Writing to Argue and Persuade Icons key: For more detailed instructions, see the Getting Started presentation Flash activity. These activities are not editable. Extension activities 1 of 23 Web addresses Teacher’s notes included in the Notes Page Accompanying worksheet © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Learning Objectives In this unit you will… Be taught to write a successful counter-argument Write informatively by giving a balanced analysis Analyse issues from different perspectives Practise writing persuasively 2 of 23 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 How to inform and argue People argue, inform and persuade through various forms of writing and speaking. For example: radio discussions essays letters newspaper articles interviews formal reports chat shows leaflets. Can you think of any other arenas or media in which people argue their point of view? 3 of 23 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Introduction to writing to argue I can’t believe you think that foxhunting is a sport, Lei. It’s barbaric and should never be allowed to happen! I really don’t see what the big deal is, Megan. It’s just a fun passtime and foxes are farm pests so it’s useful… Who do you think is right? How could Megan and Lei improve their arguments? 4 of 23 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Writing to argue Megan and Lei could improve their arguments by making counter-arguments. This is done by acknowledging the other person’s argument and then countering it with facts, e.g. Yes, x is true BUT so is y AND MORE IMPORTANTLY z. Yes, foxhunting does control pests but it is a painful way for the fox to die. And hunts encourage violence and brutality. Yes, foxhunting may be painful for the fox but so is death by a trap. Also hunts create many jobs in rural communities. 5 of 23 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Foxhunting Which girl has made the best argument? 6 of 23 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Whaling Read the text below and pick out the key arguments. Then write a counter-argument in response. Remember to use the formula: Yes, x is true BUT so is y AND MORE IMPORTANTLY z. Whaling is wrong and has been banned, but it still occurs in some parts of the world illegally. It is endangering many species of whale which are essential parts of the marine food chain. The whales are killed using explosive harpoons. This is a horrifically cruel practice because it can take hours for the whales to die. Whale meat products are also full of toxins which are harmful to humans, so whales are not even a good source of food. 7 of 23 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Informative writing Think about the following questions: 1. Should parents be allowed to smack their own children? 2. Should animal testing for medical research be allowed? 3. Should 16-year-olds be given the right to vote? Do you have an opinion on any of them? In your KS3 test you will need to show that you can view an issue from more than one perspective. This can be difficult when you feel very strongly about the subject, but it is an important skill to learn. 8 of 23 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Informative writing When you are asked to write informatively in your KS3 exams you will need to accurately describe both the advantages and disadvantages of a particular situation, i.e. you will have to give a balanced analysis. When you write an informative piece you must present the issue fairly and show that you can see a subject from more than one perspective – unlike Megan and Lei: Foxhunting is cruel! Foxhunting creates jobs! Remember: there are two sides to everything! 9 of 23 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 CCTV cameras Read this text about CCTV cameras: CCTV cameras seem to be everywhere. But are they a protection or a plague? If you are a driver, you’ll know how irritating speed cameras can be, positioned on nearly every major road in Britain. They are meant to stop you from driving too fast. However, other types of camera can be useful in preventing burglary and street crime. How does the writer try to present a balanced analysis of CCTV cameras? 10 of 23 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Should animals be kept in captivity? Use the grid below to write down all of the arguments for and against keeping animals in captivity. Yes 11 of 23 No © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Should animals be kept in captivity? Using the grid you made, write an article which informatively details both the advantages and disadvantages of zoos. Remember: try to hide your own views for now. 12 of 23 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Writing to inform and argue When you have an opinion to express, there are good and bad ways of arguing your case. The most effective way to argue is by presenting your readers with a balanced analysis, similar to the way you have been learning to write informatively. This shows that you know there are two sides to the argument. And it shows you are willing to consider the views of others before coming to your own conclusions. You will also need to give reasons for your conclusions; it is no good having an opinion if it cannot be explained! 13 of 23 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Writing to persuade You should now feel comfortable presenting arguments by writing informatively. However, you also need to be able to write persuasively in your KS3 exams. Persuasive writing is an important skill because it will help you to convince your readers that your opinion is the right one through the language you use and the facts you provide. I want to write a persuasive letter to my local MP to ask her to ban foxhunting on private land… 14 of 23 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Credit cards Read the extract below which presents a balanced view of credit card usage. It is currently informative writing. Credit cards provide consumers with the funds to buy those things which are beyond their immediate means. With a credit card, it is no longer necessary for shoppers to carry around large sums of cash. Of course they have their disadvantages. Many people rely on their credit cards and find themselves spending more than they can repay, which results in huge debts with high interest rates. 1. How has the writer managed to present a balanced view? 2. How do you think readers will respond to this writing? 15 of 23 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Credit cards The balanced view of credit cards could, however, be altered to reveal the writer’s personal view: Credit cards provide consumers with the funds to buy those things which are beyond their means. With a credit card, it is no longer necessary for shoppers to carry around large sums of cash, but but they theycannot cannotsee seetheir their money being money beingdwindled dwindled away. away. Many vulnerable vulnerablepeople peoplecome cometotorely relyon ontheir theircredit credit cards and find themselves spending much much more more than than they they can ever ever afford affordtotorepay. repay.This Thisresults resultsininhuge hugedebts debtswith with ridiculously high ridiculously highinterest interestrates ratesand andserious serious stress stress for for the poorpoor the naivenaive shopper. shopper. The writer uses emotive language (language that causes strong feelings) to sound persuasive. 16 of 23 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Credit cards Rewrite this extract to convince readers that credit cards are useful and advantageous for shoppers. Credit cards provide consumers with the funds to buy those things which are beyond their immediate means. With a credit card, it is no longer necessary for shoppers to carry around large sums of cash. Of course they have their disadvantages. Many people rely on their credit cards and find themselves spending more than they can repay which results in huge debts with high interest rates. Try to use emotive language. Think of what may concern your readers and offer them reassurance. 17 of 23 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Persuasive statements Different techniques are used by writers to produce persuasive arguments. 1. It is is commonly commonlyaccepted accepted that that animals animals areare happier when out in wide open spaces. 2. Everyone Everyone knows knowsthat thatkeeping keepinganimals animalsininzoos improves zoos improves their chances their chances of survival. of survival. 3. No one one can candoubt doubtthat thatzoos zoosare arecruel cruelplaces. places. Although the statements above present different opinions, they do so in a similar way. What do the sentences have in common and why may this help to persuade readers? 18 of 23 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Persuasive questions What is the purpose of these questions? 1. What is the point in keeping animals caged up for the pleasure of humans? 2. If animals are so mistreated in zoos then why do zoos remain so popular? Do you know what these types of questions are called? Can you think of your own similar questions? 19 of 23 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Rhetorical questions activity 20 of 23 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Factual information and statistics Another way to persuade readers is to provide them with factual information (dates, names and numbers) backed up with statistics. This makes the writer appear very knowledgeable. Can you pick out the factual information and statistics in this extract? The Banking Bureau carried out its audit across 72 insurance companies and banks. By 1st June this year, it had reviewed around sixty per cent of those insurance companies and banks which offer ROT services and more than nine out of ten banks which provide services at Tiers 2, 3 and 4 of the now widely accepted 4 Tier Model. Note: you will need to use the evidence provided in your KS3 exams to back up your persuasive writing. 21 of 23 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Writing to inform or persuade 22 of 23 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Writing a persuasive letter Should animal testing be banned for cosmetic research? Write a letter to the director of a cosmetics company to persuade them to stop testing on animals. Include some persuasive techniques and write in an appropriate tone and style. Try to anticipate their responses and offer counter-arguments. 23 of 23 © Boardworks Ltd 2006