Resource Center Language Handbook 1. The Parts of Speech Language Handbook Language Handbook Worksheets, pp. 1–14 1. The Parts of Speech Tips for Spelling Explain to students that the parts of a compound noun may be written as one word, as separate words, or as a hyphenated word. To be sure a compound word is spelled correctly, always use a current dictionary. Part of Speech Definition Examples NOUN 1a. A noun is a word used to name a person, a place, a thing, or an idea. common noun a general name for a person, place, thing, or idea sister [person], apartment [place], pineapple [thing], hope [idea] proper noun names a particular person, place, thing, or idea, and always begins with a capital letter Ms. Baxter, Gulf of Mexico, Friday collective noun names a group family, herd; jury compound noun two or more words combined and used together as a single noun butterfly (butter + fly) [one word] compact disc [separate words] self-control [hyphenated word] PRONOUN 1b. A pronoun is a word used Emily Dickinson took few trips; she spent most of her time at Amherst. in place of one or more nouns or pronouns. personal pronoun • refers to the one speaking (first person), the one spoken to (second person), or the one spoken about (third person) • either singular (one) or plural (more than one) first person: reflexive pronoun • refers to the subject and directs the action of the verb back to the subject • either singular or plural first person: myself, ourselves second person: yourself, yourselves third person: himself, herself, itself, themselves Emily Dickinson wrote herself notes on the backs of recipes. intensive pronoun • emphasizes a noun or another pronoun • either singular or plural • has the same form as a reflexive pronoun first person: myself, ourselves second person: yourself, yourselves third person: himself, herself, itself, themselves The chef did the baking himself. [emphasizes that he alone did it] singular: I, me, my plural: we, us, our second person: singular: you, your plural: you, your third person: singular: he, she, it, him, her, its plural: they, them, their, theirs Quick Checks 1054 Resource Center 1 Nouns Have students classify each noun as common or proper and label any compound nouns. 1. Rikki-tikki-tavi is the brave pet of a family in India. Answers: Rikki-tikki-tavi—compound, proper; pet—common; family—collective, common; India—proper; 2. A fierce little mongoose, Rikki-tikki-tavi knows no fear. Answers: mongoose—common; Rikki-tikkitavi—compound, proper; fear—common 3. His teeth are sharp, but he never bites a person. Answers: teeth—common; person—common e9nas7_bkm_03a.indd 1054 1054 Resource Center 2 Pronouns Have students identify each of the pronouns as personal, reflexive, intensive, demonstrative, interrogative, relative, or indefinite. 1. Emily Dickinson herself declared that she wasn’t. Answers: herself—intensive; that—relative; she—personal 2. You can decide for yourself if someone important wrote them. Answers: You—personal; yourself— reflexive; someone—indefinite; them—personal 10/22/07 7:23:40 AM All, any, both, each, either, everything, few, many, none, no one, nobody, one, several, some, somebody relative pronoun introduces a subordinate clause: that, what, which, who, whom, whose Dickinson wrote of thoughts and feelings that she had. He is the swimmer who won the race. demonstrative pronoun points out a person, a place, a thing, or an idea: this, that, these, those This is a collection of her poems. interrogative pronoun introduces a question: what, which, who, whom, whose What were Dickinson’s household duties? ADJECTIVE 1c. An adjective is a word used to what kind: noisy sound, Thai food which one: another skirt, next day how many or how much: one CD, many years, more guests modify a noun or a pronoun. An adjective tells what kind, which one, how many, or how much. definite article refers to someone or something in particular: the the yellow dress; the girl indefinite article • refers to someone or something in general: a, an • a before words that begin with consonants; an before words that begin with vowels (a, e, i, o, u) a teacher; an apple; an early gift proper adjective • formed from a proper noun • begins with a capital letter Chinese customs [from the proper noun China] American flag [from the proper noun America] demonstrative adjective • modifies a noun or pronoun: this, that, these, those Is this story more interesting than that story? nouns used as adjectives • called a demonstrative pronoun when used alone [see pronouns] • refers to a noun that modifies another noun That is the way to hold chopsticks. These are common foods in India. fish scales; holiday menu; bicycle tire 1c. Note Tell students that when proper nouns become proper adjectives, their spellings may or may not change. If the spelling changes, it does not follow any regular pattern. Tell students to check a dictionary if they are unsure. Resource Center refers to a person, a place, or a thing that is not specifically named Language Handbook indefinite pronoun Language Handbook RESOURCE CENTER 1c. Note Tell students that this, that, these, and those are often used as adjectives. That word is a colloquialism. This soup is too salty. Language Handbook 1055 3 Adjectives Have students identify each adjective and e9nas7_bkm_03a.indd 1055the word the adjective modifies. Instruct them not to include the articles a, an, and the. 1. Having an unusual name can be a problem for anyone. Answer: unusual—name 2. That problem plagued Julia Alvarez all through school. Answer: That—problem 3. Those neighbors with a New York City accent said “Joo-lee-ah.” Answers: Those—neighbors; New York City–accent 10/22/07 7:23:49 AM Language Handbook 1055 Language Handbook 1f. Note Explain to students that some words may be either action verbs or linking verbs, depending on how they are used. Linking: The dog looked hungry. Action: The dog looked for another orange peel. Language Handbook RESOURCE CENTER Resource Center 1e. Note Explain to students that a verb may be transitive in one sentence and intransitive in another. Transitive: He smelled his grandfather’s aftershave. Intransitive: Grandfather smelled good. VERB 1d. A verb is a word used to express action or state of being. action verb 1e. An action verb expresses physical or mental action. There are two types of action verbs: transitive and intransitive physical action: hop, rest, observe mental action: want, hope, forget transitive verb • expresses an action toward a person or thing • The action passes from the doer (the subject) to the receiver of the action. Words that receive the action are called objects. He played the guitar. [The action of played is directed toward guitar.] He played the guitar. [Guitar is the object of the verb played.] intransitive verb expresses action (or tells something about the subject) without passing the action to a receiver Fausto walked slowly across the street. [The action of walked has no object; slowly across the street tells how and where he walked.] linking verb 1f. A linking verb links, or connects, The caller was Roger. [The linking verb was links caller and Roger.] Roger seemed angry. [The linking verb seemed links Roger and angry.] Her mother is Sheila. [mother = Sheila] Demarcus should have been early. [Demarcus = early] The writer was she. [writer = she] The doctor looks tired. [doctor = tired] The dog smells dirty. [dog = dirty] the subject with a noun, a pronoun, or an adjective in the predicate. • common linking verbs formed from the verb be: am, are, being, is, was, been, may be, would be, should have been, will have been, has been, will be, was being, can be, must be • other linking verbs: appear, grow, seem, stay, become, look, smell, taste, feel, remain, sound, turn 1g. Note Explain to students that sometimes the verb phrase is interrupted by other words. Will you please explain the theme of this story? Fausto did not [or didn’t] tell the dog’s owners the truth. helping verb 1g. A helping verb (auxiliary verb) helps the main verb to express an action or a state of being. A helping verb joins with a main verb to form a verb phrase. • forms of be: am, is, being, was, are, been, is, were • forms of do: do, does, did • forms of have: have, has, had • other helping verbs: can, may, must, should, would, could, might, shall, will She is going. [is = helping verb; going = main verb; is going = verb phrase.] He did play the guitar. [did = helping verb; play = main verb; did play = verb phrase] She has gone to school. [has = helping verb; gone = main verb; has gone = verb phrase] He might play the guitar at school. [might = helping verb; play = main verb; might play = verb phrase] Quick Checks 1056 Resource Center 4 Verbs Have students identify the italicized verb as an action verb, a linking verb, or a helping verb. For each action verb, have them tell whether the verb is transitive or intransitive. 1. Sarah Cynthia Sylvia Stout would not take the trash out. Answers: action verb, transitive 2. It smelled bad. Answer: linking verb 3. She didn’t care about that or about her family or friends. Answer: helping verb 4. That huge pile of garbage reached to another state. Answers: action verb, intransitive e9nas7_bkm_03a.indd 1056 1056 Resource Center 5 Adverbs Have students identify the adverb or adverbs in each of the following sentences. Then, have them tell the word or phrase each adverb modifies. 1. Too soon, a cargo vessel sailed into the distance. Answers: Too—soon; soon—sailed 2. Dougal Robertson would not yield to his most desperate fears. Answers: not––would yield; most––desperate 3. He steeled himself and tried harder. Answer: harder—tried 10/22/07 7:23:56 AM 1i. A preposition is a word used to show the relationship of a noun or pronoun to another word in the sentence. • commonly used prepositions: about, above, across, against, around, before, below, beside, between, from, in, in front of, in spite of, into, out of, over, past, since, with • A prepositional phrase begins with a preposition and ends with a noun or pronoun, called the object of the preposition. A preposition may have more than one object. The prepositional phrase includes any modifiers of the object of the preposition. CONJUNCTION Marisa swam against the current. Jamal stood beside the tree. Andreas is from Greece. The bicycle was in front of the tent. The creek flowed over the cliff. The family went to the park and beautiful Carmel Beach. [to the park and beautiful Carmel Beach is the prepositional phrase. The word to is a preposition that begins the prepositional phrase. The phrase includes the word beautiful, which modifies Carmel Beach.] Using Descriptive Adverbs Explain to students that the adverb very is overused. Suggest that in their writing they try to replace very with more descriptive adverbs or revise the sentence so that other words carry more of the description. Their ordeal at sea lasted a very long time. REVISED: Their ordeal at sea lasted an extremely long time. Or: Their ordeal at sea lasted thirty-eight days. 1i. Note Explain to students that when for is used as a conjunction, it connects groups of words that are sentences, and a comma precedes it. On all other occasions, for is used as a preposition. Conjunction: The team forfeited the game, for they refused to play. Preposition: Outraged, people shouted for fair play. Resource Center PREPOSITION Tips for Writers Language Handbook modify a verb, an adjective, or another adverb. • Adverbs tell where, when, how, or to what extent (how much or how long). • Adverbs may come before, after, or between the words they modify. • The word not is an adverb. When not is part of a contraction like hadn’t, the –n’t is an adverb. Where? Whales are common here. [here modifies the adjective common] When? Then the campers hiked. [then modifies the verb hiked] How? The storm arose suddenly. [suddenly modifies the verb arose] To what extent? They were very careful with their supplies. [very modifies the adjective careful] Before: Slowly, the shark was circling. After: The shark was circling slowly. Between: The shark was slowly circling. not: The shark had not eaten. -n’t: The shark hadn’t eaten. Language Handbook 1h. An adverb is a word used to RESOURCE CENTER ADVERB 1j. A conjunction is a word used to join words or groups of words. coordinating conjunction connects words or groups of words used in the same way: and, but, or, nor, for, so, yet Echo or Narcissus [two proper nouns joined by or] We cooked and cleaned. [two verbs joined by and] Language Handbook 1057 6 Prepositions Have students identify the preposition or prepositions in each of the following e9nas7_bkm_03a.indd 1057 sentences. Then, have them give the object of each preposition. 1. Elizabeth told a sad story about her youth. Answer: about—youth 2. She had loved a man of the sea. Answer: of—sea 3. She never said the words to him. Answer: to—him 4. One day, he didn’t return from a fishing trip. Answer: from—trip 7 Parts of Speech Have students identify the part of speech of the italicized word in each sentence. 10/22/07 1. Any of the boys might have objected, but no one did. Answer: Any—pronoun 2. They all would back him. Answer: back—verb 3. And they never looked back. Answer: back—adverb 4. Support like that can make a man proud. Answer: Support—noun 5. I wish everyone would support each other as those boys did! Answer: support—verb 7:24:03 AM Language Handbook 1057 RESOURCE CENTER Possible Answers: 1. As Cindy wept by a weeping willow, a fairy suddenly appeared. 2. She waved a magic scepter. 3. A pumpkin turned into a carriage. 4. With another wave of the fairy’s scepter, Cindy’s torn skirt and blouse turned into a gown. 5. Overjoyed, Cindy thanked the fairy and rode to the ball at the palace. Language Handbook Resource Center Language Handbook Your Turn correlative conjunction pairs of conjunctions that connect words or groups of words used in the same way: both . . . and, either . . . or, neither . . . nor, not only . . . but also, whether . . . or Both Lisa and Samuel play piano. [both . . .and join two proper nouns] Lisa both plays the piano and writes music. [both . . . and join two verbs, plays and writes] Either Lisa would play the piano, or she would be unhappy. [either . . . or join two complete ideas] Neither the girl nor the boy sings. [neither . . . nor join two nouns] INTERJECTION 1k. An interjection is a word used to Oh! You surprised me. Wow! What a story that was. Well, Rachel certainly is smart. express emotion. • An interjection is usually followed by an exclamation point or set off by a comma. • Common interjections: aw, hooray, oh, oops, ouch, well, whew, wow, yippee Your Turn Using Specific Nouns Using specific nouns makes writing more accurate and more interesting. NONSPECIFIC SPECIFIC Animals drank from the water. Horses, cattle, and burros drank from the water. In the following paragraph, replace the nonspecific nouns with specific nouns. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. As a girl wept by a tree, a woman suddenly appeared. She waved a magic stick. A vegetable turned into a vehicle. With another movement of the woman’s stick, the girl’s torn clothing turned into a dress. Overjoyed, the girl thanked the woman and rode to the party at the building Quick Checks 1058 Resource Center 1 Singular and Plural Verbs For each of the following sentences, have students choose the correct form of the verb in parentheses. 1. A tree spirit (take, takes) the shape of the absent husband. Answer: takes 2. Many days (pass, passes). Answer: pass 3. Then the husband (return, returns). Answer: returns 4. Dogs (bark, barks) at him. Answer: bark 5. The judge (has, have) suggested a solution. Answer: has e9nas7_bkm_03a.indd 1058 1058 Resource Center 2 Subject-Verb Agreement For the following sentences, have students correct each error in 10/22/07 agreement. 1. A flock of monstrous birds hover over the Stymphalian lake. Answer: hovers 2. Doesn’t the arrows of Hercules strike each bird in turn? Answer: Don’t 3. Neither Nereus nor his daughters foils Hercules. Answer: foil 12:19:23 PM Number is the form of a word that indicates whether the word is singular or plural. thing, or idea, the word is singular in number. When a word refers to more than one, it is plural in number. SINGULAR PLURAL house, drum, I, he, each houses, drums, we, they, all 2b. A subject and verb agree when they have the same number. (1) Singular subjects take singular verbs. A messenger gives the king’s orders. (2) Plural subjects take plural verbs. Many students study music. (3) The first helping, or auxiliary, verb in a verb phrase must agree with its subject. He is playing the tuba. They are playing the instruments. (4) Generally, nouns ending in s are plural (candles, ideas, horses), and verbs ending in s are singular. However, verbs used with the singular pronouns I and you generally do not end in s. PROBLEMS IN AGREEMENT Prepositional Phrases Between Subjects and Verbs 2c. The number of a subject is not changed by a prepositional phrase following the subject. INCORRECT CORRECT One of the strongest heroes are Hercules. One of the strongest heroes is Hercules. Some pronouns do not refer to a definite person, place, thing, or idea and are called indefinite pronouns. Tips for Spelling Explain to students that, in general, nouns ending in s are plural (candles, ideas, neighbors, horses), and verbs ending in s are singular (sees, writes, speaks, carries). However, verbs used with the singular pronouns you and I generally do not end in s. 2d. The following indefinite pronouns are singular: anybody, anyone, each, either, everybody, everyone, neither, nobody, no one, one, somebody, someone. Neither of these plans relieves him of his task. 2e. The following indefinite pronouns are plural: both, few, many, several. Both of the tusks frighten Eurystheus. 