_CO _R _R _E _ S_ P_ O _N_D_E_N_C_E_ CORRESPONDENCE Any written or digital communication exchanged by two or more parties. Correspondences may come in the form of: letters emails text messages voicemails notes postcards. Objectives At the end of the lesson, you will be able to identify different types of office correspondence and learn how to write major forms of office correspondence. What is an office correspondence? What are the major forms of office correspondence? Why is office correspondence important? FORMS OF OFFICE CORRESPONDEN CE By Ana Marie M. Delos Reyes OFFICE CORRESPONDENCE / BUSINESS CORRESPONDENCE is a written exchange of internal and external communication to support all business processes. THREE MAJOR FORMS 1. business letter 2. business memo 3. business e-mail INTERNAL CORRESPONDENCE means that there is a communication or agreement between departments or branches of the same company EXTERNAL CORRESPONDENCE means that the communication is between the company and another organization or firm. The purpose of the correspondence is to communicate BUSINESS LETTER Business letter is the traditional way of communicating information from one company to another or used in external correspondence. BUSINESS LETTER FORMATS full block modified block semi-block. The format used in writing a business letter depends on the requirements set by the company. TYPES OF BUSINESS LETTERS: sales letter order letter complaint letter inquiry letter adjustment letter acknowledgement letter follow-up letter acknowledgement letter cover letter letter of recommendation letter of resignation. 2215 Lifehouse St. Project 2, Quezon City INQUIRY LETTER February 24, 2016 Mr. Chito Mirinda Human Resource Manager Areflor Funeral Homes Brgy. West Rembo, Makati City Dear Mr. Mirinda: I am writing to ask if you have found a person to fill up the position of Operations Manager as posted on your website. We currently have two qualified applicants that fit the position. Attached herewith are the resumes of the applicants, for your perusal. We look forward to work with you again and hope to hear feedback from you. Thank you and more power! Sincerely, (signature) Ms. Letecia Alvarado Human Resource Manager The Good Keeper Manpower Agency The letter of inquiry as an example includes the heading, date, inside address, salutation, body, complimentary close, signature and sender’s information. This letter is an external correspondence between two difference companies. BUSINESS MEMO Business Memo is a written communication strictly between the company’s offices to another, or used in internal correspondence. The difference between a memo and a letter is that the memo has its title line and series number. The employees tend to read the if the title line is related to their job description. It is also used to implement internal guidelines or procedures that the employees must follow. SOME TYPES OF BUSINESS MEMOS: operational memo financial memo request for action directives trip report field report dress code memo ANNOUNCEMENT MEMO Little Children Playschool Forbes Village, Makati City Series No. 16 – 005 To: All Pre-school Teachers From: The School Director Date: February 24, 2016 Subject: Company Outing In line with the approved budget for the year 2016 – 2017 is the pursuance of the proposed company outing this coming March 21 to 21 at the San Gregorio Farms and Leisure. We advise everyone to prepare your sports outfit and toiletries. We look forward to see you enjoy in our two day company outing. Thank you for your continuous support. (signature) Emelda C. De Marlon Explanation: The announcement memo includes information about the company outing of the employees. The company also uses their own letterhead. BUSINESS E-MAIL Business e-mail is an office correspondence that can either be internal or external. There is no required format in writing e-mail correspondence but it is expected that the writer maintain a professional tone. Note that the header of the letter is written on the blank fields including the ‘from’ and ‘to’ fields. ‘From’ contains e-mail from the sender ‘to’ contains the email of the recipient. WHAT TO INCLUDE IN AN EMPLOYMENTRELATED EMAIL MESSAGE Your email messages should include: Subject line describing why you're writing Greeting Short message (2-3 paragraphs at most) Closing Signature with your contact information Subject: Jane Doe - Absent From Work Dear Supervisor Name: I've come down with the flu and will not be coming in on Tuesday, March 2, so I can rest and recover. I've asked Patricia to check on my clients to ensure all of their needs are met and Tom will prepare the report for our meeting Friday. I will try and check email if you need anything urgent. Thank you, Jane WHAT NOT TO INCLUDE When you are writing to apply for a job or for other employment-related matters, there are some things your message shouldn't include: Emoticons Typos and grammatical errors Extraneous information Fancy fonts or formatting Colored fonts Images (unless you are attaching a related document with images) Quotations in your signature Slang or abbreviations From: Lance P. To: Letecia A. letecia@hr.goodkeeper.com Subject: Re: Vacant Position for Operations Manager Dear Ma’am Alvarado: Good day! In behalf of Areflor Funeral Homes, we extend our deepest gratitude for helping us scout qualified applicants in the industry. We hope to work again with you. Cheers! Best regards, (Signature) LANCE POLIDO Human Resource Personnel Areflor Funeral Homes Brgy. West Rembo, Makati City BUSINESS E-MAIL SAMPLE In this example, the e-mail correspondence is informal and external. It expresses gratitude towards the effort made by the manpower agency. Hiring Manager Company Name Company Address City, State, Zip Dear Candidate Name, Thank you very much for your interest in employment opportunities with ABCD company. I am writing to inform you that we have selected the candidate whom we believe most closely matches the job requirements of the position. We appreciate you taking the time to interview with us and wish you the best of luck in your future endeavors. Best regards, Hiring Manager Candidate Rejection Email Message Example Subject Line: Job Application - Candidate Name Thank you very much for your interest in employment opportunities with ABCD company. This message is to inform you that we have selected a candidate who is a match for the job requirements of the position. We appreciate you taking the time to apply for employment with our company and wish you the best of luck in your future endeavors. Best regards, Hiring Manager KEY POINTS Office correspondence is a written exchange of internal and external communication to support all business processes. It is also known as the business correspondence. A business letter is a traditional way of communicating information from one company to another or used in external correspondence. A business memo is a written communication strictly between the company’s offices to another. A business e-mail is an office correspondence that can either be internal or external. There is no required format in writing e-mail correspondence but it is TIPS Make sure the office correspondence is concise and easy to understand. It is recommended for a correspondence to have brief sentences and paragraphs for the employees tend to read it quickly. Controlling the tone of writing is important in any office correspondence. It should not sound too formal or too informal. QUESTION 1 What do you call the written form used to exchange internal and external communication to support all business processes? 