The summary of writing with a
purpose
"overload might lead to losing!"
Jill was supposed to write about school_ to_ work program. However, she's fallen
into a very big mistake by writing additional information in the memo which is not
important!
People don’t read, long and unhooked paragraphs that are out of the specific
meaning of the topic and that have overload information.
Adding too additional information to the paragraph might lead to losing the main
purpose of the topic, and let the reader to get bored from the first paragraph.
In conclusion, we have to keep in mind that the power of writing is to write, a short,
wise, and great idea in one statement that could catch your reader's attention!