Recall what we know: What makes a poem a poem? Recall what we know: What is form in poetry? sonnet epistle limerick haiku cinquain ballad quotella open form blank verse concrete sestina epic ode villanelle nonet acrostic tricube dramatic monologue ekphrasis fibonacci ghazal palinode freeform Recall what we know: What do these keywords mean? Stanza Caesura Refrain Rhyme Scheme Enjambment Octave End-Stopping Tercet Recall what we know: What do these keywords mean? Stanza Caesura Refrain Rhyme Scheme Enjambment Octave End-Stopping Tercet New Keyword: Anaphora Definition: A device that repeats words at the beginning of successive (in a row) clauses or sentences. Example: It was the best of times, it was the worst of times, it was the age of wisdom, it was the age of foolishness, it was the epoch of belief, it was the epoch of incredulity, it was the season of Light, it was the season of Darkness, it was the spring of hope, it was the winter of despair, Recall what we know: What do these keywords mean? Stanza Caesura Refrain Rhyme Scheme Enjambment Octave End-Stopping Tercet New Keyword: Anaphora Definition: A device that repeats words at the beginning of successive (in a row) clauses or sentences. Example: It was the best of times, it was the worst of times, it was the age of wisdom, it was the age of foolishness, it was the epoch of belief, it was the epoch of incredulity, it was the season of Light, it was the season of Darkness, it was the spring of hope, it was the winter of despair. Consolidate understanding: What makes a poem a poem? poetry form ballad, sonnet, epic dramatic monologue etc. language conceit This is by no means exhaustive, but it helps to know poems share many descriptive writing techniques… Descriptive prose LANGUAGE – word choice Imagery: symbolism, metaphor, personification, zoomorphism, hyperbole, pathetic fallacy, allusion sound: alliteration, assonance, consonance, sibilance, euphony, cacophony, onomatopoeia structure (many for sound effects) rhyme, half rhyme, internal rhyme, eye rhyme, STRUCTURE: cyclical, chronological, metre, rhythm flash back, tense, internal rhyme, lines and stanzas punctuation, narrative structure, end-stopped lines rhetorical devices: juxtaposition, enjambment (run on) repetition, anaphora etc. apostrophe caesura, volta form novel, novella, vignette, literary non-fiction etc. structure sentences types & paragraphs Big Question 2: But does it contain poetic techniques? Task 5 continued. Let’s organise our thinking… Extracts from the writing slim, agile, sneaking legs lurked beneath the shadow of the trees as if covered by soot an orange mask of fur thick forest canopy a row of teeth like curved daggers eyes glistened a warm ochre a cunning grin A fiery brush lithe enough to curl and loop like ribbon sink sharp teeth What ‘crafting’ technique has been used? Is it a technique used in poetry? Put learning into practice: Adapt descriptive writing to create a poetic form Task 1a. Turn this descriptive writing into an octave (you must re-rewrite it as a single stanza of just 8 lines – that doesn’t mean 8 sentences, remember). You can change words as required. Try to use these 5 structural techniques: 1. enjambment, 2. anaphora, 3. caesura, 4. a rhyme, 5. end-stopped line It came on slim, agile, sneaking legs. It lurked beneath the shadow of the trees. Each leg was darkened from the bottom, as if covered by soot, like little black socks. And its head, covered by an orange mask of fur, gazed up into the sky through the gaps of the thick forest canopy. Drafting page! It came on slim, agile, sneaking legs. It lurked beneath the shadow of the trees. Each leg was darkened from the bottom, as if covered by soot, like little black socks. And its head, covered by an orange mask of fur, gazed up into the sky through the gaps of the thick forest canopy. Task 1b. Compare this octave to the one you created. • • Has this octave included all five structural elements? Label the ones you can find. The Fox On slim, agile, sneaking legs it came. It lurked Beneath shadows, untamed. From the bottom, each leg was darkened by soot, From the bottom, little black socks. From the top, its head, An