Unconditional love
Hoor was active as well as confident girl in
whole class .She wanted to became a CSP
officer. Her long wavy hair and fair skin color
attracted every one . She joined Css aspirant
group for her vision . Mostly she burned the
midnight oil for study to get job in Css . There
were only 12 members in that group. There
was one leader and 11 members and each and
every member was extremely serious with Css
test . her family trusted her entirely . She
belonged from middle class family. She worked
a lot . We can say like so she was living three
lives at once , her present degree of Masters,
Css preparation and she was good writer as
well as poetess . In class whenever she spoke in
front of any teacher she hit the nail on the
head. She was extremely impressive girl. Once
upon a time she went to Islamabad .She stayed
there 1 month where she meet with Sir Esaa .
Sir Esaa is 15 years older than her. Sir Esaa
guided every member properly for instance :
where to go , what to do , how to study, and so
on. She got rid of from sir Esaa ., she wondered
that Sir Esaa was ill mannered person she
thought ,we all were being treated like slave
rather than normal person. Sir Esaa noticed her
all time and was entirely impressed from her .
In Sunday evening they all were playing game,
where every body allowed to give personality
match compliment to each other .Sonia her
best friend complimented her that
Hoor you are the one who has tolerated a lot. I
have never seen such a girl who performed her
best in all aspects of life .You are Limpid sincere
from personal to professional life even in the
vast crowed of crises and troubles. Every one
was looking to Hoor as a child looks magic with
open eyes and wonder. it was tight spot for
Hoor to listen these words from Sonia in front
of sir Esaa and other members . At the drop of
the head Hoor stood up and spoke that we all
should leave this game and we ought to try
something new . Basically here Hoor didn't
want to get to recall what was in past .but
suddenly assistant of sir Esaa replied Hoor
"No please Hoor if you don’t like this game you
may leave but you are not allowed to snatch us
our wonderful time" Hoor smiled and replied:
No I didn't mean that but have a nice time now
I wanted to go to my bed I knew its early
because I felt a bit under the weather so
please.. Good night all venerable members and
honorable sir as well as assistant . She smiled
and went to her room .Because of her
politeness and moral values she was an apple
of the eye of her team except assistant.
She came inside her room ,locked the door and
was trying to hide her own tears from her self ,
she was alone in the room .Suddenly she
recalled her mother and than called her brother
, her brother didn't pick the call ,again she tried
but no one were replying she guessed might
they all slept. She took book from table and
started reading. She felt uncomfortable closed
the book and recalled her mother and family
and image their current conditions that how
they survived in poverty , her father has lungs
problem and she recalled all family members ,a
cruel brother in law that behaved like his wife
was his mad , she recalled how difficultly her
father earned money for children to provide
them higher education ,suddenly she took
pencil from kit ,held it in fingers and she wrote
memories are trying to kill me. She stayed
silent for a while and slowly gradually she slept
. Sir Esaa was watching photage of CCTV
camera of her room . when she slept . Sir also
got up from his chair and went to bed sir Esaa
could not forget Hoor for a single minute.
When no one is in surroundings he watached
what Hoor was doing in CCTV camera . In the
next morning after breakfast sir came her room
and asked How's you ? And how is your health
? She replied I'm ok and feeling well. Sir said
good nice to listen . Sir Esaa gave her some
flowers and asked about her family ? would she
be comfortable to introduce her family ? She
stood up and opened the door and sit in to the
chair that is near to the door and replied sir "
Sir sorry , my family? Mmmm ; it’s none of your
business. Sir smiled and replied ok. After a little
conversation she requested sir I am getting
late. We have to perform our professional
duties after effect she said I don't have more
time !! Mmm May I go from here ?. sir
wondered and replied yes ;you could . and sir
went to office and rang towards Sonia . After
few days she checked result and received latter
as well as phone call that she was selected and
got top in Css . Everyone was extremely happy
and giving her huge congratulations and Sonia
was asking about treat . After task she came
back from Islamabad and meet with family and
received love ,huge respect, congrats and her
brother named Adam combined all kith kins,
they celebrated party that their beloved Hoor is
CSP officer now . At night she got text massage
from unknown number " My near and dear
Hoor I miss you a lot . I wanna see your
mesmerizing attractive eyes once more I wanna
meet you , I love the way you talk with
confidence and polite way , you are my dream
girl my unconditional love for you I don't dare
to explain your disciplined nature that is full of
moral values .She read the massage and
deleted . Sir Esaa knew all her past history from
Sonia that Hoor were selected in medical test
and got good numbers but her father didn't
allow her to get admission in Chandka
University Larkana for medical studies and her
mother had T.B ( tuberculosis ) due to poverty
and lack of treatment her mother loss her
entire health and left her alone forever. Still
her father has lungs problem . Her beloved and
young sister named Aliya died in car accident .
