D15 on D16
Background:
good background where you get overall information about what the essay will be about. Both the
theory and the empirical case are described.
Problem discussion:
The problem discussion is good and relevant, but references are missing in the paragraphs. .
Purpose:
Relevant purpose for this essay
Research question
Good and relevant research question but it is not necessary to mention the ABC model.
Overall, it is a good structure thought the paper and the language is good.