2d. Computer Note Have students summarize the information in rules 2d–2f and 2p–2r and then choose several examples to illustrate the rules. Using a computer, have students create a “Help” file in which to store this information. Suggest that they call up their “Help” file whenever they run into difficulty with indefinite pronouns in their writing. Students who don’t use a computer can keep a “Help” notebook. 2f. The following indefinite pronouns may be either singular or plural: all, any, most, none, some. The number of these pronouns is often determined by the object in a prepositional phrase that follows the pronoun. If the pronoun refers to a singular object, the subject is singular. If the pronoun refers to a plural object, the subject is plural. All of the stable needs cleaning. [All refers to singular stable.] All of the stables need cleaning. [All refers to plural stables.] Compound Subjects 2g. Subjects joined by and usually take a plural verb. Augeas and Eurytheus rule kingdoms. Resource Center Agreement of Subject and Verb Indefinite Pronouns Language Handbook 2a. When a word refers to one person, place, RESOURCE CENTER Number Language Handbook Worksheets, pp. 15–26 Language Handbook 2 Agreement 2. Agreement 2h. Note Explain to students that a compound subject that names only one person or thing takes a singular verb. The friend and teacher of Hercules is Chiron. Law and order suffers when monsters roam the land. However, a compound subject that names only one person or thing takes a singular verb. Law and order suffers when monsters roam the land. [Law and order is a compound subject.] 2h. When subjects are joined by or or nor, the verb agrees with the subject nearer the verb. Neither the Hydra nor Juno’s huge snakes defeat Hercules. Neither Juno’s huge snakes nor the Hydra defeats Hercules. Language Handbook 1059 4. The god of the oceans don’t escape Hercules. Answer: doesn’t e9nas7_bkm_03a.indd 1059 5. Some of the ancient myths seeks to explain actual geological or botanical facts. Answer: seek 10/22/07 7:24:54 AM Language Handbook 1059 RESOURCE CENTER Language Handbook Resource Center Language Handbook 2j. Note Explain to students that when the subject of a sentence follows the verb, the word order is said to be inverted. To find the subject of a sentence with inverted order, restate the sentence in normal word order. Inverted: There goes Hercules. Normal: Hercules goes there. Inverted: Into the clearing stepped the mighty Hercules. Normal: The mighty Hercules stepped into the clearing. Other Problems in Agreement 2n. A few nouns, though plural in form, are 2i. Collective nouns may be either singular singular and take singular verbs: news, measles, mathematics, civics, mumps, physics. or plural. A collective noun takes a singular verb when the noun refers to the group as a unit. A collective noun takes a plural verb when the noun refers to the individual parts or members of the group. An oxen herd goes with Hercules. [The herd as a unit goes.] The herd call to the stolen cattle. [The members of the head individually call.] 2j. When the subject follows the verb, restate the sentence in normal word order. Then find the subject and make sure the verb agrees with it. The subject usually follows the verb in sentences beginning with here or there and in questions. There is Centaurus, and there are its stars. Does the fox really want the grapes? The contractions here’s, there’s, and where’s contain the verb is and should be used only with singular subjects. INCORRECT There’s the constellations Hydra and Leo. CORRECT There are the constellations Hydra and Leo. CORRECT There’s the constellation Hydra. 2k. Use don’t with plural subjects and with the pronouns I and you. Use doesn’t with other singular subjects. They don’t like movies about Hercules, and I don’t either. This film doesn’t seem realistic; but that doesn’t matter to me. 2l. A word or phrase stating a weight, a measurement, or an amount of money or time is usually considered a single item that takes a singular verb. Ten dollars is too much for a ticket. 2m. The title of a book or the name of an organization or country, even when plural in form, usually takes a singular verb. Aesop’s Fables is on the reading list. Has the United States signed the treaty? Agreement of Pronoun and Antecedent 2o. A pronoun agrees in number and gender with its antecedent, the word to which the pronoun refers. Some singular personal pronouns indicate gender: masculine for males and feminine for females. Neuter pronouns refer to things (neither male nor female) and usually to animals. she her hers he him his NEUTER it its The speaker in “Annabel Lee” lost his bride. Annabel Lee had given her heart to him. Heaven sent its angels for Annabel Lee. When an antecedent may be either masculine or feminine, use both the masculine and feminine forms. No one ever gave his or her approval of Poe’s criticisms. Everybody wanted his or her writing in Poe’s magazine. The antecedent of a personal pronoun can be another kind of pronoun, such as each, neither, or one. To determine the gender of a personal pronoun that refers to one of these other pronouns, look at the words that follow the antecedent. Each of these men left his mark on the fence. Neither of the women got what she wanted. FEMININE MASCULINE PROBLEMS IN AGREEMENT OF PRONOUN AND ANTECEDENT Indefinite Pronouns 2p. A singular pronoun is used to refer to anybody, anyone, each, either, everybody, everyone, neither, nobody, no one, one, someone, and somebody. Each of these countries has its own Cinderella story. Quick Check 1060 Resource Center 3 Pronounds and Antecedents Have students use a pronoun to complete the meaning of each sentence. Then, have them identify the antecedent or antecedents of that pronoun. 1. Aschenputtel and Cinderella got names from ashes. Answer: their—Aschenputtel and Cinderella 2. One of the stories features pigeons in ending. Answer: its—One e9nas7_bkm_03a.indd 1060 1060 Resource Center 3. Many of the stories reward heroes, but some don’t. Answer: their—Many 4. The court cheered the prince and her and gave a grand wedding. Answer: them—prince and her 5. Neither the prince nor the Pharaoh married the young woman expected. Answer: he—prince nor Pharaoh 10/22/07 7:25:07 AM Both of these stories take their characters from legend. Many of these versions are similar, but they all differ. 2r. Either a singular or plural pronoun may be Compound Subjects 2s. A plural pronoun is used to refer to two or Sentences with singular antecedents joined by or or nor can sound awkward if the antecedents are of different genders. AWKWARD REVISED Ana or Ed will read her or his version of Cinderella. Ana will read her version of Cinderella, or Ed will read his. Similarly, a singular and a plural antecedent joined by or or nor can create an awkward or a confusing sentence. AWKWARD REVISED Either my cousins or Mary will bring their video of Cinderella. Either my cousins will bring their video of Cinderella, or Mary will bring hers. Revise each of the following sentences to eliminate awkward pronoun usage. Possible Answers: 1. The mother and the sisters did not recognize that the girl was their own Aschenputtel. 2. Either birds help the heroine in their own way, or a fish does in its own way. 3. Did a fish or a falcon help Yeh-Shen? 4. Yeh-Shen and the king could not have guessed their fate. 5. Either Joey will read his report on “Sealkin, Soulskin,” or Linda will read hers. more antecedents joined by and. The sister and their mother never share their fine clothing. 2t. A singular pronoun is used to refer to two or more singular antecedents joined by or or nor. Neither the mother nor the sister shared her clothes. Other Problems in Pronoun-Antecedent Agreement 2u. Either a singular or a plural pronoun may be 1. Neither her mother nor her sisters 2. 3. 4. 5. recognized that the girl was their own Aschenputtel. Either birds or a fish help the heroine in their own way. Did a fish or a falcon lend their help to Yeh-Shen? Neither Yeh-Shen nor the king could have guessed her or his fate. Joey or Linda will read his or her report on “Sealkin, Soulskin.” Resource Center The number of the pronouns all, any, most, none, and some is determined by the object in the prepositional phrase that follows the pronoun. Some of the story comes from its culture. [Some refers to the singular noun story.] Some of the sisters pay for their cruelty. [Some refers to the plural noun sisters.] Your Turn Using Antecedents Correctly Language Handbook used to refer to all, any, most, none, and some. Your Turn Language Handbook many, and several. RESOURCE CENTER 2q. A plural pronoun is used to refer to both, few, used with a collective noun. The royal family was preparing its feast. The royal family are greeting their guests. 2v. Words stating amounts usually take singular pronouns. Admission costs ten dollars. I can earn it. 2w. A few nouns, though plural in form, are singular and take singular pronouns. Physics is important, and it is also required. Language Handbook 1061 e9nas7_bkm_03a.indd 1061 10/22/07 12:19:33 PM Language Handbook 1061 RESOURCE CENTER Language Handbook Worksheets, pp. 27–38 3a. Note Explain to students that the present participle and the past participle require helping verbs (forms of be and have). Tips for Spelling Language Handbook Resource Center Language Handbook 3. Using Verbs Advise students to look in a dictionary when they are not sure how to spell the principal parts of an irregular verb. 3. Using Verbs The Principal Parts of a Verb IRREGULAR VERBS The four basic forms of a verb are called the principal parts of the verb. 3c. An irregular verb forms its present and past 3a. The principal parts of a verb are the base form, the present participle, the past, and the past participle. work PRESENT PARTICIPLE (is) working PAST worked PAST PARTICIPLE (have) worked The principal parts of a verb are used to express the time that an action occurs. PRESENT TIME I sing rhythm and blues now. BASE FORM PAST TIME FUTURE TIME We are singing along with the frog. The frog sang at the concert. We have sung there before. The audience will sing with the frog. By closing, we will have sung ten songs. REGULAR VERBS 3b. A regular verb forms its past and past participle by adding -d or -ed to the base form. BASE FORM PRESENT PARTICIPLE PAST PAST PARTICIPLE use (is) using used (have) used participle in some other way than by adding -d or -ed to the base form: (1) by changing vowels or consonants ring rang PAST PARTICIPLE (have) rung (2) by changing vowels and consonants BASE FORM go PAST went PAST PARTICIPLE (have) gone (3) by making no changes BASE FORM spread PAST spread PAST PARTICIPLE (have) spread BASE FORM PAST Avoid these errors when forming the past or past participle of irregular verbs: (1) using the past form with a helping verb Frog has went to the concert. Frog went to the concert. Frog has gone to the concert. (2) using the past participle form without a helping verb NONSTANDARD I seen all of his shows. STANDARD I have seen all of his shows. (3) adding -d or -ed to the base form NONSTANDARD The elephant throwed a pineapple at the frog. STANDARD The elephant threw a pineapple at the frog. NONSTANDARD STANDARD Avoid these errors when forming the past or past participle of regular verbs: (1) leaving off the -d or -ed ending The frog use to sing. The frog used to sing. (2) adding unnecessary letters NONSTANDARD The group of animals lefts. STANDARD The group of animals left. NONSTANDARD STANDARD Quick Checks 1062 Resource Center 1 Agreement For each of the following sen- tences, have students supply the correct past or past participle form of the verb given in parentheses. 1. He (cross) over to the other side of the pond. Answer: crossed 2. He has (visit) his friends to tell them of his wish to sing. Answer: visited 3. The birds already have (join) together to form a group. Answer: joined 4. Fox let Frog sing but also (use) a trick to fool Frog. Answer: used e9nas7_bkm_03a.indd 1062 1062 Resource Center 2 Past and Past Participle For each of the following sentences, have students give the correct past or past participle form of the verb in parentheses. 1. Frog has (bring) rhythm and blues to the world. Answer: brought 2. Since then, many a guitarist has (lay) down a blues riff. Answer: laid 3. Many blues singers (lead) listeners to recall sad times. Answer: led 4. Some musicians have (build) that sound using only a harmonica. Answer: built 10/22/07 7:25:26 AM build catch hold lay lead say send built caught held laid led said sent (is) building (is) catching (is) holding (is) laying (is) leading (is) saying (is) sending PAST PARTICIPLE (have) brought (have) built (have) caught (have) held (have) laid (have) led (have) said (have) sent GROUP II: Each of these irregular verbs has a different form for its past and past participle. BASE PRESENT FORM PARTICIPLE begin (is) beginning choose (is) choosing do (is) doing go (is) going know (is) knowing run (is) running sing (is) singing swim (is) swimming PAST began chose did went knew ran sang swam PAST PARTICIPLE (have) begun (have) chosen (have) done (have) gone (have) known (have) run (have) sung (have) swum Every verb has six tenses: present, past, future, present perfect, past perfect, and future perfect. This time line, from past to future, shows how the six tenses are related to one another. • Past Perfect—existing or happening before a specific time in the past • Past—existing or happening in the past • Present Perfect—existing or happening before now or starting in the past and continuing now • Present—existing or happening now • Future Perfect—existing or happening before a specific time in the future • Future—existing or happening in the future Listing all forms of a verb in the six tenses is called conjugating a verb. Resource Center PAST brought the action or state of being that is expressed by the verb. Language Handbook BASE PRESENT FORM PARTICIPLE bring (is) bringing 3d. The tense of a verb indicates the time of 3d. Note Explain to students that in the future tense and in the future perfect tense, the helping verb shall is sometimes used in place of will. Language Handbook GROUP I: Each of these irregular verbs has the same form for its past and past participle Verb Tense RESOURCE CENTER COMMON IRREGULAR VERBS GROUP III: Each of these irregular verbs has the same form for its base form, past, and past participle. BASE PRESENT FORM PARTICIPLE burst (is) bursting PAST burst PAST PARTICIPLE (have) burst cost cut hit let put read set cost cut hit let put read set (have) cost (have) cut (have) hit (have) let (have) put (have) read (have) set (is) costing (is) cutting (is) hitting (is) letting (is) putting (is) reading (is) setting Language Handbook 1063 3 Verb Tenses Read the following paragraph to students, and have them decide whether it should be rewritten in the present or past tense. Then, have them change the verb forms to make the verb tense consistent. [1] No one tells them not to, so they started work. [2] It is hard, too; over and over, they carried dozens of sacks of dirt up the stairs. [3] None of the neighbors noticed them, or maybe they don’t mind. [4] At last, almost before they know it, the rooftop is ready. [5] The rich black earth waits for seeds. e9nas7_bkm_03a.indd 1063 Possible Answers: [1] No one told them not to, so they started work. [2] It was hard, too; over and over, they 10/22/07 carried dozens of sacks of dirt up the stairs. [3] None of the neighbors noticed them, or maybe they didn’t mind. [4] At last, almost before they knew it, the rooftop was ready. [5] The rich, black earth waited for seeds. 7:25:36 AM Language Handbook 1063 RESOURCE CENTER Conjugation Of The Verb Write SINGULAR PLURAL PRESENT TENSE I write we write you write you write he, she, or it writes they write Language Handbook PAST TENSE Language Handbook Resource Center 3e. Computer Note Point out that most word processors have useful mechanisms for checking spelling, subject-verb agreement, and style. I wrote we wrote you wrote you wrote he, she, or it wrote CONSISTENCY OF TENSE 3e. Do not change needlessly from one tense to another. When writing about events in the present, use verbs in the present tense. When writing about events in the past, use verbs in the past tense. INCONSISTENT CONSISTENT they wrote FUTURE TENSE I will write we will write you will write you will write he, she, or it will write they will write PRESENT PERFECT TENSE I have written we have written you have written you have written he, she, or it has written they have written PAST PERFECT TENSE I had written we had written you had written you had written he, she, or it had written they had written FUTURE PERFECT TENSE I will have written we will have written you will have written you will have written he, she, or it will have written they will have written When they were satisfied, they begin planting. When they are satisfied, they begin planting. When they were satisfied, they began planting. Special Problems with Verbs Sit and Set (1) The verb sit means “rest in a seated position.” Sit seldom takes an object. Let’s sit in the shade. [no object] (2) The verb set means “put (something) in a place.” Set usually takes an object. Let’s set the buckets here. [Let’s set what? Buckets is the object.] BASE FORM PRESENT PARTICIPLE PAST PAST PARTICIPLE sit (rest) (is) sitting sat (have) sat set (put) (is) setting set (have) set Lie and Lay (1) The verb lie means “recline” or “be in a place.” Lie never takes an object. In the photograph, juicy, red watermelons lay on rich earth. [no object] (2) The verb lay means “put (something) in a place.” Lay usually takes an object. They laid dirt on the roof. [They laid what? Dirt is the object.] BASE FORM lie (rest) lay (put) PRESENT PARTICIPLE (is) lying (is) laying PAST lay laid PAST PARTICIPLE (have) lain (have) laid Quick Check 1064 Resource Center 4 Verb Forms For each of the following sentences, have students choose the correct verb form in parentheses. 