fire was actually coming out of the politician’s mouth. An alternative, of course, would be: The leader of the opposition is furious. 275 Grammar Guide The proper use of literally is fairly narrow. It is mainly used to indicate that a statement is in fact true and not a figure of speech: These little cells called osteoclasts literally eat bones. only Ambiguity can be dispelled by careful placement of the limiting adverb only. The position of only within a sentence can determine its entire meaning. As a general rule, it should appear next to the word being modified: She had only a pound. Only she had a pound. Strictly this means only should usually not be placed between a subject and a verb, nor between an auxiliary verb and a main verb. For example He does these things only to get attention. [not He only does these things…] She will eat only cheese. [not She will only eat…] Vaguer usage is very common, however. -wise Some grammarians object to adverbs ending in the suffix -wise when the meaning is ‘with regard to’, or with respect to’, as in the controversial examples moneywise, timewise, and politicswise. It is better to rephrase: This has been an exciting year in politics. [not an exciting year, politics-wise] The use of words ending in -wise is acceptable when the meaning of the suffix is ‘in a particular manner or direction’, as in clockwise, counter-clockwise and lengthwise. 276 Commonly misused words Problem pronouns I I is a personal pronoun (see chapter 1, page 23, and chapter 2, page 36). It is the first person singular and in the form found in the dictionary, the subjective: I agree. Me is the objective form, coming after verbs and prepositions: She agrees with me. Potential confusion arises when I or me is linked to another pronoun, or to another noun, by conjunctions and or or. Is it you and I or you and me? If the phrase is the subject of the sentence or clause, the answer is easy: You and I know better than that. When the phrase is not the subject, the correct choice is you and me, as in They have a present for you and me. [not you and I] It is a matter for George and me [not you and I] to discuss. When a pronoun follows a linking verb such as be and refers to the same person or thing as the subject of the sentence, further complexities, involving informal and formal language, arise. Which of the following forms is correct? It is I. (or It’s I.) It is me. (or It’s me.) Technically, It is I (or It’s I) is the correct choice in formal speech or writing. (This is on the basis that it is correct to say, for example, It is I who made the error.) In informal, conversational contexts, however, the set phrasing It is me (or It’s me) is far more common. When a pronoun such as I or me comes after the verb be and functions as the object of a verb or preposition in a relative clause (see chapter 2, page 49), and when that pronoun also functions as the complement (see chapter 1, 277 Grammar Guide page 9) of be, the situation becomes even more ambiguous. Experts are divided as to whether I or me is more acceptable in sentences such as It was I [or me] you were looking for. It’s always an option to recast such sentences to avoid this difficulty: I was the person you were looking for, or simply You were looking for me. that For centuries that has been used to refer to people as well as things. Sometimes this usage can be clumsy: He’s the one that did it. But it’s not incorrect, and occasionally that is the appropriate choice of relative pronoun: Anything or anyone that helps me is my friend. we Personal pronouns, for example, first person plural we, often appear with appositives (that is, nouns that immediately follow them, are synonymous with them, and serve to further identify them). For example, We pilots flew five missions last night. It may be tricky to identify the appropriate grammatical form, for example, the subjective we or the objective us, for such pronouns. In such cases it may be helpful to identify the subject and/or object of the sentence at the outset. If the pronoun is the subject, it takes the subjective case (we); if the pronoun is the object, it takes the objective case (us). In the example above, if the appositive (that is, pilots) is omitted, the choice of subjective we makes sense: We flew… is correct, since one would not say Us flew… 278 Commonly misused words Take another example, For us pilots, the mission schedule has been exhausting. This is correct, because the pronoun us is the object of the preposition for, and pilots is an appositive. For we pilots… sounds unnatural, as does For we, the mission schedule has been exhausting. what As a pronoun, the word what means ‘the thing that’, as in This is much nicer than what he gave me last Christmas. Remember what I told you. Beware of adding what where it’s not needed: It was a lot more difficult than [not than what] I thought it would be. Another common error is the use of what in place of that, which or who: This is the book that [not what] I told you about. The woman who [not what] owns the dog is out at work all day. whom The objective form of the interrogative and relative personal pronoun who is whom. It’s fallen into disuse in many contexts, and constructions with who may take its place. In speech, Do you remember whom you saw? may be expressed as Do you remember who you saw? Similarly, The man to whom I was talking may become The man I was talking to (omitting the relative pronoun entirely). In formal contexts, whom is often still preferred. Note that whom is incorrect in sentences where it would be the subject of the verb: The woman who [not whom] we thought was dead is still alive. 279 Grammar Guide In this sentence, the relative pronoun who is the subject of was and is not the object of thought. Problem prepositions about The use of the preposition about to assert some kind of equivalency is non-standard. It is better to avoid usages such as these: She’s about winning and nothing more. The main character in the novel is about power. Here, about is used to assert some kind of correspondence, however vague, between one entity (in these examples the subject, that is, she, main character) and another that the first entity supposedly illustrates or represents (that is, winning, power). It is better to rephrase: She is obsessed with winning and nothing more. The central interest of the main character in the novel is power. as The preposition as can be used to show the capacity in which a person or thing exists or acts: She has a job as a copywriter. As a doctor I understand these problems. It is important to avoid ambiguity, or apparent absurdity, in the placement of the as clause: As a judge, you know I do not like being asked such questions. This sentence does not make it clear who the judge is: the speaker or the person spoken to. like The preposition like should not be used as a conjunction meaning ‘as’, ‘as if ’ or ‘as though’ to introduce a fully developed 280 Commonly misused words clause (that is, one with a subject and a verb), unless informally. In such circumstances, it is better to recast: It sounds as if [not like] she may resign. This pizza smells and tastes good, just the way it should. [not This pizza smells and tastes like a good pizza should.] It’s acceptable to use like in a comparison as long as there is no verb in the part of the sentence following like: She ran the company like a tyrant. Moreover, like should not be used as a meaningless adverbial filler: ‘What were the main characters doing in the first chapter?’ ‘They were, like, trying to understand the reasons countries go to war’. It’s also not acceptable to introduce speech with like: She was like, ‘Don’t worry, I’ll do it.’ Such usage is non-standard in both oral and written communication, and so deemed to be poor style, except in fictional dialogue. of Because the common preposition of is pronounced with a v sound, it is all too easy to encounter the pitfall of using it as the written representation of contractions of the verb have. The preposition of, of course, is nearly always the first word in a prepositional phrase, and is therefore followed by a noun or noun phrase. The contraction of have, spelled ’ve, is nearly always part of a compound tense and is typically followed by a past participle. For example, He could’ve [not could of] been killed. You should’ve [not should of] followed the instructions. It would’ve [not would of] been quicker to walk. 281 Grammar Guide off There are two usages of off as a preposition that should be avoided in formal writing. The first is the use of off plus an erroneous of, rather than simply off alone: The actors stepped off [not off of] the stage. The second is the use of off after verbs such as buy or borrow, which mean ‘to obtain something’: I bought the computer from [not off] my housemate. Problem conjunctions and/or This combination of two common conjunctions is a useful device for expressing possibilities in a concise form. A and/or B gives the three options ‘A only’, ‘B only’ or ‘both A and B’. On the other hand, since and/or is not a particularly elegant expression, it’s best restricted to scientific, legal and business contexts. In more general contexts it is better to rephrase. For example, Sarah or Anne, or perhaps both of them, will participate in the chess championship. as far as The conjunction as far as requires a subject and the verb be concerned, or possibly go, after it, to create a fully developed clause, rather than a phrase. The following are acceptable: As far as I am concerned, the matter is closed. The season looks promising, as far as our local team goes. It is important not to confuse the conjunction as far as with the prepositions as for, as to, as regards or regarding. The following examples are correct: As for our [not As far as our] winning the championship, it is highly unlikely, or As far as our winning the championship goes, it is highly unlikely. 282 Commonly misused words both The versatile word both has many roles, as a pronoun (I like both), adjective (I like both cars) or conjunction (both pleasant and cheerful). Its mobility in a sentence is so great that its meaning can become ambiguous. For example, in the sentence, They are both pleasant and cheerful. It’s not immediately clear whether both belongs with they or with the complement of the sentence, pleasant and cheerful. In speech, intonation will usually clarify the intention. However, when writing, it is important to ensure the reader is not left in doubt. Note that, when both is paired with and as a conjunction, it’s important to keep a balance between the two parts of the construction, with regard to the position of both and the types of words linked: She is both charming and intellectual. [not She is both charming and an intellectual.] He both sings well and likes to paint. [not He is both a fine singer and likes to paint.] if not In addition to its use in conditional clauses, if can introduce an elliptical clause meaning ‘even’ or ‘even though not’. In We have hundreds, if not thousands, of items in stock. the if not fairly plainly means ‘even’. In It’s a clever idea, if not a practical one. it fairly plainly means ‘even though not’. But in He’s good-looking, if not very handsome. it’s unclear which of those meanings is intended – at least out of context. Often it’s clear what if not means only because the context shows what the phrase must mean. When if not may be unclear, it is better to choose another wording. 283 Grammar Guide plus Use of plus as a conjunction to introduce an clause (see chapter 2, page 48) is informal: independent She is the chair of the electrical engineering department, plus she has her own consulting firm. In more formal writing, it is better to rephrase: As well as being the chair of the electrical engineering department, she has her own consulting firm. Similarly, in formal writing it is advisable to avoid using plus in place of and as a conjunction joining two subjects in a sentence: Lack of practice and [not plus] a knee injury have caused her to drop out. seeing The use of seeing that as a conjunction, not grammatically attached to a particular subject, is established in modern English and conforms to a pattern used also in given that, granted that and similar constructions. For example, Perhaps a higher grade might be in order, seeing that you have made only two errors. However, it may be wise to distinguish seeing that from the less established seeing as, used in the same way, but considered less appropriate for formal writing: I’ll leave now, seeing that [not seeing as] you look tired. where It is better style to avoid using where to introduce a clause following nouns that are unrelated to the ideas of place and space. Instead in which can often be used: These are cases in which [not where] conferring with a specialist makes sense. 284 Commonly misused words This is a situation in which [not where] monetary considerations have less weight. Note that the preposition from is needed with where when the context involves a point of origin: Where did that cat come from? From where we sit, we can see the stage clearly. It is important to avoid the redundant, dangling use of at with where. For example, He doesn’t know where the car is. [not where the car is at] Use of the preposition to with where in contexts involving destination is similarly better avoided. For example, Where are you going? [not Where are you going to?] Misuse of word forms Words in this section have unusual inflected forms (forms derived from the root form) and so may lend themselves to misuse in certain contexts. agenda Although agenda is strictly speaking a plural noun meaning ‘things to be done’, the singular form agendum is no longer used. Instead, agenda is used in the singular as if it were ‘a list of things to be done’. Its plural form is agendas: The agenda for tomorrow’s meeting has been changed. This item has appeared on a number of previous agendas. blond The general rule in English is that adjectives don’t decline, that is, have different forms for variation in gender or number. But a few adjectives – for example blond, and some nouns borrowed directly from French – do show such patterns. 285 Grammar Guide When describing the colour of someone’s hair, blond is usually used for a person of either sex: Jane has blond hair. When used as a noun or adjective to describe somebody directly, blond is often used of a man or boy and blonde of a woman or girl: He is blond. Jane is blonde/is a blonde. This difference reflects the masculine and feminine endings in the French words. The same pattern can be seen in the borrowed nouns fiancé (masculine) and fiancée (feminine). choose The irregular verb choose has as its past tense chose. Because of the variety of sounds associated with the oo spelling in English, writers occasionally fall into the trap of substituting one of these for the other, causing confusion for the reader. It may be helpful to remember that choose rhymes with snooze, while chose rhymes with nose, with the same number of vowels in each pair. criterion Like some other words that come to us unchanged from Latin, criterion (singular) has an irregular plural, criteria. It’s incorrect to use criteria as a singular noun (with criterias as a bogus plural). The phrase set of criteria may be used when a singular expression is required. Criteria when it appears as a subject should always take a plural verb form: The selection criteria are somewhat opaque. graffiti Like many words introduced into English from other languages, graffiti (from Italian) didn’t come with all its parts, and this occasionally causes issues in use. Graffiti is in fact a 286 Commonly misused words plural noun in Italian, and its singular is graffito. The singular noun gets some use in technical contexts, such as archaeology, where it means ‘inscription in stone’. But for practical purposes, the plural graffiti is considered a mass noun in English, taking a singular verb: Graffiti has become a challenge for London Transport. To distinguish a single instance of graffiti from the mass noun, it’s possible to use the rare singular, but more common to write ‘piece of graffiti’. phenomenon Usage varies for the plural ending of nouns derived from Latin and Greek words. For phenomenon, a singular noun from Greek, the false singular phenomena should be avoided. Similarly, never attach an -s plural, as phenomena is already the plural form. So, These physiological phenomena [not phenomenas] are fascinating. The word phenomenon should not be overused in nonscientific or non-philosophical contexts. It is best restricted to people, events and things that are extraordinary, not merely interesting or vaguely out of the ordinary. In scientific contexts, however, it’s the word of choice for designating an observable event. prove The past participles proved and proven both appear with auxiliaries as verbs, and also as predicate adjectives (after be, see chapter 1, page 19). Which one to use is a matter of choice, for example, We have proved [or proven] our case, and The case is proven [or proved]. 287 Grammar Guide Proved is not, however, ordinarily used as an adjective preceding a noun. The following are standard forms: proven cases; a proven fact stratum The plural of stratum is strata, reflecting the word’s Latin history. Neither the false -s plural stratas nor the false Latin plural stratae should be used. So, on all strata [not stratas nor stratae] of society wrought Wrought is a rare past tense and past participle of the verb work. In modern English, work is treated as a regular verb with the regular past inflection worked. Wrought is seen in only a few, somewhat specialised situations, such as ones relating to metalwork (wrought iron), and the set phrase What hath God wrought (used by Samuel Morse in the first successful test of the telegraph). ‘But the fools caught it, Wore it in the world’s eyes As though they’d wrought it.’ William Butler Yeats, ‘A Coat’ (1914) Note that wrought is not the past tense and past participle of wreak, for which the past tense in wreaked. So, the collocation is wreaked [not wrought] havoc. Problems with agreement In chapter 2 we discussed the rules governing the agreement (see chapter 2, page 39) of nouns and verbs in clauses. The following nouns, arranged alphabetically, present usage problems with regard to agreement. 288 Commonly misused words any When used as a pronoun, any can be followed by a singular or plural verb depending on the writer’s intended meaning. (For examples, see chapter 2, page 43.) data Use of the term data has exploded, to keep pace with the use of computer technology and statistical methods. Because the word’s meaning is much like that of the singular noun information, and its Latin -a plural is less recognisable as a plural than a final -s would be, it’s often treated as singular. This use is extremely common, and few perceive it as incorrect today, especially given the word’s connotation of a collection or single unit made up of many informational subunits. In scientific and academic writing, however, data is usually treated as plural: Our data have been assembled over a number of years. In other contexts, data may be treated as singular, especially when it describes a body of facts, without regard to individual constituents or how they might be manipulated: No data was available for the three days in question. The proper and technical singular of data is datum. It’s seldom used. dice Used with a plural verb, dice means ‘small cubes with sides marked with dots for numbers, used in games and gambling’. The singular of this noun, rarely used, is die. Dice, used with a singular verb, means a gambling game in which these cubes are used. half The noun half is singular, but it’s treated as plural when followed by a plural noun (with or without of ) or when it refers to a plural: 289 Grammar Guide Half the people aren’t coming at all. At least half of them are behaving inexcusably. With many singular nouns, half can be used in the patterns half a share, half of a share, and a half share. majority When majority is used to refer to a group of people or things as a unit or whole, it takes a singular verb: A majority in the House of Lords intend to vote against. When majority refers to the people within a group, it is better to use a plural verb: The majority of our students have rooms on campus, with only a minority living out. It is important to ensure that any pronouns referring to majority feature the same number (see chapter 1, page 11) as the verb. The following is correct: The majority has had its say. [not has had their say] Or, when the focus is on a group as individuals: The majority of the peers have cast their votes. media Media is historically a plural of the Latin word medium. It can be safely used with a singular verb, however, depending on what it is intended to mean. When the subject is the broadcast, digital and print press in general, including all its personnel, equipment and policies, a singular verb is acceptable. The word is also invariably preceded by the in such usages: The media has covered the story ad nauseam. 