UNDERGRADUATE CURRICULUM COMMITTEE 223 SECOND-YEAR WRITING SEMINAR COURSE PROPOSAL FORM 1. List the full title of this course (e.g. HIST 223 Second-Year Writing Seminar 3-3-0): MLAN 223 Second-Year Writing Seminar 3-3-0: From Beethoven to Brecht: Interplays between Words and Music 2. Provide the Catalogue Description to be used for this course (you may use the description listed in “FAQ about 223” as your department’s description or you may adapt it to fit your department’s needs): MLAN 223 invites students to create and participate in a collaborative research community formed around a stimulating course topic drawn from the professor's area of cultural expertise (in translation). A sample MLAN 223 course is “From Beethoven to Brecht: Interplays in Words and Music.” The seminar encourages students to continue practicing and reflecting upon the conventions of reading and writing appropriate for liberal arts learning, in particular the ability to evaluate, synthesize, and present primary and secondary sources in a research project. As it introduces students to the conventions of academic research and its presentation in both oral and written forms, the course's focal point is the creation of a 10-15 page formal research paper. [Course description revised 12/05 per UCC recommendation.] 3. Briefly (one paragraph), how will the curriculum benefit from this particular offering of 223? Because of its interdisciplinary focus, this course will appeal to a broad cross-section of students. For example, the class should prove particularly attractive to the increasing number of music students at Christopher Newport. However, course subject matter will be treated so that it will also be accessible to those with no musical training. As evidenced by the musical and literary readings on the attached syllabus, the relationship between these two art forms is multifaceted, and analyzing the numerous forms this interaction may take will both intrigue and challenge students, as well as offering a rich variety of sources and research possibilities for their papers. 4. A concise explanation (one to two single-spaced pages) of how the proposed course will fulfill each of the following criteria (“FAQ about 223” features sample course designs for 223): (1) Writing Assignment Design Students in the course will have the opportunity to engage in a variety of writing assignments. Informal writing assignments will consist primarily of journal entries, in which students will respond to and interact with both texts and music encountered in the course. Such entries will encourage not only close readings and analysis of sources (see sample writing assignment A) but also more creative interactions with readings and music (see sample writing assignment B). In addition to several quizzes over course materials, semi-formal writing assignments in the course will include preparatory assignments for the research paper, such as identifying a thesis and writing a prospectus and annotated bibliography (see sample writing assignment C). The formal writing component in MLAN 223 will, of course, be the final 10-15 page research paper. Because of the emphasis on writing-as-process and drafts in the course, students will be encouraged to revise and resubmit drafts of the “final version” of their paper. MLAN 223: FROM BEETHOVEN TO BRECHT 2 (2) Treatment of Writing as a Developmental Process As illustrated above, the focus of MLAN 223 is on variety of writing experiences and on writing-as-process. In addition to fostering creativity and critical thinking, journal assignments are designed to guide students in identifying their research topic. The writing of the research paper is also split into five stages, including preparatory stages and drafts that are incorporated into the final paper (please see attached syllabus under “Course Requirements and Assignments”). (3) Written Feedback from the Instructor Each written assignment in the course will be clearly explained, including information on expectations, format, and criteria for evaluation. Students will receive more informal written responses to their journal entries, including suggestions for developing their ideas as potential research topics. Instructor feedback on semi-formal and formal writing assignments will guide students in improving content, style and mechanics in subsequent drafts. A visit from a Writing Center representative will be scheduled in the early stages of the final project, and students are strongly encouraged to visit the Writing Center individually. For specific stages of the final project, students will engage in peer review of each others’ work, as well as meeting individually with the instructor to assess paper progress and discuss improvements. (4) Evaluation of Writing Evaluation will depend upon the type of writing being assessed. For quizzes on course material and content, “right” and “wrong” answers tend to be less subjective, and grading