RUBRICS FOR EVIDENCE BASED PARAGRAPH (PEEL) FOR 3NA AA DECEMBER 2016 MARKS PURPOSE/FOCUS 5 Has a clear main idea in the text. Focus is strongly maintained and clear without irrelevant sentences. Student can analyse the topic and create a strong connection among ideas. Writing is effective. 4 Has a clear main idea in the text. Focus is maintained and clear without irrelevant sentences. Student can analyse the topic there is a connection among ideas. 3 States a main idea in the text. Maintains focus throughout. 2 1 Main idea is too vague or general. Focus may drift. Has irrelevant sentences. Little or no focus or statement of main idea. EVIDENCE Evidence from sources is smoothly integrated and cited. Student can analyse evidence, evaluate the quality and re-write for accuracy. ELABORATION OF EVIDENCE Effective explanation of how evidence relates to topic sentence. Student can analyse an explanation, evaluate it, and elaborate well. Evidence from sources is smoothly integrated and cited. Student can analyse evidence, and evaluate its quality. Effective explanation of how evidence relates to topic sentence. Student can elaborate well. Some evidence from sources is integrated. Citations may be general or imprecise. Evidence is weakly integrated. Citations, if present, are uneven. Adequate explanation of how evidence relates to topic sentence. Evidence is minimal, absent, in error, or irrelevant. Little or no explanation of how evidence relates to topic. Weak explanation of how evidence relates to topic.