Revising Versus Editing Revising (Wouldn’t it sound better?) Editing (Wouldn’t it look better?) Adding, changing or deleting parts of your text to help the writing flow. Substituting more vivid words for overused words. Coming up with an interesting lead that hooks your reader. Coming up with a conclusion that sums things up. Adding more descriptive details and explanations. Making sure the organization of ideas will make sense to your reader. Come read with us! Visit JustTake20.org for more fun reading activities! Making sure words are appropriately capitalized. Correcting misspelled words. Improving the quality of your writing. Adding, deleting or changing punctuation to help guide your reader’s understanding. Helping your reader follow your ideas easily. Indenting your paragraphs. Making sure each paragraph starts with a topic sentence and ends with a transition to the next paragraph. Just Take 20 is funded by the Florida Department of Education and managed by Just Read, Florida! and the Bureau of Family and Community Outreach.