thus more clear cut. Informal writing assignments, such as journal entries, will be assessed based on the student’s fulfillment of the assignment criteria, the time spent on the assignment, and the level of engagement. (For these assignments the instructor will employ a minus/check/plus system, such as that detailed in John C. Bean’s Engaging Ideas, p. 116). Formal writing assignments will be assessed according to categories such as organization, development of ideas, integration of sources, and grammar, using a rubric incorporating these criteria. For all types of writing assignments, instructor will provide students with clear explanation of expectations and methods of evaluation. For grade distribution of individual writing assignments and class participation, please see the attached proposed syllabus. Writing (including quizzes), will account for 90% of the course grade. There will be approximately 50 pages of assessed writing in the course. (5) Oral Presentation The class will follow a discussion format, and public speaking therefore plays an integral part in students’ understanding and analysis of the course materials. course. Students will engage in class and smaller group discussions, including brainstorming sessions for research topics and peer assessments of works in progress. Students will also give individual oral presentations of stage 2 of their research papers (the prospectus), enabling them to gather feedback from classmates and to use this feedback to hone their topics. 5. Please append a proposed syllabus centered on a particular topic, which should include a statement of course objectives, a sequence of class activities, references to writing assignments, and weight of writing assignments in relation to the final course grade. Please see attached. 6. Please append at least three writing assignments planned for use in this course. MLAN 223: FROM BEETHOVEN TO BRECHT 3 Please see attached. 7. Given that the course is capped at 19 students, what is the anticipated enrollment per offering for the next three years? 19-38 During which term will this course first be offered? Fall 20___ Spring 2006 Summer 20___ During which semesters will this course regularly be offered? Not yet known – potentially every other Spring Fall 20___ 8. Spring 20___ Summer 20___ Which W-I certified full-time faculty members will staff this course? (for certification requirements, please see “Writing Intensive Certification” at http://www.cnu.edu/admin/provost/forms.html) I, Alicia Carter, will staff the course. I am currently teaching and ENG 223 course (Fairy Tales: The Grim(m) Truth), and will be W-I certified as of September 17, 2005. 9. Does the course involve a particular classroom, special equipment, or costs beyond those usually associated with a course at CNU? If so, please explain. The only special equipment necessary for the course would be access to audio equipment, namely a CD player and cassette recorder. 10. In addition to counting toward the general education requirement, will this particular course (e.g. HIST 223) be required for the major? If so, why? No MLAN 223: FROM BEETHOVEN TO BRECHT 4 This course was approved by: (Liberal learning courses must be reviewed by BOTH academic Deans Concur Do Not and Curriculum Committees) Concur** Department(s): (1) Date: ________ (2) Date: ________ College Curriculum Committee: Date: ________ Dean: Date: ________ Dean: Date: ________ Undergraduate Curriculum Committee: Date: ________ Changes to the General Education requirements must be reviewed by the Faculty Senate. Faculty Senate President: Date: ________ Provost Date: ________ Distribution by Provost Office following approval: Department Chair(s), UCC Chair, Deans, Registrar ** If “Do Not Concur” is checked, please attach a statement of explanation. MLAN 223: FROM BEETHOVEN TO BRECHT 5 MLAN 223 SECOND-YEAR WRITING SEMINAR FROM BEETHOVEN TO BRECHT: INTERPLAYS BETWEEN WORDS AND MUSIC CHRISTOPHER NEWPORT UNIVERSITY SPRING 2006 Instructor: Dr. Alicia Carter Office: Commonwealth Hall, Room 13 594-7327 alicia.carter@cnu.edu Required Texts: Materials will be available on WebCT or will be handed out in class COURSE DESCRIPTION AND GOALS: Since Plato’s first musings on the relationship of words to music in The Republic, the interplay between these “sister arts” has been a source of fascination for scholars and artists. In this course we will focus primarily on Germany from the late eighteenth to the early twentieth centuries, a period when the debate surrounding the two art forms led to an “embarrassment of riches,” both literary and musical. Referring to examples from criticism, literature, music, and the arts, we will examine prominent trends, styles and structures from the time period in question, among them the “melomaniacal” musings of the early Romantics, the art songs of Schubert and Schumann, and the Wagner cult. We will also broaden our area of inquiry by bringing in works of