Sonia informed sir Esaa that she passed her
whole time in crises. Sir Esaa was trying to hide
his feelings ( unconditional love ) from every
body . Sir Esaa came with cake ,flowers and a
gift to Hoor’s house . Hoor became shocked
and welcomed sir and received flowers and
cake , communication was going well for a
while sir informed Hoor that " My dear Hoor
when I saw you this thought came to me , life is
like a hot sun and you are the soothing shade .
Will you marry me and Hoor please accept my
unconditional love , I will rub out your whole
sorrows and you will be part of me and I will be
part of you that will make us both perfect to
live a happy life , I will be your life , you will be
mine , I will be your defender you will be my
defender . I hope you will accept my
unconditional love . she was silent and after a
while she took glass of water from table and
started to gulp it .she stood up and opened the
window and replied “Sir I respect you and I am
honored but my self esteem would not allow
me to take this car as gift from you . So I refuse
you Its very expensive And I request you to go
away from my life please ,
I will never accept your proposal. . sir Esaa
became surprised . Hoor was looking to the
door . Sir Esaa understood and came close to
Hoor he put his fingers in her hair and gently
pushed himself towards Hoor .and politely said
to Hoor " I will wait for you till I am alive. He
left the room and started driving his own car
with full speed ., feeling upset .After few days
her Friend invited her to home for celebration
of Csp officer. She felt entirely fine and she
share every secret with her. She enjoyed with
her whole night and when she wanted to came
back her friend showed her family massages
and informed that they wanna see your
marriage . When she heard about the word
marriage she became fearsome and worried
and according to Hoor married life means load ,
responsibilities and to became a servant of
some one else to bind in shackles of slavery
instead to see second side of married life that
its part of life , its like two person in one
umbrella. Its real life , well she came back at
home she saw that her father is on bed and
extremely ill she went hospital with her father ,
doctor examined her father and took signature
from her regarding checkup and told her might
her father won't live more . She got upset a lot .
She became depressed and gave complete time
to her father with treat and care., but fever was
increasing day by day she was talking to her
father on social issues and some sort of
business management her father held her hand
,asked what is the degree of my fever right now
, she was looking father with love and replied
its about to reach 104 degree don’t upset my
beloved father I’m with you , nothing will
happen .Suddenly her father felt dizzy and she
called doctor . Till doctor came her father died .
Every one came for condolences sir Esaa came
with family and was feeling sorry about her
father . After one month one of the friend of his
brother sent proposal named Yousuf. Yousuf's
mother came with arrogance and proud and
said to her elder brother and his wife that my
son love your sister Hoor . It’s a really pleasant
for you all and its Courtesy of my son and you
have to be thankful for my son to accept an
orphan girl . Hoor’s brother replied thank you
aunty for your courtesy now you can go to your
home we will respond you after some time .
Hoor explained all in front of Sonia . Sonia
replied Hoor wait for right time , still all the
powers were to God , He will do good for you ,
And Hoor don't you think so Yousuf's mother
behavior was cheap and illiterate . wait and
leave all in front of your lord , surely He would
do best for you . Hoor understood and agreed
with Sonia . Hoor came back at home and
prayed to lord for appropriate proposal . Sonia
rung to sir Esaa and explained all to sir Esaa and
told that Hoor was bit confused . sir Esaa
shared his feelings with his mother , and
requested her to please go to Hoor’s family and
ask about proposal . His family came and Hoor’s
family and her brother and his wife welcomed
and listen them properly .She requested them
with humble and respect. And finally she said I
will wait for your response , hope so Esaa
became happy from your decision , Sonia rang
to Hoor’s brother without informing Hoor she
talked with her brother and said sir Esaa has
unconditional love for Hoor . sir Esaa is most
positive minded person and he would never
make your sister Hoor upset , please Brother
you have to think rationally, don't choose
arrogant person , choose right person with your
wit . your single mistake could put extremely
worse catastrophe in ones life .after a while he
came to Hoor and asked what’s your opinion
about Esaa , Hoor smiled and she could not
help her laugh with slowly , softly , and politely
she replied yes , I agree, she gently and sweetly
smiled , than she became wife of Esaa , Esaa
became extremely happy and went with her
wife to Paris for honeymoon, Sonia was glad to
see the prosperous life of Hoor. Hoor was
telling her story to her cute baby girl about her
husband Esaa. Esaa came in to room kissed hid
wife and asked Hoor why you rejected me first
? Hoor bow down her eyes with love and
replied “to get your unconditional love is not as
easy as you wondered” . Esaa replied “life lived
somehow for unconditional love is life never
wasted”.