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Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older,
while others think they should stay at home with the family. Discuss both
views and opinion.
In general, living with a family is a common thing in Asia countries. Especially, in
Taipei city, you need a bigger budget for renting an apartment alone. Therefore,
many people want to stay with parents and it is a good way to save money. Despite,
it could spend a lot of money on renting budget, there are still newly graduated
students would like to be independent without control.
However, it is convenient to get support from a family member, they supply food,
even cook for you, or do the laundry and clean the room, less struggle daily. Some
people get married and have children, grandparents will take care of them, no need
babysitting who unknown to raising your kids.
On the contrary, everything will be controlled by them, house rules and lack of living
skills. Meanwhile, the person who likes to be diverse and challenge, they would
choose to leave the house. In my opinion, it is a better solution for adults. Learning
how to deal with daily issues.
For instance, making yourself dinner that you have to know how to use the oven and
grocery shopping. Furthermore, schedule and in charge personal lifestyle is a terrific
ability and capacity to embrace loneliness and conquer difficulties in daily life.
Meanwhile, facilitate living skills, become more responsible. Overall, parenting is a
great learning process, when an adolescent becomes an adult, basic skills will be
learned from experiences. Without the protection of the family, many confrontations
waiting in our life, we must be prepared to fight for it.
According to some people, youngsters should be motivated to leave their home and
live on their own when they become adults. However, others believe that young
people should stay with their families as long as possible. I personally opine that it is
a wise decision to leave home at the beginning of one’s career, provided that one
does not have any dependent family members. Now, I will discuss both the views in
upcoming paragraphs.
Encouraging young people to leave their homes and be on their own is definitely a
common trend seen nowadays and there are various reasons to support this
argument. First, better job opportunities are available when people move to cities or
other countries. This, therefore, helps in their career development and broadens their
career prospects. Second, people become independent in addition to being confident
and mature, when they leave their homes and live at far places. For example, now
they learn to take decisions on their own, both personally and professionally,
considering their growth and goals .
On the other hand, living with families has its own advantages which cannot be
overlooked. First, people can remain under the guidance of their parents and elder
members of house and develop qualities like respect, caring attitude towards them.
This consequently helps them to stay connected to the roots of our culture and
values. For example, studies have shown that adults who live in their families are
more emotionally attached to them as compared to ones who live at distant places.
Second, they can provide mental and emotional support to their parents whenever
they need it.
Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older,
while others think they should stay at home with the family. Discuss both views and
opinion.
Nowadays, living independent is getting popular among the youngsters. While some
people inspire young adults to live away from hometown for higher education or work,
others insist that children should stay under their guidance. In my opinion, living an
independent live along with the support of the family members will help youngsters to
widen their horizon.
Parents who support their offspring stay independently after a certain age believe
that it helps them to become strong as they start taking their decisions on their own
(IDEA1). They not only cook their own food or meals and wash their utensils, but
also make new friends and acquaintances. In addition, staying away from family
adds the responsibility to manage their own finances by engaging in par-time jobs
and look after their savings from an early age which help them in the long run.
On the other hand, some people opine that children should stay at home and growup with the support of family members. Children learn love and sympathy from
grandparents, discipline from parents and collaboration from siblings. This is often
not possible when they live away from the hometown. (cpmarision of both sides).
Hence, staying home provides them safe and positive atmosphere which is suitable
for other overall development of the child. Moreover, youngsters have a fear of
elders and their parents, this prevents them from indulgence in unwanted activities
like smoking and drinking. Also, staying with parents helps as parents often manage
finances through their monthly income. For example, even though I entered
adulthood year ago I live with my parents since they provide financial support, this
allows me to stay free from economic burden and focus on my college studies
In conclusion, although living with family has money positive impacts, in my opinion,
young ones in the family should encouraged to live an independent life in order to
evolve as a better person.
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