music and literature from countries other than Germany. Our readings and discussions will provide critical, historical, and theoretical perspectives to encourage each of you to develop an individual research focus. Through engagement with musical works and a variety of primary and secondary literary texts, as well as through the production of varied types of writing (informal, semi-formal, and formal), you will identify and refine an original thesis. Your thesis will form the basis of the centerpiece of our course, a polished 10-15 page research paper incorporating multiple sources. LEARNING OBJECTIVES: At the end of the course, students will be able to 1. Examine and discuss a wide range of forms that the interplay of literature and music may take. This will be accomplished through reading and listening by the individual and within class and group discussions. 2. Analyze the interaction between literary texts and music, employing terms from music and literary criticism. Students will demonstrate this ability through the writing of journals, reaction and evaluative assignments, and the final research paper. 3. Pursue an individual research focus related to the course topic, conduct research, both individually and with the assistance of classmates and the instructor, and work through multiple writing stages to create a final research paper. MLAN 223: FROM BEETHOVEN TO BRECHT 6 MLAN 223: FROM BEETHOVEN TO BRECHT 7 COURSE REQUIREMENTS AND ASSIGNMENTS: 10% 20% 10% 8% 7% 10% 15% 20% Daily attendance, including thorough preparation for and participation in class and group discussions and activities. Four quizzes, covering material from class. These will be a mix of short answer, identification and essay questions. A journal, consisting of approximately 15 short informal and semi-formal writing assignments, including your responses to texts, music, class discussions, etc. Although I will not collect these daily, always bring them to class, and be prepared to turn them in at any time. Details of individual assignments will be provided the class before they are due. Stage 1: A short paper (1-2 pages – semi-formal writing) including (1) a proposed topic for your paper, including a tentative title, and (2) an annotated bibliography of sources you have identified as useful for your paper; we will use MLA format for bibliographical entries (more details to follow). NOTE: All stages of your writing project must be typed and double-spaced. Margins may not be greater than 1.25 inches, and font size should not exceed 12 points). Stage 2: A short prospectus (1-2 pages) for your research project. You will also make an informal presentation of your prospectus to the class. Stage 3: A short paper (about 6 pages—semi-formal writing), in which you revise or develop your thesis, integrating it into an effective introductory paragraph. You will also provide a working outline for your paper, articulating how you plan to incorporate bibliographical sources. This stage of your paper will undergo group peer review. Stage 4: A longer paper (about 10 pages—semi-formal writing), a revision and expansion of your Stage 3 paper. In Stage 4 you will further refine your thesis and introduction, and, using your outline as a guide, begin to flesh out your paper, effectively incorporating an appropriate number of sources. This week you will meet with me individually to discuss your paper progress. Stage 5: Your final research paper (10-15 pages – formal writing), an expansion of Stages 3 and 4, including sources and bibliography. You will also present your research findings before the class. TENTATIVE SCHEDULE (Writing/ writing-related assignments indicated by bullet points): Week 1: Introduction of course goals and requirements; Examples of effective word-music combinations and their effects: (i.e., “The Marseillaise,” “Battle Hymn of the Republic,” “Deutschland, Deutschland über Alles”; “Signore, ascolta” from Giacomo Puccini’s Turandot; “Glitter and be gay” from Leonard Bernstein’s Candide, etc.); Steven Paul Scher, “Literature and Music,” Interrelations of Literature, ed. Jean-Pierre Barricelli and Joseph Geibalde (New York: MLA, 1982) 225-50; Aaron Copland, “How We Listen,” What to Listen for in Music (New York: Signet, 2002) 7-15. Journal Entries Week 2 and 3: MELOMANIA: THE ROMANTICS. Wilhelm Heinrich Wackenroder, “The Marvels of the Musical Art”; E.T.A. Hoffmann, “Beethoven’s Instrumental Music”; Bettina von Arnim, “Beethoven,” excerpts from Correspondence with a Child; Clemens Brentano, “Nachklänge Beethovenscher Musik”; excerpts from Ludwig van Beethoven, Symphony 5 in C Minor, Opus 67 and “Wellington’s Victory,” Opus 91. Journal Entries Quiz 1 (Week 3) MLAN 223: FROM BEETHOVEN TO BRECHT 8 Weeks 4 and 5: ABSOLUTE MUSIC, PROGRAM MUSIC AND MUSICAL EKPHRASIS. Carl Dalhaus, “Absolute Music as an Aesthetic Paradigm,” German Essays on Music, ed. Jost Hermand and Michael Gilbert (New York: Continuum, 1994) 