Information on how to Write a Lab Report What it's All About? As a student your understanding of physics or science, and your ability to design, conduct, and communicate the results of an experiment is the focus of the evaluation. Your final product will be a formal lab report written much like a research report that one might find in a scientific journal or magazine*. This report will communicate your purpose, background understanding, procedure and findings, and conclusions. This report must be written as concisely and clearly as possible so that the reader can grasp the material quickly and could accurately repeat or expand on your research. The formal lab report is thus, the critical document which reflects your success. For this reason, it is important that you understand exactly what should be included in the formal lab report and how it should be put together. What should the Lab Report be Like - A Term Paper or an Essay? a. Grammar is important. If you use computer grammar checkers, be aware that they are probably not yet able to handle scientific style. Notice especially subject/verb agreement and pronoun/antecedent agreement. b. Spelling is important. Use spell check, but be aware that most spelling checkers do not include many scientific terms. Copy unfamiliar terms with great care. A few letters can make a big difference in a scientific term. c. Accuracy is important. If your report says something you did not intend, then either you did not understand what you were doing, or your reader will not know what you were doing (or both). d. Clarity is important. Do not assume that science (or an essay topic) is too complicated for you to understand. If you do not understand what you have written, then no one else will understand your report either. If you have filled your report with scientific terms and complicated sentences in order to sound sophisticated, then you have probably succeeded only in sounding muddled. e. In a Science Lab Report, pack sentences with information. Add adjectives, adverbs, and prepositional phrases to increase the amount of specific information. f. In most writing, the active voice is preferred. For some aspects of scientific writing, active voice is also preferred as it is less wordy and usually clearer. g. A Science Lab Report is not creative writing. Stay within the limits of your study or experiment. h. A Science Lab Report follows a format using subtopics or sections to distinguish expectations, results, the meaning of the results, those aspects that are controlled by the researcher, and those aspects that are a result of the activity. Lab Organization and Content: • Title Page • Introduction • Experiment • Results: Calculations, Tables and Figures • Discussion and Conclusion: Discussion of Results These sections should be clearly titled and organized in the exact manner as listed above. Section Exposition: Title Page - includes a meaningful title for your lab report, your name and that of your lab partner(s). Introduction: A series of paragraphs in which you describe the scientific principles which you are modeling and explicitly state the goal of your investigation; the purpose should be clearly stated. The introduction should identify the basic scientific principals and give background information (historical and/or theoretical) along with a what-if question. A good guideline is to include the phrase "we will investigate the effect of ____________ (some controllable and modifiable variable) upon the ____________ (a measurable variable)." Procedural steps should not be discussed in the purpose section. The introduction should end with a purpose statement (sometimes in the form of a hypothesis or null hypothesis): one sentence which specifically states the question your experiment was designed to answer. e. g. The purpose of this investigation was to determine the effects of gravity on a pendulum swing in the presence of resistive air resistance. (as a purpose statement) or The hypothesis was that current moving in a conductive material will generate a magnetic field around that material (as a hypothesis) Experiment: In this section you will describe in narrative form, how you did the experiment, including experimental design (picture of experimental set up), methods of gathering and analyzing data, and types of control. This section must include complete details and be written clearly enough to allow readers to duplicate the experiment if they wish. This section is written in past tense because you have already done the experiment. It should not be written in the form of instructions or as a list of materials as in a laboratory manual. Again, it is written as a narrative describing, either in first person active voice or in passive voice, what you did. e.g., (first person active voice) I filled six petri plates with agar. (Passive voice) Six petri plates were filled with agar. Results: In the section we are to find your observations, data (with no interpretations or conclusions about what they mean), Tables and graphs. Raw data will probably be most effective in table format, with the highlights summarized in graph form. Your data should be recorded in a neat and orderly fashion. You will be provided data sheets for selected experiments (as found from the handouts). You must include the units of measurement on your data sheets and throughout your calculations and data recordings. Once again, the interpretation of your data and interpretation of any statistical test applied to the data should appear in the Discussion and Conclusion section. Please Note: It is ESSENTIAL that you accurately report your findings and not manufacture data to fit preconceptions. "The greatest advances in science occur when a careful researcher gets reproducible data which conflict with accepted notions". You will be graded on how you analyze and interpret your data not on whether it agrees with your expectations. Discussion and Conclusion: This section reports the importance of your results. This is where you discuss your analysis and interpretations of your results. Explain what you think your data means. Further, discuss how any changes to or problems with the experimental procedure may have affected the results. Did your data confirm or conflict with your initial expectations? What were possible sources of error? How did this error change the expected results? Be particularly specific in answering this last question by stating how the results change and in what manner they changed. Sometimes results do not turn out as you expect. Describe patterns and relationships that emerged. Compare your results to that of other members of your class. Propose a mechanism to account for any strange results. Interpretations should be supported whenever possible by references to the lab handout, your text, and/or other studies from the literature, or books that can be properly documented. Comment on and discuss the relationship portrayed by any plotted data from the Results section. Do not merely restate your data section; rather, make generalizations - e.g., "as the initial velocity is doubled, the stopping distance increases by a factor of approximately four." Since you have plotted data, state the equation which describes the data and discuss its significance. Use a paragraph to discuss any errors which might have been associated with your experimentation and to make some suggestions which would improve the actual experimental procedure. If your lab handout includes questions to be answered, integrate your responses into a logical discussion in this section, rather than answering them one by one. Do not spend enormous amounts of time explaining data that cannot be explained! Most importantly, you should offer "supported" statements or what was determined from doing the experiment. In other words, tell me what your conclusions were with supporting evidence confirming your beliefs. Common Errors and Pitfalls to Avoid: There are a number of errors, which are commonly made, that you would be wise to avoid. Such errors include the following: Failure to write a formal lab report: Failure to label the sections of the lab report such that it is not clear whether a given part of it is reporting on the procedure, the data or the conclusions Tendency to place procedural statements in the purpose (e.g., "we will then measure the photo gate time at point A and calculate the speed, repeating the measurements three times to insure accuracy") and in the Conclusion section (e.g., "we measured the photo gate time and calculated the instantaneous speed and then found the kinetic energy and total mechanical energy..."). Failure to write a solid and lengthy theoretical background and tendency to merely state a short hypothesis (e.g., "we believe that the higher the initial height, the greater the speed at point B."). The theory should be a lengthy section in which you demonstrate that you know how a wealth of physics applies to your chosen scenario. Failure to include a detailed procedure would provide sufficient direction for anyone to follow. The steps should be included in a narrative form where there is enough detail for a person who is unfamiliar with the equipment to conduct the same study. Tendency to use the first person in the procedure section - "I then placed selected the rectangle tool. Then I drew a box by dragging on the screen. I then ..." Tendency to merely restate your measured data in the Discussion and Conclusion section (e.g., "we measured the photo gate times to be 0.0125 s when the height was 0.5 m and we measured the time to be 0.008 s when the height was 0.15 m"). Tendency to make very general conclusions which (while perhaps true) have nothing to do with the idea behind the lab report (e.g., "This project was fun and we learned a lot. We hope that we can do more projects like this."). In general, all of these errors and pitfalls are usually the result of either not following this lab report writing procedure or writing the lab at the last minute (which subsequently leads to a tendency to not follow directions). Therefore, give yourself plenty of time and take the time and effort needed to be acquainted with these guidelines described herein.