What is an author’s tone? What is an author’s tone? Tone indicates the writer’s mood, voice, and attitude. Often an author's tone is described by adjectives, such as: cynical, depressed, sympathetic, cheerful, outraged, positive, angry, sarcastic, prayerful, ironic, solemn, vindictive, intense, excited. Tone is not an action. It is an attitude. Real-life Example You can say the same phrase in different ways, each showing a different attitude or tone. Try saying, “Come here, Sally” using the following tones: – Commanding or bossy – Secretive – Loving – Angry – Excited – Playful Tone is not explained or expressed directly. A reader must “read between the lines” to feel the author’s attitude and identify the tone. Tone is different than “Mood.” Tone is the author’s own attitude toward the subject. Mood is the emotion the author wanted the readers to feel while reading about the subject. An author’s tone influences the story’s mood and atmosphere. Author’s Tone Leads to Story’s Atmosphere & Mood Example: An author writes a horror story using a serious and sinister tone. That tone helps create a scary atmosphere and a nervous, frightened mood for the readers Another Example: An author writes a satire, making fun of a horror story using a playful or sarcastic tone. That playful tone helps create a humorous mood for the readers. Literary Examples of Author’s Tones… Serious / Solemn “The girl remembered little from the raid at Okeadan in which she had been captured. She knew her parents had been killed. She had no idea what had happened to her brothers and sisters. Much of what she had experienced had been so horrible that she had simply shut it out of her mind. . . .” At Her Majesty’s Request p. 17 Serious / Solemn n a s e ir p s n i a e n o t o t s s the raid ad u n i e o l i r g “The girl remembered little from s e i n i s h r T a ’s . c r y o d d h n t ebeen hy, a u g a a at Okeadan in which she had r t s i . f t e o a Th g p e a r m s y had is pas heknew her s p , captured.osShe parents s s e h t n at m d g a n i s d f a o been killed. She had no idea what had e r d o n o e h m w r e happened to her d brothers and sisters. a e r he Muchtof what she had experienced had been so horrible that she had simply shut it out of her mind. . . .” At Her Majesty’s Request p. 17 Sarcastic “Just look at the Titanic. The captain said, ‘Even God can’t sink this ship.’ Then, on the first voyage across the Atlantic Ocean, boom, it hit an iceberg and sank. And as soon as a daredevil utters the words ‘piece of cake’ before attempting a stunt, he is doomed. ‘Piece of cake’ becomes his ‘famous last words.’ …” My Brother’s Arm p. 111-2 Sarcastic a said, s e r “Just look at the Titanic. Theincaptain i p s . y d e e n ag on the to ship.’ofThen, r t ‘Even God can’t sink this c i t s a c te i r l p a u s f s y n s i a ’ l r first voyage the Ocean, boom, p e Atlantic o across r f h e t o h u d p a s sank.mo o as soon as a oand m t Thisan iceberg it hit And a g n s i t u n o r u ta words ‘piece of cake’ a humo utters o daredevil the t s . d r a e e d l a rea stunt, he is doomed. e before Thisattempting h t n i e l u ‘Piece ridicof cake’ becomes his ‘famous last words.’ …” My Brother’s Arm p. 111-2 Humorous “When he realized he was still in one piece, he knew that at the very least he must be completely flat, with his face peering out of his own bottom and his brains leaking out of his ears. . . .” Toad Heaven p. 64 Humorous a s e r i p s n i l u e f n y a o l t “When he realized he was still in one piece, p s a u o o r t o s m d u a h e l e s ’ h s r i t o h s h T p t l . u e e a r h e o h at the very e be s l p h Thishe knew t s a t that least he must o t I u ( o tm . r b a e a c d i e a r e a r c com e d completely flat, with his face peering out h t n a n i h t i d o w o y f i m of his iown t bottom and his brains leaking n e d r e d a reout of this ) . s ears. . . .” r e c Toad Heaven p. 64 chara Objective / Impersonal “By nightfall on Monday, the center of the storm had barely moved, and icy winds of hurricane force swept across an area from Virginia up to Nova Scotia, Canada. The wind was so powerful that in Liberty, New York, the local train station had its roof entirely ripped off …” Blizzard p . 