Memoir Writing Assignment (a borrowed writing assignment inspired by Melanie Buckley (HHS)) You are about to commence your final year of mandatory public education. So much has transpired during these last dozen years. You’ve wanted to write it all down so you don’t forget, but you’ve just been too busy. Here is your opportunity. You will be creating a memoir of your life with you choosing your chapter topics. On the day the writing is due, you will share your work with your writing group. The members of this group will lightly critique and heavily praise your work, so be certain to be cognizant of all the SOAPSTone elements. You will record their comments. Required Elements: The Forward to your memoir. Five Chapters of Your Life (topics of your choosing) o Each Chapter must have a “six word memoir” title o http://www.sixwordmemoirs.com/ Carpe Diem letter Writing group feedback recording strips Forward: Page 1 “Who am I today?” (One/two paragraphs) 10pts Forward: Page 2 Forward: Page 3 My Heritage (One/two paragraphs) Timeline: Birth-Today (Bulleted events or locations that you’ve found to be of significance. This can be as detailed as you like) Family Tree: Grandparents, Parents, and You (this can be as detailed as you like) 10pts 10 pts Due date: May 26 May 26 May 26 10 pts May 26 30 pts 30 pts 30 pts 30 pts 30 pts 30 pts May 26 May 31 June 2 June 6 June 8 June 10 Forward: Page 4 Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Carpe Diem letter Chapter Options Elementary Personal Portrait School Piece Piece Funny Piece Parent Piece Boundaries or Map Pieces Influential Person Middle School Piece Family Secrets Piece Difficult Times Piece Mysteries Piece Teachers or School Worries and Woes Family Lore Piece Old Friends Piece Holidays and Celebrations Ethnicity or Culture Piece Eating, Cooking, Or Favorite Food High School Conscious Artist Piece Favorite Transportations Grandparent Piece Hidden Places and Hidden Treasures Piece Family Trip: Car Behavior, Airport, Packing Routines Epiphany or Turning Point Piece Inherited Behaviors Piece Junior Year On the Day I was Born Sibling Piece Home Piece Dialect, Dialogue, or Favorite Sayings Place or Spiritual Home Piece Relationships Questions I Ponder Fears Excitement (write in my choice) … Grading Rubric A (30) Clear organization Smooth sentence fluency Voice contains personality Strong use of elaboration and rhetorical devices Strong mechanics Intentional Impressive control and display of vocabulary Focused Group: 2 Praises recorded from each member! 2 Suggestions recorded from each member! B (26) Organization exists Most sentences are fluent Voice is apparent D (19) Missing Organization Sentences are missing fluency Voice is missing Evidence of elaboration and rhetorical devices Mechanics exist Minimal or weak examples without rhetorical devices Weak Mechanics Diction (use of words) Words Moderate control and display of vocabulary Focused on Group: Vague praises recorded. Vague suggestions recorded. Lacking Focus: Students were unprepared for discussion in groups. “What Lies Behind Us And Lies Before Us Are Tiny Matters Compared To What Lies Within Us” -Ralph Waldo Emerson Carpe Diem Letter Directions: Write a letter explaining what your life will be like in 2026. Place this assignment will be in an envelope; it is submitted with the memoir. Suggested Format: Introduction Paragraph: Current Life Situation Body Paragraph 1: Family Status and Friends Body Paragraph 2: Job, House, and Car Situation Body Paragraph 3: Vacation and Hobbies Conclusion Rubric (This is included in your portfolio.) A C D Central Idea Vague Main Idea General Main Idea Three detailed examples Three transitions Two detailed examples Two transition One detailed example One transition F Missing Main Idea Minimal example No transitions Name: ______________________Writer’s Studio Reflection (my notes on my writing group buddies) Chapter 1 Topic: ______________ Chapter 2 Topic: _______________ Chapter 3 Topic: _____________ 1.Six-Word Memoir Title: 1.Six-Word Memoir Title: 1.Six-Word Memoir Title: 2.My Writer’s Studio Reflection: (Prepared, Focused, Interactive) 2.My Writer’s Studio Reflection: (Prepared, Focused, Interactive) 2.My Writer’s Studio Reflection: (Prepared, Focused, Interactive) 3.My writing group praised my memoir for the following: 4.My writing group suggested my memoir include the following: 3.My writing group praised my memoir for the following: 4.My writing group suggested my memoir include the following: - - 3.My writing group praised my memoir for the following: 4.My writing group suggested my memoir include the following: Chapter 4 Topic: __________ Chapter 5 Topic: __________ 1.Six-Word Memoir Title: 1.Six-Word Memoir Title: 2.My Writer’s Studio Reflection: (Prepared, Focused, Interactive) 2.My Writer’s Studio Reflection: (Prepared, Focused, Interactive) 3.My writing group praised my memoir for the following: - 3.My writing group praised my memoir for the following: - 4.My writing group suggested my memoir include the following: 4.My writing group suggested my memoir include the following: - - - Name: ______________________ Buckley AP Language & Composition Date: _______________________ Memoir/Writing Evaluation The objective of the memoir project is to identify the power of voice, craft, and style in your own writing and the writing of your peers. (In real life, we write using a plethora of writing styles which move beyond the five-paragraph composition. Shocker, I know! ) Did you observe different styles in the writing of your peers? Yes or No Did you use different styles in your own writing? Yes or No Look through your memoir chapters. What rhetorical strategy did you utilize the most? (For my chapters, for instance, I noticed that I mixed methods—utilizing narrative, description, and cause & effect.) 1. Describe one benefit of the writing group activity. 2. Describe one concern with the writing group activity. 3. Record the names of your writing group members. Circle the grade he/she deserves for participation in the writing group. Provide one concrete detail emphasizing why this person garnered this score. Writing Group Participation Analysis Name Circle Participation Concrete Explanation Score 1= Low Score 4=High Score 1 2 3 4 1 2 3 4 1 2 3 4 1 2 3 4 1 2 3 4 4. What suggestion do you have to modify the memoir assignment for future students? 5. In previous years, students have relished creating a class memoir. Each student selects one memoir piece to include in the class memoir, and the class creates a Six Word Title. I will compile the pieces for this assignment. Do you want to create a class memoir that is a compilation of everyone’s work? Yes or No (Please email me an electronic Word document version of one of your chapters. I will compile all of them into one Word document which we will place on my HHS Website.) Your Name______________________ In an attempt to make this assignment a positive and successful experience, you must feel comfortable in your writing group. Here is the opportunity for you to create a “safe and comfortable” group of writing fellows. List 7-8 names of people you would feel comfortable having in your group: Without explaining why, list the names of two people whose presence in your group would absolutely freeze your ability to be productive in your group: Other comments? Your Name______________________ In an attempt to make this assignment a positive and successful experience, you must feel comfortable in your writing group. Here is the opportunity for you to create a “safe and comfortable” group of writing fellows. List 7-8 names of people you would feel comfortable having in your group: Without explaining why, list the names of two people whose presence in your group would absolutely freeze your ability to be productive in your group: Other comments? Your Name______________________ In an attempt to make this assignment a positive and successful experience, you must feel comfortable in your writing group. Here is the opportunity for you to create a “safe and comfortable” group of writing fellows. List 7-8 names of people you would feel comfortable having in your group: Without explaining why, list the names of two people whose presence in your group would absolutely freeze your ability to be productive in your group: Other comments?