Issues with the Passage Analysis
 Quotes were improperly led into or not grammatically correct
 The claim and/or the essay itself did not answer the question
presented in the prompt
 The claim did not cover all of the needed components
 Incorrect use of ellipses
 Contractions, 1st person, sentences ending with prepositions
 Failure to focus on the passage itself
 Wordy
 Failed to employ E.T.A.
 Quote listing/lumping
 One word transitions between paragraphs
 1st mention of author/character not having the full name
 Writing about the literature in the past tense
 “This quote”
 Tone, diction, syntax
 You do not need citations
 Blazier’s Symbols….