Combining Sentences When should you combine sentences? How to combine sentences Inserting words Inserting phrases Using and, but, or or Using subordinate clauses Review A Review B When should you combine sentences? Wouldn’t it be boring to have the exact same weather... every... single... day? When should you combine sentences? Too many short sentences Reading the same type of sentence over and over again can also be boring. Notice how too many short sentences make Now see how sentence combining makes the this paragraph boring read. paragraph shorter andto more interesting. Thomas Edison created a talking doll doll.in He1894. created The doll would a nursery poema the talking doll recite in 1894. The dollrhyme wouldorrecite when crank or in poem. its back wasthe turned. nurserya rhyme It said wordsThe when a talking andtalking Edisondoll opened crank indoll its was backvery was popular, turned. The was a factory. very popular. Edison opened a factory. [End of Section] How to combine sentences Inserting words Combine short sentences by taking a key key word word from one sentence and inserting it into the other. Ken Ken gave gave me me aa beautiful beautiful pink rose. The rose.rose was pink. pink. You may have to change the form of the word. Roses Roses come come from from thorny shrubs.shrubs. The shrubs have thorns. thorny thorns How to combine sentences Inserting words On Your Own Combine each pair of sentences by inserting a word from the second sentence into the first sentence. Hints in parentheses tell how to change word forms. 1. Peanuts are a crop of many warm regions. They are a major crop. 2. The oil from peanuts is used in dressings. The dressings are for salads. 3. Peanuts are a food for snacking. Peanuts are good for your health. (Change health to healthful.) 4. Try some peanuts today. They taste good. (Change taste to tasty.) [End of Section] Exercise 4 Text p. 460 How to combine sentences Inserting phrases You can also combine sentences by inserting a phrase from one sentence into another. Brown bears gather in groups groups. near Theyrivers. gather near near rivers. rivers. Tina spotted During her hike a snake. Tina spotted She spotted a snake. it during during her her hike. hike. How to combine sentences Inserting phrases On Your Own Combine each pair of sentences by inserting a phrase from one sentence into the other sentence. Some sentences may be combined in different ways. Add commas where necessary. 1. The pony has brown spots. The spots are on its back. 2. We left for the movie theater. We left after dinner. 3. Enrique plays in the school orchestra. Enrique is a master of the violin. 4. The vines should be trimmed. These are the vines growing on the fence. [End of Section] Exercise 5 Text pp. 462-3 How to combine sentences Using and, but, or or You can combine sentences by using the coordinating conjunctions and, but, or or. And shows similarity. Katie and Tyrone both enjoy crossword puzzles. But shows a contrast. Katie likes crossword puzzles but hates word-find puzzles. Or shows a choice. Tyrone or Katie will help you solve that crossword puzzle. How to combine sentences Using and, but, or or You can combine sentences by using and, but, or or to create a compound subject. Step 1. Look for sentences that have the same verb. Kangaroos have have pouches. pouches. have pouches. Koalas have pouches. Same verb Step 2. Join the subjects with a connecting word such as and, but, or or. Kangaroos and koalas have pouches. How to combine sentences Using and, but, or or You can combine sentences by using and, but, or or to create a compound verb. Step 1. Look for sentences that have the same subject. Carlos Carloswill willgo goto tothe themovies. movies. Same subject Carlos willplay playsoccer soccerin inthe thepark. park. Carlos will Step 2. Join the verbs with a connecting word such as and, but, or or. Carlos will go to the movies or play soccer in the park. How to combine sentences Using and, but, or or On Your Own Combine each pair of sentences by forming a compound subject or a compound verb. 1. Parakeets make good pets. Gerbils make good pets. 2. The question confused me. It did not trick me. 3. Mara eats well every day. Mara exercises every day. 4. Maples grow well in this area. Birches grow well too. 5. Jason may bring the snacks. Heidi may bring them. [End of Section] Exercise 6 Text p. 464 How to combine sentences Using and, but, or or If the two sentences are related and equally important, you can form a compound sentence. To make a compound sentence, join the two sentences with a comma and a coordinating conjunction. bread. and II made Jan sliced the bread, made the the soup. soup. Brett Bret likes likesmath, math.but Greta Greta prefers prefers science. science. How to combine sentences Using and, but, or or On Your Own Combine each pair of sentences by forming a compound sentence. 1. Nelia mowed the grass. Burt pulled the weeds. 2. The bakery has already closed. The café is still open. 3. Planets do not give off light of their own. Stars do. 4. We can keep the old system of measurement. We can switch to the metric system. [End of Section] Exercise 7 Text p. 465 How to combine sentences Using subordinate clauses Another way to combine sentences is to turn one sentence into a subordinate clause and attach it to the other sentence, an independent clause. Independent clause Subordinate clause walls while I cleaned the while I cleaned thefloor. floor Amy painted the walls. I cleaned the floor. Attach the subordinate clause The subordinate clause adds information by telling what else was going on while Amy was painting. When you combine sentences this way, you get a complex sentence. How to combine sentences Using subordinate clauses You can create a subordinate clause by replacing the subject of an independent clause with who, which, or that. Subject Mr. Garcia is a leader hashas helped many people. leader. who who He many people. hashelped helped many people Attach the subordinate clause Subject bank, which feeds thousands. which feeds thousands. He runs the local food bank. It feeds thousands. Attach the subordinate clause How to combine sentences Using subordinate clauses You can also make a subordinate clause by adding a word that indicates time, such as after, before, since, when, or while. The fans were happy their team made a agoal. when their team goal. Their team made amade goal. happy. when Attach the subordinate clause Sometimes you’ll have to change the other sentence slightly before inserting the subordinate clause. After wewatched watched the match,Then we had lunch. after we the match We watched the match. we had lunch. Attach the subordinate clause How to combine sentences Using subordinate clauses You can also make a subordinate clause by adding a word that indicates place, such as where. where the treegrew. grew. A shed now stands on the spot. spot where the tree The tree grew there. Attach the subordinate clause Rome, where theysaw saw the Vatican. They went to Rome. where theythe saw the Vatican. They Vatican there. Attach the subordinate clause How to combine sentences Using subordinate clauses On Your Own Combine each pair of sentences by using a subordinate clause. The hints in parentheses tell you how to start the subordinate clause. 1. Dee received pearls. She graduated. (Use when.) 2. The pearl is a gem. It is made by certain kinds of oysters. (Use that.) 3. A pearl becomes round. It is formed in the soft part of the oyster. (Use after.) 4. Beautiful pearls are found in tropical seas. The best pearl oysters live there. (Use where.) [End of Section] Review A Combine each of the following pairs of sentences. The hints in parentheses will help you decide what combining method to use. 1. The baby gave me a smile. The smile was bright. (Insert a key word.) 2. Mother has installed new blinds. They block the bright afternoon sun. (Use which to begin a subordinate clause.) 3. Susie plays the drums. She plays in the school band. (Insert a phrase.) 4. The downpour began at midnight. It was still raining the next morning. (Make a compound sentence.) [End of Section] Review B Using all of the sentence-combining skills you have learned, revise and rewrite the following paragraph without changing its original meaning. Dr. James Naismith invented the game of basketball. He invented it in the late 1800s. The first basketball teams started in 1891. They had nine players instead of five. The first basket was a peach basket. A player had to retrieve the ball. This happened when a score was made. [End of Section] The End