1. Juan Guerrero (raises, rises) the bag containing the tomatillos he has grown. Answer: raises 2. Like Juan, other people also (sat, set) out their own plants each spring. Answer: set 3. He will not just (sit, set) and remain idle. Answer: sit 4. Avoiding the midday heat, Mr. Garcia also (raises, rises) early to tend his plot. Answer: rises e9nas7_bkm_03a.indd 1064 1064 Resource Center 10/22/07 7:25:44 AM Using standard verb forms is expected in most of the writing done for school. Readers expect standard usage in essays and reports. On the other hand, readers expect dialogue in plays and short stories to sound natural and to reflect the speech patterns of real people. Here is an example of dialogue from the short story “Bargain.” “I think he hate me,” Mr. Bauner went on. “This is the thing. He hate me for coming not from this country. I come here, sixteen years old, and learn to read and write, and I make a business, and so I think he hate me.” 1. Butch replied, “I must say, old friend, that I cannot quite believe you.” 2. “Gracious, what a marvelous party that was!” beamed Tanya when the group met Monday morning at school. 3. “Please accept our congratulations for a job well done,” cried Jim’s teammates. 4. “I beg your pardon, but you are sitting in my seat,” said the sergeant to the recruit. 5. “What an unfaithful friend you are to have spoken against me behind my back,” exclaimed Angela to her classmate. Resource Center Revise each of the following sentences to sound natural in a dialogue. Answers: 1. Butch retorted, “You lie!” 2. “Wow! That party was great!” beamed Tanya when the group met Monday morning at school. 3. “Way to go!” cried Jim’s teammates, slapping him on the back after the game. 4. “Move it!” shouted the sergeant to the recruit. 5. “I can’t believe you stabbed me in the back like that!” exclaimed Angela to her classmate. Language Handbook Your Turn Using Natural Dialogue Language Handbook My neighbors rise very early. [no object] (2) The verb raise means ‘lift up” or “cause” (something) to rise.” Raise usually takes an object. They raise the blinds at dawn. [They raise what? Blinds is the object.] BASE FORM rise (go up) raise (lift up) PRESENT PARTICIPLE (is) rising (is) raising PAST rose raised PAST PARTICIPLE (have) risen (have) raised Your Turn RESOURCE CENTER Rise and Raise (1) The verb rise means “go up” or “get up.” Rise never takes an object. Language Handbook 1065 e9nas7_bkm_03a.indd 1065 10/22/07 12:19:45 PM Language Handbook 1065 RESOURCE CENTER Language Handbook Worksheets, pp. 39–46 4a. Note Advise students that to choose the correct pronoun in a compound subject they should try each form of the pronoun separately. Berteli and (he, him) quarreled. [He quarreled. Him quarreled.] Answer: Berteli and he quarreled. Language Handbook Resource Center Language Handbook 4 Using Pronouns 4. Using Pronouns Case 4b. A predicate nominative is in the Case is the form of a noun or a pronoun that shows how it is used in a sentence. There are three cases: nominative, objective, and possessive. The form of a noun is the same for both the nominative and objective cases. A noun changes its form for the possessive case, usually by the addition of an apostrophe and an s. Most personal pronouns have different forms for all three cases. Possessive pronouns (such as my, your, and our) are also sometimes called possessive adjectives. Personal Pronouns NOMINATIVE CASE SINGULAR PLURAL I we you you he, she, it they OBJECTIVE CASE SINGULAR PLURAL me us you you him, her, it them POSSESSIVE CASE SINGULAR PLURAL my, mine our, ours your, yours your, yours his, her, hers, its their, theirs THE NOMINATIVE CASE Pronouns used as subjects or predicate nominatives are in the nominative case. 4a. A subject of a verb is in the nominative case. nominative case. A predicate nominative follows a linking verb and explains or identifies the subject of the verb. A personal pronoun used as a predicate nominative follows a form of the verb be (am, is, are, was, were, be, or been). The last one to arrive there was he. [He identifies the subject one.] THE OBJECTIVE CASE Pronouns used as objects are in the objective case. 4c. A direct object is in the objective case. A direct object follows an action verb and tells who or what receives the action. The bronze dragon’s choice amazed us. [Us tells who was amazed.] Heth moved his wings and dried them. [Them tells what Heth dried.] 4d. An indirect object is in the objective case. An indirect object comes between an action verb and a direct object and tells whom or to what or for whom or for what. Heth asked him a question. [Him tells to whom Heth asked a question.] 4e. An object of a preposition is in the objective case. A prepositional phrase contains a preposition, a noun or pronoun called the object of the preposition, and any modifiers of that object. like a hero next to Dr. Chang A pronoun used as the object of a preposition should always be in the objective case. We went with her to the mall. I enjoy Anne McCaffrey’s writing style. [I is the subject of enjoy.] Quick Checks 1066 Resource Center 1 Personal Pronouns For each of the following sentences, have students identify the correct personal pronoun in parentheses. ­1. Rikki had almost drowned, but an English boy named Teddy rescued (he, him). Answer: him 2. Could a mongoose live with (they, them) happily? Answer: them 3. Teddy’s mother wasn’t sure whether a mongoose would make a good pet, but Rikki gave (she, her) a surprise. Answer: her 4. Didn’t (he, him) save their lives? Answer: he e9nas7_bkm_03a.indd 1066 1066 Resource Center 2 Pronouns For each of the following sentences, have students choose the correct pronoun in parentheses. 1. For (who, whom) did he work? Answer: whom 2. Jerry did not often play with (we, us) in the neighborhood. Answer: us 3. (Who, Whom) wrote The Yearling? Answer: Who 4. He promised (hisself, himself) that he would do a good job. Answer: himself 5. They seemed pleased with (theirselves, themselves). Answer: themselves 10/22/07 7:26:04 AM WHO AND WHOM Reflexive pronouns (such as myself, himself, and yourselves) can be used as objects. Do not use the nonstandard forms hisself and theirself or theirselves in place of himself and themselves. STEP 1: STEP 2: STEP 3: STEP 4: ANSWER (Who, Whom) did Jerry see? The statement is Jerry did see (who, whom). The subject of the verb is Jerry, the verb is did see, and the pronoun is the direct object. A pronoun used as a direct object should be in the objective case. The objective form is whom. Whom did Jerry see? In spoken English, the use of whom is becoming less common. In fact, when you are speaking, you may correctly begin any question with who regardless of the grammar of the sentence. In written English, however, distinguish between who and whom. PRONOUNS WITH APPOSITIVES STANDARD Your Turn Joe made dinner hisself. Joe made dinner himself. Using Standard Expressions Expressions such as It’s me, That’s her, and It was them are accepted in everyday speaking. In writing, however, such expressions are generally considered nonstandard and should be avoided. STANDARD It is I. That is she. It was they. Your Turn Answers: 1. The other candidates and we dashed to the Impression. 2. “Save a good place for my friends and me,” someone called. Additionally, it is considered polite to put firstperson pronouns (I, me, mine, we, us, ours) last in compound constructions. The dragonriders and we arrived at the Hatching Ground. Revise each of the following sentences to show standard and polite usage of pronouns. 1. We and the other candidates dashed to the auditorium. 2. “Save a good place for me and my friends,” someone called. 3. “It was me who took the last cookie!” 4. When K’last asked me who Keevan was, I answered, “That’s him.” 5. Keevan was the smallest, yet it was him who impressed the bronze dragon. 3. I wondered who would be first and thought, “Maybe it’ll be I!” 4. When K’last asked me who Keevan was, I answered, “That’s he.” 5. Keevan was the smallest, yet it was he who impressed the bronze dragon. Resource Center QUESTION NONSTANDARD Language Handbook The pronoun who has different forms in the nominative and objective cases. Who is the nominative form; whom is the objective form. When deciding whether to use who or whom in a question, follow these steps: (1) Rephrase the question as a statement; (2) Decide how the pronoun is used in the statement—as subject, predicate nominative, object of the verb, or object of a preposition; (3) Determine the case of the pronoun according to the rules of standard English. (4) Select the correct form of the pronoun. 4e. Note Tell students that the use of whom is not very common in casual conversation. Students need not feel concerned about making errors in the usage of who and whom in everyday casual situations. However, emphasize that in business, academic, official, and formal situations, correct usage is expected in speech and in writing. Language Handbook REFLEXIVE PRONOUNS RESOURCE CENTER Special Pronoun Problems Sometimes a pronoun is followed directly by a noun that identifies the pronoun. Such a noun is called an appositive. To choose which pronoun to use before an appositive, omit the appositive, and try each form of the pronoun separately. QUESTION ANSWER (We, Us) boys live in the Carolinas. [Boys is the appositive.] We live in the Carolinas. Us live in the Carolinas. We boys live in the Carolinas. Language Handbook 1067 e9nas7_bkm_03a.indd 1067 10/22/07 12:19:53 PM Language Handbook 1067 Tips for Spelling RESOURCE CENTER Language Handbook Worksheets, pp. 47–56 Advise students to drop the final silent e before a suffix beginning with a vowel. safe + er = safer ripe + est = ripest gentle + er = gentler Language Handbook Resource Center Language Handbook 5. Using Modifiers 5b. Computer Note Explain to students that a computer can help them find and correct nonstandard forms of modifiers such as baddest, expensiver, and mostest. However, the computer cannot help them make sure that a modifier is not misplaced or dangling. 5. Using Modifiers Comparison of Modifiers IRREGULAR COMPARISON A modifier is a word, a phrase, or a clause that describes or limits the meaning of another word. Two kinds of modifiers—adjectives and adverbs— may be used to compare things. Some modifiers do not form degrees by using the regular methods. 5a. The three degrees of comparison of modifiers are positive, comparative, and superlative. POSITIVE COMPARATIVE cold politely colder more politely POSITIVE COMPARATIVE SUPERLATIVE calm rapidly less calm less rapidly least calm least rapidly REGULAR COMPARISON (1) Most one-syllable modifiers form their comparative and superlative degrees by adding -er and -est. COMPARATIVE SUPERLATIVE sharp sharper sharpest calm calmer calmest (2) Some two-syllable modifiers form their comparative and superlative degrees by adding -er and -est. Others use more and most. POSITIVE COMPARATIVE COMPARATIVE bad far good many worse farther better more SUPERLATIVE worst farthest best most SUPERLATIVE coldest most politely To show decreasing comparisons, modifiers form their degrees with less and least. POSITIVE POSITIVE SUPERLATIVE simple simpler simplest sudden more sudden most sudden (3) Modifiers with three or more syllables use more and most to form their degrees. POSITIVE COMPARATIVE SUPERLATIVE fiery quietly more fiery more quietly most fiery most quietly USES OF COMPARATIVE AND SUPERLATIVE FORMS 5b. Use the comparative degree when comparing two things. Use the superlative degree when comparing more than two. COMPARATIVE SUPERLATIVE This place is safer than that one. This place is the safest of all. 5c. Use good to modify a noun or a pronoun. Use well to modify a verb. The Town Mouse enjoyed good food. She ate well. 5d. Use adjectives, not adverbs, after linking verbs. The Town Mouse’s life seemed wonderful. [not wonderfully] 5e. Avoid using double comparisons. A double comparison is the use of both -er and more (less) or both -est and most (least) to form a comparison. The Country Mouse’s place is safer [not more safer] than the Town Mouse’s. 5f. A double negative is the use of two negative words to express one negative idea. Common Negative Words barely never nobody nothing NONSTANDARD STANDARD hardly no none nowhere neither no one not (-n’t) scarcely She hasn’t never liked cats. She hasn’t ever [or has never] liked cats. Quick Checks 1068 Resource Center 1 Comparative and Superlative Modifiers Have students give the forms for the comparative and superlative degrees of the following modifiers. 1. fine Answer: finer (less fine), finest (least fine) 2. cautiously Answer: more (less) cautiously, most (least) cautiously 3. gladly Answer: more (less) gladly, most (least) gladly 4. thankful Answer: more (less) thankful, most (least) thankful e9nas7_bkm_03a.indd 1068 1068 Resource Center 5. daring Answer: more (less) daring, most (least) daring 6. comfortable Answer: more (less) comfortable, most (least) comfortable 7. much Answer: more (less), most (least) 8. cozy Answer: cozier (less cozy), coziest (least cozy) 9. well Answer: better (less well), best (least well) 10. dainty Answer: daintier (less dainty), daintiest (least dainty) 10/22/07 7:26:21 AM as close as possible to the words they modify. The mouse from the country saw a cat. [The phrase modifies mouse.] The mouse saw a cat from the country. [The phrase modifies cat.] CLEAR PREPOSITIONAL PHRASES A cat would not be dangerous to the mice with a bell. CLEAR A cat with a bell would not be dangerous to the mice. A prepositional phrase used as an adverb should be placed near the word it modifies. MISPLACED The mice had a meeting about the cat in fear. CLEAR In fear, the mice had a meeting about the cat. Avoid placing a prepositional phrase in a position where it can modify either of two words. MISPLACED The mouse said in the morning she would go. [Does the phrase modify said or would go?] CLEAR The mouse said she would go in the morning. In the morning, the mouse said she would go. MISPLACED PARTICIPIAL PHRASES A participial phrase consists of a verb form—either a present participle or a past participle—and its related words. A participial phrase modifies a noun or a pronoun. A participial phrase should be placed close to the word it modifies. MISPLACED CLEAR The mice hid from the cat scurrying fearfully. Scurrying fearfully, the mice hid from the cat. CLAUSES A clause is a group of words that contains a verb and its subject and that is used as a part of a sentence. An adjective clause modifies a noun or a pronoun. Most begin with a relative pronoun, such as that, which, who, whom, or whose. An adverb clause modifies a verb, an adjective, or another adverb. Most begin with a subordinating conjunction, such as although, while, if, or because. Like phrases, clauses should be placed as close as possible to the words they modify. MISPLACED CLEAR The fable was written by Aesop that we read today. The fable that we read today was written by Aesop. Your Turn Resource Center A prepositional phrase consists of a preposition, a noun or a pronoun called the object of the preposition, and any modifiers of that object. Place a prepositional phrase used as an adjective directly after the word it modifies. Answers: 1. With each step forward, the cats crouched lower. 2. The yellow cat was the larger of the two and the more frightening. 3. The calico cat, however, was the best hunter in the neighborhood. 4. The tiny mouse searched for a less obvious hiding place. 5. The mouse hardly made a sound at all. (The mouse made no sound at all.) Language Handbook Worried constantly, a plan was needed. Worried constantly, the mice needed a plan. The mice needed a plan because they worried constantly. DANGLING Your Turn Language Handbook 5g. Place modifying words, phrases, and clauses A participial phrase that does not clearly and sensibly modify any word in the sentence is a dangling participial phrase. To correct a dangling phrase, supply a word that the phrase can modify, or add a subject, a verb, or both to the dangling modifier. RESOURCE CENTER Placement of Modifiers Using Modifiers Correctly Using modifers correctly is essential to good writing. Correct the use of modifiers in the following sentences. 1. With each step forward, the cats crouched more lower. 2. The yellow cat was the largest of the two and the most frightening. 3. The calico cat, however, was the better hunter in the neighborhood. 4. The tiny mouse searched for a least obvi- ous hiding place. 5. The mouse hardly made no sound at all. Language Handbook 1069 2 Misplaced and Dangling Modifiers Each of the following sentences contains a misplaced or e9nas7_bkm_03a.indd 1069 dangling modifier. Have students revise each sentence so that it is clear and correct. 1. The mice complained about the cat at the meeting. Answer: At the meeting, the mice complained about the cat. 2. A bell could protect the mice on the cat. Answer: A bell on the cat could protect the mice. 3. Ringing loudly with each step, the mice could run away. Answer: Ringing loudly with each step, the 10/22/07 cat’s bell would warn the mice to run away. 4. The plan had a flaw that he was suggesting. Answer: The plan that he was suggesting had a flaw. 5. An old mouse questioned the young mouse shaking his head sadly. Answer: Shaking his head sadly, an old mouse questioned the young mouse. 12:20:02 PM Language Handbook 1069 RESOURCE CENTER Language Handbook Worksheets, pp. 57–69 6. Phrases 6a. A phrase is a group of related words that THE ADVERB PHRASE is used as a single part of speech and does not contain a verb and its subject. 