Opinion Writing & Trial Memoranda Feedback Session & Some More Tips “You had me at ‘Hello.’” Start Right. Frame the issue well. State it as broad as possible so that you don’t leave any issues behind. But don’t make it so broad as would be difficult to follow. Be clear and simple. Steer clear of legalese. Don’t try to impress my the use of sophisticated language. An introduction is not required; however, if using one, make sure it is (i) relevant; (ii) catchy; and (iii) it will eventually support your case. “Elementary, my dear Watson.” Remember your basics. Cite the law. Cite jurisprudence interpreting the law. Apply the law and jurisprudence to the facts of the case. “Keep your friends close, but your enemies closer.” Plus Points… Address the points that may be raised by the other side and manage your client’s expectations. Show right and justice. Ask for the proper and specific relief. “If you build it, he will come.” Develop your thought well. Avoid making logical leaps. Always ask yourself: “Why?” and “How?” When you’re through, ask: “Why not?” “What we’ve got here is a failure to communicate.” Language is key. Am I using the right words? Am I using the right grammar? Am I using the right tone? Am I conveying my ideas clearly? “Frankly, my dear, I don’t give a damn.” Edit. Edit. Edit. Cut the unnecessary statements of fact. Use only the parts of jurisprudence that is specifically relevant. “May the Force Be With You.”