orange mask of fur, Gazed up Into the sky. end-stopped line a rhyme caesura anaphora enjambment Task 1c. Label your own Octave to show that you included all five. Task 2. Discuss why the writer structured the octave in this way. • • • What is the effect of leaving ‘It lurked’ on the end of the line and starting the next with ‘Beneath’? Why do it? What is the effect of rhyming ‘it came’ and ‘untamed’? What is the effect of the anaphora, repeating the first words of the line ‘From the bottom’? The Fox a rhyme enjambment On slim, agile, sneaking legs it came. It lurked Beneath shadows, untamed. caesura From the bottom, each leg was darkened by soot, From the bottom, little black socks. From the top, its head, end-stopped line An orange mask of fur, Gazed up Into the sky. anaphora You need to • notice how poets craft poems • say what techniques they use on purpose • explain what the effects are… From Prose to Poetry The Fox On slim, agile, sneaking legs it came. It lurked Beneath shadows, untamed. From the bottom, each leg was darkened by soot, From the bottom, little black socks. From the top, its head, An orange mask of fur, The Fox Gazed up Into the sky. It came on slim, agile, sneaking legs. It lurked beneath the shadow of the trees. Each leg was darkened from . the bottom, as if covered by soot, like little black socks. And its head, covered by an orange mask of fur, gazed up into the sky through the gaps of the thick forest canopy. Revise what we know: poetic form Form is the overarching shape and structure of poetry. sonnet epistle ode limerick acrostic cinquain Fibonacci ballad blank verse sestina haiku concrete epic open form quotella narrative The red set forms of poetry will feature in ‘Power & Conflict’ so research these if you haven’t already… nonet villanelle tricube dramatic monologue ekphrasis palinode freeform Task 3a. Revise poetic form What form of poem is this? There was a young man of Nice, Who insisted on bathing in grease. He slid through the house, Tormenting his spouse, ‘Til she hid in the oven for peace. Recall poetic form It’s a limerick! It’s a limerick! Short humorous poems, often silly or naughty, with a lyrical quality. Sometimes they have an ironic or philosophical statement. There was a young man of Nice, Who insisted on bathing in grease. Task 3b. Check the rules of form have been followed in this example: He slid through the house, five-line poem triplet split by a couplet (aabba) Lines 1, 2, and 5 rhyme (usually 7–10 syllables each line) Lines 3 and 4 rhyme (usually 5–7 syllables each line) Tormenting his spouse, ‘Til she hid in the oven for peace. Task 4a. Revise poetic form What form of poem is this? A lone penny lying on the ground does not know its value is less than the nickel beside it since both are discarded among the street trash trampled over by so many all day long Recall poetic form It’s a Nonet! A lone penny lying on the ground does not know its value is less than the nickel beside it since both are discarded among the street trash trampled over by so many all day long Nonet A more contemporary version of traditional Japanese poetry, like haiku or tanka, the nonet poetic form has a simple group of nine architecture. Task 4b. Check the rules of form have been followed in this example: There is no direction on subject matter or rule around rhyming, but there is a specific syllable and line count. Form: 9 line poem Syllable count per line is 9–8–7–6–5–4– 3–2–1 Task 5a. Revise poetic form What form of poem is this? Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day? by William Shakespeare What form of It's a Shakespearean Sonnet! poem is of this? Task 5b. Check the rules form have been followed in this example The Sonnet has roots in Italy. Shall I compare thee Usually about love a summer’s day? to It has 14 lines The first 12 lines are divided into 3 quatrains by TheWilliam quatrainsShakespeare have an alternate rhyme scheme: ABAB, CDCD, EFEF, GG The rhyme scheme is regular the lines have 10 syllables, 5 iambic feet The last two lines form a rhyming couplet fyi There are other styles of sonnet as well, such as a Petrarchan sonnet, which follow different structural rules.