6d. An adverb phrase is a prepositional phrase Language Handbook VERB PHRASE Language Handbook Resource Center 6. Phrases PREPOSITIONAL PHRASE was not stapled with a shudder The Prepositional Phrase 6b. A prepositional phrase includes a preposition, a noun or pronoun called the object of the preposition, and any modifiers of that object. The runaway was filled with fear. The colt in front climbed up the wall. THE ADJECTIVE PHRASE 6c. An adjective phrase is a prepositional phrase that modifies a noun or a pronoun. An adjective phrase tells what kind or which one. Robert Frost was a poet of nature. [What kind?] “The Runaway” is the one about a colt. [Which one?] More than one adjective phrase may modify the same word. A pasture of snow on a mountain upsets him. [The phrases of snow and on a mountain modify pasture.] An adjective phrase always follows the word it modifies. That word may be the object of another prepositional phrase. “The Runaway” is a poem about a colt in the snow. [The phrase about a colt modifies the predicate nominative poem. The phrase in the snow modifies the object colt.] that modifies a verb, an adjective, or an adverb. An adverb phrase tells how, when, where, why, or to what extent (that is, how long, how many, or how far). The colt bolted with a snort. [How?] The colt seemed uneasy because of the snow. [Why?] The poem takes place late in the day. [When?] Frost wrote poetry for years. [How long?] More than one adverb phrase may modify the same word or words. At the Kennedy Inauguration, Frost read to the American people. An adverb phrase may be modified by an adjective phrase. In his poem about the runaway, Frost uses several verbals. [The adverb phrase modifies the verb uses. The adjective phrase modifies poem.] An adverb phrase may come either before or after the word it modifies. Before that time, Frost had published little. Frost had published little before that time. Verbals and Verbal Phrases A verbal is a form of a verb that is used as a noun, an adjective, or an adverb. There are three kinds of verbals: the participle, the gerund, and the infinitive. PARTICIPLES AND PARTICIPIAL PHRASES 6e. A participle is a verb form that can be used as an adjective. There are two kinds of participles— present participles and past participles. (1) Present participles end in -ing The rats swimming ashore alarmed them. [Swimming, a form of the verb swim, modifies rats.] Quick Checks 1070 Resource Center 1 Prepositional Phrases Have students identify the prepositional phrase or phrases in each numbered sentence in the following paragraph. Then, have them label each phrase as an adjective phrase or an adverb phrase and give the word the phrase modifies. [1] Many of Robert Frost’s poems contain imagery from nature. [2] These images say much about people and human nature. [3] “The Runaway” focuses on a colt’s experiences during its first winter. [4] In the poem, Frost shows observers’ reactions to the colt. [5] The colt, the subject of conversation between the e9nas7_bkm_03a.indd 1070 1070 Resource Center observers, is important to them. Answers: [1] of Robert Frost’s poems—adjective phrase, many; from nature—adjective phrase, imagery; [2] about people and human nature—adjective phrase, much; [3] on a colt’s experiences—adverb phrase, focuses; during its first winter—adjective phrase, experiences; [4] In the poem—adverb phrase, shows; to the colt—adjective phrase, reactions; [5] of conversation—adjective phrase, subject; between the observers—adjective phrase, conversation; to them—adverb phrase, important 10/22/07 7:26:37 AM all the words related to the participle. The entire phrase is used as an adjective. GERUNDS AND GERUND PHRASES 6g. A gerund is a verb form ending in -ing that is used as a noun. Singing can be fun. [subject] My favorite pastime is singing. [predicate nominative] I warm up before singing. [object of the preposition] Do you enjoy singing? [direct object] 6h. A gerund phrase consists of a gerund and all the words related to the gerund. Counting the many rats outside the lighthouse calmed the men. [The gerund phrase is the subject of the sentence. The noun rats is the direct object of the gerund counting.] INFINITIVES AND INFINITIVE PHRASES 6i. An infinitive is a verb form that can be used as a Lighthouses are one way to warn ships away from rocks. [adjective] The men were grateful to see the ship. [adverb] To be rescued was their only hope. [noun] Appositives and Appositive Phrases 6k. An appositive is a noun or a pronoun placed Resource Center Seeing a ship nearby, scores of rats dove into the sea. [The participial phrase modifies the noun scores. The noun ship is the direct object of the present participle seeing.] We saw the sharks feasting hungrily on the rats. [The participial phrase modifies the noun sharks. The adverb hungrily and the adverb phrase on the rats modify the present participle feasting.] and its modifiers and complements. The entire infinitive phrase may act as an adjective, an adverb, or a noun. Language Handbook 6f. A participial phrase consists of a participle and 6j. An infinitive phrase consists of an infinitive 6j. Note Tell students that the word to plus a noun or a pronoun (to class, to them, to the dance) is a prepositional phrase, not an infinitive. Advise them to be careful not to confuse infinitives with prepositional phrases beginning with to. Infinitive: I want to go. Prepositional Phrase: I want to go to sea. Language Handbook No one was on the abandoned ship. [Abandoned, a form of the verb abandon, modifies ship.] The rats, known for their ferocity, swam toward the sailors. [Known, a form of the verb know, modifies rats.] To escape was their sole desire. [noun] The time to signal was now. [adjective—to signal modifies time.] Rescuers were quick to answer. [adverb—to answer modifies quick.] RESOURCE CENTER (2) Most present participles end in -d or -ed. Others are irregularly formed. beside another noun or pronoun to identify or explain it. Appositives are often set off from the rest of the sentence by commas or dashes. However, when an appositive is necessary to the meaning of the sentence or when it is closely related to the word it refers to, no commas are necessary. The author George G. Toudouze wrote the story “Three Skeleton Key.” [The noun George G. Toudouze identifies the noun author.] The men saw a strange ship, one with Dutch lines and three masts. [The pronoun one refers to the noun ship.] Their victims—the captain and crew—had vanished. [The nouns captain and crew explain who were the victims.] 6l. An appositive phrase consists of an appositive and its modifiers. Le Gleo, one of the lighthouse keepers, had horrible nightmares. [The adjective phrase of the lighthouse keepers modifies the appositive one.] Rats, the foul scourge of sailing ships, pressed for entrance. [The article the, the adjective foul, and the adjective phrase of sailing ships modify the appositive scourge.] noun, an adjective, or an adverb. Infinitives usually begin with to. Language Handbook 1071 2 Participial Phrases, Gerunds, and Infini- tives Have students identify each italicized phrase in the following sentences as participial, gerund, or infinitive. 1. The rats, lured by the scent, approached the lighthouse. Answer: participial 2. Seeing the laughing men enraged the frenzied rats. Answer: gerund 3. They tried to get in through the windows and door. Answer: infinitive e9nas7_bkm_03a.indd 1071 3 Appositives and Appositive Phrases Have students identify the appositives or appositive phrases10/22/07 in the following sentences. Then, have them give the word or words each appositive or appositive phrase identifies or explains. 1. Three men—the narrator, Le Gleo, and Itchoua— stared in horror at the rats. Answer: the narrator, Le Gleo, and Itchoua—men 2. The entire crew would likely have perished but for the engineer, a brave man. Answer: a brave man—engineer 7:26:46 AM Language Handbook 1071 1. Three Skeleton Key was a small rock about twenty miles offshore. 2. Three convicts, in hiding after escaping from prison, had died there. 3. People said that the dead men’s skeletons danced at night. 4. To save money, he volunteered for the lighthouse job. 7. Clauses Language Handbook Worksheets, pp. 70–77 RESOURCE CENTER Answers: Language Handbook Resource Center Language Handbook Your Turn Your Turn Combining Sentences Using different kinds of phrases can improve your writing. For example, to revise a series of choppy sentences, combine them by turning at least one sentence into a phrase. choppy A beautiful ship approached. The ship was a Dutch three-master. appositive phrase A beautiful ship, a Dutch three-master, approached. participial phrase A beautiful Dutch ship having three masts approached. infinitive phrase A beautiful Dutch three-master continued to approach us. Combine the following sentences. 1. 2. 3. 4. Three Skeleton Key was a small rock. It was about twenty miles offshore. Three convicts had died there. They were in hiding after escaping from prison. People said that the dead men’s skeletons danced. They danced at night. He wanted to save money. He volunteered for the lighthouse job. 7. Clauses 7a. A clause is a group of words that contains a verb and its subject and that is used as a part of a sentence. The Subordinate Clause 7c. A subordinate (or dependent) clause does not Every clause has a subject and a verb. However, not every clause expresses a complete thought. express a complete thought and cannot stand alone as a sentence. Wagons delivered milk daily. before cars were invented The two kinds of clauses are the independent clause and the subordinate clause. The meaning of a subordinate clause is complete only when the clause is attached to an independent clause. COMPLETE THOUGHT INCOMPLETE THOUGHT that Pierre drove Joseph pulled the wagon that Pierre drove. The Independent Clause 7b. An independent (or main) clause expresses a complete thought and can stand by itself as a sentence. Joseph pulled the wagon. Quick Checks 1072 Resource Center 1 Independent and Subordinate Claus- es Have students identify each of the following groups of words as an independent clause or a subordinate clause. 1. although Pierre did not read or write Answer: subordinate clause 2. everyone liked him Answer: independent clause 3. although he arrived early each day to get his wagon Answer: subordinate clause 4. when he spoke to his horse Answer: subordinate clause e9nas7_bkm_03a.indd 1072 1072 Resource Center 2 Noun Clauses Have students identify the noun clause in each of the following sentences. Then, have them tell whether the noun clause is a subject, a predicate nominative, a direct object, an indirect object, or an object of a preposition. 1. What Evelyn Tooley Hunt is talking about is a mother’s effect on her family. Answer: What Evelyn Tooley Hunt is talking about—subject 2. This mother gives whoever is near warmth and brightness. Answer: whoever is near—indirect object 10/24/07 6:12:46 AM modifies a noun or a pronoun. An adjective clause usually follows the word it modifies and tells which one or what kind. The relative pronouns who and whom are used to refer to people only. The relative pronoun that is used to refer both to people and to things. The relative pronoun which is used to refer to things only. After work, Pierre, who had seemed fit, limped slowly. [The relative pronoun who relates the clause to the noun Pierre.] St. Joseph, whose name the horse bore, was also kind and faithful. [The relative pronoun whose relates the clause to the noun St. Joseph.] The character to whom I am referring is Jacques. [The relative pronoun whom relates the clause to the noun Jacques.] THE ADVERB CLAUSE 7e. An adverb clause is a subordinate clause that modifies a verb, an adjective, or an adverb. An adverb clause tells where, when, how, why, to what extent, or under what condition. They live where it never gets cold. [Where?] When he left, I cried. [When?] Grover’s room seems as if it will never be the same. [How?] Because the weather was hot, the cool water felt good. [Why?] My parents still miss him as much as I do. [To what extent?] If I keep tickling him, he won’t fall asleep. [Under what condition?] since when so that than though as if where until An adverb clause does not always follow the word it modifies. When an adverb clause begins a sentence, the clause is followed by a comma. Whenever King Midas touched something, it turned to gold. THE NOUN CLAUSE 7e. Note Explain to students that some subordinating conjunctions, such as after, as, before, since, and until, are also used as prepositions. 7f. A noun clause is a subordinate clause used as a noun. A noun clause may be used as a subject, a complement (predicate nominative, indirect object, or direct object), or an object of a preposition. What Mama says is right. [subject] Resource Center An adjective clause is usually introduced by a relative pronoun (that, which, who, whom, whose). A relative pronoun relates an adjective clause to the word that the clause modifies. Sometimes a relative pronoun is preceded by a preposition that is part of the adjective clause. as though because before how as long whether in order that Language Handbook Joseph knew every house that they served. [Which house?] Pierre was a man who loved work. [What kind of man?] after although whenever as as if wherever unless as soon as while 7e. Computer Note Suggest that students use a computer to help them proofread their writing. They can use the computer’s “Search” function to locate any use of the words after, as, before, since, and until. Have students examine the use of such words at the beginnings of sentences and determine whether the word begins a prepositional phrase or a subordinate clause. Explain that in most cases, an introductory prepositional phrase is not set off by a comma. An introductory adverb clause, however, should be followed by a comma. Language Handbook 7d. An adjective clause is a subordinate clause that An adverb clause is introduced by a subordinating conjunction—a word that shows the relationship between the adverb clause and the word or words that the clause modifies. Common Subordinating Conjunctions RESOURCE CENTER THE ADJECTIVE CLAUSE She is the person who makes us happy. [predicate nominative] She bids whoever is sleeping good morning. [indirect object] Choose whichever you need most. [direct object] A poem can be about whatever you think is important. [object of a preposition] Common Introductory Words for Noun Clauses how when whichever who whomever that where whatever whoever whom what which Language Handbook 1073 3. Similarly, she puts love into whatever she is cooking. Answer: whatever she is cooking—object of the e9nas7_bkm_03a.indd 1073 preposition 4. Notice that Hunt compares her warmth to grits and gravy. Answer: that Hunt compares her warmth to grits and gravy—direct object 5. A bright future is what her constant love promises. Answer: what her constant love promises—predicate nominative 10/24/07 6:13:58 AM Language Handbook 1073 RESOURCE CENTER Answers: 1. When I was in school, “The Highwayman” was an inevitable reading assignment. 2. Although I laughed at it then, I now enjoy the poem. 3. I did not relate to it, because it was remote in time and place. 4. no change 5. However, when I read it carefully, I discovered that this poem is filled with lively images! 8. Sentences Language Handbook Resource Center Language Handbook Your Turn Language Handbook Worksheets, pp. 78–87 Your Turn Placing Adverb Clauses In most cases, the decision of where to place an adverb clause is a matter of style, not correctness. Both of the following sentences are correct. Although she was almost unknown during her lifetime, Emily Dickinson is now considered a major American poet. Emily Dickinson is now considered a major American poet although she was almost unknown during her lifetime. Examine the following sentences and decide whether each adverb clause is placed correctly. If the clause could be better placed, revise the sentence. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. “The Highwayman” was an inevitable reading assignment when I was in school. I now enjoy the poem although I laughed at it then. Because it was remote in time and place, I did not relate to it. The vocabulary and content seemed false because they were unfamiliar. However, I discovered that this poem is filled with lively images when I read it carefully! 8. Sentences 8a. Computer Note Explain to students that some style-checking computer programs can identify and highlight sentence fragments. Such programs are useful, but they aren’t perfect. The best way to eliminate fragments from your writing is to check each sentence yourself. Each sentence should express a complete thought and have a subject and a verb. 8b. Note Explain to students that the subject of a sentence is never part of a prepositional phrase. Many of the women in the league attended the reunion. [Who attended? Many attended, not women. Women is part of the prepositional phrase of the women.] 8a. A sentence is a group of words that has a subject and a verb and expresses a complete thought. A sentence begins with a capital letter and ends with a period, a question mark, or an exclamation point. Sandra Cisneros wrote “Four Skinny Trees.” Have you read any of her work? What surprising rhythms she uses! Sentence or Sentence Fragment? A sentence fragment is a group of words that either does not have a subject and verb or does not express a complete thought. SENTENCE FRAGMENT SENTENCE SENTENCE FRAGMENT SENTENCE The rhythms in this story. The rhythms in this story are based on repetition. After reading her story. After reading her story, I looked at trees differently. 