252-66; examples of “absolute music” (Bach’s Art of the Fugue, Mozart Piano Concerto 23, KV 488); Siglind Bruhn, Musical Ekphrasis: Composers Responding to Poetry and Painting (Hillsdale: Pendragon, 2000) 27-34; Ferde Grofé, “On the Trail,” from Grand Canyon Suite; Camille Saint-Saëns, Carnival of the Animals; C.S. Brown, “Program Music: a Short Guide to the Battlefield,” Music and Literature: A Comparison of the Arts (Hanover: UP of New England, 1987) 229-244; Modest Mussorgsky, Pictures at an Exhibition; Richard Strauss, Also sprach Zarathustra; Johann Wolfgang von Goethe, “The Sorcerer’s Apprentice”; Paul Dukas, The Sorcerer’s Apprentice. “The Sorcerer’s Apprentice,” scene from Disney’s Fantasia. Journal Entries Visit from Research Librarian Stage 1 of Writing Project due (Week 5) Week 6 and 7: MUSIC AS A DIVINE OR DEMONIC FORCE IN LITERATURE E.T.A. Hoffmann, “Councillor Krespel”; Heinrich Kleist, “St. Cecilia or The Power of Music”; Leo Tolstoi, Kreutzer Sonata (excerpts); Beethoven, “Kreutzer” Sonata, op. 47. Journal Entries Quiz 2 (Week 6) Stage 2 of Writing Project due (Week 7) Class Presentations of Prospectus Week 8: WORDS AND MUSIC: THE ART SONG. Franz Schubert/Goethe, “Gretchen am Spinnrad,” “Der Erlkönig”; C.S. Brown, excerpts from “The Dramatic Setting of Vocal Music,” Music and Literature, 62-80. Robert Schumann/Joseph von Eichendorff, Liederkreis, Op. 39; Gustav Mahler/ Friedrich Rückert, Kindertotenlieder. Journal Entries Visit from Writing Center Representative Weeks 9 and 10. FAUST IN MUSIC AND LITERATURE. Goethe, Faust I; Selections from Charles Gounod’s Faust, Hector Berlioz’ La damnation de Faust, and Arrigo Boito’s Mephistopheles; excerpts, Thomas Mann, Doktor Faustus; Patrick Carnegy, “Dialogue with the Devil,” Faust as Musician: A Study of Thomas Mann’s Novel Dr. Faustus (London: Chatto and Windus, 1973) 79-103. Journal Entries Quiz 3 (Week 10) Stage 3 of Writing Project due (Week 10) In-class Peer Reviews of Stage 3 Week 11 and 12. LITERATURE AND ART IMITATING MUSIC. Theodor Storm, “The Nightingale”; Friedrich Nietzsche, “Autumn”; Walt Whitman, “When Lilacs last in the Courtyard Bloomed”; Paul Hindemith, “When Lilacs last in the Courtyard Bloomed” (1st Movement); Copland, “Fundamental Forms III – Fugal Forms,” What to Listen for in Music, 131-142. Paul Celan, “Todesfuge”; Wasily Kandinsky, Compositions. Journal Entries Stage 4 of Writing Project due (Week 12) Individual student meetings scheduled during and outside of class time to discuss Stage 4 and paper progress. MLAN 223: FROM BEETHOVEN TO BRECHT 9 Weeks 13 and 14. THE CULT OF WAGNER. Excerpts from Richard Wagner, Tristan and Isolde (particularly “Liebestod”); excerpts from Friedrich Nietzsche, The Birth of Tragedy and The Case of Wagner, Thomas Mann, “Coming to Terms with Richard Wagner”; Thomas Mann, “Tristan”; Scenes from Der Ring des Nibelungen, the Metropolitan Opera, Cond. James Levine, 1990; Arthur Rackham’s illustrations to Ring of the Nibelung; Anna Russell, “The Ring of the Nibelungs (an Analysis).” Quiz 4 (Week 13) Stage 5 of Writing Project due (Week 14) Week 15. MUSIC AS SOCIAL CRITICISM. Discussion of the concept of Epic Theater; Bertolt Brecht, “On the Use of Music in an Epic Theater”; Bertolt Brecht/ Kurt Weill, excerpts from Mahagonny and The Three Penny Opera (including scenes from film version of latter). Class Presentations of Research Papers. STATEMENT ON PLAGIARISM: Plagiarism is the stealing or passing off as your own the writing or ideas of someone else. Examples of plagiarism include, but are not limited to: quoting, summarizing, or paraphrasing ideas without giving credit to their source; submitting as your own work that has been copied or purchased from another student or other source; permitting someone else to revise or edit a paper to the extent that it is no longer your own work; lifting off the Internet wording or ideas that are not your own without crediting the Internet source. Plagiarism is a very serious violation of the CNU Honor Code and may result in penalties that can include, at the discretion of the instructor, rewriting the entire assignment, having to complete an alternative assignment, getting a zero on the plagiarized assignment, or getting an “F” for the course. In addition to these penalties, the instructor has the right to place a note in the student’s university file, which could result in an honors council sanction such as suspension or expulsion from CNU. I expect that you will uphold the Honor Code in all work submitted for this course. STATEMENT ON DISABILITIES: Students with documented disabilities are required to notify the instructor on the first day of class and in private if accommodation is needed. The instructor will provide students with disabilities with all reasonable accommodations, but they are not exempted from fulfilling the normal requirements for the course. Work completed before the student notifies the instructor of his/her