290 Commonly misused words Plural media should be avoided to refer to a single system or method of communication. The singular medium should be used instead: Print is an outdated medium. It is important to avoid the bogus plural medias. The correct form is media, as in new media. number Either a singular or a plural verb can accompany the collective noun number, depending on how it is used. If the definite article the precedes number, a particular number is stipulated, even if of and a series of things comes next. Therefore, a singular verb should be used with number preceded by the: The number of surgical masks available is limited. If, on the other hand, the indefinite article a precedes number, a plural verb should be used: A number of surgical masks are available. one When a prepositional phrase immediately follows one and modifies it, sense determines whether the verb should be singular or plural. In any given case one choice is right and the other wrong. To decide which verb form to choose, the starting point should be what follows the preposition. For example, in He is one of those people who are [not is] always trying to impress the key preposition is of. If we try transposing the example, we can see that it is not equivalent in meaning to Of those people, he is one who is always trying to impress. 291 Grammar Guide Rather, transposing another way, the idea is Of those people who are always trying to impress, he is one. Here the form of the verb be is governed not by one but by people, and therefore one of those people who are is right. In the following example the choice of the form of be is governed by only: She is the only one among those people who is worth talking to. If we transpose, we can see the idea is Among those people, she is the only one who is worth talking to. So in this case one among those people who is is right. people In most cases people behaves as a plural, as in People are strange; you never know what they will do. However when people means ‘a group of human beings sharing a specific nationality, culture or language’, it’s regarded as a singular and when used in the plural, takes an -s plural ending: a Celtic people one of several such peoples noted for their pacifism The possessive of people is formed by adding an ’s if one people is intended: She’s the people’s choice for President. If many peoples are intended, the possessive is formed by adding an apostrophe after the plural -s: Various Native American peoples’ representatives attended the conference. 292 Commonly misused words per cent If per cent stands alone without a subsequent prepositional phrase, either a singular or a plural verb can be used with it: Sixty per cent is accounted for. Sixty per cent are accounted for. If a prepositional phrase following per cent contains a noun or pronoun object regarded as a unit or a whole, a singular verb should be used: Sixty per cent of the electorate is accounted for. If the object of the preposition in such a phrase is regarded as a number of people or things, a plural verb is appropriate: Sixty per cent of the votes are accounted for. percentage If the definite article the precedes percentage, just one specific percentage is indicated, so a singular verb should be used: The percentage of families living below the poverty line is shocking. If the indefinite article a precedes percentage, and when the noun or pronoun in any subsequent prepositional phrase is regarded as a countable plural, not a unit or a whole, a plural verb should be used: A large percentage of the errors are to be found in this text. If the noun or pronoun object in such a phrase is singular or is regarded as a unit or a whole, a singular verb is appropriate: A large percentage of the electorate remains undecided. series The plural of the singular noun series is the same: series. So, series can take either a singular or a plural verb depending on its meaning. If it is used to mean ‘a single set of things’, a 293 Grammar Guide singular verb is appropriate, even if series is followed by the preposition of and a plural noun: A series of medical tests is planned for next week. If series is used in the plural to mean ‘two or more sets of things’, a plural verb is appropriate: Several series of medical tests are planned over the next month. what If what is used as the subject of a clause, it takes a plural or singular verb depending on whether its complement (that is, the word or phrase completing the sentence) is plural or singular. (For examples, see chapter 2, page 42.) 294 chapter 10 Word families nicholas: That dear octopus from whose tentacles we never quite escape, nor, in our inmost hearts, ever quite wish to. Dodie Smith Dear Octopus (1938) English belongs to a family of languages (Germanic) that also includes German and the Scandinavian languages. In addition to this, it draws a large number of words from two languages that are not directly related to Germanic, namely Greek and Latin. Roots Learning to recognise some of the Greek and Latin roots in modern English words can offer important clues as to what the words mean. This in turn enriches one’s appreciation of English, and some of the subtleties at play in the language. To that end, this chapter presents some key word families based on Greek and Latin, as well as a few other roots. Individual words are for the most part accompanied by simple definitions and examples of usage, to enable fuller understanding. aerial, aerobic, aerodynamic, aerospace This word family shares the element aer, which comes from the Greek aer, meaning ‘air’. 295 Grammar Guide aerial 1. consisting of, typical of, or relating to the air 2. carried out from or involving aircraft • aerial photography aerobic living or taking place in the presence of free oxygen; relating to exercise taken to improve the cardiovascular system • The bacteria were grown under aerobic conditions. • Aerobic exercise increases respiration and heart rates. aerodynamic designed to reduce air resistance, especially to increase fuel efficiency or maximum speed • The racing car was built with sleek, aerodynamic lines. aerospace 1. the Earth’s atmosphere and outer space 2. relating to the design, manufacture and flight of vehicles or missiles that fly in and beyond the Earth’s atmosphere • Aerospace medicine is concerned with the stresses experienced by the human body in flight. androgynous, android, misandry, polyandry This word family shares the element andr, which comes from the Greek andros, meaning ‘man’. androgynous exhibiting elements that are both masculine and feminine • She had a nice cameo role as an androgynous security guard. android robot or automaton in the form of a man • Their modest domestic needs were served by an android called Marnya. misandry hatred of men • The organisation’s latest ad campaign is accused of promoting misandry. polyandry practice of having more than one husband • studying an island with a tradition of polyandry anthropoid, anthropomorphism, misanthropy, philanthropy This word family shares the element anthr, which comes from the Greek anthropos, meaning ‘human being’. 296 Word families anthropoid resembling humans • anthropoid apes anthropomorphism instance of ascribing human qualities to something not human • As children, we accept talking animals in stories without knowing or caring that it is an example of anthropomorphism. misanthropy hatred or dislike of people in general • With a scowl or gruff word for all he met, his misanthropy was known to everyone in the neighbourhood. philanthropy sympathy and concern for fellow humans, or acts that show this • Her interest in helping others started with a second-hand clothes project, and she remained committed to philanthropy her whole life. antibiotic, biology, biopsy, biotechnology, probiotic This word family shares the element bio, which comes from the Greek bios, meaning ‘life’. antibiotic substance that kills or inactivates bacteria • Antibiotics have no effect against viruses. biology the science that deals with all forms of life, including their classification, physiology, chemistry and interactions • human biology biopsy removal of a sample of tissue from a living person for laboratory examination • The doctors decided to do a lung biopsy. biotechnology use of biological processes in industrial production • Early examples of biotechnology include the making of cheese, wine and beer, while later developments include vaccine and insulin production. probiotic substance that contains microorganisms claimed to be beneficial to humans and animals or to promote their growth • Probiotics can be used to help restore healthy digestion after illness. 297 Grammar Guide benefactor, beneficial, beneficiary, benefit, benevolent This word family shares the element bene, which comes from the Latin bene, meaning ‘well’. benefactor financial supporter of a cause, institution or person • Years later I found out the name of my secret benefactor. beneficial producing a good or advantageous effect • The exercise should prove beneficial to his health. beneficiary someone entitled to money or property by a will, trust or insurance policy • Her nephew was the main beneficiary of her will. benefit something that has a good effect or promotes wellbeing • They eventually reaped the benefits of their hard work. benevolent showing kindness or goodwill • a benevolent smile bel canto, cantata, canto, cantor, recant This word family shares the element cant, which comes from the Latin canere, meaning ‘sing’ or ‘chant’. bel canto style of operatic singing that uses a pure, even tone • her distinctive bel canto voice cantata narrative composition for choirs, set to music but not acted • His conducting brought out the drama inherent in the arias of the cantata. canto main division of a long poem • In Canto XXXI of the poem, the course of the narrative shifts. cantor someone whose job is to sing in a synagogue or cathedral • A rabbi and cantor will lead participants through the Haggadah. recant withdraw formally a statement made earlier • They were given the chance to recant, they did so, and they went on with their work. 298 Word families ➔ Other words that come from the same Latin source include accent, chant and incantation. capitation, capitulation, decapitate, per capita, recapitulate This word family shares the element capit, which comes from the Latin caput, meaning ‘head’. capitation assessment or fee based on the number of people, or ‘heads’ • The insurance company pays the doctor a capitation fee for each covered person enrolled in his practice plan each year. capitulation complete surrender, or the terms of this • They gave in on most of the disputed items, but stopped short of complete capitulation. decapitate cut off the head • I remember once as a child decapitating my toy soldiers. per capita for each person or ‘head’ • The annual per capita income of this city is £17,000. recapitulate summarise or repeat the main headings • Let’s recapitulate the steps to take if you are in the path of the storm. conclude, exclude, include, preclude, seclude This word family shares the element clud, which comes from the Latin claudere, meaning ‘close’. conclude come to a final decision about something • In the end we concluded we had no option but to collaborate. exclude prevent someone from taking part in something or entering a place • All members of staff were automatically excluded from the competition. include make someone part of a group • I longed to be included in their games. 299 Grammar Guide preclude rule something out in advance • Careful screening of applicants should preclude the possibility of the wrong candidates being called for interview. seclude keep separate or apart • He lived in a secluded villa, away from the prying eyes of the public. ➔ Other words that come from this Latin root include cloister, conclusive, recluse and the medical term occluded, meaning ‘blocked’. anachronism, asynchronous, chronology, ­synchronicity, synchronise This word family shares the element chron, which comes from the Greek chronos, meaning ‘time’. anachronism something that is out of place with respect to time • The film was set in the Old West, but had some anachronisms, such as a reference to the FBI, which wasn’t established until 1908. asynchronous not occurring at the same time, or, in computing, involving a data transfer protocol that does not use fixed time intervals • an asynchronous communications link chronology order in which events occur, or a list of these • Detectives are now working to establish the chronology of events prior to the murder. synchronicity coincidence of events that seem to be related but are not the cause of one another • Those with an interest in synchronicity will be intrigued by these two simultaneous deaths thousands of miles apart. synchronise make something happen, work or operate at the same time • Let’s synchronise our watches and be back here again at half past two. 300 Word families corporal, corps, corpulent, corpus, incorporate This word family shares the element corp, which comes from the Latin corpus, meaning ‘body’. corporal of the human body; physical • corporal punishment corps group of soldiers or others with a common purpose • The signal corps set up drill exercises early that morning. corpulent fat • He’s quite corpulent now so can’t wear his old suit to the event. corpus (formal) body of texts or writings • the corpus of Shakespeare’s works incorporate combine with something else • I managed to incorporate the exercises into my daily routine. ➔ The legal term habeas corpus literally means ‘You should have the body.’ abdicate, dedicate, indicate, predicate This word family shares the element dic, which comes from the Latin dicare, meaning ‘proclaim’. abdicate give up a high office formally or officially, especially the throne • The King was forced to abdicate in favour of his brother. dedicate commit oneself or one’s life to something • He dedicated himself to serving God. indicate point something out or point to something • A sign indicated the way to the town. predicate base an opinion, an action or a result on something • Advertising rates are predicated on the newspaper’s circulation figures. 301 Grammar Guide centrifugal, fugitive, refugee, subterfuge This word family shares the element fug, which comes from the Latin fugere, meaning ‘flee’. centrifugal moving outwards from the centre • The centrifugal force on the roller coaster pushed us to the edge of our seats. fugitive person who is fleeing • Interpol tracked the fugitive across Europe. refugee someone who has escaped from something • a boatload of refugees stranded in the Mediterranean subterfuge something done to evade a rule, escape a consequence, etc. • subterfuge employed to hide his secret past ➔ The Latin original of the saying ‘time flies’ is tempus fugit, which also shares this root. gynarchy, gynaecology, misogyny, polygyny This word family shares the element gyn, which comes from the Greek gyne, meaning ‘woman’. gynarchy rule by women • The gynarchy is subject to the same power struggles as other groups. gynaecology branch of medicine that deals with women’s health • a professor of clinical obstetrics and gynaecology whose speciality is infertility misogyny someone who hates women • His constant cracks and putdowns revealed him to be a misogynist. polygyny practice of having more than one wife • Very few cultures permit or encourage polygyny today. compel, dispel, expel, impel, propel, repel This word family shares the element pel, which comes from the Latin pellere, meaning ‘beat’. 302 Word families compel force someone to do something • He was compelled to appear before the court. dispel to get rid of something such as a false idea • She was eager to dispel any notion I might have that it would be easy. expel push or drive something out with force • Air is expelled under pressure through special outlets in the machine casing. impel make someone feel the need to do something • I felt impelled to explain to her why I was there. propel push someone or something forward • jet-propelled aircraft repel force back or away • a lotion designed to repel mosquitoes and other biting insects ➔ Other words that come from this Latin root include appeal, push, pulse, repeal and repulsion. abject, conjecture, dejected, interject, trajectory This word family shares the element ject, which comes from the Latin jacere, meaning ‘throw’. abject 1. completely hopeless 2. utterly contemptible • More than 700 million people worldwide live in abject poverty. conjecture opinion based on guessing, or the process of doing this • There has been much conjecture in the press about an impending engagement. dejected disheartened and depressed, or cast down • The fans felt dejected at the cancellation of the match. interject say something while another person is speaking • He interjected questions throughout my presentation. trajectory path followed by something in flight • They did a final trajectory correction this morning and the craft landed right on target. 303 Grammar Guide circumlocution, elocution, interlocutor, locution This word family shares the element locu, which comes from Latin loqui, meaning ‘speak’. circumlocution roundabout way of speaking, or a roundabout expression • The subject was delicate, and it required a degree of circumlocution to avoid offending the guests. elocution skill of speaking aloud, or the study of doing this • When I was young my mum made me take elocution lessons. interlocutor participant in a conversation • He’s only been in office two weeks, so there hasn’t been an interlocutor there. locution style of speech; word or expression • It’s a distinctive locution that’s only heard in this part of the country. ➔ Note the similarities between this family and the next, both of which derive from the Latin word for ‘speak’. colloquial, eloquent, grandiloquent, loquacious, soliloquy This word family shares the element loqu, which comes from the Latin loqui, meaning ‘speak’. colloquial appropriate to or reflecting ordinary informal speech • She speaks fluent colloquial Spanish. eloquent forcefully, fluently or vividly expressive in language • The president of the student body made an eloquent request for better library resources. grandiloquent using florid or pompous language • Politicians who give such grandiloquent speeches show little understanding of job opportunities in the region. loquacious overly talkative • The interview programme offers loquacious celebrities an unparalleled opportunity for self-promotion. 304 Word families soliloquy talking to oneself, especially an instance of this in drama • Hamlet’s well-known soliloquy, ‘To be or not to be.’ amnesia, amnesty, mnemonic This word family shares the element mne, which comes from the Greek mnasthai, meaning ‘remember’. amnesia loss of memory • Excessive alcohol use can lead to bouts of amnesia. amnesty official pardon to someone who has committed a political crime • We declared an amnesty on behalf of all illegal immigrants. mnemonic relating to or aiding the memory • I learnt the order of the notes in the spaces on the treble clef using the mnemonic FACE. amortise, mortmain, mortuary, post-mortem, rigor mortis This word family shares the element mort, which comes from the Latin mors (mort-), meaning ‘death’. amortise gradually eliminate a debt by regular payments • The loan will be amortised over twenty-five years. mortmain permanent possession of land by a religious organisation • A clause enabled them to purchase and hold lands in mortmain. mortuary building where corpses are prepared for burial • The body was embalmed in the mortuary. post-mortem examination of a corpse to determine the cause of death • The post-mortem revealed the cause of death to be head injuries sustained in the accident. rigor mortis rigidity that sets into the bodies of warm-blooded creatures after death • estimate time of death from the degree of rigor mortis 305 Grammar Guide parable, parley, parole This word family shares the element par, which comes from the Latin parabola, meaning ‘parable’ or ‘story’. parable story with a moral lesson, with symbolic characters and events • the parable of the loaves and fishes parley conference of discussion, especially between opposing sides • The parley over the new boundary lasted well into the night. parole early release of a prisoner on certain conditions that he or she promises to meet • He was allowed out on parole after two years. ➔ The word palaver, which can mean unnecessary trouble or time-wasting talk, comes from the same root, via a Portuguese word. bacteriophage, oesophagus, macrophage, sarcophagus This word family shares the element phag, which comes from the Greek phagein, meaning ‘eat’. bacteriophage any of a group of viruses that infect and devour bacteria oesophagus tube that carries food from the mouth to the stomach macrophage type of white blood cell that ingests infectious agents in the body sarcophagus a stone coffin or other container • The ancient sarcophagus was the centrepiece of the Egyptian exhibit. ➔ The Greeks believed that a certain kind of stone consumed corpses and this stone was used to make coffins; hence sarcophagus. 