8b. A subject tells whom or what the sentence is about. The predicate tells something about the subject. SUBJECT Helen Callaghan PREDICATE played baseball. FINDING THE SUBJECT Usually, the subject comes before the predicate. Sometimes, however, the subject may appear elsewhere in the sentence. To find the subject of a sentence, ask Who? or What? before the predicate. In sentences that begin with here, there, or where, ask Here (or There or Where) before the predicate. Quick Checks tell whether each group of words is a sentence or a sentence fragment. If the word group is a sentence, have students correct it by adding a capital letter and end punctuation. If the word group is a sentence fragment, have them correct it by adding words to make a complete sentence and also capitalize and punctuate it correctly. 1. let me recommend this story Answer: sentence— Let me recommend this story. e9nas7_bkm_03a.indd 1074 Resource Center A sentence consists of two parts: a subject and a predicate. 1074 Resource Center 1 Sentences and Fragments Have students 1074 The Subject and The Predicate 2. in front of her house grow four skinny trees Answer: sentence—In front of her house grow four skinny trees. 3. growing in the midst of concrete Answer: sentence fragment—They are growing in the midst of concrete. 4. where they don’t belong Answer: sentence fragment—They survive where they don’t belong. 10/24/07 6:14:55 AM words in the complete subject. THE SIMPLE PREDICATE, OR VERB 8d. A simple predicate, or verb, is the main word or group of words in the complete predicate. A complete predicate consists of a verb and all the words that describe the verb and complete its meaning. Usually, the complete predicate follows the subject in a sentence. Sometimes, however, the complete predicate appears at the beginning of a sentence. Other times, part of the predicate may appear on one side of the subject and the rest on the other side. In the darkness of a doorway stood a stranger. On this night, he had a meeting with an old friend. Would his friend appear? A simple predicate may be a one-word verb, or it may be a verb phrase. A verb phrase consists of a main verb and its helping verbs. O. Henry’s stories often end with a twist. His story “After Twenty Years” does not have a happy ending. Neither Daedalus nor Icarus escaped the king’s anger. Among Daedalus’s gifts were creativity, ingenuity, and skill. 8d. Note Explain to students that in this book, the term verb refers to the simple verb unless otherwise indicated. THE COMPOUND VERB 8f. A compound verb consists of two or more verbs that have the same subject. A connecting word—usually and, or, or but—is used between the verbs. He flew upward, turned, and called to his son. Both the subject and the verb of a sentence may be compound. S S V Icarus and his father put on the wings and V took off. Your Turn Using Compound Subjects Your Turn Answers: 1. Daedalus angered King Minos and was imprisoned by him. 2. Clouds and birds sailed through the skies. 3. Daedalus melted wax and shaped a skeleton of a wing. 4. Daedalus and his son, Icarus, flew close to each other. 5. Delos and Samos rushed by beneath them. Resource Center Her mother still had that old fire. [The simple subject is mother. The complete subject is her mother.] “The No-Guitar Blues” by Gary Soto is on the test. [The simple subject is “The No-Guitar Blues.” The complete subject is “The No-Guitar Blues” by Gary Soto.] connected subjects that have the same verb. The usual connecting word is and or or. Language Handbook 8c. A simple subject is the main word or group of 8e. A compound subject consists of two or more Language Handbook THE SIMPLE SUBJECT 8c. Note Explain to students that in this book, the term subject refers to the simple subject unless otherwise indicated. THE COMPOUND SUBJECT RESOURCE CENTER In the old photograph was a woman at bat. [Who was? A woman was] By the way, her son plays for the Astros. [Who plays? Her son does.] Do you play baseball? [Who does play? You do play.] Where is my notebook? [Where is what? Where is my notebook.] and Verbs By using compound subjects and verbs, you can combine ideas and reduce wordiness in your writing. WORDY REVISED With his wings, Daedalus escaped. Icarus escaped also. With their wings, Daedalus and Icarus escaped. Using compound subjects and verbs, combine the following pairs of sentences. 1. Daedalus angered King Minos. Daedalus was imprisoned by King Minos. 2. Clouds sailed through the skies. Birds sailed through the skies. 3. Daedalus melted wax. Daedalus shaped a skeleton of a wing. 4. Daedalus flew close to his son, Icarus. Icarus flew close to his father. 5. Delos rushed by beneath them. Samos rushed by beneath them. Language Handbook 1075 2 Subjects and Verbs Have students identify the subjects and the verbs in the following sentences. e9nas7_bkm_03a.indd 1075 1. The myth of Icarus tells about creativity and warns of its dangers. Answers: myth— subject; tells, warns—verbs 2. In this story, Daedalus and his son suffer a tragic fate. Answers: Daedalus, son—subjects; suffer— verb 3. Yet, did they not also create wings and fly? Answers: they—subject; did create, fly—verbs 10/24/07 6:35:01 AM Language Handbook 1075 9a. Note Tell students that an adverb is never a complement. Use this example: He writes humorously. [Humorously describes how he writes.] His writing is humorous. [The adjective humorous describes the subject writing.] RESOURCE CENTER Language Handbook Worksheets, pp. 88–94 Language Handbook Resource Center Language Handbook 9. Complements 9c. Note Tell students that if a sentence has an indirect object, it always has a direct object also. 9. Complements 9a. A complement is a word or a group of words that completes the meaning of a verb. Every sentence has a subject and a verb. Often a verb also needs a complement to complete the meaning of the verb. A complement may be a noun, a pronoun, or an adjective. Each of the following subjects and verbs needs a complement to make a complete sentence. INCOMPLETE S V James Weldon Johnson became [what?] COMPLETE S V C James Weldon Johnson became a poet. INCOMPLETE S V Johnson’s poetry is [what?] Direct Objects 9b. A direct object is a noun or a pronoun that receives the action of the verb or that shows the result of the action. A direct object tells what or whom after a transitive verb. In this poem, God creates light, animals, and all things. [The nouns light, animals, and things receive the action of the transitive verb creates and tells what.] A direct object never follows a linking verb because a linking verb does not express action. LINKING VERB People became living souls. [The verb became does not express action; therefore, it does not have a direct object.] A direct object is never part of a prepositional phrase. OBJECT OF A PREPOSITION COMPLETE S V C Johnson’s poetry is wonderful. INCOMPLETE S V Tamisha showed [what? to whom?] COMPLETE S V C C Tamisha showed me her poem. An adverb is never a complement. ADVERB COMPLEMENT He writes powerfully. [Powerfully tells how he writes.] His writing is powerful. [The adjective powerful modifies the subject writing.] A prepositional phrase is never a complement. OBJECT OF A PREPOSITION COMPLEMENT The whole world was in darkness. The whole world was darkness. [The noun darkness modifies the subject world.] Humans gazed at the moon. [Moon is not the direct object of the verb gazed; moon is the object of the preposition at.] Indirect Objects Like a direct object, an indirect object helps to complete the meaning of a transitive verb. If a sentence has an indirect object, it always has a direct object as well. 9c. An indirect object is a noun or a pronoun that comes between the verb and the direct object and tells to what or to whom or for what or for whom the action of the verb is done. In the last stanza, God gives man life. [The noun man tells to whom God has given life.] Linking verbs do not have indirect objects. Also, an indirect object, like a direct object, is never in a prepositional phrase. LINKING VERB The cypress is a type of evergreen tree. [The linking verb is does not express action, so it cannot have an indirect object.] Quick Checks 1076 Resource Center 1 Subjects, Verbs, and Complements Have students identify the subjects, verbs, and complements in the sentences in the following paragraph. [Reminder: A complement is never a prepositional phrase.] [1] With his deep voice, James Earl Jones is a marvelous speaker. [2] Only his rich voice can do justice to a poem like “The Creation.” [3] With lingering pauses and startling changes of volume, Jones’s performance is awe-inspiring. [4] Can you find us a recording of his recitation? [5] No one will speak or move a muscle e9nas7_bkm_03b.indd 1076 1076 Resource Center during the whole performance. Answers: [1] James Earl Jones—subject; is—verb; speaker—complement; [2] voice—subject; can do—verb; justice—complement; [3] performance— subject; is—verb; awe-inspiring—complement; [4] you—subject; Can find—verb; us, recording—complements; [5] No one—subject; will speak, move—verbs; muscle—complement 10/22/07 7:28:12 AM Cypresses give swamps and creeks deep shade. 9e. A predicate adjective is an adjective that follows a linking verb and describes the subject. Sky Woman was young and beautiful. [the words young and beautiful are predicate adjectives that describe the subject Sky Woman.] Some verbs, such as look and feel, may be used as either linking verbs or action verbs. LINKING VERB Subject Complements A subject complement completes the meaning of a linking verb and identifies or describes the subject. This unfortunate person became Sky Woman. [Sky Woman identifies the subject person.] The story of Sky Woman is sad. [Sad describes the subject story.] There are two kinds of subject complements—the predicate nominative and the predicate adjective. PREDICATE NOMINATIVES 9d. A predicate nominative is a noun or pronoun that follows a linking verb and identifies the subject or refers to it. Sky Woman became the Great Earth Mother. [The compound noun Great Earth Mother is a predicate nominative that identifies the subject Sky Woman.] Predicate nominatives never appear in prepositional phrases. The world was only a few bits of earth on a turtle. [The word bits is a predicate nominative that identifies the subject world. Earth is the object of the preposition of, and turtle is the object of the preposition on.] Your Turn Using Action Verbs Overusing the linking verb be can make your writing dull. Whenever possible, replace a dull be verb with a verb that expresses action. BE VERB ACTION VERB “Sky Woman” is a traditional Seneca story. Traditionally, the Seneca people tell the story of Sky Woman. Revise each of the following sentences by substituting an interesting action verb for the dull be verb. 1. The Chief of Heaven was angry with 2. 3. 4. 5. Sky Woman. Paradise was the home of the chief of Heaven, Sky Woman, and many animals and plants. Animals of all kinds were her friends. The shell of that turtle is now the earth. Many things from the sky are now on earth. A predicate nominative may be compound. Her helpers were birds, a muskrat, a toad, and a turtle. 9e. Computer Note Explain to students that the overuse of be verbs is a problem that a computer can help you eliminate. Suggest that they use the computer’s “Search” function to locate and highlight each occurrence of am, are, is, was, were, be, been, and being. In each case, determine whether the be verb is necessary or whether it could be replaced with an action verb for greater impact. Resource Center Common Linking Verbs appear feel remain sound be grow seem stay become look smell taste ACTION VERB The Chief of Heaven looked angry. [Looked is a linking verb because it links the adjective angry to the subject Chief of Heaven.] Sky Woman looked through the hole in the floor of Heaven. [Looked is an action verb because it expresses Sky Woman’s action.] 9d. Note Expressions such as “It is I” and “That was he” sound awkward even though they are correct. In conversation, you would likely say “It’s me” and “That was him.” Such nonstandard expressions may one day become acceptable in writing as well as in speech. For now, however, it is best to follow the rules of standard English in your writing. Language Handbook An indirect object may be compound. PREDICATE ADJECTIVES Language Handbook OBJECT OF A PREPOSITION Cypress trees give swamps deep shade. [The noun swamps shows to what cypress trees give shade.] They give deep shade to the swamps. [The noun swamps is the object of the preposition to.] RESOURCE CENTER INDIRECT OBJECT Your Turn Answers: 1. The Chief of Heaven burned with anger at Sky Woman. 2. The Chief of Heaven, Sky Woman, and many animals and plants lived in paradise. 3. Animals of all kinds befriended her. 4. The shell of that turtle changed into the earth. 5. Many things from the sky now flourish on Earth. Language Handbook 1077 2 Subject Complements Have students identify the e9nas7_bkm_03b.indd 1077subject complement in each of the following sentences. Then, have them label each as a predicate nominative or a predicate adjective. 1. These stories may seem simple but may be quite complex. Answer: simple, complex—predicate adjectives 2. After all, their theme is the whole world. Answer: world—predicate nominative 3. Sky Woman’s misfortune was our good fortune. Answer: fortune—predicate nominative 10/22/07 4. With her fall, the world became possible. Answer: possible—predicate adjective 5. Is anything, even luck, permanent? Answer: permanent—predicate adjective 12:21:07 PM Language Handbook 1077 RESOURCE CENTER Language Handbook Worksheets, pp. 95–102 10d. Computer Note Explain to students that a computer can help in analyzing writing for sentence length and structure. Programs are available that will tell the average number of words in the sentences and the number of each kind of sentence used. In this way, students can easily see which sentence structures they’ve mastered and which ones they’ll need to work on. Language Handbook Resource Center Language Handbook 10. Kinds of Sentences 10. Kinds of Sentences Sentences Classified By Structure One way that sentences are classified is by structure—the kinds of clauses and the number of clauses the sentences contain. THE SIMPLE SENTENCE 10a. A simple sentence has one independent clause and no subordinate clauses. A simple sentence may have a compound subject, a compound verb, or both. S S V Jean Fritz and her parents discussed her V problem and found a clever solution to it. THE COMPLEX SENTENCE 10c. A complex sentence has one independent clause and at least one subordinate clause. When I read one of Anne McCaffrey’s stories, I want to ride a dragon. S V INDEPENDENT CLAUSE I want to ride a dragon. S V SUBORDINATE CLAUSE When I read one of Anne McCaffrey’s stories Sentences Classified By Purpose A sentence is also classified according to its purpose. The four kinds of sentences are declarative, interrogative, imperative, and exclamatory. THE COMPOUND SENTENCE 10d. A declarative sentence makes a statement. It 10b. A compound sentence has two or more is followed by a period. independent clauses but no subordinate clauses. The independent clauses are usually joined by a coordinating conjunction: and, but, for, nor, or, so, or yet. The independent clauses in a compound sentence may also be joined by a semicolon. S V S Jared read Old Yeller, and then he saw the movie. S V Anne McCaffrey has written many stories S V about dragons; in fact, she has contributed to their popularity. I can guess what that is. 10e. An interrogative sentence asks a question. It is followed by a question mark. What is the matter with Ted’s bike? 10f. An imperative sentence gives a command or makes a request. It is followed by a period. A strong command is followed by an exclamation point. Please open the door, Theo. Look out! If an imperative sentence does not have a subject, the “understood” subject is always you. (You) Do it now! 10g. An exclamatory sentence shows excitement or expresses strong feeling. An exclamatory sentence is followed by an exclamation point. What a bargain this is! We won regionals! Quick Check 1078 Resource Center 1 Types of Sentences Have students classify each of the following sentences according to its purpose—declarative, interrogative, imperative, or exclamatory. 1. Have you ever lived in a foreign country? Answer: interrogative 2. As a child, Jean Fritz attended a British school in China. Answer: declarative e9nas7_bkm_03b.indd 1078 1078 Resource Center 3. How wonderful the Yangtze River was! Answer: exclamatory 4. Please take me there. Answer: imperative 5. Read Homesick, and see for yourself. Answer: imperative 10/22/07 7:28:29 AM Varying Sentence Structure Language Handbook Improve each item by combining the sentence pairs into one compound or complex sentence. 1. Commas seemed complicated. Andrea Hull knew how to use them. 2. Andrea Hull knew more than young Jean. Andrea taught her many things. 3. Embroidery is beautiful. It can be tedious. 4. She stretched the cloth. She marked her pattern. She began stitching. 