1 2 3 4 Official Correspondence Office Composure Office Correspondence Office Commission The office correspondence is a written form used to exchange internal and external communication to support all business processes. Question 2 Office Correspondence is also known as ____________ . 1 2 3 4 Official Correspondence Workplace Correspondence Business Correspondence Working Correspondence The other term for office correspondence is business correspondence. Question 3 The communication or agreement between departments or branches of the same company is known as ____________. 1 2 3 4 International Correspondence Intern Correspondence Internet Correspondence Internal Correspondence Internal correspondence refers to the communication or agreement between departments or branches of the same company. Question 4 Which of the following is the reason for writing an office correspondence? 1 to communicate professional way 2 to communicate the competitors 3 to communicate employees 4 to communicate another the information in a clear and confidential information and give it to latest news and products among office gossip from one department to The purpose in writing the office correspondence is to communicate the information in a clear and professional way. Question 5 Which of the following is the appropriate statement to use in writing an office correspondence? 1 2 3 4 “To cut the story short, I am a demanding person.” “Sorry we are busy right now.“ “We apologize for the delay of our response.”. “I am really disappointed with you all.” Remember that an office correspondence should not be too formal or too informal. Response should always be done professionally Question 6 What makes a good office correspondence? (choose two answers) 1 The office everybody. 2 The office understand. 3 The office 4 The office paragraphs. correspondence should be long enough for correspondence is concise and easy to correspondence must be extremely formal. correspondence has brief sentences and A good office correspondence should be concise or must have short sentences and paragraphs, and should understand easily by the reader. Question 7 Which of the following statements can be included in the business memo? 1 “We look forward to work with your office the soonest possible time.” 2 “Hope to hear a response on the inquiry we sent via e-mail on the price list of goods needed by our department.” 3 “As per Series 2014-12, the implementation of the dress code must be done immediately.” 4 “Thank you for addressing your letter to our company. We surely would like to be of help.” The business memo is used within or between the company’s offices to another. In this example, the memorandum is about the dress code implementation. Question 8 The client sent an e-mail regarding the bank’s swift code to be able to do wire transfer or remittance transaction. Arrange your company’s business email response. 2 ___ a. We received your e-mail regarding the swift 5 code for the remittance transaction or wire transfer. 1 b. Warm regards, ___ ___ 3 c. Dear Valued Client: 6 d. Our bank’s swift code is AAAABBBB. ___ ____e. Maria Pascua 4 e-mail Banker ____f. You may also be required to provide your complete account name, account number and billing address. CORRECT ORDER Dear Valued Client: We received your e-mail regarding the swift code for the remittance transaction or wire transfer. Our bank’s swift code is AAAABBBB. You may also be required to provide your complete account name, account number and billing address. Warm regards, Maria Pascua e-mail Banker The business e-mail should contain salutation, body, complementary close and sender’s information. It clearly addresses the information needed by the client. Question 9 Your office is assigned to sponsor a first Friday mass. You will invite all employees to attend the said activity. Arrange the business memo. 1 a. You are all invited to attend the First Friday ____ Mass to be sponsored by the Office of Good Governance on March 5, 2016, 12:30 p.m. at the lobby of the Administration Building. 1 ____ b. TO: All Personnel 1 c. Pilar G. Magsaysay ____ 1 d. Thank you for your continuing support. ____ 1 e. DATE: February 24, 2016 ____ 1 f. FROM: The Director Office of Good ____ Governance 1 ____ g. SUBJECT: First Friday Mass Question 10 Categorize the following description based on the different forms of office correspondence. Business Letter Business Memo Business e-mail Business Memo _________________ a. It is written for internal correspondence only. Business Letter b. It is the traditional way to _________________ communicate between companies to another. Business e-mail c. It does not have any required _________________ format. Business Email d. It can either be internal or _________________ external correspondence. Example Email Message Asking for a Reference Note that it asks for a reference letter, explains why you need one, offers to provide documentation, and includes contact information, so it's easy for the reference writer to respond. Subject Line: Reference Request - Janet Dickinson Dear Mr. Jameson, I hope you are well, and that all is running smoothly at ABC Company. I miss everyone in the marketing division! I am writing to ask if you would feel comfortable providing a positive letter of reference for me? If you can attest to my qualifications for employment, and the skills I attained while I was employed at ABC Company, I would sincerely appreciate it. I am in the process of seeking a new position as a marketing manager. I look forward to continuing the work I have done in marketing while increasing my responsibilities in a managerial capacity. A positive reference from you would greatly enhance my job search prospects. Please let me know if you have any questions, or if there is any information I can offer regarding my experience to assist you in giving me a reference. I have attached an updated resume. Don’t hesitate to ask for any other materials you think would be helpful. I can be reached at jdickinson@gmail.com or (111) 111-1234. Thank you for your consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you. Regards, Jane Dickinson