306 Word families acclaim, clamour, exclaim, proclaim This word family shares the element clam or claim, which comes from the Latin clamare, meaning ‘call’. acclaim praise someone or something publicly • She was acclaimed the winner by an enthusiastic audience. clamour loud noise of people shouting together • We could barely hear ourselves speak for the clamour of the crowd. exclaim say something suddenly and loudly • ‘It’s you!’ she exclaimed in astonishment. proclaim announce something publicly or formally • He was proclaimed leader after winning a secret ballot. precipice, precipitant, precipitate, precipitous This word family shares the common element preci, which comes ultimately from Latin praeceps, meaning ‘headlong’. precipice steep or vertical rock face • He stood right on the edge of the precipice, gazing down. precipitant immediate cause of another thing • a severe asthmatic attack without any apparent precipitant precipitate bring about suddenly or prematurely • symptoms of the disease can be precipitated by stressful events precipitous done too quickly • His precipitous reaction just made things worse. ➔ The meanings of precipitate and precipitation that describe rain and snow come from the same Latin root and share the idea of ‘falling from a high place’. concise, decide, excise, incisive, precise This word family shares the common element cid or cis, which comes from Latin caedere, meaning ‘cut’. 307 Grammar Guide concise using as few words as possible • give a clear, concise account of what happened decide make a choice about something • We had to decide which of the candidates was best. excise remove or delete something • The paragraph had been excised from the final manuscript. incisive expressed in a clear, direct way • sum up the situation in a few incisive comments precise exact and accurate • We don’t yet have precise details of what went wrong. ➔ Other words that come from this Latin root include chisel and scissors. abrupt, disrupt, interrupt, rupture This word family shares the element rupt, which comes from the Latin rumpere, meaning ‘break’. abrupt sudden and unexpected • The car came to an abrupt halt. disrupt stop the normal course of a process or activity • The latecomers disrupted the service. interrupt halt the flow of a speaker or of a speaker’s words with a question or remark • Wait till Grandma’s finished talking – it’s rude to interrupt. rupture break, burst or tear something, or become broken, burst or torn • The rock ruptured the bottom of the boat. • A blood vessel had ruptured. circumspect, introspection, prospectus, retrospective, spectrum This word family shares the element spect, which comes from the Latin specere, meaning ‘see’. 308 Word families circumspect thoughtful and cautious before acting • Officials were circumspect about the type of aircraft involved in the incident and its location. introspection examination of one’s own thoughts and feelings • We should all take time from our busy schedules for introspection. prospectus document that describes the major benefits or attractions of something, such as a share offer • The company prospectus outlines the plan to use the proceeds of the offer to finance low-cost residential housing. retrospective looking backwards in time, into the past • The show is a retrospective of his work over the last twenty-five years. spectrum range or scale of related things • At one end of the spectrum a work is produced using a computer as a tool, while at the other there is little or no direct human involvement in the process. ➔ The original sense of circumspect is ‘looking around’, as someone who was being cautious would do. geothermal, isotherm, thermodynamics, thermometry, thermotropic This word family shares the element therm, which comes from the Greek thermos, meaning ‘hot’. geothermal relating to heat produced inside the Earth • energy derived from geothermal deposits isotherm line on a map connecting points of equal temperature thermodynamics the branch of physics that deals with heat and motion • attempts to defy the second law of thermodynamics thermometry the science of measuring temperature • Acoustic thermometry tracks long-term changes in ocean temperature by using sounds transmitted through the ocean. 309 Grammar Guide thermotropic (of plants, etc.) turning towards a source of heat • Most liquid crystals are thermotropic. ectopic, topical, topography, topology This word family shares the element top, which comes from the Greek topos, meaning ‘place’. ectopic occurring in an abnormal place • An ectopic pregnancy occurs in a Fallopian tube rather than in the womb. topical of interest currently or locally • She sprinkled her speech with topical references. topography detailed mapping of an area or surface • topographical maps topology the branch of mathematics that deals with surfaces Affixes English, like many other languages, has meaningful units call affixes: letters or combinations of letters that can be added, usually to the beginning or end of a word, to change its meaning in a predictable way. Like roots, many affixes in English derive from Latin and Greek. Prefixes are affixes that start a word. Instances include anti-, non- and un-, all of which reverse the meaning of a word, changing it to its opposite (for example, able and unable). The prefix nano- indicates something very small, or, more precisely, something divided into parts of a billion (for example, nanosecond). An affix occurring at the end of a word is called a suffix. The suffix -logy is usually used to create a noun denoting the study of a subject (for example, musicology, dermatology, pharmacology). The suffix -phobia is a sign of a noun meaning the fear of something (for example, agoraphobia). If someone 310 Word families has an inflammation, its name may end in -itis (for example, tonsillitis). The great advantage of being able to recognise these elements is that it enables prediction of the meaning of a word not encountered before. It also gives a deeper understanding of the word. The lists below give some of the affixes still being used to form new words in English. Many of the new words are in technical fields, such as chemistry or medicine. Aceto-, for example, which comes from Latin acetum, meaning ‘vinegar’, forms compounds such as acetify and acetone. Prefixes In the list of prefixes below, note that prefixes ending with a vowel occasionally lose the vowel or change it to another when prefixed to a word beginning with a vowel (for example, octo- Æ octave). Prefix and meaning ambi-, ‘both’, amphi-, ‘both sides’ biblio-, ‘book’ Example words bibliography, bibliomania broncho-, ‘tube leading to lung’ bronchial, bronchitis endo-, ‘within’ endogenous, endomorph, endoplasm dys-, ‘ill’, ‘bad’ equi- ‘equal’ Root ambidexterity, ambiguous, Latin ambi, ‘on ambisexual amphibious, both sides’ amphitheatre Greek amphi, on ‘both sides’ dysfunction, dysentery, dyslexia equidistant, equitable, equivalent 311 Greek biblion, ‘book’ Greek brongkhos, ‘windpipe’ Greek dys, ‘bad’ Greek endon, ‘within’ Latin aequus, ‘equal’ Grammar Guide Prefix and meaning Example words Root ethno-, ‘people’, ‘culture’ ethnocentrism, ethnographer, ethnology eu-, ‘well’, ‘good’ eulogy, euphemism, euphoria Greek ethnos, ‘race’, ‘culture’, ‘people’ geo-, ‘earth’, ‘soil’ haemo- ‘blood’ hepta-, ‘seven’ hetero-, ‘other’, ‘different’ hexa-, ‘six’ homeo-, homo-, ‘alike’, ‘same’ geography, geologist, geometry Greek ge, ‘Earth’ heptagon, heptameter, heptathlon Greek hepta, ‘seven’ hexagon, hexagram, hexameter Greek hex, ‘six’ haemoglobin, haemophilia, haemorrhage heterodox, heterogeneous, heterosexual homogeneous, homeopathy, homosexual iso-, ‘equal’ isobar, isometrics, isotope mal-, ‘bad’ maladjusted, malcontent, malpractice mono-, ‘one’ octo-, ‘eight’ omni-, ‘all’ ortho-, ‘straight’, ‘correct’ Greek eus, ‘good’ monocle, monologue, monopoly octave, octogenarian, octagon omnipotent, omnipresent, omniscient Greek haima, ‘blood’ Greek heteros, ‘other’ Greek homious, ‘similar’ and homos, ‘one’ Greek isos, ‘equal’ Latin malus, ‘bad’ Greek monos, ‘alone’ Greek octo, ‘eight’ Latin omnis, ‘all’ orthodontist, orthography, Greek orthos, orthopaedic, orthodox ‘straight’, ‘correct’ 312 Word families Prefix and meaning pan-, panto-, ‘all’ paedo-, pedo-, ‘child’ penta-, ‘five’ poly-, ‘many’ proto-, ‘first’, ‘original’ psycho-, ‘mind’, ‘mental’ quadri-, ‘four’ tele-, ‘distant’ tetra-, ‘four’ theo-, ‘god’ trans-, ‘across’ Example words Root panacea, pandemic, panorama Greek pan, ‘all’, ‘every’ pentagon, pentagram, pentathlon Greek pente, ‘five’ pedagogue, paediatric, paediatrician polygon, polysyllable, polytechnic protoplasm, prototype, protozoan psyche, psychoanalyse, psychology quadrangle, quadrilinear, quadruped, quadruplet telecommunications, telephoto, telemedicine tetrachloride, tetragon, tetrahedron theocracy, theology transalpine, transfer, transgender Greek pais, ‘child’ Greek polus, ‘much’ Greek protos, ‘first’ Greek psukhe, ‘breath, mind, soul’ Latin quattuor, ‘four’ Greek tele, ‘far away’ Greek tettares, ‘four’ Greek theos, ‘god’ Latin trans, ‘across’ English words that relate to numbers may borrow prefixes from both Greek and Latin, such as Latin quadri- and Greek tetra-, both of which mean ‘four’. In cases where there are two possible prefixes, the Greek forms may be reserved for scientific and mathematical terms, though this is not always the case. 313 Grammar Guide Suffixes Suffix and meaning Example words Root -agogue, ‘leader’, ‘bringer’ demagogue, pedagogue, synagogue Greek agein, ‘lead’ -arch, ‘leader’ monarch, oligarch, patriarch Greek arkhein, ‘rule’ -ana, ‘collection of Americana, Victoriana things’ -arium, ‘place’ -centric, ‘centring or focusing on’ -cide, ‘killer’, ‘killing’ -cracy, ‘rule’, ‘government’ -escent, ‘beginning’ -gamy, ‘marriage’ -gen, ‘thing that produces’ -genesis, ‘producing’, ‘originating’ aquarium, herbarium, planetarium Latin -arium, ‘place’ egocentric, ethnocentric, Latin centrum, Eurocentric ‘centre’ homicide, pesticide, suicide aristocracy, democracy, plutocracy Latin caedere, ‘kill’ Greek kratos, ‘rule’ adolescent, convalescent, Latin -escent, effervescent participial form indicating ‘beginning’ bigamy, monogamy, polygamy Greek gamos, ‘marriage’ biogenesis, mutagenesis, oncogenesis Greek genesis, ‘origin’, ‘source’ allergen, antigen, hallucinogen -metry, ‘measurement’ geometry, psychometry -phile, ‘one who likes’ bibliophile, Francophile -onym, ‘name’, ‘word’ Latin -ana, ‘relating to’ acronym, homonym, synonym 314 Greek -genus, ‘born’ Greek metron, ‘measure’ Greek onoma, ‘name’ Greek filos, ‘loving’ Word families Suffix and meaning -phobia, ‘irrational fear’ -rrhoea, ‘flow’ Example words Root agoraphobia, arachnophobia, claustrophobia Greek phobos, ‘fear’ diarrhoea, seborrhoea Greek rhein, ‘flow’ -scope, ‘instrument for viewing’ horoscope, microscope, telescope Greek scopein, ‘look’, ‘see’ -vore, -vorous, ‘devouring’ carnivore, herbivore, omnivorous -sect, ‘divide’, ‘cut’ bisect, dissect -tomy, ‘surgical removal’ appendectomy, dichotomy, vasectomy 315 Latin sectus, ‘cut’ Greek tomos, ‘cutting’ Latin vorus, ‘devouring’ 316 chapter 11 Just the opposite Light, dark. Fear, courage. Cold, warmth. Female, male. It is yourself, Therem. Both and one. A shadow on snow. Ursula K. Le Guin The Left Hand of Darkness (1969) Familiarity with both a word and its opposite implies knowledge of two related words. Though it may seem counterintuitive, polarities represent links. Thesauruses and certain dictionaries may list not only synonyms (see chapter 7, page 115) but also sometimes opposites, known as antonyms. And, like both synonyms and word families (see chapter 10, page 295), antonyms contribute to the vast interconnectedness of English words. This chapter introduces word pairs. Adjectives, nouns and verbs are given, along with their often unpredictable opposites. Words that form an opposite in a standard way – for example, by adding the prefixes in-, un-, non-, dis- or de- – are not included here, though there is a short final section on nonstandard in- and un- word antonyms. Words for which both members of the pair are common or well-known are similarly excluded. The aim of the chapter is to further map linguistic connections, by linking words as opposites that may not be obvious. 317 Grammar Guide Antonyms In the list below, words on the left are followed by an opposite term on the right with their meaning in between. Under the left-hand word is a short definition of its meaning, to clarify which sense of the word is intended. For example, the headword ailing is opposite to thriving, and it is defined as meaning ‘experiencing difficulties and becoming weaker’. So, a company that is ailing is suffering economic difficulties or failing, whereas one that is thriving is flourishing and doing well. Adjectives antonym / adjective meaning above board honest, legal and without deception existing in thought but not physically present in great quantities appallingly bad considered to be satisfactory sufficient in quality or quantity to meet a need deserving to be respected full of praise for someone or something (of a parent or child) related by adoption having an abundance of material wealth ready or tending to attack or do harm to others experiencing difficulties and becoming weaker abstract abundant abysmal acceptable adequate admirable admiring adoptive affluent aggressive ailing opposite 318 underhand concrete scarce superb inadmissible insufficient despicable contemptuous biological impoverished defensive thriving Just the opposite adjective meaning antonym aloof uninvolved or distant, sometimes out of a sense of superiority friendly, without anger or bad feelings as much or as many as required, usually with some left over showing or expressing hostility quaint, extremely out of date, or badly in need of updating or replacing expressing regret or contrition for something showing proud self-importance and disregard for others able to express thoughts, ideas and feelings clearly confident in stating one’s position shrewd and discerning, and not easily fooled loud or clear enough to be heard strongly opposed to or disliking something involved brutal or primitive enhancing someone’s appearance offensively, often intentionally, obtrusive and conspicuous full of noisy enthusiasm and energy, and often roughness or wildness authentic and genuine in nature self-assertive in an aggressive or rude way civilised unflattering amicable ample antagonistic antiquated apologetic arrogant articulate assertive astute audible averse barbarous becoming blatant boisterous bona fide brash 319 hostile scant appeasing futuristic unrepentant humble incoherent meek naive indistinct inclined discreet sedate bogus unassertive Grammar Guide adjective meaning antonym brazen showing or expressing boldness and complete lack of shame willing to tolerate a wide range of ideas and behaviour growing or expanding rapidly coy broad-minded burgeoning callous intolerant dwindling showing no concern if other people are hurt or upset capable good at tasks or jobs circuitous lengthy because indirect clumsy poorly coordinated physically combustible able to catch fire and burn complimentary expressing praise or approval compulsory required by law or an authority concave curved inwards like the inner surface of a bowl conceivable possible to imagine, understand or believe conscious awake and responsive to stimuli constrained lacking naturalness or spontaneity because of selfconsciousness, reserve or inhibiting circumstances convincing (of argument or statement) persuading someone to believe something is true or real cooperative doing, or willing to do, what is asked or required credulous easily convinced that something is true cursory done in a quick or superficial way warm-hearted damning debatable laudatory incontestable very critical or unfavourable open to discussion and uncertain 320 inept direct adroit fireproof disparaging elective convex unimaginable comatose unfettered implausible adversarial sceptical thorough Just the opposite adjective meaning antonym deferential showing or expressing polite respect or courtesy no longer operative, valid or functional feeling lack of hope, especially because of disappointment irrational as a temporary result of a physical condition such as a fever openly showing love and affection towards someone extremely unhappy and discouraged feeling or showing firmness or a fixed purpose causing or deserving intense dislike causing harm or damage not straightforward or honest about one’s intentions deeply and faithfully religious lacking self-confidence and shy persistent and hard-working unhappy because reality does not match expectations in disagreement giving the freedom to decide depending on individual circumstances able to identify subtle differences and appreciate good quality or taste insincere and often withholding information showing a lack of faith in or loyalty to someone or something condescending defunct dejected delirious demonstrative despondent determined detestable detrimental devious devout diffident diligent disappointed discordant discretionary discriminating disingenuous disloyal 321 active elated lucid inhibited ecstatic irresolute adorable beneficial forthright irreligious assured idle jubilant harmonious obligatory uncritical artless constant Grammar Guide adjective meaning antonym dispropor­ tionate docile unequal or out of proportion in quantity, size or value quiet, easy to control, and unlikely to cause trouble unable or unwilling to shed tears uncertain or doubtful about something commensurate enthusiastic and excited to do something not causing difficulty or requiring much effort said or saying something in a forceful, expressive and persuasive way displaying great vigour or force free of ignorance, prejudice or superstition showing passionate interest in something or eagerness about something lasting for only a short time not easily angered or upset (formal) high in rank, position or esteem beyond what is considered acceptable, usual or necessary nervous and liable to become quickly excited strikingly unusual and suggesting faraway places willing to talk openly and at some length possessing knowledge and skill acquired over a length of time loath dry-eyed dubious eager easy eloquent energetic enlightened enthusiastic ephemeral even-tempered exalted excessive excitable exotic expansive experienced 322 headstrong lachrymose convinced arduous inarticulate lethargic benighted apathetic timeless fractious lowly moderate imperturbable parochial limited fledgling Just the opposite adjective meaning antonym explicit expressing details in a clear and obvious way uncovered and therefore visible or without protection situated on, happening on, or coming from the outside outside or additional to the usual courses of study at an educational institution characterised by spending excessively or wastefully implicit well known, commonly seen or heard, and easily recognised known and recognised by many people able to support life or procreate likely to change, especially in affections, intentions, loyalties or preferences using a non-literal sense of a word or words relating to a child’s relationship with his or her parents with an end or limit presenting an appearance that causes dread or fear communicative and informative having a pleasant or sweet smell open, honest, and sometimes forceful in expression characteristic of or suitable to a relationship between friends characterised by thriftiness and avoidance of waste feeling unfulfilled or unsatisfied alien exposed external extramural extravagant familiar famous fertile fickle figurative filial finite formidable forthcoming fragrant frank friendly frugal frustrated 323 buried internal intramural parsimonious obscure barren loyal literal parental endless approachable close-lipped malodorous mealymouthed hostile lavish fulfilled Grammar Guide adjective meaning antonym garrulous excessively or pointlessly talkative applying to any member of a group or class having the qualities or value claimed very large, tall or bulky proceeding or developing slowly by steps or degrees done or given reluctantly having or showing no deceit or expectation of being deceived taciturn made commonplace and stale by overuse hesitant or done with frequent irregular pauses happening or done in a way that has not been planned relating to or sounding in harmony providing or willing to give assistance or information consisting of parts or individual elements that are unrelated or unlike each other having a large amount of hair with a relatively high level of moisture in the air done too quickly because of a real or perceived lack of time fresh existing only in the mind, not in reality showing no emotion, especially in facial expression actual generic genuine gigantic gradual grudging guileless hackneyed halting haphazard harmonious helpful heterogeneous hirsute humid hurried imaginary impassive 324 specific sham minuscule abrupt generous cunning fluent methodical discordant obstructive homogeneous hairless arid measured expressive Just the opposite adjective meaning antonym impenitent having no regret for immorality or misbehaviour unsuitable or out of place not fitting, timely or