5. A design is finished. Everyone can enjoy it. 11. Writing Effective Sentences 11. Writing Effective Sentences COMBINING SENTENCES REVISING RUNON SENTENCES 11a. Improve short, choppy sentences by 11b. Avoid using run-on sentences. combining them into longer, smoother sentences. If you run together two complete sentences as if they were one sentence, you get a run-on sentence. There are many ways to combine sentences. (1) Insert words and phrases. The pan was hot. The pan was made of iron. COMBINED The iron pan was hot. (2) Use coordinating conjunctions. CHOPPY Father likes steak. Mother does, too. COMBINED Father and Mother like steak. CHOPPY The play was excellent. The movie was not. COMBINED The play was excellent, but the movie was not. (3) Use subordinate clauses. CHOPPY I sliced the meat. It was already cooked. COMBINED I sliced the meat that was already cooked. CHOPPY This poet values individuality, he also respects tradition. A comma splice is a kind of run-on sentence in which a comma is used without a coordinating conjunction to join independent clauses. The run-on sentence above is a comma splice. Here are two of the ways you can revise run-on sentences. RUN-ON (1) You can make two sentences. This poet values individuality. He also respects tradition. (2) You can use a comma and the coordinating conjunction and, but, or or. REVISED This poet values individuality, but he also respects tradition. REVISED Language Handbook Worksheets, pp. 103–118 11b. Note Have students try reading their work aloud. If they run out of breath before they get to a punctuation mark, they have probably found a run-on sentence. Remind students that punctuation marks are there to indicate natural stops and pauses according to the sense of the words and ideas being expressed. Resource Center Answers: 1. Though commas seemed complicated, Andrea Hull knew how to use them. 2. Andrea Hull, who knew more than young Jean, taught Jean many things. 3. Embroidery is beautiful, but it can be tedious. 4. After she stretched the cloth, she marked her pattern and began stitching. 5. After a design is finished, everyone can enjoy it. Variety can make your writing more interesting. You can improve your writing by varying the length and structure of your sentences. Use simple sentences to expresses single ideas. To describe more complicated ideas and to show relationships between them, use compound and complex sentences. Language Handbook Your Turn RESOURCE CENTER Your Turn Language Handbook 1079 e9nas7_bkm_03b.indd 1079 10/22/07 12:21:14 PM Language Handbook 1079 RESOURCE CENTER Answers: 1. Many legends, myths, and fairy tales have survived for centuries because they address something important in people. 2. Their impossibility continually surprise and delight readers. 3. People have long told stories that explain human behavior and natural forces. 4. Children and their parents read these stories or view them on film. 5. The needs of a culture and the details and ending of a story may change, but the readers remain. Language Handbook Resource Center Language Handbook Your Turn REVISING STRINGY SENTENCES AND WORDY SENTENCES 11c. Improve stringy and wordy sentences by making them shorter and more precise. STRINGY The Hummingbird King was betrayed, and an enemy betrayed him, and Kukul turned into a hummingbird, for the hummingbird symbolizes freedom for the Maya, and even today he watches all. To fix a stringy sentence, you can break the sentence into two or more sentences. You can also turn some of the independent clauses into phrases or subordinate clauses. REVISED When the Hummingbird King was betrayed by an enemy, Kukul turned into a hummingbird, the symbol of freedom for the Maya. Even today, he watches all. You can revise wordy sentences in three different ways. (1) Replace a group of words with one word. With great sorrow, they mourned their king. REVISED Sorrowfully, they mourned their king. (2) Replace a clause with a phrase. WORDY When Kukul’s life ended, he turned into a hummingbird. REVISED After his death, Kukul turned into a hummingbird. (3) Take out a whole group of unnecessary words. WORDY What I mean to say is that Kukul is known as the quetzal. REVISED Kukul is known as the quetzal. WORDY Your Turn Eliminating Wordiness Extra words and phrases tend to make writing sound awkward and unnatural. When revising your writing, read your sentences aloud to check for wordiness or a stringy style. Revise each of the following sentences to eliminate wordiness and stringy style. 1. The reason that many legends, myths, 2. 3. 4. 5. and fairy tales have survived for centuries is that they address something important in people. They continually surprise and delight readers due to the fact of their impossibility. People have long told stories that explain human behavior and ones that explain natural forces in the world. Children read these stories or view them on film, and so do their parents. The needs of a culture change, and details of the story change, and the ending may change, but the readers remain. Quick Check 1080 Resource Center 1 Revising Sentences Have students use the methods they’ve learned in this section to improve the following choppy, run-on, stringy, and wordy sentences. 1. The poem is based on a legend about a boy who becomes an animal. It was written by our own poet laureate. Answer: Written by our own poet laureate, the poem is based on a legend about a boy who becomes an animal. e9nas7_bkm_03b.indd 1080 1080 Resource Center 2. The legend describes an extraordinary moment. This extraordinary moment is filled with complex 10/22/07 meaning. The meaning includes self-assertion and self-acceptance. Answer: The poet describes an extraordinary moment filled with complex meaning, which includes self-assertion and self-acceptance. 3. Many people all over the world have legends; these legends tell of people being turned into animals. Answer: The world over, many legends tell of people being turned into animals. 12:21:27 PM Who gets a place in the choir? 12b. Capitalize the pronoun I. I enjoyed the book, but I didn’t like the film. 12c. Capitalize the interjection O. The interjection O is most often used on solemn or formal occasions. Protect us in the battle, O great Athena! The interjection oh requires a capital letter only at the beginning of a sentence. Oh, look at the sunset! We felt tired but, oh, so victorious. 12d. Capitalize proper nouns. While a common noun is capitalized only when it begins a sentence or is part of a title, a proper noun is always capitalized. Some proper nouns consist of more than one word. In these names, short prepositions (those of fewer than five letters) and articles (a, an, the) are not capitalized. statue, man Statue of Liberty, Moses (1) Capitalize the names of persons and animals. Alice Walker, Lassie COMMON NOUNS 12d. Computer Note Advise students to use their computer spellchecker to help capitalize names correctly. Suggest that they make a list of the names they write most often and then add this list to their computer’s dictionary or spellchecker. Resource Center Bacon states, “Knowledge is power.” Traditionally, the first word in a line of poetry is capitalized. It was many and many a year ago, In a kingdom by the sea, That a maiden there lived whom you may know By the name of Annabel Lee; And this maiden she lived with no other thought Than to love and be loved by me. —Edgar Allen Poe, “Annabel Lee” Language Handbook The first word of a sentence that is a direct quotation is capitalized even if the quotation begins within a sentence. Towns, Cities San Diego, Jamestown Islands Isle of Wight, Wake Island Counties, States Cook County, New Hampshire Countries New Zealand, Germany Bodies of Water Gulf of Mexico, Indian Ocean Forests, Parks Sherwood Forest, Central Park Streets, Highways Route 44, West Fourth Street Mountains Mount Shasta, Big Horn Mountain Continents South America, Asia Regions the West Coast, the Great Plains Language Handbook Worksheets, pp. 119–124 12a. Note Explain to students that some modern poets and writers do not follow the rule of capitalizing each line of a poem. Advise students to follow the capitalization used in the source of the quotation when quoting a poem. Language Handbook 12a. Capitalize the first word in each sentence. (2) Capitalize geographical names. RESOURCE CENTER 12. Capital Letters 12. Capital Letters Words such as north, east, and southwest are not capitalized when they indicate direction, but they are capitalized when they are part of a proper name. go south for the winter, East End Cafe In a hyphenated street number, the second part of the number is not capitalized. Seventy-eighth Street (3) Capitalize the names of planets, stars, and other heavenly bodies. Jupiter, Sirius, Milky Way, Big Dipper The word earth is not capitalized unless it is used along with the names of other heavenly bodies that are capitalized. The words sun and moon are not capitalized. PROPER NOUNS Quick Checks 1 Capitalization Most of the following sentences contain errors in capitalization. If a sentence is correct, have students leave it as is. If there are errors in the use of capitals, have students correct the word or words that should be changed. 1. If i need a ride, i will give you a call. Answer: I, I 2. Loretta is in Maine, but Oh, how she would like to visit Paris. Answer: oh 3. oh no, I left my backpack on the bus! Answer: Oh e9nas7_bkm_03b.indd 1081 Language Handbook 1081 2 Capitalization Have students correct each of the following expressions, using capital letters as needed. 10/22/07 1. decisions of the united states supreme court Answer: decisions of the United States Supreme Court 2. three skeleton key, an island off guiana Answer: Three Skeleton Key, an island off Guiana 3. pictures of saturn sent by voyager 2 Answer: pictures of Saturn sent by Voyager 2 4. the apaches of the southwest Answer: the Apaches of the Southwest 7:28:55 AM Language Handbook 1081 RESOURCE CENTER Language Handbook Resource Center Language Handbook 12g. Note Explain to students that the article the before a title is not capitalized unless it is the first word of the title. Is that the late edition of the Chicago Sun-Times? I read an interesting story in The New Yorker. If students are not sure whether the is part of a magazine’s title, advise them to look for the official title in the magazine’s masthead or on the table-of-contents page. For a newspaper, look on the editorial page. For a book, look on the title page. (4) Capitalize the names of teams, organizations, government bodies, businesses, and institutions. (8) Capitalize the names of buildings and other structures. Teams Detroit Pistons, Seattle Seahawks Organizations Girl Scouts, African Studies Association Government Bodies Coast Guard, Department of Agriculture Businesses Tom’s Ski World, Seaside Cycle Shop Institutions Cary Hospital, Hilltop High School (5) Capitalize the names of historical events and periods, special events, and calendar items. Historical Events Battle of Yorktown, Yalta Conference Historical Periods Great Depression, Middle Ages Special Events Iowa State Fair, Cannes Film Festival Calendar Items Friday, Fourth of July (9) Capitalize the names of monuments and awards. The name of a season is not capitalized unless it is part of a proper name. the last day of summer the Oak Ridge Winter Carnival (6) Capitalize the names of nationalities, races, and peoples. Greek, Asian, Caucasian, Hispanic, Shawnee (7 Capitalize the names of religions and their followers, holy days, sacred writings, and specific deities. Religions and Followers Zen Buddhism, Christianity, Muslim Holy Days Passover, Lent, Ramadan Sacred Writings Tao Te Ching, Bible, Talmud, Koran Specific Deities Holy Spirit, Brahma, Allah, Jehovah The word god is not capitalized when it refers to a mythological god. The names of specific gods, however, are capitalized. Ritz Theater, Golden Gate Bridge Vietnam Veterans Memorial, Purple Heart (10) Capitalize the names of trains, ships, aircraft, and spacecraft. Trains Silver Rocket, Orient Express Ships Nina, Santa Maria Aircraft Spirit of St. Louis, Air Force One Spacecraft Apollo II, Columbia (11) Capitalize the brand names of business products. Nike shoes, Buick sedan, Wrangler jeans 12e. Capitalize proper adjectives. A proper adjective is formed from a proper noun and is usually capitalized. PROPER NOUN PROPER ADJECTIVE Rome Roman army 12f. Do not capitalize the names of school subjects, except language classes and course names followed by a number. I have tests in English, math, and Art II. 12g. Capitalize titles. (1) Capitalize the title of a person when it comes before a name. Does Ms. Tam know Governor Halsey? (2) Capitalize a title used alone or following a person’s name only when you want to emphasize the person’s high position. We grew quiet as the Rabbi rose to speak. Is he the rabbi at the new synagogue? A title used alone in direct address is often capitalized. Is the patient resting comfortably, Nurse? The king of Greek gods was Zeus. Quick Check 1082 Resource Center 3 Capitalization Have students use capital or lowercase letters to correct each error in capitalization in the following sentences. 1. When my aunt Rose and I went to Mexico, she introduced me to grandmother Villa. Answers: Aunt Rose, Grandmother Villa 2. Try looking up that word in the american heritage dictionary. Answer: The American Heritage Dictionary e9nas7_bkm_03b.indd 1082 1082 Resource Center 3. Did you hear commissioner of education boylan’s speech? Answer: Commissioner of Education Boylan’s speech 4. Did the treasurer review the club’s budget, senator? Answer: Senator 5. When I get older, I hope I will be like the father in “My Father Is A Simple Man.” Answer: “My Father is a Simple Man.” 10/22/07 7:29:08 AM Do not capitalize a word showing a family relationship when a possessive comes before the word. Your Turn Correcting Errors in Capitalization Good editing is essential for good writing. Revise the following sentences by correcting the errors in capitalization. the ryan family takes a trip West. 2. This Year they traveled to california in their new buick. 13. Punctuation in hollywood. Language Handbook Worksheets, pp. 125–134 3. On Day one they visited a Movie Studio 4. On one of the Sets they saw lassie. 5. Later they went to the rose bowl to hear Resource Center 1. Each Summer around the fourth of july, Language Handbook Angela’s mother and my grandmother Daphne coach the softball team. (4) Capitalize the first, last, and all important words in titles. Unimportant words in titles include: prepositions of fewer than five letters (such as at, of, for, from, with); coordinating conjunctions (and, but, for, nor, or, so, yet); articles (a, an, the). Books The Old Man and the Sea, Jane Eyre Magazines Sports Illustrated, Woman’s Day Newspapers Los Angeles Times, The Miami Herald Poems “Annabel Lee,” “Mending Wall” Short Stories “The Bear,” “A Day’s Wait” Historical Documents Bill of Rights, Emancipation Proclamation Answers: 1. Each summer around the Fourth of July, the Ryan family takes a trip west. 2. This year they traveled to California in their new Buick. 3. On day one they visited a movie studio in Hollywood. 4. On one of the sets they saw Lassie. 5. Later they went to the Rose Bowl to hear the new symphony play Rossini’s William Tell Overture. Language Handbook Hey, Mom, I received a letter from Aunt Christina and Uncle Garth. Your Turn Movies Stand and Deliver, Jurassic Park Television Programs Law & Order, A Different World Works of Art Birth of Venus, The Old Guitarist Musical Compositions The Marriage of Figaro, “In the Pines” RESOURCE CENTER (3) Capitalize a word showing a family relationship when the word is used before or in place of a person’s name. 13. Punctuation End Marks An end mark is a mark of punctuation placed at the end of a sentence. The three kinds of end marks are the period, the question mark, and the exclamation point. 13a. Use a period at the end of a statement. Kristi Yamaguchi is a champion skater. 13c. Use an exclamation point at the end of an exclamation. Wow! What a view! 13d. Use a period or an exclamation point at the end of a request or a command. Please give me the scissors. [a request] Give me the scissors! [a command] 13b. Use a question mark at the end of a question. Did Gordon Parks write The Learning Tree? Language Handbook 1083 e9nas7_bkm_03b.indd 1083 10/22/07 12:21:35 PM Language Handbook 1083 RESOURCE CENTER Language Handbook Resource Center Language Handbook 13e. Notes Explain to students that a two-letter state abbreviation without periods is used only when it is followed by a ZIP Code. Austin, TX 78741 Some widely used abbreviations are written without periods. UN, FBI, PTA, NAACP, PBS, CNN, YMCA, VHF Abbreviations for most units of measure are written without periods. cm, kg, ml, ft, lb, mi, oz, qt However, the abbreviation for inch (in.) is written with a period to prevent confusion with the word in. If students are not sure whether to use periods with abbreviations, they should look in a dictionary. 13i. Note Explain to students that an essential (or restrictive) phrase or clause is not set off. It cannot be omitted without changing the meaning of the sentence. Essential Phrase: All the spirits toiling in Hades stopped and listened. Essential Clause: The song that Orpheus sang charmed the king of Hades. 