disability may be counted toward the final grade at the sole discretion of the instructor. ******* We want you to succeed at CNU; therefore I may notify the Academic Advising Center if you seem to be having problems with this course. Someone may contact you to help you determine what help you need to succeed. You will be sent a copy of the referral from. I invite you to see me at any time that I can be of assistance in helping you with the course materials. MLAN 223: FROM BEETHOVEN TO BRECHT 10 MLAN 223 FROM BEETHOVEN TO BRECHT: INTERPLAYS BETWEEN WORDS AND MUSIC SAMPLE WRITING ASSIGNMENT A JOURNAL ENTRY: SUMMARY/RESPONSE 1) Read C.S. Brown’s chapter on “Program Music: a Short Guide to the Battlefield” from Music and Literature: A Comparison of the Arts, available on WebCT. 2) In your journal, write at least two pages. On the first, restate Brown’s main argument in your own words. You may either write a summary, make an outline, or take detailed notes. For the second page, please listen to one of the following examples of program music, and explain how Brown’s concepts may be applied to better understand, interpret and/or appreciate the piece. Modest Mussorgsky, Pictures at an Exhibition Richard Strauss, Also sprach Zarathustra Paul Dukas, The Sorcerer’s Apprentice Your assignment will be assessed based upon your fulfillment of the above criteria, effort displayed, and the quality of your response (including critical engagement with the material and level of creativity). SAMPLE WRITING ASSIGNMENT B JOURNAL ENTRY This week we read and discussed the following reactions of nineteenth-century German Romantics to the music of Beethoven: Wilhelm Heinrich Wackenroder, “The Marvels of the Musical Art” E.T.A. Hoffmann, “Beethoven’s Instrumental Music” Bettina von Arnim, “Beethoven,” excerpts from Correspondence with a Child Choose a piece of music with which you are familiar, from any genre (classical music, rock, blues, rap). Listen to the piece of music several times, noting your own physical, emotional and intellectual responses. Now adopt the persona of one of the above writers, and write his/her reaction to the piece of music you have chosen. Attempt as much as possible to emulate the writer’s style. Your essay should be between 1 ½ and 2 pages long. Your assignment will be assessed based upon your fulfillment of the above criteria, effort displayed, and the quality of your response (including critical engagement with the material and level of creativity). SAMPLE WRITING ASSIGNMENT C WRITING PROJECT – STAGE 1 MLAN 223: FROM BEETHOVEN TO BRECHT 11 This writing assignment is the first stage in the writing of your research paper in the class, and should include the following. 1. A tentative title for your paper. On page 209 of his book Engaging Ideas, John C. Bean offers the following guidelines for creating an academic title. a. “Question. Some academic titles simple state the question that the body of the paper will discuss.” EXAMPLE: “Is Gustav Mahler’s Third Symphony Really Program Music?” b. “Summary of thesis or purpose. Some academic titles summarize the paper’s thesis or purpose.” EXAMPLE: “The Impossibility of Applying Copland’s Listening Categories to the Music of P. Diddy” c. “Two-part title with a colon. Academic titles are frequently split into two parts, separated by a colon. The most common approach is to present key words from the issue to the left of the colon and key words from the thesis to the right. . . . Another common pattern is to start with an interest-arousing ‘mystery phrase’ that does not become clear until the reader reads the article. Following the colon, the writer usually summarizes the articles key issues or thesis.” EXAMPLE: “Demonic Dissonances: Schubert’s Failure to Transpose Goethe’s ‘Erlkönig’ 2. A paragraph in which you briefly explain the proposed topic of your paper, including at least two possible questions you hope to answer in the course of your research. 3. An annotated bibliography of between seven and ten sources – books, articles, and documents – you have identified as being useful for your paper. All sources should be notated according to the MLA format we discussed in class (see handout). You may have no more than 4 (four) internet sources. Each citation in your bibliography should be followed by a brief annotation, or descriptive paragraph (@100-150 words), explaining the source’s usefulness for your project. In addition to referencing content, you will also want to make note of the source’s quality and accuracy. (Where did it come from? Did the writer document his/her sources?) Please refer to the following website for examples of annotated bibliography entries. http://www.library.cornell.edu/olinuris/ref/research/skill28.htm. NOTE: All stages of your writing project must be typed and double-spaced. Margins may not be greater than 1.25 inches, and font size should not exceed 12 points). MLAN 223: FROM BEETHOVEN TO BRECHT 12