56 Objective / Impersonal s u o i r e s a s e r i s p w s e n i n e s a n o h t c l u a s n ( o n s r o i e e t b p c i t f m h i n g othe center “By nightfall ofi the storm had ’s on Monday, n r m f . o o c e h i t l c u a m e i c a e i p d p s i s a y i t h c force , and icyfowinds T barely hmoved, th of hurricane a e r r r o e , s up to Nova d from dVirginia p acrossm u o s o o o i m swept an area t u t a e s h , T d . e ) t wind was so powerful that in s Canada. s t r e r o Scotia, The e p t re in d e r eNew York, the local train station had its roof d i s Liberty, n co entirely ripped off …” Blizzard p . 56 Enthusiastic “ . . . the next minute, Winn-Dixie looked like a furry bullet, shooting across the building, chasing that mouse. He was barking and his feet were skidding all over the polished Pick-ItQuick floor, and people were clapping and hollering and pointing. They really went wild when Winn-Dixie actually caught the mouse.” Because of Winn-Dixie p. 36 Enthusiastic , e v i t c a n a s e r e i c p n s e n i “ . . . the next minute, Winn-Dixie lookedinlike u a l f e n o t o t g c i n s t i t e s a p a i p o i furry bullet, shooting across the building, s h c u i t r h t n o n a h t e , u d s a ’ o r e o o h chasing mouse. He was barking and his m th that T u . d a e e r t i s i e c h x p Th feettm e s n o aall over the polished Pick-Itwere skidding n i a e y l b o and people were clapping and t live Quick s r floor, e ad e r e th hollering . n o i and pointing. They really went wild t c a e r mowhen Winn-Dixie actually caught the mouse.” Because of Winn-Dixie p. 36 Hostile / Angry “Dana grinned malevolently. His teeth were nubby and yellow, like an old barn dog’s. Kneeling on Roy’s chest, he hauled back to hit him again.” Hoot p. 184 Hostile / Angry t n e l o i v a s e r i o t p s g n n i i , p e r o n e h o d t e a y b e r r g y e n a h a t m s r n ’ i r o o h d t h o t u u o a a m His teeth e malevolently. h y .were T s grinned y . This “Dana a r e e o r t n e s u hnubby and e p d h s n t o a n yellow, like an old barn dog’s. i e s s atm t n c i e l t f n a o e c on Roy’s chest, he hauled back e h t inspir sKneeling g n i z i to hit him again.” a h p em Hoot p. 184 “We’d gone a quarter mile down the trail when we ran into a man walking the wrong way. He had a pack on his back – a full, towering, overstuffed pack – and he was sweating hard. His breath sounded like a bellows. I stepped aside to let him pass. I stared. I knew that he was one of the ones who hadn’t made it, who’d quit right there at the start.” Halfway to the Sky p. 32 Disapproving “We’d gone a quarter mile Disapproving down the trail when we ran a p into a man walking the wrong u s t e s e n way. He had a pack on his o t g n a i v o t o r s g back – a full, towering, app p n l i e d h a is e d o l s , l s ’ e a r t o overstuffed pack – and hepher I h . t s r t u e s n a d o e s a m m e t r h a Thisweating s was hard. His e i l e h v t p i t i n m t i o e c d p c o a o breath like a e comsounded m h l t a t e t n a e i c m e bellows. I stepped aside to g r d p p ju a r e dI stared. I rknew a let him pass. . e s r e e t h c ones t a r a that he was one of the h c e h t f who o hadn’t made it, who’d quit right there at the start.” Halfway to the Sky p. 32 PERSONAL Personal “I feel alive for the first time in years,” said Faber. “I feel I’m doing what I should’ve done a lifetime ago. “I afeel alive time in it’s because For little whilefor I’mthe notfirst afraid. Maybe said Faber. feel. .I’m I’myears,” doing the right thing at“I last.. . “ doing Fahrenheit what I should’ve done a lifetime ago.451 p. 131 For a little while I’m not afraid. Maybe it’s because I’m doing the right thing at last . . .” Fahrenheit 451 p. 131 PERSONAL Personal e r e h p s o m t “I feel alive for the first time in years,” said Faber. “I a r n o a h t ago. to a lifetime u a s feel I’m