13e. Use a period after most abbreviations. COMPOUND SENTENCES Personal Names Pearl S. Buck, W.E.B. Du Bois Titles Used with Names Mr., Ms., Jr., Sr., Dr. States Ky., Fla., Tenn., Calif. Addresses St., Blvd., P.O. Box Organizations and Companies Co., Inc., Corp., Assn. Times A.M., P.M., B.C., A.D. Place A.D. before the number and B.C. after the number. For centuries expressed in words, place both A.D. and B.C. after the century. A.D. 540, 31 B.C. sixth century B.C., third century A.D. When an abbreviation with a period ends a sentence, another period is not needed. However, a question mark or an exclamation point is used as needed. This is my friend J. R. Have you met Nguyen, J. R.? 13h. Use a comma before and, but, or, nor, for, so, Commas ITEMS IN A SERIES 13f. Use commas to separate items in a series. Words, phrases, and clauses in a series are separated by commas to show the reader where one item in the series ends and the next item begins. Hammock, canoe, and moccasin are Native American words. PHRASES IN A SERIES Seaweed was in the water, on the beach, and in our shoes. CLAUSES IN A SERIES Tell us who was there, what happened, and why it happened. If all items in a series are joined by and or or, commas are not needed. I voted for Corey and Mona and Ethan. WORDS IN A SERIES 13g. Use a comma to separate two or more adjectives that come before a noun. or yet when it joins independent clauses. I enjoyed The King and I, but Oklahoma! is still my favorite musical. You may omit the comma before and, but, or, or nor if the clauses are very short and there is no chance of misunderstanding. INTERRUPTERS 13i. Use commas to set off an expression that interrupts a sentence. Yes, my favorite gospel singers, BeBe and CeCe Winans, were on TV, Ed. (1) Use commas to set off a nonessential participial phrase or a nonessential subordinate clause. NONESSENTIAL PHRASE Orpheus, mourning his bride, entered Hades. NONESSENTIAL CLAUSE Orpheus, who was a musician, met a cruel fate. (2) Use commas to set off an appositive or an appositive phrase that is nonessential. APPOSITIVE The gray ferryman, Charon, did not charge any fare. APPOSITIVE PHRASE Even Cerberus, the dog at the gate, listened. (3) Use commas to set off words used in direct address. Do you know, Elena, when the bus is due? (4) Use commas to set off a parenthetical expression. A parenthetical expression is a side remark that either adds information or relates ideas in a sentence. What, in your opinion, is the best solution to this problem? [parenthetical] I have faith in your opinion. [not parenthetical] INTRODUCTORY WORDS, PHRASES, AND CLAUSES 13j. Use a comma after certain introductory elements. An Arabian horse is a fast, beautiful animal. Quick Checks 1084 Resource Center 1 End Marks Have students add end marks where they are needed in the following sentences. 1. Have you ever heard of Little Tokyo Answer: Have you ever heard of Little Tokyo? 2. It’s a Japanese neighborhood in Los Angeles, Calif, bordered by First St, Third St, Alameda St, and Los Angeles St Answer: It’s a Japanese neighborhood in Los Angeles, Calif., bordered by First St., Third St., Alameda St., and Los Angeles St. 3. Some friends of ours who live in Los Angeles, Mr and Mrs Cook, Sr, and their son, Al, Jr, introduced e9nas7_bkm_03b.indd 1084 1084 Resource Center us to the area Answer: Some friends of ours who live in Los Angeles, Mr. and Mrs. Cook, Sr., and their son, Al, Jr., introduced us to the area. 2 Commas Have students insert commas where they are needed in the following sentences. 1. Horrified by the sight of his daughter Midas wept. Answer: Horrified by the sight of his daughter, Midas wept. 2. Well Midas left the palace went to Dionysus and begged for relief. Answer: Well, Midas left the palace, went to Dionysus, and begged for relief. 10/22/07 7:29:19 AM situations. (1) Use commas to separate items in dates and addresses. They met on June 17, 1965, in Miami. My address is 10 Cocoa Lane, Orlando, FL 32804. (2) Use a comma after the salutation of a friendly letter and after the closing of any letter. Dear Aunt Margaret, Sincerely yours, Semicolons 13l. Use a semicolon instead of a comma between independent clauses when they are not joined by and, but, or, nor, for, so, or yet. Our parents settled our dispute; they gave us each half. Use a semicolon rather than a period between independent clauses only when the ideas in the clauses are closely related. For camping you need the following: bedroll, utensils for eating, warm clothing, and rope. 13n. Use a colon in certain conventional situations. (1) Use a colon between the hour and the minute. 11:30 p.m., 4:08 a.m. (2) Use a colon after the salutation of business letter. Your Turn Dear Ms. Gonzalez: (3) Use a colon between chapter and verse in referring to passages from the Bible. John 3:16, Matthew 6:9–13 Your Turn Using Semicolons Effectively Sometimes, rather than using a semicolon, it is more effective to separate a compound sentence or a heavily punctuated sentence into two sentences. ACCEPTABLE BETTER In South American jungles, it rains every day, sometimes all day; the vegetation there, some of which is found nowhere else in the world, is lush, dense, and fast-growing. In South American jungles, it rains every day, sometimes all day. The vegetation there, some of which is found nowhere else in the world, is lush, dense, and fast-growing. Possible Answers: 1. The frogs wanted a king who could amuse them with royal customs. A strong ruler would be exciting, they thought. 2. Jupiter heard their request, and though he granted it, he felt they were foolish. 3. Jupiter threw down a large log, and it landed next to the frogs. Resource Center 13k. Use commas in certain conventional after expressions like as follows or the following. Language Handbook CONVENTIONAL SITUATIONS 13m. Use a colon before a list of items, especially Language Handbook Yes, King Midas had been foolish. (2) Use a comma after an introductory prepositional phrase if the phrase is long or if two or more phrases appear together. Long ago in a land called Lydia, King Midas lived. In the garden of his palace, he met Silenus. (3) Use a comma after a participial phrase or an infinitive phrase that introduces a sentence. PARTICIPIAL PHRASE Threatened by Midas, the satyr struck a bargain. INFINITIVE PHRASE To reward Midas, Dionysus offered a gift. (4) Use a comma after an introductory adverb clause. When his daughter arrived, he warned her to leave quickly. 13n. Note Explain to students that a colon is not used directly after a verb or a preposition. Omit the colon, or reword the sentence. Incorrect: My stepsister’s favorite sports are: basketball, tennis, swimming, and bowling. Correct: My stepsister’s favorite sports are basketball, tennis, swimming, and bowling. COLONS RESOURCE CENTER (1) Use a comma after yes, no, or any mild exclamation such as well or why at the beginning of a sentence. Decide whether the following ideas is better expressed as a single sentence or as two or more sentences. Revise sentences for style and clarity. 1. The frogs wanted a king, one who could amuse them with royal customs; they thought a strong ruler would be exciting. 2. Jupiter heard their request; he granted it; he felt they were foolish. 3. Jupiter threw down a large log; the log landed next to the frogs. Language Handbook 1085 3. Dionysus sometimes a merciful god told him to go to Pactolus. Answer: Dionysus, sometimes a merciful e9nas7_bkm_03b.indd 1085 god, told him to go to Pactolus. 4. In the deep strong waters of the river Midas washed himself. Answer: In the deep, strong waters of the river, Midas washed himself. 5. My friend do not make Midas’s error or you may not find mercy. Answer: My friend, do not make Midas’s error, or you may not find mercy. 10/22/07 12:21:42 PM Language Handbook 1085 RESOURCE CENTER Language Handbook Worksheets, pp. 135–139 14a. Computer Note Explain to students that they may be able to set words in italics themselves with a computer. Most wordprocessing software and many printers are capable of producing italic type. Language Handbook Resource Center Language Handbook 14. Punctuation 14a. Note Explain to students that the article the before the title of a magazine or a newspaper is usually neither italicized nor capitalized when it is written with a sentence. Some periodicals do include the in their titles. My parents subscribe to the San Francisco Chronicle. On Sundays, we all share The New York Times. 14. Punctuation Underlining (Italics) QUOTATION MARKS Italics are printed letters that lean to the right, such as the letters in these words. In handwritten work, indicate italics by underlining. 14c. Use quotation marks to enclose a direct TYPED PUBLISHED Born Free is the story of a lion. Born Free is the story of a lion. 14a. Use underlining (italics) for titles of books, plays, periodicals, works of art, films, television programs, recordings, long musical compositions, trains, ships, aircraft, and spacecraft. Books Barrio Boy, House Made of Dawn Plays Macbeth, Visit to a Small Planet Periodicals Hispanic, The New York Times Works of Art The Thinker, American Gothic Films Stand and Deliver, JurassicPark Television Programs Home Improvement, Wall Street Week Recordings Unforgettable, Man of Steel Long Musical Compositions Don Giovanni, The Four Seasons Ships and Trains USS Nimitz, Orient Express Aircraft and Spacecraft Enola Gay, Apollo 12 14b. Use underlining (italics) for words, letters, and figures referred to as such. Don’t forget to drop the final e before you add -ing to the word dine. Is the last number a 5 or an 8? quotation—a person’s exact words. “Here is Eric’s drawing,” said Ms. Rios. Quotation marks are not used for an indirect quotation, which is a rewording of a direct quotation. DIRECT QUOTATION INDIRECT QUOTATION Kaya asked, “What is your interpretation of the poem?” Kaya asked what my interpretation of the poem was. 14d. A direct quotation begins with a capital letter. Brandon shouted, “Let’s get busy!” 14e. When the expression identifying the speaker interrupts a quoted sentence, the second part of the quotation begins with a lowercase letter. “Gee,” Milo added, “that book is funny.” When the second part of a divided quotation is a separate sentence, it begins with a capital letter. “Travel is exciting,” said Mrs. Ash. “Space travel is no exception.” 14f. A direct quotation is set off from the rest of the sentence by a comma, a question mark, or an exclamation point, but not by a period. Set off means “separated.” If a quotation appears at the beginning of a sentence, place a comma after it. If a quotation falls at the end of a sentence, place a comma before it. If a quoted sentence is interrupted, place a comma after the first part and before the second part. “I just read her story,” Aly said. Mark said, “I’ve read her stories, too.” “Aly,” asked Janet, “what did you read?” When a quotation ends with a question mark or an exclamation point, no comma is needed. “Have you seen my brother?” Alicia asked. Quick Check 1086 Resource Center 1 Using Italics Have students identify the words that should be italicized in each of the following sentences. 1. Sometimes I forget the r in the word friend and write fiend. Answers: r, friend, fiend 2. Pablo Picasso’s famous painting Guernica is named for a Spanish town that was bombed during the Spanish Civil War. Answer: Guernica e9nas7_bkm_03b.indd 1086 1086 Resource Center 3. My father reads the Washington Post because he likes Carl Rowan’s column. Answer: Washington Post 4. The movie My Left Foot celebrates the accomplishments of a writer and artist who has serious disabilities. Answer: My Left Foot 5. Janice finally found her mistake; she had written the 4 in the wrong column. Answer: 4 10/22/07 7:29:29 AM short works. Ramón said, “My brother loves poetry.” “My sister does too,” Paula responded. 14h. A question mark or an exclamation point is When both the sentence and the quotation at the end of the sentence are questions (or exclamations), only one end mark is used. It is placed inside the closing quotation marks. Whose poem begins “How do I love thee?” 14i. When you write dialogue (conversation), begin a new paragraph each time you change speakers. “Frog, how may we help you?” “Uh, well, uh, you see,” says Frog, “I would like to become a part of your group.” “That’s wonderful,” says the head bird. “Yes, wonderful,” echo the other birds. —Linda Goss, “The Frog Who Wanted to Be a Singer” Your Turn Correcting Punctuation Correct the punctuation in the following sentences by adding underlining and quotation marks as needed. 1. Which Beatles song do you like best? Ramon asked his grandmother. 2. Well, she said, my favorite is probably Resource Center “Is the time difference between Los Angeles and Chicago two hours?” asked Ken. [The quotation is a question.] Linda exclaimed, “I thought everyone knew that!” [The quotation is an exclamation.] What did Sandra Cisneros mean when she wrote “Keep, keep, keep, trees say when I sleep”? [The sentence, not the quotation, is a question.] I can’t believe that Mom said, “I’m not raising your allowance”! [The sentence, not the quotation, is an exclamation.] Answers: 1. “Which Beatles song do you like best?” Ramon asked his grandmother. 2. “Well,” she said, “my favorite is probably ‘Yesterday.’” 3. “Too much!” replied Ramon. “That’s Granddad’s favorite too.” 4. Jimmy added, “My mom knows all the words.” 5. “Do you know what they meant by the line ‘Love is such an easy game to play’?” Ramon asked. Short Stories “Papa’s Parrot,” “Amigo Brothers” Poems “Early Song,” “The Runaway” Articles “Free Speech and Free Air” Songs “La Bamba,” “Amazing Grace” Television Program Episodes “The Trouble with Tribbles” Chapters and Other Book Parts “Learning About Reptiles” Language Handbook placed inside the closing quotation marks when the quotation itself is a question or exclamation. Otherwise, it is placed outside. Your Turn Language Handbook 14l. Use quotation marks to enclose titles of closing quotation marks. RESOURCE CENTER 14g. A period or a comma is placed inside the Yesterday. 3. Too much! replied Ramon. That’s Grandad’s favorite, too. 4. Jimmy added, He knows all the words. 5. Do you know what they meant by the line Love is such an easy game to play? Ramon asked. 14j. When a quotation consists of several sentences, place quotation marks at the beginning and at the end of the whole quotation. “Take the garbage out. Clean your room. Have fun!” said Dad. 14k. Use single quotation marks to enclose a quotation within a quotation. “I said, ‘The quiz will be this Friday,’ “repeated Mr. Allyn. Language Handbook 1087 e9nas7_bkm_03b.indd 1087 10/22/07 12:21:50 PM Language Handbook 1087 15a. Note Explain to students that a proper name ending in s may take only an apostrophe to form the possessive case if the addition of ‘s would make the name awkward to pronounce. Ms. Masters’ class, Hercules’ feats 15b. Note Explain to students that an apostrophe is not used with possessive personal pronouns. His pantomime was good, but hers was better. RESOURCE CENTER Language Handbook Worksheets, pp. 140–146 Language Handbook Resource Center Language Handbook 15. Punctuation Tips for Spelling Explain to students that hyphens are used in some compound names. In such cases, the hyphen is part of the name’s spelling. Advise students to consult a reference source if unsure whether a name is hyphenated. People: Daniel Day-Lewis Places: Wilkes-Barre [city] 15. Punctuation Apostrophes 15a. The possessive case of a noun or a pronoun shows ownership or relationship. (1) To form the possessive case of a singular noun, add an apostrophe and an s. a dog’s collar, Cinderella’s slipper (2) To form the possessive case of a plural noun ending in s, add only the apostrophe. doctors’ opinions, hosts’ invitations (3) To form the possessive case of a plural noun that does not end in s, add an apostrophe and an s. women’s suits, geese’s noise (4) To form the possessive case of some indefinite pronouns, add an apostrophe and an s. someone’s opinion, no one’s fault 15b. To form a contraction, use an apostrophe to show where letters have been left out. A contraction is a shortened form of a word, figure, or group of words. I am, I’m; where is, where’s; 1996, ‘96; of the clock, o’clock The word not can be shortened to -n’t and added to a verb, usually without changing the spelling of the verb. is not, isn’t had not, hadn’t do not, don’t should not, shouldn’t EXCEPTIONS will not, won’t cannot, can’t Do not confuse contractions with possessive pronouns. Contractions It’s snowing. [It is] Who’s Clifton Davis? [Who is] There’s only one answer. [There is] They’re not here. [They are] Possessive Pronouns Its front tire is flat. Whose idea was it? This trophy is theirs. Their dog is barking. 15c. Use an apostrophe and an s to form the plurals of letters, numerals, signs, and words referred to as words. Your 2’s look like 5’s. Don’t use &’s in place of and’s. Hyphens 15d. Use a hyphen to divide a word at the end of a line. (1) Divide a word only between syllables. Didn’t Carrie write her report on the tyrannosaurs, the largest meat-eating dinosaurs? CORRECT Didn’t Carrie write her report on the tyrannosaurs, the largest meat-eating dinosaurs? (2) Divide a hyphenated word at a hyphen. INCORRECT I went to the Iowa State Fair with my sisters and my brother-in-l aw. CORRECT I went to the Iowa State Fair with my sisters and my brother-inlaw. (3) Do not divide a word so that one letter stands alone. INCORRECT On our last class trip, all of us stayed overnight in a hotel. CORRECT On our last class trip, all of us stayed overnight in a hotel. INCORRECT 15e. Use a hyphen with compound numbers from twenty-one to ninety-nine and with fractions used as adjectives. thirty-five, one-half, forty-eighth Quick Check 1088 Resource Center 1 Apostrophes, Hyphens, Parentheses, and Dashes For each of the following sentences, have students insert apostrophes, hyphens, parentheses, or dashes where they are needed. 1. My cousin Dorothy, everybodys favorite, usually gets all As. Answers: everybody’s; A’s. 2. It isn’t correct to use &s in your compositions. Answer: &’s e9nas7_bkm_03b.indd 1088 1088 Resource Center 3. I painted its one hundred thirty one chairs a tedious job, to say the least. Answer: I painted its one-hundred-thirty-one chairs—a tedious job, to say the least. 4. Last night, the restaurant was oh, hi, Ed about one quarter full. Answer: Last night, the restaurant was—oh, hi, Ed—about one-quarter full. 5. It’s decorated like an inn my restaurant won’t be. Answer: It’s decorated like an inn (my restaurant won’t be). 10/22/07 7:29:40 AM is added to a sentence but is not considered of major importance. Ms. Matsuo served us the sushi (sü’ shē) chef. My great-uncle Chester (he’s Grandma’s brother) will stay with us. Parenthetical Expressions Using too many parenthetical expressions in your writing can distract readers from the main idea. Revise the following sentences to eliminate the parentheses. If a sentence is best written with parentheses, leave it as is. 1. Survive the Savage Sea (true stories are 15g. Use a dash to indicate an abrupt break in thought or speech. Ms. Alonzo—who just left—is one of the judges. my favorites) is about people on a raft. 2. Yellowstone National Park (established 16. Spelling Language Handbook Worksheets, pp. 147–153 Resource Center in 1872) covers territory in Wyoming, Idaho, and Montana. 