suitable not well thought out or clearly expressed lacking thought or consideration for other people and their feelings showing no curiosity about or interest in something giving comprehensive and thorough consideration to something making no distinctions impossible to doubt, question or deny lethargic and not showing any interest or making any effort unpleasant to eat adhering firmly to a viewpoint showing or having knowledge of a situation or subject not very large, solid or strong done on purpose, not by accident happening from time to time easily angered or annoyed when things do not go as desired resisting attempts to control, correct or influence tending to be shy and quiet, or ill at ease in a group incapable of being defeated or beaten, owing to great strength or skill contrite inapposite inappropriate incoherent inconsiderate incurious in-depth indiscriminate indisputable indolent inedible inflexible informed insubstantial intentional intermittent intolerant intractable introverted invincible 325 appropriate apposite lucid attentive inquiring superficial discerning questionable industrious palatable adaptable unenlightened material coincidental constant accepting biddable extroverted vulnerable Grammar Guide adjective meaning antonym inviting suggesting or offering pleasure or enjoyment inhospitable jovial juvenile cheerful in mood or disposition relating to young people morose adult knowledgeable having knowledge ignorant languid laudable lenient lacking vigour and energy admirable and worthy of praise showing tolerance or mercy in dealing with crime or misbehaviour tolerant of different views and standards of behaviour in others dead, or seeming to be dead tending to talk a great deal involving comfort, elegance and often expense vivacious contemptible harsh very generous, kind or forgiving greatest in size or importance having or showing a desire to harm others full of hate and showing a desire to harm others officially required clear to see or understand extremely careful and precise not strong or intense in colour or sound mean-spirited ancillary benevolent liberal lifeless loquacious luxurious magnanimous main malevolent malignant mandatory manifest meticulous muted naive negligible authoritarian animated tight-lipped spartan benign discretionary latent slapdash bold having an excessively simple and cynical trusting view of the world too small or unimportant to be significant worth considering 326 Just the opposite adjective meaning antonym net remaining from an amount after all necessary deductions have been made occurring at night, as opposed to during the day with no interesting or remarkable characteristics gross unaware of or paying no attention to someone or something free from prejudice and receptive to new ideas occurring at just the right time tending to take a hopeful and positive view of future outcomes left to individual choice well-behaved or peaceful creative or unique with elaborate or excessive decoration arrogant and tending to issue orders to others late or after the scheduled time done openly and without any attempt at concealment aware having an unhealthily pale complexion insignificant or unimportant having the ability to persuade people or the effect of persuading them relevant to the matter being considered florid nocturnal nondescript oblivious open-minded opportune optimistic optional orderly original ornate overbearing overdue overt pallid paltry persuasive pertinent 327 diurnal outstanding bigoted ill-timed defeatist compulsory anarchic derivative austere meek premature disguised significant unconvincing extraneous Grammar Guide adjective meaning antonym placid calm and tending not to become excited or disturbed involving friendship, affection or love between people without sexual relations lacking power, strength or effectiveness concerned with practical results in the real world immediately before something else existing or happening during pregnancy but before childbirth organised or arranged ahead of time enjoying advantages available to only a few taking the initiative rather than reacting to events relating to or belonging to a profession extremely extravagant or wasteful done at once and without delay lying on one’s stomach from a simpler, less sophisticated place showing a clear determination boisterous questionable quixotic open to doubt or disagreement impulsive, unpredictable and impractical indisputable down-to-earth reactionary opposed to social or political change regarded as liberal or progressive progressive platonic powerless pragmatic preceding prenatal prepared privileged proactive professional profligate prompt prostrate provincial purposeful 328 romantic omnipotent utopian ensuing postnatal impromptu disadvantaged reactive lay frugal dilatory supine cosmopolitan aimless Just the opposite adjective meaning antonym rebellious opposing or defying authority, accepted moral codes, or social conventions cultured and polite in habits, tastes or appearance not readily showing or expressing emotions possessing determination and purposefulness tending to respond to something characterised by control, especially in not being excessively emotional or aggressive unwilling to talk freely or reveal all the facts disagreeable or discourteous in manner or action conformist dedicated to a deity or religious purpose not controlled by a religious body or concerned with religious or spiritual matters applying to some but not others concerned with one’s own interests, needs and wishes while ignoring those of others lasting or living for only a short time reserved, diffident and uncomfortable in the company of others having enough money to cover expenses and debts relating to, occupying or happening in space profane refined reserved resolute responsive restrained reticent rude sacred secular selective selfish short-lived shy solvent spatial 329 coarse demonstrative vacillating impervious abandoned communi­cative civil divine indiscriminate altruistic enduring outgoing bankrupt temporal Grammar Guide adjective meaning antonym spontaneous resulting from internal or natural processes, with no apparent external influence not being what it claims to be no longer pleasant to eat or of interest (of speech or writing) unnatural or lacking in fluency causing mental or emotional stress giving in or tending to give in to the demands or the authority of others happening or existing after something having the intended result as much as is needed done in a methodical and organised manner forced having or showing concern about upsetting or offending people tending to talk readily and at length only slightly related involving or based on theory lasting for only a short time conforming with reality or fact indiscreet impossible to explain or give a reason for ill-suited to the wearer complete or guaranteed, with no conditions, limitations or provisos attached explicable spurious stale stilted stressful submissive subsequent successful sufficient systematic tactful talkative tangential theoretical transient true unaccountable unbecoming unconditional 330 genuine fresh idiomatic relaxing dominant previous abortive inadequate arbitrary reticent direct applied abiding apocryphal flattering qualified Just the opposite adjective meaning antonym uncontro­versial unlikely to provoke argument or disapproval uncritical too readily accepting, without question unfair not equal or just unfamiliar not previously known or recognised unflappable able to maintain composure under all circumstances uninformed lacking facts or knowledge about a situation or subject unrelated not connected by similarities, source or family contentious valid having a solid foundation or justification showing or characterised by many different forms or kinds open to persuasion by corrupt means, especially bribery expressed in language that is too long-winded or complicated indefensible cautious and watchful based on sound reasons, information or evidence, or on undisputable facts experienced in life unsuspecting baseless varied venal verbose wary well-founded worldly 331 discerning equitable conversant excitable well-read allied monotonous incorruptible concise innocent Grammar Guide Noun antonym / noun meaning abolition act of officially ending a law, regulation or practice political system in which the power of a ruler is unchecked and absolute very large amount of something rate at which something increases in velocity act of adding something onto or into something else feeling of pleasure and approval, and, often, wonder nervous anxiety attitude or way of behaving marked by unselfish concern for the welfare of others quality of something possibly being understood in more than one way someone from whom one is directly descended, especially someone more distant than a grandparent complete or exact opposite of something austerity and self-denial, especially as a principled way of life someone or something that is useful and contributes to success preservation behind the scenes substance, act or words that soothe forefront irritant absolutism abundance acceleration addition admiration agitation altruism ambiguity ancestor antithesis asceticism asset background balm opposite 332 democracy scarcity deceleration deduction scorn composure egotism clarity descendant equivalent hedonism liability Just the opposite noun meaning antonym base lowest, bottom or supporting part or layer of something financial supporter of a cause, institution or individual something that is a great benefit to someone apex stop, pause or interruption body of people ordained for religious service behaving or thinking in a socially acceptable or expected way powerful feeling of dislike towards someone or something considered to be worthless, inferior or undeserving of respect guilty verdict continuation laity benefactor boon cessation clergy conformity contempt conviction demotion reduction in the rank, status or position of someone or something denial statement saying that something is not true or not correct detractor belittler of something or someone detriment damage, harm or disadvantage dilution thinning or weakening of a substance by the addition of another substance disagreement expression of a difference of opinion disappoint­ment feeling of sadness or frustration because of failed expectations discontent unhappiness or dissatisfaction discord disagreement or strife 333 beneficiary nuisance deviance esteem acquittal elevation admission proponent benefit concentration accord jubilation contentment harmony Grammar Guide noun meaning antonym disdain extreme contempt or disgust for something or someone disinclination reluctance to do something disintegration irreversible breaking into components or fragments disorgani­sation lack of organisation or orderly arrangement disrespect lack of respect divergence moving apart of two or more things dystopia imaginary place where everything is as bad as it could possibly be approval epilogue short speech, usually in verse, that an actor addresses directly to the audience at the end of a play act of founding or starting something word or phrase used in place of a term that might be considered too direct, harsh, unpleasant or offensive sudden loud release of energy and a rapidly expanding volume energetic and socially confident person prologue shortcoming act or process of separating into parts someone who comes from a country other than one’s own part of a building, usually below the ground, that transfers and distributes the weight of the building forte fusion establishment euphemism explosion extrovert failing fission foreigner foundation 334 urge cohesion coordination esteem convergence utopia abolition dysphemism implosion introvert compatriot superstructure Just the opposite noun meaning antonym glut larger supply of something than is needed, especially of a crop or product dearth hindsight opportunity to understand and judge an experience after it has occurred quality of being modest or respectful dry outer covering of some fruits, nuts and grains foreknowledge tendency of a body at rest to stay at rest failure to show or express gratitude unfair or unjust treatment of someone, or an instance of this smaller number or lesser amount than is needed feeling of curiosity or concern about something action undertaken to change what is happening or might happen in another’s affairs section at the beginning of a book or other text, usually summarising it or setting the scene momentum liberty loyalist freedom from captivity firm supporter of a country, ruler or government custody defector macrocosm complex large structure, often the world or the universe, considered as a single entity containing numerous smaller structures microcosm humility husk inertia ingratitude injustice insufficiency interest intervention introduction 335 arrogance kernel appreciation equity adequacy apathy laissez-faire coda Grammar Guide noun meaning antonym miser person who hates spending money or spends very little word or sentence consisting of only one syllable, for example, ‘yes’ belief that there is only one God boredom or dullness arising from the fact that nothing different ever happens act that denotes change or progress spendthrift nadir lowest possible point acme oblivion state of being entirely unconscious state of being unknown or inconspicuous execution of or compliance with laws, instructions or customs person who tends to feel hopeful and positive about future outcomes awareness head or ancestor of an important family area around the edge of a place desire to improve the material, social and spiritual welfare of humanity, especially through charitable activities short message added to the end of a letter, after the signature person who previously held a specific position piece of music that introduces or precedes another one scion monosyllable monotheism monotony movement obscurity observance optimist parent periphery philanthropy postscript predecessor prelude 336 polysyllable polytheism variety stagnation celebrity contravention defeatist centre misanthropy preamble successor finale Just the opposite noun meaning antonym prequel film or novel set at a time preceding the action of an existing work condition of enjoying great wealth, success or good fortune sequel belief that the supreme power of a country should be vested in the people act or quality of holding back, limiting or controlling something exposing of information formerly secret or unknown monarchism stability condition of being stable flux troublemaker person who constantly causes problems conciliator prosperity republicanism restraint revelation destitution abandon concealment Verb antonym / verb meaning admit adore affirm allow someone to enter a place love intensely declare positively that something is true make something worse cause a person or animal to be hostile gain in value bring people or things together, or gather together in one place help someone to do or accomplish something aggravate antagonise appreciate assemble assist opposite 337 bar abhor negate alleviate pacify depreciate disperse impede Grammar Guide verb meaning antonym buoy up give support or encouragement to someone dishearten court try to win influence with someone or to win someone’s approval or favour through flattery or attentiveness reduce the length or duration of something shun exclude someone from entering or taking part in something get weaker express harsh criticism or condemnation of something or someone, usually in public make something smaller or less important end an association or relationship with another person or group break up as a group or organisation, or cause a group or organisation to break up expand into a new area of business reveal information, especially information that was previously secret decrease little by little in size, number or intensity, and approach zero entitle expose someone or something to danger make wealthier safeguard curtail debar decline denounce diminish disassociate disband diversify divulge dwindle endanger enrich 338 extend flourish endorse augment join assemble specialise conceal accrue impoverish Just the opposite verb meaning antonym enslave subject someone to a dominating influence that takes away his or her freedom start or set up something that is intended to continue or be permanent make an already bad or problematic situation worse free someone from blame or accusation of guilt dig up a corpse from a grave declare officially that someone is not to blame or is not guilty of wrongdoing use up time, energy, effort or some other resource blow up or burst with a sudden release of energy and a loud noise, or cause something to blow up or burst explosively emancipate fuse join together to create a whole separate impair lessen the strength or effectiveness of something show that someone or something played a part in a criminal or harmful activity stir up feelings in, or provoke action by, someone contaminate or cause infection in a person or animal with a disease-producing agent excite someone to an intense emotion such as anger or jealousy enhance establish exacerbate exculpate exhume exonerate expend explode implicate incite infect with inflame 339 abolish ameliorate blame bury incriminate conserve implode exonerate quell inoculate against assuage Grammar Guide verb meaning antonym inherit receive something when a person dies in accordance with the terms of a will or as the result of a bequest fill someone or something with energy or life bequeath liquefy become or cause something to become liquid congeal mollify calm or soothe someone who is angry or upset provoke obfuscate make something obscure or unclear comply with illuminate successfully urge someone to do something make someone less angry, upset or hostile represent something as being less important or significant than it is make someone feel angry or exasperated dissuade examine someone or something closely and carefully accompany someone who is leaving a room or building join with someone in using something loosen or relax cause a strong nervous reaction become less active or intense flick through invigorate observe persuade placate play down provoke scrutinise see out share slacken stimulate subside 340 enervate contravene exasperate overstate appease usher in monopolise tauten soothe erupt Just the opposite verb meaning antonym terminate come to an end, or bring something to an end commence vilify make malicious and abusive statements about someone act contrary to something such as a law, contract or agreement, especially in a significant way praise violate observe Positives and negatives Transforming a word with a positive meaning into its antonym often entails adding a prefix (word beginning) meaning ‘not’. Such prefixes include un-, non-, in- and dis- (for example, unkind, non-resident, insensitive and disappear). Appearances can be misleading, however. There are some words beginning with un-, in-, etc. that look as if they should be negatives but in fact have no positive equivalent. Unwieldy, for example, means ‘cumbersome’, but there is no opposite word wieldy to contrast with it. Disgruntled meaning ‘unhappy’ may be used of, say, employees, but gruntled occurs only as a joke. There are other words with prefixes that look as if they should be negative forms, but that don’t in fact express negation, that is, not being or doing something. For example, inhabitable, which means ‘suitable to live in’, means the same as habitable rather than the opposite. This is because the in- in this instance derives from the Latin word for ‘in’ rather than meaning ‘not’. Similarly, passive and impassive both mean ‘slow to react’, though in slightly different ways. In the table below, the words listed in the left-hand column all begin with apparent ‘not’ prefixes, but, for one reason or another, cannot be changed into an antonym simply by removing the prefix. The meaning of the word is shown in the 341 Grammar Guide middle column. A genuine possible antonym is shown after it, in the right-hand column. Ten words beginning with im- and their opposites Word Meaning Antonym immaculate spotlessly clean and neat dirty impeccable perfect and flawless flawed impassive impecunious impertinent implacable implicit implode impoverished impudent showing no emotion having little or no money rude and disrespectful not possible to appease not stated directly collapse inwards poor rude and disrespectful expressive well-off respectful forgiving explicit explode wealthy respectful Twenty words beginning with in- and their opposites Word Meaning Antonym inadvertently accidentally deliberately incessant non-stop intermittent inane indefatigable indestructible indifferent indomitable inebriated inept inert inevitable stupid untiring impossible to break or destroy sensible flagging fragile not interested or sympathetic concerned drunk sober impossible to defeat submissive clumsy competent motionless unavoidable 342 active avoidable Just the opposite Word Meaning Antonym inflammable liable to catch fire non-flammable insatiable impossible to satisfy easily satisfied inordinate inscrutable insufferable intransigent intrepid invaluable invincible excessive moderate enigmatic or difficult to read transparent unbearable bearable fearless fearful unbeatable or impossible to defeat vulnerable stubbornly refusing to give in indispensable or extremely valuable flexible worthless Twenty words beginning with un- and their opposites Word Meaning Antonym unassuming modest self-important unbending very stubborn flexible unavailing unceasing uncouth undoubted unflappable ungainly unkempt unnerved unprecedented unrest unruly unscathed useless, ineffective non-stop bad-mannered beyond any doubt remaining calm awkward and clumsy messy and badly groomed made nervous never known or done before successful intermittent well-mannered doubtful agitated graceful well-groomed encouraged established angry or violent protest order not harmed harmed hard to control 343 well-behaved Grammar Guide Word Meaning Antonym unsightly ugly to look at attractive unstinting generous sparing too big to handle easily manageable untoward unswerving unwieldy unwittingly unexpected, and unpleasant or inconvenient steady and unchanging unknowingly 344 favourable unreliable knowingly chapter 12 Clichés and redundancy Roy’s repertory was extensive and his scent for the word of the minute unerring; it peppered his speech, but aptly, and he used it each time with a sort of bright eagerness, as though his fertile brain had just minted it. Somerset Maugham Cakes and Ale (1930) This chapter examines some bad habits that can creep into writing and hinder its effectiveness: clichés and redundancy. What constitutes cliché or redundancy can be quite subjective, and to some degree all writing is susceptible to them. Used sparingly and deliberately, these elements can serve an effective purpose, but excessive or ill-considered use generally makes writing less forceful, less persuasive and less concise. Clichés A cliché is a fixed expression that has become stale through overuse. It’s useful to be able to recognise clichés and, unless they are intended for literary effect, avoid them when there is a more appropriate expression available. In everyday life, clichés may have a role; Somerset Maugham, for example, wittily points to those who ‘have invented so wide a range of pithy and hackneyed phrases that they can carry on an amusing and animated conversation without giving a moment’s reflection to 345 Grammar Guide what they are saying and so leave their minds free to consider… more important matters’ (Cakes and Ale, 1930). In writing too, it may be worth bearing in mind that one person’s cliché is another person’s useful shorthand or otherwise satisfying expression. The borderline between idiom and cliché is thin and sometimes blurry. As Dakin in Alan Bennett’s The History Boys (2004) puts it, ‘Clichés can be quite fun. That’s how they got to be clichés.’ Problems arise, however, when set expressions no longer seem original, striking or vivid. One attraction of clichés is that many of them started life as fashionable terms. The first time curate was used to mean ‘present material’ in a business rather than in a museum or art context, for example, it probably created a frisson. But the nth time it is heard, it is unlikely to leave the same impression. Exceptionally, of course, the deliberate and knowing use of cliché can be very effective in pinpointing meaning. Often this is for humorous effect, especially when used satirically to highlight human behaviour. Here is an A to Z list of some set words and expressions that, with all the provisos touched on above, may be best used only with care. Note that some, for example, it goes without saying and at this moment in time also suggest redundancy (see page 350 below). A an accident waiting to happen add insult to injury agree to disagree all in a day’s work all things to all people aka armed to the teeth at the end of the day awesome at this moment in time awesome B bad hair day beat a hasty retreat been there, done that beneath contempt the best-laid plans best practices 346 Clichés and redundancy the big picture big society blissful ignorance a bolt from the blue boots on the ground the bottom line brave the elements breath of fresh air breathe a sigh of relief bright and early a bright future a budding genius but that’s another story by leaps and bounds by a twist of fate draconian measures drastic action draw a line in the sand at the drop of a hat E empower end of story epoch-making eternal reward the eyes of the world C the calm before the storm a case in point a commanding lead commune with nature compare apples and oranges conspicuous by its absence cool as a cucumber crystal clear D dead as a doornail defend to the death your right to... deliver the goods the depths of despair don’t go there down but not out F fake news fall on deaf ears far be it from me fast and loose a (media) feeding frenzy the feel-good factor fever pitch few and far between the finer things of life first and foremost flavour of the month a fond farewell food for thought a foregone conclusion from the sublime to the ridiculous G generous to a fault a glittering occasion the global village going forward 347 Grammar Guide gone but not forgotten a graphic account grind to a halt H hale and hearty a hapless victim the happy pair a haughty stare have the bandwidth having said that head over heels the healing process heave a sigh of relief hedge one’s bets history repeats itself history tells us I ignorance is bliss one’s inner child/self innocent bystander in no uncertain terms in the same boat iron out a difficulty irreparable damage/loss it goes without saying it is interesting to note it is what it is J just deserts K keep a high/low profile L a labour of love the lap of luxury last but not least a lean and hungry look leaps and bounds a level playing field life’s little lessons long haul lost in thought lost in translation low-hanging fruit M a mad dash the marketplace of ideas a matter of life and death the moment of truth a moot question the mother of all… a motley crew movers and shakers my better half myriad N a necessary evil needless to say needs no introduction never see the light of day the new normal nip in the bud no spring chicken not rocket science not waving but drowning 348 Clichés and redundancy O off the beaten track one’s own worst enemy the only game in town an open secret overcome with emotion P pandemonium reigned paradigm shift a pillar of society play the blame game play your cards right a plethora of… plumb the depths at this point in time poster boy/girl for powers that be pull no punches put one’s head above the parapet Q quality time R raise the spectre of reach out the realms of possibility reign supreme render a decision reopen old wounds retail therapy ride an emotional roller-coaster ring true a risky business rotten to the core S sadder but wiser a sea change seal one’s fate second to none a seething mass sick and tired (of) a sign of the times silver lining(s) six of one, half a dozen of the other skeleton(s) in the cupboard the sky’s the limit the spice of life stamp of approval steep learning curve a step change synergy T think outside the box thoughts and prayers thrilled throw the baby out with the bathwater time immemorial the tip of the iceberg tip the scales the thrust of the argument touch base turn the page turn over a new leaf 349 Grammar Guide U uncharted waters V a vale of tears a viable alternative view with alarm a volley of criticism W water under the bridge a watery grave wax eloquent white as a sheet wide-open spaces a window of opportunity win-win situation woke the wrong end of the stick Y yadda, yadda, yadda Redundancy Redundancy in language means unnecessary repetition, that is, using a word whose meaning is already conveyed by another word. It may alternatively be referred to as wordiness, verbosity or tautology. For example, since antiques are by definition old, the phrase an old antique is an instance of redundancy. Simple repetition isn’t necessarily a fault in speaking or writing. It may be necessary to make one’s meaning clear, or for emphasis or other stylistic effect: Come close; come closer; closer still! ‘But the fact is I was napping, and so gently you came rapping, And so faintly you came tapping, tapping at my chamber door, That I scarce was sure I heard you’ Edgar Allan Poe, The Raven (1845) What makes for poor style, however, is anything that suggests the writer is not in control of the words being used or not aware of their meaning. That’s why grammarians don’t like redundancy. 350 Clichés and redundancy Redundant expressions Use of the phrase a hollow tube may suggest the writer doesn’t know that tubes are by definition hollow. Similarly, the phrases shuttle back and forth and yo-yo up and down give the impression of unawareness as to how shuttles and yo-yos move. A gift is always freely given, so, when shops refer to free gifts, it’s a redundant expression. Abbreviations and acronyms present a high risk of redundancy, since it’s easy to forget what the letters in the abbreviation stand for. For example, since ATM stands for ‘automated teller machine’, ATM machine is a redundancy. The same is true of: ●● ●● ●● GPS system, since GPS stands for ‘global positioning system’ PIN number, since PIN means ‘personal identification number’ HIV virus, since HIV stands for ‘human immunodeficiency virus’. Of course, it may seem pedantic to insist on correction of these, since, for example, the phrases ATM machine and PIN number, though strictly redundancies, are, practically speaking, quite useful as a reminder of the acronyms’ meanings. Some common word-based redundant expressions are given below; the words in small capital letters are not required, and each expression is followed by a brief explanation. allude to indirectly Allude already means ‘refer to something indirectly’ or ‘hint at something’. It is possible to say, for example, She alluded to the buyer several times in our conversation but never actually mentioned his name. assemble together Assemble means ‘come together’, so there is no need to add together. The verbs gather and congregate have similar meanings, so likewise do not require a further together. 351 Grammar Guide blend together Blend means ‘mix substances together’; it’s unnecessary to add together. The same is true of fuse and merge, since both these verbs already imply two or more things mixing together to form one. terrible catastrophe A catastrophe is a terrible event or disaster. There’s no such thing as a catastrophe that’s not terrible. The same applies to the noun tragedy, which similarly does not need to be preceded by the word terrible. consensus of opinion Since consensus already means ‘a view or opinion that is generally shared’, expressions such as general consensus and consensus of opinion are, strictly speaking, tautological. Occasionally a modifier can be justified, as in There was a consensus of feeling, but no consensus of opinion. It is advisable to consider whether or not consensus without modifiers already expresses what is intended. serious crisis A crisis means ‘dangerous or worrying time’, so cannot be anything other than serious. on A daily basis This long-winded adverbial phrase has the same meaning as the adverb it contains: daily. The same is true when other adjectives such as global, regular, continuing, weekly, monthly and hourly replace daily. In all cases, it is better to use simply the adverb, for example, regularly, rather than the whole phrase, on a regular basis. single entity Entity is a singular noun that means ‘thing’. It’s generally not necessary to put single or one in front of it, since it’s already implied. 352 Clichés and redundancy explode violently To explode means ‘burst or shatter noisily and violently’. A related redundancy is the expression violent explosion. basic fundamental A fundamental means ‘basic element or principle’; it cannot be anything other than basic. opening gambit A gambit is an opening move in chess. Opening gambit is a cliché that reveals a (perhaps understandable) lack of appreciation of how a gambit in chess works. broad general terms It’s acceptable to write either general terms or broad terms. They mean the same thing. But the phrase broad general terms is a redundancy. The temptation to add broad should be resisted in other contexts too. The following noun phrases, for example, are both correct and adequate: general issues, general vicinity, general topics, general education, general surveys. past history History by definition is in the past. current/present incumbent An incumbent is the current holder of an office or post, so preceding the word with current or present is unnecessary. universal panacea A panacea is a supposed cure for all diseases or problems, so the idea of universality is already implied. chief/leading/main protagonist A protagonist was originally the main character in a play, so the idea of ‘main’, ‘leading’ or ‘chief ’ is already implied. future prospects Prospects are possibilities, usually favourable ones, that are hoped for in the future. It’s not necessary to state that twice. 353 Grammar Guide original prototype A prototype is already a first or original model of something from which later versions develop. For example, Engineers are testing a prototype [not original prototype] of the car. reason why Some linguists argue that the reason why is redundant, while others disagree. The safest course is to avoid using it. It is better to say The reason [not reason why] he failed is that he did not work hard enough. new recruit A recruit is a newly enlisted member of the armed forces, or someone who has just joined an organisation. There’s no need to specify that a recruit is new. recur again/over and over /repeatedly To recur means ‘occur again’. It is possible to say The problem kept recurring. But the following is tautologous: The problem kept recurring again and again. reiterate again To reiterate means to repeat something. So unless one is repeating again something already repeated once or more, it’s not necessary to use again with reiterate. totally/completely unanimous Unanimous means ‘completely in agreement’: The judges were unanimous in their verdict. Any addition of completely or totally is redundant. 354 Clichés and redundancy various different… Various means ‘of different kinds’. If various is used, different is not required, and vice versa. in any way, shape or form Way is a noun of very general reference and it’s not made more specific or otherwise changed by adding shape or form to it. This expression is mainly used for emphasis. It usually refers to something that is already abstract, making the sense of shape, and to some degree of form, not entirely appropriate. from whence The expression from whence has occurred frequently over the centuries, most notably in translations of the Bible. Nonetheless, it’s best to avoid use of from with whence, because whence already means ‘from where’. Empty words Avoiding empty words is important in writing for clarity, precision and getting a message across. It’s best not to be too swingeing, though, since sometimes extra words are fulfilling a purpose. English is remarkable for the flexibility of its vocabulary and grammar. This allows for essentially the same words to be combined in different ways, and thereby slightly shift the focus, tone or register. For example, There were children playing in the park. [factual in tone] Children were playing in the park. [descriptive in tone] Many constructions in English have the effect of making language sound more indirect and formal. Used appropriately, these constructions can be very effective. It is better to avoid them when they serve no purpose, however. 355 Grammar Guide Sentences beginning with grammatical expletives It’s useful to begin a sentence with a ‘placeholder’ word like it or there when the verb comes before its subject or has no complement: There are a dozen good reasons why you shouldn’t be here now. There is a way. It’s not that I don’t want you to come. However, it is advisable to avoid these constructions when the subject of the sentence can be made more vivid and the whole more succinct. Thus, There is a need for more people to read this article, can be rephrased as More people need to read this article. And It is necessary for students to report to their form rooms at the start of the school day, can be revised to read Students must report to their form rooms at the start of the school day. The pointless passive Passive constructions are useful when there is a good reason to conceal or ignore the agent in a sentence: All the applications had been filed by the deadline. Does anyone know why the doors have been left unlocked? However, the passive voice is merely cumbersome when a valid subject exists for a sentence. Thus, instead of In his diaries it is made clear that . . . 356 Clichés and redundancy it is possible to write His diaries make clear that . . . Needless fillers conjunctions (see chapter 1, page 26) serve the useful purpose of relating ideas to each other. They should not be used needlessly however, and it is certainly better to avoid wordy conjunctive phrases that could be either replaced by a single word or deleted entirely. For example, I went into the kitchen in order to make a pot of coffee is better expressed as I went into the kitchen to make a pot of coffee. Other phrases with a quasi-linking function that are best treated with caution include it should be noted as a matter of fact it is significant that as previously stated it has been determined that the reason that the question is one must recognise that Very often such phrases are better simply omitted, and the rest of the sentence reworked slightly as required. Verbs, not verbal nouns Certain colourless verbs such as make and use may combine with verbal nouns in constructions that could be expressed with an ‘action’ verb in the active voice. For example, it would be advisable to consider replacing is used to detect with detects, make the arrangements for with arrange, and do the calculations with calculate. 357 358 part iii Dictionary of Literary Terms 360 Literary terms Every sentence, every word, was new to them and they listened to what he said like bright-eyed ravens, trembling in their eagerness to catch and interpret every sound in the universe. Toni Morrison, Song of Solomon (1977) ‘Literary terms’ is a way to describe a range of linguistic and stylistic features that writers employ in their work to enhance their writing. This might be for creative effect – to make their prose more interesting and absorbing, or to develop their poetic voice, or used to render a non-fiction account more understandable or persuasive. The hundred plus terms in the list below puts a name to some literary and rhetorical devices you are probably employing in your work already and may introduce you to others that you might find helpful to expand your creative repertoire. Many are figurative features, such as those you probably first met at school, such as simile, metaphor and onomatopoeia, and are joined by those that might be less familiar, such as metonymy, synecdoche and zeugma. Each term is accompanied by a concise definition and sometimes an example or two of the term in context. These quotations are mostly drawn from literary texts – classics and more contemporary works. Collectively they highlight the richness of the English language: how it can be twisted and turned to strengthen any form of writing. Why do you need to know what each literary term or figure of speech is called? Well, you don’t: but as with the other parts of this book, there is much to learn here that helps enhance our understanding of vocabulary and its usage. Being interested in words and how words can shape our writing, how certain 361 Grammar Guide phrases or expressions might make our writing more fluent, or more poetic or more readable, is the very essence of the writer’s art. Some of the entries below are not strictly literary or rhetorical devices but are included as they form part of an author’s toolkit. The date given in each quotation is the year of publication of the original source where known. Cross-references to other entries are shown in small caps. Morris Zapp went on to illustrate his thesis with a number of passages from classic English and American literature. David Lodge, Small World (1984) A adage A popular saying or expression which conveys a shared and often repeated belief. It might be a proverb or an aphorism or a maxim, but has a sense of universal truth about it: a phrase that has been handed down from one generation to the next as a piece of folklore whose origins are unknown (‘too many cooks spoil the broth’, ‘he who laughs last, laughs longest’). An adage, when used in a literary text, might suggest a universality and, because of its pithiness, might seem to be a well-known expression even if only recently coined. Like many turns of phrase, overuse can turn an adage into a hackneyed phrase or cliché. Life is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you’re going to get. Winston Groom, Forrest Gump (1986) adynaton An articulation of the seeming inexpressibility of an idea or feeling or thing by explicitly stating that words are unable to describe it or by comparing it to something so vast that it is too great to be grasped. As such, it is akin to the sublime, 362 Literary terms when something eludes clear definition and hyperbole, when something is extreme, beyond the possible. It is easier for a camel to go through the eye of a needle, than for a rich man to enter the kingdom of God. Mark’s Gospel, New Testament, chapter 10 He soon felt that the fulfillment of his desires gave him only one grain of the mountain of happiness he had expected. Leo Tolstoy, Anna Karenina (1877) Anything approaching the change that came over his features I have never seen before, and hope never to see again. He cried in a whisper at some image, at some vision – he cried out twice, a cry that was no more than a breath: ‘the horror! The horror!’ Joseph Conrad, Heart of Darkness (1899) allegory A story with a double meaning where one thing represents another to allow multiple interpretations beyond the literal or overt. It suggests some educative purpose, such as in the Fables of Aesop. Each tale has a moral message, told often through animal characters who take on human characteristics (see anthropomorhism). For example, in his most famous tale, the steady tortoise wins a race against the flashy and arrogant hare to illustrate the adage ‘slow and steady wins the race’. Allegory is used by writers in a cautiously veiled attempt to avoid direct criticism of a system or regime and thus official censure. One of the best-known literary and theological allegories is John Bunyan’s Pilgrim’s Progress (published in two parts: 1678, 1684). The names for places and the stages in the pilgrimage that the protagonist Christian follows represent the religious life, as he navigates the City of Destruction to ascent to the Celestial City. 363 Grammar Guide George Orwell’s Animal Farm (1945) is a political allegory criticising communist Russia; C. S. Lewis’ The Chronicles of Narnia are often read as religious allegory: Aslan represents Jesus or God, the White Witch evil or sin, and Edmund Judas. There, shining in the sunrise, larger than they had seen him before, shaking his mane (for it had apparently grown again) stood Aslan himself. The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe (1950) alliteration The repeated use of the same vowel or consonant, especially at the beginning of a series of words, to create a distinct rhythm. Dr Seuss’ ABC (1963) is packed full of alliterative phrases, such as: David Donald Doo dreamed a dozen doughnuts and a duck-dog, too. Alliteration is sometimes used for character names for comic effect or to make them memorable, for example: Milly-Molly-Mandy, Luna Lovegood, Harry Hole and is well-known in playground tongue-twisters such as that about fossil hunter Mary Anning: She sells seashells on the sea shore. Gerard Manley Hopkins’ verse is suffused with rhythmic devices, including alliteration: With swift, slow; sweet, sour; adazzle, dim; ‘Pied Beauty’ (1918) As is the poetry of Wilfred Owen, where alliteration is used to capture the harsh brutalities of the First World War: What passing-bells for these who die as cattle? — Only the monstrous anger of the guns. Only the stuttering rifles’ rapid rattle Can patter out their hasty orisons. ‘Anthem for Doomed Youth’ (1920) 364 Literary terms allusion A reference which is (often) subtly implied, but which assumes the reader will comprehend, based on a shared understanding or knowledge of what is being alluded to. Authors might reference a person, an event or book in their work. Many common allusions are rooted in Greek mythology, such as ‘Achilles’ heel’, or in fiction. We regularly use allusions in daily speech as a form of linguistic shorthand to convey a characteristic or attribute. A miserly individual is known as a ‘Scrooge’ (Dickens’ A Christmas Carol) a capricious personality as a ‘Jekyll and Hyde’ (R. L. Stevenson) and a womaniser as a ‘Don Juan’ (Lord Bryon) or a ‘Casanova’. An allusion can be an explicit nod to an historical character (proper noun), as in the last example, or an adjective that embodies a characteristic of the person referred to: someone who is narcissistic, machiavellian or quixotic. Allusions that are references to the Bible and Shakespeare abound, as you would expect from such long-standing, lengthy and linguistically rich sources. Aldous Huxley’s novel Brave New World (1932) is drawn from a line in Shakespeare’s The Tempest (1610–11): Oh, wonder! How many goodly creatures are there here! How beauteous mankind is! O brave new world, That has such people in’t! In his short story ‘French Joe’ from his Collected Short Stories volume 4, W. Somerset Maugham (1963) makes allusions to an ‘historical’ figure (Jack Robinson) and a biographer (Boswell): ‘Now you sit down,’ she said, ‘and I’ll make up the bed before you can say Jack Robinson.’ * * * No, I have never read Boswell. I have not read books, I have lived. 365 Grammar Guide The grimacing feline in Lewis Carroll’s Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland is alluded to here: Montag stopped eating . . . he saw their Cheshire cat smiles burning through the walls of the house. Ray Bradbury, Fahrenheit 451 (1953) amplification Expanding a sentence to draw attention to or to exaggerate or intensify an aspect of a story or argument. An example that carries profound bleakness is John Milton’s depiction of Samson’s blindness, and thus his own, in Samson Agonistes (1671): O dark, dark, dark, amid the blaze of noon, Irrecoverably dark, total eclipse Without all hope of day! Altogether more upbeat, is Roald Dahl’s insistent description of the gum-chewing Violet Beauregarde – which ultimately proves to be her undoing: ‘I just adore gum. I can’t do without it. I munch it all day long except for a few minutes at mealtimes when I take it out and stick it behind my ear for safekeeping. To tell you the truth, I simply wouldn’t feel comfortable if I didn’t have that little wedge of gum to chew on every moment of the day, I really wouldn’t.’ Charlie and the Chocolate Factory (1964) analogy A comparison between two similar things used to illustrate an argument or explanation. These things might not be in any obvious sense similar, but figuratively might be drawn together to highlight a specific characteristic or sentiment. There is no frigate like a book To take us lands away Nor any coursers like a page Of prancing poetry Emily Dickinson, ‘There is no Frigate like a Book’ (1894) 366 Literary terms anaphora One or more words repeated sequentially or consecutively, especially at the beginning of a series of statements, to attract the reader’s attention. It was the best of times, it was the worst of times, it was the age of wisdom, it was the age of foolishness, it was the epoch of belief, it was the epoch of incredulity, it was the season of Light, it was the season of Darkness, it was the spring of hope, it was the winter of despair. Charles Dickens, A Tale of Two Cities (1859) Which is itself alluded to at the start of Autumn (see allusion): It was the worst of times, it was the worst of times. Ali Smith (2017) anecdote The retelling or recounting of a personal story or experience, often to reference a specific event from which to extrapolate a broader point. It is used frequently in non-fiction to make a text more intimate or engrossing, more relevant or practical. In fiction, it can be used, for example in dialogue, as a mini story to fill-in a character’s back story or help develop plot or demonstrate an aspect of their personality. In the case of Lydia Bennet, the anecdotes she recounts to her sisters reveal her giddy and gossipy nature: ‘Do you know, mamma, that my uncle Philips talks of turning away Richard? And if he does, Colonel Forster will hire him. My aunt told me so herself on Saturday. I shall walk to Meryton to-morrow to hear more about it, and to ask when Mr. Denny comes back from town.’ Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice (1813) 367 Grammar Guide anthimeria Swapping one part of speech in a way that is not grammatically correct, for example replacing a verb with a noun for metaphorical effect. Let me not suppose that she dares go about, Emma Woodhouseing me! Jane Austen, Emma (1815) The thunder would not peace at my bidding. William Shakespeare, King Lear (c.1606) anthropomorphism Animals, objects or other non-human beings are given human characteristics and portrayed as though they were human. This is a common trope in children’s literature or in allegorical works (see allegory), for example in Dodie Smith’s One Hundred and One Dalmatians (1956), the story is told through the voice of the dalmatian Pongo, who displays human attributes as he gently makes fun of his non-canine master. As far as I could see, the old notion that a bachelor’s life was so glamorous and carefree was all nonsense. It was downright dull. In Watership Down (1972), Richard Adams imbues his cast of rabbit characters with distinct personalities and humour: ‘Captain,’ said Bluebell, ‘ do you know what the first blade of grass said to the second blade of grass?’ Hazel looked at him sharply, but Holly replied, ‘Well?’ ‘It said, ‘’Look, there’s a rabbit! We’re in danger!’’ Richard Adams, Watership Down (1972) Death is anthropomorphised in this example: Where are my manners? I could introduce myself properly, but it’s not really necessary. You will know me well enough and soon enough, depending on a diverse range of variables. 368 Literary terms It suffices to say that at some point in time, I will be standing over you, as genially as possible. Markus Zusak, The Book Thief (2005) antimetabole When words or phrases in one part of a sentence are inverted and used in the second part. Such as in these poetic asides from Maggie Gee’s The Burning Book (1983): Look as you would be done by: be done by as you look. ‘ do as you would be done by, be done as you did’ * * * This is not the end. It is not even the beginning of the end, but it is, perhaps, the end of the beginning. Winston Churchill (1942) antiphrasis Where a word is used opposite to its actual meaning and thus is a form of irony. For example, Little John (Robin Hood’s largest companion) or describing an enemy as a ‘friend’. ‘Hello, Harry’ said George, beaming at him. ‘We thought we heard your dulcet tones.’ ‘You don’t want to bottle up your anger like that, Harry, let it all out,’ said Fred, also beaming. ‘There might be a couple of people fifty miles away who didn’t hear you.’ J. K. Rowling, Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix (2003) antithesis Placing two opposites alongside each another to highlight their differences to create a contrasting effect or to emphasise a point or argument based on such contrast. Better to reign in Hell, than serve in Heaven. John Milton, ‘Paradise Lost’ Book 1 (1667) 369 Grammar Guide ‘Tis better to have loved and lost Than never to have loved at all. Alfred Lord Tennyson, ‘In Memoriam’ (1850) So instead of turning myself into a metropolitan adult, I ended up recreating my suburban adolescence. Nicky Hornby, Fever Pitch (1992) antonomasia This has several meanings. Either an epithet or title used in place of a person’s actual name, such as The Bard of Stratfordupon-Avon for Shakespeare or The High Priestess of Soul for Nina Simone. Or a more indirect description, such as Victor Frankenstein’s references to the creature he has made: I beheld the wretch – the miserable monster whom I had created. Mary Shelley, Frankenstein (1818) It also describes a noun that encapsulates an individual’s qualities which are similar to those of a well-known character or real-life person. For example, a Judas is someone not to be trusted or who might betray another. See also metonymy. aphorism A short statement which is intended to summarise an accepted truth in a distinctively clever or witty way. The opening sentence of Pride and Prejudice is a universally acknowledged example. Some aphorisms might not be evidence-based and thus not truths as such, but are assertions which suggest they are truisms. Tall, thin people need a lot to eat. Eva Ibbotson, One Dog and His Boy (2011) All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to us. J. R. R. Tolkien, The Fellowship of the Ring (1954) There’s nothing as scary as the future. John Irving, A Prayer for Owen Meany (1989) 370 Literary terms apologue A fable or short story which is intended to teach a moral lesson, often using animals as characters. See also allegory and anthropomorphism. apophasis Asserting or emphasising something by denying it or stating that it will not be mentioned. This is also known as paralipsis. It can be used in fiction, where a character provides some historical or plot detail that the author may wish the reader to know. ‘Ssh’ said Grace Makutsi putting a finger to her lips. ‘It’s not polite to talk about it SO I don’t mention the Double Comfort Furniture Shop which is one of the businesses my fiancé owns you know. I must not talk about that. But do you know the store Mma?’ Alexander McCall Smith, Blue Shoes and Happiness (2006) aporia An expression of insincere doubt, when a speaker pretends not to know the answer to (an often rhetorical) question and then may proceed to answer it or expect the reader or audience to contemplate a possible response. Hamlet’s ‘To be, or not to be’ soliloquy is one of the best-known examples. The plays of Samuel Beckett are full of such questions and indecisions. Where now? Who now? When now? Unquestioning. I, say I. Unbelieving. Questions, hypotheses, call them that. Keep going, going on, call that going, call that on. opening lines of The Unnamable (1953) It is sometimes used as a synonym for paradox, when a statement contradicts itself. I’m intelligent. Some people would say I’m very, very, very intelligent. Donald Trump, Fortune (2000) 371 Grammar Guide aposiopesis This is where a sentence ends abruptly, where a character is unable to continue coherently or reach a conclusion, where their speech or thoughts trail off. It can be used to highlight moments of drama or emotion. It is frequently indicated by three-dot-ellipsis or a dash. She looked perplexed for a moment, and then said, not fiercely, but still loud enough for the furniture to hear: ‘Well, I lay if I get hold of you I’ll –’ She did not finish, for by this time she was bending down and punching under the bed with the broom . . . Mark Twain, The Adventures of Tom Sawyer (1876) ‘I know there isn’t no beast – not with claws and all that, I mean – but I know there isn’t no fear, either.’ Piggy paused. ‘Unless –’ William Golding, Lord of the Flies (1954) apposition A noun or noun phrase which provides additional information about another noun or noun phrase in the same sentence. Gussie, a glutton for punishment, stared at himself in the mirror. P. G. Wodehouse, Right Ho, Jeeves (1934) archaism An out-of-use word or phrase originating from an earlier time period. Sometimes used to suggest a character’s old-fashioned ways, in particular to poke fun at them or in historical novels to provide authenticity as to the ways in which people in history spoke. Too much ‘authentic’ dialogue might slow a story down and make it less engaging: it’s a matter of balance. An obsolete word is one that has fallen out of usage altogether; an archaic word is one that is old-fashioned or antiquated and not much used other than for deliberate stylistic effect. You 372 Literary terms may encounter terms and phrases in works that were written centuries ago – which were stock phrases when they were used but which have little currency for a modern reader. Thus, the need, for example, of notes and glosses in editions of Chaucer, Shakespeare or Milton. I love thee and thou art so lovely and so wonderful and so beautiful and it does such things to me to be with thee that I feel as though I wanted to die when I am loving thee. Ernest Hemingway, For Whom the Bell Tolls (1940) – set during the Spanish Civil War though reflecting romantic prose of an earlier period I subsided into one of my glooms. . . . my spirits instantly revived and, on the day in question, at just after two o’clock, I walked over to Trafalgar-square and stationed myself at the foot of the Gallery’s steps. Michael Cox, The Meaning of Night (2006) – crime novel set in Victorian London archetype A universal idea or image or person which serves as a common example or representation and is recognisable because of its frequent use. See also allusion and antonomasia. she certainly loved him as he was, neither a Michelin Man nor an ageing Adonis, his legs were his best physical asset, a walker all his life . . . Bernardine Evaristo, Girl, Woman, Other (2019) If Lee began to be the cliché, the woman-next-door, Tony Wagener was the archetype of the man-next-door (formerly the nice-boy-next-door) whom the average girl would be lucky to marry. He was healthy, attractive, good-natured, age twenty-five, and he couldn’t take his eyes off Lee. Patricia Highsmith, ‘Things Had Gone Badly’ in Nothing that Meets the Eye: The Uncollected Stories (2002) 373 Grammar Guide assonance The repeated use of the same vowel sounds to create a distinct rhythmic pattern, to set a mood or reiterate the meaning of words. Soft language issued from their spitless lips as they swished in low circles round and round the field, winding hither and thither through the weeds. James Joyce, Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man (1916) In the stormy east-wind straining, The pale yellow woods were waning, The broad stream in his banks complaining, Heavily the low sky raining Over tower’d Camelot; Alfred Lord Tennyson, ‘The Lady of Shalott’ (1842) asyndeton Writing stripped down to its crucial meaning and essentials, where, for example, conjunctions or pronouns are omitted. This can be used for dramatic effect, to give pace to a narrative, to create tension or atmosphere. Where repeatedly employed it might become a distinctive and arresting aspect of a writer’s style, as in this pared-back description of an American landscape: Montana, portrait to landscape, the kind of open that was almost too much to breathe in. Chris Whitaker, We Begin at the End (2020) auxesis The listing of concepts or things in their ascending order of importance. Since brass, nor stone, nor earth, nor boundless sea, But sad mortality o’er-sways their power, William Shakespeare, ‘Sonnet 65’ (1609) His own tastes were precise, narrow, and somewhat specialist. A. S. Byatt, Possession (1990) 374 Literary terms B bathos Originally a term coined by poet Alexander Pope to describe (and mock) the writing of his fellow poets; an unintentional attempt to create an elevated expression but failing to do so. It is characterised by abruptly turning from a serious point to a trivial one. Synonymous with anti-climax, a deliberate transition from the sublime to the ridiculous, typically for comic effect. Here thou, great Anna! whom three realms obey, Dost sometimes counsel take – and sometimes tea. Alexander Pope, ‘The Rape of the Lock’ (1712) It can also create a more serious mood, in this case one of deflation. Choose Life. Choose a job. Choose a career. Choose a family Choose a fucking big television, choose washing machines, cars, Compact Disc players, electrical tin openers . . . Irvine Welsh, Trainspotting (1993) C cacophony A series of conflicting sounds used together to create an inharmonious rhythm; the opposite of euphony. When our brother Fire was having his dog’s day Jumping the London streets with millions of tin cans Clanking at his tail, we heard some shadows say ‘Give the dog a bone’ - and so we gave him ours; Louis MacNeice, ‘Brother Fire’ (1943) chiasmus Where the grammatical structure of one phrase or sentence is repeated in a second phrase or sentence where a related concept appears in reverse order. Used to persuade and move a reader 375 Grammar Guide or audience. It differs from antimetabole when the inversion is of repeated words or phrases. Let us never negotiate out of fear. But let us never fear to negotiate. John F. Kennedy, Inaugural Address (1961) . . . In his face Divine compassion visibly appeerd, Love without end, and without measure Grace, John Milton, ‘Paradise Lost’ Book 3 (1667) circumlocution A circuitous and indirect style of writing which uses far more words than are necessary for sense and comprehension. Such literary ‘going round the houses’ may be used to illustrate the meandering loquaciousness (verbosity) of a character. Kenneth Widmerpool in Anthony Powell’s twelve-novel sequence A Dance to the Music of Time is a good example of a character who uses several words when one might do and so highlights his own pomposity when decrying that of others for satirical effect. ‘The point I put forward is that the normal course of action would result in a vast deal of letter-writing between Messrs Turnbull, Welford & Puckering, Messrs Quiggin & Craggs, Messrs Goodness-knows-who-else, I propose to cut across that. [. . .] I’ve developed a positive mania these days against pushing paper. Man-to-man. That’s the way. Cut corners. I fear pomposity is not one of my failings. I can’t put up with pompous people, and have often been in trouble on that very account.’ Books do Furnish a Room (1971) cliché A common phrase which has been repeated so often that it has lost any sincere or impactful meaning. It might be used 376 Literary terms deliberately to shine light on a character’s speech patterns, personality or as a form of shorthand that readers will be familiar with. Best avoided in most cases. It is a mainstay of journalistic prose: one way to get a story across concisely in a way that most readers will comprehend. Roald’s letters reveal how seminal this moment was for him . . . And certainly the stars were on Roald’s side. He was in the right place at the right time. Donald Sturrock (ed), Love from Boy: Roald Dahl’s Letters to His Mother (2017) consonance The repetition of the same consonant sounds framing different vowel sounds (note the ‘s’ sound in ‘uncertain’ and ‘rustling’ in the line below). And the silken sad uncertain rustling of each purple curtain Edgar Allan Poe, ‘The Raven’ (1845) conundrum A confusing or amusing riddle which is often answered with a pun. In Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland, by Lewis Carroll (1865), the Mad Hatter poses a riddle ‘Why is a raven like a writing desk?’ which has no answer. (Though Carroll was persuaded to provide a response in the Preface to later printings.) To summarize: it is a well-known fact that those people who must want to rule people are, ipso facto, those least suited to do it. To summarize the summary: anyone who is capable of getting themselves made President should on no account be allowed to do the job. To summarize the summary of the summary: people are a problem. Douglas Adams, The Restaurant at the End of the Universe (1980) 377 Grammar Guide D diacope The repetition of a word or words in a sentence, with other words dropped in between; used for emphasis or to enhance a description. If you knew Time like I know time you wouldn’t talk about wasting it. Time is not an ‘it’, It’s a ‘ him’. So there! Lewis Carroll, Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland (1865) The girl and the boy outside, they look at each other and they hurry away down the road, and when they turn the corner the street is empty and quiet again. The street is empty and quiet and still, the light is brightening, shadows hardening, the haze of dawn burning away. Jon McGregor, If Nobody Speaks of Remarkable Things (2002) digression A deviation in a story which is not strictly relevant to the main plot but which is used deliberately for literary effect, for example to highlight certain attributes of a character. digressions, incontestably, are the sunshine; - they are the life, the soul of reading Laurence Sterne, Tristram Shandy (1759) dissonance An arrangement of cacophonous or discordant sounds to create a harsh and jarring effect. See also cacophony. doppelgänger A double of a person, either as a vision or as a twin or lookalike, which is used to show an alternative, often darker, side 378 Literary terms of a character. For example, Stevenson’s Jekyll and Hyde (two personalities in one body). I learned to recognise the thorough and primitive duality of man; I saw that, of the two natures that contended in the field of my consciousness, even if I could rightly be said to be either, it was only because I was radically both. Robert Louis Stevenson, The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde (1886) double-speak Language which is purposefully vague or attempting to disguise or distort meaning. We are used to politicians deliberately circumnavigating questions posed of them. Double-speak is calculated avoidance of truth, unlike euphemism which is used to avoid a direct reference often to avoid conflict or distress. In 1984 George Orwell (1948) coins the term ‘doublethink’ which is his literary version of double-speak: the rulers of Oceania brainwash their population with contradictory pronouncements such as ‘War is Peace’, ‘Freedom is Slavery’, ‘Ignorance is Strength’. duologue A conversation between two characters, or a play with only two speaking characters. Willy Russell’s play Educating Rita (1980) is a conversation between university tutor Frank and student Rita; all other characters are off-stage. E epigram A short, often witty statement to praise, commemorate or mock, often used as an inscription at the start of a book or chapter. It’s a device that writers frequently employ to indicate some influence on their own writing or to foreshadow 379 Grammar Guide an action or theme that characterises the novel or chapter that follows. Epigrams range from a direct nod to a book’s title: Oh, lucky Jim, How I envy him, Oh, lucky Jim, How I envy him. old song Kingsley Amis, Lucky Jim (1954) To the more erudite: πάντα χωρεῖ καὶ οὐδὲν μένει Everything changes and nothing remains still. plato, Cratylus Kate Atkinson, Life After Life (2013) Or the not immediately decipherable (unless you read Dutch): Alle molens vangen wind Annie Proulx, That Old Ace in the Hole (2002) epistrophe Successive phrases or sentences where the final word is repeated. When I was a child, I spoke as a child, I understood as a child, I thought as a child. Walt Whitman, ‘Song of Myself ’ from Leaves of Grass (1855) epithet An adjective or description used to qualify a specifically named person or thing, that captures their most admired or despised 380 Literary terms qualities and is universally the way they are referred to. An epithet often becomes a de facto ‘nickname’ for the person or object and can appear directly before or after the name: Catherine the Great or Ivan the Terrible. eponym The protagonist or character whose name is also given to the title of a work: The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, Anne of Green Gables, Moby Dick, Matilda, Pippi Longstocking. A Place Called Winter (Patrick Gale) and The Little House on the Prairie (Laura Ingles Wilder) are references to places, which are at the heart of the respective novels and take on a character of their own. See also personification. equivocation Language which is deliberately ambiguous to hide or skirt around the truth. It can be useful as a plot device to cause the reader or a character to uncover information during the course of a narrative which is initially kept from them. Akin to double-speak and circumlocution. euphemism A seemingly harmless word or phrase with a second meaning which is considered impolite or inappropriate or might wish to convey a less literal meaning in a subtle way. Some of literature’s best examples have thinly veiled erotic sub-texts, as in John Donne’s metaphysical love poem ‘The Flea’ (1633) in which a humble flea is the poetic conceit for a passionate seduction: Mark but this flea, and mark in this, How little that which thou deniest me is; It sucked me first, and now sucks thee, And in this flea our two bloods mingled be; Thou know’st that this cannot be said A sin, nor shame, nor loss of maidenhead, 381 Grammar Guide Euphemisms are much loved by the British in everyday speech as well as in factual commentary; a spade is not always called a spade, particularly when referring to illness and death (‘passed away’, ‘kicked the bucket’, ‘is pushing up daisies’). In prose it might be used to deal with a sensitive subject in a tactful way. The dialogue of characters in novels might be equally restrained and the meaning conveyed through socially acceptable terms that reflect the status of the individual and mores of the time. Euphemisms can also be used to side-step truths, in particular when uttered by a politician who is attempting to divert attention from an event, pronouncement or disastrous policy or to keep actual facts from being revealed. ‘I’m standing down to spend more time with my family’ is usually seen as code for some shenanigans that might bring their office into disrepute, which is itself code for an ex-marital affair. In such cases it could be seen as an example of (massive) understatement. euphony A series of complementary sounds, usually vowels or soft consonants, which flow together and create a smooth rhythm. Seasons of mists and mellow fruitfulness, Close bosom-friend of the maturing sun; John Keats, ‘To Autumn’ (1820) exclamation An outburst of speech or emotion. Be with me always - take any form - drive me mad! only do not leave me in this abyss, where I cannot find you! Oh, God! it is unutterable! I can not live without my life! I can not live without my soul! Emily Brontë, Wuthering Heights (1847) 382 Literary terms excursus A thorough analysis of a point, often a digression which can be found in an appendix or footnote. In The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time by Mark Haddon (2003), the protagonist Christopher uses footnotes to amplify aspects of the story he narrates which tells the reader things that are not revealed in the main text. As a device they also illustrate Christopher’s autism: I do not like proper novels. In proper novels people say things like, ‘I am veined with iron, with silver and with streaks of common mud. I cannot contract into the firm fist which those clench who do not depend on stimulus.’ 1 ... 1 I found this book in the library in town when Mother took me into town once. exemplum An example or model or anecdote told to explain or teach a moral lesson. See parable. exposition Information which is intended to set up the beginning of a narrative and provide any background, history or context necessary for the reader’s understanding about the setting, period or characters in the story. In the small hours of a blustery October morning in a south Devon coastal town that seemed to have been deserted by its inhabitants, Magnus Pym got out of his elderly country taxi-cab and, having paid the driver and waited till he had left, struck out across the church square. His destination was a terrace of ill-lit Victorian boarding-houses . . . In build he was powerful and stately, a representative of something. His stride was agile, his body forward-sloping in the best tradition of the AngloSaxon administrative class. John le Carré, A Perfect Spy (1986) 383 Grammar Guide extended metaphor A metaphor which is sustained throughout a piece of writing and is returned to several times in order to extend or add depth to the comparison or meaning. Karla had tried this once or twice – scrunching her eyes shut, and picturing the silent struggle for life that was beginning somewhere within: the clamorous tadpole horde racing through the darkness of the cervical canal; the egg in its pink fallopian boudoir, languorously awaiting its courtiers. But at some point, the positive images always got hijacked by negative ones. . . [t]he egg would turn out to be ensnared, like a fairy-tale princess, within an impassable thicket of endometrial scar tissue. Zoë Heller, The Believers (2008) F fable A short story rooted in a moral lesson, often using animals as characters with human characteristics. See also allegory. I could end this with a moral, as if this were a fable about animals, though no fables are really about animals. Margaret Atwood, The Tent (2006) figurative Writing which relies on similes, metaphors and other figures of speech. The madness of an autumn prairie cold front coming through. You could feel it: something terrible was going to happen. The sun low in the sky, a minor light, a cooling star. Gust after gust of disorder. Trees restless, temperatures falling, the whole northern religion of things coming to an end. opening lines of Jonathan Franzen’s The Corrections (2001) 384 Literary terms figure of speech A figurative phrase whose meaning is separate from the literal definitions of the words which compose it, for example a metaphor or simile. Used to embellish text to make it more poetic or atmospheric or vividly absorbing. His waistcoat was tight as a corset, a small fan of creases, like crow’s-feet, on either side of the row of buttons. William Boyd, The New Confessions (1987) The heat, which had declined a little at the coming of the rains, grew more oppressive than ever. At night a clamour of frogs and crickets arose and this diabolical piping served to string nerves which were already humming tight a little tighter. J. G. Farrell, The Siege of Krishnapur (1973) first-person narrative Writing from the perspective of a real or fictional ‘I’ who recounts their experiences. It can make the tone of a novel more immediate and intimate for the reader: they see things from the narrator’s perspective. Almost everyone in heaven has someone on Earth they watch, a loved one, a friend or even a stranger who was once kind, who offered warm food or a bright smile when one of us had needed it. And when I wasn’t watching I could hear the others talking to those they loved on Earth: just as fruitlessly as me, I’m afraid. Alice Sebold, The Lovely Bones (2002) flashback An interruption to chronological storytelling which interjects a scene from an earlier time, either in the recent past or further back, which impacts on the story being told, for example by revealing something from a character’s past which might explain their current actions or feelings. He lay in his coffin-bed and tried to cover himself with a blanket of recollection. He took himself to the Wiltshire lanes 385 Grammar Guide and woods of his childhood. He carried a butterfly net. Ahead of him – always running on ahead . . . Rose Tremain, Islands of Mercy (2020) foreshadowing When a writer gives hints in the early part of a novel about plot or themes to follow in order to create suspense and anticipation. Courage to do the right thing is a major theme in To Kill a Mockingbird and is introduced early in the novel when Atticus Finch says to his children: I wanted you to see what real courage is, instead of getting the idea that courage is a man with a gun in his hand. It’s when you know you’re licked before you begin, but you begin anyway and see it through no matter what. Harper Lee (1960) H hamartia A flaw or failure in a character, that they themselves are not usually able to see, that leads to his or her downfall. Blanche DuBois in A Streetcar Named Desire (Tennessee Williams, 1947) or Willy Lomax in Arthur Miller’s Death of a Salesman (1949) are examples of tragic heroes who selfdestruct. Blanche’s tragic flaw is her propensity to choose unsuitable partners, her inability to escape events from her past, and psychological problems that have devasting consequences. * * * All that most maddens and torments; all that stirs up the lees of things; all truth with malice in it; all that cracks the sinews and cakes the brain; all the subtle demonisms of life and thought; all evil, to crazy Ahab, were visibly personified, and made practically assailable in Moby-Dick. He piled upon the whale’s white hump the sum of all the general rage and 386 Literary terms hate felt by his whole race from Adam down; and then, as if his chest had been a mortar, he burst his hot heart’s shell upon it. Herman Melville, Moby Dick (1851) homage A piece of writing intended to honour or commemorate a person or event; writing which imitates the style of an acclaimed writer in celebration of and deference to their work. Fan fiction is an example of homage. Borrowings from earlier writers is a well-worn activity. Chaucer’s The Canterbury Tales (1392) includes reworkings of stories from Boccaccio, Petrarch and medieval treatises, fables and folk tales. The pilgrims’ tales have themselves been retold or refashioned by writers to reflect modern concerns. Here begynneth the Migrant his tale. * In Syria once upon a time dwelt a company of rich merchants, trustworthy and true. * We are sitting on the second floor of a corner office in Birmingham. This is an area of white shirts and Pink Floyd streets. Metal blinds are all down. Dragan Todorovic, ‘The Migrant’s Tale’ from Refugee Tales (2016) Homage is a positive nod to an earlier writer’s oeuvre. pastiche is less complimentary. homophone Two or more words which sound the same but are spelt differently and have different meanings, for example ‘would’ and ‘wood’, ‘flower’ and ‘flour’. A type of pun or wordplay. His death, which happen’d in his berth, At forty-odd befell: 387 Grammar Guide They went and told the sexton, and The sexton toll’d the bell. Thomas Hood, ‘Faithless Sally Brown’ (1843) hyperbaton Where words are arranged in an unexpected way that upends the usual grammatical order. Typified by the way Yoda (in ‘The Empire Strikes Back’) speaks. Much to learn, you still have. hyperbole Exaggeration intended to emphasise and highlight, and which strays into the realm of untruth, something not to be understood literally as gospel. Though Aston Villa supporters may disagree, as for them the text below is less a matter of opinion and more a statement of fact. Whatever any other club might think, the greatest friendly of all time took place on February 21st 1972, when 54,437 paid the club receipts of £35,000 to see Third Division Villa take on Santos, captained by Pele. Dave Woodhall, The Aston Villa Miscellany (2008) I idiom A common phrase whose meaning is not literal and is specific to the language it originates from, for example ‘as fit as a fiddle’. In John Steinbeck’s Of Mice and Men (1937), Lennie asks George (and it’s a repeated question and theme throughout the novel): ‘How long’s it gonna be till we get the little place an’ live off the fatta the lan’ – an tend the rabbits?’ * * * And take your father and your households, and come unto me: and I will give you the good of the land of Egypt, and ye shall eat the fat of the land. from ‘Genesis’, King James’ Version of the Bible 388 Literary terms imagery Descriptions used to represent and recreate impressions, surroundings and experiences. It came to him that if he could recall more than a scant few genuine acts of kindness in his life, then these might act as a kind of guide-rail on which he could lean when the weather of self-loathing blew in. Rose Tremain, Islands of Mercy (2020) innuendo A phrase which is not meant literally but which insinuates a hidden and usually insulting or sexualised meaning. See euphemism. invective Writing which is intended to disparage or denounce, abuse or insult a person, thing or idea. Dorothy Parker was renowned for her wit, her satirical prose and verse and for her withering oneliners. In ‘Godmother’ (1928) she subverts a traditional happy christening, as the eponymous narrator addresses the newborn: I give her sadness, And the gift of pain, The new-moon madness, And the love of rain. irony Sarcasm, where one thing is meant but the opposite is said or done, used for humorous or exaggerated effect. A comedic or poignant difference between what a character is saying and doing in the present and what will later occur. Dramatic irony is when a reader recognises this inconsistency before a character does. Nobody can tell what I suffer! But it is always so. Those who do not complain are never pitied. spoken by Mrs Bennet; Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice (1813) 389 Grammar Guide Nobody heard him, the dead man, But still he lay moaning: I was much further out than you thought And not waving but drowning. Stevie Smith ‘Not Waving but Drowning’ from New Selected Poems (1988) J juxtaposition Where two things are placed together to create a contrast or invite comparison. ‘The difficulty is,’ Mother said, ‘that Mr Tobias is a restless man and wants to see the world, while I intend to remain here for the whole of my life and never go away.’ Ruth Rendell, The Crocodile Bird (1993) Sun and moon, rise and fall: the well-worn wheels of nature that in Florida impinge where beach meets sea are in Pennsylvania muffled, softened, sedimented over, clothed in the profoundly accustomed. John Updike, Rabbit at Rest (1990) L litotes An understated or ironic figure of speech in which an idea or thing is emphasised by rejecting its opposite, for example ‘You won’t be sorry’ to convey satisfaction or pleasure. Indeed, it is not uncommon for slaves even to fall out and quarrel among themselves about the relative goodness of their masters. Frederick Douglass, Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass (1845) 390 Literary terms M malapropism The misuse of words for humorous effect, named after Mrs Malaprop in R. B. Sheridan’s The Rivals (1775): We will not anticipate the past, our retrospection will now be all to the future. I am sitting on the steps mending my bike when Miss S. emerges for her evening stroll. ‘I went to Devon on Saturday,’ she said. ‘On this frisbee.’ I suppose she means freebie, a countrywide concession to pensioners that BR ran last weekend. Alan Bennett, The Lady in the Van (1989) maxim A short statement which conveys a general principle, truth or lesson. See also aphorism. Never trouble trouble, till trouble troubles you. Katie Fforde, Second Thyme Around (1999) However forward-looking we may all pretend to be, humanity is far more interested in its past than the future. John Mortimer, Rumpole on Trial (1992) metanoia An exaggerated or extreme statement lessened or undermined by a successive statement which suggests a changed mind or a calmed emotion. He who binds to himself a Joy Does the winged life destroy; But he who kisses the Joy as it flies Lives in eternity’s sunrise. William Blake, ‘Eternity’ metaphor Where one thing is said to be another to invite comparison or emphasise a similarity. The title of Maya Angelou’s 391 Grammar Guide autobiography is a metaphor: I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings (1969) (see also symbolism), one she extends through the book: To describe my mother would be to write about a hurricane in its perfect power. Or the climbing, falling colors of a rainbow. * * * Who had they been, all these mothers and sisters and wives? What were they now? Moons, blank and faceless, gleaming with borrowed light, each spinning loyally around a bigger sphere. Frances Hardinge, The Lie Tree (2015) I found myself in a sea in which the waves of joy and sorrow were clashing against each other. Naguib Mahfouz, Echoes of an Autobiography (1997) His head flicked round on his thin lizard neck as he took in the position of the field. L. P. Hartley, The Go-Between (1953) metonymy A recognisable or inherent aspect of a thing used to represent the thing itself, for example a businessman being referred to as a ‘suit’, the monarchy as the Crown, or newspapers collectively as the Press. mnemonic An acronym used as a memory aid, for example ‘Will a jolly man make a jolly visitor’ is a prompt to recall the first eight Presidents of the USA: Washington, Adams, Jefferson, Madison, Monroe, Adams, Jackson, Van Buren. A mnemonic might sometimes be necessary to recall the spelling of a ‘difficult’ word: never eat cucumber, eat salmon sandwiches and remain young. motif An idea or image which recurs throughout a piece of writing. 392 Literary terms N nemesis The embodiment of a punishment often presented as an antagonist or enemy. Professor Moriarty is the arch enemy or nemesis of detective Sherlock Holmes in some of Sir Arthur Conan Doyle’s stories, explicit in the title of John Gardner’s 1974 novel: The Return of Moriarty: Sherlock Holmes’ Nemesis Lives Again. See also dopplegänger. neologism A word which has newly entered the language or an existing word which has developed a new or alternative meaning. A recent example of the former is plandemic and of the latter uplift: first used as a compound noun in 1845 in a poem by Nathaniel Parker Willis and adopted by geologists with reference to land movement. Have you been taken in by the “plandemic”? This pun encapsulates the suspicious notion that Covid-19 was not a natural accident. (31 October 2020) When first asked to extend free school meals over the holidays, the British government pointed to its “uplift” to universal credit of £20 per week. (7 November 2020) both by Steve Poole, ‘Word of the Week’, in the Guardian O omniscient narrator A narrator who is all-knowing and oversees the entire story, meaning that they have information which is being withheld from one or more characters but which they share with the reader. See also third-person narrative. Amy was having hard times at Aunt March’s. She felt her exile deeply, and for the first time in her life, realized how much she was beloved and petted at home. Aunt March never petted 393 Grammar Guide any one; she did not approve of it, but she meant to be kind, for the well–behaved little girl pleased her very much, and Aunt March had a soft place in her old heart for her nephew’s children, though she didn’t think it proper to confess it. Louisa M. Alcott, Little Women (1868) onomatopoeia Words which imitate the sounds they represent, for example ‘click’ and ‘clack’, or the use of consonant sounds to mimic the sound they are describing, for example to create the rhythm of high heels on a wooden floor. tattarrattat: to describe the sound of a knock on the door. James Joyce, Ulysses (1922) All the time, there was the deafening zsh, zsh, zsh of the rotor-blades. Andy McNab, Bravo Two Zero (1993) oxymoron A phrase which joins contradictory words to create a paradox, for example ‘pretty ugly’. As for believing things, I can believe anything, provided that it is quite incredible. Oscar Wilde, The Picture of Dorian Grey (1890) The Government plans to unleash creative destruction on the civil service. The Economist (October 2020) P palindrome A word (e.g. noon) or phrase which reads the same forward and backward, for example borrow or rob or Able was I ere I saw Elba (attributed to Napoleon). 394 Literary terms parable A short story which teaches a lesson or moral, similar to a fable or allegory. Associated with biblical lessons in the New Testament, for example the story of the Good Samaritan (Luke, chapter 10), whose moral is love everyone not just your friends. paradox A statement which seems to contradict itself, but which nevertheless conveys a truth or opinion. You will have freedom of action—and you will be under strict discipline to the committee. Ralph Waldo Emerson Invisible Man (1952) parallel structure Repeating the same pattern or structure of words or sentences. After generation upon generation, fathers upon forefathers, mothers upon foremothers [...] Anna Burns, Milkman (2018) She also knows that this smell, this rotten scent, is not a physical thing. It means something, It is a sign of something – something bad, something amiss, something out of kilter in her house. Maggie O’Farrell, Hamnet (2020) parallelism Where sets of words or phrases are opposed but balanced, such as ‘out of sight’ and ‘out of mind’. Many are called but few are chosen. Eat out to help out. * * * You forget what you want to remember, and you remember what you want to forget. Cormac McCarthy, The Road (2006) 395 Grammar Guide paraphrase To simplify or shorten a complicated or longer text in order to provide a more comprehensible version. For example the condensing of a legal, technical or scientific text for a lay audience. parody A comic or mocking imitation of the style of a writer. In this example, Larkin provides a less romanticised view of the past than the earlier poet Hood. I remember, I remember, The house where I was born, The little window where the sun Came peeping in at morn; He never came a wink too soon, Nor brought too long a day, Thomas Hood, ‘I Remember, I Remember’ (1844) ‘You look as though you wished the place in Hell,’ My friend said, ‘ judging from your face.’ ‘Oh well, I suppose it’s not the place’s fault,’ I said. Philip Larkin, ‘I Remember, I Remember’ (1954) pastiche A piece of writing which is a combination of words, phrases and passages taken from another writer or writers. A form of parody. I must go down to the seas again, to the lonely sea and the sky, And all I ask is a tall ship and a star to steer her by, John Masefield, ‘Sea Fever’ (1902) I must go out to the shed again for another bucket of coal. For some fur-lined boots and an anorak I would sell my soul. Jeremy Nicholas, ‘Snow Fever’ (1987) 396 Literary terms pathetic fallacy Attributing human emotions to things in nature, particularly evident in poetic description, such as in Alfred Lord Tennyson’s ‘Maud’ (1855) in which The red rose cries . . . / And the white rose weeps . . . / And the lily whispers. Weather can be used to reflect a person’s mood: Though the walk home took forever, I don’t remember much about it except a certain gray, cold, rain-shrouded mood on Madison Avenue—umbrellas bobbing, the crowds on the sidewalk flowing silently downtown . . . Donna Tartt, The Goldfinch (2013) pathos A piece of writing which evokes acute feelings of sympathy or sadness. Dickens’ novels provide plenty of examples. The reader is asked to sympathise with downtrodden characters such as Little Nell, Tiny Tim, Smike and Paul Dombey. For not an orphan in the wide world can be so deserted as the child who is an outcast from a living parent’s love. Charles Dickens, Dombey and Son (1848) She wants to see someone. To speak to someone. Someone from another lifetime. Someone who made her feel safe. Anna Hope, Expectation (2019) peripeteia Lectures or teachings while ‘on the hoof ’, delivered whilst ‘walking up and down’, for example John Wesley’s sermons. persona The character or identity taken on by a writer of a work, embodied in the narration. 397 Grammar Guide In Never Let Me Go (2005), Kazuo Ishiguro’s narrator is Kathy. She has an intimate, chatty voice, speaking directly to the reader: I don’t know how it was where you were, but at Hailsham the guardians were really strict about smoking. personification An idea, or event presented as a human operation; adopting human attributes. See also anthropomorphism. But, look, the morn, in russet mantle clad, Walks o’er the dew of yon high eastward hill. William Shakespeare, Hamlet (1603) I suppose he was fifty but to me he seemed hopelessly old and utterly out of the picture: it was as though Father Time had come down with his scythe to take a turn at the wicket. L. P. Hartley, The Go-Between (1953) platitude A phrase in common use employed to restore peace or calm emotion, but which has become meaningless and clichéd from overuse. Let sleeping dogs lie. It’s all water under the bridge. pleonasm The redundant use of extra words which repeat rather than expand meaning, such as burning fire or this is a really new innovation. polyptoton The repetition of a word, or its root, with a different grammatical application each time. I look. But you are not looking at me. You don’t need to look at me for the same reason God don’t look at man. For one look 398 Literary terms and may eye would burn out of him skull, burn to nothing, not even a speck, not a dot, less than that. Marlon James, A Brief History of Seven Killings (2014) portmanteau word The combination of two existing words to create a new one, for example brunch or Britpop. The sun-wind, the breeze that blows almost every summer day in the Aegean, sent little waves curling like lazy whips along the shingle. John Fowles, The Magus (1966) presaging Similar to foreshadowing, using signs, warnings or omens to suggest that something (usually negative) is going to happen soon. When I was little, four or five, my greatest fear was that some day my mother might not come home from work. Donna Tartt, The Goldfinch (2013) proverb Wit and wisdom from ‘ordinary’ people and their experiences or observations. Too many cooks spoil the broth. though Many hands make light work. pun A play on words; see also homophone. If he do bleed, I’ll gild the faces of the grooms withhal, for it must seem their guilt. William Shakespeare, Macbeth (1606) 399 Grammar Guide Q quip A quick, often witty phrase or retort to something said. True friends stab you in the front. Oscar Wilde ‘Gut?’‘General Unified Theory.’ Kohler quipped. ‘The theory of everything.’ Dan Brown, Angels and Demons (2000) quotation A phrase or passage taken from and attributed to another piece of writing or speech. A good example of a quote that is also an epigram, is the opening to the chapter ‘What a Whopper!’ in Jonathan Coe’s Number 11 (2015). We are all in this together. George Osborne, about his austerity policies, address to Conservative Party conference (2009) It is an ironic (see irony) inversion of a maxim: the implication is that nothing could be further from the truth. R rebus A riddle or puzzle that combines letters with pictures or symbols which represent syllables to create a word or phrase. MT for empty ccccccc for seven seas I ♥ U for I love you repetition A word, sound, phrase or structure used multiple times in a row. In the end, your past is not my past and your truth is not my truth and your solution - is not my solution. Zadie Smith, White Teeth (2001) 400 Literary terms rhetoric Writing intended to persuade or convince, often employing figures of speech to emphasise the intended effect and delivery. Jonathan Swift’s pamphlet (1729) A Modest Proposal (sub-title: For preventing the Children of Poor People From being a Burthen to Their Parents or Country, and For making them Beneficial to the Publick) uses irony, satire, metaphor and other rhetoric devices to highlight the inequalities between rich and poor in early eighteenth-century English society. I have been assured by a very knowing American of my acquaintance in London, that a young healthy child well nursed, is, at a year old, a most delicious nourishing and wholesome food, whether stewed, roasted, baked, or boiled; and I make no doubt that it will equally serve in a fricasie, or a ragoust. rhetorical question A question which is not intended to be answered but is instead used to emphasise a point. Who’s Afraid of Virginia Woolf? Edward Albee (1962) But I also knew that I would never get used to the piercings all over her face, or the tattoos all over her neck and throat and around her eyes. Why would you disfigure yourself like that? What had inspired her to do it? Jonathan Coe, Number 11 (2015) And did the Countenance Divine, Shine forth upon our clouded hills? And was Jerusalem builded here, Among these dark Satanic Mills? William Blake, ‘Jerusalem’ (c.1808) 401 Grammar Guide riddle A statement or question with a double or hidden meaning that the reader or listener is tasked with resolving. What goes on four legs in the morning, on two legs at noon, and on three legs in the evening? Sophocles, Oedipus Rex (c.429 bc) S sarcasm Humour which is ironic, insincere and often used to mock or disparage. One might be led to suspect that there were all sorts of things going on in the Universe which he or she did not thoroughly understand. Kurt Vonnegut, Slaughterhouse-Five (1969) ‘No no, thanks to you, old boy,’ Bertrand said, with a welcome return to his earlier comradeliness. ‘Very fine body of men, the gentlemen of the Press.’ ‘Nice of you to say so, sir,’ Dixon said, making his Edith Sitwell face into the phone. Kingsley Amis, Lucky Jim (1954) second-person narrative The ‘you’ perspective in story-telling, when the narrator addresses or appeals to the reader directly. It is unusual in novels, but commonly deployed in non-fiction, particularly in instructional and inspirational manuals and in political entreaties. You must be the change you wish to see in the world. Mahatma Gandhi You are not the kind of guy who would be at a place like this at this time of the morning. But here you are, and you cannot 402 Literary terms say that the terrain is entirely unfamiliar, although the details are fuzzy. Jay McInerney, Bright Lights, Big City (1984) self-fulfilling prophecy A prediction or belief which influences people’s behaviour to the extent that it is realised, but which would otherwise have been avoided. It was an impossible situation. Penn Knowlton had realized that as soon as he realized he was in love with Ginnie Ostrander – Mrs. David Ostrander. Patricia Highsmith, ‘Variations on a Game’ in Nothing that Meets the Eye: The Uncollected Stories (2002) simile Where one thing is said to be like another to invite comparison and emphasise a similarity. He was dressed like springtime itself in a gaudy blazer. and It was a hot day, so the marquee was like a furnace, and nobody much wanted to be there. Patrick Gale, A Place Called Winter (2015) Time has not stood still. It has washed over me, washed me away, as if I’m nothing more than a woman of sand, left by a careless child too near the water. Margaret Atwood, The Handmaid’s Tale (1985) spoonerism When the first consonant sounds of two or more words are swapped to create a new phrase for humorous effect. ‘What’s the katter with misses’ I muttered (word-control gone) into her hair. 403 Grammar Guide ‘If you must know,’ she said, ‘you do it the wrong way.’ ‘Show, wight ray.’ ‘All in good time,’ responded the spoonerette. Vladimir Nabokov, Lolita (1953) statement A straightforward expression. We accept the love we think we deserve. Stephen Chbosky, The Perks of Being a Wallflower (1999) stereotype A cliché, an over-simplified, exaggerated and often derogatory opinion which is applied to an entire group or type of people. It can easily tip into prejudice and thus be offensive. In literature, a character might deliberately be ‘from central casting’, i.e. an archetype, who displays stock attributes or characteristics, and as such is a form of creative shorthand that a reader will be familiar with. A romantic hero is tall, dark and handsome, a scientist mad and absent-minded, a technical expert is a geek. sub-text A point of view (or ideas or a belief) which may be at variance with the meaning of what is going on or written and suggests a deeper perception of truth. syllogism A form of logical reasoning where two propositions or ideas, which share a common element, together confirm a given conclusion. All mammals are animals. [major, general premise] All cats are animals. [minor premise] therefore: All cats are animals. [conclusion] 404 Literary terms symbolism Where one thing, concept or idea is used to represent another, for example a dove is used as a symbol of peace. See also allegory. All the world’s a stage, and all the men and women merely players; they have their exits and their entrances; And one man in his time plays many parts. William Shakespeare, As You Like It (1599) synecdoche Where a part may be used for the whole or the whole stand for a part. All hands on deck! Cambridge won the contest. Oxford mortified. T tautology Repeating the same information using different words thus making the second redundant, though it might be used to highlight or emphasise a point. It is more specifically when a predicate (the part of the sentence that includes the verb) repeats a subject, for example ‘the dog is an animal’. Logical tautology is an assertion of a formula that is always true, for example, ‘my cat is black; my cat is never not black’. In prose, tautology can be a vice – when text is lazily constructed and where wordiness and repetition in meaning creep in and are redundant. Where used purposefully it can indicate an aspect (often to mock) of a character’s demeanour or preoccupations, as illustrated by the self-consciously selfeffacing Uriah Heep: ‘[. . . ] I’m a very umble person.’. . .‘I am well aware that I am the umblest person going,’ said Uriah Heep modestly, ‘ let the other be where he may. My mother is likewise a very umble 405 Grammar Guide person. We live in an umble abode, Master Copperfield, but have much to be thankful for. My father’s former calling was umble; he was a sexton.’ Or for poetic effect: Charles Dickens, The Personal History of David Copperfield (1849) This is the way the world ends This is the way the world ends This is the way the world ends Not with a bang but a whimper. T. S. Eliot, ‘The Hollow Men’ (1925) third-person narrative Writing from the perspective of a narrator who observes the action, who describes the activities and feelings of the ‘he, she, they’ of the story. This might be from the view of an omniscient narrator or a more limited perspective of one character in a novel. Three days after the shooting in the night Heloise Gault read the letter that had come from Father Morrissey, then turned it over and read it again. She was a slender, slightly built woman in her late thirties . . . William Trevor, The Story of Lucy Gault (2002) transferred epithet When an adjectival word or phrase is attached to a noun which it doesn’t strictly describe (thus transferred), for example ‘sleepless nights’. A person, not the night, experiences the sleeplessness. It is a form of personification. . . . An ecstasy of fumbling Fitting the clumsy helmets just in time, Wilfred Owen, ‘Dulce et Decorum Est’ (1920) 406 Literary terms trope The figurative or metaphorical use of language or a recurring theme or image with a common meaning. U understatement The opposite of hyperbole or deliberate exaggeration where something is presented as weaker or less important than it actually is and thus in a sarcastic or ironic way. I have to have this operation. It isn’t very serious. I have this little tumor on the brain. J. D. Salinger, The Catcher in the Rye (1951) V verbosity Wordiness, using more words than are strictly necessary for text to be comprehensible. Many readers might suggest that Henry James is a master of verbose and tautological writing. Under certain circumstances there are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea. There are circumstances in which, whether you partake of the tea or not – some people of course never do – the situation is in itself delightful. opening lines of The Portrait of a Lady (1881) The spoken equivalent is loquaciousness: garrulous, chatty, free-talking and invariably indiscreet. verisimilitude The appearance of truth; all works of fiction have this quality which the reader temporarily accepts. W witticism An intelligent and humorous phrase. A book that shows a prolonged and plentiful amount of wit (and thus numerous 407 Grammar Guide witticisms) across its 128 pages is W. C. Sellar and R. J. Yeatman’s 1066 and All That (1930): One of the most romantic aspects of the Elizabethan age was the wave of beards which suddenly swept across History and settled upon all the great men of the period. wordplay Manipulating the multiple meanings of different words, especially to create puns, jokes and riddles. Z zeugma Where one word is used to describe two others in different contexts, for example ‘she lost her keys and her temper’. Reading is one form of escape. Running for your life is another. Lemony Snickett, The End (2006) 408