doing what I should’ve done d e a h e timeioin l T in . e n g “I feel alive for the first n n o i t r t a l For a little while I’m not afraid. Maybe it’s sbecause a l a h e n v o e d r rsright n d e a n p y e a said Faber. “I feel I’m doing t r I’myears,” doing the thing at last.. . . . “ i s l ’ n a r a c i o o i t s d n th s n e u e a d a r i f p d s n i x n ago.451 p. 131 o e a Fahrenheit c t l Th what I should’ve done a lifetime f s a r o n e o d d i t n o o u o m o m t not afraid. a m of e For t a little while I’m e e h s t o g t n i s p e l p e hit’s because ho Maybe , s I’m doing the r . e s d r a e t c a r a the reright h cthing at last . . .” e h t t abou Fahrenheit 451 p. 131 Grieving Corny It sounds clichéd But at times like this, I miss my dad. I mean, I don’t remember him – he died of cancer when I was three. Pictures are all that’s left. My favorite one is us sitting on a bench, eating ice cream. Our knees are knobby the same way, we’re both grinning like hyenas, he’s pointing at the camera. I haven’t had a dad in twelve years. Most of the time, that’s okay. But today, right now, I’d like a hug. From him. Shark Girl, Kelly Bingham Grieving Corny It sounds clichéd But at times like this, I miss my dad. I mean, s i h T . s I don’t remember him – m e o s rp i he died of cancer when I was three. g e n i h l t e n e i f ” t Pictures s s l pe ou e s e r i d are all that’s left. e f r h t o e h e e r r s l a e My favorite one is a b h “ e p v s n f e o e r o t f m e t d o us sitting on a bench, eating ice cream. n a o s o t o n t e a m o g g n P a i Our knees are knobby theesame n way, pires i v t e i a r g r , chyenas,his ins we’re like t’s grinning r eboth e o h t p . s fathe camera. T r . r he’s pointing at e g e d n h a i t e g r u n o e o l b h t a d n in twelve in adad g s n I haven’t had a years. s i r e n time, nd ca adthe Mostsof a y h t a that’ssokay. mp y But today, right now, I’d like a hug. From him. Shark Girl, Kelly Bingham Indifferent Flicker A maid cleans. A crew cuts the lawn. Even the groceries get delivered. Jordan’s dad is home, for once, but he barely lifts his head from his laptop to meet me. His eyes flicker in surprise, but he slams his attention back to the screen and coughs to dismiss us. Reaching for Sun, Tracie Vaughn Zimmer Indifferent Flicker n a s e t a . e e r r c e h e A maid cleans. p n s o o t t m t n a e n i r A crew cuts the lawn. g e d f n f i i o r d o a n c i m n s Even theegroceries get delivered. u y ’ t t d s p n p o a m t a p e s r rh for once, nally is e e dad lis home, d p ThJordan’s n , u o a i t o n t o o r but hers barely lifts his head m e e d e a p n e a r e imfrom his laptop s b e e to meet me. h y s t a u s a m w c o m l s l i e a His eyes h o t T I p . e r h e t d n flickerre inasurprise, i r hehe slams speake tbut e h t y his to the screen whattentionsback . d edismiss us. s and coughs to e r dep Reaching for Sun, Tracie Vaughn Zimmer Examples of Tone • • • • • • • • Cautious Humorous Affectionate Hostile Critical Objective Personal Violent • • • • • • • Solemn / Serious Sarcastic Disapproving Enthusiastic Desperate Pleading Indifferent The next time you read a passage, try to identify the author’s tone. It will help you “get the message” of the text. Works Cited Bingham, Kelly. Shark Girl. Boston: Candlewick, 2010. Print. Bradbury, Ray. Fahrenheit 451. New York, NY: Simon & Schuster, 1967. Print. Bradley, Kimberly Brubaker. Halfway to the Sky. New York: Yearling Press, 2003. Print. Dicamillo, Kate. Because of Winn-Dixie. New York: Candlewick Press, 2000. Print. Gleitzman, Morris. Toad Heaven. New York: Yearling Press, 2006. Print. Hiaasen, Carl. Hoot. New York: Yearling Press, 2006. Print. Lehmann, L. R. Blizzard. Salt Lake City, Utah: Quikread Press, 1997. Print. Myers, Walter Dean. At Her Majesty's Request: An African Princess in Victorian England. New York: Scholastic Press, 1999. Print Zimmer, Tracie Vaughn. Reaching for Sun. New York: Bloomsbury Children's, Distributed to the trade by Holtzbrinck, 2007. Print. Created at www.bibme.org