3. The writer Langston Hughes (1902–1967) is best known for his poetry. 4. Alligators use their feet and tails to dig holes (called “gator holes”) in marshy fields. 5. On the Sabbath we eat braided bread called challah (pronounced KHä’la). Answers: 1. Survive the Savage Sea is about people on a raft. True stories are my favorites. 2. Established in 1872, Yellowstone National Park covers territory in Wyoming, Idaho, and Montana. 3. as is 4. Alligators use their feet and tails to dig holes, called “gator holes,” in marshy fields. 5. as is Language Handbook Dashes Your Turn Eliminating Unnecessary Language Handbook 15f. Use parentheses to enclose material that Your Turn RESOURCE CENTER Parentheses 16. Spelling Using Word Parts 16b. A prefix is one or more letters or syllables Many English words are made up of various word parts—roots, prefixes, or suffixes. Learning to spell the most frequently used parts can help you spell many words correctly. 16a. The root of a word is the part that carries the word’s core meaning. Root Meaning Examples -dict- speak -duc-duct-ject-ped-vid-, -vis- lead throw foot see dictation, dictionary educate conductor eject, reject pedal, biped video, invisible added to the beginning of a word or a word part to create a new word. Prefix Meaning Examples anticoinretrans- against with not back, again across antiwar coexist inaccurate reclaim, rebuild transport Language Handbook 1089 e9nas7_bkm_03b.indd 1089 10/24/07 6:36:34 AM Language Handbook 1089 RESOURCE CENTER Language Handbook Resource Center Language Handbook 16d. Note Tell students this time-tested verse to help them remember the ie rule. I before e Except after c Or when sounded like a, As in neighbor and weigh. The rhyme above and rules 16d and 16e apply only when the e and i are in the same syllable. 16k. Note Explain to students that when adding -ing to words that end in ie, the e is dropped and the i changes to y. lie + ing = lying die + ing = dying 16m. NOTE Explain to students that in some cases, the final consonant either may or may not be doubled. cancel + ed = canceled or cancelled 16c. A suffix is one or more letters or syllables 16h. When adding the suffix -ly or -ness to a word, added to the end of a word or a word part to create a new word. do not change the spelling of the word itself. Suffix Meaning Examples -able -ance, -ancy able, likely act, quality -ate -ize -ness become cause to be quality readable admittance, constancy captivate socialize peacefulness Spelling Rules IE AND EI 16d. Except after c, write ie when the sound is long e. achieve, believe, ceiling, receive EXCEPTIONS either, protein, neither, seize 16e. Write ei when the sound is not long e, especially when the sound is long a. foreign, neighbor, reign, their EXCEPTIONS ancient, conscience, efficient, friend CEDE, CEED, AND SEDE 16f. The only English word ending in -sede is supersede. The only words ending in -ceed are exceed, proceed, and succeed. Other words with this sound end in -cede. concede, intercede, precede, recede ADDING PREFIXES AND SUFFIXES 16g. When adding a prefix to a word, do not change the spelling of the word itself. mis + spell = misspell slow + ly = slowly EXCEPTIONS For words that end in y and have more than one syllable, change the y to i before adding -ly or -ness. happy + ly = happily 16i. Drop the final silent e before a suffix beginning with a vowel. line + ing = lining EXCEPTIONS Keep the final silent e in a word ending in ce or ge before a suffix beginning with a or o. notice + able = noticeable, courage + ous = courageous 16j. Keep the final silent e before a suffix beginning with a consonant. hope + less = hopeless EXCEPTIONS nine + th = ninth, argue + ment =argument 16k. For words ending in y preceded by a consonant, change the y to i before any suffix that does not begin with i. try + ed = tried, duty + ful = dutiful 16l. For words ending in y preceded by a vowel, keep the y when adding a suffix. pray + ing = praying EXCEPTIONS day—daily, lay—laid, pay—paid 16m. Double the final consonant before a suffix beginning with a vowel if the word (1) has only one syllable or the accent on the last syllable, and (2) ends in a single consonant preceded by a single vowel. Otherwise, the final consonant is usually not doubled before a suffix beginning with a vowel. sit + ing = sitting, sing + er = singer EXCEPTIONS Do not double the final consonant before a suffix beginning with a vowel in words ending in w or x. mow + ing = mowing, wax + ed = waxed Quick Checks 1090 Resource Center 1 IE and EI Have students add the letters ie or ei to spell each of the following words correctly. 1. gr ..f Answer: grief 2. v . . n Answer: vein 3. n . . ce Answer: niece 4. sh .. ld Answer: shield 5. perc .. ve Answer: perceive 6. pat .. nce Answer: patience 7. th .. f Answer: thief 8. p .. rce Answer: pierce e9nas7_bkm_03b.indd 1090 1090 Resource Center 2 Prefixes and Suffixes Have students add the given prefix or suffix to each word listed below. 1. im + migrate Answer: immigrate 2. re + settle Answer: resettle 3. un + certain Answer: uncertain 4. lucky + ly Answer: luckily 5. semi + circle Answer: semicircle 6. trace + able Answer: traceable 7. advantage + ous Answer: advantageous 8. dry + ness Answer: dryness 10/22/07 7:29:51 AM desks ideas shoes friends 16o. For most nouns ending in s, x, z, ch, or sh, add -es. 16p. For nouns ending in y preceded by a vowel, add -s. decoys highways alleys Rileys 16q. For nouns ending in y preceded by a armies cities ponies daisies Just add -s to proper nouns ending in -y. Brady—Bradys 16r. For some nouns ending in f or fe, add -s. For others, change the f or fe to v and add -es. beliefs, sheriffs knives, leaves 16s. For nouns ending in o preceded by a vowel, add -s. igloos Matteos patios stereos 16t. For nouns ending in o preceded by a consonant, add -es. echoes heroes potatoes tomatoes EXCEPTIONS For musical terms and proper nouns, add -s. alto—altos Blanco—Blancos mice oxen 16v. For most compound nouns, form the plural of the last word in the compound. bookshelves push-ups sea gulls 16w. For compound nouns in which one of the words is modified by the other word or words, form the plural of the word modified. brothers-in-law boy scouts 16x. For some nouns, the singular and the plural forms are the same. deer moose Sioux trout 16y. For numerals, letters, symbols, and words used as words, add an apostrophe and -s. 4's s's $'s and's Your Turn Advise students to follow these guidelines when using numbers in their writing: • Spell out a number that begins a sentence. Fifty people received free tickets. • Within a sentence, spell out numbers that can be written in one or two words. In all, fifty-two people worked on our play. • If you use several numbers, some short and some long, write them all the same way. Usually, it is better to write them all as numerals. We sold 86 tickets today and 121 yesterday. • Spell out numbers that indicate order. Our team came in third [not 3rd] in the track meet. Correcting Spelling Errors Poor spelling can ruin good writing. Correct the spelling errors in each of the following sentences. 1. The Bradyes love baseball. 2. Joe’s two brother-in-laws took him to the game last night and even payed for his ticket. 3. The releif pitcher was awesome. 4. He pitched a flawless nineth inning. 5. At the end of the game Joe conseded that his team was outplayed. Resource Center consonant, change the y to i and add -es. geese feet Language Handbook gases foxes waltzes inches irregular ways. Language Handbook 16n. For most nouns, add -s. Tips for Spelling 16u. The plural of a few nouns is formed in RESOURCE CENTER FORMING THE PLURALS OF NOUNS Your Turn Answers: 1. Bradys 2. brothers-in-law; paid 3. relief 4. ninth 5. conceded Language Handbook 1091 3 Pluralization Have students spell the plural form of each of the following items. [Note: An item may have more than one correct plural form. Give only one.] 1. cargo Answer: cargoes 2. diary Answer: diaries 3. Gómez Answer: Gómezes 4. sit-up Answer: sit-ups 5. child Answer: children e9nas7_bkm_03b.indd 1091 10/22/07 12:22:07 PM Language Handbook 1091 RESOURCE CENTER Language Handbook Worksheets, pp. 154–157 17. a lot Note Tell students that many writers overuse a lot. Whenever students run across a lot as they revise their writing, they should try to replace it with a more exact word or phrase. Not: The dinner guests ate a lot. But: The dinner guests piled their plates with food. Language Handbook Resource Center Language Handbook 17. Glossary of Usage 17. good, well Note Explain that feel good and feel well mean different things. Feel good means “feel happy or pleased.” Feel well means “feel healthy.” She felt good [happy] about her Ta-Na-E-Ka. Roger didn’t feel well [healthy] at all and had lost weight. 17. Glossary of Usage This Glossary of Usage is an alphabetical list of words and expressions that are commonly misused in English. Throughout this section some examples are labeled standard or nonstandard. Standard English is the most widely accepted form of English. It is used in formal situations, such as in speeches and writing for school, and in informal situations, such as in conversation and everyday writing. Nonstandard English is language that does not follow the rules and guidelines of standard English. all ready, already All ready means “completely prepared.” Already means “before a certain point in time.” Everyone was all ready for the show. That bill has already been paid. all right Used as an adjective, all right means “ unhurt” or “satisfactory.” Used as an adverb, it means “well enough.” All right should always be written as two words. Linda fell, but she is all right. [adjective] You did all right at the track meet. [adverb] a lot A lot should always be written as two words. She knows a lot about computer software. Many writers overuse a lot. Whenever you run across a lot as you revise your own writing, try to replace it with a more exact word or phrase. anywheres, everywheres, nowheres, somewheres Use these words without the final s. I didn’t go anywhere [not anywheres]. at Do not use at after where. Where is it? [not Where is it at?] bad, badly Bad is an adjective. Badly is an adverb. The raw celery did not taste bad. [Bad modifies the noun celery.] One little boy behaved badly. [Badly modifies the verb behaved.] between, among Use between when referring to two things, even though they are part of a group containing more than two. In homeroom, Carlos sits between Bob and me. Some players practice between innings. Use among to refer to a group rather than separate individuals. We saved ten dollars among the three of us. [As a group, the three saved ten dollars.] There was disagreement among the fans bout the coach’s decision. [The fans are thought of as a group.] bust, busted Avoid using these words as verbs. Use a form of either burst or break. The door burst [not busted] open and rats teemed in. What would happen if the window broke [not busted]? choose, chose Choose is the present tense form of the verb choose. It rhymes with whose and means “select.” Chose is the past tense form of choose. It rhymes with grows and means “selected.” Did you choose “Fish Cheeks” for your report? Sara chose “Miss Awful.” could of Do not write of with the helping verb could. Write could have. Also avoid had of, ought to of, should of, would of, might of, and must of. All of Emily Dickinson’s poems could have [not could of] been lost. fewer, less Fewer tells “how many” and is used with plural words. Less tells “how much and is used with singular words. We sold fewer [not less] tickets than they did. These plants require less water than those do. good, well Good is always an adjective. Use well, not good, as an adverb. Nancy sang well [not good] at the audition. Well may also be used as an adjective to mean “healthy.” He didn’t look well after eating the pizza. had ought, hadn’t ought Had should not be used with ought. Eric ought [not had ought] to help us; he oughtn’t [not hadn’t ought] to have missed our meeting yesterday. he, she, they Avoid using a pronoun with its antecedent as the subject of a verb. This error is called the double subject. NONSTANDARD Linda Goss she is a writer. STANDARD Linda Goss is a writer. Quick Checks 1092 Resource Center 1 Correct Usage Have students revise each of the following sentences to correct any errors in usage. 1. Alot of stars and planets have names from mythology. Answer: A lot of stars and planets have names from mythology. 2. Icarus had ought to have listened to his father. Answer: Icarus ought to have listened to his father. 3. If he had listened, he could of survived. Answer: If he had listened, he could have survived. 4. I wonder how come he didn’t listen. Answer: I wonder why he didn’t listen. e9nas7_bkm_03b.indd 1092 1092 Resource Center 5. Surely, Daedalus’s heart was busted by the death of his son. Answer: Surely, Daedalus’s heart was broken by the death of his son. 2 Correct Usage Have students revise the following sentences to correct any errors in usage. 1. The reason they forfeited was because Dondré couldn’t play there. Answer: They forfeited because Dondré couldn’t play there. 2. What was going on inside of their heads? Answer: What was going on inside their heads? 10/22/07 7:30:02 AM Resource Center Your Turn Language Handbook Furnishings in a space capsule must be stationary. I need a new box of stationery. them Them should not be used as an adjective. Use those. The fox couldn’t get those [not them] grapes. way, ways Use way, not ways, in referring to a distance. They still had a long way [not ways] to go. when, where Do not use when or where incorrectly in a definition. NONSTANDARD In bowling, a “turkey” is when you make three strikes in a row. STANDARD In bowling, a “turkey” is making three strikes in a row. where Do not use where for that. I read that [not where] he won the match. who, which, that The relative pronoun who refers to people only; which refers to things only; that refers to either people or things. Kim is the one who got the answer. [person] My bike, which has ten speeds, is for sale. [thing] He is the one person that [person] can help you find the ring that [thing] you want. without, unless Do not use the preposition without in place of the conjunction unless. My mother said I can’t go unless [not without] I finish my homework first. Answers: 1. Hercules was extraordinarily strong. 2. He accomplished many tasks that were amazingly hard. 3. Stories of his labors are extremely interesting. 4. They have endured an exceptionally long time. 5. Even today, very young children know his story from television shows. Language Handbook how come In informal situations, how come is often used instead of why. In formal situations, why should always be used. INFORMAL I don’t know how come she didn’t take the garbage out. FORMAL I don’t know why she didn’t take the garbage out. kind of, sort of In informal situations, kind of and sort of are often used to mean “somewhat” or “rather.” In formal English, somewhat or rather is preferred. INFORMAL He seemed kind of embarrassed by our applause. FORMAL He seemed somewhat embarrassed by our applause. learn, teach Learn means “gain knowledge.” Teach means “instruct” or “show how.” He is learning how to play the guitar. His father is teaching him how to play. like, as In informal situations, the preposition like is often used instead of the conjunction as to introduce a clause. In formal situations, as is preferred. Look in the dictionary, as [not like] the teacher suggests. like, as if, as though In informal situations, the preposition like is often used for the compound conjunctions as if or as though. In formal situations, as if or as though is preferred. They acted as if [not like] they hadn’t heard the question. You looked as though [not like] you knew the answer. of Do not use of with other prepositions such as inside, off, and outside. Did anyone fall off [not of] the raft? reason . . . because In informal situations, reason . . . because is often used instead of reason . . . that. In formal situations, use reason . . . that, or revise your sentence. INFORMAL The reason I did well on the test was because I had studied hard. FORMAL The reason I did well on the test was that I had studied hard. some, somewhat Do not use some for somewhat as an adverb. My writing improved somewhat [not some]. Your Turn stationary, stationery The adjective stationary means “in a fixed position.” The noun stationery means “writing paper.” RESOURCE CENTER hisself Hisself is nonstandard English. Use himself. Ira bought himself [not hisself] a tie. Using Adverbs Appropriately Informally, the adjective real is often used as an adverb meaning “extremely.” In formal situations, extremely or another adverb is preferred INFORMAL FORMAL I’m expecting a real important telephone call. I’m expecting an extremely important telephone call. Revise the following sentences by substituting a variety of adverbs for the word real. 1. Hercules was real strong. 2. He accomplished real hard tasks. 3. Stories of his labors are real interesting. Language Handbook 1093 3. They would not play without their teammate could play, too. Answer: They would not play unless their e9nas7_bkm_03b.indd 1093 teammate could play, too. 4. That story learned me something about loyalty. Answer: That story taught me something about loyalty. 5. True friendship is where people value each other as much as themselves. Answer: True friendship means that people value each other as much as themselves. 10/22/07 12:22:15 PM Language Handbook 1093